I'm desperately craving CD/Nate fanfic :) So I figured I'll post a challenge... (open to any pairings though, but if ya wanna make me happy write CD/Nate ;) at least as one of they pairings hehe...

Anyhow here it goes: Write a fanfic that contains the following words & phrases somehow.


*rainbow
*69
*Ghirardelli Square
*cinnamon
*bubble gum
*watercolors
*racoon
*ocean
*puppy
*booze

*You wear them so well, those innocent eyes, you're putting on a wonderful disguise.
*wherever you go, whatever you do, I will be right here waiting for you
*when we were strangers I watched you from afar, when we were lovers I loved you with all my heart


PS: btw did ya know there's actually a Division Street in San Fran? no joke! And here's a nice San Fran link: http://www.mapwest.com/

:) Now write some nice stories everybody!

OMG OMG! LOL Where I work at Walgreens, they sell Ghirardelli Chocolates, and I NEVER KNEW it was a place in San Francisco. What a do-do head I am! I am going to HAVE to try that next time I'm at work! What a coincidence, that's tonight! lol I'll let everyone know what happens! If it's good or not! lol TTYL! Yippie!! To me the chocolate didn't look that great from the package but who cares, I'm gonna try it. lol I'm also going to give your fan fic a shot. Just gimmie a little while to get it together.

STILL working on that fan fic it's coming along though. But here's something to think about in the meantime.

Isn't this wierd!

At the Walgreens I work at in Fall River, Massachusetts, we sell Girardelli's candy bars, (Girardelli's is a place in San Francisco...it's like a food court) Then we have Seattle's Best coffee which was featured in the Journey episode Raina and Kate had some in her office. And THEN we have a coffee place in a mall in a neighboring town called Dartmouth that has a coffee place called Nancy's Cafe'! lol How awesome is that! I'm going out today to buy a pound of the Seattle's Best coffee. I'll write back and let you know how it tastes. It BETTER taste good for 8 bucks a bag! lol I'm surrounded by the Division! YIPPIE! lol

yay that rocks! :) and that coffee better inspire you on your story too! And I hope maybe somebody else will write other challenge stories!

lol hahaha I think it will inspire me! lol I have half of it written, but using those words are harder then I thought it would be. lol But I'll make it work, you'll see.

I'm posting my story tommoroww. But for now, here's pictures of what I was talking about. Both the chocolate and coffee are excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The coffee is definetly worth the 8 dollars!!!!!!!!!!!

Sorry the last pic was so big!!! Didn't know it was going to do that!!

the pics are both huge, but that's cool :) I'm glad they're good and I can't wait to read the story!!!!!!!

I KNOW! I'M SORRY! lol I didn't plan on it being that big. I actually thought it was going to be really small. My bad! lol I'm finishing the fan fic now. Another half hour of writing and I should be ready to type it up. lol So keep checking the board! :-D

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
I KNOW! I'M SORRY! lol I didn't plan on it being that big. I actually thought it was going to be really small. My bad! lol I'm finishing the fan fic now. Another half hour of writing and I should be ready to type it up. lol So keep checking the board! :-D

np, like this we can see all tiny details at least ;) And you better hurry up! I'm dying in suspense!!!!! :)

ehhhhh...

hahahahahahaha I got a late start I'm typing now!!! :) :) :)

This picks up as any other episode would. Not directly after the finale or anything. But after Cd and Nate had confessed there feelings to each other. Anyway this is going to stink! Sorry but I had to try! :) lol

Part 1:

It's a Saturday morning, and CD wakes up to an alarm going off on the side of her unfamiliar bed. She sees that the clock only reads 5AM, so she hits the snooze button and rolls over. A half hour later the alarm goes off again. And once more she hits the snooze button. At 7 AM shes awoke the last time to her cell phone ringing. DAMN IT! She says as she gets up to answer the phone. HELLO! She yells into the phone, not even thinking to answer with Inspector DeLorenzo, had it been someone from work. There's a short awkward silence. ...Hello? Comes an unassured male voice.
CD: Oh my god. Nate I'm sorry I didn't mean to yell at you. It's just this DAMN alarm keeps going off. I must have accidently set it for 5 AM thinking it was a workday.
Nate: Are you SURE that's why you set it for 5AM?
CD: Yeah I guess. CD says rubbing her eyes. I mean, I don't know what else it could b..." she cuts herself off. Oh I didn't. Nate I totally forgot! What an IDIOT I am. I'm so sorry!
Nate: AH, you remember now huh?
CD: Yes I remember.
Nate: How could you forget to wake up for this?
CD: Well, as you know I'm not that big of a morning person. Even when I have to get ready for work and all. You know I'm always late. But this. How could I forget that we planned to go see the sunrise together on the beach! I have ALWAYS wanted to do that. Just to lay in the arms of the ONE that I knew I would spend the rest of my life with. It's something that I swore I would NEVER do with ANY GUY except my soulmate. It must be amazing to be there with the one you love on the warm sand, feeling the ocean breeze on your face and watching the sunrise. And...
Nate: CD, relax. he says w/ a chuckle. It's ok. You were tierd. And besides this is the month of June. Do you have any idea how many other mornings we have of good weather left? Especially living in California!! Of course, if you were here with me spending the night, I could have woken you up...my way. Nate says slyly.
Cd: Ummm...and as good as THAT sounds, I would have felt bad. I mean afterall, my cousin was good enugh to offer me her extra room for a few days while my apartment was being fumagated. I just couldn't say no. Especially after all the arguments we've been having lately. I just want to make peace. And this was my chance so...
Nate; Oh, ok I see how it is. You don't love me.... (You can tell he's joking by the sound in his voice.)
CD: No, it's not like that at all, and you know it.
Nate: Ok. So how is it then??
CD: Well, why don't you let me off the phone, so I can shower and get dressed, and I'll come over and show you EXACTLY how it is.
Nate: Ummmmm let me think about that for a second....
CD: NATE!
Nate: Ok ok! He laughs.
CD: Ok I'll be there in an hour. See ya soon.
Nate: Ok Cya. Love ya babe.
CD: Good.
Nate: CD!
CD: What?.... OK, I love you too, alright?
Nate: Ok. See ya shortly. Bye.
CD: Bye.

It's pretty damn good so far!....:D :) :D :) :D

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
Anyway this is going to stink!

Stink?!?!?! No way!!! This is really good :D

Please post more soooooooon :) :) :)

Hadar

haha you both don't have to lie for my sake! lol lol j/k Ok I'll psot more and use the rest of the words I'll complete your challenge! :p I'm determined. You'll like PART 2 the best!

ooooooh yeah!!!!!! :) Please keep going! It rocks! I can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!! :)

I can't wait for some more of this!!

Before I start part two of this fan fic., I just want to say a couple of things first. One, is that I haven't been able to type anything for a few days because I worked a double at my job, then had a night off but I worked for a friend of mine. Then when to work the next night, and I just finished catching up on my sleep! lol So now I can write. The more I work though, the faster I'll have money saved up for my car. I owe, I owe so off to work I go! lol Also, you might not notice the words that are in the challenge right away. I used em, but scarcely. Because I figure if I use all the words right away it will sound stupid. So I'll use them sparingly, but I'll use them all. Alrighty, here it is!!!

*At Nate's Apartment*
(There's a knock on the door. Camera shows Nate from the inside answering it. Then you see CD on the outside.)
Nate: Well, for a second there I thought you forgot about me.
CD: What makes you say that?
Nate:Well you said you'd be here in an hour, an hour and a half ago.
CD: I see, well next time I'll just shower and come over here and forget about putting on perfume or gelling up my hair, and all that stuff ok? I'm so sorry I took my time trying to look good for you, It'll NEVER happen again. (She says pretending as though she has done something really wrong.)
Nate: Ok ok I get your point.
CD: Good that's what I thought. she says with a smirk walking into his apartment. Nate gives a crooked grin, and shuts the door behind her. After he does he asks CD:
Nate:So did you miss me? But before he could get his question out, CD had already spun him around 180 degrees and pushed him against the wall and proceeded to answer his question physically. Once the shock of what had just happened had left Nate's head, he let himself be taken in CD's hands and for the first time in his life he realized he didn't have to be the one to initiate the kiss. Then once CD was thru having her way with him, she gently pushed him away from her and proceeded to walk away.
Nate; WOW! he says while wiping the corner of his mouth.
CD gives him a grin over her left shoulder, then walks to his coffee pot.
Nate: Ok one quick question. He says putting one finger up, still standing in the position CD had left him in.
CD: And what's that CD asks while pouring water into the coffee pot.
Nate approaches CD.
Nate: Well, whoever told you I prefered a take charge type of woman?
CD: Oh I don't know but I figured since you didn't mind at the hospital, what the hell I'd try and make it two for two.
Nate: True, but...
CD: Yes you do have a cute butt.
Nate gives her a side look.
Nate: Well, good point you got me.
CD: I know, and I couldn't be happier.
Nate: Cute. he says walking behind CD putting his hands on her waist.
CD: Yeah you are. She says swaying side to side comfortable in his arms.
Nate rests his head on CD's left shoulder as he watches CD finish w/ the coffee.
Nate: You know, I've never been this happy with a woman my whole life. You accept me for me. In the past, I've had to pretend I was something I'm not just to keep them. And now I know it wasn't worth it. They weren't worth it.
CD: They? You're talking like you've dated 100 girls. she pauses. How many HAVE you dated?
Nate laughs.
Nate not as many as you'd think. Really. And none even came close to what you mean to me. We've both been to hell and back in our lives, and I'm just glad I finally ended up happy in the end, and I didn't think it possible.
You can see CD's eyes well up w/ tears. Oh Nate! she says turning around to kiss him putting the glass coffee pot on the counter. The camera shows the on/off button in the on position. CD has her back to the counter and after a rather long kiss, CD breaks it off.
CD: Ahh. she says w/ a girly girl tone in her voice.
Nate: What's the matter.
CD: I'm wet!
Nate: Really?! He asks surprised. I didn't know I was that good! All I did was kiss ya.
CD: Nate! she says smacking his arm. I didn't mean that. She turns around to face the counter. DAMN IT! I forgot to put the coffee pot back under the machine. I got coffee all over me. And it's all your fault!
Nate laughs.
My fault?! Who kissed who first!? As usual.
CD: Well?
Nate: Ok look. Why don't you shower and I'll clean this up and be back shortly.
CD: Be back? Where are you going?
Nate: Nowhere. It's not important.
CD: Then why don't you join me in the shower. We can play who dropped the soap!
Nate: Well as good as that sounds, I got something to do.
CD: What's more fun then playing who dropped the soap? she asks surprised.
Nate: Alright, nosey! If you must know, I'm going to get you a present.
CD: Oh a present what is it?
Nate: I'm not gonna tell you, that would kill the surprise! Go take your shower, and by the time you come out, I should be back.
CD sighs.
CD: Ok, but try and make it quick.
Nate laughs.
Nate: OK I will.

*Scene cuts to CD walking out of Nate's bathroom with a long towel wrapped around her. She goes over to a picture of her and Nate sitting on a park bench together. She smiles thinking back remembering how Nate had asked an elderly woman to take a picture of them together. The couple gladly did and the wife told them "I can feel the love that you two share. It's amazing. I sense that you'll both be together forever. I wish you both the same amount of hapiness that me and my Robert share."
Then CD is knocked back into reality when she here's a doorbell. She looks through to see Nate. She gets a funny look on her face, and opens the door enough to let him in, but not enough to let the whole rest of the world see her in a towel.
CD: Why didn't you just come in?
But before he can answer she notices the big box in his hands and the little box on top of it.
Nste: Why don't you go put something on, and I'll be waiting here on the couch. But try and hurry. I can't leave this present in the box too long.
CD: Uh ok. she says with a wierd look and goes off to get dressed.
When she comes out she's wearing Nate's old tee-shirt as a nightgown, with her hair still funky looking and wet. She then heads over to the couch, where she sees Nate sitting holding a puppy.
CD: Nate?! Where did you get him from?
Nate: Uh where most people get animals from, the pet shop. He laughs.
CD: OH Nate, he's adorable! She takes the puppy off his lap.
(It's a brown German Shepard.)
CD: Come here puppy!
Nate: Come here puppy? he laughs mocking CD.
Nate: He needs a name.
CD: Ok well, what do you suggest?
Nate: He's yours, so you name him.
CD: Ok, how about Cinnamon?
Nate: Cinnamon? Where did you get a name like that?
CD: Well I wanted an original name, and he's brown like cinnamon, so there you go.
Nate: Why didn't you call him Brownie then?
CD: Well for one, it's a boy and Browie sounds like a girls name to me, and besides that's not original, cinnamon is. She says with confidence.
Nate: Ok, cinnamon it is. I bought this little guy for ya, because I figured one, he can keep you company when I'm not around. And two, when you see him you'll think of me and three when he gets bigger he can protect ya. And four a dog is a man's best friend. And this way, you'll now have to men in your life, he jokes.
CD: Oh that's so sweet! I love you! So, what's in the other box?
Nate: OH sorry. Kinda got caught up with the dog. Um, it's chocolate fromGhirardelli's square. It's a little food spot that sells all kinds of specialty foods. Including this kind of chocolate. And let me tell ya, it's the best going. So rich, and creamy and delicious.
CD: And fattening. She cuts off Nate.
Nate: Please you are FAR from fat and I don't think one box of chocolates will make you gain like 50 pounds.
CD: Well not right away maybe but eventually.
Nate: Oh don't worry about it and enjoy your chocolate and your cinnamon. he laughs.
CD: OH thanks Nate you're the best!
They hug cuddle on the couch with cinnamon and watch tv.

One more part to come, to finish using all the words!

this fic ROX!!! it makes me feel all warm and cuddly inside!!!:D lol

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
this fic ROX!!! it makes me feel all warm and cuddly inside!!!:D lol

awww yeah! Me too! :) I can't wait for more!

