GreetingS! : )
I'm sure you all know me as the author of SOS, SOS 2 Redone and co-writer og "Magda's Reality" but I'm here, to do a TD fic! -Gasp- It's inspired by a role play me and my friend Sara are doing. If you want me (us) to continue, (Not role playing exactly..., but to post) then let POST! : )

See, what happens is, this one guy, Jinny's steady B/f (-Another gasp-) ends up getting her pregnant but he breaks up with her the day after they do it.. well this other guy comes along and helps her out and ends up being her love interest. Sara loves romances ; P

Blessed be!
Kie

You must post more of this soon. This is getting really good. I try to imagine Jinny as a wild teenager in high school. Now I get to see. Please please please post really soon. In like maybe one hour at the most? lol..Good luck you two with writing it. I will be one of your regulars!

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tonight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Here ya go! Our first post! : ) Hope you guys like it. (And again...VERY sory for the whole chat thing on Magda's Reality, I gotta fix that.... :crazy:

It was the day after Homecoming. After a few years of sleeping around, Jinny finally managed to hold a steady boyfriend. Brad was the typical high school guy that all of the girls loved and wanted. So, being the totally boy-crazy chick that she was, Jinny wanted him too. They started going out that year and were inseperable since. That is, until the next morning. Brad came to pick Jinny up and had something on his mind. She hears him honk his horn and runs out. Wearing a leather mini skirt, low-cut white midriff-baring top, a matching short leather jacket and boots coming up to her knees, 17 year old Jinny Exstead walked out of the tiny 4 bedroom house and down the stone steps to Brad and his truck. She gets in and he kisses her. Though, today his kisses seemed different. Empty. She decided to ask him about it when they got to school. Silent the whole way, and after what seems like an eternity, Brad finally pulls his pick-up into the school parking lot and gets out. When they reach the cracked cement sidewalk, he stops.

"I don't think we should see each other anymore." he simply stated.
"What? Wait, Brad you can't be serious." Jinny said, not wanting to believe him.
"It's just not working out. I mean, let's face it, you're only good for one thing. And Heather is much prettier."
"So, that's it? You're just gonna screw me 'N' lose me?" she asked, the anger raising in her voice.

Not thinking of what might happen next....

"Yep."

She punches him hard in the stomach and walks into school, while he writes on the sidewalk in pain and goes into a fetal position. Jinny's best friend, Jaclyn, walked up to her as she slammed her locker.

"Whoa... Hey, chica! What's buggin' you?" she asked.
"I think I'm gonna give up men." she stated.
"You? Give up men? Is that possible?" she asked, half joking, half serious.
"I can be satisfied by my toys." she said, grinning.
"Girl, you are too much." Jaclyn said, laughing, as they slapped each other a high five.

Hope you like! I'm not posting as much since well, I'm basically vamping on this first part, and I'm not even sure if you will like it or not! : P Blessed be.

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Hmm, never thought I'd be posting a Division fan fic that people actually like. It's never happened before lol. Anyway, enough of my babbling. If some of this don't make any sense or w/e, gimme a break coz I just woke up :p We're gonna fast forward to a week later since actually, the first part was sort of like the prologue. Here's more:

After hours of boring classes, some ditched, Jinny and Jaclyn walk to Gym class. After getting showered and changed, all the girls walk to the gymnasium. The boys are already there and after some strenuous exercises, the gym teacher blows her whistle and they start running laps around the gym. A few of the kids in class are just walking now, while others continue to run. Jinny, running with Jaclyn and Cale, running in-step in front of them beside Leo. Cale had liked Jinny for some time, but never really told her. He hated the way most guys treated her, even though she seemed to like it. Especially Brad. Half the time he treated her as if she didn't matter. But when he wanted a quickie, he'd sweet talk her just to that point. Now that it was out what had happened between him and Jinny, Cale felt sorry for her and was willing to do anything to help. Right now, they were just friends, Jaclyn too. But he hoped it might evolve into something more. While thinking about this, he noticed that nobody was really running anymore and there was a crowd gathered in a circle. He walked over and pushed her way through. The gym teacher was already there.

"What happened?" One girl whispered.
"She fainted" said the gym teacher. "Probably got overheated or something."
"Here, I'll take her." Cale said, picking her up.

Jaclyn followed and she helped him take Jinny to the Nurses' office.


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This is awesomeee! ; ) Post more when U get the chance!!


PS *nancy mckeon* .. i looove your avatar! Memories :)

Originally posted by anaïsFANxx
This is awesomeee! ; ) Post more when U get the chance!!


PS *nancy mckeon* .. i looove your avatar! Memories :)



wha? who? oh oh! me?! lol j/k sorry im in stupid mode today! lol j/k thanks! cat (cd delorenzo) made it for me! you have a cool av to! i love that band! whats your fave song they sing? did you really meet anais? i read sumwhere that you did.

what was teddy like? lol i only saw 2 eps with him in them lol in all of the fics he seems really nice soo thats why im obsesing over him all the time lol

neway !!!!!!MMMOOOOORRRRREEEEEE!!!!!!! now!!!

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
wha? who? oh oh! me?! lol j/k sorry im in stupid mode today! lol j/k thanks! cat (cd delorenzo) made it for me! you have a cool av to! i love that band! whats your fave song they sing? did you really meet anais? i read sumwhere that you did.

what was teddy like? lol i only saw 2 eps with him in them lol in all of the fics he seems really nice soo thats why im obsesing over him all the time lol

neway !!!!!!MMMOOOOORRRRREEEEEE!!!!!!! now!!!

Sry this is so OT Kie! But yayyy.. i <3333 Play too! Dude, finally, someone who likes Play also. YEAH! LOL. UM my fave song of theirz is... Whole Again, What Is Love, Us Against the World and Hot. What about you? And yup I've actually met Play three times through out the yr. When they went on promotional tours and mall tours.

Teddy was.. <333 darn I loved him lol! He was so perfect for Jinny. But i think she screwed up and she left him, then he found her kissing another guy, and he didn't wanna go back w/ her.

Again sry Kie =\! But post moore sooon!

"How did she faint?"
"I don't know." said Cale, "She was running in gym class. Do you think she got overheated?"
"That's possible. But not what I have in mind." inquired the nurse.

Cale sighs and sits on the other bed, while the nurse waits for Jinny to wake up. She soon wakes up and looks around.

"Uh, what am I doing here...?" she asked, confused.
"You fainted and I carried you here." implied Cale.
"Oh, well, uh... thanks." she said, smiling a little.

Cale smiles at her and looks back to the nurse, who speaks.

"Now, I don't want to alarm you dear, but I think you might be pregnant." said the nurse.
"What? I..... uh..... ohhhhhh...." Jinny mumbled untelligable, fainting again.
"Stop it! You're going to kill her!" Cale said, frantically.
"Oh, calm down. She'll be fine." said the nurse, reassuringly.

Sure enough, as if on cue, Jinny wakes up, sits up and once again, looks around. As soon as she sits up, the nurse gets a small cup and fills it with water.

"Are you feeling better?" asked Cale.
"For now." Jinny said.

Cale smiles at her and the nurse walks over.

