Take my hand
By Eric Brown
AKA Dark Passion



Hello I saw you looking at me and I wanted to say hello, I can tell by the look in your eyes that you like what you see. And honey I can say after looking into your eyes I like what I see also. Let me ask you a question are you looking for a man that will treat you like a queen, a man who knows how to act like a real man. But not scared to show that he can love and feel.

Take my hand and let me sweep you into my arms; let me hold you close to my heart. I can see that you have been hurt many times in your life but don’t let that scare you from taking a chance with me. Don’t be afraid of love and passion, for I want to love you like no man has ever loved you in your life.

I want to take you to a height of passion you have never seen, make you yell my name in the passion of love. Love the way my name sounds from your mouth, dance with me in the passion and warmth of my love. Just want to get next to you and get to know you, if you are ready for the love of your life take my hand.

:crying: beautiful beautiful poem!!!

that's very nice. If you give that to a girl and ask her out... she'll say yes!:lol: :lol:

defintely!!! :lol: i would, lol.

LOL. yo parakeet i like u! ur cool girl i like u.:lol:

:lol: :lol: Thanks!!! :) :D :D

Thank you very much I love to write.:wave: :lol:

Excellent. I'm better at stories than poem IMO. Apparently I'm good though, my English teacher usually gives me an A!:)

Great poem!!!!!!!!!Excellent news, Superstar!!!!!!!
Superstar stories!!!!:D

LOL

Thank you for all the kind words.

welcome

You wrote it?:eek:

man, if u wrote that, u defiantely got some talent! no, u got major talent!!!!! :D :D :D :D

You should write a book of poems!

Originally posted by Superstar
You should write a book of poems!


I am working on that now i have over 100 poems writen so far.

Wow that's very cool! Work for it man cuz u got some talent!YUP,YUP!:lol:

Thank you I will.

Hey, thats cool, kingconan31!!! give us more!!!:D

You messed up my world
By Eric Brown
AKA Dark Passion

I wanted to be Mr. Macho man, never needed anyone to care. Never wanted to tell someone how much I loved them or only have one lady in my life. Love did not mean I thing to me, I knew that I did not need anyone in my life to make me happy. My world was the way I wanted it.

But then you came and turned everything up side down. The first time I saw you I could not stop thinking about you, lady you just turned my world upside down. Lady I want to give my life to you, my heart to you.

Why did you have to mess up my world, since you came into my life I can’t stop thinking about you. My heart hurts when you are not around. Then when the first time we went out magic happened and I hearts bonded together then I knew I would spend the rest of my life with you. For now and forever I only want to be with you, love with you, cry with you laugh with you and die with you. Because me and you are one.

WOW....OUTSTANDING POEM!!! :D

Originally posted by moeee
WOW....OUTSTANDING POEM!!! :D


Thank you you are so kind.:lol: :lol:

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.:D

Excellent

Thank you very much.

You've a natural talent

Thank you very much

Not being able to hold you brings me such pain.
By Eric Brown
AKA Dark Passion.





If you only knew how much it hurt not being able to tell the world how much I love and need you. To not be able to hold and kiss you in public to let the world know our love and passion. But to do that would tear our worlds apart we come from two different worlds and it word mess up our lives if our families knew we were in love.

Sneaking a kiss whenever we can, making love to you is like dying and seeing heaven, for with out you in my arms I am nothing you are my better half my hopes and my dreams. This is the only way we can keep our love hidden from our families, honey the pain in my heart feels like it will last for ever.

If they only knew how hard it was not to grab you in my arms and kiss you passionately. And tell the world how much I love you and to heck with our families. Our love is forbidden but never will my heart stop beating for you, my love my life my everything and my first real love.

How do you think of these? They are fantastic

very creative:D

I have been writing for abot 5 years now I love to write.

keep doing it!

yeah.....

I will

good.