WHAT?! lol That's all you can to say about my fan fic! It's the bomb, ya'll! LOL ROTF I need to get a swelled head!!!! lol I'm just kidding you guys.
Well, I need to get some sleep I just got out of work, and then I'll come on and type up more. Talk to you all later. Glad you like it. And that was the feeling I was going for. The warm cuddly kind. hehe ttyl!

*After a little while of watching t.v. together CD, Nate, and Cinnamon all fall asleep on the couch. Four hours later, CD wakes up rubbing her neck from sleeping the wrong way. She sees Cinnamon on the floor chasing his tail, and Nate still asleep with his arm where CD's head was. She smiles at him while he sleeps, and puts his arm in his lap figuring it was numb from being there so long, and gets up to use the phone careful not to wake him.*

CD: (whispering) Hi Julie. I'm just calling to let you know I'm at Nate's house right now, so if I get any calls there can you please take a message or call me here if it has to do with work and let me know? It seems like I'm always getting called in on the weekend when I'm suppose to be off! She says not realizing she raised her voice a little. Nate starts to moves around.
Then you hear CD say "OK thanks Julie I'll talk to you later." She hangs up. Then she goes back over to Nate and sits in the position she was previously in, but left Nate's arm in his lap. Then she turns the channel from a painting infomercial to Lifetime. (hehe Couldn't resist that one LOL) Nate starts to stir around and opens his eyes.*
CD: Oh I didn't mean to wake you! She says upset.
Nate: No, don't worry about it! It's ok. I mean after all, I woke you up today.
CD: Yeah but that's not your fault, silly. I was suppose to have already been up.
Nate: Yeah but still I feel bad. He says getting up and looking out the window.
CD: What are you doing? she asks turning her head to Nate.
Nate: Wow I was right! Nate said.
CD: Right about what?
Nate: Well, you know what it feels like when you're right in between being asleep and being awake?
CD: Yeah.
Nate: Well, you had fallen asleep before me and I was in that state. And I thought I heard rain but wasn't sure. I was hoping I did, because I knew with the weather we've been having lately, we would get a big beautiful rainbow for sure, and I was right!
CD: Really? CD says, getting off the couch picking up Cinnamon and walking over to Nate. She pulls the curtain aside.
CD: Oh wow. You're right that is georgous. I've only seen faint rainbows, but I've never seen anything more beautiful. Have you Nate?
Nate; Have I what? he asks a little lost, not realizing (being a guy) that when a woman talks you're suppose to listen.
CD: Have you seen anything more beautiful that that?
Nate: Yes, I have. he says looking into her eyes.
Nate: You.
They kiss, up until Cinnamon barks totally startling them.
Nate: Relax boy, I'm not hurting her.
CD: Of course you're not.
Nate: Oh dammit!
CD: What?
Nate: It's that freakin racoon again that keeps going through are trash.
Nate walks over to the outside door and opens it.
Nate: SCOOT! He yells, and the racoon runs over giving him a wierd look but not acting very frightened by him.
CD: Nate! She yells. Now what would you have done if that would have been a skunk.
Nate: I would have left him alone.
CD: I thought so. She says with a chuckle.
Nate goes over to the fridge and grabs a Heinekein and asks CD if she wants one.
CD: Yuck, no thanks. I'm not that heavy of a drinker don't you know me by now? Booze Aren't really my thing.
Nate: I know, but don't you get a craving for a nice cold one every so often?
CD: Uhhh sometimes but not like you do.
Nate: Suit yourself. he says.
CD looks at her watch and goes to put the watercolor paint set, and bubble gum machine she bought for Ben's 7th Birthday Party in a gift bag, and then both her and Nate go sit on the couch once again.
Nate: Oh, ok do we HAVE TO watch Lifetime? he asks with his arm crossed in front of her on her stomach.
CD: You always complain when I want to watch something other then sports. She says taking his arm off her.
Nate: That's right. Lifetime is a chick flick channel. BORING! he says putting his arm back.
CD: Tough. she says taking it off again.
Nate: Ok wow! he says with a laugh. CD is still sitting there watching a commercial for Strong Medicine not having once made eye contact with Nate.
Nate: Ok I'll LET you win THAT argument. But can I at least get another kiss?
CD: Sure.
Nate leans in with puckered lips. CD puts her hand over his mouth.
CD: After you brush your teeth. She says, still with eyes glued to the TV. There is nothing more disgusting then kissing a guy with beer breath.
Nate leans back disapointed.
CD: Well, you going to or what? she asks totally expecting him to go brush his teeth because she wanted the kiss so bad.
Nate; No, he says I think I'd rather watch Lifetime.
CD realizes she won the battle but lost the war!!!!!!!!! LOL

Scene fades, the end!!!!

Really great again! But didn't ya forget some things there? LOL you better post another part, and that soon! ;)

gerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr I'm tellin ya CD you're gonna be the death of me! lol OK, OK, OK! Although that was SUPPOSE to be the end, I'll fine a way to add to it! Omit this part: Scene fades, the end!!!! ANd I'll add another part. Jeepers!!!!!!!

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
gerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr I'm tellin ya CD you're gonna be the death of me! lol OK, OK, OK! Although that was SUPPOSE to be the end, I'll fine a way to add to it! Omit this part: Scene fades, the end!!!! ANd I'll add another part. Jeepers!!!!!!!


muahahhahaha!!!! :lol:

that was really great!! I'm glad cat convinced you for more!!! :D

YEA WELL......... she wouldn't have got me to write more if I DIDN'T SCREW UP THE FIRST TIME!!!!! lol hehehe I got some stuff to do today, like pick up my check, and copy somethings for her....she's lucky I'm this nice! lol And then I'll try and post some today before work. It's all her fault, IF I don't find time to post today. Cuz I'm copying this stuff for her! lol j/k HEHE Seriously, she's doing alot for me as it is. I'm just kidding. Besides I have to post on three other fan fics eventually too. lol Just wish there was enough time in a day! :)

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
YEA WELL......... she wouldn't have got me to write more if I DIDN'T SCREW UP THE FIRST TIME!!!!! lol hehehe I got some stuff to do today, like pick up my check, and copy somethings for her....she's lucky I'm this nice! lol And then I'll try and post some today before work. It's all her fault, IF I don't find time to post today. Cuz I'm copying this stuff for her! lol j/k HEHE Seriously, she's doing alot for me as it is. I'm just kidding. Besides I have to post on three other fan fics eventually too. lol Just wish there was enough time in a day! :)

LMAO, you're lucky that I'm so nice and copied something for you. And Was at the post office today and spent a fortune on two packages that I had to send out... lol j/k But I did send em away :) and my parents drive me insane! Sorry that I wasn't online yesterday.

lol lol OK I forgive you. lol And I DEMAND to know how much the package was, so I can send ya the money, and IF you DON'T tell me, then I won't send you your package. SO HA! :-D

dont worry about not being online, I wasn't either. Your parents may drive you insane, but my uncle is an ass!!! I thought he was on the comp. all night like usual, but after 2AM he got off. Had I known that I would have stayed awake and waited, instead of falling asleep. He could of at least told me he planned on getting off at 2AM, but nooooo. And now I have to work tonight, and don't have another night off till Sunday night. LIFE SUCKS! lol I'm just glad I'm getting what you sent me, that makes me sooooooooo happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Here's the end...the real end. I think this ending will even sound better then the first.

CD and Nate continue sitting on the couch watching tv. Nate is sitting on the middle cushion, while CD is on the far right one resting her head in her right hand. She knew she hated it emmensily when Nate drank. Not because he got out of hand, not because of that at all. But because the smell nausiated her, and kissing that smell made her sick even more. But as much as she hated the smell, is just as much as she hated not putting her hands on Nate. So she decided to play a little game with him. Just then Nate reaches down to pick up his beer bottle off the floor and drinks the last sip in one big gulp as if it were going out of style. CD saw this as her chance. While he was drinking his last sip, CD changed her position from slouching to sitting up and with her left hand she strokes his right inner thigh working her way...up. Then she tried to avoid being sprayed while Nate choked on his beer and put the bottle down one final time.

Nate: Wait, I thought.....
CD: Thought what? she asks meanwhile stroking his thigh in long strokes.
Nate struggles to get the words out, shocked by CD's actions.
Nate: Well, the whole beer breath thing. I thought you didn't want to....
CD: You thought I didn't want to what? Do this?
She turned left and straddled Nate's lap, wrapping her arms around his neck. She could feel her stomach turning from the smell, but this was all a part of her master plan. When she drank the smell didn't bother her. But for some reason the smell on someone else was different.
Simultaneously, Nate has a bewildered look on his face confused by what CD is saying/doing. But right as he's about to shrug it off as "women never knowing what they really want" and he starts to touch her stomach, CD pushes his hands away. She holds his hands behind his head with one hand and with the other, she slowly runs it up under his shirt. She makes two circles around two spots on his chest with her first finger, and then her hand slides down to his belt. She can feel Nate's torso move upwards toward her and as she lets his hands go, he proceeds to put his arms around her waist, right as she unstraddles him, sits back on the couch, and turns the channel from one Lifetime station to another.
Nate just sits there in a cold sweat, not knowing what to make of the situation. Meanwhile, CD has this you are such a sucker look on her face.
Nate: (Uhhhhhhh he manages to say, while at a loss for words) Mind if I ask what that was all about?
CD: What what was all about? She says with a look that would say to anyone she had no idea what they were talking about, if not for what had just occured.
Nate: CD!
CD: Yes? she says w/ a half smirk.
Nate: CD, you have no idea what that does to a guy when you get him...up...like that, and then leave him...hanging!
CD: Really? Well, you don't know what it does to a girl when she's ready to just pounce on the man of her dreams and say TAKE ME, and is met face to face with...that smell.
Nate: Ok, ok, ok! I get your point, he says with a tone to end the conversation, and he faces the tv w/ a depressed look on his face.
CD, feeling guilty knowing how much he wanted her right then and there, turns to face him.
CD: Well you know what you have to do, if you want to pick up where we left off, don't you?
Nate rolls his eyes, gets up throwing his beer bottle in the garbage on the way to the bathroom, which you have to go through the bedroom to get to. Just then a light bulb went off in CD's head. She quickly ran to the bedroom, and stripped off all her clothes, except for her black bra and bikini underwear and hid the now shed articles under his bed, while she quickly layed on top awaiting his exit from the bathroom. After waiting about two minutes (which seemed like two hours to CD) Nate finally emerged from the bathroom. As he approached the living room once again eager to get to CD, he stopped about 6 feet from the bathroom when he didn't see her on the couch, and remembered the glimpse he caught out of the corner of his eye, of her laying on his bed. Meanwhile CD was chuckling softly behind him. Nate turned around as fast as he could. When he saw her laying there on top of HIS bed he felt like a teenage boy who had just snuck a teenage girl into his room, and now he felt like the big man on campus.
Aside from his intial reaction which he couldn't help but be shock and pleasure, Nate has a fake reaction imediatley afterwards that CD doesn't expect, just to get her back for what she did to him.
Nate: What are you doing CD? he asks like seeing a half naked woman on his bed is an everyday occurence, which of course, it isn't. LOL
CD: What do you mean? she asks as her ear to ear grin turns from excitment to confusion.
Nate: Well, how can you go from kissing me to lying half naked on my bed? I mean really. Then women wonder why we don't understand women.
CD has a look of sadness, diapointment, and anger all in one. Nate notices this, and feels bad. But he knows he'll make it up to her later.
CD: Well wait and see if I ever attempt this again! She starts to get up.
Nate: waves his hand at CD.
Nate: Oh please. Drama queen.
CD's jaw drops.
CD: Oh this does it! She gets up and grabs a housecoat she had hanging up at his apartment from a night or two ago, and throws it on. She goes to sit on the couch, in a fit of rage and sadness.
Nate has a crooked grin on his face, knowing what will come. He stays in the bedroom while CD pouts on the couch. Then after a few minutes for CD to have alone time with herself, Nate then goes up to her and picks her up as if she was as light as a feather and brings her to the bedroom and places her on the bed, and stands above her.
CD: Mr. Basso, what on earth are you doing? she asks as her almost tearfull face turns from confussion and uncertainty to being thrilled by Nate's spontinaity.
Nate: Me? What am I doing? Oh I don't know, just screwing with you like you were screwing with me. He says as he approches her from the foot of the bed, and slowly and carefully, lays on top of her.
CD: Oh really! She says, her face back to normal now. Clearly we have different definitions on what screwing is. What I was doing to you, Mr. Basso, was teasing you. And what we're about to do I HOPE is the definition of screwing. Otherwise, I've been mislead my whole life.
Nate has a grin from ear to ear, and CD does as well, as Nate proceeds to rid her of her housecoat.
Nate: Actually, my reaction before wasn't totally fake ya know? I was actually upset about something.
CD: Really and what was that?
Nate: Well, the fact that you were already done to the bare essentials and I had no part in helping you with that.
CD: Awwww well I'm sorry Nate but I figured we could just skip the excess stuff and get right to it.
Nate: Oh, FINALLY she speaks my language! he says relieved.
CD: Oh but don't worry once we are done here, we'll do it all over again...your way.
Nate: Works for me.
That ends there conversation, as they can't hold back from each other any longer.

That was really really REALLY good!!!!!!! Now you can write another CD/Nate fic!!!! ;) :D

hehe, ya know I love this! :) So post more!!!!!! :)

ok I'll think about writing another one...but I have to finish this one first. hehehe Don't forget, I still have to use Cat's quotes yet. I know, it's taking me so long, that you forget. But I have to figure out just the right places to put em. hehe So we're almost done with this one. Here's the post before the last one.