"How are we?"
"Uhm... find I guess...." said Jinny, confused.
"Jinny, before you fainted, I told you I thought you might be pregnant. Correct?" she asked.
"Yeah... so...?" Jinny asked, lost.
"I want you to take a pregnancy test." the nurse said.

Jinny's eyes widen for a moment, and remembering Cale's in the room, she keeps her cool.

"Well, okay... but, uh, I don't have to, um... ya know..."

The nurse hands her the water.

"Then drink this until you do." she simply stated.

Jinny sighs and sips at the water.

"Drink, don't sip." she said.
"Oh, fine." Jinny said, slightly irritated.

She continues to drink the water until it's gone and then gets up to leave when the nurse hands her another cup. Jinny groans and takes the small cup. She drinks it quickly and looks at the nurse.

"Can I go now?" she asked.
"Alright, but come back in 20 minutes." she said.
"Yeah, yeah..." Jinny mumbled, walking out into the hall with Cale.

He slips her arm around her, hesitant at first, but then relaxes when she smiles at him. She sighs and they walk silently for a little bit until Cale speaks.

"You know... you were too good for him." Cale said.
"What?" asked Jinny.
"Brad. You were too good for him... and you didn't deserve what he did to you." he stated.
"Well, thank you, but I'm not worried about him now."she said, walking closer to him.

He sighs and pulls her closer.

"So... how's family life?" he asked, just for lack of nothing to say.

"Miserable... gotta pee."

She said, as she slipped out of his grasp and quickly walked back to the nurse's office.

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omg! its my 400th post!!!:happyface :crazy: :lol: :)

awesome awesome awesome post moreee!! <333

Here's a little more. I wanna be off in time to watch Full House! :crazy:

He laughed and followed to wait outside the door. She walks in and the nurse hands her the test, directing her to the small bathroom in the corner of the nurse's office. She walks in and does the test. Meanwhile, Cale is waiting outside and the nurse comes to talk to him.

"She should be out in a few minutes."
"Okay." said Cale, not paying attention.
"If she is... well, are you the father?" asked the nurse, tentively.

Cale's eyes widen and he almost falls over.

"NO!, I.. I mean, no." he said, trying to keep his cool.
"Oh, I see." said the nurse, not sure whether to believe him or not.

She walks back inside and knocks on the door. When no one answers, she opens it to find Jinny kneeling on the floor, with her head in her hands. She walks over and helps her up, leaving the test on the edge of the sink. She leads her over to one of the small beds and hands her a few tissues. She sits down on a chair and slides it over.

"We have to call your father, Jinny."
"No, please, he'd..."

She takes a deep breath and tries to finish her sentence. But before she can, the nurse speaks.

"Honey, I know you're scared, but maybe he'll understand. He has to know. And not to sound... foolish, but he is going to find out sooner or later." said the nurse.

Jinny manages to laugh a small, watery sounding laugh and wipes her eyes. The nurse goes to dial the phone, sighs and calls Cale back in.

"Is she alright? What's wrong?" he asked.

He could tell by the look in the nurses' eyes that something wasn't right.

"Come in and see your girlfriend." she said, coxing him in.

Cale blushed at the way the nurse had referred to Jinny as "his girlfriend" and walked in to see her, teary-eyed and shaking.

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kool! im atching full house too! DJ ROX! so does michelle and so does the guy who's into elvis, and so does every1 else!! lol
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This is awesome!!! Post more!

"Jinny, please, don't cry." he said, wiping a tear of her cheek and sitting down next to her.
"I have no idea what I'm going to do, Cale. I'm sorry, I can't help it. What am I gonna tell my dad? What will he say? God, I know John's gonna have something to say about this!" she said, with anger and hurt in her voice.
"Don't worry about that now. You.. you can tell them it's mine." Cale said.
"Cale, you can't be serious. I can't do that. I can't let you take the blame...---"

He cuts her off.

"No, tell them it's mine... Brad is friends with your brother." he stated simply.
"So?" she asked, puzzled.
"So, I'm not friends with anyone in your family. Let me get on you dad's good side, Jinny. Then you can tell him you're pregnant." he concluded.

Jinny hesistates, then speaks softly.

"Will um... will you be there when I tell him...?" she asked, uncertainty in her voice.
"Of course." he said.

Jinny smiles and on impulse hugs him.

"Thank you... thank you so much." she said, hugging him tightly.

Cale smiles and hugs her back, holding her as if nothing could ever harm her.

"It's alright... it's going to be alright. I'll never let anybody harm you..." he said, softly, into her ear.

!!!!!MMMMMOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEE!!!!!! and it better be soon!!!!!! lol j/k

ain't it bout time you post more!

I'm soooo sorry! Seriously, I'm like OMG I really need to post. I'll do it now. I wrote more in school when I was supposed to be listening to Mr. Gresh (Social St.) lecture about something lol, but I left my noteboook in my locker at school... I think it's in my Math book. But I can make up what parts I forgot. For those of you reading this who also read SOS 2, I think I'm done with it b/c it's just getting too ... I don't know complicated I guess. And I really don't have the heart to continue it b/c I have no idea how to continue it... not that anybody's reading it anyway.
But enough of my rambling, here's more. And thanks to *Nancy McKeon* for not forgetting about my story jus 'cos I haven't been posting lately : ) That means a lot to me.


Jinny sits through the rest of her boring classes until she can't take it anymore and skips. She walks home, having been driven to school that day by Brad. Cale offered to walk with her, but at the end of the day. Which meant he had no idea that she would be skipping school. After running these thoughts through her head, hoping Cale isn't mad at her tomorrow for ditching, she opens the door to the house and collapses onto the couch. She drifts off and on in sleep and finally wakes up completely. She just lays there and John walks in wearing his football jersey and tossing his football up into the air. He looks at her and sits down on the chair, still tossing the football.

"What's a matter with you?" he asked, not really caring.
"Bad day, tired, men suck." she said in a monotone.

John grins a little at the last part of her sentence and she continues.

"You didn't by any chance talk to Brad today... did you?" she asked, careful not to bring up the subject of them dating because they had both told John they'd broken up a long time ago.

John thought Brad was too old for her and actually, didn't see why Brad liked when he could have one of the head cheerleaders other than the SS.

"Oh yeah. Guy's the man, Jin. The best." he said, wrapped up in his own lil' world.
"I wouldn't be so sure about that," she muttered, not realizing John could hear her.
"What do ya got against Brad? He scored us half the other team's points last season!" John implied.
"I uh, well, yeah that was last year though." she said, sorry she ever brought up the subject.
"Jin, I know you well enough by now that you stammer when you're nervous. What's up?"
"John, it's really nothing that important..." she said, almost longing to tell him, yet fearing he'd tell their father.
"C'mon kid, I'm trying to be all big brotherly and sentimental for once. Lay it on me." he said simply.
"First of all, I'm not a kid, if you haven't noticed I'm 17. And secondly, you're never "big brotherly and sentimental" " she concluded.
"Okay, seriously Jinny. Tell me." he stated.

Jinny sighs knowing she might as well tell him before Casey got home anyway.

"Fine, but you gotta promise me something." she said slowly.
"Oh god, not one of those "Don't tell Dad" promises! I hate those!" he commented.
"Fine, but unless you promise, I can't tell you." she said.
"Oh jesus, all right, fine. I promise." he said, irritated.
"Okay. Uh, John... what would you say if ... if I were pregnant?"

