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It's 7:00 at the division. Nate and Cd are at their desks loking through papers.

CD-well, Nate, i'm going to call it a night, okay? Brian should be picking me up soon. *she gets up and picks up her jacket and heads for the door*

Nate- Uh.....CD.....

CD- yea?

Nate-.(long pause).......See you tomorrow.

CD- yea see ya!

He just couldn't do it. He couldn't tell CD how he felt about her.

Cap- RAINA, come in here please

Raina- sure captain *she's having trouble getting up*

Cap- something is the matter with you,

Raina- no cap..

Cap- *cuts her off* Raina please just say something okay? What's going on?

Raina- well, I....I am sick

Cap- okay? I mean it's okay to be sick raina, im not going to chew you're head off if you dont feel well. I am not that bad *smiles*

Raina-*small laugh* well....

Cap- no no..you go home and go to the doctor

Raina- I already have

Cap- then why are you still here

Raina- because......*she just couldn't tell her* i dunno

Cap- so what did the doctor say?

Raina-...


Suddenly mag busts in the office

Mag-* out of breath* sorry to interupt, but Cap you have to go talk to Jinny, she's sitting in the bathroom crying with her gun cocked she wont listen to me....hurry

Cap-*rushes out* OMG

Raina- *just sits in the office with her head in her hands*

In the bathroom. Jinny is sitting on the bench in front of the lockers

Jinny-*shaking and crying* Get out please it's for the best *crying*

Mag- NO jinny NO

Cap-Jinny, let's talk, okay?

Jinny- I swear if you come any closer I'll do it

Cap- okayt okay this can work, we'll just stay over here, now what's going on??

Jinny- it's too hard...it's too damn hard to stay sober...i mean I cant do it Look at me im a 35 year old person with nothing to show for her life...i have nothing to go home to....im missing something major in my life and i dont no what it is

Mag- well, do you think killing urself is going to help u find out? I mean jinny u can stay sober i no u can

Jinny- i dont have a very good example to follow.

Cap- huh? what are u talking about?

Jinny- *sniffs* why dont you tell her mag? huh? I mean you do take drugs right?

Mag- jin, ur tired, u dont no what u saying

JInny- no no, i mean perscription drugs...i mean you are dependant on them right? for some reason you cant sleep at night...whats going on..what have you done...i mean do the pills really help whatever is deep inside go away.

Mag- Jinny that's enough, u are out of line

Jinny-then....throw them away.

Mag- i dont have to do anything

Cap- magda...is this tru?

Mag- uhh....

Jinny- see how it feels, i mean this is like ur little intervention

Mag-this is not about me, ur the one sitting there with a gun ready to give in

Jiny- i guess it runs in the family , i mean c'mon my mother did, that's what i'm expected to do.

Mag- I'm tired of this BS about ur mother...whatever she did doesnt have anything on ur decision on taking ur own life *crying*






Jinny- *throws the gun across the room* i cant do it


Cap- *leaves the bathroom* *to herself* what goes on in this division?




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The next day at the division. Nate and CD are at the vending machine

CD-hmmm...let's think of the possible suspects for the Klien murder.
Nate- huh? sorry I wasn't listening, what did you say again?
CD- what's the matter, Nate?
Nate- well.....nevermind...you don't want to know about this
CD- yeah i do...c'mon Nate, I'm ur partner, we're suppose to be open with each other.
Nate- it's about a woman
CD-okay...
Nate- and...i like her a lot
CD-that's good
Nate-she has to be one of the most wonderful women I know...i mean she's amazing
CD-wow...some woman...so..what's the problem?
Nate-she's seeing someone else
CD-oh...well, maybe....hmm...this is a hard one....uhhh i dunno maybe u should tell her how you feel, i mean never know
Nate- thanks
CD-anytime...what are partners for
Nate- *looks at watch* well, im gunna go for a lunch break, wanna come?
CD-no i have work to do
Nate- *starts walking away*
CD- nate, does this amazing woman have a name?
Nate- huh? I couldn't hear you
CD-nevermind, nothing...see you later!

