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Rebel Queen 1980 07-15-2003, 01:53 AM Well,guys,I know I'm not through with my fan fic and I want to do
another one after that,but I decided to write one tonight,
My other will be finished tomorrow ok.
This story is taking place in season 2,and Jo's got a rivalry
in a new tough girl named Erica
(Opening Theme)
The Girls Bedroom
Mrs.Garrett knocks on the door and Tootie opens it.
Mrs.Garrett(walks in) Good morning girls!
All: Good morning.
Jo:Mrs.G,can we at least have privacy while we get ready.
Mrs.Garrett :In a minute Jo,I have some important news,Today
a new student will coming in to take a test and her name is
Erica,she will be joining you at Eastland soon!
All: That's Great!
Later In the Cafeteria
Molly:So Nancy what's the scoop on the new student?
Nancy:I don't know much,All Sue Ann said was we're getting
someone new,but I didn't get to ask her anything else.
Suddenly a girl in blue jeans,a flannel shirt and a black leather
jacket walks in while all the girls are talking .
Erica (in a tough voice):Yo,is this is Eastland school.
Blair(extends her hand):Welcome!.Welcome!
Erica(snickers):Hey who's the prom queen?
Jo catches her and walks up
Jo(moves up):You got something to say!
Erica(angry): Beat it Fonzi!
Jo (raises voice)What did you say to me!!
Mrs.Garrett walks in before Jo does anything else.
Mrs.Garrett:Welcome Erica,I assume you've met-
Erica(cuts her off) Charlotte Bronson and Cleopatra!
Jo:(angry): That does it!
Mrs.Garrett(grabs Jo):Jo!we've been through this before!
Exit to Lounge
Mrs.Garrett:Ok Erica Jackson,you will room with Sue Ann Weaver.
(Erica walks into the girls room after she is told.)
Erica:So I guess you girls are all preppie lovas.
Jo:And what makes you think that?
Erica:Can it Private Benjamin!,I saw the way you walk!
Tootie:I wouldn't talk to her that way that if I were you.
Blair:Erica,You have just entered Eastland,It's a true experience.
Erica:Out of my way Material Girl.
Erica exits and pushes Blair out of her way.
Later That Night
Natalie walks up to Erica
Natalie:Hey Erica we were going to movie tonight you wanna come ?,We get free popcorn since I know a guy who works
at the snack bar and sometimes free drinks!
Erica:Is that all you get for free!
(Blair and Jo walk in arguing)
Blair:Jo I told I don't want to see another biker flick!
Jo:And I'm not seeing another love story!
Erica:That biker flick seems cool!
Jo:Great!,finally I got somebody took to take my side!
Erica:Hey guys ever been to a free movie?
Tootie:You mean sneak into the theater?
Erica:Yeah,me and my friends always did that in Harlem,Anyways
me and Jo can start a fight at the box office,and you,the fat girl
and that Barbie doll can sneak in,Then watch the ushers come to
check outside,me and Jo well run and sneak in the back.
(The girls all stare at Erica in shock)
To Be Continued....
Jo_Marie 07-15-2003, 04:56 AM Great Story, please post more soon
Rebel Queen 1980 07-15-2003, 09:39 PM Here's a little more.
Tootie and Natalie are upstairs talking before dinner
Tootie(worried voice):Natalie I don't asking Erica to
the movies was such a good idea after all.
Natalie(calmer voice):Tootie come on Erica's new and besides
when can we show her around Peekskill,besides she got stuck
with Sue Ann,you know she hardly does anything more because
she feels she's too ugly to go out anymore.
Tootie(calmer voice):Well,I guess you're right.
They then head downstairs to serve dinner
Erica stares at Tootie as she serves her some mashed potatoes.
Erica(rudely):You no slavery ended a long time ago.
Tootie(irritated):I know but this my punishment,keep moving
Erica: What did you do?
Tootie Well you we stole the school van and we-
Natalie(yells):Tootie will you shut up and serve!
Erica: You stole the school van and you what?
Jo(raises voice):Hey motormouth get a move on will you!
Erica (raises voice):Hey we're talking ok!
Jo gives Erica an evil look and then Mrs.Garrett comes in
Mrs.Garrett:All right why isn't this line moving!,dinner's almost over and you need to start clearing out.