CD takes the lead this time as she always enjoyed it better that way. She knew Nate wouldn't mind, because the next time it would be his turn. CD turns so now Nate is on the bottom and she is kneeling above him as she sheds the housecoat she had just put on, not more then 4 minutes ago. It hits the floor quickly, causing a breeze that sends all her and Nate's paper work flying onto the floor that was neatly placed on the desk. They both notice but couldn't care less. (That part will come into play later) She lets Nate take control of one thing before she plays the boss for the rest of the love making. She guides his hides up along her bra strap and while his hand is on her strap, it's her hand that is moving his. So as this is taking place, Nate can't help but feel helpless in her presence. A feeling he's not used to. When in the past he used to have to be in control in relationships. So now he was just laying back enjoying this change of pace. Once that bra strap is hanging by her shoulder, she slides her other strap down on her own with no help from Nate. Then she lays her full body on his as he reaches around her back with two hands and undoes the three clasps that cause her bra to just lie on top of him while she's on top of that. And with one upward move, she stands up above Nate on the bed and the rest of the bra that is still on her shoulders slides off. She is now topless standing above him. Nate's eye's move to her waist, and with that look he asks for permission for the pleasure of taking care of the last, and most important part of the undressing. With a nod, CD grants his request to let him fulfill his fantasy. But to help him with the efficency of the whole thing she kneels above him so that he doesn't have to stretch as much. Now that CD is rid of all the material, all that is left is Nate. And he decides to do a little strip tease for his dream girl, which he never thought he'd be lucky enough to have but now he does and it's a total outer body experience! Reality sinks in, that he his in front of the very woman who he knows will bear his children, and he loves her so much. Sure they've only been dating a short time but that didn't matter to him, and he knew it didn't matter to her either. He proceeds to do the strip tease for her while all these thoughts are running through his head. His main concern being he wants to make sure she's totally satisfied in every way, and he couldn't really care less if he never gets his turn at being pleasured. (But he will) While he is eliminating his clothing articles one by one, when he gets down to his briefs, he sees the thrill that this sight had brought to CD's face, and he knew all his uncertainty of wheter or not he could pleasure her, had been laid to rest. And for the rest of the time, he felt totally and completly comfortable in his newly found enviroment.
So now with them both naked, they get down to what all this had led up to. The closeness. When they both thought they couldn't get any closer to each other, that it was impossible....it wasn't. They got so into each other in everyway now and enjoying the electricity the two had created, they just wrapped there arms around each other and rolled around in the bed from the left to the right enjoying this feeling hoping it would never end. But now that they have both done there own little thing for the other, CD wanted to do something for Nate to rid him of his very last worry that he wasn't enough man for her. She kissed him on his mouth for several minutes making Nate's body electrified. And right when he thought she would ignore the rest of him is when she took her kisses down south in a trail starting at his chin, and slowly going to the nap of his neck and she then followed the trail of faint hair on his chest, all the way to the center of him. Here, she took him in her mouth, and proved to him that he was enough man for her. Actually, MORE then enough.

MORE is right lol! :)

hehe ok here's the ending. I just don't want anyone else who's reading..all of one, to get so far behind. hehehe Doesn't matter though cuz this is the last part!!

It was at this point, that Nate was tempted to do to CD, what she was doing to him. So to make this easier, they both just assumed the 69 position, and did to each other what they would. And they ended in each others arms, totally out of breath and did the best thing you can do after sex...cuddle. (Well that's what women think anyways) They didn't cuddle long though, because both CD and Nate didn't feel as though they were done enjoying each other physically. All it took was CD to look at Nate and say wanna go again, and he was all for it. Because this time it was his chance to please her. Not during his turn, like the last time, but throughout the whole act. During Nate's reign over CD, he loved how she looked so innocent as he was taking over her body. She looked like all she wanted to do, was take him in. That's because she did. While Nate was having his way with her, he couldn't help but express how he felt about CD. So he knew he had to tell her. So while he kissed her all over, he slowly went from one ear to the other wispering the message to her that was in his mind.
Nate: Oh, CD. You wear them so well. Those innocent eyes...you're putting on a wonderful disguise!
CD: What do you mean? CD asked during a break that they took to catch there breath.
Nate: You. You're amazing. You can look so innocent, and that's because you can be but you also aren't ALWAYS as innocent as you look. I mean it's like a disguise. Like before when you were laying on my bed,...that whole thing?
CD: Oh I see. she says with a chuckle.
Nate: You know the irony of us lying in each others arms, is unbelieveable.he says running his fingers through her hair.
CD: I know. She says rubbing his chest.
CD: I mean did you ever think that we would be able to be together like this? I always knew we had something between us, but I never thought that we would be able to express how we felt for each other. Always feared our job would find out.
Nate: Me too. But even if they do. Who cares, you know? Unless our being together affects our job, then we shouldn't have any problems. And I don't see how that would happen. (Yeah, we'll see about that Nate ;) )
CD: The thing is, like when we first met, pretty much we were strangers. I had watched you from afar, and I was hoping and praying I could somehow find the strength to tell ya how I felt. And now you're right here with me. So when were working on cases together we were partners, and nothing more. Except of course, two people that wanted to be together and couldn't. And then when we were lovers, I loved you with all my heart. But the problem is, will we be able to keep the two seperate?
Nate: CD honey, relax. I just told ya don't worry about it. Our relationship won't affect our work so it doesn't matter. We can be together. Don't worry. He says rubbing her arm.
CD: Oh Nate you make everything right.
Nate: Well, you make it easy.

*They both return to cuddling, and Nate gives CD this really wierd look, and proceeds to take the remote from her side of the bed.*

Nate: Mind if I watch something different?
CD sighs
CD: Well since you already have the remote in your hand...(She was hopelessly addicted to the Lifetime channel.)
Nate: Oh, I think you'll like what I want to watch.
CD: Puh, I doubt it.
Without answering that, he presses the play button on his VCR and a Bryan Adams video plays. CD has already turned her head to the wall away from Nate and the TV. When she hears the words wherever you go, whatever you do, I will be right here waiting for you, she turns around and faces Nate when a look of astonishment comes over her face.
CD: Hey, that's my favorite song!!!! Nate!
Nate: Yes?
CD: How did you know......
Nate: I didn't, actually. I just got this feeling that the words in that song were ones that you thought fit us.
CD: Exactly! I mean think about it. I hope you know that no matter what I love you so much and there's no one else for me even if that meant waiting forever for you, and even if it meant losing our job. I really don't care.
Nate smiles a wide smile, realizing he's finally happy. He gets up and grabs CD's hand.
Nate: May I have this dance? He asks extending one hand, and wrapping the other over his stomach leaning foward like some noblemen.
CD: Nate! (she can't help but crack a wide smile) You're naked...I'm naked...and you wanna dance? she asks with a look of laughter and confusion.
Nate: So? Doesn't that make it all the better?
CD: Uhh yeah I guess. It's just that I've never danced naked before!
Nate: Oh glad to her it, and neither have I so this will be a first for us then.
CD gets up and dances with her lover, while she rest her head on his left shoulder. She trys not to make it to obvious that she has to bend down a little cuz shes so tall.
Nate: This is now our song.
CD: Good. But can you imagine, them playing this at our wedding? We'll be thinking back to this moment and cracking up.
Nate: I never knew the sight of me naked was so funny.
CD: Well it's not just you, it's me too! she jokes.

They finish there dance then Nate has a realization.

Nate: Ya know, I'm feeling kinda sweaty and dirty.
CD: I wonder why!? she says trying to act clueless. You definetly know how to work up a sweat.
Nate: So what do you say we take a shower together before we head off to Ben's Party.
CD: Sounds good too me. It's funny. I can't believe Ben's seven now. Last I knew he was in pull ups!
Nate: I know. says Nate ending that little conversation as he picks up CD and hauls her over his left shoulder.
CD: Ahhhh she screams a girly scream. What are you doing?
Nate: Just saving you a few steps. he manages to say with no breath trying to act like prince charming, trying not to let on that she was heavier then he was.
CD: Aren't I heavier over you shoulder then craddled in your arms?
Nate paused for about three seconds to take in a deep breath and try to convince her otherwise.
Nate: Nope. He shoots out in one quick breath. Besides, even if you were, every man is suppose to be able to lift his own weight. (and then some he mumbles under his breath but CD totally heard him)
CD: I heard that! She says as she bounces on his shoulder causing him to flop her on the bed before getting to the shower.
Nate: Alright Amazon! he says. Ya happy. You're more man then I am. he jokes. CD attacks him and jumps on his back causing Nate to walk like a drunk man all over the floor.
Nate: Please get off me woman! he yells.
CD: Nope.
Nate: Come on! If you break my back and Kate asks how it happened, what exactly should I tell her. That we're hooking up secretly and you broke my back, OR that I was lifting a heavy box and it started to move around causing my back to snap!!
CD: Oh, now I'm some old heavy box!?
She moves around on his back more, so now he's flat on his stomach on the floor.
CD stands on his back.
CD: You want to get up?
Nate: YES, YES!
CD: Say CD is stronger then me!
Nate: Hell no! (he knew it was true but would never admit it)
CD jumps on him.
Nate: oww oww OWW!
CD: Say it!
Nate: Ok, ok! CD is stronger then me. (and she's even fatter then a cow he says under his breath again)
CD: Oh really? she asks. Now she's got both knees on his lower back, and has is two arms behind him, in front of her.
Nate: CD, what are you doing to me!
CD: What do you care?! You called me a fat cow.
Nate: No I didn't.......I said you were FATTER then a cow!
Now CD thought she'd try a different approach she gets off him rolls him over, and tingles him senseless.
Nate: NO! STOP! STOP! he laughs.
CD: Ticklish huh?
Nate: Yes yes now stop. I'll do anything!
CD: Ok, say I love you CD with all my heart.
Nate: I love you CD with all my heart.
(Meanwhile she's still tickling him)
CD: Say CD's the best woman in the whole world.
Nate: CD's the best woman in the whole world. Now can you please get off me?
CD: Ok she says getting off him.
Nate: Tha....thank...thank you. He manages to say, looking like a steam roller had just squashed him flat. How you could do that to the man of your dream I'll never know.
CD: Yeah and how you could call your woman all those names, I'LL never know.
Nate: Ok I'm sorry, hun. No can ya help me up I'm REALLY goona need that shower now! he says.
CD: No stay there a bit. I'll give you a massage.
Nate: A massage? Oh thank God. That word was like heaven to him at this point. Just so long as you don't bury me in the floor.
CD: I won't she says with a gentle tone this time.
Meanwhile they've yet to notice that all there Division paper work has been stretched out even MORE then the first time, and some of the papers are now wrinkled and shredded and some are beat up beyond recognition.
They both make there way to the shower and after enjoying each others company and actually managing to get clean, they step out of the shower into a two inch puddle that has accumulated on the bathroom floor and has now made it's way into his bedroom onto the carpet.
Nate: Damn it! he says. and with a towel on, he bends over to try and catch most of the water before it hits his rug. Meanwhile CD is doing some bending over of her own, trying to see under his towel.
Nate: Hey, CD? why don't you help me! Didn't you get enough of that in the shower? he yells.
CD: I guess so. she says disapointed.
(Men. Never can understand em one second he's lovin her the next he's pmsin to her lol)
Right at that moment CD walks out of the bathroom leaving Nate to the mess, too mad at him to help him with it, when normally she'd say yes dear. As she heads for the living room to grab her make-up bag, she notices there work papers all over the floor, beat up and most of them waterlogged.
CD: Oh no............................she says slowly and silently.
Nate: What now? You can't find your peach lipstick again? Wear your cranberry one I like that better anyways. he says never looking up from the spill.
CD: Oh if only that was my problem.
Nate: Then what is it? He asks grunting as he stands up (he's getting old hehe) and he goes over to her.
Nate: What the F happened here?!
CD: Well it looks like we got a little carried awa.......
Nate cuts her off.
Nate: What am I going to do now!!!!!!! Kate will kill me!
CD: You? You mean us!
Nate: Huh? he asks not paying her much attention b/c he's now trying to salvage any pieces of paper he can.
CD: I said US! She's gonna find out we slept together!
Nate: (Looking at CD now) Yeah and you think she'll get all that from the waterlooged, ripped, torn, and beat up papers?
CD: Uh yeah. she says with attitude. She's going to want to know what happened to the files!
Nate: We'll make something up.
CD: Oh right. And what would that be? You were home, ALONE, filming a remake of The Forty Day Flood and Noah's Ark, and things got outta hand! I mean really!
Nate: I got it!
CD: Oh really?
Nate: YES! And I'm so smart it's scary.
CD: Well you go the scary part right.
Nate gives her a glare.
CD: So what's this brillant idea you got?
Nate: Well it rained last night, right?
CD: Yeah so wha..... Oh I see!
Nate: See?! I was carrying the files and a big gust of wind knocked them out of my hand and all over the ground. I scuried to catch them but couldn't save any.
CD: If you think that plan will work, best of luck but I don't buy it. nd don't forget. I can't know anything about the files because that will place me here...with you. So it's hush hush, ok?
Nate: OK, obviously.
CD: OK. But just because we're pretending not to hang out together, doesn't mean we can't. She gives him a sly grin.
Nate: Oh I know that. Listen. You go on ahead to his party. I'll finish cleaning this up and HOPE Kate buys my sad ass story, and then I'll meet you at Ben's party a little later, so it doesn't look suspicious.
Nate: So tommoroww. Same time, same place?
CD: Oh definetly. She leans it to give him one last, long, lingering kiss before heading out the door, totally leaving Nate wanting more. But she always teased him like that, and he never minded.

That was EXCELLENT!!!!!!!! I loved it so much!!! :) :)

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
That was EXCELLENT!!!!!!!! I loved it so much!!! :) :)


I totally agree with that! :)

So is anybody else up for the challenge now? Come on guys!!!!!!!! :) This fic needs some competition!!!! :)

how can anyone compete w/ that?!!!:D :) :)

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
how can anyone compete w/ that?!!!:D :) :)


good question LOL, find out and write one :) It's a challenge after all. Once there are, uhhh let's say at least 4 fics I'll post a poll and everybody can vote and then we'll see who has won? How's that sound?

I think it's a GRRRRRRRRREAT idea! That is, if anyone else has the GUTS to attempt it like I DID! hehe j/k It's not easy, but definetly fun. And also, what's wrong with at least giving it a shot? Come one, come all! To post a fan fic of Nate and CD!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
I think it's a GRRRRRRRRREAT idea! That is, if anyone else has the GUTS to attempt it like I DID! hehe j/k It's not easy, but definetly fun. And also, what's wrong with at least giving it a shot? Come one, come all! To post a fan fic of Nate and CD!!!!!!!!!!!

