This takes place in season 5 or 6...you pick...during Edna's Edibles.

Blair*walks into Edna's Edibles with a guy, Don*: Hello all. This is Don. He goes to Langley...
Don: Hi...
Blair these wonderful people are Mrs. Garrett...
Mrs. G: How do you do? *shakes his hand*
Blair: Natalie
Nat: Hi!*shakes his hand*
Blair: And Tootie
Tootie: Hello...*shakes his hand*
Blair: Don and I were just out for coffee after class. *flips her hair.
Mrs. G: *looks at Jo then back at Blair* Blair, didn't you forget someone?
Blair *looks around*: No, I introduced all the wonderful people..*looks at Jo* And then there's Jo...
Jo: *doesn't even look up* Hi
Don: It's nice meeting all of you...*turns to Blair* LIsten, Blair, I have to go. You're meeting me in town tonight, right?
Blair: You bet *don kisses her her*
Don: alright, see you later! Again, it was nice meeting you all!*leaves*
Blair: Mrs. Garrett, I'm going to be leaving at about 5:30, so, I won't be here for dinner.
Mrs. G: Where are you going, and what time will you be back?
Blair: It's a surprise and...midnight?
Mrs. G: I don't like not knowing where you are...but, I suppose it's alright...
Blair: Thank you...I have to go get ready *goes upstairs*
Jo: I don't like him.
Nat: Why?
Jo: Just the rumors I've heard.
Tootie: What rumors?
Jo: Nevermind, they're just rumors.
Mrs. G: *looks a little concerned* Natalie, Tootie, could you girls go and start fixing dinner?
Nat: sure.
Tootie: Why not?*they go into the kitchen*
Mrs. G: Jo...
Jo: Like I said, they're probably just rumors.
Mrs. G: Jo, rumor or not, if Blair could be in danger, we need to help her.
Jo: I'll warn her to be careful.
Mrs. G: Thank you.
Jo: Yea, and you tell Natalie and Tootie to stay inside after dark and to not go anywhere alone.
Mrs. G:*looking concerned* Jo, is it really that bad?
Jo: Just tell them.
Mrs. G: Alright. Jo, you be careful too, okay?
Jo: I'm always careful.
Mrs. G: I know. Be extra careful.
Jo: Alright.
Mrs. G: *changing the subject* Come on, let's go fix dinner.
Jo: Umm, I'll be there in a minute. I'm gonna go talk to Blair. *goes upstairs*
Mrs. G: *goes into the kitchen*
~~~~Girls' room...Blair and Jo~~~~~
Jo: Hey Warner, we need to talk.
Blair: *notices her serious tone* okay...
Jo: YOu know that I don't give you advice on the guys you date, but I just wanted to tell you that I've heard things about Don, and, well, just be careful, alright?
Blair: *smiles* Jo Polniazcek(sorry if I spelled it wrong, I can never remember...), worried about Blair Warner...there's something new.
Jo: Just be careful.
Blair: I'm always careful.
Jo: Fine, if you're not gonna listen to me, fine-you deserve what you're gonna get.*goes downstairs*
Mrs. G: How'd it go?
Jo: I don't think she took me seriously.
Mrs. G: Maybe she did, but she didn't show it.
Jo: Maybe...Mrs. G, can I follow her tonight?
Mrs. G: Jo, I don't think that's necessary.
Jo: I do. Listen, you now Blair and I are like sisters, Well, sisters protect each other.
Mrs. G: I don't think it's a good idea. She'd be with someone, but, you'd be by yourself. I don't like it.
Jo: oh, come on, Mrs. G. Someone's gotta protect her.THE GUY COULD RAPE HER!
Mrs. G: *looks at Jo extremely worried*Is that what you've heard?
Jo: *softly* yea...
Mrs. G: I'll go talk to her...

GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lizzie i want MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Originally posted by Jo/Blair_fan
GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lizzie i want MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
tomorrow...after I write more...if I have time.

Great Job, I can't wait to see what happens next.

It's Great. I'm on the edge of my seat :)

For those of you who "aren't very patient"...lol

*Girls' room-Mrs. G and Blair-*
Mrs. G: *comes in* Blair, we need to talk.
Blair: Mrs. Garrett, I'll be fine.
Mrs. G: Blair, I don't know if therumors flying around are true ot not, but please, be careful.
Blair: Mrs. Garrett, I'm well aware of the rumors going around about Don.
Mrs. G: And you're going anyway?
Blair: Yes. I got to know him. He wouldn't do something like that. Not to me-not to anyone.
Mrs. G: I hope you're right, Blair, but I dont' like this one bit.
Blair: Well, I'm sorry you don't like it, Mrs. Garrett, but I'm going.
Mrs. G: I guess I can't stop you, but be careful. If anything happened to you, I'd..
Blair: *interrupting* Let's not think about that, okay? Mrs. Garrett, nothing's going to happen. Relax.
Mrs. G: Blair, I dont' think you're taking this very seriously.
Blair: That's because they're rumors-only rumors.
Mrs. G: Just promise me you'll be careful.
Blair: *seriously but kinda annoyed* Okay, I promise.
Mrs. G: *hugs her* thank you.
Blair: Thank you, Mrs. Garrett.
Mrs. G: For what?
Blair: For caring enough to come and warn me.
Mrs. G: Jo tried...
Blair: I know..I need to thank her too...
Mrs. G: *Smiles* Good...anyways, I'll let you finish getting ready. Make sure you tell me before you leave.
Blair: Alright.
Mrs. G: *leaves*
~~~~~half hour later, Blair comes downstairs~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Blair: Mrs. Garrett, i'm leaving.
Mrs. G: OKay. Remember, home by midnight.
Blair: Okay, see ya later.*leaves*
Jo: Mrs. G, you let her go?
Nat: Jo, why are you making suck a big deal outta this?
Tootie: Yea, Blair goes on dates all the time!
Jo: Nevermind.
*Natalie and Tootie look at each other-confused*
Mrs. G: Girls, let's just eat dinner, huh?
Jo: Perfect!
*they're eating dinner*
Nat: Hey, Mrs. Garrett, can Tootie and I go to a movie tonight?
Tootie: Yea, please?
Jo: NO!
Nat: Jo, we asked Mrs. Garrett.
Jo: I didn't mean to do taht. Sorry...
Tootie: So can we go, Mrs. Garrett?
Mrs. G: Actually, Tootie, I dont' think it's a good idea.
Nat: Why not?
Jo: Cause you shouldn't go out after dark.
Tootie: Oh, please, what's gonna happen-The boogieman's gonna scare us? Right Jo.
Jo: No, becayse bad things happen out there.
Mrs. G: Jo, relax. It's not like they're out there right now. Calm down.
Jo: Mrs. G, I'm not very hungy. I think I'll go do my homework. I don't feel well.
Mrs. G: Alright. I'll come check on you after dinner.
*Jo goes upstairs*
Nat: Why can't we go? It's not a school night!
Mrs. G: Because I'm your guardian, and I said so.
Tootie: How come Blair go to go out?
Mrs. G: Because Blair is in college and responsible for herself.
Tootie: Fine, you win. We'll stay here.
Nat:*sarcastically* Come on, Tootie. Let's go upstairs and do some math homework. That's so much more fun than going to a movie!*they go upstairs*
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*1:00 A.M.-Mrs. G is sitting on the couch, waiting for Blair*
Mrs. G: *looks at watch* One A. M. Where are you, Blair? I'm worried.
*In the window behind her you see...JO, walking away from the house-sneaking out*

