View Full Version : Anyone want to read something I wrote last year (please respond)


Sara Micelli
08-06-2002, 03:59 PM
I hope everyone likes this.
Sorry if it's bad.If this offends anyone I am sorry.This was an assignment I had for school.




"The Internal Light"
by Sara

I hold in my hand something I cannot smell, see, taste, or hear, but it lies within my heart. It costs nothing, but is worth everything. As bright as a shining star in the midnight sky, it emits a light so brilliant that it brings joy to the joyless. As grand as a symphony, this instrument is as soft as a whisper.
It is something that everyone needs but not everyone has. It can be possessed by anyone but cannot be bought or sold. This has the power to brighten darkened corridors and to light the way for the lost. It serves as a beacon for the poor, sick, lonely, and homeless.
Many people who have this have overcome tough situations; others have failed without it. It is the means for the weak to become strong, and without it the strong will weaken. This tool can help prevent sorrow, contempt, bitterness and mistrust in our imperfect world. It can turn the most heartless people into the most caring because of its amazing power.
In times of fear, danger, and uncertainty when there is little else to trust, we must ignite this spark within ourselves to lead us from the darkness back into the light.
What I hold in my hand cannot solve all of the world's problems, but it will surely provide a shining pathway toward a better tomorrow.
I hold in my hand…faith.

Plata
08-06-2002, 04:19 PM
This is a nice poem, Sara. I think it has a strong meaning about life. :)

Jordan
08-06-2002, 07:39 PM
It's a very beautiful poem! Do you write often, or was it purely for the assignment? :happyface :happyface :happyface

Sara Micelli
08-06-2002, 08:19 PM
I love to write but that was an assignment.I don't write as often as I should.

shavelyLBC34
08-06-2002, 09:15 PM
wow! that was really good! i like the very last line the best...

JDS84
08-06-2002, 09:20 PM
That is very good. I like it.

dawsongirl
08-06-2002, 10:39 PM
Do you like writing poetry or stories?

Sara Micelli
08-06-2002, 10:50 PM
both

TibbyTibby2
08-07-2002, 12:00 AM
wow thas really good!

FOLrocks1
08-07-2002, 12:41 AM
That's really beautiful!

TibbyTibby2
08-07-2002, 11:55 AM
you have inspired me to Finally post m y favorite poem i wrote. If u want to me to take it down... i will. im not trying to steal the attention i just wanna post and see what people think.

Love can be a silly thing
at the age of 14
But for me it's not that same
a day without you drives me insane
I love you for you no more or less
Even if you like me the less
Just as friends is fine
But, oh to feel your hand
interlocked with mine
1 Day is all I ask
Just a simple task
Give me a chance and you will see...
I Was meant for you .. and you were meant for me

Mr. Shy Guy
08-07-2002, 12:08 PM
Both of them are really nice. :)

shavelyLBC34
08-07-2002, 12:13 PM
Originally posted by TibbyTibby2
you have inspired me to Finally post m y favorite poem i wrote. If u want to me to take it down... i will. im not trying to steal the attention i just wanna post and see what people think.

Love can be a silly thing
at the age of 14
But for me it's not that same
a day without you drives me insane
I love you for you no more or less
Even if you like me the less
Just as friends is fine
But, oh to feel your hand
interlocked with mine
1 Day is all I ask
Just a simple task
Give me a chance and you will see...
I Was meant for you .. and you were meant for me

deep man, deep...lol...is that about a particular someone?? **coughcough**

Sara Micelli
08-07-2002, 12:22 PM
Originally posted by TibbyTibby2
you have inspired me to Finally post m y favorite poem i wrote. If u want to me to take it down... i will. im not trying to steal the attention i just wanna post and see what people think.

Love can be a silly thing
at the age of 14
But for me it's not that same
a day without you drives me insane
I love you for you no more or less
Even if you like me the less
Just as friends is fine
But, oh to feel your hand
interlocked with mine
1 Day is all I ask
Just a simple task
Give me a chance and you will see...
I Was meant for you .. and you were meant for me



That is a great poem.

DarleneIllyria
08-07-2002, 04:23 PM
Both poems are so beautiful. :)

Kay Scarpetta
08-07-2002, 04:29 PM
Those are wonderful :)

Warm & Fuzzy
08-07-2002, 09:49 PM
That's great, Sara! Faith is very important. :)