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CANDACE DELORENZO1
02-01-2004, 09:07 PM
CD and Nate were coming back from dinner at their favorite Italian Restaurant. They had decided to go to CD's place since they went to Nate's the last time they went out.

CD: Nate dinner was great, and the company too!

Nate: Same here *he leaned in to give CD a peck on the cheek and it made CD blush a bit*

As they turned the corner CD saw an hipanic looking girl that didn't look more than 13 or 14 sitting/sleeping outside her door.

CD: What the hell who is that.

Nate: What are you talking about?

CD: I'm talking about her *pointing to the young girl in front of her apartment*

Nate: Ohh. Well, maybe we should wake her up and find out who she is and find out why she came here.

*CD agrees and bends down to wake the young girl up*

The Girl: Oh, hey I was wondering if you know who Candace DeLorenzo is? I was waiting for somebody to talk to but no one came and I guess I fell asleep.

CD: Uh, yeah that's me, may I help you?

Girl: Great, could we talk inside a minute.

CD: Yeah sure. *CD, Nate and the mysterious girl went inside CD's apartment, and Nate went to get all three of them some drinks*

CD: So who are you and why are you here looking for me?

Girl: My name is Valerie DeLorezo and I am 14 years old and I have something important to tell you, but I don't now how.


That is all for now. I will keep it coming don't worry.:wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :eek:


CD: Its okay you can tell me, what's on your mind?

Valerie: okay, I have been doing research on my family while I was in the orphange.it showed that I have and aunt name Candace DeLorenzo. So since that is you, I guess that means I am your niece. I think that I met you when I was 4 years old, but I couldn't quite remember. *some tears started to come out and flow down her cheeks and CD went beside her and put her arm around her*

Nate: I think I better go it looks personal.

CD: Okay I will see you tomorrow then *goes to see Nate out and then returns her attention to Valerie again*

Valerie: Do you recognize me?

CD: At first I didn't, but now I remember you mom coming over to my place so I could see you, you see the reason your mom and I never came over to each other's place or talked much is because we didn't get along that well.

Valerie: Oh, well I was wondering if you could get custody of me and I could live with you, because to tell you the truth I hate it and the orphange.

CD: *coming closer to Valerie* I would love to have you live here since you hate to live at the orphange so much. I will set in appointment with the courthouse so we can get started, Okay.

Valerie: Okay, can we go to bed I am a little tired.

CD: Yeah I am beat myself

The girls went down the hall and went to sleep the night away.

That's all for tonight it is getting late.:o :o






The next morning Valerie woke up to the smell of eggs, toast and bacon. She got out of bed and went into the kitchen to find that CD had made breakfast for the both of them. CD had called the Captain already to tell her she would not be able to come in that morning because of 'personal' reasons, so she decided to spend time with Valerie.

Valerie: *Coming into the kitchen* Wow, this looks great I can't believe you did this for me.

CD: Hey good morning, and I am glad that you like it. I would do anything for you. Hey I was hoping to get to know you better, so I planned a whole day just for us, what do you say.

Valerie: *with enthusiasum* Yeah, that be great!

CD: Great!

After the girls eat their breakfast they both go their stuff together to go out.



Bye guys for now :wave: :happyface





(In the car)

CD: What do you want to do today?

Valerie: I really would like to go to a movie.

CD: Great me too! Let's go.

When they reached the movie theater, they got drinks, popcorn and some candy.hehe kind of like me at the movies!!

After they came back from the movie, CD set a day with the courthouse to plan CD's custody of Valerie.

CD: Well, Valerie I set a date next week to go to the courthouse.

Valerie: ALLRIGHT!!

CD: I can see you are excited even though you don't know if you are going to be able to stay with me.

Valerie: Well I am just thinking on the positive side, I mean so far you are great with me and I cannot see why any body would not see that. I do.

CD: Well thankyou. I will be sure to remember that.

Valerie: You're welcome, and you do that. Okay since there will probably going to be a good chance that I will be living with you, what should I call you? Aunt Candace?

CD: My friends and co-workers call me CD and you will hear that all the time, so you can call me CD. Is that okay with you?

Valerie: Yeah, that's fine. So CD it is. *looks at the clock* Oh God I have to go meet someone I will be back at 6:30 I promise.

CD: WAIT A MINUTE! Who are you meeting can I have a number and the place you are going.