I thought that was a good cliffhanger for ya..I have more but...I think I'll wait to type it!

More Asap. This is Great :)

It is great.

C'MON LIZZIE I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Glad you posted more. It's great. But, leaving us hanging like that !!! UGH!!

wow..it's funny how far ahead in writing this I am in typing it...lol...it's like, "I already know what happens.." lol...I hand wrote some more today in study hall..I have twice as much written as I have posted so far..(not counting this post)...in case that tells you how much longer it's gonna be...I'm not even hardly half way through...

*As you see Jo disappearing, Blair comes in*
Blair: *closes the door* Mrs. Garrett! What are you doing up?
Mrs. G: I wanted to make sure you got home alright. *looks at watch* you're late.
Blair: I know, and I'm really sorry. The car broke down. Don didn't get his oil changed after 3000 miles.
Mrs. gL I suppose it's okay, under the circumstances. I'm glad you're alright.
Blair: See Mrs. Garrett, I told you he wouldn't do anything.
Mrs. G: You're right, but I had no way of knowing whther or not those rumors were true. I couldn't just let you walk into danger.
Blair: I know, thank you, Mrs. Garrett.
Mrs. G: Of course! Now let's go get some sleep.
Blair: Great, I'm exhausted.
Mrs. g: It was a long day for all of us.*yawns**they go upstairs. Mrs. G goes to her room-Blair goes to the girls' room...but soon...*
Blair: *knocks on Mrs. G's door*
Mrs. G: *says while getting up and putting her robe on* come in...
Blair: *is Jo in here?
Mrs. G: No, she's sleeping.
Blair: She's not in her bed. What'd she do, decide to sleep in the oven?
Mrs. G: What?! She's not in your room?
Blair: No!
Mrs. G: Okay, calm down. Maybe she went out to look for you.
Blair: Why would she do that?
Mrs. G: She was worried.
Blair: Great...now she's out there by herself!
Mrs. G: Blair, stay calm. We don't know that she's in trouble. She might have taken off to blow off some steam.
Blair: Right...blow off some steam...yea...okay. What do we do now?
Mrs. G: You go back to your room and sleep. I'll go downstairs and wait for Jo.
Blair:*looks disappointed* Okay, I guess...
Mrs. G: Blair, you need your rest.
Blair: you're right...but will you wake me up the second you hear anything about Jo?
Mrs. G: Of course.
Blair: Alright...I guess I can go to sleep, then. *goes back to her room*
Mrs. G: *chuckles a little, but her expression quickly changes to worry and she goes downstairs and sits on the couch.* Where are you, Jo? You know you shouldn't be out there by yourself.
*An hour later, Mrs. G is pacing, and the phone rings...she practically runs to get it*
Mrs. G: Hello?
Hodges: Yes, I'm Officer Hodges with the Peekskill Police. Is this the residence of a...Jo Polniaczek?
Mrs. G: Yes...did you find her?
Hodges: Yes, but probably not how you'd hoped we'd find her.
Mrs. G: *really worried almost in tears* How is she? What happened?
Hodges: Well, there's more emotional damage than anything. However, they are keeping her in the hospital to make sure everything's all right.Also, she won't let anyone near her, and they need to do an examination...
Mrs. G:What happened?
Hodges:*softly* She was raped.
Mrs. G: *one tear rolls down her cheek* I'll be at the hospital in 5 minutes.
Hodges: Make sure someone goes who can tlak her into letting them examine her. That's very important. If she does soon, we could catch this guy...but if she doesn't...there's not much chance.
Mrs. G: I understand, thank you Officer.*hangs up and goes upstairs to wake up Blair*