:lol: :happyface :wave:

hhhhhhhaaaaaaaa:D

yeah, just keep writing and u'll see it'll take u further and further. ok, did that make any sense??? :lol:

Hey Kingconan
If you go to poemhunter.com
you can enter contests
just thought I'd help out

:) :lol:

Originally posted by ravensnumbaoneboo
Hey Kingconan
If you go to poemhunter.com
you can enter contests
just thought I'd help out

Thank you.

Originally posted by kingconan31
Thank you.
No prob

Originally posted by kingconan31
Thank you.

i hope u win!!!!:D

:) :D

:lol: :happyface

:lol: :lol:

let us know what happens. :p

Please do

YUP!!!!!!!!!!

Given up on love
By Eric Brown AKA Dark Passion



I had my last broken heart, no more lies broken promises that no one ever keeps. No more looking for love, no more putting my heart on my sleeve. No more of the nasty turn downs when a simple no you are not my type would do. Tried of females saying you are too nice I only see you as my friend.

No more trying to find love, from now and till the end I will no longer look for it search for it or put my heart out there to be stepped on kicked and spit on. Sorry but love don’t live here anymore, love is not something I can find, can get because it always have been here.

At long last I know that the only love that matters and the only one I need is the love I have for me. No longer will I look for something that is already there. I have given up on the fantasy tales of love at first sight. No more sad love songs, no more broken hearts and dreams.

For now on I will let love find me, I will no longer look for it because it is not to be found, or hunted. Love will find you.

great poem again, so much love!!!!:D

I write with love and passion thank you for the kind words.

:) No problem

:lol: :happyface :happyface :happyface

:D :cool:

:happyface

Letting go of the pain
By Eric T Brown
AKA Dark passion


On of the hardest things to do is to let go of heartbreak and pain from a rejection or a bad relationship. You don’t want to take out what happened to you on the next person but you do. And you don’t want to have bitterness in your heart but you do, you know that the next person you meet is not the one that hurt you yet you don’t care.

How many times have we lost a chance at love because we were so caught up on the pain of the last relationship? When one door of love closes a new one opens but we are too busy looking at the one that closes to worry about the one that opened.

Can you let go of the pain can to stop thinking about the hurt, because if you don’t the person or your dreams could pass you by.

They get better and better

Thank you very much.

yes. another masterpiece!!!:D

:)

that has got to be one of the most hard workd piece art ever!!!!! great jobbb!!!! :D :eek: :lol:

Thank you hey check out this new one.

When my eyes met yours
By Eric Brown
AKA Dark Passion



I thought it was just going to be another day, nothing good happing but then I saw you and the moment I saw your eyes it was like looking at the stars in heaven. I just had to get to know you, talking you was a dream come true we hit it off so well.

Then I asked you to dance and when I pulled you into my arms and we danced the night away. Put your head next to my heart as we dance together, fell the warmth and passion of my feelings for you. I wanted to hold you forever, and I never wanted to be with out you.

Lady after that I have to say welcome to my life, to my hope and dreams. Let me be there for you, I am falling in love with you. Baby tell me were we go from here, I want to always be in your world.

u should send your poems to Raven, she would enjoy it!!!........if u knew where she live!!!:lol: :D :D

I hope she comes to this site and reads them HAHAHAHAH:wave: :happyface

She'd enjoy em

that was excellent absolutely excellent!

Every1 likes em

Thank you very much.

yup......good indeed!!!

THUMBS UP!!! :D

:talk: :rolleyes:

y u rolling ur eyes?? :confused: :confused: :confused: :D

I have no idea......:D

confused?:lol:

probably!:lol:

then he needs vanilla coke!!:lol:

yup!

Mom I still miss you
By Eric T Brown
AKA Dark Passion


It’s been over two years since you have been gone and I still miss you a lot Mom. But don’t worry about me and Dad we have been doing fine. I have been getting my life together saving money like you wanted me to do. Dad and I are getting very close but I still can’t talk to him the way that you and I did. No one will ever take your place Mom you knew me like the back of your hand.

I found Jesus Christ and gave my life to him on New Years Eve, and I feel so much better about everything. You always wanted me to find God but after you died I lost faith and hope. One day we will meet again and I have so much to tell you. I hope to get married and give you and Dad some grandkids but if I don’t get married in a few years I will adopt.