Jo:Well you'd better go tell motor lips over there!
Mrs.Garrett: Jo!
Erica:Keep talking and you will have no lips.
Jo: You wanna try me!
Mrs G:Girls never mind!,Just hurry up.
Jo continues serving and Erica moves out of the line.
More to Come later !!
HIGH ENOUGH 07-15-2003, 10:17 PM This is super! I'm starting another fan-fic. tonight myself. Anyways, keep it up! BTW, I HATE Erica for making fun of my girl-friend (Blair) Jo needs to punch her. :lol:
Rebel Queen 1980 07-16-2003, 11:17 PM Ok,I'm not very busy tonight,so I'll post more.
After dinner in the lounge,Mrs.Garrett is sitting down on the
couch and reading a magazine,and Jo and Blair are playing
Scrabble when Tootie and Natalie walk in.
(Lounge)
Tootie:Hey you guys,I thought that we were going to the movies
tonight,You two are still going aren't you.
Jo:Oops,sorry Tootie,I guess we forgot.(get ups to clean.)
Blair:Here,here,(she get ups and helps Jo clear up the table.)
Jo:By the way will Motorboat Jackson be joining us?
Mrs.Garrett:Jo,be nice you know how tough being new can be,
you have your ride on the boat remember.
Jo:Sorry Mrs.G
Mrs.Garrett:Did you girls invite Erica?
Natalie:Yes,last night.
Mrs.Garrett:Good!,I'm sure all of you will become good friends,
why don't you ask Sue Ann to join you also.
Natalie:Oh Mrs.Garrett, Sue Ann never goes out anywhere.
Mrs.Garrett:Well alright,if you say so.
Erica then barges in.
Erica:Yo.are we going or what?!
Natalie:Erica,sorry to keep you waiting.
Jo:Alright,lets go.
Mrs.Garrett:Have fun girls and be back early!
All:We will bye.
(At The Movie Theater)
The girls are all in the ticket line,it's a long one so they are
at the end,It's cold outside and they start to shiver.
Jo:If that line doesn't move any faster I'm going to
go inside right inside to punch the manager!
Erica:I think you should go for it!
Jo (glares at Erica):Right after I punch you!
Erica:Take your best shot!
Jo raises her right fist in a warning,But Blair stops her
Blair:Can't we all just try to get along?
Jo:Can the sweet talk Madonna!
Natalie:Jo shh!,you're going to get us kicked out.
They then started to go inside the theater.
Tootie:Let's stop at the snack bar first.
Natalie:Great,Tootie,Matt's the guy with the spiked haircut behind the counter,just tell you know me,I need to go to the restroom.
Tootie:Ok Nat.
Blair:Hold on Nat I'll come with you.
Blair and Natalie head into the restroom.
They walk in and see no long line
Natalie:Great there's no long line!(she walks inside a stall)
Blair goes into a stall as well,they both lock their doors.
Blair:Natalie,there's no toilet paper in this stall!
Natalie takes out a roll of toliet paper out the holder
and rolls it over to Blair.
Blair:Thanks! (she picks it up)
Natalie:No problem,there were two rolls in this stall.
After that they wash their hands and head out to look for the others,Tootie is at the snack bar getting popcorn and drinks,
but Jo and Erica are nowhere to be seen.
Matt:Can I get you anything else ladies?
Tootie:Um,one box of Jujubes please.
Matt:There you go ,Thank you.
Tootie: Anytime.
Natalie:Tootie,where are Jo and Erica?
Tootie:I thought that they went with you.
Blair:No I went with her,where are they!
Tootie:I don't know.
Blair:In the words of Jo,when we find those two,
''I'm gonna loosen some teeth!
Tootie:Well the movie is about to start so come on,they probably
went inside early to catch the previews.''
Natalie:Maybe you're right.
They follow Tootie inside.
After a while the movie starts and still no Jo or Erica
Suddenly the theatre lights turn on,the movie is stopped
and two ushers come down the aisles with flashlights.
Usher1:Have you caught her yet?!
Usher2:Not yet,the girl with the ponytail was pretty quick.
Tootie,Natalie and Blair all gasped at this.
Blair:Oh my word!
Usher1:I got her now!,alright young lady come with me!
Usher2:The other one in the black jacket was easier to catch.