my neck hurts, and I have to do laundry..more later!!

a little more...

Mrs. G: Blair, wake up.
Blair: *whispering* I’m not asleep.
Mrs. G: *whispering* Well, you need to come with me.
Blair: *still whispering* Why? Did you get news about Jo?
Mrs.G: Yea, let’s let Natalie and Tootie sleep.
Nat: Too late, we’re up. *flips on the light*
Tootie: What’s going on? Where’s Jo?
Mrs. G: Well, actually, that’s what the phone call I got was about. Jo’s at the hospital. I guess she went out looking for Blair, and something happened.
Nat: Is she alright?
Tootie: Yea, what happened?
Blair: What happened, Mrs. Garrett?
Mrs. G: She was…*short pause* oh…girls…I don’t know how to say this..
Blair: Just say it Mrs. Garrett, we can take it.
Mrs. G: *puts an arm around Blair* She..was…raped.
Blair: Let’s go..
Tootie: Yea, Jo needs us.
Nat: What are we waiting for?
Mrs. G: Girls, I…I want you to be prepared for the Jo you’re going to see when we get there. She’s not letting anyone near her. She may not want us around. But don’t take it personally…and don’t push her.
Nat: Yea, I know how that feels.
Mrs. G: *hugs Nat * I know…let’s go..
~~~~~~~~~~~hospital~~~~~~~
Mrs. G: *walks quickly to the desk * Excuse me, can you tell me where Jo Polniazcek is?
Nurse: Are you family?
Mrs. G:…yes.
Nurse: *looks skeptical * I don’t believe you, but I’m going to tell you anyway. Maybe you can help us. However, only two of you can go in at a time. Room 422.
Mrs. G: Thank you. *turns back to the girls * Natalie, Tootie, do one of you want to go in first with Blair?
Nat: No, you go ahead, Mrs. Garrett. Jo would want you in there.
Tootie: Yea, I’m not sure what to say anyway.
Mrs. G: *puts her hand on Blair’s shoulder * You coming?
Blair: um…you go first Mrs. Garrett…I’m just not ready to see Jo yet. Not like that.
Mrs. G: Are you sure?
Blair: Umm…yea.
Mrs. G: Okay, *hugs Blair * It’s alright. Take your time. I’m going to go try to talk to her, anyone want to come?
Tootie: No, I can’t. It will kill me to see Jo like that.
Nat: I’ll go…
Mrs. G: Come on, we gotta see if we can talk to her.
Nat: Right…*they walk toward Jo’s room *
Mrs. G: *when they get to Jo’s door * here we are…
Nat: Yea.
Mrs. G: Are you okay?
Nat: I guess so. I’m more worried about Jo, at this point. I know what it’s like, Mrs. Garrett. It’s hard. Plus, Jo never tells anyone how she feels, you know that. That makes it so much harder-you wouldn’t believe it! It’s so horrible. I wouldn’t wish it on anyone. Especially not Jo…*starts crying a little *she deserves so much more than that. Mrs. Garrett, why does this have to happen?
Mrs. G: * hugs Natalie * I don’t know Natalie, I really don’t know. Come on, dry those tears, we can’t let Jo see that, now can we? She might think she has a reason to not let them examine her.
Nat: yea, you’re right…*wipes the tears off her cheeks*
Mrs. G: * opens the door * Jo…

GREAT!!! Post more soon, please.

Maybe you could talk someone else into doing laundry. This is awfully important.:lol:

MORE LIZZIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by 1strunfan
GREAT!!! Post more soon, please.

Maybe you could talk someone else into doing laundry. This is awfully important.:lol:

I suppose I shouldn't have excersized then, right...ya think I could get someone else to eat my dinner? lol...well, by popular demand...it's all I've got...well, I've got the beginning of the next scene, but I refuse to post half of a scene at a time...

Nat: Jo, we came to see you! *they walk over to the bed *
Jo: *turns away from them * Go away.
Mrs. G: Jo, did you let the doctor do an exam?
Jo: No.
Mrs. G: Why?
Jo: Go away.
Nat: Jo, you’ve gotta let them. There could be something wrong that they can fix if they find it soon enough.
Jo: Go away.
Mrs. G: *hugs Jo but Jo shrinks back-not wanting to be touched *
Jo: Please…just go away.
Nat: *whispers to Mrs. G * I’m gonna go get Blair.
Mrs. G: *whispers back to Nat * Good.
Nat: *Goes out to get Blair *
Jo: *turns back around * So, you know what happened, don’t you?
Mrs. G: Yes, and I wish you’d let them find out if there’s something wrong. That way I can be glad you’re okay. Right now though, we don’t know. There could be something wrong, and I’m worried. Jo, it doesn’t take forever, and I can be there with you, or Blair-if you’d rather…
Jo: I don’t know…
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~waiting room~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Nat: Hey, Blair, we need you in there. JO needs you in there.
Blair: Is she really bad?
Nat: We don’t know until she lets them do the exam.
Blair: Does she look horrible? More than usual I mean?