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well, its about time! geez wut u gotta do do to get sum fic round her!? llol j/k


ne way now thet u back you can post even more!!!

More Please!

I know I haven't posted in a reeeeeally long time guys but there's just a lot goin' on right now and then I keep gettin' sick, it jus' all sux. But I'll tell ya what, once I get everything organized (we had a break in not too long ago and the house was completely trashed) I'll write more then post alright? I'm really sorry guys, I know you've been waiting and if it hadn't been for Bananasplit, I wouldn't even remembered this fan fic existed!!

Kiwi

Originally posted by JohnstownBruja
if it hadn't been for Bananasplit, I wouldn't even remembered this fan fic existed!!

Kiwi

heeeeeey! what about me?!?!? i asked for more!! lol mmmooorrrreeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!

More More More! LOL!!!!!!!!!!! Your welcome for the help *Nancy McKeon*

lmao sorry gurl, wrong person! i'm not *Nancy McKeon* lol bananasplit

anyways, i did write more while i was sick and actually its kinda cruel-ish but it's something that I can picture the one character to say and do so that's how i'm keeping it. i'll be writing more in school tomorrow because i have back to back study halls pretty much all day. lucky ME! :rolleyes: tyeah, anywho, i'm goin' to bed. I woulda posted (typed) more tonight, but i went to a dance at my school and i'm jus' reeeeeally beat, aiite ppl. so ya know w/e lol

ttyl

post soon

please don't give up on meeh!

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K!wi

glad ur feelin better! can't wait for more of this story!

ain't it bout time ya post more?!?!?!?!??1

todays thanksgiving so ya have to post more so that we'll be thankfull for you!;) mmmmmmooooooorrrrrrreeeeeeee!!!!!!!!

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well, TJ certainly did a lotta redecorating while I was gone... *looks around*

anyways, ya wanted more n' ya got it! not a ton, mind ya, but enough.

now... Jenna..... STOP ASKING ME TO POST MORE!!!!!!!! lol I am now gurl!! :typing: :crazy:

BTW, great new smileys, TJ!! (Im typing this differently tonight, too tired, cant focus lol)

John- why would --- oh, god, Jinny!
Jinny- see this is why I dont tell you anything!
John- look, I gotta go to practice. keep your clothes on while Im gone

with that, he slams the door. Jinny breaks down into tears, putting her face in her hands. the door opens + Casey stands in the doorway. never wanting to see Jinny hurt, he closes the door quietly + sits down beside her on the couch.

Casey- Jinny? Jinny, please don't cry. what's wrong?

sobbing, she wipes some of her tears away, to look at Casey

Jinny- it's nothing, Casey.
Casey- don't tell me that. I'm 13, but Im not stupid.
Jinny- right. *sighs, swallowing the lump at the back of her throat* I'm pregnant, Case.
Casey- is that why you're crying?

he asked his older sister, while brushing some hair out of her eyes. Jinny shakes her head no + a tear rolls down her cheek. Casey wipes it away, handing her a tissue.

Casey- please tell me why, Jinny. I can't help unless you do. & I know I'm younger + may not know as much as u and John, but Im here. Im always here.

Jinny smiles a lil' bit at Casey's last comment. he was wise beyond his years and it showed. she often thought of him as the oldest because most often, he acted like it.

Jinny- John just said some really mean things to me, thats all. don't worry about it, Case. just go play video games or something 'kay?

she knew he was only trying to help + she wasn't trying to sound mean or make him feel like a little kid, the way John often did. she didnt want to burden him with her problems, even though he may have been the only one in her family that she could count on through her pregnancy.




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now... Jenna..... STOP ASKING ME TO POST MORE!!!!!!!! lol I am now gurl!! :typing: :crazy:



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i just talked to you today so i know your alive!!! lol so you have no excuse to not post more!!

LOL well people the truth is i forgot!!!!! and i don't even know where i left off.... *asks Jenna* okay i just asked her and promised that i'd make it extreeeeemely long if she found it for me!!!! and since this is originally a role play that was never finished (as me and sara's rps usually go...) i'm just gonna have to improv i guess. which is okay because i seem to do better when i improv then when i don't. so here's more! (tons more!....appareciate it or EAT IT!!! :D

The next day at school she talked to Cale and they both decided to go to the drugstore and get a home pregnancy test. When Jinny started to protest that the nurse had already given her one, he smiled and told her just to be sure. After many attempts to try and talk him out of it, she just smiled, and sighed, agreeing. After sitting through what seemed like 3 hour classes, school was finally over and Cale met Jinny as soon as she came out of the locker room from gym class. He smiled at her. She looked so gorgeous in her black baby tee and jeans, he smiled at her again and gave her a kiss. So many guys took that for granted. Especially Brad. It made Cale seethe to think of him and what he had left Jinny with. He walked with her to a nearby drugstore on the corner, carressing a piece of her long jet black hair. She smiled and they walked in, after sharing another quick, but passionate kiss. She was so happy, at least as she could be, that he was going to be there for her and the baby. They walked through the ailse, and found a HPT kit and Jinny, being a little embarrassed to pay for herself, gave Cale a few bucks and he paid for it. They walked out and went to Jinny's. After making sure nobody was home, they sat down and read the directions.

Cale- okay, so if it's blue you're not pregnant--- (Jinny interrupts him)
Jinny- which we already know I am....
Cale- *smiles and takes her hand* humor me
Jinny- *grins* sorry
Cale- thank you. Okay, so blue's (reads indistinctly) and pink means you are.
Jinny- *claps, obviously mocking him*
Cale- *rolls his eyes and hands her the box*
Jinny- uh... heh... think you could go home? i wanna get this done before any of the boys come home... and if so they uh... ---
Cale- *smiles and gives her a kiss* I completely understand. I'll go. call me tonight, Jin.

Cale leaves and Jinny breathes a sigh of relief, she goes to set the box down when she hears "humor me" out in the hall and laughs. She takes the box and everything into the bathroom and shuts the door and does the test. After taking the test, and waiting out on the couch for the time said, she walked into the bathroom and cringed as she heard the door slam.

John Sr.- Jinny girl? You home?
Jinny- *eyes widen* uh, yeah, dad, just, uh--- (quickly turns her back to the sink to cover the pregnancy test as he walks in)
John Sr.- are you alright? I--- *sees the box on the counter and turns towards her* step aside
Jinny- dad, really, I---
John Sr.- Now.

Jinny sighs and reluctantly steps away from the sink, sitting on the edge of the bathtub. As soon as he sees what it is, he turns to Jinny with such a mix of looks of hate, dissapointment, sadness and a few others she couldn't quite pinpoint. He walks out, slamming the door to the small house, leaving a silent Jinny still sitting on the edge of the tub. It takes a minute for the realization of the situation to fully hit her and she sobs quietly. After crying for a bit, she walks to the box and test, throwing them in the garbage can, and going out the door. She walks to Cale's house very slowly, so by that time, it's around 7. She rings the bell and tries to hide the obvious, although anyone who looked at her could tell she'd been crying. Cale answers the door, hoping to find a happy Jinny, but when he gets there his smile quickly fades.