The usher walks holding to Jo,the other holds on to Erica,
A man walks to down to their aisle.
Man:Excuse me ladies,but were those two with you?
Natalie:Yes.
Man :Sorry,but you all have to go to down the Peekskill Police
Station these two who were both on probation got caught sneaking into a movie by the ushers.
They all gulp and follow the man outside the theater.
More to come later!
Rebel Queen 1980 07-19-2003, 06:08 PM Everybody,I'm gonna be gone on vacation this week,probably
for about three or four days,but I'll post more when I get back,
in the meantime enjoy what I have down so far!:wave:
Jo_Marie 07-22-2003, 04:05 AM It's really Good Please post soon :)
james_baby87 07-22-2003, 03:03 PM Post when you can
Rebel Queen 1980 07-25-2003, 09:57 PM Hey guys I'm back!,Here's more.
(Eastland Lounge)
Mrs.Garrett is talking to Mr.Parker .
Mr.Parker:Anyways Edna I think you have done a wonderful
handing the girls work around here until the van damage is paid.
Mrs.Garrett:Oh it was no trouble at all Mr.Parker.
The phone rings and Mrs.Garrett answers it
Mrs.Garrett:Hello?,Tootie?!where are you?!
Tootie:We are at the Peekskill Police Station Mrs.Garrett,
Jo and Erica got caught sneaking into the movie and they
got arrested!,please hurry and don't be mad at us!
Mrs.Garrett:What?!!,alright I'll be there as soon as I can.
Mr.Parker:Someone hurt?
Mrs.Garrett:Oh no,I forgot to pick the girls up at the movies.
Mr.Parker :The late show just started a few minutes ago.
Mrs.Garrett: They didn't like the movie.
Mr.Parker: Oh well hurry along.
(Peekskill Police Department.)
Jo and Erica are inside the jail.
Jo:Great first Mrs.G tells me to be nice to ya
and the next thing I know I'm in the slammah!
Erica:Chill out this ain't no big deal!
Jo:Blow it out your guchie bag!,I'm already on probation!
Erica: Well so am I!
Jo: What did you do?
Erica:I threatened to assault my old gym teacher in Harlem.
Suddenly Mrs Garrett shows up
Mrs.Garrett:Girls!!!
Jo: Mrs.G!!!
Mrs.Garrett:Erica I'm greatly disappointed in you,You can not
come into Eastland school acting like you own the show!
Erica:Cool it!,don't get your support hose tied in a knot!
Jo snickers at this and Mrs.Garrett scowls at her.
Mrs.Garrett:I am talking to you! and I won't settle for backtalk!Th
They then head out to talk to the Probation officer.
james_baby87 07-28-2003, 03:59 PM Post more!
Swimfan85 07-28-2003, 04:12 PM Originally posted by Biker Chick/Jo Fan
Post more!
ditto!! add more!
JDS84 07-28-2003, 07:07 PM I like it. Post more!
Rebel Queen 1980 07-28-2003, 11:36 PM Thanks again! And now here's more!
Probation Officer: Excuse me?,but who is in charge of the
two juvenile females who snuck into the Peekskill Theater?
Mrs.Garrett:That would be me Mrs.Edna Garrett.
Probation Officer:Haven't we met before?
Mrs.Garrett :Well,yes,it the was the stolen van incident.
Probation Officer :I thought so,anyways the case on Joanna Marie
Polniaczek and Erica Dawn Jackson will be a curfew of ten o'clock
and four months added to their probation,any violations by here
whatsoever according the judge will result in juvenile hall .
Mrs.Garrett:Are you sure,that seems so harsh.
Probation: They have to learn some time.
Mrs.Garrett:Well alright,come on girls let's go home.
Later at Eastland (Mrs.Garrett,Erica and Jo are talking in the Lounge while Blair,Natalie and Tootie head on up to bed.)
Mrs.Garrett:Girls,I'm greatly disappointed in both of you!,
I send you out to have a good time and to make friends,
but you two instead decided to boil a pot of trouble!,and Jo
how could you be so stupid!,Why couldn't have you reasoned!
Jo then starts to sob and tears fall down her eyes,she fights
to keep from crying in order to answer Mrs.Garrett.
Jo:I'm sorry Mrs.G.,honest,when Erica asked me to sneak with her,I wanted to say no,I tried to say no,but I couldn't,I was
afraid she would think I was a sissy or something!