:yeahthat :nod: :yippee:

Okay, lemme spice this up a little... here's a PRIZE!!!!!!!!!

The winner gets my original THE DIVISION SOUNDTRACK on audio CD! :D Now if that isn't an encouragement...

uhhh and since Lisa (*hint,hint*get writing!*hint,hint*) and Angela already have that one... if either of you wins you'd get a bottle of Basso Bottled aka Nate's Oil instead *smirk*

I figured I would do Cat's challenge...but it is not as good as Angie's though!

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Nate and CD sat silently...the were on the interstate
driving....finally CD spoke up...
CD:"You know Nate, I think you should turn around and take me home...."
Nate:"why???"
CD:"I think it is too soon for me to meet your family...we have only been dating a few weeks...."
Nate:"Oh come on CD, it will be great....I know my parents will love you...and Irene is going to be home this weekend...I want you to be there..."
CD:"I just feel uncomfortable meeting them so soon..."
Nate:"you have nothing to worry about, I promise..."
CD sighed...
CD:"I hope your right..."
CD was nervous...she wanted to make a good impression with Nate's family but she just knew they wouldn't like her...

A few hours later, they arrived to Oak Street...they saw a line of kids standing by a ice cream truck..then they saw a young couple pushing a stroller down the side walk...they passed a small playground where a group of kids were playing soccor...
Nate:"so..this is where I grew up!"
CD(jokingly):"isn't this the same street where Wally and The Beaver lived?"
Nate joked back...
Nate:"yeah, they were our neighbors..."
finally Nate pulled into the drive way of a white house...it was a small suburban home, with a white picket fence around it...when they pulled all the way into the drive way, you could see a pick-nick table and and two swings in the back yard....
Nate:"and this is the house I grew up in..."
CD:"Nate I am nervous...are you sure they are going to like me?"
Nate:"of course!...don't be nervous...just be your loving gorgeous self!"
CD:"but what will they think about us being partners too?...."
Nate:"nothing bad Im sure...we can't help that we fell for each other...stuff like that happens to people who work together all the time...they will understand...now lets go in..."

The two got their luggage out of the trunk of the car...they walked up the little side walk to the door...CD's heart was about to beat right out of her chest...right as Nate reached for the handle, the door flung open...a little petite lady in a red knited sweater and blue jeans stood...
Connie:"Nathen!"
Nate:"Mom!"
The two hugged for a few seconds...Nate broke the hug and turned to CD...
Nate:"Mom, this is my Girlfriend and Partner, CD..."
Connie:"oh of course!"
Connie grabbed CD and hugged her...
CD:"nice to meet you.."
Connie:"well Nate told me about you over the phone...and Irene too...you are even more beautiful than they described!"
CD(blushing):"thanks..."
Connie:"come on in...your Dad and Irene are in the den on that internet thing...it is a new hobbie of your Dad's..."
Nate joked:"the internet huh?....does he have him a hot girlfriend on there?"
Connie:"If he does, I don't care...as long as he is out of my way..."
Nate and CD sat down at the table in the dinning room...
Connie:"would you two like something to drink...I just made some ice tea..."
Nate:"I will take one..."
CD:"yeah me too thanks..."
Connie:"no problem..."
Connie was in the kitchen making the teas....Irene and Frank walked into the dining room where Nate and CD were...
Frank:"Hey!....there you guys are...we wondering if you made a wrong turn..."
Nate:"nope we made it..."
Nate got up and hugged his Dad and Irene..
Nate:"oh this is CD..."
CD got up and extended her hand...Frank just pulled her into a big bear hug and patted her on the back...Nate had to chuckle at that...
CD:"nice to meet you sir..."
Frank:"call me Ed...we have heard alot about you CD..."
CD:"I hope it was good.."
he released CD...she hugged Irene...
Irene:"hey CD...how have you been?"
CD:"I have been great...how about you?"
Irene:"good..."
Connie returned with the ice teas...
Connie:"so CD...what does your name stand for?"
CD:"Candace DeLorenzo...well Dankow origianlly.."
Connie:"oh I just love the name Candace!..."

Nate and CD talked to his parents and Irene some more...then they took their luggage to Nate's old room...CD started laughing when Nate opened the door...his room looked like a twelve year old boy's...there were even bunk-beds with dinosour sheets...
CD:"whoa!.."
Nate:"I know...when I became a teenager, my mom took all my kiddy stuff and put it in the attic...then when I left home, she brought it all back down and decorated my room exactly the way it was when I was a kid..."
CD chuckled and picked up a WATERCOLORS set...
CD:"aww did you like to paint?"
Nate:"yeah...on the walls...that is why my mom always bought me watercolors...they only show up on paper..."
CD:"so...do I get top bunk?"
Nate:"yep!"
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hehe that was great! Keep going!!!!!!!!!!! :)

lookie look! NEW PAGE!!!!!!!!

MORE MORE MORE! That totally ROCKED! WAY, WAY, WAY better then mine. I don't know what you're talking about! I'm cheering for you to win. It's already awesome!

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
MORE MORE MORE! That totally ROCKED! WAY, WAY, WAY better then mine. I don't know what you're talking about! I'm cheering for you to win. It's already awesome!

WHATEVER!!!...yours is like 100 times better!!!:)

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after CD and Nate put their luggage away, they went into the living room and sat with Nate's parents...CD looked around the room...the were pictures of Nate and his sister when they were kids everywhere....
CD:"you were a cute kid..."
Nate:"yeah I know...even cuter now..."
CD rolled her eyes...
Connie:"Nate was such a sweet boy too....he would do the strangest things though..."
CD:"oh yeah?...like what?"
Frank:"Once he burried all of Connie's silverware...and he used to collect dead bugs..."
CD giggled...she could just picture him doing that....
Connie:"oh Frank, and remember when he got his willie stuck in that coke bottle?"
Frank:"of course!...how could I forgot that?"
CD(laughing):"he did WHAT?"
Nate put his head in his hands...
Nate:"let's please not talk about that..."
Connie:"well when Nate was about three, he liked to run around naked...one day I gave him a bottle of coke and he went outside, naked of course, and was drinking it..a couple minutes later, I heard him screaming..so I ran outside and he was standing by the swing with his little penis in the coke bottle!"
CD, Connie, and Frank were laughing hysterically...
Nate:"come on...it was not that funny!"
CD:"yes it was!....so how did you get it out?..."
Frank:"we lubbed it up with vasoline and yanked it out....he cried like a little girl..."
Nate:"Dad I was three years old!"
CD:"why did you put it in there Nate?"
Nate:"I don't know...you know how you always put your finger in places you really know you shouldn't when you are a kid?...well I thought my "little guy" was just another finger..."
the three just kept laughing...Nate was embarassed so he tried to change the subject...
Nate:"Hey CD, let me show you Charles..."
CD:"who's Charles?"
Frank:"our pet RACOON..."

Nate and CD walked to the den...Irene was there on the computer....
Nate:"whatcha doin?"
Irene:"just surfin the web..."
CD looked around...there was a cage with a racoon in it...there was another one with a parot...
Nate:"this is Charles...our racoon.."
CD was slightly scared...
CD:"is he tamed?"
Nate:"of course!...do you think we would have a wild one for a pet?"
CD:"shut up...coke bottle boy!"
Irene laughed...
Irene:"they told you the story?"
CD:"yes..."
CD looked over at the parot....
CD:"who is this?"
Nate:"oh that is skitals...the sh*t b@stard..."
CD:"I take it you don't like him?"
Nate:"that bird is pure evil...he bites..hard...so don't go near
him.."
Irene:"he once bit Nate so hard, he had to have stitches..."
CD:"don't worry, I won't go anywhere near him..."
Nate:"oh and Dad lets Charles out at night...he bites too, but not as hard as skitals..."
CD:"ummm...he will not be able to come into our room, will he?"
Nate:"as long as we keep the door shut he won't..."

Nate, CD, and Irene walked back into the living room...
Connie:"Nate your Uncle Pete and Aunt Martha are coming tomorrow for dinner..."
Nate:"Oh great..."
Connie:"come on Nate!...they haven't seen you in ages!"
Nate:"I know...I just wish Aunt Martha would not bring me that awful candy..."
Connie:"you don't have to eat it!...just act like you like it and throw it away later..."
Frank:"what are we having tonight?"
Connie:"Turkey and dressing....and apple pie...but I need to run to the store for some CINNAMON.."
Nate:"pick up some BOOZE while you are there...."
Connie:"Nate!..what have I told you about you and your drinking?"
Nate laughed...
Nate:"she is convinced I am an alcoholic..."
Connie:"well you know your cousin Petty is an alcoholic...that stuff is genetic..."
Nate:"Mom the guy has six kids, a whore for a wife, no job...he has to drink!!"
Connie just shook her head at Nate...her and Irene left to go to the store...

After dinner, everyone sat in the living room watching an old western...Nate wispered over in CD's ear...
Nate:"you ready to go to bed?"
CD:"yeah Im pretty tired after the ride here..."
Nate and CD stood up...
Nate:"we are going to bed..."
Connie:"ok...you two have sweet dreams!"
Frank:"yell if you need anything..."
they all said goodnight to each other...CD and Nate went to his room..CD climbed upto the top-bunk and Nate crawled into the bottem...
CD:"goodnight..."
Nate:"nite..."
they laid there for about 15 minutes....finally CD spoke up...
CD:"Nate?"
Nate:"yeah?"
CD:"I can't sleep...it is kinda uncomfortable up here..."
Nate:"come down here with me!"
CD climbed down and get in bed with Nate...they laid there for a few minutes...suddenlyCD felt Nate stroking her leg...
CD:"what are you doing??"
Nate wispered sudductivly in her ear...
Nate:"lets make love..."
CD:"Nate no!"
Nate:"come on...I think we are ready to take the next step..."
CD:"I think we are too, but not at your parents house in your childhood bed!"
Nate:"come on CD....Im sure everyone is in bed now..."
CD:"but they will hear us!"
Nate got up and turned on the tv....
Nate:"now they won't..."
they argued some more...but Nate eventually won...they were going at it...Nate kept bumping his head becuase of the top-bunk...CD held on to him tight as he increased the pace..they were both about the come when suddenly
Nate's door opened...Connie and Irene were standing there...
Connie:"knock knock...Oh Im so sorry!!!"
Nate quickly got off of CD...Irene was giggling....CD just turned her head the other way...she was so embarassed...
Nate:"we were just uhh..."
Connie:"it's ok...I was just going to tell you we made brownies...if you two want some.."
Nate:"ok we will be there in a minute..."
Connie shut the door....
CD:"Oh My God!....I cannot believe that just happend..."
Nate pulled up the blanket and looked under it..he gizzed all over the sheet....
Nate:"oops..."
CD:"Oh great!...I can't go in there Nate..."
Nate got up and put some clothes on...
Nate:"yes you can...we are adults CD...it is no big deal...now come on..."
CD got up also and put on some clothes....they both walked into the kitchen...Connie,Frank, and Irene were sitting at a table eating brownies...they all grinned when CD and Nate
walked in....
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LMAO!!!!!! poor CD and Nate... That was a GREAT and HILARIOUS post though! :)

At first I was like "why the hell a pet RACOON?" And then it hit me LOL... d'oh...

keep writing! :)

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
LMAO!!!!!! poor CD and Nate... That was a GREAT and HILARIOUS post though! :)

At first I was like "why the hell a pet RACOON?" And then it hit me LOL... d'oh...

keep writing! :)

My Grandparents used to have a pet racoon who would chase and bite me all the time...so I figured I would let Nate's Dad have one...

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CD had never been so embarassed in her life...she and Nate sat down at the table with everyone else....
Connie:"Im sorry I just walked in on you two....I thought you were just watching tv so I opened the door..."
Nate:"It's ok..."
Nate grabbed CD a brownie then got one for himself....they all sat in silence...Irene started to giggle again...
Nate:"What?!"
Irene(giggling):"nothing...."
Nate playfully pushed Irene...she pushed him back...then they were slapping each other...
Frank(kidding):"stop fighting...or I will send you both to your rooms..."
they all finished eating their brownies...Frank walked into the den and then came back out holding Charles...
CD:"uhh I think Im ready for bed now...."
Nate laughed...
Nate:"Charles will only bite you if you are scared of him...he can sense your fear..."
CD:"I can't help it...I have never been around a racoon before..."
Nate:"Well we better go to bed anyway....goodnight you guys..."
CD:"goodnite..."
Connie:"sleep tight...don't let the bed bugs bite!"
Frank:"Connie please!....goodnight kids..."
Irene just started giggling again....
Nate:"Irene!"
Irene:"sorry....goodnight..."
Nate and CD went to the bedroom....they both got back into bed...
CD:"I bet they think Im such a slut..."
Nate:"no they don't...when me and my ex-wife first got married, we stayed here for a few months...they used to walk in on us all the time..."
CD:"eww..in this same bed?"
Nate laughed....
Nate:"yeah...."
Nate paused for a few minutes...
Nate:"besides my Mom walking in on us, how was I?"
CD:"well...that was the best "almost sex" I ever had..."
Nate laughed and then hugged her....
Nate:"when we were strangers I watched you from afar, when we were lovers I loved you with all my heart"
CD:"What in the hell?....did you get that from a Hallmark card or something?"
Nate:"oh let's just go to sleep..."

In the middle of the night CD woke up...she could feel something picking through her hair...she looked up and saw two little red eyes looking at her....she nudged Nate...
Nate(still asleep):"huh?"
CD:"I think Charles is in here..."
Nate:"so don't worry about him...he will leave..."
CD:"Nate he is right above me...picking through my hair!"
Nate:"he is just looking for bugs...you do not have to worry unless you have some in there..."
CD:"Nate get this damn thing away from me!"
Nate:"fine..."
Nate got up and put Charles out...Charles bit him...
Nate:"Ouch...little b@stard..."
CD laughed...
CD:"you deserved that!"