Cale- Jin? honey. what's wrong? come here.

Jinny walks into his arms and sobs a little more. He continues to hold her until he feels she's ready to come inside and when she finally stops, he walks her inside and they sit on the couch.

Cale- what happened?
Jinny- *in a low, watery-like voice* he came home a little too early... that's all
Cale- who? your dad?
Jinny- *a tear runs down her cheek and she nods* Cale, you should have seen him. he looked so.. so angry and so.. hurt. *sighs sadly, almost ready to cry again*
Cale- *takes her hand and lifts her face so she's eye to eye with him* listen, let me finish getting dressed, and you wash your face off and we'll go talk to him, okay?
Jinny- Cale.... i---
Cale- *wipes a tear off her cheek and smiles a little, in an attempt to cheer her up* humor me

Jinny smiles a little, and after they kiss, he holds her for a little longer. After getting ready and her getting get face washed up, they walk back over to her house, in an attempt to try and make the situation less worse than it already was. About half the way Jinny starts to get a little light headed and dizzy. Before she can fall Cale quickly catches her and sets her down. After her composing herself, he helps her up the steps to her house and they go in, only to find John Sr and John Jr sitting on the couch, staring angrily at the both of them.

Jinny- ....Hi... dad...


that's all ya get cos my butt is goin to sleep! lol and i wanna make sure that people are still readin this! (besides the imfamous Jenna! lol) ENJOY!!!!!!!!! and i promise, no more huuuuuuuuuge cliff hangers!

Originally posted by CriMsoNrOsE
that's all ya get cos my butt is goin to sleep! lol and i wanna make sure that people are still readin this! (besides the imfamous Jenna! lol) ENJOY!!!!!!!!! and i promise, no more huuuuuuuuuge cliff hangers!


*raises hand* ooh!! im reading!!! and so is everyone else so you can post more now!!!!! mmmmmmmooorrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!

I AM STILL READING!!!!!! I LOVED IT! Please post more sooooon and DONT FORGET!!!!!

This is great! Post more soon!

hey guys thanks for the replies. nice to know people are still reading! well, it's 6:34 so since i didn't post yesterday cos i was sick, i'll try and post a bit more before school. so here ya go!

Jinny- dad... what uh... what's up?
John Sr- you tell me.
Jinny- look, i was gonna tell you, but i wanted to---
John Sr- wanted to what? afraid i'd be dissapointed in you? well, you thought right.

He starts to get up and leave, and Cale steps in front of him.

Cale- sir, with all do respect, it wasn't like that. her intentions weren't this way.
John Sr- who the hell are you?
Cale- Cale, Cale Johnson sir.

hey i gotta go to school now... well... SLIDE considering my driveway and sidewalk is nothin but a big ice rink. see ya!!!

ice rink! ha! skate to school!! lol mmmmmmooooorrrrrrrreeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DEF more!!! Just for me:):) *Gives her cute little smile)

John Sr- well Cale Johnson, I want you to stay out of situations you know nothing about....and my daughter for that matter.
Cale- with all do respect, again, sir, I do know what's going on and I'm willing to help...
John Sr- HELP? with WHAT?
Cale- raise the baby, sir.
John Sr- raise the..... YOU got her.... you s.o.b! *lunges at him and Jinny steps in between them*
Jinny- ENOUGH!!! I'm sick of this! yes, damnit, I made a mistake, but god, don't take it out on him! and it's not even his kid! it's John's jackass friend Brad who did it!

She runs upstairs to her room and slams the door. John Sr sits down and sighs as John starts to go up the stairs, but Cale talks him out of it and goes up, with no protest from either Exstead. He gets to what he guesses is her room and knocks. When a small, low mumble comes from inside, he knew he'd picked the right one. He enters slowly, seeing a balled-up looking Jinny on the floor by her closet. He walks over and sits on her bed, somewhat facing her. He brushes a piece of her dark hair out of her eyes, smiling as he does so.

Cale- hey. you okay?
Jinny- perfect... dad hates me and John... well, that's an easy one. *sighs*
Cale- they don't hate you... your dad just... I'm sure he's just... feeling a lot of things right now and he'll talk to you about them when he's ready. until then, don't worry about it, Jin. if they never come around, you know I'll still be there for you and the baby.

He gets down at eye level with her, kneeling in front of her and taking her hand into his, looking straight into her piercing green eyes.

Cale- until the end.

She smiles a little and they gaze into each other's eyes, not wanting to ever look away. They start to move together closer and closer until they share a sweet, passionate kiss only they could share.

***NeXt MoRniNg***
Jinny wakes up feeling a little dizzy, but nothing major. She gets up, and gets dressed in a pair of tight leather pants and a red belly shirt. she pulls her hair back halfway with a rectangle barrett and let's her bangs fall in her eyes. she slips on a pair of black leather high heeled boots, puts on some dark eye-shadow and grabbing her shades, kays and books, she heads downstairs, not wanting to talk to anyone, but Cale. She gets to school somewhat on time to find Cale already probably in class. She walks to class and into homeroom, sliding into her seat. The teacher takes role and Cale's eyes can only gaze at how she looked. Not that she didn't look beautiful any other time. But today there was just something about her. Maybe it was the kiss? He decided not to think about it and waited as usual, for the bell to ring. he and her had home ec together and were starting something new today. None of the students knew exactly what, but then again with their home ec teacher, you could never be too sure. She was a bit... out of her mind at times, but usually they had fun. Finally, after thinking and silently talking to himself, the bell finally rings and he walks out into the hall, catching up with Jinny. when he comes up behind her, he puts his arms around her waist and slows her down.

Cale- you know, you won't be able to fit into tight stuff like that soon...
Jinny- *grins* yes, that's why I'm doing it now. so I can enjoy my tight body while it still exsists...
Cale- hmm... I like your way of thinking.
Jinny- *smiles* any particular reason you're attatched to me?
Cale- I was thinking maybe we could eat lunch together today. yknow, as in the two of us, gazing longingly at each other... over pizza and fruit slices.
Jinny- *says while laughing* how romantic
Cale- isn't it though?
Jinny- yeah, and we better book it if we want to get to home ec on time... if I'm going to have a baby, I can't afford detentions like I used to...
Cale- I could always carry you...
Jinny- or vice versa...

She grins as he gives her a slight swat on on pants and they go to home ec. Jinny about faints when they get through the door and Cale just grins, laughing a bit.

Cale- Oh my god.... it's---------


MWHAHAHA! you'll have to wait until tomorrow morning or tomorrow night!!!!! heheheheheheheeeee!!! lol sorry, i'm tired and on meds for depression n other stuff. TTYL and hope ya enjoyed/enjoy it! i don't think i could ever match the success of "Subjects of Silence".

KIE!!!!! It's against the rules to do that. Rule number 1356.432 says "NO cliffhangers EVER!!!!!!" Now you don't wanna break the rules do you?

yes. yes i do:p

nooooooooooooooo!!!!!! must......have.........more........*dies* enough said...