The phone rings in the caps office

Cap-yes?
Meg- hello, this is Doctor Meg Fayen
Cap- are you sure you have the right place this is the SFPD?
Meg- yes i no...look...you have an officer there, raina washington?
Cap- yes....and?
Meg-since she has you down for her next of kin...
Cap- wait...next of kin? Usually when they or i mean when doctors say that...they mean something terrible
Meg- yes, Raina is dying i thought you knew......


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Cap-raina, come in my office please

Raina- yes?

Cap- sit down

Raina-okay *sits* cap I...

Cap-don't....I know everything...raina, why didn't you tell me?

Raina-*starting to cry*I dunno....i....just...it's hard to deal with

Cap- yes i sure....why am I down as your next of kin?

Raina- because cap....ur the only family i have

Cap-you need to go back to the doctor

Raina- i cant go back its just bad news

Cap-you have to...i'll go with u

Raina-*silence* okay


Jinny-*coming in*

Mag-hey jin

Jinny-hey

Mag-how was your night

jinny-okay

mag-what's with the short answers? Jinny, talk to me...we are

best friends

Jinny- i dunno mag, i just been thinkin a lot

mag-okay...thats a start...u wanna talk about it?

Jinny-no

Mag- come on jin, why aren't you being open with me?

jinny-because you're not being with me

Mag-no jin let's not talk about that okay?

Jinny- mag, you're the first person to say...open up...well, practice what you preach.. you know one thing i learned from AA was that you need to express whatever it is that is making you want to drink that drink or do that drug.

Mag-well, maybe AA is a bunch of crap because if i recall correctly you were ready to kill yourself last night.

Jinny- it happens in every addiction there is a breaking point where you ask yourself if you want to give in or if you want conquer that disease. That was yesteday...this is a brand new day...we are taught to take each day 1 by 1....mag you need help

mag- what if i dont want help? what if i dont want to believe i have a problem? I'm leaving *starts to walk away*

Jinny- mag, just tell me one thing?

Mag- what?

Jinny- when you take that pill, do you think of ben and if he saw you?

Mag-*walks away*




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Nate and CD have a new case involving the death of a 75 year old man. His daughter comes in.

Carly- Hello, I'm Carly Pavlick, I need to speak with *takes out paper and reads it* Nate Basso and Cd delorenzo

CD- that would be us...hi want to come in a private room

Carly-sure

They get into the room

Nate- where was your father when he was killed?

Carly- umm..i believe he was at home, my mom went to play bingo that night

CD-does your father have any sicknesess or anything of that sort?

Carly- ummm...no not that I know of *looks at watch* i'm sorry inspectors but i have to get going...i need to be in court soon

CD- in court?

Carly- I'm a lawyer

Cd- I see...well thank you for coming please call when you want to meet again

Carly - sure

They all start to walk out

Carly- mr basso

Nate- please just call me nate

Carly- *nervous laugh* yeah, uhh, nate... look i don't do this very often...but i was wondering if...if you ahh...wanted to have a drink with me tonight? I've been very stressed lately, and I just....

Nate- sure!!! ...7?

Carly- yes *surprised*...thank you

Carly leaves and cd and nate are at the vending machine

Cd- she asked you out?

Nate- *chewing on a sandwich* yup

Cd- are you going to go?

Nate-sure why not?

Cd- what...what about that other woman, that...that amazing woman that you want to badly

Nate- i've come to reality, she loves her boyfriend and there is no room for me now

Cd-.....oh (she wished she could get nate to like her becase she loved him, but didnt have the courage to tell him)

Cd- Nate!....uhhh*pause*.....have fun

nate- *nods* thanks

they stared at each other

nate- im gunna go now*small laugh*

Cd- yea

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