So Mom don’t worry about your little boy and your Husband, we will make it you made us a strong family a strong unit. Mom I will always love you.

That's my favorite. I love that one.......I really really really can't wait until your book!

Thank you

ur good!!! my friend is a good story writer/poet 2!

Thank you very much, you guys make me feel so good by the way here is what I look like LOL.

o ok. im buyin' ur book

great poem again!!!!:D

yay

yup..........

Thank you very much.:happyface :happyface

welcome.........but dont give us all of your poems, save them for your book!!!:lol:

I have writen over 200 the ones I posted were ones i just wrote not too long ago.

oh.....thats a lot of poems!!!!:D

:wave: :happyface I gets my write on HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

yeah.....i bet u wore out a lot of pens and pencils!!!!!!!:lol:

Wore out a lot of computers LOL.

:lol:

:lol: :happyface :wave:

i like 2 write about my dreams. o, and i make comic books. im working on a series with dragonball GT and Powerpuff girls put 2gether.:lol:

Hey that should be good.

Will I always be alone
By Eric Brown



I feel so much pain when I see others in love holding hands, for I have no one to call my own. Always dinning and going to the movies alone, never having someone to call my own. Every night I pray to God, to give that one true love to spend my life with.

Nothing is worse than being alone; I have a lot of friends who tell me to keep on. They say the reason I am alone is because of my passion, that the one I find will be my soul mate. Well even if that is true, it still hurts to walk alone.

Don’t get my wrong I have a lot in my life going on, a great career and life of dream. But what good is having the world it you don’t have anyone to share it with. Is there anyone out there just for me? Am I doomed to live my life alone?

I will never give up hope, there has to be a lady out there that needs real love. Someone to treat them like gold, giving them a real love that is worth more than diamonds and gold.

If you are out there, please let me know. I will give you my world, my heart and my dreams. I will love and treasure you till my dieing day.

Very good!

Thank you very much. Don't forget what I look like you may see me on TV one day LOL.

:lol:

HAHAHAHAHHA.

i wont forget!!!!:lol:

:lol: :lol:

:lol:

:cool:

somebody's gonna be a star!!!:D

yeah.....:D

:drool: Yu amaze me boy? yu rite beautifily! With the one about the mom you had me crying( not joking) I was crying my eyes out and ith the one "Will i alays be alone" Yu described me entirely! Boy u sure can write! How old are u?Just asking cause u look pretty old in that pic (no offense) like 25 or in ur twenties!:wave:

he might be a famous poet one day. :nod:

:wave: :wave: :wave:

:wave:

:crying: :(

:(

:dance: :dizzy: :bash: :cheers: :clap: :rock: :guitar: :crazy: :happyface sry got a lil out of control:woohoo:

WE ALL KNOW!!!:lol:

:lol:

Yeah!:lol: :happyface

No!

Yes!

Maybe!

No!

:lol:

Originally posted by kingconan31
:wave: :wave: :wave: make a poem bout boracay, phillipines......

It has deep blue CLEAR water (no junk)

it has soft white white sand....

people live in huts!

:talk: :D

:p

here's an image

:cool:

:)

LOL

please?

please??

it would be nice to write about.

:idea: :yeahthat :yippee: :baby: Puh-LLLLEEEAAASSSEEE???

:)

:lol: :eek: :confused:

:D

:idea: i have an idea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

what is it???

what's ur idea?

yeah???????

please guys don't get your feelings mixed!:mad: :eek: :cool: :rolleyes: :talk: :wave: :crazy: :crazy:

ooopppppppsss:lol: :lol:

i dont remember......

OH...........

what are you guys talking about LOL?

i dont remember......

here's another pic of boracay......

preety!!!!

told u da water wuz clear!!!!!!!

YES, VERY CLEAR!!

here's another pic! hey kingcanon, would u make da poem now? HERES DA BEACH!!!!!!

IM SURE HE WILL....

its a beutiful world full of magic and wonder.