I KNOW I HAVEN'T POSTED ON THIS FIC BUT I LIKE IT VERY MUCH SO KEEP IT COMING.:wave:

Your driveway's an ice rink, huh? Mine has been like that for weeks. Enjoy! ;) :) That was great! I liked the description of Jinny's outfit. Very 80's like---it took me back LOL. I used to wear my hair like that. Post more soon!

hey, I'm trying to post more before I go to sleep. I was in a Lisa Whelchel chat and I actually got my question answered!!!!!! 2 actually, but the one somebody asked the same one but yeah, go me! lol okay here's more

Jinny- oh god.. you're kidding
Cale- *laughs* home ec will never be the same...

He laughs as they walk over to a baby carriage, holding a mechanical, yet real looking baby in a few blankets. The home ec teacher walks in and blows a whistle to get their attention. Jinny's eyes widen and she looks to Cale who just laughs and puts an arm around her.

Ms. Randone- today we are going to explore the joys of parenthood.

You hear various groans, giggles and laughs fill the room and she smiles, telling them to settle before she continues.

Ms. Randone- Now, i'll need a volunteer...anyone? anyone? Ah, Ms. Exstead.
JInny- but I didn't volunteer....

Cale slaps a hand to his eyes, laughing a bit and a few other chuckles come from the class, including the teacher.

Ms. Randone- i'm not blind dear. nobody else would. now, come up here please. stand beside me and the baby.

Jinny walks up, feeling incredibly silly and stands beside the teacher and the carriage.

Ms. Randone- *clears her throat* alright, pick up the baby.

Jinny bends over, gets the baby in covers and picks it up gently. When she goes to put her hand under the baby's head, the head rolls off and onto the floor. This results in her laughing, Cale cracking up and the rest of the class in hysterical laughter. The teacher tries to keep from laughing and replaces the head.

Ms. Randone- alright, alright... it is not Jinny's fault the baby was defective...

This earns more laughter and the teacher sighs and puts the baby in a backroom.

Ms. Randone- get with a partner, OF THE OPPOSITE SEX.... and please try not to decapitate any more of my babies... i've only a few left...

Jinny walks back over to CALE, covering her eyes, laughing and being embarrassed at the same time.

Jinny- oh my god....
Cale- *laughs* aww, poor baby. ...literally....

She gives him a slight swat on the arm and he grabs her into a bearhug from behind and she laughs. After getting into position beside a carriage, the 'mommies and daddies' wait for their instructions. The H*E teacher walks back out and stands in front of them, checking all the couples, making sure they're boy-girl or -girl-boy and putting a clipboard back down on her desk.

Ms. Randone- daddie's, take your babies out of their carriages.

The boys all take them out carelessly, a few being gentle, not not many. Jinny smiles when Cale bends down to get the little 'girl' baby doll and gently takes the little figure into his arms, holding it as if she were real.

Ms.Randone- excellent work, Mitch, Cale, Kevin, James. Very nice! okay now mommies, take the baby carefully from your 'husband' and pick up the bottle to feed them.

Cale hands the baby over to Jinny, who also treats it as if it were a real baby, trying to be prepared for what she knew was to come. She holds the baby and instead of her getting the bottle, Cale hands it to her and she smiles. She 'feeds' the baby as instructed and then does whatever else she is told to do. When class is finally over, most of the students just throw their babies back into the carriages. When Ms. Randone sees Jinny place the baby back into it's carriage and Cale cover it with the small blanket provided, she smiles and walks over.

Ms. Randone- Very well you 2! Extra credit, for both of you.

She smiles at them again and walks away. Cale and Jinny walk out laughing and slap each other a high 5.

Cale- ah ha! bonus points, babe!
Jinny- *laughs* I do have to admit, it was fun pretending....
Cale- won't have to pretend soon though... kinda scary huh? *he wraps his arm around her again and she smiles*
Jinny- a little. but I refuse to give it up for adoption... much less have an abortion. it's cruel to send away or kill a living thing away from it's natural mother. I know I'm only in highschool, but I think i can do this. I can take it. I wasn't planning on finishing h/s anyway *grins*
Cale- *laughs a bit, and kisses her on the cheek* It doesn't seem like the smartest thing to do... but as long as you're happy. I'll love her or him like a daughter or son, no matter what.

Jinny smiles, looks down and he brings her face up and his eyes meet hers. They share a long passionate kiss and end it just as the bell rings, look at each other lovingly and walk into class.

hope ya liked it!!! gotta go to bed now!! BYEEz <3 !


p.s. (fri,11:26) my bff kelly has just informed me of an error... i put kai when i meant Cale.... in case anybody's wondering, kai is an ex of mine.... a recent ex so uh.... yea. bye.

Great, more please:)

That was great! Post more soon. :)

post more soon!

I know I loved it. More please? :)

this is most likely gonna be a pretty long post cos, let's face it. kiwi's bored outta her mind lol. thanks to all who reply and to the girl who liked my description of jinny's outfit, i didn't even think about the era... but heh, thanks! being an '89 child, i didn't get to experience all that : / ehh, depressin myself lol anyways. here ya go!!




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They walk into class, Jinny sitting in her usual seat and Cale sitting in his. A few of the students often tried to pull the wool over the teacher's eyes, and it never worked. He usually could remember who sat where and definitely was no man to be trifled with. Many had learned that from past earth-shaking blowouts. Including Jinny. She once made him so mad that he started rambling in Spanish, which only made her laugh more, which of course, fuled him further. Other than his little spurts of anger, he really was a very nice teacher. He walked into the classroom with a smile on his face and sets his stuff down on his desk. He takes role and sets the notebook back on his desk and gets to work.

Mr. Accrcia- Today we're going to learn about different types of Spanish or as most call them, Mexican foods. Then once we have all that covered we'll move onto the names of numbers, besides the one you all learned on
Sesame Street, and then I'll write some notes you can copy from the board, capische ?

They all nod, most not having a clue at anything he said, having not listened from the time he came into the room, to the time he had finished speaking. Jinny wasn't the best student, but she did do alright in Spanish class. She took out a notebook and pen, and she heard the door open. Brad stepped in and she looked down at her notebook. Cale's eyes, however, never left Brad, glaring, seething and resenting him. He had hurt Jinny and he didn't possibly understand how anyone could like someone so.. so man-made. He barely ever did his own homework and when he did, he only passed because he was a popular jock and star quaterback for the school's football team. He watched Brad and Mr. Accrcia talk for a while and the teacher peered over his glasses at Jinny.

Mr- Accrcia- The principle needs to see you, Senorita Exstead.

Jinny follows Brad to the office, not really having any other choice. Brad, on the other hand, tried to talk to her.

Brad- You hate me, right?
Jinny- Why don't you ask me that when I'm pregnant with your child... oh wait, I already am...!

She starts to walk quicker, but he kinda stops her by catching up and also, by grabbing her arm, which she yanks free and continues walking. He follows, but doesn't grab her.

Brad- It's not my fault!
Jinny- Well, what then? I climbed on top of myself and got pregnant?
Brad- Well.. you didn't have to!

Jinny walked away, somewhat amused, shocked and stunned he could say something that stupid and kinda laughs as she speaks to him.

Jinny- That has got to be one of the DUMBEST things I've ever heard come out of your mouth!
Braid- Jinny, wait---


She walks into the office and slightly slams the door behind her.