The next morning CD woke up before Nate...he must have felt pretty comfortable in his old bed...she just watched him sleep...Connie knocked on the door...
CD:"come in..."
Nate had now woken up...
Connie:"their is a beautiful RAINBOW outside!...come and see it!"
you could hear Frank yelling...
Frank:"don't wake them up!...they don't want to see some stupid rainbow!"
Connie:"shut up Frank!"
Nate:"he is right Mom...let us sleep..."
CD:"I would love to see the rainbow!"
CD got up and followed Connie...Nate figured he would get up too becuase he could not fall back to sleep...
CD:"Oh that is beautiful!"
Nate:"oh you are just saying that to butter up to my mom..."
Connie:"she doesn't have to butter me up Son, I love her anyway..."
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LOL, that was the perfect amount of hilarious and cute again! :) And I love the pet racoon LOL

Oh man! Did that post kick some serious ARSE or what?! It was so well written, and you used the words so closely together, and made it seem so easy. And I was having one hard time using them, especially that quote. But you made it seem so easy! lol She was all like where did that come from, a Hallmark card or something? hahaha Then it was funny too, when the racoon started picking through her hair! lol And anyways, the whole post was great looking foward to more!!!!! And you say mine is better then yours...HA! Just keep posting and stop saying how mine is better. hehehe And as good as you are, you'll probably have your fic done in a few more posts. It took me forever to post mine, cuz I sucked at using the words! lol

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CD and Nate went back to Nate's room...
CD:"I need to take a shower..."
Nate smirked...
Nate:"you wanna take one together?..."
CD:"No Way!..."
Nate:"why not?!"
CD:"Nate it was bad enough your Mom walked in on us last night...if we take a shower together, they will think all we do is have sex!"
Nate:"no they won't!..."
CD:well,we are not having sex again till we leave here...you got it?"
Nate:"fine...but Im gonna tell them that was our first time...so you will stop worrying about them thinking that is all we do..."
CD:"Nate you better not!"
Nate:"whats the big deal?...I talk to my parents about sex all the time.."
CD:"Nate your a wierdo..."
She grabbed her clothes and left for the bathroom...Nate got a piece of BUBBLEGUM from his bubblegum machine and shoved it in his mouth..then he laughed...he loved how cute CD was when she got all worked up over something...

Nate walked into the kitchen where his mother was cooking....
Connie:"where is CD?"
Nate:"in the shower.."
Connie:"Nate you better marry her!"
Nate:"Mom come on...we have only been together a few weeks....
marriage still far away....we want things to go slow..."
Connie:"ok ok...but it better happen..and I want lots of Grandbabies!"
Nate:"I don't know about that...but I can tell you the marriage thing will happen one day..."
Connie:"well you better not let her get away!...I just love her..and so does your Dad and Irene...she is not like your usual bimbos..."
Nate:"don't worry Mom...I won't let her get away..."
CD walked in, combing her wet hair....
CD:"let who get away?"
Nate:"you of course!...Mom thinks Im gonna run you off.."
CD:"well he does get on my nerves...but I kinda like him..."

Nate and CD went for a drive before Nate's Aunt and Uncle came...they were riding in the car...
Nate:"let me apologize for my parents...they have acted like that my whole life..."
CD:"apologize for what?....they are great!"
Nate:"you know...my Mom and her Rainbows...my Dad and his racoon...and those dumb stories about me when I was a kid..."
CD:"Nate atleast your Mom is not a "sun-flower girl" and your Dad is still there..."
Nate:"yeah I guess you are right....they are still wierd though...Im suprised I didn't turn out gay..."
CD(jokingly):"Oh, your not gay???"
Nate:"well you should no better than anyone that I'm not...after that great sex we had last night..."
CD:"Great sex??!!?....for you maybe..."
Nate laughed and switched on the radio... a Richard Marx song was on...Nate started singing along....
Nate:"wherever you go, whatever you do, I will be right here waiting for you..."
CD just smiled...she thought to herself..."he is such a dork...but, he's my dork..."
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Originally posted by maria1986
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CD just smiled...she thought to herself..."he is such a dork...but, he's my dork..."
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Awwww that was soooo cute! I loved that last sentence! :)

Wow, there you go again! With another great post! You are soooooooo awesome. By the way, let me know when you get the TD Soundtrack so we can talk about it together. Because it is SO TOTALLY obvious you are going to win this challenge.....and I couldn't be more happier for you! :-D :-D This fan fic rocks! The way you use the words...so easily! And they all make sense! When I did it, it sounded so stupid. haha I had to laugh at myself! But you, have a real talent for writing. Just as Cat, Miranda, CD, and Jeanie do. So......do you got a swelled head yet? hehehe

this is SOOOO extremely good!! i love it so much; it's very cute and very funny!! :)

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
Wow, there you go again! With another great post! You are soooooooo awesome. By the way, let me know when you get the TD Soundtrack so we can talk about it together. Because it is SO TOTALLY obvious you are going to win this challenge.....and I couldn't be more happier for you! :-D :-D This fan fic rocks! The way you use the words...so easily! And they all make sense! When I did it, it sounded so stupid. haha I had to laugh at myself! But you, have a real talent for writing. Just as Cat, Miranda, CD, and Jeanie do. So......do you got a swelled head yet? hehehe

yeah yeah...we all know which one was the best...YOURS!!!...
duh!...but you can still say all those nice things about my writing;)

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Nate and CD arrived back to his parents house...Dinner was ready and his Aunt and Uncle were there...Nate introduced CD to them..
Nate:"Aunt Martha, Uncle Pete, this is CD..."
CD:"Hi"
Pete:"Hey CD!..."
Martha:"CD???"
CD:"oh that is just a nick-name..my name is actually Candace...
and Nice to meet you too..."
Martha:"It's nice to meet you too, Candace!"


later on at dinner, Nate's family was telling some more stories from Nate's childhood...
Martha:"once we babysat Nate while his parents went on vacation...he had the worst rash on his little bottom..."
Pete:"yeah we ran out and bought all the different creams we could find but that kid still would not stop crying..."
Nate:"do we have to talk about my rash while we are eating??"
Martha:"so Carman..how did you and Nate meet?"
CD:"oh its Candace...and,well we work together..."
Pete:"you are a cop too???"
CD:"Yep..."
Frank:"we never would have thought our little Nathan would become a cop..."
Pete:"sure wouldn't...hey Frank, how about that time we took him on the OCEAN and he threw up four times..."
Martha:"oh did you tell Courtney about the time he got his little weenie stuck in the coke bottle???"
Connie:"oh yeah..."
Pete:"Man, that kid cried like a little girl...."
Nate:"why do you always bring that up!?"
CD:"come on Nate...it's funny...you mean you don't look back and laugh at that?"
Nate:"No way!...it hurt like hell...."

Nate's Aunt and Uncle left that night....Nate's Dad was showing CD his prize winning coin collection...Nate, Irene, and Connie were in the kitchen cleaning up and talking...."
Irene:"Are you and CD getting married?"
Nate:"It's a little soon for that, don't ya think?"
Connie:"but we want her to be a part of the family!...and I want to be a Grandma!"
Irene:"and I want to be a Aunt!"

Frank:"this is a coin from the 1800's...it was made by..."
CD yawned...she really wasn't paying attention but she didn't want to be rude....
Frank:"you are not tiring out on me, are ya?"
CD:"no way...I just yawn sometimes..."
Frank:"well good...becuase I still have to more books of coins left..."

Nate:"whoa, easy ladies....enough baby talk...and marriage talk...we love each other but we have decided to take things slow...we both do not want another failed marraige..."
Connie sighed...
Connie:"well until then....what is CD's favorite pie?...I wanna make her one tomorrow before you leave..."
Nate:"I really am not sure...every time we are at GHIRARDELLI SQAURE she gets a piece of apple pie...so that could be her favorite..See??..I don't even know her favorite pie!..you can't marry someone when you don't even know what their favorite pie is!"

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oh !oh! oh! MORE!!!!!!

o yeah, that was definitely great!! more!! and SOON!!! :D

Awwww what a cute fic! And how about ours are EQUALLY good, and we settle with that until Cat decides the real winner! hehe And as far as I look at it, whether I win or you win doesn't really matter, because it's a win/win situation with two great fics!!!!

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
Awwww what a cute fic! And how about ours are EQUALLY good, and we settle with that until Cat decides the real winner! hehe And as far as I look at it, whether I win or you win doesn't really matter, because it's a win/win situation with two great fics!!!!


I won't decide who wins. I said I want at least 4 fics for the challenge and then I'll post a poll where everybody can vote and whoever has most votes has won then :)
But I do agree about the (so far) two great fics! :)

heheehe ok everyone else can vote, since you're too weak to want to make that decision on your own, I get it! hahaha Wus! You can make the challenge, but can't vote on it! hehehe anyways, more fan fic!!!!!!!

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
heheehe ok everyone else can vote, since you're too weak to want to make that decision on your own, I get it! hahaha Wus! You can make the challenge, but can't vote on it! hehehe anyways, more fan fic!!!!!!!

Nah, thing is, if I would decide the winner, I'd write a fanfic on the challenge myself and then I'd declare that of course I won it myself.... :p

uh huh. So? Vote yourself, and then write your own fan fic to the challenge, but eliminate yourself from the vote. See how easy that is! :-D :crazy: :rolleyes:

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
uh huh. So? Vote yourself, and then write your own fan fic to the challenge, but eliminate yourself from the vote. See how easy that is! :-D :crazy: :rolleyes:

LOL, nah, I was j/k... I have enough fanfics going on already anyways. I just think the voting thing is fair.

true!

It's been three days since you last posted.I think it's time to post MORE!!!:)

I forgot about this!...lol...sorry...here's more...

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CD walked into the kitchen with a scared look on her face....
Nate:"Whats wrong?"
CD:"your Dad just let Charles out...."
Irene:"Oh no...Im going to my room..."
Irene told everyone good night and left for bed....Frank came into the room...Charles was following him....
Nate:"why can't you wait until everyone is asleep before you let that little b@stard out?"
Frank:"Nate, don't call your brother that!"
CD and Connie laughed....Charles walked over to CD and bit her...
CD:"hey!...your brother just bit me!"
Nate quickly ran over to CD and looked at her wound...
Nate:"see Dad!...she is bleeding!"
CD:"Nate it is not that bad..."
Frank:"yeah those are just Charles' love bites..."
Charles then went over and bit Connie...
Connie:"Charles just bit me also Frank!"
Frank:"He is just upset because you all don't like him..."
Connie:"Seriously Frank, put Charles back into his cage!...he doesn't need to roam the house tonight..."
Frank:"fine...."
Frank took Charles back to his cage...Nate put some poroxide and a bandaid on CD's wound...
Nate:"you ready to go to bed?"
CD:"yeah Im pretty tired..."

Everyone said goodnight...CD and Nate went into Nate's room...they both changed and got into Nate's little bed...
Nate:"Im so sorry Charles bit you..."
CD:"Nate it's ok..I have felt much worse pain..."
Nate:"but this was supposed to be a fun trip...and I wanted you to like my parents...but instead, our stupid racoon bit you!"
CD:"I have had fun!..and I love your parents!...why are you so worried about making a good impression?"
Nate:"becuase...I love you..and I don't want to lose you..."
CD:"You love me?"
Nate:"of course!...I know we haven't been together that long, but I know it's love..."
CD:"I love you too..."
Nate:"You do?"
CD:"yep..."
she leaned in and kissed him passionatly...he returned the kiss...
CD:"I want to have sex with you..."
Nate:"right now?"
CD:"yes.."
Nate:"but I thought you said you weren't going to do it while we were here..."
CD:"I changed my mind..."
they began stripping off each others clothes...they got into the 69 position...suddenly Nate's door opened...
Frank:"Nate we have a....oh Im so sorry..."
Frank quickly shut the door...
Nate yelled:"doesn't anyone know how to knock around here????"
Frank yelled outside the door:"Sorry son...I wouldn't bother you but we have an emergency...Charles escaped from his cage and we can't get him under control.."
Nate and CD got up...they put their clothes back on and Nate stormed into the living room pissed...
Nate:"I can't believe you interupted...Holy Sh*t!!!"
Charles was up on the ceiling fan...he was hissing and foaming at the mouth...
Irene:"Uhh...something is really wrong with Charles..."
Connie:"should I call 911 or something???"
Frank:"no Im sure he is fine..."
Charles jumped down and attacked Frank...
Nate:"Call animal control!"
Connie:"ok!"
CD walked into the room now and saw Charles attacking Frank...
CD:"should I get my gun??"
Nate:"yeah...go get it.."
CD ran and got her gun...
Frank finally had Charles pinned to the ground...
Nate:"we should shoot him!"
Frank:"no lets just wait for animal control..."

A man from animal control came and got Charles...
Man:"yep...your racoon has rabies...I can tell by that glow in his eyes..."
Frank:"what should we do?"
Man:"Well we are going to have to kill this little guy..but you all need to go straight to the ER...if anyone has been bit within the last month or so, you need to get rabie shots..."
Frank:"you have to kill Charles?"
Man:"yep...sorry..."

The Animal control man left and they all left for the hospital...CD and Nate rode together...
Nate:"I can't believe they have to kill Charles..."
CD noticed a tear in Nate's eye...
CD:"I guess you really like him after all..."
Nate:"well no...but I know how much he meant to my Dad...and I said all those mean things about him...and now he's gone..."
CD put her hand on his...
CD:"Im sorry Nate..."
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aw, poor nate!! that was really sweet, more soon!! :)

Yayyyy!!!!!!!!! You posted! Great job. Keep going! :)

Yeah it's great! :) More!!!!!! :)

That was greeeeeeeeeat I can totally see Nate gettinh all pissed after trying to make his move..and WAM the door opens. hehehee That was hillarious!

