ooooh you haven't called me in days
it seems like its been weeks
I'm tired of you acting like I'm not even there
and like you don't ever care
I never understood why you'd ignore me
sometimes I wonder if you even notice me around

*chorus*
I'm sick of your crap you weird freak
You make me feel so alone
You brought me in a world of darkness
and I can't come out
You are sooo stupid you loser

I wait by the phone for it to ring
I'm wasting my time again
sometimes I wonder if you even give a ****

*chorus*
I'm sick of your crap you weird freak
You make me feel so alone
You brought me in a world of darkness
and I can't come out
You are sooo stupid you loser

GET THE HECK OUT OF MY FACE, YOU SICKEN ME
IF YOU CALL ME AGAIN I AM CALLING THE POLICE
OH WELL ITS NOT LIKE YOUR CALLING ANYWAY
YOU FAT PIECE OF GARBAGE
I'M SICK OF YOOOOOOOOUUUU!

I wrote that song, opinions please!

sounds pretty good to me

That was magical. Really hit me right in the heart.

Originally posted by Dr. Lu Delgado
That was magical. Really hit me right in the heart.
awww thanks!

http://www.kissfm.com/timages/page/avril/images/P1010005_jpg.jpg

Originally posted by AKA
http://www.kissfm.com/timages/page/avril/images/P1010005_jpg.jpg


ummm what the hell does that have to do with my song?

It's alright.

Your songs will be better if they had some sort of rhyme sceme.

Originally posted by Avril Lavigne



ummm what the hell does that have to do with my song?

It's symbolic of how your song - and Avril Lavigne - make me feel on the inside.

BJL, please if you are going to edit my posts don't switch my words around because thats not me.

Please don't take me seriously. And don't let what I posted ruin your day.

The truth is, there's no good reason why I posted the "no makeup" picture of Avril Lavigne. I just found it amusing. And I have no ill opinions of Ms. Lavigne (well, maybe a little), you, or your writing. I was kidding.

Relax. Take a deep breat and relax. And write a spiteful song about me.

Originally posted by AKA
Please don't take me seriously. And don't let what I posted ruin your day.

The truth is, there's no good reason why I posted the "no makeup" picture of Avril Lavigne. I just found it amusing. And I have no ill opinions of Ms. Lavigne (well, maybe a little), you, or your writing. I was kidding.

Relax. Take a deep breat and relax. And write a spiteful song about me.

whatever. Um, I never said anything bad lol it's not like I'm hypervenalating. :rolleyes:

Originally posted by Avril Lavigne
BJL, please if you are going to edit my posts don't switch my words around because thats not me.

I edited your post because it was rude to the person you directed it to. You're going to have to stop being so rude to others in your posts. People are getting tired of it.

The last verse doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the song. The other verses talk about how he never calls, and then you say if you ever call me I will call the police? Personally I think it would work a lot better with a different last verse.

i like it. it's original. :D

I'll just edit what you said to avoid any argument.

BJL

Originally posted by sara
The last verse doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the song. The other verses talk about how he never calls, and then you say if you ever call me I will call the police? Personally I think it would work a lot better with a different last verse. Is "I'll call the police" another one of those sayings that teenagers randomly throw out like "looser" and "get over it" and "it's getting old" and "Meanghya". Because someone wrote that to me a couple of days ago on chit chat, and that's crap. I couldn't figure out why he/she would say that to me.

Originally posted by kittflynn
Is "I'll call the police" another one of those sayings that teenagers randomly throw out like "looser" and "get over it" and "it's getting old" and "Meanghya". Because someone wrote that to me a couple of days ago on chit chat, and that's crap. I couldn't figure out why he/she would say that to me.
MEANGYA. Listen, the one reason why I even replied to you in that thread was to defend my friend. Nothing more, nothing less. That was 2 days ago. Im over it.. I could care less about it.

Originally posted by ¤MsConanOBrien¤

MEANGYA. Listen, the one reason why I even replied to you in that thread was to defend my friend. Nothing more, nothing less. That was 2 days ago. Im over it.. I could care less about it. Well, I do care. Defending a friend at the expense of another well meaning person is not noble. To insult and threaten someone just to get your kicks is not something that I would be proud of. Your non-friends deserve respect as well as your friends. If you were my freind I would tell that same thing. I would tell you to not be rude to people on my behalf. It wouldn't be appreciated by me if you were my friend.

Originally posted by kittflynn
Well, I do care. Defending a friend at the expense of another well meaning person is not noble. To insult and threaten someone just to get your kicks is not something that I would be proud of. Your non-friends deserve respect as well as your friends. If you were my freind I would tell that same thing. I would tell you to not be rude to people on my behalf. It wouldn't be appreciated by me if you were my friend.
I never insulted you. I just defended him and said you should get to know him better like me. Threatened?!?!?! Im sorry, but I dont threaten people. Oh, but I am very interested to see where I did threaten you. And, I didnt reply before "for kicks". I try my hardest to be nice to everyone on these boards and NOT fight with people--- its not worth it. I never said I didnt respect you either, although I only respect those, who respect me.