Valerie: Yeah sure. *writes some stuff down for CD* Bye

CD: Hey, be back promptly and 6:30 or I am going ou looking and you don't want me to go out looking

Valerie: Alright, alright. I will be back at 6:30 don't worry

CD: Okay have fun

Valerie: okay bye CD

CD: bye Valerie


That's all for now I will be back to post more later!! :wave





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At 6:30 Valerie came through the door of the apartment as promised. And went into her room to change and then went into the kitchen.

Valerie: *entering the kitchen* Hey CD, I am back and to find you making dinner for me thanks.

CD: Hey. Oh this, it is no big deal. So did you have fun with your friends.

Valerie: Yeah we just hang out at the mall for a while. Um, about the fact that I had to rush out is because I had to go down to the orphanage to tell them that i would be staying with you. Is that okay?

CD: Yeah, that is great!

After the girls talked for a while and had dinner they cleared the dishes and hang out in the apartment for a bit. Soon it got late and the girls went to bed.

Sorry guys for making it so short it is just because I have so little time this weekend to do stuff, but there will be more so hang in there!! :wave:

CD DeLorenzo
02-01-2004, 09:26 PM
who the hell are you? LOL just kidding... welcome to the boards... I'm cat, and keep it coming!!! :D

croatian_princess
02-01-2004, 09:29 PM
:cat, :heart: the pic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And CANDACE DELORENZO1, :wave: I'm Jordan. Please post more. :D

candace~n~nathan
02-01-2004, 10:00 PM
Hey, that was EXCELLENT!!!!! can't wait for more!!!!!!!

btw, I'm Lisa!!!! WELCOME!!!! :D

maria1986
02-01-2004, 10:39 PM
This is great so far!!!!!...Keep it coming!:)

Im Maria btw....:D

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
02-01-2004, 11:39 PM
Come on don't leave us there!! MORE!! :D

monkeygirl
02-01-2004, 11:45 PM
hi, I'm Deirdre, welcome to the boards! the fic is real intersesting, keep it coming!

Snowfall
02-02-2004, 01:32 AM
Hey, there! :wave: I'm Tara. Welcome to the boards! Your story is great. Keep it coming! :)

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
02-02-2004, 01:48 AM
Oh, where are my manners!!! I am Kelly, the BIGGEST Nancy McKeon fan in the world! Welcome aboard! :)

planet_stella
02-02-2004, 02:08 PM
Whohoooo! New fanfic!And a new person on the boards! Welcome.Btw I'm Rasa.:wave:

*Nancy Mckeon*
02-02-2004, 08:07 PM
Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
Oh, where are my manners!!! I am Kelly, the BIGGEST Nancy McKeon fan in the world! Welcome aboard! :)






yep!! almost as big as me!! lol and im Jenna btw.....

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
02-02-2004, 10:31 PM
Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
yep!! almost as big as me!! lol and im Jenna btw.....


I don't think so...I am DEF the biggest. Ask Cat and Lisa. They will tell you..hehe

turtle63102
02-07-2004, 01:19 AM
Hey, great fic! Btw, I'm Mary Kate, welcome to the bourds!

CANDACE DELORENZO1
02-17-2004, 09:32 PM
Originally posted by turtle63102
Hey, great fic! Btw, I'm Mary Kate, welcome to the bourds!


Hey Mary Kate, I am Maria and I am sorry I haven't been posting that much lately. I am telling you and everybody that I have been busy and I will be back on to post more when I am no so busy. See, it is just my cousins came in from Seattle and I only get to see them once or twice a year and I wanted to visit them. And of course I have been busy with school, so yeah I have had my hands full, but I promise when I am free I will post more soon!

:angel:

zwalane
02-17-2004, 11:52 PM
Hey Maria I'm Sequoyah sorry I haven't posted sooner. BTW great fic.

Rebel Queen 1980
02-18-2004, 02:00 AM
POST MOREEEEE!!!!

CANDACE DELORENZO1
02-24-2004, 06:09 PM
(This fanfic is during summer vacation that is why Valerie does not have to go to school. She manly just takes care of the apartment while CD is gone, or hangs with friends.):D just wanted to make that clear.:happyface

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(A week later--more specificly the day that they had to go to the courthouse)


In the morning Valerie woke up to CD making breakfast again. She got up and walked into the kitchen.

Valerie: *smelling the food cooking* Is this what I am going to wake up to every moring if I get to live with you?

CD: *jumped from be startled by Valerie's voice behind her turned around to face her* Please to say if, you said it yesterday that if anyone couldn't see the great bond that we have that they are blind.