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thats it! no more! lol, not til i get some replies anyway! i still got my homework to do! which means i gotta watch tv....... yes, it's an ACTUAL homework assignment... Mrs. Niebaur even said if we were grounded from the tv, she'd write a note saying it was an assignment!!! how kool she is hehe anywho, poooost, i'ma go lie down cos im tired and wanna watch buffy .... or maybe i'll stay online.. not sure yet. gotta write a letter to my g/f anyways. and as for the KAI/CALE thing.... well, i don't know where the hell my mind or my subconcious was...... byeeeee!!!


p.s. did anyone ever hear or even LIKE the song "Cryin" my Aerosmith? if it helps any, alicia silverstone (cher from the movie clueless) was in that vid. i love that song and i'm trying to find it downloaded somewhere on a site so i could d/l it to my comp.. i have a copy of it... but it's kinda eh.... distortedish so if ya do lemme know... or if ya just even like the song... lemme know!!! ttyl ppl

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There, 5 replies. Now you can post more right?? :D

Originally posted by CriMsoNrOsE
. thanks to all who reply and to the girl who liked my description of jinny's outfit, i didn't even think about the era... but heh, thanks! being an '89 child, i didn't get to experience all that : / ehh, depressin myself lol anyways. here ya go!!


LOL, that's funny. I just assumed that you were writing it to fit the time period when Jinny would have been in high school. Well, I was born in '84, so I unfortunately got to experience a lot of 80's style. I was one of those girls who had a big T-shirt pulled to the side with one of those clips, neon green spandex shorts, and my hair in a side ponytail! Yup, pretty bad...:lol: ;)

Anyway, enough blather....that was great! Post more soon.

:yeahthat

moooreee!!!!!!!!!!!

Anytime you see this little guy: :typing: it means I'm postin more, and lots of it {unless i say otherwise)now, i shall post more and eat my cheerios :dance:

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She walked into the office, and sat down in a red plastic chair. The secretary just glared at her. B***h, Jinny thought. Nobody really liked her, being the bitter woman that she was. Jinny kept giving her dirty looks until the principle finally came out and waves Jinny into his office. She walked in and sat in the chair across from him. He smiled at her and leaned back in his chair.

Mr. Morton- So, I hear you got extra credit in H.E. today. Is that right?
Jinny- Yeah.
Mr. Morton- *gives her a look*
Jinny- *sighs* Yes.
Mr. Morton- That's better. Jinny, tell me, how do you do in gym class?
Jinny- Eh.. alright, I guess. Why?
Mr. Morton- Ms. Aldon needs a group of girls to play at a volleyball match in a few weeks and she liked your skills. Would you be interested?
Jinny- Uh, well,---
Mr. Morton- You get bonus points and out of classes for practice
Jinny- I'm in.
Mr. Morton- *laughs* I knew that would get you. They'll usually call you down or once we get enough girls, you'll all have a regular schedule to go by. *he writes her a hall pass and hands it to her* Go back to class. Learn something.
Jinny- uh huh...

She takes the slip and walks back to class. Upon her arrival, she walks in and raises her eyebrow, to find that Mr. Accrcia is teaching glass in his socks. She gives Cale a look and Cale just shrugs. She shakes her head and goes back to her desk. By the time the teacher turns around again, she has the notes from the board and is trying to make her pencil stand on the point on her desk. He turns around and gives her a weird look.

Mr. Accrcia- Senorita Exstead?
Jinny- *not taking her eyes off the pencil* yes?
Mr. Accrcia- Is there a reason you are trying to do that with your pencil?
Jinny- *still not looking up* Is there a reason you're teaching class in your socks?

He normally would have gotten mad about this, but the teacher didn't really have any intelligent answer or comeback for her. The bell rings and the students leave class. Cale puts his stuff in his locker, then walks over to Jinny's to help her with any books she might have to carry. Jinny laughs when he appears in the locker mirror's reflection.

Cale- Hmm, now if i do say so myself that is one handsome man behind you... *he pretends to fix his hair and slick it back*
Jinny- *rolls her eyes* I think I've lost my appetite..
Cale- *grins and pokes her in one of her ticklish spots*
Jinny- eek! don't do that!
Cale- *laughs* aww, but you're so nice and warm and soft...
Jinny- nevertheless, don't poke me *laughs*
Cale- fiiiine. Shall i go find another woman to poke?
Jinny- *stare at him for a minute and puts some stuff in her locker* you know, there are so many things to say to that...
Cale- *pretends he's shocked* JINNY! why you and that dirty little mind, i swear!

She rolls her eyes and starts walking away. He catches up to her and they walk to lunch.

that's all ya getin cos umm... i gotta settle a chatroom fight so yeah byez! post or write more tonight then post tomorrow!

No dont settle the fight. It is getting fun!!!!


Oh post more!:):)

mmmmmmmmmooooooooooooorrrreeeeee!!!!!!!!!!

Post more soon! I see your liitle guy typing!

good post keep it comin

That was great! Post more soon!

hey guys! I'm home today! Not a snow day, but the power went out last night (thankfully AFTER TD!) and i was up pretty damn late/early cos i couldn't go to sleep cos we couldn't set the alarm, so ma just asked me if i wanted to stay home today and i'm like yeah. (i'm not sick, so i don't gotta lay down and get to stay home anyway. WHY WOULDN'T I STAY HOME?!) lol but yeah. well anyway, you guys are kinda fortunate in that event b/c while the power was out last night, i worked on my fan fiction by flashlight-light! : ) it's pretty long and since I'm working on this on the desktop right now, (cos i can't go online just yet, ma's waiting for a phone call) you guys get A LOT to read. here ya go!




(btw, if i make a mistake on names or descriptions, i'll fix them later when i can go online)




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After suffering through, what seemed like, long, endless hours of listening to teachers talk and boring them to death, Cale and Jinny are both relieved that the last bell for the day rings and they can go home to a long, relaxful weekend. Cale walks her home, right until they get to her doorstep. Jinny gives him a kiss and walks inside. John was at football practice and then was going out with the guys, which of course, she was grateful for. Casey didn't seem to be home either. That wasn't unusual either, so she figured he must have just gone to a friend's house to sleep over. She saw that there was a message on the answering machine and layed down on the couch after pressing the play button. John Sr's voice came over the speakers and Jinny turned up the volume to listen.

John Sr- """""Hey Jinny-girl, it's just dad. Look, I know we have some things to talk about and other things to sort out, but I'm working on an overnight case tonight. I won't be home until tomorrow, probably really early in the morning. Order pizza or go over a friend's house. Mrs. Riley said she'd love to have you over for dinner one of these times. Just no big parties, okay? One or 2 people over at the house is fine. Make sure Casey's home by noon tomorrow. Love you kids. Bye""""""

She heard the clicking of the end of the message and sighed. Just as she ot up, the phone rang and on reflex, she quickly picked it up before the 2nd ring.

Cale- Well, if I'd known you were that prompt, I would've come over instead of calling.

His comment made Jinny smile and she layed back down on the couch.