Are we ever gonna get more of this??????????????:)

Originally posted by planet_stella
Are we ever gonna get more of this??????????????:)

Thanks for reminding me!...here's a little more...:D

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Everyone waited in the waiting room....the doctor called them in one by one to get their shots...frank was the first one in with the Doctor....Irene was the only one who didn't have to get the shots...she managed to stay clear of Charles when she was home...
Irene:"I always tried to tell you all that I was the only smart one in this family..."
Nate:"yeah you are...I hate shots..."
CD grinned...
CD:"You big baby..."
Frank came out and they called Connie back...Frank was
silent...he couldn't believe they had to kill his Charles...Nate spoke up...
Nate:"so, did they say when they are putting Charles out?"
Frank sighed...
Frank:"as soon as possible...they probably have already done it by now..."
Nate:"Dad Im sorry..."
Frank:"It's ok son...Im just glad we are all ok..."
CD:"So how many shots do they give?"
Frank:"three.."
Nate:"Three!!!??"
Frank laughed...
Frank:"thats nothing!...back when I was a kid, I was bitten by a rabid cat...I had to get 23 shots...in the stomach!"
Irene:"Nate really would be scared if he had to get that many!"
Nate:"Hey now!...I bet you would be scared if you had to get three shots!"
Irene:"no...shots don't scare me..."
CD:"yeah Nate...I have to get the shots too...Im not scared...and neither was your mom or dad!...
Nate:"ok everybody pick on Nate..."
CD:"aww Im sorry...I'll go in with you, if you want?"
CD asked with a grin...
Nate:"actually, I would appreciate it if you would..."
he gave her his sad eyes...
CD laughed..
CD:"ok I will..."
Connie came out...
Connie:"whoa...that really hurt..."
She was kidding with Nate...he had always been afraid of shots...
Nate:"what???"
CD and Irene couldn't hold back the laugher...the nurse called Nate's name...
Nate:"Im not getting the shots..."
CD:"Nate, either you get three little shots..or die from rabies!.."
Nate:"ok fine...but you better come with me..."
CD and Nate walked back to the room...the nurse was getting Nate's shots ready...CD could see the sweat pouring off Nate's forehead..
CD:"Nate, why are you so scared?...your a cop...you risk your life everyday, and you are afraid of shots??"
Nate:"I don't know why...I just am..I guess knowing the pain is coming scares me...I'd rather not know..."
The nurse walked over to Nate and rubbed his arm with an alcohol pad....she got the shot and made sure she had the right amount...Nate turned his head and closed his eyes...CD held his hand tightly...she had never seen this side of him before...she thought it was cute...they nurse gave the shot and Nate groaned a little...
Nurse:..one down...two to go..."
the nurse gave the other two shots...Nate got off the table and CD got up there to get ready for her shots....
CD:"it wasn't THAT bad, was it?"
Nate pouted...
Nate:"yes it was....now my arm hurts..."
CD:"...poor baby..."
the nurse came over and gave CD her three shots...CD didn't even flinch...
CD:"that didn't even hurt..."
Nate rolled his eyes....
Nate:"yeah know it hurt...."
Nurse:"ok, everyone is all done..."
Nate:"thank God..."
the nurse laughed and pulled a sticker out of the drawer...she handed it to CD and she put it on Nate's shirt...it said "big boy" in big, bold letters...CD and Nate left the waiting room, and then left with the others.....
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omg, that was soooooooo freakin cute!!!!!!!
POST MORE!!!! :) :)

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
omg, that was soooooooo freakin cute!!!!!!!
POST MORE!!!! :) :)


OMG yeah totally! LOL Big Boy Nate! I can totally see that :) Keep it coming :)

Ha! Nate is scared of needles!:lol: He really is a big :baby: That was great!Post more soon!:yourock:

Did you forget about this fic again???:D If ya did,then,well, I reminded ya. So now you can post more!:)

Arghhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! Have ya totally given up on this fic?! Or ou just forge about it again? Come on it's been WAY too long since you last posted.

sorry it took so long to post on this one....I have been trying to think of an ending...but anyway...here is the rest....I hope everyone liked it...:D

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Everyone went straight to bed after returning home from the hosptital....Nate still pouted about his arm hurting as he and CD put on their pj's....
Nate:"I don't see why they just can't give you a pill or something for rabies...or atleast put all three shots into one..."
CD:"oh please!....you sound like a three year old..."
Nate:"well...it hurts...."
CD got into the bed and opened her arms...
CD:"awww come here...."
Nate got into arms and looked into her eyes...
Nate:"You wear them so well, those innocent eyes, you're putting on a wonderful disguise...."
CD giggled...
CD:"well...uhhh...you look really cute in that shirt...."
they shared a nice long kiss before drifting off to sleep....

the next morning they got up and had breakfest with Connie, Frank, and Irene...Frank seemed to be feeling better about Charles...
Irene:"how is your arm this morning?"
Nate:"sore..."
Irene giggled and continued to eat....
Connie:"CD I made you an apple pie to take home with you..."
CD:"oh thanks!...that is my favorite!..."
Connie:"see Nate...you do know her favorite pie!...I think its time for marraige!..."
CD about chocked when Connie said that....
CD:"marraige?"
Frank:"yeah when are you two gonna tie the knot?"
Nate:"someday...."
CD smiled at that and everyone finished eating....

Nate and CD went back to Nate's room to get all their things ready to leave....
CD:"so you think we will get married some day?"
Nate:"I hope so...unless you decide to leave me before then..."
CD:"I'll never leave you...."
Nate:"good....hey I was thinking...lets move into together?"
CD:"what?...don't you think its alittle soon for that?"
Nate:"no...I think it is the perfect time....and we can even get a puppy together..."
CD:"ok...but you are going to be the one to take care of the puppy...."
Nate:"ok scratch the puppy idea...how about a fish?"
CD:"a fish sounds good....I can handle a fish..."
Nate:"then it's settled...we are moving in together and getting a fish!"
CD:"sounds wonderful!"
CD made the beds and got their things together....Nate left the room to go help his Dad take out Charles old cage....on his way back in, he called CD on her cell phone and disguised his voice...
CD:"DeLorenzo..."
Nate:"hi this is Billy Bob Bushwacker..."
CD rolled her eyes and hung up on him...he always tried to prank call her but she always knew it was him...Nate walked into the room putting his cell away....
Nate:"did you know it was me???"
CD smirked...
CD:"nope...I just thought it was some weirdo....I guess I was right...."
Nate:"damn...I really thought I had you that time...oh well...are you ready to go?"
CD:"yep...."
they got all of their luggage together and took it all to the car... Connie, Frank and Irene went outside to see them off...they all hugged and kissed each other goodbye....
Frank:"CD I hope you are coming back with Nate for Christmas..."
Connie:"oh yes you can go carolling with me!"
CD:"sounds like a plan..."
After 15 minutes of goodbyes..CD and Nate finally left....
Nate:"so...what did you think of my family?"
CD:"I loved them...they are great..."
Nate:"Im glad...Irene is the only normal one...."
CD laughed...
CD:"yeah I noticed....you told me to expect anything with your family, but I never thought in a million years that I would be bitten by rabid racoon...."
Nate:"Im gonna miss Charles....the little b@stard...."
CD:"hey lets name our fish Charles in his honor?!"
Nate:"I like that...."
they both laughed and continued driving home....

THE END

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That was great!!! All fic was great!!!! :yourock:And now,since your fic is finished,I can post my challenge fic.:D

I loved that! It was so sweet and funny. And Rasa, I can't wait to read yours! :)

I have just a little question, though, isn't Nate Jewish? I think I remember an ep from the second season where we found out that he was.:confused:

Originally posted by "Snowfall"
I loved that! It was so sweet and funny. And Rasa, I can't wait to read yours! :)

I have just a little question, though, isn't Nate Jewish? I think I remember an ep from the second season where we found out that he was.:confused:

half jewish I think...I figured they could just celebrate Christmas...lol...:D ....

Originally posted by planet_stella
That was great!!! All fic was great!!!! :yourock:And now,since your fic is finished,I can post my challenge fic.:D

YAY!!!...I can't wait to read it....:D

awwwwwww I loved it! It was really great!!!!!!!

And Rasa, I can't wait either :)

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THAT WAS REALLY, REALLY, REALLY GREAT!!! I LOVED IT A LOT!!!!!

NICE JOB!!!!! :) :)

Here is a pic to go along w/ my fic...it is of my Grandpa's pet racoon...its the best one I could find....shes sitting in the window...

Originally posted by maria1986
half jewish I think...I figured they could just celebrate Christmas...lol...:D ....

That's good, it makes my fic easier to write then....it would be a challenge working around a rabbi at the wedding and no Christmas! j/k. :) :) :)

Yet another one CD/Nate fanfic.......yeah,i'm an irredeemable shipper. lol But this fanfic will include Jinny/Teddy too. And this fanfic is for Cat cause it was her challenge! Enjoy!

Long nine months

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“Jinny,Jinny.Wake up”CD shook the shoulder of the woman that was sleeping next to her.

“What is it?”she slowly opened her eyes.”What’s wrong, hon?”she asked and sat up looking around the room.

“I think I heard something downstairs.When Teddy should come back?”CD was a little scared.Normaly,she would have been downstairs to see who was there, but now she was scared.Not because of herself,but because of her baby.Suddenly she heard footsteps and they were getting closer every minute.

“I think it’s two of them”Jinny whispered and got up as fast as her pregnant body let her.CD was behind her and wrapped her arms around Jin’s elbow.The door slowly opened and they saw two bouquets of dark red roses and Nate and Teddy behind them,wearing stupid goofy grins on their faces.CD and Jinny just stood there and looked at their husbands.

“I hope we didn’t wake you up”Teddy smiled sweetly and handed Jinny the roses. Nate did the same with CD.

“No,of course not” Jin and CD said together.They didn’t like the thought of lying to their husbands but they both were too proud to admit they were scared so they simply elided that.

“By the way what are you doing here?”Jinny asked Teddy confused.

“I live here”he answered simply and wrapped his arms around Jinny’s swollen belly.

“You know what I mean”Jin slapped him to the shoulder playfully. Now it was Nate’s turn to speak up”We thought we might cheer you up ladies.So we took the day off and decided to go picnic to the beach”he said and kissed his wife.

“That’s great! I love the ocean! “Jinny squalled and kissed Teddy passionately.CD just nodded yes and kissed Nate as well.

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Should I continue?

yeah yeah! COntinue! LOL :) More fanfic baby boom! Yeah LOL Did anyone count all the pregnancies here? lol They're gonna be able to open up their own school soon LOL

oooh! Ha! New page! :p MORE!!!!!

YAY!!...wonderful....post more....that was great....and Cat gave you a new page so you have to...lol....:D

that was great!!!!! YAY!!! can't wait for more!!! :D :D :D

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
yeah yeah! COntinue! LOL :) More fanfic baby boom! Yeah LOL Did anyone count all the pregnancies here? lol They're gonna be able to open up their own school soon LOL

LOL, I've tried to count, but there are just so many that I lose track! And eventually I will add to that problem, I suppose...(hint hint).

And YES, Rasa, continue! I am loving this! Post more ASAP!

Glad ya liked it guys! Here's more!

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“That’s great! I love the ocean! “Jinny squalled and kissed Teddy passionately.CD just nodded yes and kissed Nate as well.

“Ok laidies,you two just change, and me and Nate will get everything ready.Do you have any special requests about the food?”Teddy asked as he was about to leave.CD and Jinny looked at each other and smiled.

“Why don’t you come back in five minutes?We’ll tell ya then “CD said and Teddy left.

“Let’s make a list and guys will go and buy everything.What do ya want?”Jin took a sheet of paper and wrote down all the edible things they wanted.five minutes later Nate knocked on the bedroom’s door.

“Come in baby”CD said and gave him the list straight away”go to the shop and buy everything will ya?”she asked sweetly.

“Ok,let’s see what you need here.Two boxes of ice-crem,six chocolate bars,chips,bubble gum,cookies with cinnamon,bananas,melon,peanut butter,hamburgers.Ah,in case you didn’t understand, we’re going to spend about two or three hours in the beach.Two hours,not two weeks”he teased them.They both just smiled and Nate left.Both women started dressing and CD started pouting, when she found out that Jinny’s pants that fit her a week ago were too tight now.

Jinny was 24 weeks ahead and CD was 22,so when Jinny out-growed her clothes she gave them to CD. It was ,kinf of, fun to be pregnant together with her best firend.CD and Jinny spent a lot of time together,now,when they took maternity leave.They wanted to work, but Nate and Teddy convinced them it would be too dangerous,so now both soon-to-be-mommies were spendingtime at home, Jinny’s or CD’s, eating,sleeping,watching TV ,talking and,as Jinny and CD said themselves, getting fatter every hour.


Soon everything was ready and all of them got in the car and went to the beach.The weather was just great and because it was summer,Nate and Teddy decided to go to swim. Jinny and CD just watched them.They thought they were too fat to wear swimming suits.

“The water’s just great!”Teddy exclaimed as he and Nate returned.He dried himself with the towel as did Nate.Then they both sat beside their wives.

“So what were you two doing while we were gone?”Nate looked at CD lovingly.

“Well,let’s see.We were eating and……….eating”she smiled.

“Don’t forget eating”Jinny added and laughed.

“Yeah,all you do now is eating that unhealthy food”Nate stated and immediately regretted.

“Well look who’s talking, mister ‘I have to eat a chocolate bar every hour’ “Jinny snapped.

“Next time when you’re pregnant you can judge us and now shut up and gimme that cookie”CD added.Nate just glared and handed CD a cookie.