Mrs.Garrett:Jo that's not the point!,go upstairs!,we talk
more tomorrow morning,Erica stay here I need to talk to you.
Mrs.:Well Miss Jackson,what do you have to say?
Erica: I'm sorry okay.
Mrs.Garrett: Sorry doesn't cut it Erica,do you know the amount
of trouble you got yourself into,not only with the police,you were
to have started classes at Eastland next week,but you are now
expelled,and you will be joining the girls tomorrow morning
before six o'clock to get ready before you start serving meals.
Erica:What?!,you mean I have to work in that dump,you call
a kitchen,that's not fair!,I'd rather hitchhike back home!
Mrs.Garrett:Uh live's not fair honey,sometimes you just
have to learn to suffer the consequences,now come along.
Mrs.Garrett walks with Erica into the kitchen.
Mrs.Garrett: Howard!,Howard!.Howard!
Howard comes into the Cafeteria ,he winks at Erica.
Howard:Nice try honey,but sneaking in the school dietician
after Twinkie curfew won't get you any junk food
Mrs.Garrett:Howard,this is our new student Erica she
will joining the wonderful kitchen staff tomorrow.
Howard:Great!,Tootie never takes out the garbage,you're hired!
Erica: Trash taker!,what?!
Mrs.Garrett:Honey,you only die from the smell!,now off to bed!
remember you have to get up early !
Erica: Yeah,Yeah
She goes upstairs.
More to come later !
james_baby87 07-29-2003, 03:25 PM Post more soon!
Rebel Queen 1980 08-01-2003, 12:45 AM Ok,here some more
(The Girls Bedroom) Erica slips quietly into Jo's bed by mistake,
and goes to sleep,after awhile Jo begins to toss and turn and
bumps her head against Ericas,She wakes up and turns on the
lamp angrily to see who it was
Jo: You!,get out !
Natalie wakes up from the glare of the lamp.
Natalie:Who ever turned on the lamp,turn it off!
Jo: Sorry Nat,but someone's been sleeping in my bed!
she lifts the blanket and pushes Erica down to the floor.
Erica: Hey where am I supposed to sleep?!
Jo grins at her wickedly and looks over at Blair.
Jo:Why don't you go over there and join Goldilocks?
Natalie laughs at this and Jo turns out the lights.
Early Morning soon comes.
Jo is banging on the bathroom door.
Jo:Move it Princess Di!!
Blair: Turn Blue!
Tootie:You guys hurry up!,we almost overslept!
Natalie:You were the one who didn't set the alarm!
Tootie:It was late and I was tired ok.
Erica is still asleep on the floor and Jo kicks her.
Jo:Ay!Rise and Shine!
Erica:What is it?
Natalie:6:01 am
Erica:I'll be up by one
Jo:You'll be up by one foot if you don't get up!
Erica:Is that a promise?!
Jo: You bet it is!
Erica gets up fast.
Downstairs
Mrs.Garrett:Girls,move it,the students are lining up
Tootie: Oatmeal's here!
Natalie: Toast is ready!
Jo: The eggs are almost done!
Blair: I may have lost a fingernail in the oatmeal again!
Erica: The bacon's frying
Tootie wrinkles her nose after she notice a strong smell'
Erica:It's also burning!
They serve the students and then head to their classes.
More to come later!
james_baby87 08-01-2003, 03:45 PM Post more soon!
Rebel Queen 1980 08-04-2003, 11:55 PM Well I'm not busy tonight so I'll post more.
They head into their classes,Mrs.Garrett had even talked
Mr.Parker into giving another chance,It wasn't easy,but
Erica would be joing the group under her supervision.
Erica goes to school in her regular wadrobe and the
girls stop her before she enters Eastland school.
Tootie:Erica you can't enter school looking like that.
Erica :Why not?
Jo:This is a boarding school and boarding schools are private
not public,so that means you hafta wear uniforms just like the
rest of us,It's school policy or they won't let you in.
Erica:Uniforms!,I don't have a uniform.
Mrs.Garrett comes running cautiously.
Mrs.Garrett :Erica!,Erica,listen I forgot to give you this last night,
anyways run over to the bedroom and get dressed,I'll see if
they still can let you into your first day of classes.