Jinny- Ah, so what's up?
Cale- Honestly? I think everyone left me for the vultures.
Jinny- *laughs*
Cale- Eh, I'm serious! Dad's out with one of his buddies, drinkin' no doub, Mom's in Colorado and Leo's out with those damn football jock friends of his. Dad left a message saying---
Jinny- "order pizza or go to a friend's house"?
Cale- *laughs* YEP!
Jinny- treating us like we're almost normal. Scary huh?
Cale- oh yeah. Hey listen, since we're both most likely bored out of our minds, you wanna come over?
Jinny- Sure. Not like anyone's gonna miss me here.
Cale- What about the furniture?
Jinny- *rolls her eyes at his dorky sense of humor/comment* I meant living things... not anything made of cheap wood and ugly cloth.
Cale- Ah, careful. you might hurt it's feelings!
Jinny- *laughs* Alright, goofball, give me a few minutes to get out of these clothes.
Cale- I'm not gonna say anything to that..... what's wrong with what ya wore in school today?
Jinny- Eh, well... the pants are tight in areas they shouldn't be tight in...
Cale- Ah, this pregnancy stuff happens fast huh?
Jinny- guess so. See ya in 15?
Cale- you got it. Cya
JInny- bye.

She hangs up, smiling to herself, not wanting and not able to believe she's actually pretty happy for once. She wasn't sure what was happening with her and Cale or even her in general, aside from the fact she was pregnant and would need to buy bigger clothes soon. But it was a new and different experience that she liked the taste of. She walked into her room and going through her closet, she found the bag of hand-me-down clothes she got from her older cousins. It took her 7 pairs of jeans later that the 8th pair fit. She put those on and selected one of her own tops; a black lace, see through top. She put on a black spaghetti strapped tank top underneath, and buttoning the shirt up, she looked in the mirror, realizing that she soon wouldn't be able to wear those kind of things for a while. A period of at last 8 or 9 months to be exact. Looking at herself in the mirror, turning sideways, she sighed, looking down at her stomach and somewhat happy, shook her head and still couldn't believe what a big mess she'd gotten herself into. No, she couldn't think like that. It took 2 to make the baby that was growing inside her and she knew the other half would have no part in her child's life. Whether he was the biological father or not, she pretty much knew who'd be there for her, even if it wasn't his kid. She smiled, thinking of Cale and pulled her long, dark hair into a ponytail on top of her head, and used a comb and hairspray to tease her bangs. It was something a little different... and she'd grown tired of having her hair constantly in her eyes. After getting it the way she wanted, she sprayed it and looked around for her black leather boots and after finding them no where in sight, she looked in another bag in her closet, which was full of shoes, mostly different kinds of boots from when she was younger. It wasn't that she'd outgrown them, but most of them were just things she didn't wear anymore. Old fads that didn't plan on coming back anytime soon. She finally found her old pair of red cowboy boots. The ones she saw in a discount bin in the local Salvation Army that used to be just in walking distance of her house. She used to constantly wear them when she was going through her whole "Footloose" phase. She put a pair of silver hoops in her ears and slipped on the boots. Grabbing her keys, she walked downstairs, made sure everything was off and rolling her jeans back down over the boots, walked out the door and locked it. She decided to walk, considering Cale's house was only a couple blocks away. When she walked through his yard, she saw some children next door playing and smiled. Stepping up on the large, wooden porch she rang the bell and waited. Cale opened the door, dressed in ripped jeans and tight t-shirt. When he opened the door, her eyes widened a bit, having never seen him wear those kind of things and he laughed when he saw her wearing the red cowboy boots and shook his head at his own clothes.

Cale- Guess we were both feeling kinda nostalgic, huh? *grins*
Jinny- *smiles* I think you look sexy.
Cale- *involuntarily blushes* Come on in.

She steps inside and walks a little bit past Cale and he closes the door, leaning against it, breathing out slowly. God, she looks beautiful, he thought. Resisting any urges he might have about her, he walks in and gently grabs her around the waist and she smiles.

Jinny- Hmm, fresh.
Cale- *smiles* you know it.

He gives her a kiss and she kisses back, completely oblivious to whatever else was going on around them.

Cale- *breaks the kiss*
Jinny- *gives him a questioning look*
Cale- hey, a guy needs oxygen *grins*
Jinny- *laughs a little*
Cale- come on, I wanna show you something...

He takes her hand and leads her upstairs, shutting off the lights in the livingroom, not wanting to have to listen to one of his dad's lectures about conserving electricity. Cale led her upstairs to his bedroom and shut the door once inside. She looked around for a minute and smiled when he got a chair and set it in front of his computer and led her to it. Sitting down, she smiled at him and he sat beside her in his own chair. He clicked something on the computer screen and smiled.

Cale- you like?
Jinny- *smiles and looks at him* they let you design this?
Cale- yeah. I mean, it's not nothing big, but i mean, see, you got all the seniors, juniors, sophmores and freshmens in one area, then school activities in another, and ---

As they are talking, their faces get closer and closer together, his speech slowly descreasing from a normal talking speed and getting slower with each look into her eyes. One look into his beautiful eyes and she looks down. He lifts her face to his and after gazing into her piercing green eyes, he and her share a passionate kiss. Much like the others, but this time, no one pulls away or breaks the kiss. His hand leaves the mouse and putting an arm around her, he kind of pulls into a sitting position on his lap. She starts to undo the buttons on her shirt and they continue their kiss. Once her shirt is open, he gently slides it off her shoulders and pushes the straps down on her tank top. She helps him get his shirt off and as they kiss, they finally realize how much love they've really had for each other.





****9 Months later****
Cale- is she alright?

He and John Sr. rush down the hall, to her room and is relieved when they see Jinny holding the baby in her arms and Jacki sitting in a chair, by Jinny's bed. She smiled when she sees John Sr. and Cale and taps Jinny on the shoulder. Jinny smiles at both of them and waves them in. Cale walks in and gives Jinny a kiss on top of her head and John Sr. smiles and pulls up a chair.

Cale- Awh, Jin, she's beautiful. She looks just like you.
Jinny- *smiles, stroking the little tuff of dark, black hair on the baby's head* would you like to hold your granddaughter? *smiles to her dad*
John Sr.- *smiles and takes the baby* Hi there little girl, hi there. *he smiles and touches the baby's hand softly* she's gorgeous, Jin. *he hands the baby to Cale*
Cale- *takes her* she's so tiny.. aren't you? yeah heh. *he smiles and hands the baby back to Jinny*
Jacki- have you picked out a name for her?
Jinny- well, i was thinking you guys could help me with that...............................................................






and this is where the readers come in! send in any baby girl names you want and whatever one i like the best, i'll post and you'll get a little somethin for it, kay? you can e-mail or post the names or even if ya want, my IM name on AOL is LeatherNLace1989. IM me if ya don't wanna post or e-mail me, kay? get those names in and you might see one of them up there!

Originally posted by Snowfall
That was great! Post more soon!


Caitlin:D

Originally posted by CriMsoNrOsE
and this is where the readers come in! send in any baby girl names you want and whatever one i like the best, i'll post and you'll get a little somethin for it, kay? you can e-mail or post the names or even if ya want, my IM name on AOL is LeatherNLace1989. IM me if ya don't wanna post or e-mail me, kay? get those names in and you might see one of them up there!