........then u woke up!:lol: :lol:

if that's true i woke up inside the matrix...

:lol:

whats a matrix?

have u seen matrix?

RAVEN FACT

Raven is sooo obsessed with Matrix, she could say all the lines in the script!!!

i didnt know that!

the matrix. as in the matrix reloaded, matrix revolution. my friend loves those movies and she got me into them.

oh, thats a matrix!

I LUUUUUUVVVVVVV THE MATRIX!!!! not, it's scaryfull

whoa! the matrix is scary?

yes u cood dye in there:wave: hello?!:rolleyes:

i never seen the matrix. i dont think i want to see it!:eek:

its a reeeeeaaaaaaallllllllyyyyyyyy good movie. #1 movie of a year.

well......maybe i will check it out!!! hey? What if raven was in the matrix movie???

that would be cool!


did u ever play the matrix video game? it's pretty cool.

i dont think so. actors/actresses wont b obsessed with the show they're in...like my teach wuz in titanic he's not so psyched about it!

ur teacher was in Titanic? did hehave a big part in it?

yes, he wuz leonardo. no im just kiddin' he wuz one of those backround people on the ship in the ballroom. he wuz sitting down on a table.

oh......

u'll probably see him. he's wide with glasses and a mustache!

Letting go of the pain
By Eric T Brown
AKA Dark passion


One of the hardest things to do is to let go of heartbreak and pain from a
rejection or a bad relationship. You don't want to take out what happened to
you on the next person but you do. And you don't want to have bitterness in
your heart but you do, you know that the next person you meet is not the one
that hurt you let you don't care.

How many times have we lost a chance at love because we were so caught up on the pain of the last relationship? When one door of love closes a new one
opens but we are too busy looking at the one that closes to worry about the
one that opened.

Can you let go of the pain can to stop thinking about the hurt, because if
you don't the person or your dreams could pass you by.

wow! great work!

Thank you.

very good.

A brother loves to write.

u should. ur great at it! :D

Thank you.

Nice guys need love too
By Eric Brown




Being a nice guy sometimes leads to a lot of heart break. You are mostly alone because some females only see you in the friend zone. Women say that they want nice guys but usually only date men that break their hearts. A lot of times you fall in love easily and you end up getting hurt.

Nice guys need love too, but a lot of times we are on the sidelines. It is not easy being alone all the time, every night you pray that the woman of your dreams is out there. Why is it that nice guys almost always finish last in the game of love?

Is there any woman out there that wants a man who will treat her like a queen? Is there any woman that wants a man that will always treat her with respect, and always love her and care for her?

Am I doomed to be alone, and never have someone for my own? For I know all I need to is a chance, to show a woman what love really is, giving her a love that she will never forget. Show her that all men are not dogs, that some men know how to treat women like a queen.

Let me show you how a man should treat woman don’t pass me by, can you love this sweet warm and caring nice guy?

dats really beautiful. :)

thanks. this is what I wrote for my new girl friend.

Nailah my love
By Eric T Brown
AKA Dark Passion



Nailah if someone told me I would find my mate on the net I would have laughed in their face. But that day I talked to you it seemed like we knew each other for years. I felt the passion in your heart every time we talked. My late Mother told me that you will know when you find the right one. And honey I know you are it, I just can’t stop thinking about you and how you make me feel. I am not a rich man I can’t buy you the world, but I can give you the key to my heart, my hopes and my dreams.

Nailah, will you take the key to my heart? Will you let me show you the way of love and happiness because baby I need you in my life, ever since I lost my Mom the love has been gone from my life. I need a good woman to hold in my arms to love, to care for.

If you say yes to all of that all I got to say is honey you just hit the jackpot and found a real black man, that is looking for his real black queen.

way to go!:D

:happyface :wave: :wave: thanks

tell ur girlfriend she has a very talented boyfrend. :lol: jk.

Thank you. I will.

yup!:D

go for it!!

YOu like me you really like me sniff sniff :wave:

LOL yep. :p

hey...hey...how bout that BEACH poem huh?