Nat: she has a few cuts and bruises, but, she’s lucky.
Blair: I don’t think I can go in there.
Tootie: Come on, Blair, Jo would do it for you.
Blair: *thinks a minute * you know, you’re right. Well, *flips hair * anyone would do it for ME… * Blair starts toward Jo’s room and Natalie and Tootie roll their eyes *

okay, here's the itty bitty scene

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Mrs. G and Jo~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Mrs. G: *sympathetic * Are you scared about the exam, or the results?
Jo: Both. Mrs. G, what if they aren’t the great, trustworthy doctors we think they are, and they try to hurt me too. It’s already bad enough that this happened.
Mrs. G: *sympathetic * Oh, Jo, they won’t do that.
Jo: Well, I didn’t think this would happen to begin with, but it did.
Mrs. G: Jo, I’ll be there with you, holding your hand. Blair will be there, holding your hand. They wont’ do anything that you don’t want them to.
Blair: *walks in while Mrs. G was talking * That’s right. *Blair smile * We’ll be right by you, holding your hands the whole way.
Jo: Well, I guess you can go in with me, Blair…
Mrs. G: *thinking that the girls will wants to be alone to talk * Well, I think I’ll go check on Natalie and Tootie…
Blair: Okay. I’ll let Jo hit the nurse’s button when she’s ready, and we’ll go to the exam room.
Mrs. G: Perfect. *hugs Jo, but Jo pulls away again-she looks disappointed but smiles, and then gives Blair a hug * See you later girls. *leaves *
Blair: Jo, how’d this happen?
Jo: I went out looking for you, and this guy…he came up to me and he…*cries really hard * he..
Blair: *sits next to Jo and rocks back and forth with her…kinda like Mrs. G in Double Standard * Shhhh... It’s okay. He can’t hurt you anymore. *they sit there fore several minutes-Blair holding Jo, just letting her cry *

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by Jo/Blair_fan
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have to write more first...lol...more tomorrow...ish...

This is great!!!!!! I would have liked it more if there was some Lorelai and Rory...or Sam Malone and Carla...but............;)

No, really, I really do like this fic...even if it is...the facts of life *gags*

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
This is great!!!!!! I would have liked it more if there was some Lorelai and Rory...or Sam Malone and Carla...but............;)

No, really, I really do like this fic...even if it is...the facts of life *gags*
LAUREN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! be nice!

Originally posted by Jo/Blair_fan

LAUREN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! be nice!

I think it's a great fic...HOWEVER...I don't like this show NEmore

I love it! Great job!

okay, you guys, as promised...I'm glad you like it..

*Mrs. G is out w/Nat and Tootie*
Nat: So, is she going to?
Mrs. G: She sound slike it-if Blair goes with her. Blair's the only one she'll let close to her. She barely lets me touch her.*tear falls, Natalie and Tootie come and give her a hug* Thank you, girls, I needed that. I just hope she's alright.
Nat: So do we, Mrs. Garrett.
Tootie: She's gotta be alright. I mean, she's Jo. She's tough. She's a fighter-She can make it through anything.
Mrs. G: *wipes away a tear* You know, Tootie, you're right. She can do it. We just need to stay positive.
~~~~~~~~~Blair/Jo scene!!~~~~~~~
Blair: Are you ready to go in for that exam, yet?
Jo: I guess so...*pushes the nurse's button* If you'll come with me.
Blair: What friends for? *smiles*
Jo: One thing though, before I do, I want you to tell Mrs. Garrett I'm sorry.
Blair: *surprised* For what?
Jo: That this hapened and that I disobeyed her and went out looking for you.
Blair: Jo, this isn't you fault, and Mrs. Garrett knows that.
Jo: It IS me fault, and Mrs. Garrett's probably disappointed in me.
Blair: Jo! Stop. It's NOT your fault.
Jo: I tried to fight him..*cries* I couldn't...I just...I wan't strong enough.
Blair: *holds Jo again* No one expects you to be.
Jo: But I always am.
Blair: Jo, that doesn't matter. No one's disappointed because you couldn't stop him.
Jo: Just tell her...
Nurse: *comes in* Did you push that button?
Jo: Yea, I'm ready now...to have that exam done.
Nurse: Alright, I'll be back in a minute with a doctor. He'll probably do the exam in here so you don't have to move...
Jo: *sigh* Okay..*nurse leaves*
Blair: I'll be right back, Jo. I'm gonna go talk to Mrs. Garrett. *as she turns around to leave you see a single tear roll down her cheek, but she quickly wipes it away and heads to the waiting room*