Erica jerks away the uniform and hanger that Mrs.Garrett has.
( Inside the Classroom.)
Nancy is talking about Roger before class starts.
Nancy:Anyways Sue Ann,Roger and I went over to his friends
Chris's house last night and stayed there until 12am!,I snuck
into our dorm without getting caught,It's a good thing I left
the door open,I had so much fun I forgot lost track of time.
Sue Ann:So did Roger ask you to go all the way after all.
Nancy:Yes,but I didn't want to because I thought I needed
to learn about sex education before the time came.
The teacher comes in and their class begins.
More to come later!
james_baby87 08-05-2003, 05:44 PM Great! Post more soon!
JDS84 08-05-2003, 07:01 PM Awesome!!
Rebel Queen 1980 08-05-2003, 10:45 PM I'll post later,but tonight I'm thinking to see if I can any more
ideas though,I hope to have this done by the end of the week.
Rebel Queen 1980 08-08-2003, 01:06 AM Here's The Conclusion,Hope ya'll like it!
Tootie and Natalie are outside talking as they hurry to their next
class,Jo,Blair and Erica are running behind them.
Natalie:As if first semester couldn't get any worse!,they gave
me gym class right after lunch!,and now if I have to switch
languages ,I have Spanish class right after English Class.
Tootie:Relax Natalie,Finals will be here in no time.
Natalie:Thanks for the newsflash,Well adios amigos.
(They all head into their next classes.)
Blair,Jo,and Erica have Biology and Tootie rushes in to History.
Teacher:Ok Class last week we discussed ecology and nutrients
and I assume you all know about the nutrients found in food.
( The camera zooms into the Spanish class.)
Natalie is sitting at her desk and daydreaming
Teacher:Buenos Dias estudientes.Natalie!
Natalie: Ah, Si?
Teacher:Y como esta usted?
Natalie: a muy bozo.
The Teacher laughs.
Teacher:No Natalie,es muy bien.
Natalie: Oh.
(The camera zooms into the History Class)
Teacher: What is the opening of the U.S.Constitution called?
Tootie raises her hand.
Teacher:Yes Tootie
Tootie:It is called the Preamble.
Teacher:Very good,It is the Preamble.
(After awhile the lunch bell rings and they leave class.)
(In the Cafeteria )
Mrs.Garrett: Alright girls time to start serving
(The students start to line up and they serve,then they eat.
Tootie:Ugh,who forgot to butter the peas.
Eric:Just eat the stupid peas!
Jo:The meat's all burned!
Blair:Your the one who cooked it!
Jo:Can it Barbie,You almost put out molded bread!
Natalie:This food could've used a lot less onion!
Tootie: There's no salt or pepper on here either!
(Mrs.Garrett hears them arguing.)
Mrs Garrett:Girls!!!!
They all turn to face her.
Mrs.Garrett:Girls will you all stop fighting and eat!
All (unison):Yes ma'am.
(After dinner in the girls bedroom.)
Tootie: So Jo has Eddie brothed to write you lately.
Jo:No he's been busy lately trying to finish high school.
Blair:I thought he said he went into the Navy so he wouldn't
have to finish high school,I thought he was a sailor.
Jo:Well he is a sailor,but see they offered him help in taking
school if he wanted to,so I guess that's why he's doing it.
Erica:I all I want to do is get back to Harlem to see Jerome.
Tootie: Who's Jerome?
Erica: My boyfriend.
Tootie:What grade is he in.
Erica:He's not in any grade,he's nineteen,but he quit school
to the gang I was in,I was thirteen when I joined and I
met him,last year we and some kids from our gang got busted
because we stole money from all of the teachers at school.
Jo:I thought you said you assaulted a teacher.
Erica:I did but that was three weeks after !
Blair:What an added shame!
Jo:Well keep your mouth shut Blondie!
Blair:Joanne the Barbian has spoken once again!
Erica:Say,do you guys want to sneak out tonight and catch
the train to New York!,we could go have some fun!
All(unison) :No thanks!
Erica: Suit yourself.
The girls then get ready for bed.
The End,
Well I know it's not the best,but anways hope it's still good!
james_baby87 08-19-2003, 03:10 PM That was great! Sorry i didnt post sooner I was out of town and I had no Idea you finished it!
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