Well..I like Joanna Marie, Jonelle, my FAV name is Sophie, and of course there is Kelly :)hehe

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Tracey

Well....I'm using most of my favorite girl names in my fics, so I don't know.... This is great, though! :)

Madison, Riley, Hannah, Hailey, Paige, Emily, Alyssa, Abigail, Jayden, Jordan

That's the ones I like I'm not sure what u looking for.

i must say ur fic is good so far.

names... Kendall Leah *Hillary* Stacey Maura Leslie Haylie

this is my decision...


i love all of the names you all have picked out! but sadly, since i love them all, i can only choose one/2 (one middle name, one first name) and i can't choose! so what i'm gunna do is this. think of the most unusual names you can and post them/IM me/e-mail me them. that way, i can better decide. thanks guys!!

as soon as i find one i absolutely can't live without (like the many you've all posted) i'll post IMMEDIATELY!

how bout Roya???? i know a girl name Roya :D

Scooter Lorenzi Gemini <--- my fav

YAY NEW PAGE
party: party: party: party: party: party: party:

I've come to a decision (finally!) and the winner is.... DUM ROLL PLEASE....




THE GIRL WHO PICKED OUT THE NAME PAIGE!!!!!

The baby's name will be Roxannah (Roxy) Paige Exstead!


Respond to this (cos no one has lately) and you'll be getting your little surprise soon!

I just need your e-mail address and I can send through there or a jpg image


THANKS!!!

Hey I really like that name even though i didn't pick it out. my e-mail is bananasplit4471@yahoo.com

I think you know mine by now but if u don't, it's MissJinnyExstead@aol.com

hey back off i sent my address already

just kidding but she has my info already

LOL, well people, it's all well and good to send me that info... but I just meant the girl who picked out the name Paige.... lol sorry! But, I'm sure when I send it to her, she'll be glad to send it to all of you! Since I'm bored and talking to my chica : D I guess I'll post more til ma wakes up and b!tch3s me out, lol.







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John Sr- How about that one song? The girl in it had a really pretty name... ohhh... what was it?
Cale- Roxanne?
John Sr- Oh yeah! "Roxanne, you don't have to put on the red light..." Maybe you could change it a little, though.
Jinny- *laughs* It's cute. Any ideas for a middle name?
Cale- I've always liked the name Paige...?
Jinny- *smiles and looks down at the baby* Roxannah Paige Exstead.. welcome to the world, sweetie.


****A Few Days Later****
Jinny's able to return home with the baby from the hospital. She might have been out sooner, if the labor hadn't been so long and painful. Her dad smiles when he sees the little bundle in Jinny's arms and calls John Jr and Casey from the other room. Cale gets out of the cab, holding a small denim baby bag and they both walk up to the house. John Sr holds the door open and they walk in. He shuts the door, mostly to keep in the air conditioning that came with the house. He turns it down, for fear that the baby might get cold. Jinny sits on the couch, Casey sits beside her and both the older Exstead men sit on the other 2 chairs. Cale sits on the other side of Jinny, thinking Casey might want to hold the baby and didn't want to be in his way. Jinny carefully takes off Roxannah's coat, and the baby's little tufy of dark hair comes into view. Cale laughs a little as he smooths down the tiny, wild locks and Roxannah smiled at him, cooeing as she did so.

Casey- can I hold her, Jinny?
Jinny- sure. Be careful though.

She carefully hands the baby to Casey, and Cale shows him how to hold it. He smiles and the baby and she makes happy noises, then yawns.

Cale- I think it's time for a nap.
Casey- Aww, already?
Jinny- *laughs* Yes, already. Babie's, especially newborns, need more sleep... than I, for instance.

It was obvious she looked kind of tired, having taken care of the baby in the hospital so much. Cale helps Casey hand the baby back to Jinny and Jinny goes upstairs to her room. Cale looks at John Sr and he nods, saying it was all right with him if he was up there with her and the baby. Not having bought a crib yet, she lays down, holding the baby, but being careful not to crush or smother her and Cale lays on the other side, so Roxannah's in the middle. He kisses the baby and Jinny, on the forehead and while Cale is awake, the baby yawns and Jinny is already fast asleep. Cale hums a lullaby to the drowsy infant and soon she falls asleep. About a half hour later, the room is quiet, and the only things visible are the 3 sleeping figures on the bed.






Well, how about it! Ya like that? Hope so! For those of you who've ever watched the movie Girl, Interrupted, it's quite interesting! LOL, I'm playing Lisa in a role play right now and Sara (chica) is Jinny... quite interesting! Okay, I'ma go now, hope ya like and if anyone wants to see that role play as a fan fiction, let me know... I may have to edit it somehow!!!


ByeZ!

P.S. That Roxanne thing was from yesterday... me and Grams heard that song in the car. OKay, bye!

mmmmmoooooooorrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!

That's great! More please

Awww that was sooo sweet. Post more soon..as in NOW!!!:);)

Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
Awww that was sooo sweet. Post more soon..as in NOW!!!:);)

Exactly! I see ur little guy typin!

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Hey guys! Well, this is it for Jinny In H/S. I'll be doing a fan fiction with Kelly (Jinny Girl88) so I figured I'd wrap this one up. Hope you enjoy the conlusion!




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We go to a few months later. Roxannah, now Roxy, is up, walking, talking and everything. She recognizes Cale as "Dadda" but doesn't know her real father. The littlest Exstead plays in her crib while her mom pulls her hair up and puts on a pair of small diamond earrings. After hearing her cooeing baby, she walks out to see Cale making breakfast and Roxy wanting to be picked up. Smiling at the baby, she walks over.

Roxy- Mum! Mum mum!
Jinny- What you want, baby? Hmm?
Roxy- *holds her little arms up* Up! Mumma! Ahlalalala Mum mum mum
Jinny- *laughs and picks up the baby, imitating her words* Mum mum mum mum, heh. You little cutie.

She gives the baby a kiss and walks over to Cale, who puts Roxy in her highchair. Jinny and him share a passionate kiss and they both smile at the baby, who had Jinny's crystal wedding ring in her little hand, smiling back.

That was really cute! Sorry to see it end!

That was great!!! Im sorry to see it end:(:(

Great ending, :( that you're leaving tho.

Hello. Kie can't get on any sites so she wanted me to tell you that Nancy named her baby Aurora and she said just the other day she said she liked that name lol and it was said Nancy McKeon had her baby on Thursday and she ended this fic on Thursday..lol We thought that was kind of neat that it happened like that. Bye!:)

to the girl i promised the prize thingy of teddy n jinny, it's done n uploaded.... i lost your e-mail so i was screwed... then i remembered this thing.sorry it took so damn long!!! but its done and uploaded now!!!! : D

Originally posted by CriMsoNrOsE
to the girl i promised the prize thingy of teddy n jinny, it's done n uploaded.... i lost your e-mail so i was screwed... then i remembered this thing.sorry it took so damn long!!! but its done and uploaded now!!!! : D

what was the prize?

little graphic of teddy n jinny together in a lil heart


it was her choice

i made them outta dolls n my appleworks 6 program

Originally posted by CriMsoNrOsE
little graphic of teddy n jinny together in a lil heart


it was her choice

i made them outta dolls n my appleworks 6 program

aawww...