Valerie: Yeah, I guess you have a point there, even though you use my words to make your point. I guess I can take it.

The girls ate there breakfast and head down to the courthouse to see if CD was good enough to take care of Valerie.

CD and Valerie came out of the courthouse with huge smiles on their faces, because CD got to have custody of Valerie.

Sorry guys but that's all for now, but I posted and that is all that matters to me and for you I hope. And I will post more asap. :wave:

turtle63102
02-24-2004, 06:28 PM
great post! Keep it coming! :)

zwalane
02-24-2004, 09:35 PM
:yeahthat

Snowfall
02-25-2004, 01:42 AM
That was great! Post more soon! :)

CANDACE DELORENZO1
02-25-2004, 09:50 PM
here you go guys...more! :D

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Valerie: *entering the apartment* I can't believe this is happening, that I get to live with you.

CD: I know it is great. And I am glad that you like it here.

Valerie: Of course i like it here. In fact I love it here, it is way better her then it was in that orphanage.

CD: Well that's great. Anyway, why did you have to go to that orphanage and how old were you.

Valerie: Okay, well it is kinda of a long story you don't mind do you?

CD: No, of course not. I am an inspector I am used to it.

Valerie: Okay. Well my mom and dad had a friend that did time in prison. He got busted for robbery and drunk driving. Well one night I was home alone and my mom called to say that my dad and her were going to run late. Two hours after the call an officer came to the house and told me that they had been in an car accident that it was serious and that all three of them died instantly.

CD: Oh god Valerie I am so sorry you had to loose them that way. *goes over ro comfort Valerie who has started to cry* You know I will never do that to you I will be here foroever and what ever happens I will always be here for you, you have to know that. I love you Valerie and that love will never stop.

Valerie: I don't know what to say, CD that means do much to me when you say that. I had no one say that to me, well, except my parents. Oh yeah, to answer you other question I was nine.

CD: Sorry to change the subject I am hungry and dinner would be nice.

Valerie: I thought you would never ask.

*The girls eat dinner and talked some more until they had to go to bed.*


bye guys that's all for tonight I will post more asap or when I have more time. :wave:

Snowfall
02-26-2004, 01:13 AM
That was so sweet! Post more soon! :wave:

NancyTracey&Jon
02-26-2004, 06:50 AM
AWESOME FIC! NOT A THING WRONG WITH IT.........but.......I'm just wondering. Is Nate anywhere in this fic? Maybe he can be the adoptive father of Val., and CD can in a way be more of a mother then an aunt. Just wondering!

turtle63102
02-26-2004, 03:50 PM
yeah, that was really sweet! Keep posting:)

CANDACE DELORENZO1
03-08-2004, 06:09 PM
Guys you got more to read so come on and write replies or I am not going to post!!!! ;) :p

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Early that morning the girls bought paint and and stuff to decorate Valerie's room. (Cd has an apartment where you can paint the rooms LUCKY!!)

Since Valerie's favorite color was purple that is what color she chose.

Valerie: *in the room with CD painting* I just love this color, don't you?

CD: Yeah, I really do. And am so glad that you like it. You know it looks better on the walls then in the can.*looks over to see that Valerie is doing a better job then she is at the painting*Hey, how are you so good at painting?

Valerie: I used to help paint the rooms at the orphanage.

CD: Oh, well you are really doing a good job

Valerie: Thank-you, I am also thinking of becoming an Interior Designer someday and I'll need all the practice I can get.

CD: Really, that's great. And I think you will make a great one, you are doing a great job over there. *just as CD was going to say something else there was a knock on the door* I'll be right back. *leaves*

CD:*opening the door to reveal Nate with a bouquet of flowers* Hey you.

Nate: Hey you yourself. Here these are for you *extends the flowers toward CD*

CD: Thank you they are beautiful. *opens the door wider so Nate can come in* So what are you doing here?

Nate: I just wanted to see how you and Valerie were doing and say hi. By the way where is she I wanted to give her a congrats for being able to live with you.

CD: Awwww Nate that is sweet. She is in the bed room painting her new bedroom

*Just before Nate could go into the bedroom they here a crash followed by Valerie scream*

Nate&CD: OH God

*They ran into the bedroom like the speed of light*

CD: OH MY GOD!!!

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so guys whatcha think!! more? :D :happyface

Snowfall
03-08-2004, 06:58 PM
Post more!!!! What happened to Valerie? I have to know!