Originally posted by ¤MsConanOBrien¤

I never insulted you. I just defended him and said you should get to know him better like me. Threatened?!?!?! Im sorry, but I dont threaten people. Oh, but I am very interested to see where I did threaten you. And, I didnt reply before "for kicks". I try my hardest to be nice to everyone on these boards and NOT fight with people--- its not worth it. I never said I didnt respect you either, although I only respect those, who respect me. Either you or one of the others said, "I don't know you and if I did I would call the cops." That's insulting and a threat. Most importantly it just isn't necessary to stoop to such low suff on the board. We were having a discussion. What was the point of someone, anyone saying that to me?

Originally posted by kittflynn
Either you or one of the others said, "I don't know you and if I did I would call the cops." That's insulting and a threat. Most importantly it just isn't necessary to stoop to such low suff on the board. We were having a discussion. What was the point of someone, anyone saying that to me?
No, that wasnt me!

Originally posted by ¤MsConanOBrien¤

No, that wasnt me! No, but you stood by it. I wouldn't. I'd tell my friend to take it back.

Originally posted by kittflynn
Either you or one of the others said, "I don't know you and if I did I would call the cops." That's insulting and a threat. Most importantly it just isn't necessary to stoop to such low suff on the board. We were having a discussion. What was the point of someone, anyone saying that to me?

Not to be rude...but what the hell I am a racist rude self centered person so what the hey, you are very full of yourself and I really think the way you treat alot of people and there opinions are wrong...It seems to me you are not aware of common sence...all you do is read so far into comments that mean absolutly nothing that you give them a totally new meaning...oy... And I hate to say it but if I did know you I would probarly call the cops also...

Originally posted by Georgia's on my Mind


Not to be rude...but what the hell I am a racist rude self centered person so what the hey, you are very full of yourself and I really think the way you treat alot of people and there opinions are wrong...It seems to me you are not aware of common sence...all you do is read so far into comments that mean absolutly nothing that you give them a totally new meaning...oy... And I hate to say it but if I did know you I would probarly call the cops also... Could you clarify?:
[Not to be rude?
Full of yourself?
I probably would call the cops? (And how could that statement mean absolutely nothing'?
It seems to me that you are not aware of common sense?]

And, finally, if you hate to say that you'd call the cops then why have you said it twice now?

Originally posted by kittflynn
No, but you stood by it. I wouldn't. I'd tell my friend to take it back.
I didnt stand by it. I never agreed with it. Just because I defended Chris.. doesnt mean I defended everyone. I shouldnt have to tell her to take it back. Shes old enough to take care of herself without me playing mother.

Originally posted by ¤MsConanOBrien¤

I didnt stand by it. I never agreed with it. Just because I defended Chris.. doesnt mean I defended everyone. I shouldnt have to tell her to take it back. Shes old enough to take care of herself without me playing mother. That's a copout if I ever heard one.

Originally posted by kittflynn
That's a copout if I ever heard one.
Excuse me, but its not. Dont hold ME responsible for her actions. I stand by what Ive said. Do I stand by what everyone else has said? Maybe, maybe not.

Originally posted by ¤MsConanOBrien¤

Excuse me, but its not. Dont hold ME responsible for her actions. I stand by what Ive said. Do I stand by what everyone else has said? Maybe, maybe not. "Maybe, maybe not". As I said, a copout if I ever heard one. Do you think that, "If I knew you I'd call the cops" was an unecessary insult or not? That is all that I'm asking.

Would I, personally call the cops? No. Did I think it was a bit overboard? Yes. But, like I said-- I didnt say it. If you have a problem with what she said, take it out on her, not on me. And Im not "copping out."

Originally posted by ¤MsConanOBrien¤
Would I, personally call the cops? No. Did I think it was a bit overboard? Yes. But, like I said-- I didnt say it. If you have a problem with what she said, take it out on her, not on me. And Im not "copping out." Thanks, I appreciate and, I already have taken it out on her. She doesn't answer for herself.

Originally posted by kittflynn
Thanks, I appreciate and, I already have taken it out on her. She doesn't answer for herself.
Youre welcome. I just wish you wouldve asked me that sooner more directly.. we never wouldve had to go through all this.

I did ask you that sooner but you evaded it. That was the premise of this whole discussion.

Originally posted by kittflynn
I did ask you that sooner but you evaded it. That was the premise of this whole discussion.
Oh well, I mustve overlooked it because I wouldve answered it.