Archie and Edith
10-31-2003, 09:10 PM
I'm going to make a new pilot for "The Jagerson's".
a new cast:
Pete (the dad), Andrew (child who's 10), Maxine (the maid) and Jim Hanks (a neighbor).
This time Jim doesn't have a son and Pete's divorced, his ex-wife will hardly ever be in any episodes.
1.1 "Pete and Jim's Night Out"
Guest Star: Barney (bartender)
(starting just as Pete leaves)
Pete: Andrew, I'll be home later. oh and Maxine make sure Andy takes his bath.
the doorbell rings.
Maxine: I'll get it.
Jim: Hi Maxine, How are you?
Maxine: I'm fine. Come in.
Jim comes in the house and Pete walks down the stairs.
Pete: Hi Jim. Let's go.
Jim: ok. Bye Maxine and tell Andrew I said hello.
Jim and Pete drive to BB's Bar.
Jim: here's a good place.
They pull up and walk in.
Barney: Howdy fellows, I'm Barney. What would you like?
Pete: I'll have a martini.
Jim: I'll have an old fashion.
Barney: alright one martini and one old fashion.
(back at the house)
Maxine: Andrew go take your bath.
Andrew: ok Maxine.
Andrew finishes his bath and he walks downstairs.
Maxine: Here's some Cheerios for you.
Andrew: thank you, Maxine.
Maxine takes Andy to bed.
(2 hours later, at the bar) Pete is passed out by now.
Jim: I'll have another one, Barney.
Barney: no you're drunk. come lay on my couch in the bathroom.
Barney takes Jim to the couch.
To Be Continued.......
What does everone like it so far?
a new cast:
Pete (the dad), Andrew (child who's 10), Maxine (the maid) and Jim Hanks (a neighbor).
This time Jim doesn't have a son and Pete's divorced, his ex-wife will hardly ever be in any episodes.
1.1 "Pete and Jim's Night Out"
Guest Star: Barney (bartender)
(starting just as Pete leaves)
Pete: Andrew, I'll be home later. oh and Maxine make sure Andy takes his bath.
the doorbell rings.
Maxine: I'll get it.
Jim: Hi Maxine, How are you?
Maxine: I'm fine. Come in.
Jim comes in the house and Pete walks down the stairs.
Pete: Hi Jim. Let's go.
Jim: ok. Bye Maxine and tell Andrew I said hello.
Jim and Pete drive to BB's Bar.
Jim: here's a good place.
They pull up and walk in.
Barney: Howdy fellows, I'm Barney. What would you like?
Pete: I'll have a martini.
Jim: I'll have an old fashion.
Barney: alright one martini and one old fashion.
(back at the house)
Maxine: Andrew go take your bath.
Andrew: ok Maxine.
Andrew finishes his bath and he walks downstairs.
Maxine: Here's some Cheerios for you.
Andrew: thank you, Maxine.
Maxine takes Andy to bed.
(2 hours later, at the bar) Pete is passed out by now.
Jim: I'll have another one, Barney.
Barney: no you're drunk. come lay on my couch in the bathroom.
Barney takes Jim to the couch.
To Be Continued.......
What does everone like it so far?