It is great.

I spent the night writing..and I only got a few pages...ick...I hate writer's block...
~~~~~~waiting room~~~~~~~~~
Blair: *walks in* Mrs. Garrett...
Mrs. G:*turns around* Blair, you sound urgent. What happened? Is Jo alright?
Blair:*cries* Mrs. Garrett, I'm out here because...because...
Mrs. G: *holds Blair* shh...It's alright...Come over here and sit down...*they sit down on a couch and Mrs. G holds Blair like Jo in Double Standard...*
Blair: I have to go back in there soon...Jo told the nurse she's ready for the exam in I'm in there... but Mrs. Garrett! She's just not her anymore.*hysterical* She wanted me to come out here to tell you that she's sorry she disappointed you with this, and I told her you weren't disappointed and that you knew it wasn't her fault, but she doesn't believe me...and..
Mrs. G: *puts a finger to Blair's mouth* Shh..don't talk...you're hysterical...*Blair lays her head against Mrs. G's shoulder and cries* Did you cry with Jo, in there?
Blair: *shakes her head no*
Mrs. G:Oh...Blair, you tried to be the strong one..*rocks back and forth with her* Cry, Blair. It's okay. This is horrible for you, I know.
Blair: And...It's my fault.
Mrs. G: No, Blair...
Blair: Yes, it is. Mrs. Garrett, if I hadn't been late, she wouldn't have gone looking for me, and this wouldn't have happened.
Mrs. G: No, Blair. Don't do that to yourself. It's not your fault.*hugs her tighter* IT's not your fault, and you couldn't stop it.
Blair: *looks up, still crying* Are you sure?
Mrs. G: I'm positive.
Blair: Really?
Mrs. G: Really. I promise.
Blair: *huddles closer to Mrs. G* I guess you're right. Thank you, Mrs. Garrett.
Mrs. G: Anything for my girls.*smiles*
Blair: *looks up and smiles* WEll, I better go back in there with Jo.
Mrs. G: *that's right. *wipes tears off Blair's cheeks* She won't let me, because she wants you.
Blair: But why me, Mrs. Garrett? You could help her so much more.
Mrs. G: Because she doesn't feel like she's disappointing you. She's not disappointing anyone, but she feels like she is, and you're the only one that she knows she can count on.
Blair: That doesn't make sense...you're always there for us, especially when something bad happens and we need you. Jo needs you. Come in with me Mrs. Garrett.
Mrs. G: Blair, let's not push her into anything. That won't help at all.
Blair:Mrs. Garrett, Jo needs you in there. I need you in there. Please?
Mrs. G: Well...



Hope you like it!! More...Sunday...ish..

Thanks for posting more, and we didn't even have to beg this time!:lol:

Good Job.

More please I'm impatient!!! (looks around) :o oh like you didn't know that already:)

more!!!!!!!!! is that clear???

okay you guys...I didn't get as much written as I thought I would..I spent time with my family yesterday, and today I was helping a friend out with something that took a LITTLE longer than I expected..plus, our Internet service was messing up again, so, that kinda sucked...anyways, here's the dinky little part I've got...sorry I couldn't post more...


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Nurse: *comes into the waiting room* Is there a Blair in here?
Blair: Yes, that's me..
Nurse: Miss Polniazcek's asking for you...
Blair: Okay, I'm on my way. *grabs Mrs. Garrett's hand and pulls her down the hall*
Mrs. G: Blair, I don't know about this..I..
Blair: Mrs. Garrett, Jo needs you, whether she thinks so or not. So, you're going to be there, letting her know taht you're not disappointed in her. *goes into Jo's room, still pulling Mrs. g) Hey, Jo. I brought someone to see you.
Mrs. G: Hi, Jo.
Jo: *kinda sad* Hey, Mrs. G...
Mrs. G: *goes over and sits by Jo on the bed* Jo, I'm so sorry this happened...*hugs Jo and sits with her arm around Jo's shoulders*
Jo: *tries to back away , but Mrs. G doesn't let her, so she relents and buries her head in Mrs. G's shoulder and cries*
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hope you like it...more tomorrow, unless I get inspired tonight...

Thats great MORE!!!!! I is impatient and don't knows proper english!

Originally posted by jo_blair_fan
Thats great MORE!!!!! I is impatient and don't knows proper english!

lol...well, actually, I wrote a TAD bit more tonight...but, I think it MIGHT be a while before I post, because...I'm having a few personal problems with this fic, so...I'll try to, but...like I said, I'm REALLY having problems with this...so, I'll do my best...

Oklie Doklie I'll wait.

okay, so, today, during stud hall, I told myself that, I need to forget it for a while and focus on this fan fiction being about Facts of Life..it has...ABSOLUTELY nothing to do with anyone I know..or me..or blah blah blah..and y'all probably REALLY don't care...and..I wrote a about 6 pages today...hand written, but, I just have to type them now...here's some before I have to go do housework..

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Mrs. G: *puts her arm around Jo* That's it, Jo. Let it out. Let it all out.
Jo: *still crying* Do you know what the worst part is, Mrs. G? It's all my fault. I tried to fight him, but...he...he was so much stronger than me...I just couldn't. I fought as hard as I could. I didn't want to sidappoint you.
Mrs. G: Jo, it's not your fault...do you think you disappointed me?
Jo:*nods*
Mrs. G: *hugs her tighter* Jo...Jo, if I was disappointed...I wouldn't be here.Jo, how long have we known each other? 4...5 years?*Jo nods* Okay, and in that time, have I EVER been so disappointed in you girls, that I wasn't there for you?
Jo: No...not that I can think of...
Mrs. G: Okay...why would I start, now?
Jo: Thank you, Mrs. Garrett *starts to cry harder*He was so strong though...I...I couldn't get away. He made me feel like I was nothing. Just something he could use and leave on the side of the road...*buried her head in Mrs. G's shoulder*
Mrs. g: Jo, nobody's going to do that to you, ever again.*rocks back and forth with Jo, as a tear falls down her cheek* Oh, Jo, when I got that call, I couldn't believe it. I thought they made a mistake.
Jo: *still crying* Are you disappointed?
