fr00ti
05-08-2003, 10:48 PM
I have to write a final poem for creative writing, and I'm finished! What do ya'll think of it? Dont be too critical :p
"Through Her Eyes"
Look through her eyes
See what she sees
Youll never know how she feels
Until you really know her
You cant understand why
She would ever cry
Dont make conclusions
On what you think you know
She feels these things inside
With words she cant explain
But you must judge by the outside
And never see the beauty in her soul
Time has made her realize
Who she can trust
And all the times shes wondered
Is she caring too much?
Cause nothing lasts forever
In her dream world
And someday she will realize
Shes a special kind of girl
I Dream of Jeannie
05-08-2003, 10:58 PM
I think it's very good!:D
smoothe
05-08-2003, 10:59 PM
Nice poem for understanding women better you've just made me a legend in exploring a woman's true inner feelings...naw just playing it's really deep if i had to grade you i'd give you an A- the minus for,let me get this right through her eyes you can find all this out?It's good though!:D I can see a future for you in reaching people!
I dedicate this poem to the love of my life down below!
:wave:
ABlairican Pie
05-08-2003, 11:00 PM
Very good poem!!! Keep on writing!!!
Adamantium
05-08-2003, 11:01 PM
I think it's great. :)
Writing poetry has never been a strong point of mine. Although I have had the desire to write poems before.
Mossopp
05-09-2003, 02:09 PM
I really like that poem. Have you thought of maybe putting it to music?
*Pleasant Tomorrow*
05-09-2003, 02:47 PM
That sounds really nice, I think you did a great job. :)
*InThisMoment*
05-09-2003, 02:50 PM
Originally posted by smoothe
Nice poem for understanding women better you've just made me a legend in exploring a woman's true inner feelings...naw just playing it's really deep if i had to grade you i'd give you an A- the minus for,let me get this right through her eyes you can find all this out?It's good though!:D I can see a future for you in reaching people!
I dedicate this poem to the love of my life down below!
:wave:
Who!?
;) Raven Of Course! :lol:
*PinkLady*
05-09-2003, 05:43 PM
I like it! It's very good. :thumbsup:
Tuesday Weld
05-09-2003, 06:05 PM
You did a really great job! :D
¤I Love Clay Aiken¤
05-10-2003, 10:17 AM
Im not deep and all "poemy", but that was good Mads! WOO WOO!! :woohoo:
-*Leah*-
05-10-2003, 12:11 PM
That was great. I wish that I could write poetry that didn't sound like crap, but I guess Its just not meant for me to be a Poet.:rolleyes:
Swimfan85
05-10-2003, 12:53 PM
I THINK its wicked good!!!:)
britt britt
05-10-2003, 08:57 PM
wow, I wish I could write like that. Its really good.