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Very good job! I visualized your story in my head with the actual characters, and it looked pretty darn good. My favorite parts were when Steven says: I see, and Alex responds by saying, or in Mallory's case you F. I also liked where Alex says to Mallory: Anyone next to me would look dumb, you just happen to be at the top of the list. That part made me laugh. Anyway, nice job. I hope you write more fan fics in the future!