Hmm, Val wants to be an interior designer....I could give her a few tips ;) ;) . Well, the good news is, as an interior designer, you get to order other people to do the painting instead of doing it yourself lol...:D Sorry, just blabbering on as I do! ;) :D

turtle63102
03-09-2004, 08:12 PM
Why did you stop there! Get back here and tell us what happened to Val!

planet_stella
03-10-2004, 12:50 PM
What's going on in there?!?!?!? What's wrong with Valerie??? I gotta know!!!! So you better get yourself back here and post more!!!!!:D

planet_stella
03-10-2004, 12:56 PM
Hey Maria!!!! (I hope you don't mind that i call you Maria) Want me to give ya a new page?!?! I'm good at giving new pages!!! ..................

planet_stella
03-10-2004, 12:58 PM
.................and I can even give ya a boy along with the new page:grineyes:

planet_stella
03-10-2004, 12:59 PM
A new page.........Now you are forced to post more!!!!!!! And here's your boy, i hope you like him

CANDACE DELORENZO1
03-10-2004, 06:35 PM
Hey I do love him he is great. Good work:D

And if you have any ideas just throw them out to me, because I may take yours or well, anybodys. (This is for everybody that reads this.)

I really love that pic he's cute. Thanks. And also I don't mind if you call me Maria considering that is my name, and give me all the new pages you want I don't mind.

See ya!:wave:

planet_stella
03-10-2004, 06:48 PM
Well, there have to be posts so that you can get a knew page. And if ya want to get posts,you have to post more fic and then people will reply! See,that's simple! lol

CANDACE DELORENZO1
03-10-2004, 11:32 PM
here's more!!

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CD: OH MY GOD

*Valerie was passed out on the floor with the chair she was standing on, on top of her.

CD: *ran over to her with Nate right behind her* Valerie! Valerie come on wake up for me please. Come on! *she was shaking her at this point*

*Valerie started to move and then she opened her eyes* What happened, ughh why does my head hurt so much.

CD: *breathed a sigh of relieve* You fell off the chair and hit your head and passed out. Are you okay.

Valerie: Yeah I am, can you help me up *CD helps her up* Hey Nate when did you get here?

Nate: Oh, I got here before you fell. I came over to give you a congrats on being able to live here with CD.

Valerie: Oh that is so sweet Nate thanks.

Nate: Your welcome. You are going to be living with a great woman. And CD you are getting a great girl here.

CD: That's right.

*Nate stayed for a while and helped CD and Valerie paint*

sorry for it being so short I just didn't have time!! There will be more asap though :crazy: :wave:

Snowfall
03-11-2004, 02:09 AM
That was so great! Post more soon!


Sorry, I'm too tired to think of any ideas at the moment, but I'll work on it.....I worked til 11:15 tonight....ugh. lol!

planet_stella
03-11-2004, 08:24 AM
Phew..... and i thought there was something bad going on in Val's room... That was great Maria...but too short! Post more asap!:D

turtle63102
03-23-2004, 11:38 PM
Great post. I'm glad Val is okay. Post more soon!

Snowflake345
04-06-2004, 12:43 AM
Hey guys I am back and I have a new SN anyway here is more

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In the morning Nate took the girls out to lunch and shopping for Valerie's room

*In the Store*

Valerie: I like this one CD. *holding up some sheets she found for her bed*

CD: Hey, those look great let's get them. How about these pillows?

Valerie: Oh wow those are so cool. GET THEM!

CD: okay I will, or you will, I have to go get Nate so you will have to buy them with your money. You do have money right?

Valerie: Yeah I do, just enough to get these, and CD?

CD: Yeah

Valerie: Thanks for everything.

CD: No problem, well I have to go find Nate, I will see you in the car in a couple of minutes.

Valerie: Okay see ya.

*CD finds Nate at the other end of the store*

CD: *walking up to him* Nate!

Nate: Yeah.

CD: Hey I am so glad I finally found you we have all the stuff we need for the room and Valerie is paying for it and probably waiting in the car we gotta go come on.

Nate: okay I am coming, but I was wondering if you would like to go to dinner with me, I have something important to ask you and I really need an answer to this one.

CD: Yeah absolutely, 7 okay for you

Nate: yeah I will pick you up.