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Now it's your turn Cat!

awwww that was so cute! :) And I turned already ;) (yeah I know that means something else actually lol)

yeah, that was EXCELLENT rasa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If you would like to post more or anything, I'm POSITIVE no one would object!!! ;) ;) :wave:

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
yeah, that was EXCELLENT rasa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If you would like to post more or anything, I'm POSITIVE no one would object!!! ;) ;) :wave:

Nope! No objections, here! ;)

awesome awesome awesome! I love this fic. Absolutly love it!!!!!! MORE! Can't wait till cat reads it. I think she's still busy on va ca with her parents, and I don't think she's enjoying it so this will make her feel bettter. lol

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
awesome awesome awesome! I love this fic. Absolutly love it!!!!!! MORE! Can't wait till cat reads it. I think she's still busy on va ca with her parents, and I don't think she's enjoying it so this will make her feel bettter. lol

Where the hell have you been that you dont know that Cat's already back! lol :D And I'm glad you like my fic so much.:)

Originally posted by planet_stella
Where the hell have you been that you dont know that Cat's already back! lol :D And I'm glad you like my fic so much.:)


LMAO, yeah, I thought exactly the same thing!!!! I'm back and I still haven't seen ya online girl! Geez, I got stuff to show ya! (and I wrote and posted more fic too) maybe you would have noticed I was back if ya head read that.... but yeah, I guess you don't like me that much after all *sniffs* I do agree though that this fic is great! So, Rasa, keep it coming! And Ang... nah I'm not talking to ya anymore. :crying:

*PUTS HANDS ON HIPS* And why aren't you talking to me anymore! What did I do to you? I only loved you!!!! lol

*Balls eyes out.*

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
*PUTS HANDS ON HIPS* And why aren't you talking to me anymore! What did I do to you? I only loved you!!!! lol

*Balls eyes out.*

Hey, I would have talked to you had you been here, and I did talk to you when you came! So stop bitching with me and go get yourself a human DIDO! :p

Well, :p to you too!!!!! And I WILL go get me a human DIDO, it's better then getting with you! :p :p :p :p lol j/k

Here's more!

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About an hour later it started to rain and men wanted to go home,but CD and Jinny had other ideas.

“Come on boys,are ya scared of rain?”Jinny teased them.

“I’d love to walk in the rain and to look at that rainbow”CD pointed to the sky.Nate and Teddy just sighed but they knew better that argue with their pregnant wives,so the next half an hour they walked in the beach, drenched to the bone. Finally ladies decided that they had enough of walking in the rain so the four of them got in the car and went home.

As they came to Jinny and Teddy’s house, they immediately changed their clothes and then decided to watch TV. Jinny snuggled together with Teddy and CD with Nate, and they all watched some soap. Then Nate noticed that there were tears rolling down CD’s cheeks.

“Honey what’s wrong?”he asked concerned and looked at CD.Jinny and Teddy looked at her as well.

“It’s so so sweet”CD pointed to the TV and started to cry harder.Everyone looked at the TV.

“It’s a commercial with a singing and dancing racoon”Nate said grinning.He couldn’t believe CD cried just because she saw a stupid dancing raccoon but he couldn’t blame her for that.She was pregnant.

The rest of the day was spent uneventful and in the evening CD and Nate decided it ws time to go home.They said their goodbyes and left.On their ride,CD was slumbering and when Nate pulled up in their drive,he carried her to the bedroom.He switched off all the lights and joined his wife in bed.He snuggled close to her and put his arm around CD’s waist and swollen belly.

Meanwhile Jinny and Teddy were lying in their bed.Teddy was almost asleep but Jin was wide awake.

“Teddy,hey Teddy”she shook his shoulder.

“Is something wrong?”he became immediately alarmed.

“No no.I just got that question in my mind and I can’t sleep”she smiled at how tender Teddy was.

“What question honey?”he asked relieved that everything was fine.

“About the baby.I’m wondering is it boy or a girl.What do ya think?”she touched her belly lovingly.Teddy chuckled.

“Well if you want to know we can go to the doctor and she will tell us.”

“I don’t want to know you silly,I’m just wondering”she stroked his cheek.Teddy just sighed.Jinny was getting weirder and weirder every day since she was pregnant.

“I think it’s a boy.”he smiled.

“A boy,why do you think it’s a boy?Why every man wants to have a son and not a daughter?What’s wrong with a girl?”Jinny almost yelled.

“Nothing’s wrong with a girl honey.Just calm down”Teddy kissed her.He knew he was in trouble now.

“I’m calm”Jinny said and turned her back to Teddy.He knew Jinny was upset so he tried to make her feel better again.He wrapped his arm around her belly and put his head on her shoulder.

“You know why I want this little one to be a boy? Because then he could defend his little sisters and brother”he smiled as Jinny turned to him.

“Wait a minute….his sisters and brother? Just how many kids are you planning to have?”she put her head on Teddy’s chest and he stroked her hair.

“Four.The first kid should be a boy, then I want to have twin girls and then a boy again.”

“Do I look like a baby-making machine to you?”she laughed.

“And how many kid do you want to have then?”

“Two - a boy and a girl.But I like your idea of a big brother protecting his little sister”she smiled.Then she snuggled close to Teddy and drifted off.

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Liked that???:D

awww cuteness! And pleaaaaasseeeee atttach your avator pic LOL






preggie Tracey :)

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo



preggie Tracey :)


AW, I like that movie a lot!!!!!!


but i LOVE this fic!!!!!!!! so more soon!!!!! and again, glad ur back!!!! :wave:

Yes, Rasa, I love it, of course! This is so great. Post more soon!

And Cat, what movie is that pic of Tracey from? Was that when she was really pregnant, or was just the character pregnant?

Originally posted by "Snowfall"
Yes, Rasa, I love it, of course! This is so great. Post more soon!

And Cat, what movie is that pic of Tracey from? Was that when she was really pregnant, or was just the character pregnant?

It's from "Backlash" aka "Justice" ... Tracey was pregnant, the character was not... mostly they hid it... but in that scene it's pretty obvious I think ;)

if my damn page was up I could show ya more pics... but since it isn't *growls*

well this one's nice too :) A girl I used to know made it for me...

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
It's from "Backlash" aka "Justice" ... Tracey was pregnant, the character was not... mostly they hid it... but in that scene it's pretty obvious I think ;)

if my damn page was up I could show ya more pics... but since it isn't *growls*

well this one's nice too :) A girl I used to know made it for me...

Hey, thanks, Cat. That's neat.

And aw, I love "Cradle Will Rock"....it's such a sweet episode. :)

Here's more! I know it's not much but i just love leaving you guys hanging:p

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The next morning Nate woke up because the sun was shining to his face.He had about half an hour before he had to get up but he decided that he wouldn’t fall asleep so he got up anyway.He looked at his wife, still sleeping soundly,smiled and went to the shower.When he was finished he got dressed and went to the kitchen to make breakfast.After he was done,he wrote a letter to CD, had breakfast and left for work.

CD was woked up by a ringing phone.She growled and picked it up.

“What?”she asked slighty annoyed.

“Good morning to you too”she heard Jinny chuckling.

“Hey Jin.Sorry about that.You just woke me up.So what are we going to do today?”

“Shopping.I have to buy new clothes because I can’t fit into my old ones.What do ya say?” she asked, although she knew the answer already.

“Sure.Come to my place in about….an hour key?”

“Uh-huh.See ya”Jinny hung up.


CD slowly got up and went to have a shower.She took off her pyjamas and looked at herself in the mirror.She was chunkier than she was a week ago so she frowned but then she suddenly felt something strange in her belly.

“Holy ****!”she exclaimed and ran to the bedroom.

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hehe,that's it for this time.Let me know if ya want more!

what's going on in CD's belly???? More!!!!!!!!

It was just the baby kicking, right? RIGHT? Don't leave us hanging, post more soon!


And it's nice to have you back again, Rasa!

Originally posted by "Snowfall"
It was just the baby kicking, right? RIGHT? Don't leave us hanging, post more soon!


And it's nice to have you back again, Rasa!


Couldn't have said it better myself!!

Originally posted by "Snowfall"
It was just the baby kicking, right? RIGHT? Don't leave us hanging, post more soon!


And it's nice to have you back again, Rasa!


Couldn't have said it better myself!!

Originally posted by "Snowfall"
It was just the baby kicking, right? RIGHT? Don't leave us hanging, post more soon!

No,it's not the baby!

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CD slowly got up and went to have a shower.She took off her pyjamas and looked at herself in the mirror.She was chunkier than she was a week ago so she frowned but then she suddenly felt something in her belly.

“Holy ****!”she exclaimed and ran to the bedroom.She picked up the phone and dealed Jinny’s number.

“Hello”Jin answered.

“Oh my god Jinny”CD squealed.

“CD?What’s wrong?”Jin was worried.

“Everything’s ok.It’s perfect!I just felt it! I felt my baby!”CD was nearly jumping up and down.

“That’s great, honey!When did it happen?”Jin was very happy for her friend.

“Just now. I went to the bathroom to have a shower, got undressed and was looking at the mirror when I felt it.It’s so…so..WOW”CD was explaining everything in detail.

“So you’re naked now?”

“Yea,why?”

“Thank you very much CD.Now I’ve got a mental ‘naked pregnant CD’ image in my head”Jin laughed.

“Oh yeah?What are YOU wearing now?”CD decided to have some fun.

“Um,pants and a sweater,why?”Jinny was a little confused.

“And what color is your underwear?”CD asked in a sexy voice.

“CD,are you’re trying to do what I think you are?”

“Come on baby.Where’s your imagination?So what color?”CD was trying to hold back her laughter now.

“CD,you’re gross!God!”Jin said in a disgusted voice.Then she heard CD’s laughter from the other side and burst out laughing herself.After a couple of minutes CD spoke up.

“So you’re coming in an hour right?”

“Yeah”

“I’ll be waiting for you baby”CD whispered in a husky voice and then hung up.She laughed and went to the bathroom.

About 45 minutes later there was a knock on CD’s door.She assumed it was Jinny so she put on ‘I’m sexy’ face and opened the door.

“Well hello there stranger”she said and winked her eye.Jinny rolled her eyes.

“What’s wrong with you?!”she yelled.CD giggled and opened the door wider and Jinny came in.

“I’m horny”she simply said.Jin laughed and went to the living room to sit down.

“Ya ready?”she asked.

“Yeah,I’ll just take some money”

“I took Teddy’s credit card”Jin smirked and waved it in front of CD’s face.


Half an hour later two pregnant women were walking down the mall.They tried to go to every shop.CD and Jinny were buying all the things they liked no matter if they needed it or not.Every half an hour they would go to some cofe to eat ice-cream or a doughnut or some pie or some hot chocolate.

“Oh my god”Jinny almost squealed pointing to the window-case.

“It’s so so sweet.I want to buy one”CD said and went into the shop.

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Ok,I know I'm a terrible liar,but who cares!:lol:

P.S.want more?

LOL that was funny!!!!! Too bad Nate didn't see that...

LMFAO!!!!!!!!! ROTF even!!!!! that was SOOOOOO great!!! I loved it so much!!! :D :)

Hey, that was so fantastic, Rasa! I LOVE it! I'm so relieved that it was just the baby kicking.

And wow, CD, if you're horny, just grab your hubby! ;) :D

Since today the strike is over,I'll post on this fic too.

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“It’s so so sweet.I want to buy one”CD said and went into the shop.

After work,Nate called CD and she told him she and Jinny were at their’s.Half an hour later Teddy and Nate came in through the door.

“Honey”Teddy called.

“I’m home!”Nate added and smirked.

Jinny and CD were sitting in the living room.They were a little nervous.

“We’re gonna tell the now?”CD asked and Jin nooded.Teddy and Nate came to them and kissed their wives.Then they both sat down and Teddy asked:

“So how was your shopping ladies?”

Jinny and CD looked at each other and stood up.

“We’ve gotta tell you something”Jin lowered her eyes.Both Nate and Teddy got worried.

“What’s wrong?”Teddy asked.

“Nothing’s wrong it’s just…”CD trailed off.Nate looked at them and smiled. He knew Jin and CD did something they wouldn’t like.

“You wear them so well, those innocent eyes, you're putting on a wonderful disguise.“ Nate said as he looked at their puppy eyes.

„So what have you two done?Tell us.We won‘t get mad promise,right Nate?“Teddy looked at Nate who nooded.

„Well, we bought a......“CD couldn‘t find the right words.

„A thing“Jinny quickly said.

„Yeah a thing.Two things to be exact.Jinny bought on and I bought one.First I bought it“

„And then there was just one left.It looked so lonely so i didn‘t have a heart to leave it there so i bought it too“Jinny said and waited what for the guys to speak.

„So what did you buy?“Teddy asked confused.CD and Jinny went to the kitchen and took their ‚things‘. Teddy and Nate sat in the living room and wondered why the woman were so nervous.Finally they came back. When the guys saw those ‚things‘ they started to laugh.


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That's it for this time.And now you guys post more on your fics.PLEASE????

o yeah, that was GREAT, so get back here and post more!!

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
o yeah, that was GREAT, so get back here and post more!!

:yeahthat

Aw, yeah, that was great! Thanks for posting on this, too! And to thank you for ending the strike, I posted on both of my fics tonight! ;) :D Post more soon!

Ok ok I'm here and posting more!lol

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When the guys saw those ‚things‘ they started to laugh.

„A puppy?You were so nervous because you bought puppies?“Nate asked between laughter.Jin and CD felt like dorks.

„What‘s so funny here?“CD asked as she put the puppy down and put her hands on the hips.

„And i thought you two bought men in a ‚Male auction‘ “Teddy teased.

„Well we didn‘t know if you wanted to have a puppy“Jin winced a little annoyed.She didn‘t like being the one that people laughed at.

„So you don‘t mind?“CD asked cheerfully.

„Of course i don‘t honey“Nate smiled and took the puppy.It was a really cute sandy little Labrador.Teddy followed Nate and now they both held a puppy each.

“What are their names?“ Teddy asked as he looked at the women. They just shrugged.

“We don’t know we wanted to pick out the names with you guys”CD stroked the puppy.

“Oh,I know a name for your dog CD.How bout you call him Nate?”Jinny grinned evily.

“Oh yeah?How bout you call him Dick?”Nate snapped back and grinned.

“I’m not calling my dog after the name of my little thingie”Teddy almost yealled. Everyone stared at him for a moment and then burst out laughing.Teddy didn’t understand what was so funny but the he realized what he had said.

