I'm going to make a new pilot for "The Jagerson's".

a new cast:

Pete (the dad), Mary (the mom), Andrew (child who's 10),
Jim Hanks (a neighbor) and Luke Hanks (Jim's son, who's 10).

1.1 "Moving In"

Pete: Mary, I'm going to meet our neighbor.

Mary: ok.

Pete: Hi, I'm Pete Jagerson.

Jim: Hi, I'm Jim Hanks and this is my son, Luke.

Pete: I have a wife named, Mary and a son named, Andrew.

Jim: My wife has been gone for 2 years and I miss her.

Pete: Well, nice meeting you.

Jim: Nice meeting you too, Pete.

They both say "Bye".

Pete: Mary, our neighbor is nice. He has a son Andrew's age.

Mary: Oh, that's great.

Pete: Hey, Andrew we have a neighbor your age.

Andrew: great. Can I go meet him?

Pete: Yes you can. His name is Luke.

Andrew goes next door to meet Luke.

Andrew rings the doorbell.

Luke: I'll get it dad.

Jim: ok, son.

Luke: Oh, hi you must be my neighbor.

Andrew: yep, I'm Andrew.

Luke: I'm Luke. Do you want to play?

Andrew: Sure, but can I call my parents first?

Luke: Sure.

Andrew calls his parents

Andrew: my parents said I could play.

Luke: ok. What should we play?

Andrew: How about Monopoly?

Luke: Sure.

They play for an hour and Andrew goes home.

THE END

How did you like the storyline?

I just noticed this, and, not to be mean or anything, but I found it kind've boring and plotless. I mean, a family meeting a new neighbor, the boys becoming best friends.. It's just so... o_o;; Unoriginal?