Mrs. G: What did I just say? Of course not! Jo, *take Jo's chin in her hand and pulls her head up to look her in the eye* Listen to me. NONE of this is your fault. So, how coudl I be disappointed in you? I love you girls like daughters. *looks at Blair, who is standing a few feet away also crying and motions for her to come sit on the bed* We're a family, and families stick up for each other, and they don't get so disappointed by things that they do to each other that they stop being a family.*Blair comes over and sites on the opposite side of Mrs. G as Jo, and Mrs. G puts an arm around each of them* And I want you girls to know, that it scares me to death when I get calls like this-telling me that one of you is hurt. Girls, I care about what happens to you. I want you to be careful. When you're in pain like this...oh, god, it kills me. I hate seeing you like this, Jo..
Jo: thanks, Mrs. Garrett.
Blair: Yea, Thank you.*they hug Mrs. G*
Mrs. G: *hugs back* Anything for my girls, but please, do your best to make sure I never get a call that that again.
Jo: If it woulda been up ta me, you wouldn't a gotten this one!
Mrs. G: See, you do believe it's not your fault.
Jo: *thinks a minute* Yea, I guess I do, now.
Mrs. g: Good.
Blair: That's wonderful, Jo! *hugs Jo then turns to Mrs. G* Thank you, Mr.s Garrett.
Jo: Yea, thanks again, MRs. G.
Mrs. G: Jo, you should be thanking Blair-she's the one that drug me in here. Blair, I don't know what you're thanking me for, but it was my pleasure.
Blair: For being there.
Jo: You're the best, Mrs. G.
Mrs. G: *hugs them* thanks, girls.
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AWESOME!!!!!
What is up with this whole housework thing???
Anyway, hope you had fun doing housework. Post more soon, Please.

I think this is a very good story, but I would like to make some comments about the first scene (seeing that I am a screenwriter and all that...): In the part where Mrs. G says Blair could be in danger, you might want to change that so people aren't tipped off to something wrong right away, but that there are "concerns...." also indicate "what they heard" that is reason for concern (without giving away the problem). Also at the end when Jo says "THE GUY COULD RAPE HER!" that gives it away too quickly (maybe not happening to Blair, but to "someone"...).

Also in the part before that where Jo says "Fine, if you're not gonna listen to me..." after Blair says "I'm always careful", you may want to have Blair doing something or having a tone in her voice that SHOWS she's not paying attention to Jo. It's important to have your characters doing something than just talking, it conveys a lot of emotion.

Originally posted by Captain ABlairica
I think this is a very good story, but I would like to make some comments about the first scene (seeing that I am a screenwriter and all that...): In the part where Mrs. G says Blair could be in danger, you might want to change that so people aren't tipped off to something wrong right away, but that there are "concerns...." also indicate "what they heard" that is reason for concern (without giving away the problem). Also at the end when Jo says "THE GUY COULD RAPE HER!" that gives it away too quickly (maybe not happening to Blair, but to "someone"...).

Also in the part before that where Jo says "Fine, if you're not gonna listen to me..." after Blair says "I'm always careful", you may want to have Blair doing something or having a tone in her voice that SHOWS she's not paying attention to Jo. It's important to have your characters doing something than just talking, it conveys a lot of emotion.


hm...well, I don't wanna change it now...but I'll keep it in mind for next time...thanks!


Yea, I had so much fun...cleaning a whole bathroom by myself..and when I say clean...I mean..CLEAN...at my house, you do it ALL and you do it RIGHT the first time, or you do it AGAIN, and you end up doing more. I also had to sweep the foyer...with no lights...it was awful...but, anyways, I'm done now...I'll go try to find my notebook...and decide if I'm awake enough to type anything...

You guys, don't make fun of me for this, okay..it's degisned to be humorous...the doctor's name is Dr. Pepper..:lol:


Dr. Pepper: *comes in* Hey, Jo. Are you ready?
Jo: You bet. As long as these two can be right here with me. Dr. Pepper: That shoudl be no problem...
*Mrs. G stand on one side of the ned-Blair on the other- each holding one of Jo's hands*
~~~~~~~~~Nat and Tootie~~~~~~~~
Tootie: Nat, do you think Jo will be okay?
Nat: I THINK so, but we'll just have to wait and see.
tootie: How bad was she?
Nat: She wasn't as bad as some cases I've read about...
Tootie: How do you think she is now?
Nat: Much better.
Tootie: How come?
Nat: Mrs. Garrett's in there.
Tootie: You're right. Mrs. Garrett can always make everything better. Remember everything she's done for us?
Nat: How could I forget? She's ALWAYS been there for us...through everything.
Mrs. G: *grins*Well, I'm not sure about EVERYTHING, but I do try to help out. I have to admit I though, I am good with cookies...
*Nat and tootie look up to see Mrs. G and laugh*
Tootie: How come you didn't tell us you were standing there?
Mrs. G: I just got here!
Nat: *jokingly* Oh, well, I SUPPOSE we can forgive you, then!*seriously* How's Jo?
Mrs. G: She's fine. Well, she has to stay here for the day, but that's just to play it sake.
Tootie: The da--*looks at watch* That's right, I almost forgot it's morning! No wonder I'm so tired!! 3 A.M!!
Mrs. G: I can tak eyou back home to sleep, if you want.
NAt: That's okay, Mrs. Garrett, we got some sleep earlier. But what about you? You've been up all night!
Tootie: Yea, come over here an sit down. Rest a little.
Mrs. G: Not until Jo's home.
Nat: But Mrs. Garrett, you need your sleep. The last thing we need is you in the hospital too!
Tootie: That's right. We'l go in with Jo. Blair's in there...she'll be fine. You need your sleep*takes her hand and pulls Mrs. G over to a chair-Nat puts a blanket over Mrs. G's lap*
Nat: There. Now you can't refuse!
Mrs. G: I guess some sleep would do me good...
Tootie: Exactly. *hugs Mrs. G* g'night!
Nat: *hugs Mrs. Garrett* Good night, Mrs. Garrett.
Mrs. G: Thanks girls.
Nat and tootie: No problem, Mrs. Garrett.
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sorry that's all...cause, the next scene I only ahve part of, and I told you before I refuse to post half scenes... hope you like this, though...if not...by all means, SAY SO!!!