CD: okay see you then

*with that they leave and get ready to go to dinner*



sorry guys it was getting late I will post as soon as I can. Hey, at least I finally posted. :D ;)

Snowfall
04-06-2004, 12:53 AM
Awww, that was so great! So what's Nate going to ask her, huh? ;) :D Post more soon!

planet_stella
04-06-2004, 01:48 PM
Yaaay!!! That was great! And what does Nate want to ask CD?! A little birdy told me it saw Nate buying a ring.....*wink wink* lol Post more!

Shortcake31
04-12-2004, 08:10 PM
Here you go MORE :D ****************************************************
* Valerie went over to a friend's house to sleep over and CD was fully dressed to go out with Nate.

'God when is Nate going to get here' she thought to herself. Just then their is a knock at the door. CD went to open it and standing in the doorway was Nate with a bouquet of flowers.

Nate: *extending the flowers toward CD* These are for the you gorgeous

CD: Awwww Nate these are beautiful thank you

Nate: Your welcome

For dinner Nate took CD to their favorite Italian Place

CD: This dinner is great and what is so great about it is that I am spending it with you

Nate: You took the words right out of my mouth.

CD: Thank you again for a wonderful evening.

Nate: CD?

CD: Yeah?

Nate: I have something I have been meaning to ask you so I am just going to say it flat out. *Nate got down on one knee and I can even describe the look on CD's face* CD, from the moment I layed eyes on you I wanted to be with you. And I want to be in Valerie's life too. You are a wonderful woman and I love you so much.*He pulls a box out of his pocket and opens it to reveal the most beautiful diamond ring you will ever see in you life* Candace DeLorenzo will you please be my wife?

CD: *at this point she had tears running down her face but she manged to say* YES OF COURSE I WILL MARRY YOU! *When she said that the whole restaurant clapped* I love you, Nathan Basso.

Nate: I love you too Candance DeLorenzo *And then the kissed like their was no tomorrow*

After dinner they both went home to spend a evening to celebrate the occassion.



there you go I posted and I hoop you like it.......................MORE? ;) :D

Snowfall
04-13-2004, 01:16 AM
Awwwww, that was SO FANTASTICLY WONDERFUL!!!!!! :D :D :D Yay!!!!! They're getting married! I'm sooooo happy! That was so sweet, post more soon!

planet_stella
04-13-2004, 03:06 PM
Awwwwww!!! They're getting married!!!! That was great! Post more!!!!

Shortcake31
04-21-2004, 09:53 PM
You guys won't believe this I am thinking writing this story out of my head, I don't have it written down first. And I am glad that you liked the proposal. It took me along time to write the perfect one. I am sorry I have not post any more I was in NY for a school trip April 14-18 and I couldn't reach a computer. I will post more when ever I can.

bye guys. Again glad you like it. :D ;)

Shortcake31
04-26-2004, 04:48 PM
COME ON GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DO YOU WANT ME TO POST OR NOT. GIVE ME REPLIES! I guess my readers disappeared. I won't post anymore unless I get more replies. :mad:

Do you want me to do that? ;) :D

zwalane
04-26-2004, 07:28 PM
i think i speak for everyone when i say no
















































































































;) just kidding of course we want more

zwalane
04-26-2004, 07:30 PM
YAY I GIVE YA A NEW PAGE


P.S. I KNOW I KNOW THE SPACE IS TOOOOOOO BIG

Snowfall
04-27-2004, 12:49 AM
Hello? I already replied! I'm reading! So get back here and post more! :)

Shortcake31
05-22-2004, 08:00 PM
Here's more :D
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It was the day of the wedding and Nate was waiting for CD to come down the aisle.

Finally she came down the aisle looking beautiful in her white wedding gown. The music playing softly as she walked toward Nate.
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Minister: Do you Candace take Nathan as you wedded husband to have and to hold?

CD: I do. *she was crying gently at this point*

Minister: Do you Nathan take Candace as your wedded wife to have and to hold?

Nate: I do.

Minister: Now you may kiss the bride.

*They kissed passionately and everybody in the church clapped.

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*They had the best reception. Everyone dance and gave their congrats to the newlywed couple. And after the reception Nate and CD road off in a limo to their honeymoon in Big Sur.

THE END Sorry for the ending to be so short I didn't have enough time on the computer. :wave:And I'm not good at writing wedding scenes.

Snowfall
05-23-2004, 01:20 AM
Awww, even though it was short, it was so sweet! I loved this fic---precious. Another one in the works? Or a sequel? :)

CandyBasso
05-23-2004, 11:56 AM
Yeah, it was too short, but it was soo sweet!!! And i agree with Tara....SEQUEL?!:D