“It’s not little”he stated somehow embarrassed.Everyone continued laughing and Teddy frowned.

“Ow come on baby.We know it’s not little.We’re just having fun”Jin said putting her hand on her husband’s shoulder.

“Really?It’s not?Can I see it?”CD sounded excited.Everyone looked at her.

“I just wanted to make sure”she explained herself.”I mean, what’s wrong with that?”she asked innocently.CD was enjoying this so much and wondered when they would get she was just joking.Well, apparently not very soon.

“You didn’t answer my question Theodore”CD said in a husky voice.

Teddy looked at her with the disbelief.He couldn’t believe in what was happening.’She must be joking’ he thought.But it looked so real.He couldn’t be sure.And CD was scaring him a little.She was pregnant and you could never know what was going on in the pregnant woman’s mind.Jinnyrealised CD was joking and decided to join her.

“Yea honey.Show CD your manhood.And then Nate will show me his.You don’t mind,do you CD?”Jin asked with a little smirk.

“No of course not”she said smiling and then started unbuckling Teddy’s belt.He jumped away from her.

“Whoa CD.Just stay right her”Teddy then turned to Nate”hold your wife buddy cause I’m not really fond of the idea of showing her my thingie”he said and sat down across CD”my BIG thingie”he added with the male pride.Then CD and Jinny burst out laughing.

“We were just joking.Did you really believe I’d let you show your thing to CD?”Jin stroked her husband’s cheek.Teddy felt like a dork.

“Of course not.I was joking too”he lied and then kissed his wife.At that moment the baby in her belly began kicking.

“I think there’s someone in there that want some attention too”Teddy joked and put his hand on Jin’s belly.They began kissing again and soon they were making out like a couple of teenagers.Nate and CD just sat there and looked at them.

“Ehem”Nate caughed”if you want some privacy just let us know.We have a guest bedroom you can use”Nate teased.Jin and Teddy stopped making out and looked at him embarrassed.

“That won’t be necessary.Let’s pick out the names for the puppies”Jin suggested and picked up her doggie.

“I know.Teddy,why don’t you call your dog Dick?”CD smiled evily.

“No way I’m calling my dog Dick”Teddy protested.

“Well I think it’s a nice name”

“Then why don’t you call YOUR dog Dick”he snapped.

“Because it’s your dog’s name.Come here you little Dick”CD grinned and took the puppy from Jin who just chuckled.

“Ok enough joking.How bout we call our puppy,um….Spike?”Nate spoke up.CD just nooded.

“That’s pretty name.And I’ll call my dog……Candy.Do you like the name CD?”Teddy grinned.Now it was CD’s turn to frown.She just rolled her eyes and didn’t say a thing.

“Teddy!”Jin almost shouted.Teddy became all worried immediately.

“What’s wrong?”he asked.

“I need you to go to the store”Jin smiled.Teddy sighed with the relief.He really thought there was something wrong.

“Ok.What do ya want me to get?”
Jinny smiled.Being pregnant wasn’t so bad after all.She just had to snap her fingers and Teddy would do anything.

“There is this little café.It’s address is Ghiradelli Square 69,I think.Go there and get me and ice-cream dessert with bananas and chocolate and nuts.Mmmmm”Jin couldn’t wait for her dessert to arrive.

“Oh yea and for me…you can get peanut butter and cookies.And the same thing Jinny asked for”CD added.Teddy kissed his wife and left.Nate watched him going out through the door.He was left there alone with two pregnant women.He had enough trouble with pregnant CD and now he had to deal with another one emotional unstable woman.He sighed and ran his hand through his hair.Then CD stood up.

“I hate to leave the party here but I’m kinda tired.I think I’ll go upstairs and have a nap”she said,kissed Nate and left the room.So now there was only Nate and Jinny.


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Anyone wants more???

OF COURSE WE WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


:D :D

Now that was a silly question! Yes, we want more, that was great! This will be interesting, pregnant Jinny and Nate left alone together....:lol: Post more soon!

Originally posted by "Snowfall"
Now that was a silly question! Yes, we want more, that was great! This will be interesting, pregnant Jinny and Nate left alone together....:lol: Post more soon!

I think you'll be surprised after you read what pregnant Jinny and Nate could do when they're alone.....;)

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“So how are ya doing?”Nate asked not really kowing what to say.

“Ok.My morning sickness is still pretty bad, I’m hungry all the time, my mood changes every ten minutes, my back sores and my legs are swollen.Nothing unusual”Jin smiled.Nate smiled as well. Soon they began talking about their childhoods.

“Ya know,when I was a little girl I always wanted to meet my prince on the white horse. I had this dream to get married when I finished the university.I wanted to have five children. Five girls actually”Jin smiled as she remembered her childish dreams.

“All of them girls?Didn’t ya want a boy?”Nate laughed.

“I thought that all the boys sucked.So where was I?Oh yea,five girls.I wanted to live in a house with a picked fence and to have a dog.My husband would come back from work and our girls would ran to him.And then I would serve the dinner and we all would eat and chat”

“But you have what you wanted..I mean,you have found your prince,you have a dog and you’re going to have a baby.”

“Yes.Teddy makes all my wishes come true.And what about you?What did you want as a child?”

“Well,when I was a child I didn’t think of my future.But as a teenager I had this dream about a beautiful wife and a bunch of children. And now I have CD and I realized that she surpassed all my expectations.She’s beautiful,she’s smart,she’s fun,she’s pregnant with our baby and the most important she loves me”Nate said loking through the window.

“Boy,you are in love”Jin teased.

“Yeah,I am.I really love CD.I always tell her that,I kiss her,I do whatever she wants me to,but I feel that what I do is not enough.It’s like,I don’t know how to express my feelings.They’re too deep and too strong and….”Nate stopped speaking as he heard Jinny sniffing.He looked up at her and saw she was crying.

“Jin?Something’s wrong?”Nate asked a little worried.

“No.Just you’re so sweet”she said as she whipped her tears.It wasn’t usual that Nate would open up to her and tell all about his feelings.


CD woke up from the sweet dream about her and Nate.She sat up on her bed and looked at the clock.Then she slowly stood up and decided to go downstairs. But as she came to the end of the stairs,she stopped.There,on the couch in her living room,was Nate,kissing Jinny.They were all over each other and didn’t even notice her presense.Tears started roling down CD’s cheeks.She had never thought Nate and Jinny could do this to her.


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So how was that???

Geez, Rasa, are you bound and determined to give me a heart attack, or what?! Now get back here and make it all better! :mad:




Please?

Originally posted by "Snowfall"
Geez, Rasa, are you bound and determined to give me a heart attack, or what?! Now get back here and make it all better! :mad:




Please?


EXACTLY!!!

CD woke up from the sweet dream about her and Nate.She sat up on her bed and looked at the clock.Then she slowly stood up and decided to go downstairs. But as she came to the end of the stairs,she stopped.There,on the couch in her living room,was Nate,kissing Jinny.They were all over each other and didn’t even notice her presense.Tears started roling down CD’s cheeks.She had never thought Nate and Jinny could do this to her.

“No!No!”Jin and Nate heard CD shouting.Nate jumped from the couch and ran upstairs. He thought that something bad had happened.Jin followed him as fast as her pregnant body let her.Nate opened the door of his bedroom and saw CD was all shaking in her sleep and shouting.He realized she was having a bad drem.H esat bown beside her and gently shook her.CD opened her eyes and saw Nate’s face. She realized that all that was a nightmare.

“Oh Nate”she wrapped her arms around his neck and started crying.Nate rocked her until she calmed down.Jinny just stood in the doorway and watched everything.

“What’s wrong baby?”Nate whispered into CD’s ear.

“I dreamt you were cheating on me with Jinny”CD said still a little upset.

“I would never do that.You know that”Nate tried to comfort his wife.

“Of course I know.I love you”CD smiled and touched his face.

“And I love you too”Nate replied and kissed her.

“Ehem”Jinny interrupted their kiss.CD and Nate pulled apart and looked at her.

“Sorry bout that”CD said as she started getting up.

“that’s ok”Jin said and then she felt someones hands wrapping around her belly from behind.It was Teddy.He kissed his wifes neck and let her go.

“You got the food?”Jinny exclaimed.Teddy looked at her surprised.He came back and hoped for a warm ‘welcomeback’ kiss, but all Jinny could think about was food.

“It’s downstairs”he snorted.Jinny didn’t say a thing and rushed to the food,closely followed by CD.

When the guys came to the kitchen,their wives were eating.Teddy looked at CD’s bowl and almost got sick.He couldn’t recognize the food in it but the mass looked disguisting.

“What is THAT?”he pointed to the bowl.

“Oh,it’s the ice’cream dessert,cookies,peanut butter and melted margarine.Wanna try it?”she out a spoon in fron of his mouth.

“Uh,no thanks.I prefer my life”he teased and immediately got smacked to the head with a paper.He turned aroung and saw Jinny smiling.She was holding a paper in her hand.

“Next time it will be not a paper but something a lot more harder”she said with a straight face.And then smiled.

“Yeah,buddy”Nate agreed with Jin and earned a glare from Teddy.

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awww i'm really glad it was just a dream!!!! that was excellent!! :)

About time, Rasa! I had to be a "good girl" for toooo long! ;) ;) :D . But it was so worth it. That was wonderful! Post more soon!

I'll post more on this too

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* Two months later*

Nate was sitting at his desk doing paperwork.His phone rang and he heard a teary CD’s voice:

“Nate”she said almost crying.

“CD what’s wrong???”Nate was all worried at once.

“I’m too fat”she shouted angrily.Nate sighed.CD wasn’t in any emergency.

“You’re not fat,honey”he said and CD cut him off.

“I can’t fit into any of my clothes.And I was able to wear them two weeks ago”she shouted.

“Honey,you’re 22 weeks ahead.It’s normal that---“

“Normal?You say it’s normal?I look like I’d have swallowed a pumpkin and you say it’s normal?!?I would be getting fat if it weren’t you!”she yealled so lound that Nate had to take the phone away from his ear.He sighed.

“CD,honey.You look beautiful”Nate tried to calm her down but she didn’t listen.

“I look fat!You want me to spell that for you?”

“Candy…..”

“Yeah,whatever…bye”she hung up the phone before Nate could say a word.Raina,who sat in front of him, just smiled.She understood what was going on.

“Nate,why don’t you go home to your wife?You could do your paperwork later”she suggested.Nate decided to do that and anhour later he opened his house door,carrying a big bonquet of dark red roses.He thought that they might cheer his wife up.He was greeted by Jinny.

“Hey Jin.Where’s CD?”he asked,hoping Jin wouldn’t smack him.She looked really annoyed.she didn’t say a thing, just walked to the living room.There Nate saw CD and smiled.

“Your baby’s father is here”Jinny said sarcasticaly and snorted.Nate was surprised.He didn’t understand what he had done to incur the disfavor. He threw his sweetest smile and gave CD the roses.

“These are for me?”she asked a little upset.

“Yes,you like them?”Nate asked concerned.Suddenly CD began to cry.

“You think I’m fat.I’m not attractive to you anymore”she said between the sobs and went upstairs.

“See what you’ve done?!”Jinny snapped angrily.

“I!? I didn’t nothing!”Nate tried to defend himself but Jinny just rolled her eyes and went to CD.Nate sat down and ran his hand through the hair.This was getting harder with every day.CD and Jinny sometimes were acting like bitches and their husbands tried to stay out of their way.Then his cell rang.

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aw! poor Nate!!!!!!! :( :( Glad u posted and can't wait for some MORE!!!! :)

Pregnant women and hormones......ah, the joys of life. ;) :lol: Poor Nate! That was so wonderful! Post more soon!

Haha, how does it feel to get a new page, Rasa? ;) ;) :D

:newbie:
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Whoohooo!!!!! A new reader!:D This post is for the newbie!!

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Then his cell rang.

“Basso”

“Hey Nate,What are ya doing tonight?”he heard Teddy’s voice.

“I think I’m gonna find some nice dark hole to hide in and stick there all evening.Wanna join me?”Nate said sarcastically.

“Well I was thinking we could go drink some booze but as I see now it’s not such a good idea.What happened?”Teddy asked.He assumed it was something with CD and Jinny.So Nate told the whole story and invited Teddy over to his house. He really didn’t want to be alone with two pregnant women.

When Teddy arrived he immediately went upstairs and knocked to the bedrooms door.

“Get the hell outta here you bastard!” he heard Jin’s voice.

“I missed you too honey”Teddy shouted and rolled his eyes.

Then the door opened and he was dragged into the room.CD was sitting on the bed with her eyes all red, and Jin sat down beside her.

“Can I ask you a question?”CD asked annoyed.

“Yea,sure.What do ya wanna know?”Teddy got the feeling that this wasn’t good.

“Why are all the men jerks.I mean,they act like senseless pigs and then ask you what’s wrong?!?” by the time CD stopped speaking, she was standing in front of him and waving her hands.

“So you’re saying I’m a pig and a jerk?”Teddy was a little annoyed.

“YES! That’s exactly what I meant!”CD shouted at him. She didn’t really know why she was doing that, she just knew she had to yell at someone.
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“Excuse me! I didn’t nothing wrong! Why are you acting like a bitch here?!” Teddy yelled angry and earned a smack across his face. Jinny then shoved him out of the room,telling him that she would be spending the night at CD’s and that he and his macho friend (meaning Nate) could get out of the house and spend the night wherever they wanted to. So the two men decided to go to the bar and have a drink or two. They were drinking and swearing at the women race, and by the end of the night they were both so drunk that could barely stand on their foot.

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LMAO that was soo funny! More!!!!

WAHOO!!!!!!!!! That was great!!! Poor Nate and Teddy tho!!! :( LOL, can't wait for more!!!! :) :D :wave:

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
WAHOO!!!!!!!!! That was great!!! Poor Nate and Teddy tho!!! :( LOL, can't wait for more!!!! :) :D :wave:

What Lisa said!