This is really a great story. And, believe me, if I didn't like it I would probably tell you.:)

Awsome

I finally came up with a title!! WOO HOO!! It's called, "Unexpected Situations!"

Just as long as you came up with one

Good title, now how about more story??:)

Originally posted by 1strunfan
Good title, now how about more story??:)

later tonight...*crosses fingers* I hope

*Nat and Tootie go into Jo's room*
Tootie: *hugs Jo* Oh, Jo, you scared me to death!
Jo: well, I'm fine Tootie.
Blair: Where's Mrs. Garrett?
Nat: We made her sleep. She wouldn't go home, so she's in a chair in the waiting room.
Blair: That's good, She looked so tired when she was in here.
Jo: Did you make sure she was sleeping?
Nat: No...but she said she was going to.
Tootie: Yea, why would she lie to us about that?
Jo: Why, I don't know, but Mrs. G doesn't like to rest until she knows everything is fine.
Blair: Yea, and we all love her for that.
Jo: Yes, but-remember the time, when her blood pressure was high, and we told her to rest and she SAID she was going to, but then went right back to sorting her bills?
Nat: Yea, so?
Jo: Well, I give her ten more seconds before she comes running in here with a cup of coffee in her hand.
Nat: She wouldn't do that! She told us she woul--
Jo: *holds a finger to her lips meaning that everyone should be quiet* 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Mrs. G: *comes in with a cup of coffee* Hi, girls.
Jo: *laughs* Hey, Mrs. G.
Nat: Why aren' t you sleeping?
Mrs. G: I tried, but I couldn't.
Blair: Come join the part, Mrs. Garrett.
Jo: Sorry, you didn't get an engraved invitation, but it's not Blair's party, it's mine.
Mrs. G: *smiles* I think I can have a good time without an engraved invitation.
Tootie: So, when do you get outta here, Jo?
Jo: Well, it depends, but if everything stays the way it is now, I should be able to go home in a few hours.
Nat: That's great, Jo.
Jo: Yea. I wanna get outta this place.
Nat: I don't blame ya.
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Great. Keep it up.:)

This is sooo great, keep it up and post more soon pleeeeaaaasssseee!!!!

haha...NEW PAGE!!!

