chapter 1: a dog called sammy

background info: Jinny and Teddy are married and live in an apartment with Jin's younger brother Casey. The 3 decided to get a house pet and they all decided on a dog ...big mistake


(Jin talking to her dad on the phone)

JD: Jinny girl,you don't want a dog,your just going to make your life more complicated. you'll have to come straight home after work to walk it. Trust me, owning a dog isn't what you think.

J:how would you know,you've probly never even touched a dog ,
let alone own one, anyway me, Teddy and Casey are going to the shelter saturday

JD: Saturday! why so soon? aren't you going to think about this?
does your apartment allow pets? Is Teddy ok with this? is Ca...

J: Because, no, yes, yes, and for your last question yes! i gotta go now talk to ya later dad,bye love ya *hangs up*

JD: *hangs up*

sorry it stinks but it's all i could think of - should i post more?

Good start! :thumbsup:

I think that is a nice start. Can't wait to see where this is going. More please.

thanks,heres more

*Saturday at shelter*
C:well, wich one, there's like a million here
T:i don't know
J:come on lets look over there *leads them to a row of dog
cages and walks over to the third dog* hey buddy, do ya like
me? *sticks hand in cage and he starts to lick her hand* awww
he likes me
T: are you sure he doesn't just like the bacon you ate for
breakfast
J:*to dog* you like me don't you?
C:he seems friendly enough



well thats all for now and HAPPY MEMORIAL DAY patriot:

Good so far!

pretty good so far, keep going:)

J:yeah he is pretty friendly
T:he's pretty cute too
C:how much is he
J:who knows? but i know a way we can get him for free,all we...
T:forget it Jin
J:but can i at least tell you how
C:fiiiiiiine go ahead
J: thank you, anyway i have a cousin who used to work here and when he quit he got to keep his uniform and since he lives here in San Fransisco i could go get it and come here about an hour before closing and pretend i work here and then hide in the bathroom or something then as soon as everyone is gone simply leave with the dog
C:you know, thats not a bad idea
T: Casey!were not going to do that!


should i continue?

lol! :lol: Good plan, Jinny (and *Nancy McKeon*) Can't wait to see how it turns it out! :)

It is great so far!

T: Casey! were not going to do that!
C: I know, but it is a pretty good plan
J:thanks Cas, * whispers to him* we'll talk when we get home


*later that night-jin's apartment*

C: Jin i'm not so sure about this, what if we get caught?
J: Cas, if anyone gets caught it's going to be me,im the one taking the dog
C: but i'm your "partner in crime" and if you get in trouble than i get in trouble
J: Cas, all you have to do is guard the hallway that the bathrooms are in
C:how, tell them sorry you can't go in there my sister is planing to take a dog
J: no,hide in a tree or sumthing and when somone is cuming page me or sumthing
C: im still not sure about this,what would your captain say?
J:she won't say anything because she won't find out
C:but...
J: Cas she won't find out,now i have to go call Mag,i'll be right back *walks out of room*

I have one word to say about this..... SUPER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Post more ASAP! :)

This is great

Interesting story... Stealing a dog though?? I just don't see it- She and Casey are cops they're supposed to prevent things like that from happening. I could see it if they were kids and pulling a prank like that, but not now... Just my opinion. Good luck on writing....

Originally posted by #1_Nancy_McKeon
Interesting story... Stealing a dog though?? I just don't see it- She and Casey are cops they're supposed to prevent things like that from happening. I could see it if they were kids and pulling a prank like that, but not now... Just my opinion. Good luck on writing....

I have to agree. Both are cops, trying to stop crime. Stealing doesnt seem probable, but good luck with the rest of the story!

*phone*
M:hello?
J:hey mag
M: Jinny,hey hows hound-hunting going?
J: great,we found a lot of great dogs
M:but your only getting one, right
J:yea,he's really friendly and really cute
M:i bet he's really exspensive to huh?
J:yea i guess so i mean evenchually (sp) you know...
M:evenchually (sp) what?your not going to steel him are you
J: no no of coarse not its not stealing its just borrowing without permission and with no intention to return
M:thats stealing jin
J: mag im not going to acually steal him,i'll pay for him-later
M:jin...
J: mag, im not even sure im going to do this,and if i do i will pay-later
M: jin,i really don't think you should do this
J:don't worry mag i gotta go Casey's waiting for me,bye *hangs up*


Brandon~can you post the next part,im not sure whether or not to make Jinny steal the dog cause like you guy's said she's a cop but like my mom said "knowing Jinny,anything's possible" and if you don't want to post can you at least tell me what you think she should do:wave:

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
Brandon~can you post the next part,im not sure whether or not to make Jinny steal the dog cause like you guy's said she's a cop but like my mom said "knowing Jinny,anything's possible" and if you don't want to post can you at least tell me what you think she should do:wave: [/B]

If the people want me to post on your story, I will. Do you want me to post, guys? :confused:

BlairFan101 (Brandon)

Yes we all want you to post on my story.


*whispers to fans* say yes you guys;)

OK, sorry I haven't posted the next part in ahile. I've been busy. Anyways, here goes. And I hope it's OK if I but this in book form.

THAT NIGHT

Jinny and Casey went up to the dog pound gates.
"Wait here." Jinny said. "If you see anybody comes.. hoot like an owl." With that Jinny climed the chain gate, and went to the door. She pulled on the door, but it was locked.
Jinny, then had an idea. She found a ladder, and put it on the side of the place. She them, climbed up it. But it wouldn't reach the roof. The ladder then, fell to the ground, making a lound clanking noise.
Luckily, Jinny held on to a rope. That came out of the sky. Jinny climed up it, and reached the roof. Then, she saw... Thedore!
"Let's go." He said. He walked over to the fan (which wasn't on) and climed in, same does Jinny.

They jumped, landing on there feets, like cats. They walked to the dog area.
Jinny opened the door, and Theodore went in, follwed by Jinny.
They walked over to the dog they found the afternoon, and Thedore picked the lock, took him out of his cage, and he gave the puppy to Jinny. All of a sudden, the burgualr alarm went off.
WIth Jinny holding the puppy, they ran to the door, and tried to open it, but it wouldn't open.

OK *Mancy McKeon* hope you like it! :)

This is great!!!

if anyones still reading...

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*the next morning at captains office*
C: how could you do sumthing so stupid?!?!
J:cap, i was going to pay but i ...
C:you what? you didn't have enough money?!
J:i did but i didn't think that...
C: jinny your a cop-what do cops do?
J:kick butt and fight crime...
C:and make sure people follow the law and wat u did yesterday...
J:what i did yesterday? what about my husband or my brother?!
C:well, since neither of them are cops they were...


is any1 reading?

I am post more!

C:well since neither of them are cops they were
J:what? arrested? they cant be! it was my idea!
C:i know it was but they helped you so all 3 of you are going to have to do sumthing.
J:hey i just thought of sumthing! all 3 of us have important jobs! cop and lawyer!?
C:well that is true but still...

I am still reading. I love it post more!!!

Originally posted by Lisa_Marie_Presley_Fan
If the people want me to post on your story, I will. Do you want me to post, guys? :confused:

BlairFan101 (Brandon)




ya wanna post again? lol cuz once again im tottally clueless! lol