*Nancy Mckeon*
11-29-2003, 10:49 PM
yet another 1 of my boring fics...
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jinny drove down the road to her new house. she was in the middle of nowhere. she was already starting to miss san-fran. jin saw her house at the end of the hill high abouve from where her car was. "i must have taken a wrong turn or sumthing" she said outloud to herself. she decided to try and take a shortcut thought the dirt path and woods that the road suddenly stopped at. but not far down the path there was a statue with a face on each side, and an old abandend building on the other side with a tunnel in the middle of it. jin got out of her car and even tho she knew she shouldn't she started walking thro the pitch black tunnel. it led out to a huge big feild covered in grass. she started walking out into the feild. then suddenly there was a bunch of buildings and a big thing of concrete stairs leading up to them. she could smell food cooking and hear low music playing in the background. but there was no one around. as she was walking thro the street she saw an even bigger stair case leading up to a huge building. as she walked towards the stairs she saw a bridge leading to the building. and she slowly walked over the bridge, but she stopped and looked over the sides but when she turned around a man was standing there." you can't be here. go run! get away from here!" and he walked over to her and lightly pushed her until she was off the bridge. and she started running down the stairs, but she stopped and looked back. "what's up with him" she thought but then she started running again as she came to the feild she'd been in earlier but as she ran out in it she discoved it was filled with water. she walked back up the stairs and looked out into the water. " this was where the feild was" she thought "and now...... this is like a dream or sumthing...i have to be dreaming.." ( it was nite time btw so it was pretty dark out so thaz why so didn't see the water when she ran into it) but it seemed so real. was she dreaming? or could this be real? where was she? and if this was real, how would she get out of there?~~~ then all of a sudden she heard sumthing.- it seemed really load yet she could barely hear it. then all of a sudden it became clear and she knew what it was. she listenes for a minute. she was scared to turn around, but she knew she had to. and she knew that if she didn't, the results could be fatal....
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k-i wanna post more sooooo bad but b 4 i make my hands tireder (if possible) lol i wanna no if u like it! lol so, do ya? do ya? do ya? huh? huh? huh? and ne guesses what the noise was?
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jinny drove down the road to her new house. she was in the middle of nowhere. she was already starting to miss san-fran. jin saw her house at the end of the hill high abouve from where her car was. "i must have taken a wrong turn or sumthing" she said outloud to herself. she decided to try and take a shortcut thought the dirt path and woods that the road suddenly stopped at. but not far down the path there was a statue with a face on each side, and an old abandend building on the other side with a tunnel in the middle of it. jin got out of her car and even tho she knew she shouldn't she started walking thro the pitch black tunnel. it led out to a huge big feild covered in grass. she started walking out into the feild. then suddenly there was a bunch of buildings and a big thing of concrete stairs leading up to them. she could smell food cooking and hear low music playing in the background. but there was no one around. as she was walking thro the street she saw an even bigger stair case leading up to a huge building. as she walked towards the stairs she saw a bridge leading to the building. and she slowly walked over the bridge, but she stopped and looked over the sides but when she turned around a man was standing there." you can't be here. go run! get away from here!" and he walked over to her and lightly pushed her until she was off the bridge. and she started running down the stairs, but she stopped and looked back. "what's up with him" she thought but then she started running again as she came to the feild she'd been in earlier but as she ran out in it she discoved it was filled with water. she walked back up the stairs and looked out into the water. " this was where the feild was" she thought "and now...... this is like a dream or sumthing...i have to be dreaming.." ( it was nite time btw so it was pretty dark out so thaz why so didn't see the water when she ran into it) but it seemed so real. was she dreaming? or could this be real? where was she? and if this was real, how would she get out of there?~~~ then all of a sudden she heard sumthing.- it seemed really load yet she could barely hear it. then all of a sudden it became clear and she knew what it was. she listenes for a minute. she was scared to turn around, but she knew she had to. and she knew that if she didn't, the results could be fatal....
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k-i wanna post more sooooo bad but b 4 i make my hands tireder (if possible) lol i wanna no if u like it! lol so, do ya? do ya? do ya? huh? huh? huh? and ne guesses what the noise was?