Originally posted by #1fan
haha...NEW PAGE!!!

yea, I've neva had a four page fic before...wowness...

BTW, offtopic: you're right, FLUTES RULE!! Well, piccolos...

hey hey.. awesome job... this fic kicks some serious ass... you bring life to the boards... k ill stop now.. wite soon

LLLLLIIIIIZZZZZZZZZIIIIIIIEEEEE!!!!!!
More, Pleeeeese!!!

Originally posted by Charlotte Rae Fan


yea, I've neva had a four page fic before...wowness...

BTW, offtopic: you're right, FLUTES RULE!! Well, piccolos...

Well, don't play piccolo but its close enough....I mean you have to play flute first before you can play piccolo, we do have a pic. player though, she's awesome. Anyways, add more...:)

How come when a person wants to get off the topic for a moment,
that the smilie looks ANGRY???offtopic: Not like the person responding is angry...:confused:

Originally posted by Captain ABlairica
How come when a person wants to get off the topic for a moment,
that the smilie looks ANGRY???offtopic: Not like the person responding is angry...:confused:

I dunno...good QUESSSSSSSSSTION, as usual!!!


um..thanks for the compliments...


#1Fan...PICS RULE!! LOL...I don't get to play the piccolo because I don't have one(YET!:):)) and, because in pep band I play electric bass(which in our band is actually keyboard) and in marching band 'm the durm major..so I NEVER get to play!! But, if I get a piccolo, I'll get to...hehe.

Anyways, everyone, I wrote the ending today during study hall...so, I'll post it tomorrow...it's so small, though. I didn't realize how close to the end I was.

Originally posted by Charlotte Rae Fan


#1Fan...PICS RULE!! LOL...I don't get to play the piccolo because I don't have one(YET!:):)) and, because in pep band I play electric bass(which in our band is actually keyboard) and in marching band 'm the durm major..so I NEVER get to play!! But, if I get a piccolo, I'll get to...hehe.

Yeah, our pic player was Drum Major during marching season too but now that we have split bands she plays pic in everything. She very seldom ever plays her flute, but when she does she is awesome at that too. Too bad she graduates this year :( Well add it soon!!!

okay guys, here's my short ending...haha..



Dr: *enters* Well, Miss...Polnia...Miss...Jo, it looks liek you can go home now.
Jo: Thanks.
Dr. : Just be careful, we dont' want thei shappening again.
Jo: Of course.
Dr: *Beeper starts going off* Well, here are the papers for you to sign, drop them off at the nurse's stations before you go. If you'll excuse me, I have to get back down the the ER.*leaves quickly*
Jo: So, anybody got a pen?
Mrs. G: *reaches over to the nightstand thingie bopper and grabs the pen* Here ya go..
Jo: *starts to take it, but Mrs. G doesn't let go* Mrs. G...
Mrs. g: Wait...ARe you SURE you're alright? Because if you're feeling sick or something...
Jo: I'm fine, now. Really. *smiles at Mrs. G * Thanks, Mrs. Garrett.
Mrs. G: *smiles and hands her the pen* You're welcome.
Jo: *signs the paper and hugs Mrs. G...then the screen freezes and the credits roll*

Awesome!!! But, I'm a little upset that you made us wait soooooo long !!! LOL Just Kidding. You did a great job with this story.

Originally posted by 1strunfan
Awesome!!! But, I'm a little upset that you made us wait soooooo long !!! LOL Just Kidding. You did a great job with this story.

thanks...sorry abotu the wait:( the life of a preacher's daughter...lol...okay, the life of a musician...roll it all into one...lol, I didn't have much time to get on the boards or type anything this week cause I have a concert on Sunday and there are SOOOOO MANY rehearsals the week before the concert! lol.

It was great :)

Hey guys, I'm sorry I haven't posted in a while but I have major writers block right now. But, I'll get back to writing s soonas I'm unblocked :)

Thanks for Understanding :)

Well, I guess I understand about the being busy part. I'll forgive you this time, but next time...LOL. Anyway, I totally understand you being busy. I'm just glad you finished. Now, after the holidays you need to write another. (Please?)

Hey--
I'm going to...just this once...toot my own horn, so to speak. Anyway, this was my favorite of MY fan fictions, so I wanted to bump it up...just for fun.:)

I loved this story!!!,It was really good!,Hope you write more!!

:wave: its a great stort keep it up.:wave: