:tv: Hello everyone. This is my first time on a message board. I wanna start by giving a shout out to Miranda and Jeanie, who are posting a neverending fan fiction on the Division Message Board. You guys should go over there and check it out. They have 145 pages already! lol So get reading! :read: I plan on writing my fan-ficition in small parts so that you don't get overwhelmed with the whole story all at once. Well, here is my first Division fan-fiction entitled After The Fall.
(Takes place the day right after the Intervention)
It's Monday morning and Jinny is sitting at her kitchen table with a cup of tea. She takes out the tea bag and places it on a paper towel beside her cup. She glances over to the clock on her microwave that reads 6:35AM. So she puts her head down on the table thinking she can sleep for at least 10 more minutes before having to get ready for work.
not much later after that, the sound of the ringing phone awoke Jinny from a sound sleep. She picks it up and manages to say Hello, in a semi-concious voice. Once she hears Mag's voice on the other end, she automatically looks over to the clock once again which now reads 9:15.
Jin, it's quarter past nine where are yo..... Jinny cuts Magda off before she can finish. Yeah I know, I overslept I'm on my way. Jinny hangs up the phone, and walks over to the bathroom which is located right behind her. She trys to pull herself together just enough to look presentable at The Division. She then goes over to where she had been sitting and grabs her leather coat off the back of her chair, and heads for the door. She makes it all the way to her car before she realizes that she left her harness, gun, and badge on the nightstand beside her bed. Oh I can see what kind of day THIS is going to be! She mumbles to herself, and gets out of the car slamming the door behind her.

Okay nice start can't wait to read more. By the way I like your screen name Ang.

Very Good... Keep on going, Ang. Looking forward to more. Thanks for the shout out! ;)

More please! <-- See... I'm nice.

Hey you two thanks for helping to make my fan fiction more interesting. I wonder if anyone else will read this! lol I really like that quote you threw in there Miranda. It makes my fan. fic look good :D Well, I'm gonna sign off now so I can type more to add to it. I have it all written down, I just need to type it out so it shouldn't take long. Bye for now! :wave: And yes Miranda I know your nice! lol lol Oh and how can I get a pic under my screen name, like you guys have? I wanna feel special too!! :) lol

I'm readin it. Its great so far. Is it based on the fact that she was suspended or wasnt? Just wonderin, but its awesome either way. More!

Hey! Actually, in this fan fiction, she didn't get suspended at all. I think it makes the story better, in my opinion. But thanks so much for the reply! I only expected Miranda and Jeanie to answer, but I'm really glad you did! Thanks again. Well bye for now, I'm on to type more! :wave: And bye the way that whole Jineddy thing is really kool. I love it! In that case, I'm a Jineddy too! lol

Hey! Actually, in this fan fiction, she didn't get suspended at all. I think it makes the story better, in my opinion. But thanks so much for the reply! I only expected Miranda and Jeanie to answer, but I'm really glad you did! Thanks again. Well bye for now, I'm on to type more! :wave:

Originally posted by Iliveforjayandnancy
Hey! Actually, in this fan fiction, she didn't get suspended at all. I think it makes the story better, in my opinion. But thanks so much for the reply! I only expected Miranda and Jeanie to answer, but I'm really glad you did! Thanks again. Well bye for now, I'm on to type more! :wave: And bye the way that whole Jineddy thing is really kool. I love it! In that case, I'm a Jineddy too! lol HaHa thanx we made that up last summer. Any Jineddy is a friend of mine hehe. I cant wait for more!

*At the Division about 10AM*

Right as Jinny is walking down the hall to the Divison, she runs into Magda.

Hey Mag listen, I'm sorry about earlier. I didn't mean to hang up on ya. I just had a rough night, and I didn't get much sleep, so I went to sit down at my kitchen table this morning with a cup of tea and I......
Jin don't worry about it, I understand.
Mag, I'm sorry I don't know what's gotten into me lately. I guess I'm just a little defensive because of that whole intervention thing. I know quitting drinking is something I have to do, but the truth is it's hard, really hard.
Well, at least you are admiting it, that's the first step.
Geez, Mag. now your starting to sound like Dusty.
Hey Jin don't get mad at me, i'm just trying to help you. And don't worry, I know you can do it, it just takes time that's all. What do you say we meet up at Anchorside for lunch, my treat. We can just sit and talk.
Ok Mag. thanks I need that.

*And with that they both walk through the Division doors at the same time, to see Kate at her desk looking through some papers. And Cd and Nate are at there desks talking about there up coming case, and Raina is sitting at her desk talking to Dom, as usual. Jinny and Magda walk into the Captain's office. Jinny leans against the wall, and Magda sits down in a chair in front of Kate's desk.*

So what you got for us today Cap. *says Jinny, with a less than chipper attitude actually rather sarcastic*

Well, basically what we have here is your modern day Bonnie and Clyde. It's a married couple by the names of Marissa and Chris Stovic and they have already hit a couple of convience stores, and a few homes. At one house they got away with 10,000 dollars worth of precious jewels.

*And of course Jinny charms in with...*

Well if there stupid enough to leave 10,000 dollars worth of jewels in there house there just asking to be robbed!

*Magda shoots Jinny a look*

Jin: Well!

Kate: Ok, Magda? Jinny? Here's there address, and a warrant to search there house. Turns out this couple is wanted in 3 states, and there trying to make this one there fourth. I need you to go over there, and see if you can find out anything. They do most of there work in the early morning when people are at work, so now is your best time to go.

Jinny and Magda: Ok we're on it.
Kate: And hey, be careful.

*Scene fades out*

Hey! My next post will have Teddy in it!!!! So keep looking.

Well this is just great!!!! I had written an awesome entry to follow the one I jsut had and the DUMB server was down, so when I tried to submit it it said website not responding. And it wiped out that whole section. So NOW I have to rewrite it AGAIN from memory, and it was rather long too. Well, I guess I better get started then huh? UGH!!

This is going to be a tad bit long!!! Sorries!


*Magda and Jinny arrive at the Stovics house with two armed officers*
Magda: You think they're home?
Jinny: There's one way to find out.
*Magda knocks on the door quite loudly*
Jinny: SFPD open the door, we have a search warrant!
*The two cops bust down the door and walk in. Jinny and Magda follow closely behind*
Officer: Apartment clear!
*Jinny and Magda are surprised at what they find. Money is spread out all over there coffee table. Some in bundles and some lose*
Jinny: Mag are you seeing this?
Magda: Uh yeah!
Jinny: Makes ya wonder if they have anything else like this lying around the house.
Magda: Well let's go have a look shall we?
*Jinny and Magda walk into the bedroom together, where they make yet another discovery*
Jinny: Hey Mag, look at this!
*Magda walks over the the closet where Jinny is standing*
Magda: Oh my God talk about a good bust!
*Right in front of them are two pot plants, hidden under a few articles of clothing*
I knew these people were crooks but I didn't know they were druggies too! says Jinny chuckiling.
Magda: Officers, would you two mind waiting here for them to return and just bring them to the station, we'll meet you there.
Officers: Ok, no problem.
*Jinny and Magda get together everything that they found in the apartment and load it into there car to bring to the Division*
*Scene continues in the Captain's office*
Kate: Hey how did it go?
Jinny: Great we made ana wesome bust.
Kate: Really?!
Magda: Yeah look for yourself.
*Two more cops bring everything that they got from the apartment into Kate's office*
Kate: Oh wow! Ok guys you know where this has to go.
Jinny: So Magda are we still on for lunch?
Magda: You bet!
Jinny: Hey Cap. you wanna come with us?
Kate: Oh thanks anyways, but Amanda wants me to have lunch with her.
Jinny: Ok, catch ya later.
Ok said Kate with a smile on her face because of the great bust that Exstead and Ramirez had made.

*A little while later at Anchorside*

Magda and Jinny walk over to the table furthest from the bar. Jinny sits with her back towards the door, and Magda sits right across from her.

Magda: Uh, Jinny don't look now, but Teddy just walked in with a tall blonde woman. And he seems quite friendly with her. He's got his hand on the small of her back leading her to the table.
Jinny: Oh Mag. it must be someone who looks like him. Teddy may be some things, but he wouldn't date anyone so soon after we broke up. I know him. He still loves me.
Magda: Ok, look for yourself, then.
*Jinny turns around to see Teddy with a tall blonde woman just as Magda had said. She turns around and as she does so, she feels her stomach sink to the floor but trys not to let on to Magda*
Jinny: That's it I'm going over there.
Magda: Jinny don't, you'll make a scene!
*Magda puts her hand on Jinny's in an effort to keep her seated*
Jinny: Oh well. I'll be back.
*She gets up and walks over to there table. She just stands there and looks at the shocked look on Teddy's face, when he discovers there in the same restaurant*
Teddy: Jinny?! Hi, what are you doing here?
Jinny: I was going to ask you the same thing.
Teddy: Jinny please it's not what it looks like. She's not my new girlfriend, she's my..................


Well, I think I did I good job of rewriting what I had wrote before. And yes I meant to leave it like that, makes you wanting more doesn't it? Well, it's only gonna get better the more I write I promise you that. Have fun reading!

*Continued at Anchorside*

Teddy: Jinny she's not my girlfriend she's my cousin.
Jinny: Your cousin?!
Teddy: Yes. She's just here for a week vacation. Teresa meet Jinny, my EX-girlfriend. (And he puts the emphasis on EX.)
I wouldn't date anyone that soon after we broke up. Don't you know me by now?
Jinny: I know that but Magda said.... oh nevermind. I'm sorry I bothered you. Enjoy your lunch.
*Jinny walks back to her table*
Jinny: Magda, I know your just trying to look out for my best interest and all, but sometimes you assume way to much.
Magda: What do you mean Jin?
Jinny: That was Teddy's cousin Teresa, not his girlfriend.
Magda: Oh I'm sorry Jin. I had no idea.
Jinny: Yeah I guess not, and now I just went over there and made a fool out of myself for nothing.
Magda: Hey I tried to stop you, from going over there, so don't blame this on me. I simply said he's over there with a girl.
Jinny: Right Mag. You know what, nevermind. Let's not fight over this ok? I'm gonna order now, how about you.
Magda: Ok.

*Back at Jinny's Apartment that night*

She had just gotten home from a hard day at work and she was getting ready to take a bath and go to bed when she heard a knock on the door. She went to answer it in a blue cashmere bathrobe. To her surprise it was Teddy.

*Teddy is at Jinny's door*

Jinny: Teddy?! What a surprise!
Teddy: Is it a good surprise?
Jinny: Yes! said Jinny with a shocked look on her face.
Jinny: This is the last thing I expected. Especially after how I acted at the restaurant.
Teddy: It's ok really. I know why you were jealous. Especially after I left you because of your drinking. I know that you never meant to be all over that guy at the bar. After all, you were drunk and didn't know what you were doing. I just didn't know how to react when I saw you with him. I love you, and I can't picture anyone touching you besides me. I acted the way I did out of love for you, but I know you are trying to get your life back together. And you've stopped drinking and all, so what do you say we give this another chance?
Jinny: Oh Teddy. I'm so happy to hear you say that. I've missed you so much!!
With that, Jinny pulls Teddy out of the doorway, and into the house. Teddy shuts the door behind him.
Jinny: Uh Teddy, I was just getting ready to take a bath and go to bed. I'm really tierd. I've had a long day.
Teddy: Well in that case, want some help?
Jinny: Sure. Says Jinny walking into the bathroom, grabbing Teddy's tie so that he has to walk behind her. Jinny shuts and locks the bathroom door.
Teddy: I only ask one favor.
Jinny: Sure.
Teddy: I want to do something for you can you turn around?
Jinny: Why?
Teddy: Don't ask, just do it please?
Jinny: Ok. says Jinny with a confused look on her face. She turns around, but Teddy doesn't realize she's facing the mirror and can see everything he's doing. As curious as she is, she still wanted to be surprised, so she forced herself not to look. Teddy is starting to get undressed and climb into the tub, with something in his hand.
Ok you can turn around now. Teddy says.
Jinny: Gladly. She turns around to see Teddy in the tub, with bubbles up to his neck.
Jinny: Is this the surprise? She asks thinking ok, it's nice, but I have seen him in the tub before.
Teddy: No this isn't the surprise. Come in here with me and I'll gladly show you what it is.
Jinny gets undressed in the bathroom while Teddy looks on. She climbs in the tub and sits down right in front of Teddy and rests her head on his chest, which causes the water to tip over the side of the tub. Teddy puts both arms around her, and slowly opens his left hand. When Jinny realizes what is in his hand, her eyes well up with tears. She leans back and looks into Teddy's eyes.
Teddy: Jinny I love you with all my heart and soul, and I want to spend the rest of my life with you. And I can't possibly picture myself making love to anyone else but you. Jinny Exstead, will you marry me??

Interesting!... Well!! Carry on, carry on... Nice writing. Go on....... (this is where you post more)

Ok here's more!

*In the Bathtub*

Oh my God! says Jinny, covering her mouth, her hands are shaking.
Jinny: Yes, yes I'll marry you!
She turns 180 degrees so she is now in the tub facing him rather than having her back towards him. She places both her hands on his face one on each cheek, and french kisses him. His head is tilt back slighty by the force and speed of the kiss, yet it was gentle all at the same time. Which altogether caused Teddy to twitch for a second, and it felt like his whole body was electrified.
Jinny: Teddy...I think we should stop.
Teddy: What...why...don't you want to?
Jinny: YES! Of course want to, I just want to wait till after we're married, that's all. It will make our wedding night complete.
Teddy: Oh ok that's fine. Whatever you want Jin. it's your call. I'll wait as long as you want.
Jinny: Really? You mean that?
Teddy: Yes of course Jin. I love you.
Jinny: I love you too! It's just that I've done this with every other guy I've ever dated, and I wanted you to be different. Because I really care about you and I want this to happen like it has in my dreams.
Teddy: That's ok Jin, really. And don't worry about your dreams not coming true. I'll make your dreams reality.
Jinny's eyes well up with tears.
*Scene fades credits roll*

*START OF ANOTHER EPISODE*

You Learn Something New Everyday

*At the Division in the Morning*

Everyone is sitting at there desk. Jinny looks over to Magda and puts her hand up to show her the engagement ring from Teddy. Right as Magda starts to stay say something, Jinny gives her a look hoping she won't. Jinny gets up and walks over to Magda's desk. She wispers something in Magda's ear.
Jinny: (whispering) I need to talk to you in the hallway.
Magda: Sure!
*They both walk out to the hall*
Magda: Oh Jin, am I seeing what I think I'm seeing?
Jinny just nods.
Magda: Your engaged, oh my God! Magda yells!
Jinny: Shush, your the only ohe that knows!
Magda: Why don't you want anyone else to know, Jin?
Jinny: I do...just not right now. I wanna surprise them when I pass out the invitations. But I just had to tell someone, I couldn't wait anymore!
Magda: Oh I see. But one question.
Jinny: Yeah?
Magda: How are you gonna hide the ring?
Jinny: Oh that's right! I don't know, I'll figure out something.
Magda: Ok, this I gotta see!
*They walk back into the Division and everyone's giving them a wierd look wondering what was so important that they had to go into the hallway to talk*
Jinny scans the room quickly with her eyes, and says.
Jinny: What?!
*Everyone goes back to what they were doing*
Kate comes out of her office, and stands in the doorway.
Kate: Uh, I need to see everyone in my ofice right away.
CD: All of us?
Raina: Everyone?
Nate: All at once?
Kate: YES! EVERYONE! Did I stutter?
*Everybody knows it must be something important, seeings how she has never called everyone into her office at the same time before*
They all walk to her office together leaving the divison empty. Raina, CD, and Nate sit down. Magda and Jinny come in and close the door, then stand in front of it.
Kate: Ok. I want to try something new. I am going to change everyone's partners.
Jinny: Why something wrong with the way things are?
*Kate notices Jinny's ring, because she has her right arm folded over her left, but Kate doesn't say anything just looks at her for a second. Which makes Jinny put her hands behind her back.
Hate: No there's nothing at all wrong with the way things are now. I'm just curious if we will solve more cases or less cases by changing partners.
Raina: Maybe we'll solve the same number of cases.
Kate: That's a possibility also.
Magda: So who's working with who?
Kate: Well, this is how it goes. Raina how do you feel about getting off your desk duty and, hitting the streets? Do you think your ready?
Raina: Uh Sure I'm up for the challenge.
Kate: Ok then Raina your with Nate. Is that ok?

Raina and Nate: Yeah that's fine.
Kate: Ok and Cd how do you feel about working with Magda?
CD just looks at Magda.
CD: It's fine with me. Is it ok with you Magda?
Magda: Uh, yeah I'm fine with it.
Kate: Ok that's settled.
Jinny: Uh what about me? You know, the one over here.
*Jinny waves her ringless hand with an attitude*
Kate: Well........
Jinny: Yeah! Well.......
Kate: I was thinking of putting you with Teddy.
Jinny: Really?!
*Her face lights up. Everyone but Magda still thinks there seperated*
Kate: Is that Fine? I mean I don't know if you two are on speaking terms or anything.
*Magda's look is worth a thousand words*
Jinny: Yeah, that's fine I'll work with TeDdY.
Her voice gets scratchy at the mention of his name.
Jinny: Um just one question Cap.
Kate: Yeah.
Jinny: How long is this gonna last?
Kate: Well, if all goes well after about a week, you can choose whether or not you want to stay with your new partner, or go back to the way things were.
Jinny: I see. And if things are worse after a week?
Kate: Well then, we'll have to go back to the way things were when we didn't have any problems at all.
CD: Oh I see, it's like a trial.
Kate: Exactly.
Nate: This is a good experiment.
Raina: Yeah until we have to decide whether or not to switch back.
Magda: I know what you mean. People might get offended.
Jinny: Well, time will tell I guess. So Cap. have you made Teddy aware of this.
Kate: Yes I informed him early this morning. And he agreed to do it if you would.
Jinny: Oh ok.
*Was all Jinny could say without hinting that she was engaged to him*
Kate: Ok that's all, go out and give this a try, if you have any problems come back and see me.
*With that, everyone leaves. As Jinny is about to go also, Kate calls her back*
Kate: Uh Jin coul you stay a second, and close the door?
Jinny: Sure. she says
She couldn't help but grin from ear to ear. Teddy's proposal made her happier then she ever thought she could be.
Kate: Jinny, you wanna tell me what's going on?
Jinny: Tell you what?
Come on Jinny Kate says laughing a little.
Kate: It's written all over your face. And your hand. You're engaged to Teddy aren't ya?
Jinny: *Sighs* Yeah I am she smiles. He proposed last night.
Kate: Why didn't you tell me.
Jinny: Well I wanted to wait until I was gonna hand out the invites, but I have a feeling I won't make it that long. I already told Mag, and now you know.
Kate: Oh Jin Congradulations.
*She gets up and hugs Jinny. Jinny very happily returns it*
Jinny: Thanks, Captain.
Kate: Come on tell everyone else! I wanna see there expression.
Jinny: Ok I'll go tell them now.
Kate: Yes thank you! She says!
Jinny heads for the door and captain follows close behind.
Jinny is standing in the middle of the Division.
Jinny: Eh hem. I have an announcement to make.
Just as she says that, Teddy walks in. Jinny walks over to him stopping him in the doorway.
Jinny: Oh Teddy you're just in time!
Teddy: Just in time for what? Have you decided to work with me? Jinny: Yeah yeah yeah she says eager to spread the good news.
Jinny: Ok everyone! Teddy and I are engaged! She puts her hand up and wiggles her fingers.
Everyone goes over to Jinny to check out the ring.
CD: Oh my God! The ring is beautiful!
Jinny: Thank you.
Nate: When did this happen?
Jinny: He proposed last night.
Raina: How did he do it though? He was on one knee right?
Jinny and Teddy bust out laughing.
Jinny: Well, not exactly!
Magda: Then how? you never told me that!
Kate: Yeah come on!
Jinny looks over to Teddy.
Jinny: Should we?
Teddy: It's up to you, I don't mind.
Jinny: Well, we were in the tub together, and he had the ring in his hand, and he said he had a surprise for me. He opened his hand to show me the ring, said that he loved me, and proposed.
Everyone is unision: Awwwwwwwwwww
Jinny: Ok don't be getting sentimental on me now!
*Scene fades out*

You might notice quite a few mistakes in my last entry. It's because I was in a rush to send it!! lol Sorries about that. Well, hope ou enjoyed reading more to come!

Ok, here's more!

*Scene picks up in CD's car*

Magda: Ok, Do you have a problem with being my partner?
CD: No what makes you say that?
Magda: Because of the way you were looking at me in Captain's office.
CD is quiet for a few seconds.
CD: Ok. This is why I didn't take easy to getting a new partner. My first partner whom I worked with for awhile, died. So I had to adjust to a new partner, Angela. Then she left, so they put me with Nate. And now Captain tells me I have to adjust to working with you.
Magda: Then why did you agree to work with me if you didn't want to?
CD: Because I didn't want you to get offended if I said I would rather have things the way they are. I have NOTHING at all against you, I'm just afraid of losing another partner.
Magda: Oh CD I had no idea! Why didn't you just explain that to me in the office I would have understood.
CD: Yeah well like I said, I don't want to offend you.
Magda: Really I understand. But thank you for looking after me.
CD nods.
Magda smiles. Scene fades to Raina and Nate sitting at there desks. Nate gets up and walks over to Raina and sits down in Jinny's chair.
Nate: So what ya think about Captain changing partners?
Raina: I'm ok with it. The only thing I'm worried about, is that I'll mess up alot now that Captain's got me on the streets.
Nate: I'm not at all worried about that. I know you'll do great working the beat. You are very intelligent and witty. You notice alot of things that most people don't. You'll do fine Raina.
Raina: Wow thanks that means alot.
Nate: Sure besides if you need any help I'll be by your side to work with you. Not that I'll be much help. I'm fairly new to the Division as well.
Raina: No, you'll be a huge help. You've been out on the streets I haven't.
Nate: Well, I guess we can help each other.
Raina: Sounds like a plan!
*Cuts to Jinny and Teddy talking in the hallway of the Division*
Teddy: So, when do you think we should plan our wedding?
Jinny: Well I know this sounds crazy, but I've always wanted a winter wedding.
Teddy: Really?!
Jinny: Yeah I mean, it's original. How many people you know have winter weddings?
Teddy: Not many that's for sure.
Jinny: There ya go. So what'd ya say? I mean it is your wedding too I can't make all the decisions.
Teddy: No Jin. You've been dreaming of your wedding day for awhile. If you want a winter wedding you got it.
Jinny: Oh Teddy! I love you so much. You're the best!
She reaches up and gives Teddy a kiss that would have turned passionate if not for Kate walking by interupting them.
Kate: Do you two lovebirds feel like doing some work for a change?
Jinny: HaHaHa.
She says with a humorus attitiude.
Teddy: What do you got for us today Captain?
Kate: Well there's this elderly lady that works in the caffeteria at Baker Middle School. Alot of the kids that eat from the caffeteria have been getting sick. Strangly enough the kids that brought there own lunches haven't been getting sick. So we have reason to believe she's poisioning these children. Also on the days she's off, no one gets severly sick. Which means all arrows point in her direction. So what I need is for the both of you to go down to the school and speak to the principal, and ask him if he would let you go undercover, and hire you in the caffeteria, to keep an eye on this woman.
Jinny: Ok, Sounds like we have or work cut out for us here.
Teddy: I know. But don't worry Cap. We'll get down there right away.
Jinny: Thanks so much for letting us work together Cap.
Kate: Yeah well... I wouldn't have if I had known about this whole engagement thing at the time.
*She gave them botha look to let them know she wasn't serious*
Jinny: Sure Cap. she smiles
Teddy: Well, guess we better get going.
They walk down the hall together to Jinny's car. While walking Teddy grabs for Jinny's hand. Jinny just looks at him and smiles. They both get into Jinny's car Jinny is driving. They arrive together at the school, and walk into the principal's office.
Teddy: Hi are you Mr. Lemone the school principal?
Mr Lemone: Yes I am how can I help you?
Teddy: Hi. I'm ADA Blumenthal, and this is Inspector Exstead. (They show there badges) We have been made aware of all the sicknesses going on in the school. We have reason to believe that your caffeteria lady has been poisioning these students.
Jinny: Our Captain has asked us to come here and see if you can hire us to work in the caffeteria so we can keep an eye on this woman.
Mr. Lemone: Sure, no problem. We'll set you up right away. Here are a couple of aprons and hairnets. I'll send someone back there with you to show you around.
Jinny: Aprons? Hairnets? Is this guy for real?
Teddy: Shhhhhhhhh
Mr. Lemone: I'm sorry but you two can't go in there looking like cops can you? You'll have to pretend as though you were just hierd to work in the caffeteria.
Jinny: Alright, alright.
They grab the aprons and hairnets and leave. Someone comes to lead them to the caffeteria. As they walk by the kids having lunch, it brings back an all to familiar time in Jinny's life.
Jinny: Geez I don't miss these days. Food fights and being bullied......
Jinny didn't want to say that, but it was already too late.
Teddy: Bullied? You got bullied around? I figured you the type to do the bullying.
Jinny: Yeah well, why do you think I am the way I am? It was from being teased all those years. I've learned to keep my guard up.
Teddy: Even around me?
Jinny: No, of course not around you!
Teddy: Oh, Good! he says cheerfully.
*They both enter the kitchen at the same time, to see a woman of about 60 standing over the grill making some grilled cheese.
Jinny: Hi mam, my name is Jinny and this is Teddy. We were just hierd today.
*She just looks at them and turns back*
*Jinny wispers to Teddy*
Jinny: This is gonna be fun! (meant sarcastically)

Next post will have something verrrrrrrrrrrrrry interesting. lol

OOOOOOOMG! Iliveforjayandnancy you're from New Bedford? Where? My summer house is right around there!

MORE PLEASE!

Great Fic so far add more soon....Im from the outside the city, wheres New Bedford around...sounds familiar

Originally posted by hockeybabe528
Great Fic so far add more soon....Im from the outside the city, wheres New Bedford around...sounds familiar

Dartmouth, Fairhaven... it's below the cape and near RI.

Yeah, I'm from New Bedford, I live in the west end. Not far from Buttonwood Park if you know where that is. I think it's so kool to find someone who shares the same interests as me and happens to live near me! So what do you think about my fan fic! lol I personally think it's dull and boring. And it sure as heck sounded more interesting in my head, then it did on the board! lol I'll be writing more shortly. Once I write it out on paper then I'll be typing it out. Probably within the next few days. Hope you like! :) ttyl :wave:

Originally posted by Iliveforjayandnancy
Yeah, I'm from New Bedford, I live in the west end. Not far from Buttonwood Park if you know where that is. I think it's so kool to find someone who shares the same interests as me and happens to live near me! So what do you think about my fan fic! lol I personally think it's dull and boring. And it sure as heck sounded more interesting in my head, then it did on the board! lol I'll be writing more shortly. Once I write it out on paper then I'll be typing it out. Probably within the next few days. Hope you like! :) ttyl :wave:

I know where the Buttonwood Grill is... that count for anything? LOL!

As for the fic, obviously people love it (myself included) so get to it and add more please!

Well to be honest, I don't know where the buttonwood grill is! lol lol To be straight foward lol I live very close to Kempton St. in New Bedford's west end I don't wanna say EXACTLY where I live in case some pervert on here trys to stalk me lol lol j/k But honestly, I'm pretty close to Kempton St. And thanks, I'm glad you like my fan fic. Lots of people do, but I don't! lol I guess I'm my own worst critic. And yeah I'l start writing soon! lol Thanks for the support. :D And by the way, I'm an Aries too!!!!!!! Isnt' that ironic! My birthday is March 31, 1983, when's yours? Oh, and one more thing. I have another post on the division fan fic page. It's called Coffee and Elevators/Blooper. I find it really interesting and funny lol Check it out if you want. ALSO, hehe if you ain't sick of me yet lol on the division message board there's a section called Make up your own bloopers for the division, and I have an entry there too. Well that will give you enough to do lol so bye for now :D :wave:

Originally posted by Iliveforjayandnancy
Well to be honest, I don't know where the buttonwood grill is! lol lol To be straight foward lol I live very close to Kempton St. in New Bedford's west end I don't wanna say EXACTLY where I live in case some pervert on here trys to stalk me lol lol j/k But honestly, I'm pretty close to Kempton St. And thanks, I'm glad you like my fan fic. Lots of people do, but I don't! lol I guess I'm my own worst critic. And yeah I'l start writing soon! lol Thanks for the support. :D And by the way, I'm an Aries too!!!!!!! Isnt' that ironic! My birthday is March 31, 1983, when's yours? Oh, and one more thing. I have another post on the division fan fic page. It's called Coffee and Elevators/Blooper. I find it really interesting and funny lol Check it out if you want. ALSO, hehe if you ain't sick of me yet lol on the division message board there's a section called Make up your own bloopers for the division, and I have an entry there too. Well that will give you enough to do lol so bye for now :D :wave:

APRIL 1!!!!! I'm an April fool! LOL!

Haha well then. No Buttonwood Grill connection. HAHA! My summer house is in South Dartmouth.... yeah, I won't post where but if I told you ((in and IM)) you might have heard of it!

POST MORE PLEASE! LOL!

*CD and Magda pull up to the coffee shop. CD shuts off the car, and looks over to Mag*
CD: What kind of coffee do you want? I'll run in and get it.
Wow, Jinny always knew what kind of coffee I drank, Magda says under her breath.
CD: What?
Magda: Nothing. Uh regular 4 sugars, light cream.
CD: Fine. I'll be back.
*5 minutes later CD comes out with the coffee. She walks over to the passengers side to hand Magda her coffee then goes to the drivers side and gets in*
CD: So what were you saying before? About Jinny?
Magda: Nothing I was just saying that Jinny always knew how I took my coffee.
CD: Wow I'm sorry I'm not Jinny.
Magda: It's ok I just have to adjust to things being a little different now, that's all.
CD shoots Magda a dirty look, as she pulls out of the coffee shop.

*Meanwhile, Jinny and Teddy are at the cafeteria.*
Jinny: Uh Ma'm could you at least give us your name?
It's Donna, she says with a rude tone.
Jinny: Ok Donna, if we have any trouble today, can you help us? This is our first day and all.
Donna: Has anyone told you that I have to train you?
Teddy: Well no, but...
Donna: Ok then. Figure it out for yourself.
Jinny: FINE, I'm sorry I asked.
Jinny and Teddy walk a few feet away from Donna.
Jinny: Teddy, I'm gonna lose it with that woman.
Teddy: Jinny she's old enough to be your grandmother.
Jinny: I KNOW, but errrrrr she's already getting on my nerves.
Teddy: Ok just calm down and try to ignore her as much as possible.
Jinny: Ok, ok.
They both walk over to the Loaf of Bread, and Peanut Butter and Jelly that's sitting on the counter. They each grab a knife and a slice of bread.
Jinny: Teddy look at us! We are both a very important part of the SanFransico police department, we're enagaged to be married and we're in some Middle School making Peanut Butter and Jelly!
Teddy: Shush keep your voice down! Do you want blow our cover.
Jinny: No but I mean think about it. Did you ever think you would get an assignment like this?
Teddy is looking at Jinny in her apron and hairnet, her hair is pulled back in a bun, so the hairnet could fit around it. He couldn't help but laugh.
Jinny: And what is so funny?
Teddy's snickering quietly.
Teddy: Nothing!
Jinny: What is it?
Teddy: Jinny, look at me and then look at you and you'll figure it out.
Jinny laughs.
Jinny: I'll tell ya this case is going down as my all-time least favorite!
Teddy: That goes double for me! But hey, hairnet or no hairnet your still beautiful.
Jinny just smiles as they finish up a bunch of peanut butter and Jelly sandwhiches, and walk up to a different woman.
Teddy: Um hi my name is Teddy and this is Jinny.
Jinny: Hi.
Teddy: It's our first day here and we were wondering if you could tell us what we should do next.
Sandy: Hi sure. My name is Sandy. Actually, it would be a huge help if you two could go in the back and get started on the dishes. Do either one of you know how to run an industrial dish washing machine?
Jinny: No.
Sandy: It's ok. I'll show you how.
Teddy and Jinny: Thanks.
She leads them to the back. After she explains to them how to run the machine, she leaves.
Teddy: Jin, can you see Donna from here?
Jinny: Yeah I'm watching her she's taking a break so we got a few minutes to work on these disgusting dishes.
Teddy laughs.
Teddy: Think we should take turns keeping an eye out for her?
Jinny: No, because I can see her perfectly from where I'm standing. I'll watch her when she gets off break. But so far I don't see anything suspicious.
Teddy: Yeah, not yet.
They continue washing dishes.

*Nate and Raina are still at the station, waiting for Cap. to get off

the phone so they can be breifed on there first case together. After about 5 minutes Kate hangs up*
Kate: Ok we have been recieving several phone calls from residents in the lower Pinewood area of San Francisco. They have witnessed a black man about 6'2" 210lbs. running through there backyards. He fits the description of the man we have been looking for for about a week now. He has been robbing several Convienece Stores. There are a few within one mile from where the residents had witnessed him. He was probably trying to escape through backyards. The people that have been calling
are worried for there safety. All I need you to do for now is to go
check the area, see if you see him. Here's a list of the addresses of
the people that have been calling. Stop by there house, and try to ease there mind. Tell them something along the lines of we are closing in on him, or we are narrowing down his hiding spaces. Just something so they won't worry as much.
Raina: Sure Cap.
Kate: In the meantime, I'm gonna look through the database see if he's been arrested before, and see if I can't get this guys last place of employment. Maybe we can get some information there.
Nate: Is that all?
Kate: Yeah, and good luck Raina, you'll do fine.
Raina: Thank you Captain.
Nate: Let's go.
*They leave the Division*

Okay Ange you need to get busy and post more. NOw would be a good time.

*Jinny is finishing up with the dirty dishes, when Teddy comes at her from behind and taps the back of her shoe with the 4 foot long floor squege. *
Teddy: Oh excuse me M'am I didn't see you there!
Jinny: HaHa Very funny!
She smiles then goes back to the dishes.
Teddy leans the squege up against the wall and puts one hand on each side of Jinny's waist. His arms make there way around to her stomach where he just holds her in his arms.
Jinny: Teddy, what are you doing I have nasty food all over me, I'm sweaty sticky and stinky.
Teddy: So?
He turns to face her and kisses her on the corner of her mouth. She returns the kiss, but then pulls away.
Jinny: Teddy I can't watch that woman if we're busy with this! Captain with shoot me if I screw up this assignment like I've done with others.
Teddy turns back the other way again so he's behind her now with his arms around her waist. He rests his chin on her left shoulder.
Teddy: Look she's going to lunch that means we don't have to watch her for a whole hour!
Jinny: Oh that's good then.
They hear footsteps so Teddy backs off, just in time as Sandy rounds the corner. Hey you guys, you can go to lunch now.
Teddy: Ok kool, thanks.
Jinny: Good maybe I can go home and shower now.
Teddy: Don't you mean we can go home and shower.
Jinny: That's what I said....we.
Teddy: Right.
They both head for there coats at the same time, and leave the caffeteria. They walk a short distance and turn left through the first door they see.
Teddy: We took a wrong turn somewhere. Let's go back.
Jinny: No wait. We're in a storage room.
Teddy: Yeah, and.......
Jinny: Well I know it's not the most romantic place on earth, but it's kind of nice. You, know. It's quiet there's no one around.
Teddy: But I thought you were all dirty and wanted to shower. If we stay here that won't happen.
Jinny: We have a whole hour for lunch you know. That's plenty of time. That is if you dont mind these dirty nasty clothes being in the way.
Teddy: So, take them off then.
Jinny: But Teddy what if someone catches us?
Teddy: Don't worry I'm a fast dresser.
Jinny: So am I, she says.
Jinny walks up to Teddy and she begins unbuttoning his shirt one at a time. Although Teddy didn't need to go through all that because Jinny had a pull-over shirt on. He let Jinny finish first, then Jinny put her arms up letting him lift the shirt up over her head. This left them both with there chests bare, except for Jinny who had a lace black bra on. Jinny preceed to unbutton his pants and undo his belt. Access to Jinny's body was much easier then access to Teddy's. But Jinny didn't mind. The suspense of the whole thing excited Jinny. She had seen him naked before, but this was different because of the possibility of them getting caught. The thrill was fun to them. All that was left was Jinny's pants and her under clothes. All Teddy had was his briefs on. Which Jinny soon made sure came off as well. They both sat down on there knees Teddy in front for Jinny he put his arms around her to undo her bra meanwhile, Jinny was sucking on his neck.
Teddy: Uh Jinny I thought you wanted to wait till our wedding night?
Jinny: Well I know I said that but..... I want you so much right now.
Teddy: Ok whatever you want Jin. I just want to make sure you're ready.
Jinny: I am I love you more then life itself.
From there they're emotions go the best of them. The remains of the clothes were soon shed leaving them totally naked.
Jinny laid back on the floor .
Jinny: Ohhh the floor is cold.
Teddy: Hold on I'll fix that.
Teddy lined up his clothes to the length of Jinny's body for her to lay on.
Jinny: Thank you Teddy.
Teddy: Don't mention it. I love you I'll do anything for you you know that.
Jinny: Yes I do.
At this point he was laying on top of her, but careful not to rest his full body weight on her so he wouldnt hurt her. This is when she realized, sex with Teddy was unlike sex she's had with any other man. Just as they were finishing there lovbe making, they heard a rustle on the other side of the door.
Jinny: Uh oh, I think we mihgt get busted!
Tehy both get dressed very quickly and head for the door. There clothes are still half on, and half off. Jinny looks at her watch. Jinny: Huh, I don't think we have time to shower.
Teddy: Why?
Jinny: Because we were in that storage room for 45 minutes! Unless we can make it there and back and shower in 15 minutes.
Teddy: Ok well, let's go the bathroom then to make ourselves half presentable at least.
Jinny walks to the left to the woman's room and Teddy to the right to the men's room.
They both get out in just enough time to see Donna coming down the hall. She has a tray of cookies in her hands.
Jinny: Hey Donna, I thought you were on lunch?
Donna: Oh I decided to skip it. I wanted to get the kids lunches out of the way.
Teddy: So you didn't go to lunch at all? Teddy asks worriedly.
Donna: No why what's the big deal?
Jinny: Nothing we were just curious.
Donna walks away.
Jinny: Uh Teddy I got a bad feeling she was doing something to the food while we were in that store room.
They both have a worried look on there face, knowing that Captain won't approve of there secret meeting, which in turn caused Donna to get away with one more day of poisioning.

:grineyes: OOOOOOOOOMG THAT WAS SO GREAT! MOre please!

That was good??? Wow my friend Jeanie said it was but I guess I had to hear it from more then one person. lol I dunno but thanks!!! I feel so special! lol :)

*Scene picks up on Pennsylvania Avenue at night. It focuses in on a woman putting a child in a car seat in the back, then she goes into the driver's seat. The child is screaming in the back. Scene cuts to Cd and Magda arriving at the Division after getting there coffee. They walk into Kate's office, where she tells them about the first case that they have to work together.*
Kate: What we have this time is a carjacking. There was a woman coming out of her house that's located at 1435 Pennsylvania Avenue. She was putting her child in the backseat, when a guy held her at gunpoint. He made her sit in the passengers seat and he took over with the driving. A few officers started to chase him. It ended when he ran out of gas. He pulled over on the side of the road, and fled on foot into a backyard. Cops chased him, but lost him when the yards were connected and had several fences that he was jumping over. We know the area he was in at the time, but where he might be now no one knows. So be prepared. Just go to the victims house and see if you can get a description of him. Then call it in to me, I'll check the computer to see if he has been arrested in any other town for this kind of thing.
CD: Ok Cap.
Magda: Ok, we'll see what we can find out.
*They leave and head out to CD's car once again*

*Jinny and Teddy walk into the division side by side with a worried look on both there faces. They walk into the Captain's office. She is sitting at her desk. Once she sees them come in she stands up.*
Kate: Where the hell have you two been?
Jinny: What do you mean Captain? We were at the school.
Kate: Yeah. And did you find that woman?
Jinny: Yes we did.
Kate: And did she attempt to poision the food at all?
Teddy: Uh, well, not that we could see.
Kate: Of course not! Maybe that's because you weren't doing your job! I just got a call from the school principal. He said it was lunch time and that woman was serving the kids and you two were nowhere to be found.
Jinny: That's because Sandy told us to go to lunch, when she did.
Kate: Right. And did you go to lunch?
Teddy: Of course we did.
Kate: You did?
Jinny: YES!
Kate: Don't you DARE try and lie to me!Principal Lemone didn't see your car leave the parking lot for that whole hour! Now, where were you?
*Teddy and Jinny were silent for a moment. Kates eyes move over to the left side of Teddy's neck. She notices a hickey that wasn't there when he left the Division, but it's there now. Teddy noticed where Kate's eyes went, so he pulled up his shirt collar in an attempt to hide what the Captain already saw.
Kate: So, is THAT what you two were doing on your lunch?
Jinny: Cap. listen...
Kate: You disgust me Jinny! I lost any respect I ever had for you. You would rather be doing each other then
concentrating on your job. I knew putting you two together was a mistake. That's ok. I'm gonna fix that right now.
*Kate picks up the phone and starts to dial Jinny goes over to her and hangs it up.*
Jinny: Will you just listen to me for a damn second! We were going on our lunch like we were suppose to. Just because we didn't take a "lunch" doesn't mean we did anything wrong! It was our meal hour!
Kate: You just don't get it do you? Had you gone on your lunch like you were SUPPOSE to, you would have seen that cafeteria lady never really took her lunch.
Teddy: Her name is Donna, Captain.
Kate: Oh, well, I guess you at least got that much figured out.
Kate: Jinny, I'm gonna assign you another partner for the rest of this case, and Teddy you are no longer needed on this case.
Teddy: Please Captain, just give us another chance we promise that we will get her tomorrow.
Jinny: Yeah the lady named Sandy told us to take a lunch and now that we know Donna dosen't we will be prepared.
Kate: Ok. If anything like this EVER happens again, I'll have no choice but to suspend you Jinny, and see to it that you two NEVER work together again, do I make myself clear???
Jinny: Yes you do. And thank you Cap. you don't know how much we really appreciate this.
Kate: Your welcome. Now do you two think you can actually be professional, and stop acting like two hormone driven teenagers.
Jinny: Yes Captain.
Teddy: Yes Captain.
Kate: Good. Now get back to work, and I don't want to see one of those on Jinny's neck tomorrow either.
Jinny chuckles a little.
Jinny: You won't Captain, promise, and thanks again.
*They leave. *

*Later in the day before everyone goes home. Captain walks into her office with a cup of coffee in hand. She is surprised to see a beautiful bouquet of mixed flowers on her desk. She goes over to it and reads the card. *

Cap,
Thank you so much for always being there when I needed you. You always gave me more then one chance whenever I screwed up. And I want you to know I greatly appreciate that. Your not just a Captain to me your also a friend. Thanks for never giving up on me, with everything that's happened in my life.

Love,
Jinny & Teddy

this is awesome!!!!!!!! add more soon!!!!!

ty I will but I want to wait until I get a few more responses first, because I need to wait for my friend to catch up! lol She's behind on the story a little. Then I'll add more. I'm glad you like! :D

Originally posted by Iliveforjayandnancy
ty I will but I want to wait until I get a few more responses first, because I need to wait for my friend to catch up! lol She's behind on the story a little. Then I'll add more. I'm glad you like! :D


alright sweet!!!! sounds like a plan stan!

Originally posted by Iliveforjayandnancy
ty I will but I want to wait until I get a few more responses first, because I need to wait for my friend to catch up! lol She's behind on the story a little. Then I'll add more. I'm glad you like! :D

Okay, okay, Angela... I'm all caught up now. Now you can post more.... I'M WAITING!!!!!!!!!!!!.............. That is if you were talking about me? ;) If not totally disregard this post! hahaha


post more soon...................

New reader! (That'd be me!) I just read all of it, and it's awesome!! You should definitely post more soon!

:) *CD and Magda arrive at the victim's house. Magda knocks on the door. A woman answers it with a small child in her arms.*
Magda: Hi Ma'm. I'm inspector Remirez and this is inspector exste... uh, inspector delorenzo.
Barbra: Hi, my name is Barbra Mills. You're here about the car jacking, right?
*CD still has a wierd look on her face from Magda almost calling her inspector exstead.*
CD: Um, yes Ma'm we are. How are you doing?
Barbra: Not great. Oh come in please sit down.
*She changes the child from her left hip to her right, as she turns and leads the inspectors to her couch. The baby starts crying. Barbra gives him a bottle so he'll stop fussing.
Magda: Aww what a cutie.
Barbra: Thanks. He's the only reason I get up everyday. Ever since my husband died last year, I've had to raise him alone.
CD: I'm sorry. Mind if I ask how he died?
Barbra: He had a heart attack, and died in the hospital.
*She starts to cry*
Magda: Well we will do our best to find the man that hijacked you. But first we'll need a discription of him. Can you remember what he looks like? Any distinctive features?
Barbra: Well it was dark, so I couldn't see his face real well but I know that he wasn't much taller then I am. And I'm 5'6" so he couldn't have been any more then 5'8".
CD: Is there anything else you cal recall, because we'll need a little more to go on.
Barbra: Yes I also remember when he was telling me to get in the passengers seat, he had a very low and deep voice. And once we were both in the car, I noticed a watch on his left hand. That's all I can think of.
Magda: Ok. That will have to do. Here's my card call me if you can think of anything else. We'll do our best to find him with what we have.
Barbra: Ok thank you.
CD: You're welcome, we'll be in touch.
*CD and Magda walk out of the house. They almost get to CD's car, when Magda says:
Magda: CD, do you know how hard it's going to be to find this guy? I mean all we know is that he's about 5'8" has a deep voice and wears a watch. Do you know how many guys fit that discription?
CD: I know.
*They both pull away from the house and head to the Division*

*Nate and Raina are in her car talking*
Raina: Ok I think we should inform the people in the neighborhood before we go and search the area for this guy.
Nate: No, I think we should do a detailed search of the area first. That way if he's around, we can catch him before he robs another store or hurts someone.
Raina: Well we need to come to a decision and hopefully it will be the right one. But I still say we need to visit these people right away. They're worried for there safety and we need to ease there mind and keep them calm.
*Nate has an aggrivated look on his face. *
Nate: Ok. Fine. We'll do it your way. You are the smart one after all.
Raina: And what is that suppose to mean?
Nate: Nevermind. Forget it.
Raina: No, what did you mean by that, tell me.
Nate: I just meant that we both started at the Division around the same time, and ever since you've been working here you are always one step ahead of everyone else. Which makes you stand out even more.
CD: Even more?
Nate: Yeah. I mean put yourself in my shoes. I work with 5 woman, all of which know more then me and have been around longer then me. I'm sorry I just don't like having to compete.
Raina: There isn't any competition, Nate. We're all working for the same team.
Nate: Yeah well sometimes it doesn't feel that way.
*Scene fades into Teddy and Jinny back at the school, in the kitchen. They are all ready with there aprons and hairnets on.*
Jinny: So are we going to get some work done today or what? She chuckles
Teddy: Yeah I think that's a good idea.
Jinny: Have you seen Donna yet?
Teddy: Not yet, but I hope she shows up soon.
Jinny: Me too.
Teddy: Well, let's find something to do.
*They walk around the kitchen looking for something to clean or cook. Teddy notices a mop in a bucket leaning against the wall.*
Teddy: Well, I found something for me to do.
Jinny: Yeah great.
*She says looking for something to occupy her time. Just then Donna walks in.*
Jinny walks over to Teddy .
Jinny: I'm going to wait until Donna goes and does something, then I'll work right beside her.
Donna: Uh Jamie?
JinnyTeddy: Great idea. I'm right here if you need any help.
Jinny: Ok.
*Donna puts her coat and purse away. Then she goes over to the stainless steel counter to make some mashed potatoes. Jinny goes into the fridge and gets out the ingredients to make meatloaf. She brings everything over to where Donna is.*
Donna: Uh, Jamie?
Jinny: It's JINNY!
Donna: Whatever. Do you have any garlic salt over there? I don't see any here.
*Jinny practically tosses it at her.*
She watches as Donna turns her back to Jinny and opens the spice container. Jinny finds a reason to walk in front of Donna, and goes to grab an egg for the meatloaf. She notices Donna putting a white powder from a small baggie into the spice container. Jinny walks over to Donna.
Jinny: What's this?
Teddy hears the noise and comes over. Jinny takes the baggy from her.
Donna: It's none of your business that's what it is.
Jinny: Yeah well I'm Inspector Exstead of the S.F.P.D., and when you try to poision innocent school children you've made it my business.
*Jinny handcuffs her, while Teddy reads her her rights.*
Teddy: You have the right to remain silent.
*Teddy finishes reading her her rights and grabs Donna from Jinny so she can get her apron and hairnet off. They put her in the backseat of Jinny's car, and bring her down to the Division. *

*Nate and Raina arrive at the first house. The woman is hysterical and is afraid the guy is hanging around her house. They finally calm her down, and go do the same at all the other houses in the neighborhood.*
Nate: Man am I glad that's done.
Raina: Yeah, now let's go check the area.
*They scan it and find nothing. SO they head back to the Division.*
(In the car)
Nate: I wonder how CD's case is going.
Raina smiles.
Raina: You like her don't you?
Nate: Who?
Raina: CD! You like her. Everyone in the Division knows you both like each other. It's so obvious why don't you just ask her out?
*Nate is smiling throughout the whole conversation.*
Nate: Well, I don't think she's into me, I mean after all, she is dating that Brian jerk.
Raina: HaHa your jealous, aren't you?
Nate: No, I'm not. And besides she hasn't sent me any signals.
Raina: Uh yeah she has you just haven't seen them. She talks to you all the time about her personal life, and you do the same. Plus, you two flirt like crazy!
Nate: Is it that obvious?
Raina: Yes! I mean what are you waiting for, just ask her out!
Nate: Eh, I don't know. I just don't want our partnership to be ruined if she doesn't feel the same.
Raina: She does feel the same, trust me. Ask her out and you'll see.
Nate: Alright maybe. I'll think about it.
*CD and Magda walk in the Division the same time Nate and Raina do, and Teddy and Jinny do. *
*They all go into Kate's ofice once again.*
Kate: Ok guys. How are the cases coming?
*They all talk at once.*
Kate: Whoa, hold on. Jinny? Teddy? How did it go?
Jinny: Well, Donna did attempt to poision them, but I caught her in the act. We just brought her down to booking.
Kate: Good work.
Teddy: Yeah not to mention we got rather dirty over the past two days, and had the wonderful opportunity to wear aprons and hairnets. And FYI, we don't wish to do any job like that again.
I'm sorry! Kate snickers.
Kate: But that must have been a sight to see!
Jinny: Captain!
Teddy: Well, it was!
*Jinny smacks his arm.*
Kate: Ok, CD and Magda? How is your case going?
CD: Well, we didn't get much. It was dark and all Barbra could make out, was that he was about 5'8" he had a low deep voice, and he was wearing a watch on his left wrist.
Kate: Well, that's not alot. But I'll check into it and see if I can narrow it down.
CD: Oh and by the way, Captain? Can you see to it that you mut Magda back working with Jinny as soon as possible, she seems to miss working with her.
Magda: Wha.. I never said...
CD: You didn't need to. All those little references you made! I know working with me wasn't what you wanted. And that's fine with me. I miss the way things were anyways. At least with Nate, I didn't have to hear, Jinny this, Jinny that.
Jinny: What did I ever do to you?
CD: Nothing but your all Magda talks about!
Magda, Cd and Jinny start yelling back and forth.
Kate: (Also yelling) DAMN IT! That's enough! You guys are like a bunch of children! I'll put everything back to the way it was. So just stop!
Magda: Sorry Captain.
Jinny: Sorry Cap.
CD: Yeah...sorry.
Kate: Ok so, how is it going with your case. Nate? Raina?
Raina: Well, we didn't do much better. We eased the neighbors minds, but no luck on finding the thief.
Kate: Ok, well I'll look into that also. So that's all for now.
*Everyone leaves the office and go to there desks. Jinny is talking to Magda, Cd is talking to Nate, and Raina is talking with Dom. Just like things were in the beginning.*
Jinny: So Mag. once this case is over, are you gonna help me plan my wedding?
Magda: You know it!
Jinny: Great. I'm already looking at a few dresses.
Magda: So what's the date?
Jinny: Well, there's no date set yet, but I know it's gonna be a winter wedding. Probably late November or December.
Magda:Oh, a winter wedding, nice!
Jinny: Yeah I'm real original. I'm gonna have a winter wedding and a Hawiian Honeymoon.
Magda: That sounds great! I can't wait to plan this with you.
Raina: So, Dom, you busy tonight?
Dom: No, why are you asking me out?
Raina: Hmm. Answering a question with a question. Usually not a good sign.
Dom: Ok, so do you want me to pick you up for 8?
Raina: Uh yeah sure that sounds great. See ya then.
CD: Nate, I got a question for you.
Nate: Me too but you first.
CD: No, you.
Nate: Ok well, I'm just gonna come right out with it. Do you want to go out with me sometime?
CD: Your kidding?! Like a date?
Nate: It's ok if you don't want to.
CD: Nate, I was going to ask you the same thing!
Nate: Oh alright then, how about tonight?
CD: Sure you can come to my place.
Nate: Ok great I'll be there by 7.
CD: That's fine.
*Kate walks out of her office.*
Kate: Ok CD & Magda. I just found out something interesting. I did a search for guys that were 5'8" in this area, and obviously there were tons of matches. So I narrowed it down and searched for 5'8" males that have committed more then one crime in the last year, and then I only came up with 10. Which means he has been arrested in the past. So then I brought up pictures for all 10 suspects, and I listened to a voice clip of every one. Three guys had a low deep voice, and of those three only one had a watch on his left wrist. So I just narrowed it down by process of elimination. It turns out, this guys name is Hector Gomes, he lives on Adeia Drive, three blocks away from Pennsylvania Ave. where the hijacking occured. So set up a watch near his house, and then just bring him in.
CD: Ok we're on our way.
*CD and Magda get up and leave. *
Kate: Nate, and Raina? That suspect was also arrested previously, but he was found in three other states for multiple robberies on the same day, and wasn't caught until he attempted to rob a store in the local Mall, and there was a security guard, who happened to be walking by and caught him. He got out of jail on parol, and made it to San Francisco, where he started to rob these convienences stores. Boy, does THIS guy like stores!
Raina: No kidding.
Kate: Well, within minutes I'll have his address. Just do the same as CD and Magda will be. Wait for him at his house and then nab him. Huh. What a coincidence how similar these two cases are.
Nate: I know. It's wierd. I'm just glad it's all over.
Jinny: Yeah? No one more then Teddy and I!
*Everyone laughs, episode ends.*



My next Episode is called Here Comes the Bride, and it will ONLY have Jinny and Teddy in it!!! Well you have that to look foward to! Bye for now!
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awesome fan fic!! I can not wait for the next!!!!!!!

Well sorry to have to change this a little, but I'm writing an episode called Preperation before I write Here Comes the Bride, because I forgot Jinny, Magda and Teddy need to plan the wedding before they actually have it! lol That's a very important part! lol Plus we still got to have the bachelor/bachelorette party yet! So here comes one more episode with everyone, before the Wedding episode with JUST Teddy and Jinny. Except of course for the people invited to the wedding. Well, here is the next post/episode, called Preperation.

Magda and Jinny are sitting on the couch in Magda's apartment. Jinny has several wedding books spread out over Magda's coffee table. Most of them are wedding dress magazines but there are a few others on wedding cakes.*

Magda: So Jinny, what do you think about this one?
Jinny: No way! It's too frilly!
Magda: Yeah you're right, it's not you.
Jinny: I KNOW! What about this one?
Magda laughs
Magda: It's black!
Jinny: I know...I like it!
Magda: No, no, no I don't think so! You HAVE to wear white!
Jinny: How about a compromise? I can wear purple. You know, a dark purple.
Magda: Are you crazy?! First of all, that's too close to black. And second of all this is a wedding, your wedding. Not a funeral. You're gonna wear a long, beautiful, flowing white dress and you're gonna like it.
Jinny laughs
Jinny: Ok, ok!
Magda: But you can't tell anything from these magazines, you have to go try one on.
Jinny: Na, I mean come on I love Teddy and all, but this whole wedding dress thing is freaking me out. White none the less, you know how much I hate dresses, Mag.
Magda: Yeah but Jinny come on this is your wedding! And you only get married once...hopefully.
Jinny: HaHa very funny.
Magda: Ok, what do you say tommoroww afternoon we go look at some dresses down at Sarah's Bridal Boutique?
Jinny: Uh, I guess so.
Magda: Come on Jin. You got to learn to let your femine side show. We both know you have one. But don't worry I'll have you looking girly in no time!
Jinny: Oh great, thanks, Mag.
Magda: No problem!
She says with a smart alecky look on her face.

*Teddy is standing outside the Division talking to Nate.*
Teddy: It was really nice of Captain to let Jinny and I have the day off, so we can plan for our wedding.
Nate: Yeah that was nice of her, but won't she have to give you guys another day off when you get married?
Teddy: Not necceserly. I talked to Jinny, and she agreed to have the wedding and the reception in the evening, so that everyone from work can come.
Nate: Oh that's nice. So, now to the interesting question?
Teddy: Which is what?
Nate: You know, when are you having your bachelor party.
Teddy: Oh that. Well, I'll probably have to discuss it with Jin.
Nate: Do you really think that's something she's gonna want to talk with you about?
Teddy: Not really, but what other choice do I have. I know she'll freak out if I just go and have one.
Nate: Then don't tell her about it.
Teddy: Na, I can't. I'll be lying, and she might find out, and think I had something to hide. So I'll just talk with ehr about it, and see what happens. At least this way I don't have to fear attack of the angry fian'ce if I hide it and she finds out.
*They both laugh and scene fades to Jinny and Magda sitting at Magda's dining room table, drinking coffee. Ben walks out of his bedroom rubbing his eyes.*
Ben: Good morning, mommy...JINNY!
Jinny: Good morning sweety.
Ben: Don't you and mommy have to work today?
Jinny: Well, my captain gave me the day off, but your mom has to go to work in an hour.
*Magda looks at the clock which reads 8:30 a.m.*
Magda: Uh make that a half hour. Jin., I need to get ready for work. WOuld you mind watching Ben for a couple of minutes?
Jinny: Sure, we'll have fun!
Ben: Yay!
Magda: Ok, I'm just going to go take a quick shower. And Ben, you behave for Auntie Jinny.
Ben: I will Mom.
Jinny: Yeah you'll be good. That is, if you want to hear another one of my cop stories.
Ben: Yeah!
*Magda shakes her head, and walks into the bathroom. Just then, Jinny hears a knock on the door. Ben runs up to answer it.*
Jinny: Make sure you know who it is first, Ben.
Ben: Ok Jinny.
Ben: Who is it?
Teddy: It's Teddy.
*Ben opens the door. Jinny goes up to it when she hears Teddy's voice.*
Ben: Hi Teddy!
Teddy: Hey buddy!
*Jinny goes up to Teddy and kisses him deeply. Ben hides his eyes.*
Ben: Ewwww
*Jinny turns and looks at Ben over her left shoulder.*
She chuckles
Jinny: Sorry sweety!
Tedy: So Ben, where's your mom?
Ben: She's in the shower.
Teddy: Oh ok. I just stopped by to say hi to you and your mom, and to talk to Jinny.
Jinny: Well, I'll be leaving once your mom gets out of the shower.
Ben: What about my story?
Jinny: Don't worry Ben, after your story.
Teddy: What's he talking about, Jin?
Jinny: Well Ben likes it when I tell him stories about my cases.
Teddy: Aww that's sweet.
Ben: Hey Jinny, can I spend the day with you and Teddy?
Jinny: Well, that sounds good to me.
Teddy: Yeah me too, it will be fun. We just need to get your mom's permission.
Ben: Ok.
*Ben runs and jumps on the couch with his gameboy. Magda comes out of the shower dressed and ready for work. Meanwhile she's towel drying her hair. Ben runs up to her.*
Ben: Mom, can I spend the day with Teddy and Jinny?
Magda: No Ben, I don't think that's a good idea.
Ben: But why?
Magda: Well pappi, Jinny and Teddy need to plan for there wedding. Why don't you spend the day at Dad's?
Jinny: No Mag. It's ok. If I ever have a kid, I'm going to need all the experinece I can get.
Teddy: If? I was thinking more like when.
Jinny laughs
Magda: Well, I guess it's ok.
Jinny: Hey Ben, ready for your story before we leave?
Ben: Yeah.
*Jinny, Teddy, and Ben sit on the couch.*
Magda: Well I have to leave now, so I'm not late for work. You got a key, right Jin?
Jinny: Yeah Mag. I'll lock up no problem.
Magda: Ok thanks for taking him guys.
Jinny & Teddy: No problem.
Magda: Bye honey.
*She kisses Ben's forehead.*
Ben: Bye mom.
*Magda leaves.*
Jinny: Ok, this one is about a case that Teddy and I worked on together.

In the words of Simon Cowell "2 words FaB uLous"

Well, THANK YA!

But like I said, I have time to write more now that my life is more scheduled with my new job. I work at WalMart now, in Dartmouth Massachusetts. If you live around here, come in and visit me. I'm a Cashier and my name on my badge is Angie. Come on over! lol

Anyways here ya'll go. PLENTY more to come promise. (This time I mean it) lol

Ben: Yay!
Jinny: Ok well, it was a Monday morning and I was at Anchorside having breakfast.
Teddy snickers.
Jinny: What?
Teddy: Breakfast? HA! You call what you ate breakfast?!
Jinny: What was wrong with what I ate?
Ben (laughs)
Teddy: Well let's see if I can remember. Does this sound familiar to you Jin? Three eggs..scrambled soft, not runny. Hash browns.. crispy, not hard. Rye bread.. lightly toasted not burned. Butter on the side. And don't forget jalapenos.. extra hot if you have any.
Jinny: So? What's wrong with that?
Teddy: Nothing. You just eat more then me, that's all.
Teddy laughs.
Jinny: Funny. So anyways, back to the story. I had just ordered breakfast, when Teddy was telling me how nervous he was. It was his first time in front of a Grand Jury, and...
Teddy: Uh Jin, do we really need to tell him about this? I mean after all, Ben don't you like stories about Jinny catching criminals and stuff.
Ben: I don't care what kind of story Jinny tells, they always come out good!
Teddy: I see.
Jinny: ANYways! Are you done interupting me yet Teddy?
Teddy: Um yeah I think so. Go on.
Jinny: Thank you. Well as I was saying, Teddy was nervous because he had a case in front of the grand jury for the first time. So I said something to relax him.
Teddy: Oh you did, did you?
Jinny: Yup. Don't you remember me saying, when you get nervous in court just picture everybody naked? It helped didn't it?
Teddy: Uh yeah I had forgotten about that for awhile.
*Teddy blushes*
Ben: How does it help?
Jinny: Well it helps get away some of your nervousness because then you feel more confident, see.
Ben: Oh I get it. Maybe I'll try that at school when I have to give a report or something.
Jinny scratches the side of her neck.
Jinny: Uh Ben. One thing though.
Ben: Yeah.
Jinny: Please don't tell your mom what I just told you. I have to work with her everyday as it is, and I don't want to deal with whatever punishment she has to give out if she finds out what I told you. (she says while laughing)
Ben: (laughs) Ok Jinny. I won't.
Jinny: OK I'm glad you got your story. The short version anyway. But we should get going. I have to run to the wedding accessory shop with Uncle Teddy and pick up a few things.
Teddy: Uncle Teddy. I like that!
Jinny: Trust me, once you have someone calling you Daddy you'll like it alot better.
(Jinny gives him a senseous look)
Teddy: I think so to. Uh Jinny, do you have the key to lock up? Uh yeah in my pocket somewhere.
Ben: I call shotgun!
Teddy: You mean I can't sit next to your Auntie Jinny?
Teddy says kneeling down to Ben's height.
Jinny just smiles.
Ben: Um ok. You can sit next to Jinny.
Teddy: Thanks buddy.
Ben: After all, you two will be married shortly.
Jinny: Oh. That reminds me. Ben, we need a ring bearer for our wedding. Would you be interested?
Ben: Are you serious? Of course I would. Thank you Auntie Jinny.
Ben hugs both of them.
*All three leave*

Awww lol Post more!!!

word this rocks! its wicked good~

Where'd ya go?? You left us hanging! :) Post more sooonnnnn :wave:

i know it lol I'm sorry I temprarily had my computer taken away. I can't stay on long now, but I'll be on tommoroww night after work I'll post more then.

Here's more for any body that's still reading! lol I bet I lost a lot of readers because I haven't posted in awhile. That's ok. (sniffles) Hopefully the upcoming sections, will bring them all back! lol

*Teddy and Jinny are in the car. Jinny is driving.*

Jinny: So Ben, are you excited about being in the wedding?
Ben: Ya I am! But what if I mess up?
Jinny: How can you mess up? All you have to do, is walk down the aisle with a ring on a pillow.
Ben: You know, what if I drop the pillow and lose the ring or something.
(Teddy and Jinny laugh)
Teddy looks behind him to Ben in the back seat.
Teddy: Well, I wouldn't worry about that too much Buddy. The ring is tied in a bow to the pillow.
Ben: Oh ok.
*Ben breathes a sigh of relief. Jinny smiles and turns the car left, into the small parking lot of a building with the sign on the grass that falshed yellow, saying: Sally's Accessory Shop and under that also flashing in yellow it said
is your stop for all your wedding accessory needs.*
Jinny, Teddy and Ben all get out of the car. Ben takes Jinny's right hand in his left, and Teddy's left hand in his right, and jumps up swinging his legs over the curb in front of him. Teddy opens the door so Jinny and Ben can go in ahead of him. "Thanks hun" says Jinny. Ben looks up and smiles a silly grin.

A young woman approaches them, and asks if they need help with anything.

Jinny: Uh yes my fiance' and I had an 11AM appointment with Sally to decide what we will need for our wedding.
Woman: Sure she's waiting for you, right through here.
She leads them into a good size room with wedding books covering the desk in the middle of the room, and fake display wedding cakes all over the place. Almost everything was white, except for Jinny in her black pants and black leather coat. Jinny sits down in front of the desk Teddy is on her left and Ben is on her lap.

Sally: Hello Jinny, Teddy my name is Sally Franklin, nice to meet you.
She shakes both there hands.
Jinny & Teddy: Nice to meet you too.
Sally: Ok, so why don't we start by looking over a few magazines of different types of wedding cakes that you'd be interested in. Tell me which ones you like best.
Teddy flips through a few pages of one magazine and dog ears the pages of the ones he likes best. Jinny does the same.
Jinny: Teddy look at this one!
She shows him a 4 layer cake, with a bride and groom on top, and the edge of all the layers have light blue and yellow flowers. And on top, are roses made out of red icing covering the top of all four layers.
Teddy: Oh wow. That one is beautiful.
Ben: Yeah Auntie Jinny, I like that one too.
Jinny: Me too. So, it looks like this one is it unless you've found one you like better Teddy.
Teddy: Not really. This one takes the cake!
They all laugh.

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Here's more for any body that's still reading! lol I bet I lost a lot of readers because I haven't posted in awhile. That's ok. (sniffles) Hopefully the upcoming sections, will bring them all back! lol

*Teddy and Jinny are in the car. Jinny is driving.*

Jinny: So Ben, are you excited about being in the wedding?
Ben: Ya I am! But what if I mess up?
Jinny: How can you mess up? All you have to do, is walk down the aisle with a ring on a pillow.
Ben: You know, what if I drop the pillow and lose the ring or something.
(Teddy and Jinny laugh)
Teddy looks behind him to Ben in the back seat.
Teddy: Well, I wouldn't worry about that too much Buddy. The ring is tied in a bow to the pillow.
Ben: Oh ok.
*Ben breathes a sigh of relief. Jinny smiles and turns the car left, into the small parking lot of a building with the sign on the grass that falshed yellow, saying: Sally's Accessory Shop and under that also flashing in yellow it said
is your stop for all your wedding accessory needs.*
Jinny, Teddy and Ben all get out of the car. Ben takes Jinny's right hand in his left, and Teddy's left hand in his right, and jumps up swinging his legs over the curb in front of him. Teddy opens the door so Jinny and Ben can go in ahead of him. "Thanks hun" says Jinny. Ben looks up and smiles a silly grin.

A young woman approaches them, and asks if they need help with anything.

Jinny: Uh yes my fiance' and I had an 11AM appointment with Sally to decide what we will need for our wedding.
Woman: Sure she's waiting for you, right through here.
She leads them into a good size room with wedding books covering the desk in the middle of the room, and fake display wedding cakes all over the place. Almost everything was white, except for Jinny in her black pants and black leather coat. Jinny sits down in front of the desk Teddy is on her left and Ben is on her lap.

Sally: Hello Jinny, Teddy my name is Sally Franklin, nice to meet you.
She shakes both there hands.
Jinny & Teddy: Nice to meet you too.
Sally: Ok, so why don't we start by looking over a few magazines of different types of wedding cakes that you'd be interested in. Tell me which ones you like best.
Teddy flips through a few pages of one magazine and dog ears the pages of the ones he likes best. Jinny does the same.
Jinny: Teddy look at this one!
She shows him a 4 layer cake, with a bride and groom on top, and the edge of all the layers have light blue and yellow flowers. And on top, are roses made out of red icing covering the top of all four layers.
Teddy: Oh wow. That one is beautiful.
Ben: Yeah Auntie Jinny, I like that one too.
Jinny: Me too. So, it looks like this one is it unless you've found one you like better Teddy.
Teddy: Not really. This one takes the cake!
They all laugh.


:lol: :lol: Thats cute!! POST MORE!!

I'm going back to hand writing everything out, and then just coming online, posting it and that will lead to more posts in the long run. It's easier for me that way. I should have done that the whole time! lol This way will get to the interesting stuff faster. Like the bachalor/bachalorette party, wedding reception, and..... well I won't give anymore away you'll just have to wait and see! :-D! Keep reading!

*The woman gets up and leads Teddy, Jinny, and Ben into another room. This one has flowers all over the place. They all sit at a round table with several more magazines in this room, then was in the last. She then instructs them to decide on the flowers for the alter first, and then the flowers for the rest of the church afterwards because it's easier that way. They agree*
Teddy: So Jin, what type of flowers did you have in mind?
Jinny: I don't know really. I mean I'm not the flowery type.
Teddy shakes his head and laughs.
Jinny: What?
Teddy: Not the flowery type. I don't believe you for a minute!
Jinny: And why not?
Teddy: Please Jin. Magda has told me all about...
*Stops himself once he realizes what he just said*
Jinny: All about WHAT?
Teddy: I'm telling you, I'll never understand why you insist on hiding your true feelings.
Jinny: Answer my question.
Teddy: What question?
*Jinny gives him a look*
Jinny: What do you mean Magda told you all about it? Told you all about what?
Teddy: Nothing really. Just how you were eyeing a dress or two when you were with Mag. doing back to school shopping.
Jinny: Oh is that right?
Teddy: Mag. is gonna kill me.
Jinny: Not if I get to her first.
Meanwhile, Sally is still standing there waiting for them to make a decision, on the floral arrangements.
Teddy: I was just trying to prove to you, that you don't have to hide who you really are for fear of seeming weak or anything. It won't change how I feel about you. Being yourself will only make me love you more...if that's even possible. Don't you know that by now?
Jinny: Yes.
Teddy: Well ok then. Now, can we decide on flowers before we leave this poor woman waiting any longer?
Jinny: (laughs) Ok.

*Meanwhile, back at the Division*

Magda is going about her daily business. Doing paperwork, while her partner has a day off of work. Kate walks out of the office.

Post more sooooooonnnnn :D

Ya'all better have a good reason for not posting on my fan fic, and just because I don't post much is no excuse heheehehe

*She walks up to Magda and everyone else in the Division.*

Kate: Ok I have an idea but I need everyone's help with it.
Magda: An idea for what Captain?
Kate: Well I wanted to throw a bridal shower for Jinny. She doesn't have any other girls in her life besides us, and I figured it might do her some good. Especially with how we're all trying to get her real feelings to show, and all.
CD: That's a great idea!
Kate: Yeah but I don't know the first thing about throwing a bridal shower. I've never had to before. Amanda hasn't got married yet. Wonder if she ever will. But I would like some grand kids.
(( This is before Amanda brought home the girlfriend lol as a matter of fact, this entire fan fic takes place after the intervention don't forget lol))
*Kate quickly changed the subject, realizing how insensitive that sounded toward her daughter.*
Kate: So anyways, would you guys be interested in helping me?
Magda: I think I speak for everyone...YES!
They all laugh.
Nate: I'll just sit here and pretend I didn't hear that whole conversation.
Kate: I'm sorry Nate. That's one of the problems I'm having. I don't know if Jinny would want her shower co-ed or not.
Magda: Well if I know Jinny like I think I know Jinny, she wouldn't want any men there when she's getting skimpy stuff like lingerie. Besides, it's a girl thing. So I don't think she'd want a co-ed shower. No offense, Nate.
Nate: None taken. (shrugs) It's fine with me. Teddy and I will celebrate our own way, at his bachalor party. So don't worry about me. I'll be juuuuust fine! lol
Magda: So trust me. She's more feminine then any of you girls think.
*They all give Magda a look*
Kate: Ok thanks for the help. Just remember, try not to slip and bring this up while Jinny's here.
CD: Ok not a problem.
Kate: Ok now we need to setup a time when we can all meet together and plan this thing.
CD: How about a few days a week, we meet up after work at anchorside.
Magda: Can't. Jinny always goes to Anchorside. How about my place?
Kate: Uh I may be wrong, but doesn't Jinny like to go over you're house all the time too?
Magda: Yeah but she always calls first, unless it's really important even though I told her hundreds of times she can just show up.
Kate: Ok so Magda's house it is.

*Scene cuts to Jinny, Teddy, and Ben.*

Teddy: Ok Jinny. This is your department. I don't know the first thing about picking out flowers.
Jinny: Ok. Not a problem.
(Teddy smiled noticing Jinny was unwinding a little.)
Jinny: I really like these.
*She points to a page in the magazine of purple lilacs that when hung properly drape over both sides of the alter, making for a very beautiful church.*
Teddy: If you really like those, then that's it.
Sally: Um you both like to make decisions, before you look at all we have.
(says Sally trying to make a more expensive sale)
Jinny: I know, I should be looking at everything, but it's like I fall in love with the first thing I see!
Teddy: Hey, don't knock it! I'm just glad she's getting into this whole wedding thing. That's a big step for her.
Sally laughs
Jinny shoots Teddy a dirty look but he knows she's only joking.
Sally: Ok all we need now, is for you to decide what pattern you want for the flowers for the church.
Jinny: Ok Teddy, you're having a say on this one.
Teddy: Uh no thanks Jin. You can handle the flowers.
Jinny: But Teddy, I feel bad I'm making all the decisions.
Teddy: Jinny. That's the way it's suppose to be. Especially when it comes to flowers and dresses.
Jinny: But don't you want a part in this too. Teddy: Yes. Ok look. I'll decide on the place to have our reception, hire the photographer and stuff like that. Ok? The rest is all you.
Jinny: Ok. So I get to do the fun stuff!
Teddy: Exactly!
Jinny: Ok so without looking at any magazines, I know that I want all the flowers in the church besides the alter to be roses, lily's, and orchids. Do you think you could arrange that in a very pretty way, Sally?
Sally: Sure I would have no problem doing that.
Jinny: Only thing is, I want the archway leading to the alter to be JUST red and white roses.
Sally: Great. I'll have it drawn out, and you can come by next week and see if it's what you want.
Jinny: Ok great thanks for all your help.
Teddy: I think this is gonna be a really pretty arrangement.
Jinny: I know.
says Jinny all proud of herself for the first time ever
*They leave*

PPPOOOOOOSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTT MORRRRRREEEEEE

Teddy, Jinny, and Ben all climb into the car.

Jinny: Ok Ben, I think we've bored you enough for one morning.
Teddy laughs
Ben: I got a little bored but it's ok. I always like spending time with you and Uncle Teddy, so I don't care.
Jinny: Ok. she smiles
Teddy: Ok Bud, this has been fun but I promised your Auntie Jinny that I would take her out to lunch today, so we're gonna need to drop you off at Dad's now. Do you mind?
Ben: No it's ok. I had fun with you guys, and I wanna see if Daddy can beat my score on Fighter's Quest on my gameboy. I'm up to 2400 points!
Jinny: Ok. she laughs
*Jinny takes a left turn, into San Francisco Valley where Ben's father lives. She gets out of the car and walks Ben up to his Dad's house.*
Jinny knocks. Gabriel comes to the door.
Jinny: Hey Gabe.
Gabe: Hi Jin.
Ben: Daddy!
Gabe: Hey Ben! Were you good?
Jinny: He was great as always. No problems.
Ben: Thanks Auntie Jinny I had fun.
Jinny: You're welcome sweety. (she bends down giving Ben a kiss on his forehead) Jinny: I'll see you later. Bye.
Ben: Bye.
Gabe: Bye.
*Jinny walks back to the car. Ben waves bye. Jinny gets into the passengers seat, because Teddy wanted to drive this time.*
Teddy: So where do you want to go for lunch?
Jinny: We can go to Anchorside, some of the people from work might be there.
Teddy: Yeah we could....
Jinny: Why do I get the feeling you don't want to go to Anchorside?
Teddy: It's not that I don't want to go to Anchorside, it's just that I had a little something else in mind.
Jinny: You know Teddy, you're sweet for wanting to take me to fancy restaurants all the time, and I should be thankful because most girls don't get that but it's just too much after awhile. I mean it gets expensive, and I'm not the fancy restaurant type, and..
Teddy: Say no more. It's not a fancy restaurant.
Jinny: Ok then what IS it?
Teddy: Well, how does a picnic sound?
Jinny: A picnic? Really?!
Teddy: Yeah I mean it's something different.
Jinny: Ok, where's this picnic going to be?
Teddy: That's a surprise.
Jinny: Oooook. So I take it you're not going to tell me.
Teddy: Not right now. Just wait and see.
Teddy pulls up a long stretch of road, with trees on either side.
Jinny: Teddy. (She pauses) Where are we going? I've never seen this street before.
Teddy: I can't tell you yet, and I know.
*Jinny just shakes her head*
*Teddy sees the dead end sign in front of him, so he turns right into a hideaway that is the suniest, greenist, most beautiful place Jinny has ever seen.
Jinny: Teddy, what is this place?
Teddy: Well, I figured in between you working day and night on those draining cases at work and planning the wedding, that you needed a break.
Jinny: Why haven't I ever been here?
Teddy: Because I didn't even know about it till last week when I took a wrong turn and ended up here. And do you know the first thing I thought?
Jinny: Uh, How do I get back?
Teddy: (laughs) No. I thought WOW this place is really beautiful. I should bring Jinny here. This can be our place.
Jinny: Oh, Teddy.
*She puts her hand on her heart, to show true emotion*
Teddy parks the car off to the street side of the hideaway. He gets out and goes over to Jinny's side and opens her door for her. He takes her hand in his, and leads her over to the spot on the grass he had all set up.
Jinny: Teddy, um one question. Where's the picnic basket?
Teddy: Oh that. He walks back over to the car and unlocks the trunk pulling out a wicker basket with so much food in it, it can't be shut.
Jinny: Teddy! When did you setup all this?
Teddy: It was easy really. Right before I came over Magda's house I set all this up and then went to go get you and Ben ended up coming along, otherwise we would have done this a little earlier. But I don't mind I love spending time with him.
Jinny: Yeah me too.
Teddy: Ok. Now come here.
He takes her by the hand, walking in front of her leading her to the new secretive spot. He sits the basket down on the grass and then sits indian style next to it. Jinny is now sitting the same way facing him.
Jinny rests both her hands on his knees, changing her position from indian style to kneeling now. She gently leaned in to kiss Teddy on the lips. Teddy then opened his legs, so Jinny could sit in between them. Now with Teddy's arms around her holding her like that. She felt so safe, secure, and happy. She always felt like that when she was around him. No other man she has ever dated or slept with has done that before. Only he could make her feel that way. He was making it hard for her to breath, because being in his arms like that made her heart skip beat after beat. Yet she didn't seem to mind having to take a deep breath, with every second he was holding her.
Jinny: Ok Teddy. I need to ask you something.
Teddy: Sure Hun. What is it?
Jinny: Do you mind it?
Teddy: Do I mind what? Jinny.
Jinny: The fact that I've slept with lots of men in the past. Any other guy would call me a hore tramp, or slut. But you never did. Why is that?
Teddy: Well first of all, what you did in your past, is in your past. So why bring it up. There really is no point. And second of all if ANY guy calls you a name like that in front of me, well, let's just say the only thing they'll be saying is NURSE! So I wouldn't worry about that.
Jinny: Teddy that's kind of extreme don't you think?
Teddy: Not in my opinion. Not if I am defending my woman's honor. That doesn't seem extreme.
Jinny: My God Teddy. I'm very lucky to have you. I'm never gonna let you go.
Teddy: And niether will I.


Get ready for an argument between Jinny and Teddy in my next post.

Oh..I have an idea!!! :idea: :idea: :idea: POST MORE!! :D

GREAT PIC Lauren!!!!! I'll try and post when i get out of work

Here's more with help from my freind Lauren. She supplied some of the ideas. AKA SFPD Jinny Exstead

Teddy and Jinny finished up there lunch, conversation, and cuddling and packed everything back into the picnic basket and headed to the car. Teddy is driving, and Jinny is in the passengers seat once again.
Jinny: Uh Teddy?
Teddy: Yes hun?
Jinny: I need to ask you about something that's been bothering me for awhile.
Teddy: So why did you let it bother you for AWHILE instead of telling me right away? Don't you trust me by now?
Jinny: Of course I trust you Teddy. I always have. It's just the thing is what I NEED to talk to you about, is something that I don't WANT to talk to you about.
Teddy gives his dismissive laugh.
Teddy: Ok. Jin, just tell me. Please.
Jinny: Ok well I was wondering what you were planning on doing for a bachalor party.
Teddy: Ah, I see. I had a feeling that's what you wanted to ask me. Well to be honest, Nate and a couple of his friends and a few of mine, wanted to get together and get me a stripper. But I told him I wasn't to thrilled with the idea and I didn't think you would be either.
Jinny: Ok Teddy. Let me stop you right there. I understand that it's your bachalor party, and you want to have fun on your last night of freedom and that whole deal. But I don't know if you can understand my feeling a little uneasy about you getting a stripper. I mean, just the thought of another woman making a move on you or dancing for you even if you're not doing anything back. It.. it just erks me.
Teddy: Ok Jin. If you're really that uncomfortable with it, I won't get a stripper. It's not that big of a deal. I'll just go out for a few drinks with the guys. That is, whatever guys are still talking to me after they can't have a stripper, but tough luck for them. (he chuckles) But seriously Jin trust me. I can do without one. Ok?
Jinny: Ok thanks so much for doing this for me Teddy. I mean you could go ahead and have one if you wanted, but I wouldn't be happy at ALL.
And besides (says Jinny rubbing his knee) I can be your own private stripper on our wedding night.
Teddy just has a shocked look on his face.
Teddy: Um...ok, ok. That's fine by me!
Scene cuts to Kate, CD Magda and Raina in Magda's apartment planning the Bridal Shower. Magda gives most of the advice to Kate, seeing how she has never planned a wedding shower or any other kind of shower before. Although Magda's planned alot of weddings, because she has a huge family.
Kate watches Magda stare blankly at the coffee table.
Kate: Uh Magda are you sure you know how to plan a wedding shower?
Magda: Yes Captain. I'm just thinking that's all. Trying to figure it all out, you know? Who to invite and things like that.
Kate: Well alright. So, where do we start?
Magda: Well when I've planned showers in the past I've always started with the hardest thing and worked my way to the easiest. It works best like that.
CD: Ok so what's first?
Magda: First we need to choose the place to have the shower at.
Raina: Oh I have an awesome idea! There's this place right after the Lincoln High School on Route 40, that my cousin had his reception at. It's a georgous hall and there's plenty of room. We could invite lots of people.
Magda: Oh that's a great idea Raina. It really is. But only one problem.
What? asks Raina all physched up, that she had such a good idea and was temporarily the center of attention.
Magda: Well, don't forget it has to be planned the way you think Jinny would want it. Which is what I meant by plan the hardest part first, so that it's out of the way and you can move on to the easier things.
Raina: Makes sense. So, what do you think Jinny would want? You are her best friend after all.
Magda: I think she would want something small and simple. Besides her wedding reception will have lots of people in it. And as hard as this is for everyone to believe I've seen a different side to Jinny then you all have. She's really quite sensitve, feminine and chic. What everyone sees at work, is a wall she puts up to avoid getting hurt. But when we're alone, she tells me these things. She convides in me, and I see her real side.
Magda stops short realizing she's already said too much, and that she had let her mouth run away with her. She thinks back to all the times that Jinny has gotten mad at her for opening her mouth and saying things she never should have. So Magda trys her hardest to take back what was already said. All the girls have a puzzled look on there face.
Magda: Uh, I'm sure everyone knows what I've just said doesn't leave this room. The last thing I need is Jinny geting mad at me for spreading what we've talked about in private. This is suppose to be the happiest time of her life. Planning her wedding and all. And where she's just starting to open up and get into the whole wedding thing, I don't want to tear her from that.
Kate: Ok Magda, stop right there. You should know by now none of us would say anything that we knew should be kept hush hush.
Magda: I know that Captain. Forgive me.
Kate: It's ok. So, let's get to planning this shower.
Scene cuts back to Teddy and Jinny still in the car. Teddy has just pulled in front of Magda's apartment so Jinny could pick up her car that she had left there earlier that morning when she went to visit Magda. Teddy shuts off the car, and takes the keys out.
Teddy: Ok Jin, so I guess I'll see you tomorrow.
Jinny: Uh, what's wrong with tonight?
Teddy: Oh the guys want to get together for the bachalor party thing tonight, rather then before the wedding day because it's convienent. All the guys have the night off. But I'll just tell them to cancel the stripper, and I'll go for a couple of drinks. If they wanna come they can if not then oh well. I'll just go with Nate. No big deal.
Jinny: See, I feel bad now. I didn't want to take away from your fun. But I just don't like the idea of another woman in skimpy clothing being around you. It makes me sick, and I love you too much to let her even try and get her filthy paws on you.
Teddy: Honey, please. I'm not worried about it at all, believe me. So you shouldn't be either. Ok? Trust me hun.
Jinny: Alright. I trust you and I'm sorry. Have fun tonight.
(Jinny kisses Teddy softly on the lips, and gets out of the car.)

Once Jinny leaves, Teddy calls Nate on his cell phone.
Teddy: Uh, Nate listen. I spoke to Jinny about the bachalor party, and she's not to keen on having the stripper there.
(You can only hear Teddy's side of the conversation.)
Teddy: I know the guys are going to be upset. But what can I do. My woman comes first. She always has and always will. Besides that's something you and the guys would enjoy. Not so much me. I'd do anything for Jinny. And I don't really need a stripper. Jinny is more then enough woman for me.
Teddy laughs.
Teddy: Ok Nate. See ya tonight.
*Later*
Teddy is at his apartment finishing getting dressed to go out with the guys, when he hears a loud rapping on the door, with alot of voices behind it. He walks over and answers it.
Nate is there with both his and Teddy's friends.
Teddy: Hey guys, I'll be ready in like two minutes. Come on in and make yourselves comfortable. So who decided to bail, after they found out the stripper was cancelled?
Nate: Not many really. just Dave and Chris. But who needs those two anyways.
Teddy: Yeah no kidding. Well I'm all set.
Teddy walks into his living room to grab his coat, when out of no where he hears this seductive music coming from outside his door. He walks over to see what it was, when he's put to a hault by a tall blonde woman of about 5 foot 6, who is wearing a long tenchcoat. With a man behind her holding a boom box. Teddy couldn't believe his eyes.
Teddy calls Nate who was sitting on the couch over to the door where he was.
Nate: What's going on over here?
Teddy: Nate, I thought I told you that I didn't want a stripper!
Nate: Hey, don't look at me! This wasn't my doings.
Teddy turns to see his friend Scott with a ear to ear grin on his face.
Teddy: Scott. You did this didn't you?
Scott: I sure did. Come on, Teddy just sit back and enjoy it.
Teddy: But I promised Jinny...
Scott: PLEASE! Jinny isn't even here. She'll never find out. Just relax and get into it.
Teddy: Ok fine! But only because you guys paid for this. You ALL OWE ME big time. I feel like I'm breaking a promise I made to Jin.
Teddy sits back down on the couch, in a very uneasy posture. The woman enters the apartment shutting the door behind her, but not locking it. She approaches Teddy. The guy she came in with, turns the volume up twice as loud as it was before. Right as she begins her job, who walks in but Jinny.
Jinny's talking while walking.
Jinny: Teddy?! I just dropped my to grab my coat I must have left it here last ni....
She stands there in awe of what she sees. A half dressed tall blonde woman is standing in front of Teddy. Wearing nothing but a skimpy top, and thong underwear.
Jinny: TEDDY! What the hell is going on here?!
Teddy: Jinny...I had no idea.....they just...
Jinny: How could you? And YOU get away from my man.
Woman: Hey I'm getting paid for this. I came here to do my job, and I'm gonig to do it.
Jinny: Is that right? Well missy you have a choice. You can A get out now, or B I can SHOW you out. And you don't want me to SHOW you out.
She gets all her stuff together and leaves immediately.
Jinny: Good choice.
Scott: Well we'll be going. Teddy I'll call you later, man.
Teddy doesn't say a word to him.
They all leave the apartment, leaving Teddy and Jinny alone.
Jinny: How could you do this? You promised.
Teddy: Jin. I.. I had no idea.
Jinny: Yeah I'm sure you didn't.
Teddy: I didn't! The guys surprised me with it, after I told them not to.
Jinny: I don't believe this. Your really something to do this to me.
Teddy: LOOK! I told you, I didn't plan this. She just showed up.
Jinny: Yeah well I didn't exactly see you pushing her away either.
Teddy: I wasn't THRILLED about the idea but they guys payed for it already, so I figured I had to.
Jinny: Oh well, that just makes all the difference!
Teddy: Look Jin I love you to death. But I can not understand why you would let something as petty as a bachalor party come between the two of us.
Jinny: Petty? That's not petty. If you can't understand why I have a problem with another woman dancing around you like that, then you've got a problem.
Teddy: Look. If you would have trusted me from the beginning, this wouldn't have blown up as big as it did. I didn't want the bachalor party I TOLD YOU! They threw it for me. There wasn't a second during all of that that I was enjoying. I just wanted to get it over and done with. I'm telling you. I wanted you to be there.
Jinny pauses for a moment trying to tell if he's telling the truth or not.
Jinny: You know, funny thing is I believe you. I can see your're telling the truth. I can see it in you're eyes you're sincere.
Teddy: Well of course I am sincere I love you. And no stripper could change that.

LOL, See Ang I read it... I'm all caught up now :-p It's good, but What's up with this 'no stripper for Teddy'? lol.... With strippers the guys can only look, but not touch. hahaha Keep going...

Just so you know, MISSY or should I say DiDi (hehe) There is a very good reason why there was quote unquote no stripper for Teddy. You shall see very shortly, what that is. I'm finishing up this episode, Preperation, and at the beginning of the next episode, Here Comes the Bride, you will see exactly why he didn't have a stripper. So there! :p lol Just like I told Jeanie, who got my outline of upcoming parts, there was a part in the outline she didn't like and as I told her it will play out in the end. You both just have to wait and see. Then you'll both be like oh NOW I see why such and such a thing had to happen. So there, Miranda. (j/k) Oh and btw, I'm AWARE that they can look and not touch. I'm not all THAT nieve! lol More to come...

*Magda is still sitting in her apartment with all her female coworkers, planning for her best friend's wedding shower.*

Magda: Ok. Now that we've decided to have the shower at your cousin's house, that's half the battle. All we need to do now is get the invitations made, send them out, and get everyone all together to make sure we don't buy her the same things. It's really alot simpler to plan a shower then most people think.
CD: Ok. Well, let's get the guest list written out.
Raina: Ok, I'll put the kettle on. Anyone want coffee?
Magda: I'll have some, thanks Raina.
CD: Yeah me too.
Kate: None for me, thanks. I need to sleep tonight, I got to work bright and early at 6 am to get a jump start on that murder suicide case I've been working on. We are so close to catching him I can taste it. He's just hiding a little bit out of our reach. So anyways, the guest list will be the last thing for today. We'll probably have the rest of this done by tomorrow, Thursday the latest.
They finish up what they're doing, and leave.
*Back at Teddy's apartment.*
Teddy: Jin. I'm sorry to have offended you.
Jinny: It wasn't that you offended me. It was more like you disapointed me. I mean, if that is true about not knowing about the stripper why didn't you send her on her merry way, instead of sitting there and being game to all of it. I figured you to be more of a man then that.
Teddy hears Jinny's voice start to crackle.
Teddy: Jinny, I'm sorry! I didn't know it would affect you all this bad.
Jinny's eyes well up, but she doesn't shed a tear. Teddy noticing this, stands up puts one hand on each of Jinny's shoulders, and sits her down on the couch.
Jinny is looking away from his direction. Teddy takes his left hand and tilts her head to face him.
Teddy: Jinny I want you to look at me. I've never seen you this upset before. Normally something like this wouldn't affect you this way. You would just shrug it off with that attitude and be over it. Are you feeling ok, Jin?
Jinny: Ummmm (she pauses) Yes Teddy I'm fine. Really.
Teddy: I don't believe you for a second. I know you. You would just say that so I wouldn't worry. Tell me, are you feeling OK?
Jinny: Yes really I'm fine Teddy. I just have a stomach cramp.
Teddy: Oh, it's...that time...??? He asks hesitating.
Jinny: UH YES! That's it. Jinny exclaims glad she found a reason that she knew Teddy would believe.
Teddy: Ok I can understand...well not really, but you know.
Yeah I know. Jinny laughs. And Teddy leaves it at that .

*Later at Magda's apartment.*

There's a knock on Magda's door. She gets up to answer it. It's Jinny.

Magda: Jin? You never show up without calling first? You KNOW I don't mind, but it's so unlike you. Is everything ok? She asks rubbing Jinny's shoulder.
Jinny: Not really.
Magda: Ok Jin come on in and talk to me.
Jinny: What is that smell?
Magda: Oh I ordered take out. It's Chinese want some?
Jinny: Are you kidding? That smells nasty!
Magda: Ummm ok, well do you want anything else then?
Jinny: No I'm fine. I just need to talk.
Magda and Jinny sit on the couch.
Magda: Ok what is it Jinny?
Jinny explained the whole bachalor party thing to her best friend sitting beside her.
Magda: Oh Jinny I'm so sorry to hear that.
Jinny: Me too. I mean I never expected that from him, ya know? To go along with it all.
Magda: Well Jinny after all, it was his bachalor party. It's not like he's doing anything with her anyways, ya know?
Jinny: Magda, whose side are you on?!
Magda: Jinny relax I understand where you're coming from, I'm just trying to make you see it from Teddy's perspective.
Jinny: Uh thanks but I don't WANT to see it from his perspective. She stops short.
Jinny: Whoa. she says grabbing the arm of the couch.
Magda: Jinny are you alright?
Jinny: Uh yeah fine, I just got a little dizzy and light headed that's all.
Magda: Have you eaten anything today?
Jinny: Yeah, I did. Teddy set up a picnic for us earlier today. I think I'm just tierd.
Magda: Well of course you are! You're letting this stripper thing get the best of you. You know you can trust Teddy! You're definetly not acting like yourself at all lately.
Jinny: Yeah tell me about it. I've noticed it too. I feel like there's something wrong with me.
Magda: How so?
Jinny: I don't know. I have been having real bad mood swings. Before I felt anger at Teddy and now I feel guilt. I don't know what's going on Mag. Something's seriously wrong with me I think.
Magda: Have you had you're period yet? Maybe that's wh...
Jinny: No I haven't. And I'm two weeks late. Which is what's worrying me. I'm afraid I might have a tumor or something seriously wrong with me.
Magda: Don't jump to conclusions, Jinny. If you're really uncomfortable about it go see a doctor. You're probably just late, that's all. Try not to worry. Make an appointment. At least it will put your mind to ease.
Jinny: Yeah you're right. Thanks Magda. You always know what to say. (She hugs her best friend)
Magda: Not a problem Jinny, anytime. I'm sure you would do the same for me.
Jinny: I would.
Magda: I know.
Jinny: So are we still on for tomorrow? Going to the bridal shop I mean, to try on dresses.
Magda: Of course it's still on! If you feel up to it. I don't have to work till lunch time, so we have all morning.
Jinny: Yeah I got tomorrow off.
Magda: Great. And don't forget to make that appointment.
Jinny: I won't thanks again Mag.
Magda: No problem.
Jinny leaves.

OMG is she Pregnant???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

You'll have to wait to see. :p HaHaHa

Originally posted by Iliveforjayandnancy
Oh and btw, I'm AWARE that they can look and not touch. I'm not all "THAT nieve!



Could have fooled me........ HAHAHA j/k ;) Post more... I think I know what it is....wha ha ha ha

I KNOW I KNOW I KNOW!!!! :p :p lol anyways post more!!!!!

I figured I'd post a little more to hold everyone over, til I can get on the computer again. My mom and I will be going out shortly to buy some warm clothes. Because tommoroww we're taking a bus to Boston and we're going to walk around, sit at the outside cafe and just have a mother daughter day. We are both over due for one, and we're both really stressed out and we need to unwind. We went to Boston once last year just for a day, and came back that night and had a blast! lol Anyways, I'm looking foward to it. Hope it helps me unwind. I'll let everyone know how it goes. See ya'll later!

*It's the next day, and Magda has just woken up, when she gets a phone call. She looks over to her alarm clock that read 8:14AM. She answers the phone.*

Magda: Hello, she says with a groggy voice.
Jinny: Oh Magda, did I wake you?
Magda: No I just woke up. I've gotta get dressed so we can get down to that Bridal Boutique. You sound rather giddy today. How come?
Jinny: Oh I don't know, I'm just eager to try on dresses that all. And I'm just in a good mood.
Magda: Well, that's a welcome change. Did you call to make that appointment?
Jinny: Yeah I called yesterday. They said Friday at 2PM. I'll have to leave work early.
Magda: Well that's good. (she says getting ready to end the conversation) Which Jinny senses, so she says abruptly...
Jinny: Uh Magda. There's a reason I called. It was to thank you.
Magda: I told you it's ok. You're my best friend I...
Jinny: No, not for that.
Magda: Then what?
Jinny: Well I wanted to thank you for not bringing up my drinking AT ALL since the Intervention. As hard as it has been for me to resist temptation, I truly believe it's been alot easier without having everyone questioning me about my addiction. And I'm already 98 days sober.
Magda: I know it. I'm so proud of you, you have no idea. You make it look so easy. I honestly didn't think anyone who was an alcoholic could quit cold turkey, with no help from AA or anything. I'm extremely proud of you. And I had figured that bringing it up constantly would make it 10 times harder, so I didn't say anything.
Jinny: I know, and I realize that. It has made all the difference believe me.
Magda: Besides I know you would come to me if you needed or wanted to. But I also know, that you're strong. And if you chose to, you could beat this addiction by youself.
Jinny: I know it. You're the greatest Mag.
Magda: Sure hun, anytime. Look I need to get ready. I'll meet you at the Boutique in an hour, alright?
Jinny: Ok great see ya there. Bye.
Magda: Bye.

nice:) aaaaddd more please

Magda attempts to get up after hanging up the phone, but once it rings a second time she sits back on the bed to answer it. It was Captain.

Magda: Hello.
Kate: Magda hi. Did I wake you?
Magda: (Laughs) No you didn't wake me.
Kate: What's so funny?
Magda: Because Jinny just called and asked me the same thing. I just got up actually.
Kate: Ok well the reason I'm calling, is to find out from you what time you think we should meet up again to make out the invitations. I know you can't do it today, because you and Jinny are going out to look for a wedding dress. So how about tomorrow after work? We can all meet up at your place again.
Magda: Good idea. I'll call CD and Raina and let them know.
Magda: Ok thanks. That was a good idea. So see, you probably could have planned all this without my help.
Kate: Yeah maybe, but I didn't want to mess it up for Jinny ya know? Besides, you knew that she would want a small gathering rather then a large one. I didn't know that.
Magda: You need to give yourself more credit sometimes.
Kate: (laughs) Yeah I suppose. Well I'll talk to you later at work. And remember, mums the word.
Magda: Ok Captain. I'll remember. Bye.
Kate: Bye.

*Magda gets dressed, and heads over to the Boutique where she meets Jinny. Jinny and Magda walk in together.*

Jinny: Umm I don't see anyone around.
Magda: Yeah me niether.
Jinny: Well, I'm gonna go find someone. I'm dying to try on dresses!
Magda: Oh really?!
Jinny: Yes actually, I am.
(She shoots Magda a silly grin.)
Jinny walks off with Magda trailing behind her. Jinny spots a short woman standing in the corner. The dress racks where taller then she was.
Jinny taps the woman on the left shoulder.
Jinny: Um excuse me. I'm interested in finding a wedding dress.
Woman: Oh isn't that sweet! You're playing wedding planner for your friend.
says the short redhead with attitude, because Jinny's appearence led her to believe she's not the marrying type. Magda turns to look in the opposite direction, knowing what would soon be coming out of Jinny's mouth.
Jinny: Hey you listen to me Carrot Top. (not something Jinny would really say...well maybe.....but it was too good to resist lol) I'm the one getting married here. Not "my friend." So I advise you to show "my friend" and I where your wedding dress are, before I take my buisness and "my friend" elsewhere. But not before reporting your attitude to you're manager..
Woman: Uh ok, ok, um just uh this way ma'm.
Jinny: Yeah that's more like it.
Magda whispering to Jinny.
Magda: Hey you go, girl!
Jinny nods a quick nod in agreeance, while licking the inside of her cheek. And sporting a half grin.
Woman: Ok these are where we keep our white wedding gowns. Our colored gowns are in the next room to the right, and our really modern ones are in the room after that.
Jinny: Yup.
Magda: Uh thanks.
Woman: You're welcome.
Jinny walks right up to one that catches her eye.
Jinny: Ohhhhhhhh Magda look at this one!
She shows Magda a bell shaped gown that is floor length with a short vail. It's lace from the waist up, and satin from the waist down.
Magda: Oh Jinny. You sure can pick em! This one is georgous! Why don't you go try it on?
Jinny: Umm....well....I like it,
Magda: but...
Jinny But I don't like the lace front and the short vail.
Magda: Ok, well, let's see what else we can find.
They each seperate and go different ways in search for the most beautiful wedding gown ever.

whyd u stop[ there? add more!

Jinny: Hey Mag., over here!
Magda goes over to her, thinking Jinny has found a nice wedding dress for herself.
Magda: What? Did you find a good one?
Jinny: Yeah.... for you.
Jinny holds up a dress in front of Magda that was really low cut in the front, and had a short skirt.
Magda: Jinny! Come on now get serious!
Jinny: I am being serious. That's something you would wear.
Magda: It is not. *says Magda holding back a laugh*
Jinny walks off again. A few minnutes later, she calls out to Magda again.
Jinny: Hey Mag. check this one out!
Before looking at Jinny or the dress, Magda throws her arms up and says:
Magda: That's it you're on your own now.
Magda walks the opposite direction. Jinny goes up to her friend and leads her back to where she was by her arm.
Jinny: No Magda, I'm not kidding. Look at this one.
Jinny's eyes light up while lifting the gown from the rack to show her friend.
Magda: Jinny, that's awesome! I haven't seen anything like that before in my life.
Jinny: I know it. It's exactly the kind of dress I've always dreamed of!
This dress was made completely out of satin from head to toe. Except at the waist, where there was a circle of very small white flowers that went all the way around the dress. And the straps also had very small white flowers from the front to the back of both straps. There was even a pair of white shoes near by, that caught Magda's eye.
Magda: Oh Jinny you HAVE to try this one on. And with these shoes.
She grabbed the pair she had just spotted and hands them to Jinny.
Jinny: Ok. I'll be right back.
Magda watches her friend disappear into one of the nearby stalls. She paces back and forth impatiently waiting for Jinny to return. Meanwhile, she thinks back to all Jinny as been through in her life and how far she has come. And a faint smile comes to her face remembering the time Jinny first made her announcement she was getting married. She thinks to herself saying: I only hope I'm as happy as Jinny will be in the future. (Thinking back to when she turned down Gabe's proposal) (((Remember my fan fic takes place right after the Intervention episode. And some things have stayed the same and some things have changed))) Magda still thinking to herself thinks: I wonder if he would accept my proposal now.
Jinny who is still in the dressing room area walks out of the stall and up to a mirror before approaching Magda. She stands in awe of the fact that she's actually standing there in a wedding dress. The time will soon be approaching that she has always waited for but never thought would come and now it has. A single tear falls down her left cheek. She wipes it off with the back of her hand. And she starts to think to herself, just like Magda did, about all she has been through in her life, and how far she has come. And a faint smile comes to her face as well remembering the time she first made her announcment she was getting married. She then takes a deep breath, and walks from the dressing room to her friend to show her the dress she has choosen to get married in.

this is sooo sweet!!!!!! please add more!

I'm working on typing more up right now. it's all writen out on paper, I just gotta post it now. But I got a question for swimfan. I sent you a e-mail a few days ago about the rest of the Division Season 2. If you are busy I understand. Just wondering if you got the email. Thanks. Going to post Byeies. :wave:

I'll post a little now then there's one post after this, then I start the episode called Here Comes the Bride.

*Jinny walks out of the dressing room, and up to her best friend who is still looking through different wedding dresses. She taps Magda on the left shoulder. Magda turns around. A look of awe and surprise come over her face. Jinny just stands there with a grin from ear to ear.
Jinny: Well, what do you think? Asks Jinny, while holding her hair up ehind her.
Magda's eyes widen.
Magda: Jinny, you look amazing!
Jinny: You like it?
Magda: Oh Jinny I love it! You are beautiful. Is that the one you've decided on?
Jinny: Yeah, it is.
Magda puts her hand on her heart.
Magda: Oh I'm so glad. It looks great on you.
Jinny: Thanks. Think Teddy will like it?
Magda: Oh I'm positive he will.
Jinny: Good. Oh wow I can't wait till the wedding, but I'm so nervous.
Magda: I'm sure you're not the only one. Teddy has to be just as nervous as you, if not more. But I wouldn't worry about it, Jin. It's just butterflies. Every bride-to-be has them. It's a good sign.
Jinny: And how would you know, Miss. Never Been Married?
Magda: Well, I might be soon.
Having said that Magda walks towards the counter. Jinny follows her.
Jinny: Wait a minute, here. What do you mean, I might be soon?
Magda: Well I never told you or anyone else this, but the night of your Intervention, Gabe proposed to me.
Jinny: Oh Mag, why didn't you tell me this, then?
Magda: Well there was so much going on with your Intervention and all, I knew that was the last thing you needed to worry about. Which is why I said no to Gabe. The timing just wasn't right. And once I explained this to him, he more than understood. I told him we'd get married when the timing was better. At first Gabe didn't even know about the Intervention which is why he did it that night. He knows my main concern, was to keep an eye on you. I never butted in on you're decision after the Intervention, but I was always observing from a far to make sure you didn't drink yourself to death. And I couldn't very well look after you and plan a wedding at the same time.
Jinny: Oh Magda. You shouldn't have postponed your wedding on account of me, that's crzy!
Magda: Jinny. YOU'RE my main concern. Friends come first. And I told that to Gabe and he understood.
Jinny: Well, I have to make this up to you somehow.
Magda: No you don't Jin...
Jinny: I got it! We can have a double wedding you and Gabe and Teddy and I.
Magda: No Jinny. I'm not imposing like that.
Jinny: You're not I offered.
Magda: I know but I can't accept. I'd feel guilty. Besides I haven't even told Gabe that I accept his proposal yet. Really, thanks anyway. I think we're gonna wait till after your wedding and the holidays. Maybe we'll get married on Valentine's Day.
Jinny: Oh that's a good idea. But the offer's still good if you want it.
Magda: Thanks. You're great, Jinny.
Jinny: Well if I'm so great why did I just fall in love with a dress that doesn't have a veil? lol
Magda: (laughs) Umm that's not good.
Jinny: I'm gonna go ask someone.
Jinny walks up to a woman standing behind the counter. She's still wearing the wedding dress she tried on. Um ma'm this dress doesn't have a veil with it. Is there a good reason for that?
Woman: Yes well, some dresses are sold without veils, but I have a few over in accessories, that would go great with that dress.
Jinny: Ok thanks.
Jinny and Magda walk over to the accessory department of the Bridal Boutique.
Magda: So Jinny, what kind of veil did you have in mind?
Jinny: Actually, I want a long floor length one.
Magda: Ok, ummm let's see what we got here.
They spread out once again going different ways Jinny feeling odd being the only one walking around in a dress.
Magda: Hey Jin try this one on.
Jinny: Mag it's short. I don't want a short one.
Magda: Well, give it a chance will ya?
Jinny: Ok I will.
Jinny trys it on, and takes it off real quick.
Jinny: Told ya, it's not me.
Magda: Jin you didn't even leave it on 2 seconds.
Magda goes up to Jinny and takes the veil out of her hand and puts it on her head, and looks at the mirror in front of Jinny.
Magda: You're right it's not you.
Jinny: I told you!
Magda: Just checking, just checking. says Magda putting her hands up.
Jinny: How about looking for just long ones.
Magda: Ok Jin no problem.
Jinny: Oh I like this one.
She puts on a long floor length veil, and turns to her best friend.
Magda: Oh I like that one too.
It was a long lace veil with a plain white headband at the top.
Jinny: Well, I think this does it.
Magda: Um one problem.
Jinny: What?
Magda: Have you looked at a single price tag yet?
Jinny: Ummmmm.
Magda: I thought so. Hold on I'll do it, it'll be less painful.
Magda looks at the tag, and looks up to Jinny giving a half smirk.
Magda: Not bad.
Jinny: Well how much?
Magda: 1,100.
Jinny: Not Bad! That's highway robbery!
she says it out loud.
Magada: Jinny, keep you're voice down.
Jinny: Why that's crazy for a dress?
Magda: Apparently you don't wear many dresses.
Jinny: You KNOW I don't.
Magda: Well Jin, 1100 bucks isn't all that bad. They come alot more expensive then that too. That's because it's a simple dress. A more extravegant one would cost upwards near 1700.
Jinny: OK I guess it's worth it.
Jinny goes to the dressing room to change. She comes out and meets up with Magda at the counter, pays for the dress and leaves.

On the following Friday Jinny is at the doctors, sitting a top a table with the infamous white wax paper, wearing one of those backwards hospital gowns. She begins to twirl the ends of her hair, and swing her feet in a nervous gesture awaiting the doctor and his news. Just then the doctor walks in greeting her with a file folder in his arms. He sits in his swivel chair and opens his folder.

Doctor: Well Jinny. Let's see, Jinny Exstead is that right?
Jinny: Wow who needs the doctor? Mr. Short-Term-Memory-Loss.
Doctor: Uh because of the nature of your condition, I'll forgive that remark.
Jinny: Whoa. What does that mean? The nature of my condition.
Doctor: Well, i'm simply saying that mood swings are to be expected.
Jinny: Ok you lost me.
Doctor: Jinny.
Jinny: Yes.
Doctor: You're pregnant.
Jinny: What?!
Doctor: You mean you had no idea?
Jinny: No! Of course I had no idea!
Doctor: Well, you're about a month along already.
Jinny starts thinking back to the time in the store room.
Jinny: Yes, that sounds about right.
Doctor: What does?
Jinny: Uh nothing nevermind. Thanks doctor. she says with a excited, nervous, and rather happy look on her face.
Jinny: Am I free to go?
Doctor: Uh yes. Just come back in two weeks for a follow up, and an amnioscentises, where we can find the sex of the baby.
Jinny: Ok thanks Doctor.
Jinny leaves and gets her cell phone out of her purse.
Jinny: Teddy, can you meet me at my place in a half hour. I have some important news to tell you. No I cant tell you over the phone. Can you please meet me.
He hears the change in her voice.
Jinny: No I'm ok. I'm really ok. Just please meet me. Thanks see you then. Bye.

I'M STILL HERE! lol Still writing my fan fic! I've just been busy. Is there anyone still reading??? I hope so! I always say I'll start posting alot more but I just haven't got around to it because things have been really crazy for me. Especially with the holidays. And I know that's no excuse! lol I know. Sowwies! I'll TRY to keep my promise now! hehhehe I'll shock everyone and post a whole bunch! Okie dokie so I'm typing some now. Stay tuned.

***INTERMISSION***

P.S. I know why I'm losing all my readers.......... I hardly ever post! I'm so SMART! :D :wink2: It's ok if I don't post, I give you all permission to bash my head in!!!!! :bash: I only hope it's after the holidays...... No I don't, cuz then everyone will be too drunk and cause some serious damage! :cheers: I think I'll just post and save my self the pain!

*Teddy shows up at Jinny's door, and after only one knock Jinny opened the door.*

Teddy: Jinny? What was it that you needed to tell me? There was something in your voice that told me it was important. If I had drove any faster I would have been doing 80 in a 30!
Jinny: Oh, Teddy.
*Jinny pauses realizing this wasn't how she wanted to tell him. She had it set in her head that if she actually ever got pregnant she would wait till the perfect setting to tell him. So she pauses thinking of something else to tell him.
Jinny: Oh Teddy. It wasn't all that big of an emergency! What exactly did you hear in my voice?
Teddy: I don't know, Jin. It was like a little bit of excitement and urgency. Like you wanted to tell me something but couldn't over the phone. You even said so yourself.
Jinny: No Teddy. I didn't mean to scare you. It was just that I went to the doctors today. And he said that I need to take it easy because I have too much stress, and it's not good for me. He wants me to take it easy.
Jinny had a half smile realizing how fast she managed to make up a story. But she was kind of upset she had lied to Teddy at all. But forced herself to believe it was all worth it, and it was only a little white lie, and that she did need to take it easy. All she knew was that she wanted to tell him on there honeymoon. She had it all thought out in her head.
Teddy: Oh, Jinny. Are you alright?
Jinny: I'm fine Teddy. She says kind of with a chuckle realizing how much the littlest thing wrong with her scared Teddy.
Teddy: Oh thank God. You scared me the way you said it, Jin. Are you sure you're ok?
Jinny: Yes I am.
Teddy: Well all I know is you are going to take it easy at work. I'll make sure of that. You know, why don't you take a few days off. You have vacation time.
Jinny: No, no. I'll be fine. The doctor just doesn't want me to do anything strenuos.
Teddy: Ok then. I'll make sure you....
Jinny: I know. You're gonna watch over me like a hawk every minute of everyday. All I need now is a babysitter. This is wonderful, can't wait. She says with an attitude. Teddy didn't know where to put himself.
Teddy: Jinny?! I'm not trying to babysit you, I'm just worried about you that's all. Teddy had a look of shock that Jinny used that tone with him. I just love you so much and don't want anything bad to happen to you, that's all.
Jinny sighs.
Jinny: Oh Teddy. I'm sorry. The doctor was right I am stressed. Inside she couldn't believe she would have to endure 9 months of these mood swings, and she didn't want to be that way to Teddy the whole nine months.
Teddy: Jin. You have nothing to apologize for. I understand. It just threw me into shock how you said that, that's all!
Jinny: I know. she says chuckling. I truly am sorry.
Teddy: I know you are, hun. Don't worry about it, please.
Jinny: I just don't want the stress to do this to me anymore.
Teddy: It will all be alright. You just need to relax. And I'll make sure you do.
Jinny: I know you will Teddy. I love you so much.
Teddy: And I love you too. Always will. He leans down and kisses the corner of her mouth.
Scene cuts to everyone at Magda's cousin's house where they plan to have Jinny's bridal shower. Magda dials Jinny's cell. By Jinny answering it, she had to break away from Teddy's kiss.
Jinny: Hello? she says while wiping the corner of her mouth with her first finger.
Jinny: Oh hi Mag.
Magda: Hey Jin. What are you doing today?
Jinny: Oh umm nothing actually she says chuckling.
Teddy walks away to make a pot of coffee. Jinny wispers to her friend.
Jinny: And I have something to tell you, but I can't right now. Teddy's not far away.
Magda: Ohhh alright. Is it gossip?
Jinny: Uh not really. she says chuckling.
Teddy: Hey what's so funny over there.
Jinny: Nothing.
Magda: Well look. I want you to come with me to my cousin's house.
Jinny: How come?
Magda: Uh, she wants to see me anyways, so you might as well come too and we can talk then.
Jinny: Ok that's fine. What time should I be there?
Magda: Oh uh I'll pick you up actually. I'm already in my car on my way to her place, so it will be easier just to pick you up. says Magda lying.
Jinny: Oh alright then.
Magda: Ok see you in about 10 minutes, Jin.
Jinny: Alright see you soon. Bye.
Magda: Bye.
Teddy: You'll be seeing who soon?
Jinny: Oh Magda. She's coming by to pick me up. We're going to her cousin's house.
Teddy: How come?
Jinny: I don't know. All she said, was that her cousin wanted her to visit, and since she was already on her way to her house she'd stop by and pick me up. So we can spend the afternoon together. Who knows, I never can tell with magda. She speaks in riddles. She says laughing. Doesn't matter though, I need to tell her something anyways.
Teddy: Awww I wanted to spend the afternoon with you.
Jinny: I know I did too. We work all the time it would've been nice. But that's ok. I shouldn't be there long. I'll spend the rest of the day with you when I get back.
Teddy: Ok that's fine. Can't wait.
Jinny: Niether can I. Well, I'm gonna go outside and wait for Mag. I'll see you soon, sweetie.
She walks up to Teddy and gives him a kiss on the cheek.
Teddy: Ok hun, see you soon.
Jinny walks towards the door,grabbing her coat off the doorknob as she leaves.

Hello people. The world's biggest apologies. I know I haven't posted since GOD ONLY KNOWS how long but now that my life is a little bit more in order then it was I'm thinking about posting again. But I need to know if anyone will be reading it. It would be more then understandable if no one wants to read it. For the simple reason I've gone so long without posting and I'm sure people would have a hard time remembering what happened. Either way, please post and let me know. Once again, I'm sorry.

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
Hello people. The world's biggest apologies. I know I haven't posted since GOD ONLY KNOWS how long but now that my life is a little bit more in order then it was I'm thinking about posting again. But I need to know if anyone will be reading it. It would be more then understandable if no one wants to read it. For the simple reason I've gone so long without posting and I'm sure people would have a hard time remembering what happened. Either way, please post and let me know. Once again, I'm sorry.



hey- i kno no ones posted on this in forever but im bringin this thread back to life and if ya got a ploblem with that then..... do sumthing! lol anyway if ya post more ill definetly be readin'! so post!!!!!!!!MMMMMMOOOORRRREEE!!!!!!

I'm dedicating the rest of the night I'm onine tonighrt to JUST posting on all myfan fics. Because I'm LONG overdue. There will be no chatting or im's tonight! Just posting! :-D Thanks for promising to keep up w/ this fan fic. I really appreciate it. Anyone else would have given up on it by now. lol You're the best. And now, I'm starting to write more and more, MAKING time to write, no matter how busy I am or how tierd I get. Because that's how much I miss it. I'm starting to catch up on all my fan fics. This one, the other two CD and Nate ones, and everything. YAY! So tell me what you think after this post. P.S. You might have to go back a few posts to see what I last posted. Don't be afraid to admit it. I even had to go back to remember some of the things I wrote, and it's MY fan fic! LOL So if I can admit it, so can you! hehe So here ya go, a post or two before the Here Comes the Bride episode. (A just Teddy and Jinny fan fic)

*As Jinny waits outside for Magda to pick her up, she paces back and forth rather at a fast pace. Having let reality set in that she was actually pregnant! She couldn't believe the main thing she wanted in her life has finally come true for her. She was so unbeleiveably thrilled. And a wide grin came to her face as she stood there all alone, waiting for her best friend of four years to pick her up. Just then Magda pulls up to her house. Jinny climbed in the car.*

Magda: Hi Jin.
Jinny: Hey Mag.
Magda pulls out of the U shaped driveway of Jinny's apartment.
Magda: So how did it go?
Jinny: How did what go?
Magda; You know, your doctor's apointment.
Jinny couldn't help but smile before she explained the diagnosis to her best friend.
Magda: Well, from that look, I take it it was good news.
Jinny: Uh, yes it was. (she's silent for a second) Magda, I'm pregnant.
Magda just stares at Jinny in shock with her mouth open.
Jinny: Magda, watch the road!! Jinny yells pointing in front of her.
Magda: Oh right. she chuckles.
Magda: So when did this happen? she asks swapping looks from the road to Jinny.
Jinny: About a month ago. Jinny answers rubbing her stomach. When Teddy and I had sex for the first time.
Magda: What?! The last I heard, you told me you wanted to wait for marriage to sleep with him.
Jnny: Yeah, well we kinda...(she corrects herself) I couldn't wait. she says with a funny look.
Jinny: I had a really hard time believing I was pregnant at all, because it happened really quick, and...
Magda cuts her off.
Magda: Oh he's not that good then huh?
Jinny: Magda! she says shocked by what she just said. That's not what I meant, and actually quite the opposite! What I meant was, well...the only way to explain it is to come right out with it. Remember when you overheard Kate yelling at me and Teddy about something in her office, that time we swapped partners?
Magda: Yeah.
Jinny: Well it was because on our lunch break, we accidently took a wrong turn and ended up in the school stockroom, and well, the rest is history.
Magda: Geez, Jinny. I knew you were crazy, but...
Jinny: I know, I know. But what can I say. I'm so happy to be a Mommy to be.
Magda: So what does Teddy think of all this?
Jinny: Well......
Magda: You ahven't told him yet have ya?
Jinny: No.
Magda: Why not?! she asked surprised.
Jinny: Well I want to, I really do, but I wanted to wait until after the wedding on our honeymoon, but it doesn't look like I'm going to be able to hold out that long!
Magda: I know, I definetly wouldn't be able to!
Jinny: Ah, screw it! I'll just tell him when I get back to my place. So, she asks changing the subject. Why are we going to your cousins house again?
Magda: Uh....she pauses) no reason. She just wanted me to visit her that's all.
Jinny: Oh ok. she says. Clueless of what's happening there.
Magda: I'll just stop for some gas and we'll be on our way.
Jinny: Ok no prob. she says turning on the stereo.
Magda: Oh and Jinny, congratualtions. I'm SO HAPPY FOR YOU! She says touching her friend's belly.
Jinny: Thanks Mag. I'm happy too.
*Once Magda is clear from Jinny's earshot, she calls her cousins' house to make sure that everyone is there for Jinny's surprise Bridal Shower.*

yay! !!!!!!!!MMMMMMOOOORRRRREEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!

As soon as I post on my fan-fic Challenge! lol

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
As soon as I post on my fan-fic Challenge! lol

Promises promises that's all we ever get. hehe

Originally posted by Jeanie
Promises promises that's all we ever get. hehe

yea! lol and its been almost 3 months since you made that promise huh? lol :D :rolleyes:

:( :( Whoops! lol I forgot! Has it really been that long?!?! Na, I've been REALLY busy! And when I have the time to post, I end up doing everything else but. I'm bad....I know! I'm just SHOCKED and thrilled, that someone remembered my long deserted fan fic!!!!!! hahaha I also have to post on the continuation one too. I'm such a slacker...so ashamed. *hangs head* But you know what, the fact that someone found it interesting enough to post saying they want more after it's been deserted for so long, gives me inspiration to.....POST! Yes, I said I'll POST! Not now, but later right now I have to shower, (I just woke up) clean my room, take a walk to Mickey D's. (For inspirational food), then when I come back I will post! Today! On both fan fics...maybe more! If you don't believe me, PM me, and I'll give you my address and you can send bounty hunters after me. How's that?!??! hehe Anyways, I'll return....soon!!!!


And even Jeanie is reading my fic!! YAY! Her honorly self is reading my lame brained fic! I'm so happy! If only Jeanie would come online ever once and awhile and talk to me! hehe I know I'm probably just missing ya every time!

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
:( :( Whoops! lol I forgot! Has it really been that long?!?! Na, I've been REALLY busy! And when I have the time to post, I end up doing everything else but. I'm bad....I know! I'm just SHOCKED and thrilled, that someone remembered my long deserted fan fic!!!!!! hahaha I also have to post on the continuation one too. I'm such a slacker...so ashamed. *hangs head* But you know what, the fact that someone found it interesting enough to post saying they want more after it's been deserted for so long, gives me inspiration to.....POST! Yes, I said I'll POST! Not now, but later right now I have to shower, (I just woke up) clean my room, take a walk to Mickey D's. (For inspirational food), then when I come back I will post! Today! On both fan fics...maybe more! If you don't believe me, PM me, and I'll give you my address and you can send bounty hunters after me. How's that?!??! hehe Anyways, I'll return....soon!!!!


And even Jeanie is reading my fic!! YAY! Her honorly self is reading my lame brained fic! I'm so happy! If only Jeanie would come online ever once and awhile and talk to me! hehe I know I'm probably just missing ya every time!


stop eating! We're waiting.... :p

*Once Magda got on her cell phone and verified with her cousin that everyone was at the bridal shower, she filled the gas at the self serve station and got back in the car. After pulling up outside her cousin's house, both her and Jinny exited the car and proceeded to walk up the stairs to her cousin's house.*

Magda attempted to walk ahead of Jinny to open the door first, but Jinny always walked faster then her, so that plan got screwed up.*

Magda: Uh Jinny! She says urgently trying to stop her from getting ahead of her.
Jinny: What? she asks still walking.
Magda: Uhhhh...she tries to think on the spot. Can you do me a favor?
Jinny: Sure, what is it?
Magda: Well, my cousins' neigbors' dog keeps making land mines in her front yard, and she wanted me to check to see if he let his dog in her yard again. But I uh.... almost forgot so since your walking so fast ahead of me, would you mind checking?
Jinny: Uhhhh sure? she says with a wierd look on her face.
When Jinny went to look over the railing, Magda bolted up the stairs and said "HIDE she's coming!" to everyone inside.
Jinny turned back to where Jinny was behind her.
Jinny: No I don't see.....Magda? Where did you go? she turns around to see a open door and walks in.
Jinny: Magda why didn't you wait for...
SURPRISE! Everyone yelled from inside.
Jinny: Huh?
Magda: Surprise Jin!
Jinny: What's all this?
Magda: Oh, we just figured we'd throw ya a surprise bridal shower!
Jinny: Oh guys! You know I don't like surprises!
magda: Yeah I know that's why I did it! So that you'd be surprsied, cuz I knew you never expected this! She said.
Lisa: But enough of that, just come in and enjoy yourself! Magda's cousin Lisa said putting her arm around Magda's best friend and partner, leading her in.
*A little while later they were all sitting down, most of the people invited were drink. Kate, Magda, and CD included.*
Kate: Jinny, you're not drinking?!
Magda shot Jinny a look.
Jinny: Ummm no, not today. she said with a disguised sound to her voice.
Magda looked to Jinny and wispered to her: "Don't you want to tell them?"
Jinny: Do, you think I should?
Magda: Well, I certainly don't see why not!
Jinny: Yeah niether do I, I just wonder what there reaction will be.
Magda: Well, you'd have to tell em to find out.
Raina had to jump in and find out what all the whispering is about.
Raina: Uh guys, what's the big secret?
Jinny: Well let me tell you, since you must know! She shot her a death look.
Jinny: Ok everyone! Captain, you wanted to know why I'm not drinking, and Raina you wanted to know what the secret was between Magda and I, well let me tell ya. Everyone, I just found out that...I'm pregnant. she announced with the most joy Magda had ever seen on Jinny's face since she knew her.
Jinny: Oh and I guess you forgot Captain, that I have been clean for two months prior to finding out I was pregnant, which is yet another reason why I'm not drinking.
Kate: Well, excuse me. It's just that I'm so used to seeing you drinking, that it's hard to picture you not.
Jinny: Wow, thanks alot Cap! She says with anger.
Jinny: I suppose now you're going to tell me that you don't think I can stay sober for nine months either.
Kate: actually, you took the words right out of my mouth.
Jinny: You BITCH! she says with shock and anger, leaning in towards Cap.
Magda: Jinny! Stop it. she says holding her arm back. She's our Captain! Watch your tounge, show some respect.
Jinny: Why? You know, I never understood that. Respect your elders. Ok fine. So I guess that means they don't have to respect you! she says shooting a look at Kate.
Kate: Hey, I'm just saying! We all know how little it takes to set you off on a drinking rampage.
Jinny: Ok, that's it! I don't care who you are, or how old. You are NOT going to disrespect me, (she looks down at her stomach) and my baby. I will NOT allow it! Get out of here! We're not on the clock, and I don't HAVE to be nice to you. Goodbye....Kate.
Magda was amazed at what Jinny has just said and done to there Captain. It was a side of Jinny she had never seen before. Even on her bitchy days. And she was glad to see that side of her. It was a motherly of side.
*And with that Kate got up, and walked out of Lisa's house. Jinny walked up to Lisa.*
Jinny: Hi, Lisa. I'm sorry about that I just couldn't control myself. Not that I'm trying to blame it on the pregnancy or anything, but I don't think that it helped. I have just never been pregnant before, and it's an amazing feeling and I looked at Kate bad mouthing me, as bad mouthing my baby, and...
Lisa: Jinny, please don't apologize. I must say, if I were in your shoes I would have reacted the same way. Really, it's alright.
Jinny: Thanks. she said patting Lisa's arm.
Lisa turned to everyone else there. The tension in the room could be cut with a knife.
Lisa: Alright everyone. Now let's have some fun. What do ya say?
Jinny: Works for me!
And with that, eveyone sat down in the middle of the room while Jinny opened her gifts. She started with Kate's. She wanted to get it out of the way, and enjoy the rest of her Bridal Shower. She wasn't all that shocked, when she opened a medium size box and saw a toaster.
Jinny: Oh real original, Kate. she said out loud. Cap'n, is always original. she said sarcastically. Next she instinctivly reached for Magda's present. At least with her, she knew she would get some enjoyment out of it. Unlike anything she could have recieved from Kate. What she saw made her realize it would give her enjoyment in the future....but side spliting laughter...NOW!
As soon as Jinny opened the box and saw the contents of what was inside she shut the box quickly, turned beat red and cracked up laughing.
CD: Well, what is it? she asked dying to know what could have caused Jinny to act that way. Jinny pointed to Magda.
Jinny: You my friend, are SO going to pay for this! she said full of embarassment.
Magda snacthed the box from Jinny, and took out the contents one by one naming there purpose.
Magda: I have a theory, Jinny! she explained. Now we all know how some, I mean MOST men can be when it comes to sex. One minute man right? Well I figure I'll give you a box full of stuff to help you grab his attention a little longer. First, we have a nice, sexy, red neglagee (<<can't spell that! hehe) w/ accessories! she said grabbing and naming each one and if by any chance that don't work, then well, we'll have to take it up one step. So then ya have a WHOLE BOTTLE of viagra, just slip him one or two in his food or somethin, he'll never notice. Thirdly you did mention awhile back, that you like being satisfied by heavy machinery right? Well, you can ditch Teddy for a night or two, and use this gift certificate at D&D the Devil's Dungeon. It's a really classy place! She informs Jinny. I've been there myself. Then last but definetly not least, Magda takes a piece of paper out of the bottom of the box and holds it up in front of Jinny.
Jinny: Ok, and what's that.
Magda: ............My phone number! she says laughing hysterically. Cuz if Teddy, or the rest of this stuff don't satisfy ya, just drop by my house and uh...
Jinny: MAGDALENA RAMIREZ! Jinny screams at what she has just said.
Magda: You know what guys? Magda says. I've never seen Jinny laugh so hard, or turn so red, about anything else before!
Jinny: Yeah well look what you gave me! she says still wiping her eyes from laughing so hard.
CD: Hey, that's what friends are for right? CD winks at Jinny.
Jinny: Hey not you too! I'm taken.... (she thinks for a moment) twice over it seems! she says looking at Magda. And besides, you're not my type.
CD stands up.
CD: Oh really?! she asks in shock! Well, let me inform you of something missy. My "nightly clients" as they like to be known, have yet to complain. And I know you're speakin nothing but crap, because what guy wouldn't want this! she asks rhetorically. Blonde hair, blue eyes, and 36, 25, 34 she says sliding her hands down both her sides and turning around.
Jinny: Umm hmmm. I don't see Nate jumping all over you, every day at The Division.
CD: That's what lunch breaks and interorgation rooms are for my dear. She informs.
Jinny: Ok, ok you got me!!!!! I'm not worthy she says. Making the bowing motion in front of CD.
CD: Yeah, that's what I thought. she says shooting her a look sitting down. They all laugh.
JInny: you guys are all crazy. BUt I must thank you for making this an amazing shower. After what happend with Cap'n and all, I never thought I would have had this much fun!
Magda: Hey Jin. try and not worry about Captain. I think she was just looking for a reason to get out of her so she can go and do Louis. I mean.....any guy that passes her by. They all laughed at that and scene fades out.

lol mmmmmmooooooooooorrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!

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LMFAO!!!!

omg, that was sooooooooooooooooooo freakin hilarious!!!!!! o please post more sooooooooooooooon!!! :)

Originally posted by Jeanie
Promises promises that's all we ever get. hehe


you promised you would finish this!!! but did you, nooooooooooooo!!!! lol we need more!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
you promised you would finish this!!! but did you, nooooooooooooo!!!! lol we need more!!!!!!!!!!

Yeah! Exactly!:D

Now I know i wasn't the only one wanting more so POST

Tell you all what. First of all, I'm so shocked I had that many people reading this fan fic! I'm physced! Now, If you all promise to keep reading my fan fic as you have been, then I promise to post more...tonight...on ALL of them! All three or four I have. I forget. hehe Ahhhhhhhh if you all only knew what I've been doing! Working, hardly sleeping, trying to keep up with ALL my friends fan fics., trying to et my life in order, i.e. college, getting a car, a new job etc., AND trying to make up with my best friend of seven years who thinks that I'm ignoring her on purpose. When actually I just don't have the time to call her or hang out with her.

BUT even though I was awake yesterday for 23 hours and I slept from 9PM last night to 11AM today, I will be up until 10 tonight taping stuff for several people, and then I will be on here after 10 PM to post on my several badly neglected fan fics! So be looking for that tonight!!! HeHe So I hope that explains it! hehe Talk to you all soon. Maybe I really do need to take time out and write. You know, do something I enjoy for a change. It might relieve some of my stress. hehe TALK TO YA ALL LATA!

yeah,yeah,yeah enough small talk!!! we want more!!!!

yay!! new page!!! now you have to post twice!! the one you promised us and the traditional new page one!! and btw check out my new fic!!! if i get enough replies i might post more (hint hint);) mmoooooooooorrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!1

*Sighs* Ok. I guess I'll post some now. hehehehe And I'll post twice. Wow, you guys are slick, AND demanding. But it's a good thing. lol hehehe Sry I didn't get on till midnight but my uncle was on. Ahhh ok here it is. Wow, it's nice to have time to type my fan fic!! lol

*Scene picks up the next day, and Jinny is taking Teddy to a picnic table at a nearby park that is directly next to the most popular and beautiful lake in all of San Fran.*

Once Jinny and Teddy arrive at the park, she looks over to Teddy and motions for him to follow her outside of the car. They meet up around the front of her car, as she grabs Teddy's hand and leads him to a secluded picnic bench, where the nearest people are at least 500 feet away. They're scattered around other picnic benches.

Teddy: Um Jin., do you mind if I ask what we're doing?
Jinny: Well, I have a surprise to tell you.
Teddy: Oh Jin., you know how I hate surprises! I never know what to expect.
Jinny: I know. she says with a wide grin. That's why it's called a surprise!
Teddy: Cute Jin. come on now, tell me what this is all about please. My stomach is all in knots I sense it's a big surprise.
Jinny: Well not right now it isn't, but it will be.
Teddy's quiet for a moment.
Teddy: I don't get it.
Jinny: You will. Ok here it is. Teddy...
Teddy: Yes? he answers with anxiousness.
Jinny: Teddy, I'm pregnant.
Teddy doesn't say anything just looks down at her stomach.
Teddy: Na, no way, you're kidding.
Jinny: I'm not kidding! She says with a big grin.
Teddy: You mean I'm going to be a...a...Daddy?! He asks shocked and thrilled. Me Theodore Blumenthal?!?!
Jinny: No not you, the Theodore Blumenthal I knew in High School! she says laughing histerically at his reaction. Yes you!!
Teddy stands up, opens his arms and screams to everyone who's in earshot of him I'm going to be a Daddy! I'm going to be a Daddy!
Teddy: Oh Jinny! he says with tears in his eyes.
Jinny stands up beside him. Teddy picks her up and spins her around several times. Then puts her down abruptly.
Teddy: Oh Jinny, Jinny! I'm sorry, did I just hurt him?? Little Robert? he asks rubbing her belly.
Jinny had to laugh.
Jinny: Ok first of all, the baby is the size of a pea right now. Ok? And secondly, Robert? How do you know it's not a Roberta? And thirdly, where did you get a name like Robert?
Teddy: I dunno, it just popped into my head. I think it's nice.
Jinny: Ok well. It's not that bad. If it's you're first instinct for a name and you like it then I like it too. If it's boy then it's Robert. A girl, and I choose. she says pointing to herself for that added measure of security and reassurance.

While Jinny is sharing her news with Teddy, elsewhere on the other side of town Nate is trying his hand once more at getting CD's attention. In a more then flirtatious or friendly gesture.

As CD is sitting at her desk eyeing her many files from the 3 different cases she's working on at once, Nate is busy eyeing her. Anyone walking by CD would definetly notice how intense she was in her work and would ask her what case she was working on. Although Nate, wasn't interested in that...at all. He locked eyes on her and kept them there for a approximate 30 seconds, until CD got that I'm being watched feeling, and finally looked up at Nate. First she gave him a funny look like why are you smiling at me so intensely, but she just smiled a half smile, dismissed his wierdness, and went back to her work. Nate shakes his head in disbelief, and as she gets up walking to the filing cabinet reading a file while walking, Nate sees this as his chance. He gets up, and walks up to CD and stands on the right side of the filing cabinet. He lays his left arm down on the filing cabinet, and his head on top of his arm and locks eyes with CD's eyes. CD takes a different file out of the cabinet and flops it down on top of the cabinet so it causes a breeze in Nate's hair. CD looks at him and laughs.
CD: Nate, what are you doing?
Nate: Me? I don't know what am I doing?
CD just shakes her head at him and heads back to her desk.
....he follows close behind.
CD: Ok Nate. she says sitting down as he sits in his chair that he wheels over to her.
CD: Do I have a magnet in my ass and I don't know it? she asks sarcastically.
Nate: Ouch. I'm hurting. The torture.
CD sighs a long sigh the one where you're cheeks get big, (hehe) and gets up once more, walking over to Raina's desk.
CD: Raina, you poured Nate a cup of coffee this morning when you made your own right?
Raina: Yeah why you ask?
CD: Well, did you put anything in it by any chance? Anything at all. I mean I could understand if you did..... she jokes
Raina: No. She laughs.
Raina: Why you ask?
CD: Uh no reason nevermind. she says.
Raina: Ok. she shrugs amazingly not paying attention to whatever gossip she could collect with the way CD was acting. CD then gives Nate a don't follow me look and heads for the exit door of The Division. Yet Nate reads a different answer from that look and follows her again. This time he was going to get her attention if it killed him.
Nate, paying no attention to who may have been watching from inside The Felony Division.
With no hesitation he walks up to CD and smacks her ass gently, but it made a crack loud enough to be heard through the whole Division.

SHAAAAAAAAAA WAM BAM THANK YOU MA'AM!!!!!!

Now where's that second post, eh? eh? eh?

CD was completely taken a back. She whipped around gave Nate this stunned look then immediatly looked up to see if anyone noticed in The Division. But the only one that seemed to be paying attention NOW was Raina. She wasn't before, but was now. CD was positive she had seen the whole thing. She immediatly felt her face get red. She grabbed Nate by the collar and spun him around 180 degrees slamming his back to the wall. It was a funny sight to see too, because she was so shocked and full of strength she lifted him almost clear off the ground with his toes just skimming the floor.
CD: Nate, what were you thinking?
Nate: UH I dun..dunno. He stutters. After CD's abrupt reaction it snapped him back into reality. He had let his feelings of lust and desire for CD get the best of him, and now he was just as red as she was.
CD: That's not a good enough answer. she says pulling him away from the wall, walking a few steps to the right and sticking him back up to the wall again, as if she was applying wallpaper or something.
CD: I said, what were you thinking?
Nate: I dunno, I just let me feelings get the best of me I suppose.
CD: What feelings?
Nate: The ones I have for you! He says finally admitting.
Nate reverses CD's initial move, and now he's got her pinned against the wall and leans in for a kiss while CD puts her two first fingers on her left hand up to his lips.
CD: I can't believe this is happening. she says sighing
Nate: Niether do I, but it is. He says talking through her fingers, making CD chuckle like a young teenager in love.
Nate moves her hand away and goes in for the kiss once more.
CD pushes his head back, so his chin is now at her eye level. Then she pulls his head down and looks right into his eyes.
CD: What if someone sees?
Nate: Who? Nate asks. Everyone is out to lunch, he says peeking around the corner into TD.
Nate: Everyone except Magda and Raina that is. And it's not like you need to worry about them two.
CD: Good point. CD admits putting her left hand behind Nate's head pulling it toward her face so now they're touching noses.
CD: Now kiss me you fool. she teases.
Nate attempts to do as he's told, as he hears voices coming around the corner. They managed to get there lips to touch but just barely, before they had to pull away before Jinny, Kate and two patrol officers who were talking about Jinny's new news saw them. Kate was being overly friendly with Jinny trying to reconcile after what happened at the wedding shower, but Jinny was pretty much ignoring her.
It was clear they didn't see anything or suspect anything, because they were too involved in Jinny's baby news.
CD: Wow that was close. CD wispered to Nate.
Nate: I know. he laughed. They seem to be blocking out everything around them with all the baby talk.
CD: No kidding. You know I betcha we could kiss right behind there backs and they wouldn't even know!
Nate: Well? he asks. Oooooooh yeeeeeah! she says as Kate turns to face Jinny and all four of the peoples' backs are to CD and Nate.
Then Nate gets to do what he has been wanting to do for SO LONG.
As he starts kissing her, there yearning, and wanting for each other was so much, that once there lips met it caused them to suck on each others mouths immediatly after they made contact. When they weren't sucking each others mouths, they were tounging each other. Causing alot of noise. But it appeared that the small group about ten feet away from them were talking over them and didn't even notice. CD wanted him more then just through kisses. And while they were both temporarily insane, and high on love, CD decided to take advantage of her chance. With her eyes closed, she still knew the Division like the back of her hand, having been there for 14 years and she leads Nate into a nearby store room about 20 feet away kissing and walking the whole time. Dragging him by his tie, not leaving him much choice but to tag along. Once in the store room, CD couldn't help but chuckle a girly laugh as they breaked to find a comfortable place to make out.
Nate: OH ok. I'm a funny kisser is that what you're saying?
CD: No, you're a hell of a kisser! she says speaking through a laugh.
CD: I just can't help but wonder if this is what it was like for Jinny and Teddy.
Nate: Huh? he asks bewildered and confused.
CD: Nothing nevermind. It was a personal girl talk conversation. But let's just say it involved Jinny, Teddy, a storeroom, and something being concieved.
Nate: I see. Well, want to recreate history? And maybe this will turn into a TD tradition! he jokes. Partners, storerooms and sex.
CD: Who said you were getting sex? she asks and leads him to a dark corner of the store room where there were boxes and boxes of year old files.
Nate: Not me, but it certainly appears that way.
CD: We'll see. she teases.
She finds a nice comfy spot on top of a cloth tarp used to move filing cabinets from one floor to the other, lays it out better and points to Nate and then to the tarp for him to lay down.
CD: if we're going to do this, we're gonna do it my way. I'M on top. she commands.
Nate is now almost drooling. He does as he's told, meanwhile he lets CD know how shocked he is that this is happening.
Nate: OMG CD, we're really gonna do this, we really are!
CD: Wow, you act like you've never had sex before!
Nate: No. he laughs
CD: You haven't?
Nate: I meant no it's not that. I HAVE had sex, it's just that I can't believe you...and me!? Here?! I mean you never picked up on my signals.
CD: I did. I just like to torture you is all. I've wanted you all along too. And now I have all this...well....pent up tension. she jokes.
Nate: OK whatever just do me baby. Nate said as he layed down looking like he was ready for a lap dance from a hot stripper.

YEAH YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE BABY!!!!!!!!!!! LOL

HEY! Did I say you could post that fic on MY FAN FIC!?!?!?!?!?!?




You're lucky it's a good one!



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Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
HEY! Did I say you could post that fic on MY FAN FIC!?!?!?!?!?!?




You're lucky it's a good one!



:-D

I didn't post no fic here!!!!!!!

mmmooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

those 2 posts were GREAT!!!!!!!!! Glad u posted, and I can't wait for more!!!!!!! :)

Oh, wow, that was amazing! Post more right away!

I meant to type PIC BIOTCH PIC! lol

Hey, you were here, come back and post more on this! It's so great!

Yeah, I was here. And I'm back. Next time I post it will be with fan fic. No worries. I will soon come bearing fan fic!!!!! lol ASAP Keep checking :-D

Since Angie has problems with her computer and can't post, I'll post the next part for her.


CD: Do you?!?!?! Oh no, no, no. See it doesn't work that way.
Nate: Huh? Nate asks aggrivated with a whining tone to his voice. It's so obvious he's longing for her in every way possible.
CD: I said, it doesn't work that way. You see, I call the shots...not you.
Nate: Ok ok whatever you say. He says with all anxiousness.
CD makes her way to him, slow as ever she loved the look in his eyes when she tortured him like she always does whether it be at work with her read between the line comments, or in her mind...her fantasy.
CD approached him crawling on her hands and knees, and then once near him she straddled his lap, and licked her first finger then placed it on his bottom lip and traced a line ever so slowly from his bottom lip to his scrotum, as she felt him move under her aching with want, and need. Slowly, she slid her hand down his pants and it was obvious he was excited, long before she even approached him. She didn't have it in her to make him wait any longer, so she started to undress her self...slowly. But this was driving Nate insane. So he offered to help her. Lucky for him, she didn't stop him. Once she was shed from the first article of clothing, she was only left with the three others. Meanwhile, Nate still had four. And CD had played the strong one for TOO long. She was now weak, and wanted to share in some of the pleasure Nate had. So she undid his tie, shirt, and pants. She attempted to rid him of his pants while drooling, until Nate stopped her pulling his pants up.
CD: Nate! No! What are you doing? she asks while fighting him. Stop it! I need you!
Nate: Ahhh how does it feel? He asks teasing her as she did him.
CD: I don't know, I'm trying to find out!
Nate couldn't help but laugh at that, and he helped her take his pants off. And it happened all too slow for her. She was dying to find the hidden treasure that was under there. It turned how to be just as she had hoped. He did wear briefs. She was thrilled! You could see so much more through briefs then you could boxers! This just excited her further and she layed on top of him still in her pants but shirtless. Meanwhile all Nate had on was his briefs.
Nate: Oh no, this ain't fair! He says tugging at her bra and pants. CD wasn't even listening to him, she was too busy pleasing herself with just her hands and his private part.
CD: Ugggggggggggh you're right! She said. She managed to pull herself away from him long enough for him to rid her of her remaining clothing, and then she could lay on top of him just as she had wanted. Then CD pulled off Nate's underwear, so now...finally...they were both naked and they were both enjoying hand jobs at the same time, not just CD. A locked glance from CD to Nate was all that was needed, for them to do the mutual move that was needed for the floating sensation that everyone talked. She especially, wanted to test the theory, and see what it was like. And once they were finally joined, it was more then she ever could have imagined. She screamed in extasy, while Nate was afraid someone would hear. He tried to cover up her mouth to prevent this, but this only turned her on more. So, Nate pulled out and left CD still full of wanting, and she knew she hadn't experienced the "full ride" so to speak as of yet. Even with Paul most of the time she faked it. She wanted to finish, but Nate rationalized with her if they were caught what would happen. She didn't seem to care. So they went back to fondling, handjobs, and making out and both at the end realized how lucky they were that no one came in there. He promised her they could always finish later. Don't be so sure. she teased. Then they got dressed and tried to look as presentable as possible. But Nate's tie was still crooked, and CD's dress coat was wrinkled. Nate said he would go out first to see if the coast was clear. As he turned to CD to say it's alright let's go. He turned back around to head out the door, and was met face to face with....

WHO IS IT, DAMMIT?!!!! :mad:



I mean, uh, please post more when u get the chance?? lol

that was excellent!!! hot n steamy, just how i like it!!! ;) LOL, give us more!!! :)

Get back here and post more that cliffhange came at the wrong time

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
WHO IS IT, DAMMIT?!!!! :mad:



I mean, uh, please post more when u get the chance?? lol

that was excellent!!! hot n steamy, just how i like it!!! ;) LOL, give us more!!! :)

Yeah!

He turned back around to head out the door, and was met face to face with....

Nate: Jinny! Hi, uh....I was just....
Jinny: You mean we.
Nate: Huh?
Jinny: You said I was just, don't you mean we were just?
Nate: What are you talking about? he asks trying to play dumb.
Jinny: I'm talking about her. says Jinny pointing to CD, who's messing with her hair.
CD touches Nate's shoulder and then pushes him outta the way.
CD: It's ok Nate. I'll explain it to her. she wispers to him while pushing him inside the stockroom and walking outside to talk to Jinny.
Nate: Hey. Let me outta here! He yells from inside the stockroom.
Nate: I can hear both of you!
CD: UGH, I'll be right back, Jin. CD says to her friend and disappears inside the stockroom.
CD slams Nate against the wall and kisses him full force, and he was NOT expecting it.
Nate: (after about 3 minutes of swapping spit) Oh HELLO!!!
CD: Now, she says with her hands around his back side, and sliding down his pants.
CD: If you want more of that later, you'll shut up now. Got it?
Nate: Oh I got it, alright!!!!! he says.
CD: Thanks. she says with a grin and goes back out to Jinny.
CD: So, how are you doing Jinny?
Jinny: Candace DeLorenzo!
CD:.....don't call me that, Jin!
Jinny: Candace DeLorenzo!
CD: (sighs) Yeah.
Jinny: What might I ask where you and Nate doing together in the stockroom?
CD: That's for me and Nate to know.......and for you to find out. She says grabbing her hand and leading her in the stockroom.
She leads Jinny throught the maze of struned clothes all over the floor, pass Nate who's standing there dumbfounded, and right to where they had put together there make-shift bed.
CD: This, Jin, is where we.....
Jinny: Oh, GOD! Don't tell me!!!
CD: What?
Jinny: OH no, it's the scene of the crime! Blah blah blah. she says shaking like she saw a rat and running the other way.
CD: What?!?!?! That's nothing want to SEE what we did ther.......
Jinny: OH GOD, CD! What has gotten in to you!!!!!
CD: I was gonna show you, but you said no!!
Jinny: Oh let me outta here! She says fleeing for the door.
CD: Jinny, I'm sorry. Didn't wanna show ya that but I got caught up in the moment.
Jinny: Yeah ok, whatever. Look, aren't you creative at all? Copycat!
CD: Huh?
Jinny: Don't "huh" me! I told you a stockroom is where Teddy and I first...
CD: Yeah well in the heat of the moment it was the first closest available room so...
Jinny: I understand. I mean I'm just surprised. You...Nate??? Not that I didn't sense something was going on, but I didn't think you two would ever do anything about it!
CD: Yeah well. We couldn't hold out any longer...you know!
Jinny: Yes I know, ok I definetly know!
They both laughed.

LOL that was hilarious!I can't wait for more!:D

That was so great! I really love this fic. Sorry about all your SN troubles! :( Computers can be such a pain. Mine's acting up now, too, as usual! :rolleyes:

I JUST NOTICED, AND WHAT A WAKE UP CALL THIS WAS! That back on page 5 somewhere of this fic. I talked about Jinny picking out the dress she was going to get married in. That was sometime in 2002! Uhhhhh I Think I better get on the ball! lol so here is the serious stuff. hehe This episode is entitled " Here Comes the Bride": the last one was "Preperation"

*The next day, Teddy was at Jinny's house and she had some very important news for him.*

Teddy was sitting on the edge of the couch, and Jinny was laying on the other end with her feet on his lap watching tv. Jinny is twirling the end of her hair in her fingers with a nervous look on her face.

Jinny: Uhhh Teddy, I have something to tell ya.
Teddy: One second, sweetie.....YES TOUCHDOWN! he yells causing Jinny to jump.
And for a second she got so ANNOYED with him. She hated how guys always did that. Her father and two brothers would scream too, over a stupid football game. But her anger subsided, and turned to joy, anxiousness, and nervousness when Teddy looked to her and said I'm sorry baby, what was it you wanted to tell me, as he rubbed her feet.
Jinny clicks off the tv, and puts her head where her feet were on Teddy's lap. Teddy looked slightly annoyed by Jinny shutting off the tv. He figured she probably wanted to annoy him with more of her girly talk. Where her latest pimple is, and how much it hurts. But he tried to hide his look of disapointment.
Jinny: It's ok Teddy. I'm sure what I have to tell ya will be way more important then your football game.
Teddy had a YEAH RIGHT LOOK, but grinned anyways.
Teddy: Uh yeah sure, what is it?
Jinny just shakes her head and rolls her eyes.
Jinny: Well, remember the other day when I freaked you out on the phone saying the doctor told me to take it easy because I was stressed?
Teddy: Yeah.
Jinny: Well...I wasn't stressed. (at least not yet) she mumbles.
Teddy: Uhh, ok. Teddy says confused.
Jinny: When I went to the Doctor, he gave me some...news.
Teddy: Uh, ok. Bad news? he asks worriedly.
Jinny: No, definetly not bad news.
Teddy: Ok then please just come right out with it! You're worrying me with your procrastination. What are you afraid to tell me?
Jinny gets up and sits on her lap with her arms resting on his shoulders.
Jinny: Teddy it's not that I'm afraid to tell ya, I just don't know how to say this. Teddy, (she pauses) I'm pregnant! She says with a wide grin.
Teddy: Jinny!
Jinny: Yes!
Teddy: Jinny!!
Jinny: Yes!!
Teddy: Are you kidding me?? he asks. He can barely get the words out.
Jinny: Teddy, I kid you not. I'm pregnant!
Teddy: But how???
Jinny: Uhh Teddy, I think we need to talk.
Teddy laughs
Teddy: No, I mean we never...
Jinny: Tisk tisk. How soon you forget. The stockroom? she says with a side glance.
Teddy: Oh my God! You mean from that one time?
Jinny: Apparently! I mean relax it's not another guys or anything...so yeah!
Teddy: Oh Jinny! he kisses Jinny deeply, then hugs her.
Jinny: Oh Teddy! she says You're shaking!
Teddy: I know. I just...I'm shocked! I mean me a Daddy. OMG, I'm gonna be a Daddy! he says out of breath.
Jinny: Teddy, you're all sweaty! Let me get you a cup of water!
Jinny leaves and returns a few seconds later with the water. She finds her place back on his lap.
Teddy takes a sip then puts the cup on the table by the couch.
Teddy: Oh Jinny! he says excitedly and hugs her again.
Teddy: How long have you known?
Jinny: Only about a week.
Teddy: So you're a week along?
Jinny: No Teddy, a month. she says with laughter knowing how innocent he looked not being able to do the Math.
Teddy: Oh my God, I can't believe I didn't think of this first thing! You gotta make a doctors appointment right away, and keep up with them! If you forget one you know, just one, it might mean something bad for the baby. And don't forget to have lots of tests taken. Oh and the Lamaz classes, we have so much to plan!
Teddy was getting more worked up then Jinny, and Jinny was extremely excited.
Jinny: Teddy, baby relax. It's all under control. I made all the appointments neccasary, and Lamaz won't start till I start showing. She educated him.
Teddy: Oh, ok. I just wanna make sure you stay healthy and all.
Jinny: I know. It's ok. Hey, I'm glad ya care so much!
Teddy: Hi baby. he says softly to Jinny's belly.
Jinny: Uh Teddy, I don't think it can hear ya.
Teddy says it a little bit louder.
Jinny, can't hold in her laugh.
Jinny: Oh Teddy, you are so adorable!
Teddy: What?
Jinny: Teddy, it isn't even the size of an orange yet! she laughs.
Teddy: Oh. And what's with this "it" stuff? Is it a boy or girl?
Jinny: I don't know yet. I won't for another few weeks or so.
Teddy: Oh ok then. I'll just call the baby my little dumpling for now.
Jinny: Aww that's sweet works for me.
After Teddy asking Jinny to lay down so he could rest his head on her belly, she gladly agreed. And that is how he fell asleep. For that moment, and ever night for a couple of weeks. The newness never really wore off for Teddy. Jinny would find it so comical when Teddy would ask her to lift her shirt above her stomach, because he wanted to sleep with his head on her belly every night. But not before first asking her if it would hurt her or his "little dumpling." And when Jinny said it wouldn't, he would sleep like that always. And although Jinny tried to convince him it was immpossible, he was so sure he would be able to hear the babys' heartbeat eventually.

*About 2 months later, after Teddy already had his stuff moved in and when Jinny was about three months pregnant, her cravings were really starting to kick in now and the nausea was still strong, but less then it was for the first couple of months. Teddy was always running out for the craziest things. If she didn't want a peanut butter and jelly sandwich, with hot dogs as a side dish, she was (for whatever reason) craving baby oatmeal. Teddy would get nausious just watching her eat that stuff, but he would jump at her every command for whatever food she requested. And after her 50th wave of nausea had come and gone, she decided to call her best friend, Magda, while Teddy was in the living room looking through wedding magazines. Because althought they had planned to get married already, it was postponed several times because Teddy was so afraid that it would in some way harm Jinny or his "little dumpling". But Jinny insisted it wouldn't and the longer he wanted to wait she didn't care. Because she thought it original to be a big pregnant woman in a white wedding dress. And because Teddy knew she was kidding about that and using reverse physcology on him, he decided to get on the ball and let her plan her wedding. She always knew how to trick him like that. So at least this way, she would be no more then four months when getting married. Yes showing, but at least not as big as a house! Meanwhile back in the bedroom, Jinny was on the phone with Magda. *
(All you can hear is Jinny's end of the conversation.)
Jinny: Oh, Magda. If you only knew how happy I am right now. I never knew this kind of feeling was possible for me!
Jinny: I know Magda. Wow, if you could only see Teddy! It's a riot. Anything I'm hungry for, he's out the door and at the closest store stocking up on all of my favorite craving foods. He's the best he really is.
Jinny: Right now? He's in the living room looking at wedding magazines....oh I know like he's gonna have that big a role in the wedding. I mean sure I want him too, but it's more of a girl thing, ya know? I just don't want to hurt his feelings or anything.
Jinny: Yeah sure, look at you changing the subject. What are you talking about you all miss me at work? I'm there everyday!
Jinny: Oh you mean on the field. Well, would you rather me be on the streets and risk my life and the life of (she looks down at her belly) my "dumpling" (she mocks Teddy), or sitting at a desk for nine months safe and sound?
Jinny: Ahhh that's what I thought. Now, I know Raina can be a pain to work with, but is nine months really that bad? Ok so I'll have maternity leave when the baby's born. But no more then a few months. she laughs imagining how annoying Raina could be to Magda.
Jinny: Ok then I'll talk to ya later Mag. Give Gabe and Ben my best. Ok ttyl bye for now.
She hangs up.

mmmmmmoooooorrrrrrrrreeeeeeeee now!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awwwwww, that was so sweet! Thanks for posting! Please post again soon. :)

That was so cute! And Teddy's so sweet! Awwwwww................ Post more soon!

Scene picks up at CD & Nate's house.

*As I said in my last post, it's two months later so CD and Nate are now living together. They're relationship is still new to them, and they are loving every second of it.*

CD is sitting on the couch, and Nate is doing the dishes.

CD: Baby! CD calls to Nate who is now aggrivated because that's already the fourth time CD has called him in 10 minutes.
Nate: Ahhhh what? he yells aggrivated.
CD: Naaaate, don't be mad at me! she makes a pouty face, the one that Nate loves oh so much. It's also the same face that can get her pretty much anything she wants from him.
Nate: Hey, don't make that face at me!
CD: What face? she asks making it again.
Nate: That one, I hate it when you do that! Cuz I can't stay mad at you. Now, what was it you wanted this time?
CD: Well, can you get me the remote it's waaaaaaaaaaaay over there on the chair, and I'm waaaaaaaaaaaaaay over here on the couch. she explains with dramatic emphasis as if the two were miles away.
CD: And if I get it, then I'll lose my comfy spot on here, ya know how sometimes when you find a spot that's juuust right.....
Nate: Ok ok I'll get it! he says cutting her off. He'd rather get the remote then listen to her ramble anymore. But on the way to the chair that's just "miles " away, he's mumbling the whole time.
Nate: (mumbling) She wants me to get the remote, she wants me to do the dishes, but she's too lazy to do either on her own, so she bosses ME around....dumb I tell ya.
he stops mumbling and hands her the remote, pretty much chucking it at her.
Nate: Hea.
CD: Well thank ya so much buttercup!
Nate: Yeah yea.
Nate walks off to do the dishes again.
CD glances back at Nate and notices that he's facing the sink with his back to the TV. She flips to channel 422 which is filming a very classy movie entitled.......Passion and Pleasure. The next thing Nate knows is he hears ohhhhh's and ahhhhhh's coming from the TV. He shuts off the water and walks over to CD with his hands still dripping wet.
Nate: I think you need to cool off! Nate says first looking at the TV then to CD. Nate flicks the water that is still on his hands at CD. Drops land on her forehead. She transfers them to her fingers then rubs the water on her bare belly. After sliding her shirt up with her other hand.
Nate hurdles the backside of the couch, and lands right on top of CD.
Nate: Are you uhh, trying to tell me something here? He asks innocently.
CD: Well, whatever gave you that idea? she answers slyly.
Nate: That. Nate says pointing to the TV.
Nate: And that. he says pointing to CD's very flat and firm midsection.
Nate: And I say we show the people on there (He points to the TV again) how it's done.
CD: Ahhh sounds good to me. comments CD.
CD tries to take the lead in there little foreplay session before the real thing, but Nate keeps stopping her.
CD: Uhh Nate what are you doing? I'm usually the tease.
Nate: I know but tonight, I am. I'm also the gutsy one too.
CD: And what's that suppose to mean.
Nate: Come with me.
Nate climbs off CD, and walks to the door that leads up the stairs to the roof.
CD: Uhh Nate what are you doing? she ask nervously.
Nate: Don't worry about it. Come with me. he says grabbing her hand dragging her behind him.
CD: But I'm half naked!
Nate: I know, that's the point! Nate says with his eyes wide.
CD notices how georgous it is out, and she always liked it when it was beautiful out. Spring type weather. She loved how the air smelled. And Nate knowing this, wanted to give her something to remember every time it was this weather again. She could always look back and think of this moment. The moment they enjoyed each other fully on the roof-top of there own apartment.
CD looks at her lover with admiration, love, and apreciation in her eyes, and was amazed and glad that he had thought of this as the place they would both make love for at least the hundreth time. And with CD standing there in all her glory, Nate turned around and grabbed a big blue blanket he had put aside, and layed it down having her lay on top, and him on top of her. And there they became one as they had so many other times before. The element of risk always excited them. And this one was riskier then a stockroom at work. Because on the roof, there were several lights scattered on the top of the house, and there were tall apartment buildings where the windows of the 21st and 22nd floors were level with the roof they were making love on. So that made for a really high level of getting caught. and they acted like two young teenagers, when they....DID get caught, at the worst time possible!!!!!!!

Whoa.....good job Angie!!! And they got caught?!?! By who???? I need more of this stuff!!!!:D

awwwwwww, that was really cute!!!!!!!!! i can't wait for more!!!! :D :D

Oooooh! Who caught them? Jinny? Kate? I have to know! :D Post more soon!

Originally posted by Snowfall
Oooooh! Who caught them? Jinny? Kate? I have to know! :D Post more soon!

Ditto! Hurry up and post more!:D

* It was right at the height of there sexual experience and right where they had both become very vocal, that they got caught. *

Oh give me a break! I can do better then that and I'm almost 80 years old! Oh and hey handsome, can't you tell she's faking it!!!!! Came a high pitched raspy voice that sounded like it was no more then 25 feet away. Both CD and Nate tried to cover themselves while turning there heads every which way trying to find out who had said that.
Nate: Who said that! I demand to know!
CD: Oh yeah old bitty! I'll have you know I wasn't faking it! He's big, ok!
They both yell at her still not knowing where to look to yell directly at her.
Old Lady: Over here! she yells. I'm across the way in the window of apartment # 25, and I was TRYING to get my beauty rest. Says the old black woman fluffing up her hair.
They finally find her and are embarassed when they put a face with the voice. Both of them turn bright red, and think they are covered up enough until the old lady reveals otherwise.
Old lady: Oh and girl, let me tell ya he may feel big but he's NOT big! I should know. There's plenty of light on the roof there! Besides.......I have binoculars.
CD: Oh noooooo I don't think so that is my man get your eyes off!
CD stands up, and was careful not to let that disgusting old lady see any of her vital parts in the nude, but she very strongly yanked Nate to a standing position by his hand. Meanwhile all his "goods"......were in plain view.
Old Lady: Ohhhhh shake it suga!!! A free show!!!!!!
Nate looks at CD in total embarassment while running for the stairs.
Nate: CD????? You didn't give me any time to cover up!!!
CD: Oh please she's just an old lady, so what?
Nate: So? She saw my dingle berries!
CD laughs histerically.
CD: Dingle berries. Is that what you call them?! she continues laughing still running toward the stairs they came up. Besides that's what you get for dragging me up here, I'm embarassed to ya know!
Nate: Well, I thought it would be risky and romantic.
CD: Well, next time why don't you either warn me or make sure all the lights on the roof are off!!! she says finally clearing the stairs with Nate still running behind her. They make it into the apartment.
Nate: I don't even know what you're complaining about! Nate says angrily.
Nate: She wasn't making fun of your private areas! he says clutching his shirt to his mid-section as tight as he could.
Nate: We got to live next door to that sick woman every day now!! Nate says angrily. And it's all my fault for trying to be spontanious and romantic for YOU! But that's ok, because no one is ever looking at me down there again!!! Ever! he said and stormed off into there bedroom. CD knew that he didn't mean that. Or at least she hoped he didn't. She ran to there bedroom to talk to him, but not before having the door slammed in her face.

most of that was SOOO LMFAO!!!!!!!!! :lol: :lol: :lol: OMG, it was great!!!!!!!

but poor Nate!! :( LOL, he'll come around, though, right?? :D :)

LMAO!!!!:lol: I can SO picture the old black lady!!! That was so funny and good!!!:)

Now don't take so damn long to post more! ;) (yeah I know I'm one to talk)

Oh, that was so hilarious! I loved it! :lol: I'm sure old Natey boy will come around when he starts feeling lovey again.. ;) after all, they didn't get to finish lol. Post more soon!

LMAO :rofl: That was soooo great Angie!!! Ya have to post more!!! Tara's right! They didn't get to finish!!!:D

IS THIS LONG ENOUGH??? lol

* It was now two days before Teddy and Jinny's wedding, and they were both at the tail end of the Preperations. Jinny couldn't have been more nervous. And she was constantly trying to figure out if her throwing up was because of the baby or because she was nervous about the wedding. But it was pointless. She couldn't tell the difference. She was hugging the toilet when she called for Teddy. He was in the living room reading one of his many manly magazines. When he wasn't reading the one about cars with girls lying all over them, then he was watching it on tv. And this, was one of the things that set off another one of Jinny's many mood swings. *

After Teddy didn't answer her first call, she screamed for him again.

Jinny: Theodore Blumenthal! Jinny yelled again this time with anger.
Hmmmm? was the sound that came from Theodore's mouth and made it's way to Jinny's ears. He was still to busy staring at his car magazine.
Jinny: Damn it Teddy! Get your ass in here now! she barely managed to get the whole sentence out before another wave of nausea hit her.
Teddy finally realized he would now be in big trouble, if he didn't go in there after her calling him three times. So once he stuffed the magazine between the middle two cushion of the love seat, knowing Jinny would flip out if she found it, he then went to the bathroom. Regretfully though, because he knew as soon as he got within ten feet of her the strong smell would be overwhelming.
Jinny: Teddy damn you, what took you so long?
Teddy: Uh uh I'm sorry baby what did you need?
Jinny: Can you please get me a towel from the counter over there? I'd get it myself but I'm afraid I wouldn't make it in time and end up puking on the floor.
Teddy: Sure honey.
Teddy walks over to the counter behind Jinny, grabs a towel meanwhile knocking the rest of the stack to the floor, and handed it to Jinny.
Teddy: Here ya go, sweetie. He says handing her the towel in just enough time for her to yank it out of his hand and wipe her mouth with it. She was able to speak for a little bit longer now.
Jinny: You know Teddy, Jinny says still hugging the toilet, you only call me cute nicknames when you know I got you on my **** list.
Teddy just stood there and gave her a puppy dog look.
Jinny: Teddy, cut it out. she says with a half smile she was trying REALLY hard not to let out.
Teddy starts humming the words to a song he just made up on the spot.
Teddy: You love me. You love me. And you can't hide it. Can't hide it!
Jinny now has a full smile on her face. She decided to give up on trying to hold it in.
Jinny: Teddy, you are such a dork. But you're right I do love you! She leans in for a kiss, but Teddy slightly pulls away with a gross look on his face.
Jinny realizes why, and apologizes.
Jinny: Oh, I'm sorry Teddy! I am so used to puking, that I'm kind of immune to the smell and I forget that people around me can still smell it.
Teddy: It's ok. I know it's only another couple of months and it will be all over.
Jinny: Yeah. And it can't come fast enough for me. Tell ya what? I'll go freshen up, and then I'll give you a little "treat." she teases making quotation marks in the air with her fingers.
Teddy: Oh baby! Says Teddy all excited now.
While Jinny heads off to the bathroom and shuts the door behind her, Teddy goes to the computer and decides to check his e-mail trying to make the time pass. But it was impossible. He kept thinking about Jinny, and her teasing him. And even though she only had a little bit of a belly due to the pregnancy, it was a huge turn on for him, and he couldn't wait for her to get out of the bathroom. It seemed like she had been in there forever now. And it had only been ten minutes or so.
When she did finally come out of the bathroom, she noticed Teddy sitting at the computer with his back to her, and he obviously hadn't heard the door open and must have thought she was still in the bathroom. So she quietly sat on the loveseat located about 20 feet behind him. And while she was making herself comfortable getting ready to give Teddy a come hither look, she felt something cold on her back. She put her hand underneath her, and pryed a magazine out from between the cushions of the loveseat. And with her eyes turning a fiery red, she rolled it up, held it behind her back and approached Teddy.
Jinny: So, is this what took you so long to come when I called you before? Teddy didn't even hear what Jinny said, all he heard was her voice behind him. And no sooner then he got out the words "There you are..." Jinny was smacking Teddy as hard as she could across the back of his neck.
Teddy: Hey, what the hell was that for?? he asked angrily.
Jinny: THIS! She yelled and threw the magazine down on the keyboard.
Teddy turned to Jinny, now having seen her for the first time since she came out of the bathroom.
Teddy: Let me expla.....whoa look at you!!
Jinny: Forget what I look like, because you ain't getting anything tonight, you jerk-off.
Teddy: Jinny, come on now you're over-reacting!
Jinny: No I'm not! I know I'm fat and everything, but if I had know you'd act like this if I got pregnant I never would have got with you. I can't believe it! Our wedding is two days away, and you're drooling over these bimbos?! Blondes yet!
She says moving her eyes to the cover of the magazine, and back to Teddy. She couldn't look at the magazine a moment longer, and she started to feel nausous again knowing he was probably fantasizing about those girls when he made love to her.
Teddy: Honey calm down! he says resting his hand on her arm.
Jinny swiftly yanks it away.
Jinny: Don't touch me you pimp!
Teddy: Pimp?! Teddy repeats with laughter behind his voice.
Jinny: You heard me!
Teddy: Alright Jinny, that's enough! He says standing up now with one hand on each of her upper arms. He looks right into her eyes.
Teddy: Now you listen to me, ok? You need to calm down. You are pregnant. Do you really want you baby to feel all your stress?
Jinny: Hey, stop talking like it's my fault you're the one...
Jinny cuts herself off, noticing Teddy hasn't once stopped looking into her eyes.
Jinny: Teddy, why are you looking at me that way?? It's freaking me out.
Teddy: Because I want you to know something. You are the ONLY one that I love. Ok? Now and forever. Those magazines I look at because they have classic cars in them, and I hope to buy one, one day soon. I can't help it if they glue those girls to the top of every car hood. Do you seriously think, that I would dump everything I have with you to stare at some magazine? I mean really, Jinny. I love you, I'm marrying you in two days, you're carrying my baby, do you really think...
Teddy stops when he sees tears streaming down Jinny's face.
Teddy: Oh Jinny come on don't cry.
She looses the composure in her standing, goes limp and leans in towards Teddy. He immediately wraps his arms around her. She gives up on being mad at him she couldn't be anymore. Not over something so juvenile. She realizes this now. And that her bad attitude was probably just a mood swing, but she didn't want to admit that to Teddy.
Teddy: Oh honey. Come here let's sit down. Jinny staggers over to the couch, her face soaked from crying.
Jinny; Teddy, if it was all innocent then why hide the magazine instead of leaving it out in the open?
Teddy: Well I figured I was damned either way. If I left it out in the open, you'd be pissed and get all in my face. But at least if I hid it I'd have a stay of execution until you found it. Which happened alot sooner then I thought it would. he says joking running his fingers through her hair.
Teddy: And for the record, there is nothing more beautiful then a pregnant woman.
Jinny: ANY pregnant woman, or me specifically? she asked with a pillow in her hand ready to hit him again.
Teddy: I think you know what I mean.
He took the pillow out of her hand and placed it under her feet, her head now resting on his lap. Teddy always went the extra mile to make sure she was comfortable. Especially being pregnant. Teddy leaned over to kiss Jinny sweetly on the lips. She returned the kiss and put her hand on the back of his head, playing with the hair at his neckline. Teddy flinched.
Jinny broke off the kiss.
Jinny: Baby, what's the matt......but before she could finish she knew what the matter was. Teddy's neck was a flaming red, and the mark was about 9 inches long...the length of the magazine.
Jinny: Oh my god, Teddy. I am so sorry! I didn't know I hit you that hard!!! Let me go get you some ice!
Jinny struggles to get up. Teddy holds her down.
Teddy: No Jin hun, you stay here and rest. It doesn't hurt that bad!
Jinny: Oh cut the tough guy crap! I did that to you, the least I can do is get you some ice!
Teddy: Ok ok if you insist.
Jinny: I do. she gets up, gets the ice, and comes back sitting up this time having Teddy putting his head on her lap, instead. He enjoyed that position better anyways, because he still insisted he could hear the babies heart beat. What he heard instead, rather what he felt, had never happened to him before or Jinny, and they both looked at each other and just started to cry.

omg, i cannot BEGIN to describe how amazing that was!!! I didn't even notice that CD and Nate weren't in it the first time I read through it; it was THAT great!!! I love this fic so much!!!! :) :)

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
omg, i cannot BEGIN to describe how amazing that was!!! I didn't even notice that CD and Nate weren't in it the first time I read through it; it was THAT great!!! I love this fic so much!!!! :) :)

What Lisa said!

hehe That is awesome! Thank ya thank ya thank ya!! lol I'll be writing more soon. I'm really getting addicted to this fic. hehehe You might be surprised at HOW SOON I write more. lol Oh and I alternate storylines. Kind of like a soap opera. hehe One day it's Jinny and Teddy the next Magda and Ben and then CD and Nate. Kinda like that. But anyways, thanks for the compliments! I really like that post too. lol

Awwwwww that was so sweet!I loved it! Now get yourself back here and post more!!!!!!PLEASE????:D

*After having the door slammed in her face, CD didn't know what to do next. What move to make, or even if she should make one at all. Maybe she should just give Nate some alone time. After all, she did cause this. She may not have caused him to drag her upstairs, but the way she reacted at the full monty event didn't help matters either. She decided she couldn't let him stay away that long in anger, she had to talk to him and she had to talk to him now. She tried to open the door with force expecting it to be open but it wasn't, and as a result she wacked her head hard on the door. Damn it! she grunted. After this she just pounded on the door, louder then she normally would because she was so full of anger after walking into the door, and she felt embarassed.... even though no one saw her. *

CD: Nate come on open the door please! she said as sweetly as possible but she still had anger in her voice and Nate sensed it.
Nate: Yeah right. Why? Do you have everyone from work out there waiting for me to open the door hoping I'll have nothing on??
CD: Nate come on! You're being ridiculous now! It was your idea to go to the roof in the first place!
Nate: I told you I was trying to be risky and romantic.
CD: Well then, risky means there's a risk we can get caught and we did. Please baby, open up. I want to talk to you, not the door.
After a few moments of silence and once CD was sure she had won him over enough to open the door, Nate finally did.

*Meanwhile at Jinny and Teddy's apartment, Teddy still with his head on Jinny's lap felt the baby kick for the first time and he was physced.*

Teddy: Jinny, Jinny did you feel that?
Jinny: Geez I don't know Teddy. There's something alive inside of me, giving me wierd cravings, making me puke my guts out day and night, and you felt it kick. No, no Teddy I didn't feel a thing. Jinny says as sarcastically as ever. I mean really. Non stop you've been focusing on this kid and acting like I don't even exsist. DAMN! she says looking off to the side.
Then she watched Teddy, as his face turned from pleasure and happiness to hurt and sadness in a flash. He got up and went to go make a pot of coffee. Jinny still didn't say a word to him. Except to say Ted. She didn't get Teddy out because she stopped herself from stopping him. She let him walk off, she was still angry after all, as she was relishing in like her 100th mood swing since getting pregnant. Her face slowly changed from aggrivation to sympathy as she watched Teddy look at the mark on his neck in a mirror in the kitchen, not knowing Jinny could see him doing so. Now Jinny felt horrible. She managed to drag herself up off the couch and muster up the courage to give him the apology she knew he deserved.
Jinny: Teddy? she says with her hands around his waste resting her chin on his shoulder.
He jumps as he hears Jinny saying his name. He really didn't want her to see him looking at the mark, after he insisted that it didn't hurt.
Teddy: Jinny. Uhh why don't you go sit down, you should be resting.
Jinny: You know, even when I'm pissed off at you and ready to kill you you're still sweet to me.
Teddy: Well...of course. You're my wife silly. I want to be there and protect you, and...
Teddy stops himself, and starts again.
But I love you not just your baby, and I'm sorry if I'm smothering you I've just never been a father before and I really do love you not just the baby..
Jinny: Yeah Teddy about that, listen.
Teddy: No you're right. I have been bothering you too much I just don't know the fine line between being caring and overbearing I suppose.
Jinny: Teddy listen to me for one second, please! I may have made it seem like I was mad at you for giving too much attention to my baby and I, but that's not true.
Teddy: Really? Then why did you...
Jinny: Because I can be fine one minute and blow off the handle the next. It comes with the territory of being pregnant. You're just on the recieving end. Try being the one GOING through all those emotions.
Teddy: Yeah I'm sure it's horrible. But I have never known you to say things you don't mean. If you didn't mean what you said, then why say it?
Jinny: Well there is one time when I say what I don't mean, actually. It's when I'm trying to cover up how I'm feeling about something else.
Teddy: Ok well then what are you trying to cover up? Teddy asks.
Jinny realizes she has to answer him, after saying what she had just said even though she didn't want to.
Jinny: Well as many men as I've been with, slept with, or even dated. Not a single one has EVER payed any attention to me other then for a good time. And once we were done, I never heard from them again or saw them again. And when I met you, I realized you weren't like that. And it scared me. Scared me like you wouldn't believe. I was worried that you were just in it for something. That you were with me for a reason, besides genuinely caring. Even after I got pregnant and realized you weren't going to split, it still felt unreal to me. Like a too good to be true feeling. But anyways, that's why I reacted the way I did. To go from no affection or love at all, to full on love...I didn't expect that. For the longest time I thought I deserved to be hurt, deserved to be used for sex. Men knew once I had a drink or to in me, that I would do pretty much anything they asked and wouldn't remember it. But now, you're here to stay. And that's a first. So that was why I reacted the way I did. Do you understand now.
Teddy: Of course I do. So, you weren't mad at all that I gave so much attention to your baby?
Jinny: No. Actually, I couldn't be happier. Just takes getting used to is all.
Teddy: Well get used to it because I am not going anywhere! You are carrying my baby, and we're getting married and I'm not going anywhere. You can count on that!
Teddy says to Jinny as he makes a cup of coffee for both of them and they cuddle up on the couch ready to watch a good movie.



Ok guys more next time! I have to get some sleep for work otherwise I'd post on my other fic. hehe

awwww that was too cute!! i loved how adorable it was, so quit ur job, so u don't need sleep and u can come back and post!!!! ;) :D :)

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
awwww that was too cute!! i loved how adorable it was, so quit ur job, so u don't need sleep and u can come back and post!!!! ;) :D :)

Yeah, heaven knows I don't get any sleep anymore! :lol: Post more soon!

Yeah ok that's a nice plan guys. But I don't think it works that way. I need my job.....as sucky as it may be. hehehe More to come soon!

That was soo sweet Angie!!!! Post moooore!!!!! And i want more CD/Nate!!!! hehe:D

And here's your new page!!!!:D


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Ahhh yes another country not heard from. Well, HERE'S MORE, I KNOW, FINALLY! Oh and feel free to back track in case you forgot where I left off. hehe

*Nate finally opened the door, after CD's non-stop pleading and heartfelt outpouring of emotion that she had done to win him over when it actually was his own fault that she was having to beg him to open the door in the first place.*

Nate: What do you want?
Nate asked very coldly.
CD: Uh, well I want you to let me in so we can talk.
Nate opened the door enough for CD to walk through. She sat on the bed, while Nate slammed the door shut and turned around.
Nate: Ok so talk.
CD: Nate why are you acting like this?
Nate didn't say a word.
CD: Come on now, please talk to me. I don't like it when you get like this.
Nate: Oh really. So you think I "get like this" alot then? He asks making quotation marks in the air.
CD: Nate STOP IT NOW! DAMN! You're BITCHING like some chic with PMS! GEEZ!
Nate: No see, that would be your speciality.
CD: EXCUSE ME?!?! Are you saying I bitch alot??
Nate: Well what would you call it. Everytime I would try to get your attention at work, with these read-in-between-the-line comments, you didn't exactly return them. In fact, you got defensive at times.
CD: Well what did you expect?! I did as best I could, considering most of them were made in front of our Captain. I mean seriously, think about it Nate. When we were alone in the car or whatever, I would return the "read-in-between-the-line comments." she says mocking Nate with his air quotes.
CD: And if you'll remember who gave who the first kiss of our relationship??
Nate: Ok fine you got me there. But still...
CD: Still what?
Nate: Nevermind. But when I think of a good come back to that, you bet your ass you'll know about it! He says trying to keep his manly composure as if he had won the fight, which he knew he didn't.
CD: Riiiiight, she says with a half smirk. So, what do you say we uhhh make up? She asks acting just like some horny guy would act.
Nate: Oh you mean make-out?
CD: Well not necessarily. True, sometimes making up will lead to making out...but not always.
Nate: Really, not always? Nate asks calming down his anger a little, walking towards CD sitting on his bed.
CD: Right. Not always. I don't have to make out with you to make up with you. she says not at all believing what she's just said.
Nate: Ok then. So make up with me, but don't make out with me. I DARE YOU. he says taunting her.
CD: Ok no problem. I know that you were trying to do something nice by taking me up to the roof, and I...
(Meanwhile Nate is stripping for her, and CD just gives him a wierd look, and continues talking)
CD: And I appreciate it, but you have to understand that getting caught, which we did, was a risk you had to be willing to take.
At this point, Nate is just in his white boxer briefs, a white dress shirt from work, and his socks. To CD, he looks like a cross between being in Risky Business and a Chipendale's dancer. A VERY fine Chipendale's dancer. She continues to make up with him while choking on her words, and her eyes keep going from his eyes to his package, while she's talking to him.
CD: And....uhh.....
Nate: And what???
CD: And uhh I dunno I lost my train of thought, damn you!!!!!
Nate: Me?! What did I do? he asks innocently. Meanwhile, CD is still looking down below.
CD: Nothing, you're just trying to distract me with your ugly UGLY piece of anatomy down there. she says waving a finger at his manhood.
Nate: Well, if it's so ugly please tell me why you keep looking at it?
CD is now speechless.
Nate just laughs.
CD: DAMN IT, DAMN IT ALL! she yells. I give up. You win ok!!
Nate: Yeah, I knew I would. So what's my prize?
CD: Well is what we didn't get to finish before a good enough prize? she ask knowing the answer.
Nate: OOOOOH yeah I'd say so! he says excitedly.
CD stands up and throws him on the bed. Nate is still in shock over how much strength she's got. She is taller then him, but just as strong as him if not more. Which he finds VERY sexy. CD starts having her way with him, meanwhile Nate is getting very excited. And CD can tell.
CD in between kissing him says to him something he and all men already know.
CD: You know, how they say a man's height is connected to the size of his *eh hem.* Well, I'll be the first one to tell you, it's wrong. Because as short as you are...
Nate: Actually CD, it's a man's feet NOT height. (he laughs) Do I really distort you're thinking that much? he asks surprised.
But at this point, CD has a mouthful and can not answer. And Nate and Nate Jr. know why.

:) How was that??

OMG, is it getting HOT in here, or what?! *fanning myself* Ssssssssssizzling!!!!!! Whoo!!!! I'm so glad that they made up! I just love those two so much! Post more soon! :D :D

*It was the morning of Jinny and Teddy's wedding, and Jinny had just woken up after only sleeping about two hours all night. Although everything was set, and there wasn't much left to do, Jinny was as nervous as could be and had a really hard time sleeping the night before. Meanwhile Teddy was lying next to her with his mouth open widely while he snored. She had to chuckle at the site of that. And she wondered how Teddy could sleep soundly through the night while she tossed and turned thinking about the day and stress that lay ahead of her. But she knew that it was easier for a man then a woman. Men just have to stand up there and look handsome, while women have to actually walk up the isle and be stared at by tons of people. She was as excited and happy as she was nervous and anxious. So not knowing whether to get up, get dressed, and risk waking Teddy, or laying in bed awhile longer she decided after a bit to just lay there and watch him sleep. Which was one of her most favorite past times. But then Teddy started to have this "I'm being watched" feeling in his sleep, and so he slowly started to stir. Meanwhile, Jinny pulled the covers up to his neck as he opened his eyes.*

Well, good morning georgous.
Were the first words out of Teddy's mouth.
Jinny: Oh honey I'm sorry. Did I wake you?
Teddy: No not at all. It was time for me to get up anyway. And ya know, I haven't felt this rested in awhile.
Jinny: Yeah well, I wish I could say the same.
Teddy: Why? How did you sleep?
Jinny: Well let's just say it wasn't very restful.
Teddy: Oh I'm sorry to hear that.
Jinny: Yeah I'd have been lucky to have gotten two hours in. It's just I'm so stressed about the wedding, ya know? There's alot more to it being a girl then being a guy.
Teddy: Oh I can understand that. Well, we sure have a big day ahead of us. What do you say we take a hot shower together...
Jinny: Well, I'm all up for that.
Teddy: I wasn't finished. he says giggling. Why don't we take a hot shower, attend to our last minute details, and see if you can't squeeze in some kind of cat-nap to hold you over till the wedding. You'll need all your energy for it, and uh the wedding night too.
Jinny: Yeah well, don't get your hopes up to high there buddy boy I am 4 months pregnant, remember. And I can't believe I'm going to walk down the isle looking like this. It's so untraditional.
Teddy: Oh honey, who cares! First of all, you're barely showing at four months and secondly I think it's georgous to see a pregnant bride. And as far as expecting too much, I won't trust me. Anything that happens today will be a true gift in itself. And just think, after all this is over we'll be able to sleep in as late as we want, and we can do whatever we want for two whole weeks. No work, no stress.
Jinny: Wow, I can't wait for that!
Teddy: Me either. he agrees and kisses her forehead.

While both Teddy and Jinny are taking a shower, everyone else from The Division, is getting ready for Jinny and Teddy's wedding. Getting the clothes ready and the gifts. Meanwhile, CD has secretly bought a pregnancy test and has it hidden under her and Nate's bathroom sink near all the cleaning products, where she's sure Nate won't go. After waking up next to Nate, she moves his arm out from around her which pains her to do because she loves feeling his skin on hers. But she was dying to know what the results were and had to find out NOW before Nate woke up. It wasn't that she didn't want him to know if she was pregnant, it was more the fact that she wanted to keep it a secret until she could tell him the way she wanted to. After making her way to the bathroom sure she hadn't woken Nate, she takes the pregnancy test out from under the sink and holds her breath while waiting for the results. As her eyes glaze over the pregnancy test in amazement, and disbelief she hears a banging on the bathroom door. It wasn't a loud banging, but to her it seemed like it was. She was startled out of her own little world, as she answered yes with a rather angry tone in her voice.
Nate: CD, are you ok in there?
CD: Nate, I'm fine. Damn can't a woman take a **** in peace?!
Uh sorry. Were the only things Nate could say, as he made his way back to there bed, layed down and turned on Sports Center. A few minutes later CD exits the bathroom looking pale as a ghost, and Nate immediately runs over to her. Both afraid for how she looks, and nervous she might haul off and hit him after the way she talked to him in the bathroom. But she didn't. After Nate realized she wasn't mad, he proceeded to help her over to the bed.
Nate: Oh my God CD, are you alright?
CD: I'm fine...I guess.
Nate: What do you mean, you're fine you guess? You've lost all color in your face. What's wrong?! he asks worried.
CD: Well (as she explains she starts crying. Nate holds and rocks her while listening) I thought I might be pregnant, so I bought a test. And it turns out, I'm not.
CD cries harder.
CD: And I was so excited and I wanted to surprise you, because I knew you'd be thrilled. But then when I realized I wasn't, I wasn't going to tell you at all to avoid disapointing you, or have you mad at me but I couldn't hold back my tears.
Nate: Oh my sweet sweet CD! Nate says craddling her. You could never disapoint me or make me mad at you! It's not your fault you're not pregnant! That's just the way things happen sometimes! Not your fault. We can keep trying. I didn't even know you wanted a baby. If I did, I'd be trying ALOT more believe me.
CD has a half smile.
CD: Well, I've always wanted a baby but I wanted to wait till I found the right man. And now that I have, I can't wait. I love children.
Nate: As do I. I just never really brought it up, because I wasn't completely sure how you felt about the whole thing. I mean you were always saying how you never wanted kids, and I thought that you had your tubes tied anyways? I'm confused.
CD: Nate. There's something I think I should tell you. Actually, I should have told you already, but I was afraid of how you'd take it, and we weren't together then.
Nate: Well hun, you can tell me anything you know that. Even if we weren't together at the time, we always had that unspoken bond and looks to tell each other what we were thinking. So tell me. It's ok.
CD: Alright well...the reason that I had my tubes tied originally, was because I didn't want to get pregnant if I ever got raped again.
Nate: Again? CD...you were raped?!
CD: Uh huh. She manages to mumble out. By my mom's boyfriend. And I remember clearly my mother standing in the doorway watching. She was watching, Nate!!! Like it was some kind of spectator sport or something. And I guess I must have surpressed it or blocked it out completely. Because when she came over that time, I didn't remember that until right before she left, and then it all came flooding back. And I finally lost it and blew up at her. And then later on I felt bad. She's still my mom after all.
Nate: WHAT?! CD have you lost your mind?! You can't possibly feel bad for yelling at your mom for what she did to you! I would expect that at the very least. I mean hell, I even think smacking her would have been justified! She's just as bad as he was. I can't believe you never told me this!
CD: Well, I was afraid that maybe you'd think I was disgusting and you'd never want to come near me or talk to me again.
Nate didn't know how to reassure her that he would never dream of thinking of her like that. The only think he could think to do was to hold her tightly and kiss her thoroughly and assure her he would never ever look down on her for what happened. It wasn't her fault that she was treated that way. He let her know how much he loved her and how much he would always love her. After that, CD went on with her explination.
CD: And so that's why I had my tubes tied. I realized how lucky I was that I didn't get pregnant by him in the first place. And if I ever got raped again, I didn't want to risk getting pregnant, by some sick disgusting pervert.
Nate: Well I can understand that. But if your tubes are tied, why did you think you were pregnant?
CD: Well...my tubes were tied but I had them untied recently when I knew I was going to be with you permenantly and that there wouldn't be many times I was away from you, so the chances of me getting raped again were pretty slim. And even if I was, then I would definetly confess that to you. And only hope you wouldn't go on a rampage and kill him, and get yourself put in jail.
Nate: Which you know would happen.
CD: I know. And so, I was getting periods like usual. Then I haven't had one for like 3 weeks, so I found that odd and I bought a test. And then I was so sad to find out that I'm not pregnant. So maybe I'm still having to adjust to having my tubes untied? I dunno, but the sad part is, I'm not pregnant.
CD starts crying.

I'LL READ..I'LL POST...I'LL REREAD...I'LL REPOST...JUST DON'T SEND THE SWORD MAN AFTER ME!!!!!!!!







Btw, that was great! More:D

Na....he wants me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ISN'T HE CUTE THOUGH!!!! You're too scared for him. He's into S&M. lol J/K But seriously, I was freaked too! He just collects em though. lol OH and remember how I said CD is AND isn't pregnant. lol Think hard...make sense yet.

That was so sweet and great! And thanks for posting! Do it again really soon! :D

Nate continues to console CD, as she keeps crying.

Nate: CD, I think you need to go to a doctor. he says, trying to distract her from the fact that she isn't pregnant, which is making her very sad.
CD: Ewwww. GOD, I hate going to Doctors. And besides, we have to get ready for Jinny's wedding.
Nate: CD, come on now. You're sick. I know Jinny and Teddy will understand if you can't go.
CD: Screw that! I'm going. Those two have been TOO good to me, for me to miss there wedding.
Nate: Alright fine. But promise me you'll at least call and make an appointment. Now that we know you're not pregnant, we have to figure out why you've been so sick.
CD: Alright I'll call. she says sitting still.
Nate: Uhhh I meant now.
CD shoots him a look.
CD: Alright, fine! Get me the phone.
Nate hands her the phone and she calls up her doctor.
*You can only hear CD's end of the conversation.*
CD: Hi Doctor Beta. This is CD DeLorenzo. I haven't been feeling to well lately, I was wondering if I could make an appointment to see you. No sorry today isn't good, I have a wedding to go to.
Nate snatched the phone from CD.
Nate: You have an opening today?! Nate asks hurriedly into the phone.
Nate: 1PM is great, the wedding isn't until 4PM. OK Great she'll see you then. Bu-bye.
CD just sits there with her mouth hanging open, while she smacks his right forearm.
Nate: Ow, what did you do that for?
CD: No, the question is, what did YOU do THAT for???
Nate: Hey I'm sorry I care so much for you that I want you to be healthy. He has an opening today, and you're going.
CD: What about the wedding?!
Nate: We can still go....IF the doctor okays it. Besides no more excuses, CD. All we have to do is get dressed and get there gift ready. It's not like we are the two main attractions!
CD just sits there and huffs.
CD: OK, fine. she mumbles.

*CD and Nate are at the doctor's office. Nate is in the waiting room and CD is in the examining room. To make time pass, Nate picks up a magazine. After reading the title he threw it down on the chair next to him. It read: How to Give Yourself A Breast Exam. After that, he quickly looked around to see if anyone saw him. And sure enough, a woman who looked like she was two minutes away from giving labor, let out a slight chuckle, while Nate just sat there and blushed. God, I hate these places. He mumbled to himself. Meanwhile, the doctor walks in to examine CD.*

Dr. Beta: Well Candace, what seems to be the problem.
CD: Please, Doctor. I tell you every time I'm here, that I want you to...
Dr. Beta: I know call you CD.
CD: Right. So, what's wrong with me?
Dr. Beta: (laughs) Well, I'd have to examine you first, wouldn't I?
CD: Right. she says impatiently.
Dr. Beta: Why are you in such a rush, anyways?
CD: Well, I have a wedding to go to in three hours, and besides you know how I hate doctors.
Dr. Beta: Doctors in general, or just me?
CD: You know what I mean.
Dr. Beta: I know. Well, let's get started.
As Dr. Beta examines CD, Nate is pacing back and forth in the waiting room. A woman sitting nearby, makes a comment.
Woman: Ya know, the more you pace around like that, the longer it's gonna feel like it's taking.
Nate stops at looks towards the woman. He gains a faint smile.
Nate: Uh thanks. he says sitting next to her.
Woman: Trust me, I know. I've been through this 4 times before. This is number five. she says counting on her hands.
Woman: And each and every time, my husband acts the way you're acting.
All Nate hears is 4 times before.
Nate: Wow. he says.
Nate: I thought my girl was pregnant, but it turned out she's not. Maybe it's a good thing. Especially if the first kid splits into four.
Woman laughs histerically.
Woman: No no. I had my 4 over a course of 8 years. It's safe to say my husband and I were very busy! she says laughing.
Just then she scream out: OWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. Nate jumps up and steps to the side.
Nate: I'm sorry what did I do?
Woman: (between laughing and being in pain) Nothing. I'm just going into labor.
Nate: Uh ok.
Three people run out from the doctor's office.
Person 1: Let's get her to a doctor.
(Nate looking very confused and afraid) We are at the doctors!! Look around! They're everywhere, it's like the twilight zone!
Now the woman is alternating laughing loudly and screaming in pain.
Woman: Isn't this guy a character? She asks the people around her.
One doctor talks to Nate, trying to hold in laughs.
Doctor: Yes there are doctor's here. But this is just a place for check-ups and stuff like that. We don't have all the stuff a hospital has. he says to Nate as if he's talking to a five year old. Then he laughs and goes back to taking care of the woman. Nate sits down with his head in his hands.
At the same time that all this is going on, Dr.Beta, just finishes examining CD, and he has a reason as to why she's been so sick.
Dr. Beta: Well, we have the results as to why you 've been so sick lately.
CD cuts him off.
CD: Well I know it's not because I'm pregnant. Because the stupid pregnancy test said I wasn't. Ya know, ya always hear about women going to the doctor's that don't feel good and they don't know that they're pregnant, and the doctor tells them they are and they are supposedly so surprised. Yeah uh huh. I think it's just an act. Like they bought the test before, KNEW they were pregnant then waited for the doctor to confirm it. It's all a bunch of bull. CD says depressed that she's not pregnant like she had hoped.
Dr. Beta: Uhhh CD, I don't know that you're gonna believe me when you hear this..
CD cuts him off again.
CD: But, come on there's a but there! Go ahead say it. I don't know that you'll believe me but you're going to die in 6 months come on. What is it?
Dr. Beta: Actually, CD. You're pregnant.
CD freezes up.
CD: You know Doctor I never took you for the type to joke like that. That's just wrong. How can you joke about something like that?
Dr: Beta: (a little frustrated) CD, if you would just listen to me for a second! You ARE pregnant.
CD: Uh huh right. she says still in disbelief.
CD: And how pray-tell do you suppose that is possible. The pregnancy test said not pregnant, and that thing is 99% accurate.
Dr. Beta: Exactly. 99%. You my friend, are the 1%. Besides how do you expect a test to be 100% accurate that only costs a meesly 20 bucks? And with the whole having your tubes untied and everything, sometimes it can throw off lots of aspects of the pregnancy, when the woman finally does get pregnant.
CD speechless and frozen.
CD: Ok so you are positive?
Dr. Beta: Oh yes. I'm 150% positive. How is that for a percentage?
CD: Oh...my...God! This is an even BIGGER surprise then I had ever dreamed! Especially when you're so certain you're not pregnant!!!
Dr. Beta: Congratulations!
CD: Oh I have to go tell Nate! she says jumping off the examining table.
Dr. Beta: Well wait. Let me give you some info to take with you before you go. And set your new appointment for your next check-up, then you can go tell him.
CD: Awesome! Thank you so much! She says giving the elderly man a hug and a kiss on the cheek.
CD: Oh while I'm thinking of it...is it alright if I can go to my best friend's wedding today? I was just feeling a little nausous earlier.
Dr: Beta: Sure you can go. There's no problem with that. But be expecting to feel sick more often. Especially in the morning, and stuff like that.
CD: Ok great thank you so much!
After CD gets the info she needs and rushes out to the waiting room to give Nate the news she has been dying to give him. When she gets out there, she sees a frazzled Nate with his head in his hands. Contemplating everything that just happened in front of him in the waiting room. She runs over to Nate.
CD: Oh my God Nate. I have something to tell you that you won't believe!!!!!!!

Awwww, this is soooo great! I love this fic! :D Post more soon!

*Of course after Nate had just witnessed that spectical with the woman leaving the waiting room, he didn't think he could take any news that ended with "you won't believe", because after the event that just took place in front of him, he thought that anything else would have to be alot to top it. But in any case, she was about to tell him the news that would change both there lives forever.*

*The church was set up more beautiful then Teddy, Jinny, or anyone could have ever imagined. Jinny, like most brides on there wedding day, was running several minutes late. She was in the bridal area of the church getting ready, while all who were invited were sitting in the church chatting amongst themselves. Teddy with his nevers completely shot, was standing by the alter anxiously awaiting the bridal march to play, and to see the doors open for his fiance', (soon to be wife) to walk through. Meanwhile back in the bridal dressing room...*

Magda: Jinny, relax! You don't look fat! Just...pregnant.
Jinny: Oh gimmie a break, I look like a weeble!
Magda: A what? asks Magda with a laugh.
Jinny: A weeble! You know, like the commercial? Weebles wobble but they don't fall down!
Magda laughs histerically.
Magda: Jinny you really crack me up sometimes!
Jinny: Well, I'm glad to see my predicament is causing you such amusement.
Magda: Jinny please. I'm not laughing at you, I'm laughing at what you said.
Jinny: I know. *sighs* I'm sorry Mag. I'm just nervous. Not only because of the wedding, but because I feel like I'm cheating God out of an honest bride.
Magda; What do you mean?
Jinny: Well, I'm not exactly an honest bride in a white gown. she says pointing to her impregnated belly.
Magda: Oh you're not the first one to get pregnant prior to being married.
Jinny: I know, I know. It just feels wrong is all.
Magda: Well, I'm sure that's only because you're pregnant while you're getting married. Otherwise I don't think you'd really care.
Jinny: Well, I guess that makes sense.
Magda: Now go out there and be with the man of your dreams!
Jinny: Ok here goes. And thanks, Mag.
Magda: No problem, hun.
Magda hugs and kisses Jinny on her right cheek.

*As the bridal march played, and Jinny walked down the aisle, everyone stood to face her while Raina and Lily mumbled about Jinny's appearance and her protruding mid-section, everyone else was oohing and ahhing at how amazing she looked regardless. And Teddy wasn't sure he was still breathing, as he stood no more then fifty feet away from his bride to be. And as Jinny was ushered to the alter by her father, a single tear escaped his left eye.*

Jinny: Oh, don't cry Daddy.

*John Sr. just smiled at Jinny, as the corner of his lip began to quiver. He couldn't remember a single time she had called him Daddy. It had always been Dad. And so, they walked down the aisle and once at the alter he reluctantly let go of Jinny's arm, and handed her off to Teddy as he took his seat beside Casey and John Jr.*

WOOO HOOOO!!!! That was great, Angie!!! You need to write more! hehe. :D

Nate: CD, you've gotta tell me what you're talking about!
CD: Nate, I'm pregnant!
Nate: CD, please don't joke around with me like that!
CD: I'm not joking! she says with a big grin while telling all this to Nate.
Nate: But CD how? It's impossible.
CD: Well, I know better then anyone, that nothing is impossible. Apparently, after telling you I wasn't pregnant, and after getting my tubes untied, it turns out that I'm pregnant after all.
Nate: That doesn't make any sense. The test said...
CD cuts him off.
CD: Only 99% accurate. And I'm obviously the one percent.
Nate: Well you ARE one in a million. he says more convinced now.
CD: Awwwww. Thanks but according to the Doc., the reason I got pregnant against such low probability, is because after having my tubes untied we obviously created a baby while my system wasn't adjusted yet, causing my hormones to be out of wack, and the pregnancy test to be off.
Nate: OH wow. I can't believe this! Am I really going to be a Daddy?! Nate asked anxious and excitedly.
CD: Yes, baby, you are!
Nate: Oh my God! Nate yells as he picks up CD and spins her around.
Nate: Oh I love you so much, CD.
CD: I love you too. She says as she looks at her watch.
CD: Uhh, Nate?
Nate: Yes hunnie?
CD: As happy as we both are, we have a wedding to be at.
Nate: Oh my God! I got so distracted, I totally forgot!
CD: For good reason, I hope.
Nate: Yes, baby, of course for good reason. But I don't want to be late, so we better get going.
CD: Uh, sweety it looks like we're already late. The wedding started 15 minutes ago.
Nate: Well then we better get going.
CD starts to walk out, when Nate calls her back.
CD: Nate, we really need to get going!
Nate: I know, it's just...
He stops himself and picks up CD, and carries her like a baby towards the door.
CD: Nate, I can walk ya know.
Nate: I know, I'm just practicing.
CD: For?
Nate For when I carry you over the thresh hold at our house.
CD: Well, I'll be able to walk when we get home too. she says, with a chuckle.
Nate: I know, but I meant as my new bride.
CD: What?! she asks extremely shocked and in awe.
Nate places CD down in a chair in the hallway, after leaving the waiting room, and gets down on one knee.
Nate: CD, I love you with all my heart you couldn't begin to understand how much. You have just made me a father and that's the greatest gift you could ever give me, so please make me the happiest man alive, and be my wife.
CD covers her mouth with both hands, as Nate pulls out a ring from his back pocket.
CD: Yes, oh my God, yes! she manages to get out through all the tears of happiness that are flowing down her face.
Nate: Yeah! he yells in a deep voice.
CD's hands shake some, as Nate's do also while he places the engagement ring on her finger.
CD: Ok Nate, we really hav to get going now.
Nate: I know, come on babe. We can make our double announcement at Jinny and Teddy's reception.
CD: Sounds good to me.
*They both head for the door, Nate's arm around CD's shoulders, and CD's arm around Nate's waist. *

*Back at Jinny and Teddy's wedding, they were just saying there "I Do's" when CD and Nate walked in and took a seat in the back.*

Priest: Jinny, do you take Theodore to have and to hold, for better or worse, for richer or for poorer, in sickness and in health, in good times and in bad, as long as you both shall live?
Jinny: I do.
Priest: Theodore, do you take Jinny to have and to hold, for better or worse, for richer or for poorer, in sickness and in health, in good times and in bad, as long as you both shall live?
Theodore: I do.
Priest: Then by the powers vested in me, by the state of California I now pronounce you husband and wife. You may kiss the bride.

Teddy kisses Jinny quickly and pasionately as she kicks up her heel signifying a really good kiss, as everyone invited applaudes and whistles, and then they all leave for the reception.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww.................omg, angie, that was SO WONDERFUL!!!!! i think a tear came to my eye!!!!!!!! awww, such beautiful sweetness.....ain't love grand? lol keep writing!

*Once at the reception, Teddy's main focus became trying to get Jinny to dance. He knew that she wouldn't. He just had that feeling. But he never stopped trying.*
Teddy: Jinny are you sure...
Jinny: Teddy, I am NOT dancing that's final. she said with a stern look, while folding her arms.
Teddy figured this was a pregnancy mood swing, because no matter HOW bad of a dancer you are, everyone dances at there wedding. He was just to afraid tell Jinny he thought it was a mood swing, for fear of her hitting him. Teddy sometimes likened her mood swings, to a two year old with a temper tantrum.
Teddy: Ok Jin. You don't wanna dance that's fine. We'll just sit here all night. he said attempting reverse physcology same as he would with a child.
Jinny just stared at Teddy and unfolded her arms.
Jinny: You really don't get it do you Teddy?
Teddy: Yes I do. You are to shy to dance.
Jinny: No, actually. That's not it.
Teddy: Oh ok then. Uhh so what is it?
Jinny: Teddy, isn't it obvious?! I'm fat!!!! Fat women can't dance. (Said like white men can't jump)
Teddy: Oh my God. Here we go again.
Jinny: Well, it's true!
Teddy: Look Jin, if I've told ya once I've told ya a thousand times. Pregnancy is beautiful. You're beautiful. Pregnant women are beautiful. So please, join me for a dance. I really need and want you to get over this. Please for me and our wedding we only have one wedding.
Jinny sighs and gets quiet for a moment.
Jinny: Okay for you.

*Both Jinny and Teddy get up to dance to a slow song. And as there hands touched each other, they shared there first dance as a married couple. And with The DJ playing Always by Atlantic Starr, Jinny feels more comfortable with dancing. And Teddy having his arms around her definetly helped matters.*

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Later that night, Jinny, Magda, CD and Kate are sitting off to the side having a girly moment, while Nate, Teddy and everyone else are talking amongst themselves.

Magda: Jin we have some things that we've been meaning to give you.
Jinny: Oh wedding presents all ready?
Magda: Well, in a way. WelI had meant to do this before, but with everything that was happening we had forgotten all about it. I wanted to give you something old.
Jinny: Oh my God. I had forgotten all about that!
Magda: Yeah I almost did to! But hey better late then never. Ok for the first thing. Something old. I thought I would give you one of my old maternity dresses that I wore for Ben. I can't believe I saved it, but I knew it would come in handy one day. It was my favorite dress that I wore when I was pregnant with him. I was about 5 or 6 months, so given 2 more months or so, it will come in very useful to ya I think.
Jinny: Oh my gosh, Mag. It's so pretty!
Magda: I know! It's not ugly or anything, like most maternity dresses are!
Jinny: Right. Thanks so much Mag.
Magda: You're welcome hunny. Magda hugs Jinny, and gives her a kiss on the cheek.
Raina: Now me! Now me! says Raina excitedly.
Raina: For something new, here ya go. is all she says while handing Jinny a rectangular box across the table. Jinny reaches for it over her slightly protruding belly.
Jinny: OOOOOOOOH, sweet! Jinny says as she lifts the gift from the box. Everyone mumbles comments to themselves, as Jinny reveals her gift to all from Raina with a Victoria Secret Tag hanging from it.
Kate: Ohhhhh Jin, sexay, sexay! says Kate with a hint of teasing in her voice.
Raina: Yeeeah, I figured that would come in handy tonight.
CD: RAINA?!
Raina: What, it will! My girl, is gonna be rockin' that bed in style!!
Jinny: Oh geez. Says Jinny blushing a little.
Kate: Well if you don't mind, I'm next!
Jinny: Sure, Cap! Bring it on!
Kate: Well Jinny. I figured since you're gonna be playing the wife and mother role now, that you'll be doing alot of cooking. And from what Teddy's told me, he could play the discus with your pancakes.
Jinny: Hey!
*Everyone laughs*
Kate: So, I figure you can borrow this for as LONG as you need. Until you can cook halfway decent food. We don't want you to send Teddy to the hospital now.
Jinny: Cute Cap. real cute.
Kate sticks her tounge out and Jinny. Jinny does the same to Kate.
Jinny: Well CD, looks like you're next.
CD: Finally! she says jokingly.
CD: Here, Jin. is all CD says as she hands Jinny a box and waits for her reaction.
Jinny: OMG, CD! Where did you...
Magda: What is it?
Kate: Yeah Jin.
Jinny: The heart of the ocean!
Raina: What? Raina asks while laughing.
Jinny: It's the heart of the ocean. Or at least it looks like it. It's a necklace with a blue gem. Like from the Titanic movie.
Kate: Oh that's kewl!
CD: Yeah well, I found that at a jewlery store and couldn't resist it. Knowing how that was you're favorite movie and all, I just had to get it. And it looks so much like the real thing.
Jinny: Oh but CD, that must have cost you a fortune!
CD: That doesn't matter. You're worth it.
Awwwww they all say in unison.

*Right as they are wrapping up their little meeting, they hear a voice over the speaker. It's Teddy.*

Awesome job, Angie!!!!!!!! And where on earth did you get the ideas for the gifts? ;)

Lovin it Angie im excited to see m0re-

OMG That post was soooo sweeeeeeeeeet! I love that necklace! Why does SHE get it!?! *pouts* Not fair Angie! Post more soon I love this fic. :loveya:

*Right as they are wrapping up their little meeting, they hear a voice over the speaker. It's Teddy.*

*Teddy at Speaker*

Teddy: Eh hem. Excuse me everyone, but can I have your attention please? I just wanted to take a moment to share with everyone here, how much I love my new wife.

*Ohhs and ahhs are heard throughout everyone attending.*

Teddy: Jinny, darling you are my world. Before I met you, my life was so empty and pointless. I honestly had no reason to live. I went through everyday not being happy with where I was at in life. Of course as an ADA I had a good job, but it wasn't what my life goal was. And that was to have a family. A wife, and a child...or children. Teddy says with a slight chuckle.

Teddy: And now I have that. And let me tell you I couldn't be happier. I am so thrilled with what Jinny has turned my life into. I only went on before her, hoping that one day I would find the woman of my dreams. And now that I have, it's better then I could have ever dreamed.

*Everyone applaudes and Jinny blushes*

Teddy: Well with that I'll stop rambling and give the floor to Dad. Oh I mean Mr. Exstead.

*John Sr. Stands up*

John Sr.: Hey, you can call me Dad! What made you think you couldn't?! John Sr. asks with a hint of comedy to his voice.

*Teddy just shrugs as John Sr. continues speaking*

John Sr.: Alright I guess I'm suppose to give a speech now.

*Everyone just looks around wondering if John Sr. will cause a scene at his daughter's wedding reception, as he has several other times in her life, but he doesn't*

John Sr.: (Sighs) Oh Jinny girl. Well, you've done it. You've actually done it. You got married. And to a man I approve of, who would've known? John Sr. asks at the podium slightly drunk with a glass of straight vodka in his right hand.
John Sr.: You know, I didn't want to say this because I knew it would cause me to get a little sappy. he says somewhat swaying at the stand.
John Sr.: But Jinny when you were up there, pledging your love to Teddy, all I could see was your Mom. (John's voice cracks) You looked exactly like her Jinny. It was amazing. I mean, I flashed on everything. The first time I met your mom. When she told me she was pregnant with you. When you were born. When you would jump off the porch over and over and I must've told you a hundred times to stop, but you always said 'No Dad, I want to be a stunt double when I grow up.' And now you're a cop. A little different isn't it? he asked rhetorically with a chuckle. I even flashed on when you would get skinned knees after jumping off the porch, and you wouldn't let me bandage them cuz you wanted nature to take it's course.
John Sr.: And it's funny I would always call you my little Evil Kenevil! John says laughing.
John Sr. Do you remember that Jinny girl?

She just smiled and nodded as her Dad spoke.

John Sr.: Wow it seems like only yesterday. And now you're married. You're Mom would have been so happy, Jin. he says as his voice cracks and he starts to get emotional.

John Sr.: Well I won't say much more you kids are probably sick of hearing my mouth already.

Jinny and Teddy applauded.

John Sr.: Oh real cute, you two! Well, I'll just end by saying I love you Jinny...(he pauses) Blumenthal.

*John Sr. sits down and Jinny stands up*

Jinny: Actually Dad, it's Jinny EXSTEAD Blumenthal. Yeah, I would never lose the Exstead name.

*John smiles as Jinny takes her seat, and the DJ comes over the speaker*

DJ: Uh hang on a minute you two. Stand right back on up now. It's time for the bride and father of the bride to share a dance!

Jinny mumbles an oh geesh and John Sr. gets up slowly as he puts his drink down on the table. And Nate yells across the hall.

Nate: Alright you two can dance, but I have an announcement to make afterwards.
Jinny: Oh Dad, Nate has an announcement.
John Sr.: Yeah he does. He also said after our dance. Nice try Jinny, but you're not getting out of it.
Jinny: Oh alright, geesh! She says laughing.

*As Jinny and her Dad head to the dance floor, the song Butterly Kisses plays. John and Jinny's favorite*

*After there dance, Nate stands up to give his announcement.*

OMG!!! ANGIE!!!! First of all---GET BACK HERE AND POST MORE!!!!!!

And second of all---that was AWESOME!!!!!!!!

Nate: Um everyone. Hi. I, or should I say we, have something we'd

like to share with everyone. CD you wanna tell them, or should I?
CD: You tell them. I wanna pay close attention to there reactions.
Nate: You got it. Well everybody, I don't know exactly where to start

or how to put this, but CD and I well...

*Raina cuts Nate off*

Raina: Let me guess. You two are dating? OH BOY! How exciting! I

always knew there was something between you guys! I sensed it.
Nate: Well, that is a major understatement but ok.
Raina: Awwww how sweet you guys are going STEADY!
Nate: Uh no. (he pauses) Steady, Raina? Steady?! Who uses that term

anyway? I haven't gone STEADY since High School. Geesh. he says

partially aggrivated and partially laughing.
Magda: Can you please just let him tell us, Raina?
Raina: Alright, fine. she says putting her hands up.
Nate: Well, CD and I are dating. Actually, as of two hours ago, we're

engaged. he extends CD's hand out for all to see.

*Gasps are heard throughout the reception hall*

Jinny: Oh my God, CD! Is this for real?
CD: Well what are you asking about the ring or the engagement? she

questions laughing.
Jinny: Uh I meant the engagement but now that you mention it, Nate is

it?
Nate: About as real as twenty-five hundred dollars would get me.

*Everyone gasps again*

Raina: Twenty-five HUNDRED DOLLARS?! Nate, she's not that special!

*CD shoots Raina a look*

Nate: Uh, trust me that's a matter of opinion.
Raina: Well in any event, congratulations CD and Nate. All kidding

aside you guys deserve to be happy.
CD: Thanks Raina.
Nate: Yeah. But uh...that wasn't the whole announcement.
Raina: Ohh there's more?
CD: Yes, gossip queen.
Raina: Well, spill!

*CD puts her hand on Nate's arm*

CD: Baby, can I tell them this one?
Nate: Of course you can.
CD: Alright everyone. Are you ready for this?? (she's quiet for a

second) I'm pregnant.

*Everyone has a look of shock and disbelief on there face*

Kate: CD you must be joking with us. That's not possible we all know

why.
Magda: CD. You're joking right?
CD: No I'm not. I'm really pregnant! A month pregnant!
Magda: Well, you definetly give a new meaning to the word...how?
CD: Well, actually I had my tubes untied. And apparently because my

horomones were so off, it caused me to get pregnant immediatly after

getting my tubes untied. And so, knowing I had reversed it I knew

getting pregnant was a real possibilty and so, I took a test. And I

guess my horomones confused the test which confused me because it

said I wasn't pregnant. But then Nate insisted I go to the Doctor and

get checked out. So I did. And that's when he told me. It was right

before coming here, actually.
Jinny: Well CD, I guess that explains everything. God, I'm so happy for you! We all are!

*Applause rings through the room. Jinny hugs her friend, gives congratulations, and informs all the females from The Division that are within earshot...of something*

Jinny: You know guys, I knew that CD and Nate had this thing going on for awhile now, but I didn't know that they were engaged or having a baby. What good news!
Kate: Whoa, wait a minute! You knew they were together?
Jinny: Oh come on. You mean to tell me you all didn't sense the tension those two had on a day to day basis at work?

*CD and Nate BOTH blush*

Kate: No of COURSE I sensed it we all did, I just didn't know that they would make something of it outside of work. I figured they'd fear MY wrath. Kate says with an aggressive tone that not even she believed.
CD: Actually we did fear it, but we were willing to take that chance. For the sake of love.
Kate: Awww that's nice. she says dismissively turning her attention to Jinny.
Kate: So what do you mean you knew they had this "thing" going on for awhile now?
Jinny: Uhhhhh. is all she can say as she glances at CD, realizing she just opened her mouth and inserted her foot.
CD: It's ok Jin. I don't mind you can tell them.
Raina: Yeah tell us!

*Jinny shakes her head at Raina*

Jinny: Well back a few months ago I kinda caught CD and Nate...(Jinny pauses) I uhhhh kinda caught them together in the Division stockroom. And how should I say this? They were...getting Jiggy Wit It.
Raina: OMG you didn't!
CD: She did. And oh Raina we had such a blast! You have no idea. We even wanted to include Jinny in it, but she was afraid Teddy would be upset.
Raina: Ewwww. Say no more, say no more! she says squirming in her chair.
Jinny: Yup that's the same reaction I had! She says laughing.
CD: Good for you Jinny, you finally managed to shut Raina's ear for gossip.
Jinny: Thank ya thank ya. she says smiling. Well anyway, that's how I knew about this ages ago. And now, you two have made a real thing out of this. And I couldn't be happier. Great relationships are so hard to come by now a days. And so, I raise my glass of sparkling water (not alcohol) in a toast. To CD and Nate. May they always be happy with every aspect of there life, and may they always be blessed with good things.
Kate: Well, cheers to that!

*Everyone clangs classes and both the scene and episode end.*

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!! That was SO FABULOUS, ANGIE!!!!! I loved it!!!!!! And thank you for posting again tonight!

*With Jinny and Teddy now on there honeymoon in Hawaii, Jinny felt closer to him then ever. Being married and pregnant completed her. She felt like she had everything she ever wanted. And she did. Even having a boss at work understand that she was married and engaged to a coworker, and she was happy about it. Even concerning CD and Nate, Kate seemed to truly be happy for them and not care at all that they were REALLY mixing business and pleasure. She really didn't give Kate must credit for that sort of thing she realizes now. And the worry was all for nothing, that Kate would have her badge. She now knows Kate would never do that and that she thinks way to highly of Jinny to leave her with nothing. So yes she truly was happy now. And as her and Teddy lay there together on the beach of Hawaii, Jinny can't help but to let a tear escape the corner of her left eye.*

Teddy: Jinny, are you okay?
Jinny: Yes I'm fine honey why you ask? she questions while moving her head from his shoulder to his chest.
Teddy: Well sweety, you're crying.
Jinny: Oh love, they're happy tears. she says smiling.
Jinny: For once I'm crying and they're tears of happiness. And it's all because of you Teddy, and I love you.
Teddy: I see. Well the feeling is mutual. And I love you too. More then I could ever put into words.

*And so they just lay there in the bliss that they never thought they'd experience. When Jinny put her ear on Teddy's chest to hear his heartbeat she felt like she could lay there forever and have no worries, and Teddy with his arm around Jinny convinced himself that he could protect her from the world's biggest natural disaster just by laying there and holding her. And while they're as happy as they could possibly be, they both drift off to sleep.*

*A couple of hours later, they awake. And after a lingering smile to each other, they agree to go back up to there rented beach house for a nice long luxurious shower together. As Jinny is gettin the shower ready, Teddy is in the kitchen.*

Teddy: Jinny, why don't we eat first? He yells to her from the kitchen.
Jinny: Ok, that sounds fine. she says shutting off the shower and going out to the kitchen to meet her awaiting husband. Wow, that word sounded wierd to her, but it was a good wierd.

*After they eat, they both race each other to the shower. Like two young teenagers.*

Teddy: Yay! I won...again! Teddy says once he reaches the bathroom door.
Jinny: Nooo you didn't! She says as she rushes past him and jumps in the shower.
Teddy: Hey!
Jinny: Well?! We said race to the shower, not the bathroom door.
Teddy: Ahh I see is that how it's going to be?
Jinny: No, that's how it IS!
Teddy: Ohhh you'll pay for that wise ass! he says as he runs over to her and tickles her.
Jinny giggles.
Jinny: Stop, stop it. You know how ticklish I am!
Teddy: I know, but that makes it all the more fun! he says continuing to attack her.
Jinny: Well, the longer you tickle me, the longer it takes to get in the shower. she says through boughts of laughter.
Teddy: Oh well then, let's get to it! he says clapping his hands once then rubbing them together.
Jinny: Cute Teddy, real cute.

*Jinny and Teddy showered together, but Teddy finishes first and decides to get dressed and go watch tv because there was a football game comming on. Jinny just shrugged it off with her "Ugh Men!" comment and told him she would cuddle with him when she finished up in the shower. He agreed and headed out to the couch, jumping over the back to sit on it. Jinny peeked her head around the shower curtain, and had to laugh at Teddy's actions. But when she finish showering she leaned over to turn off the faucet and as she looked down she saw a puddle of blood forming it's way down the drain. Her stomach dropped when she looked down at her legs. It was then she knew where the blood was coming from.*

Jinny: Oh my God please no, God! You can't do this to me! Teddy!!!!!!!!!! She screamed. He came running in and carried her from the shower, to the bedroom just long enough to throw a housecoat on her and rush her out the door to the emergency room. Little did she know when she got there, she would be leaving with one less thing the she came in with. One thing that meant the world to her and Teddy.

*Once Jinny got to the Hospital, nurses came running from every direction and took Jinny from Teddy's arms. They put her on a stretcher and guided her to the nearest available emergency room before Teddy even knew what was going on. But he quickly followed behind and all he could hear was Jinny screaming in pain while saying my baby, my baby. Teddy stood right beside Jinny as they treated her, but little did he know he was only making it more difficult. Finally one nurse pushed him out of the way saying "Sir you must leave now, we can't work on her with you here." and as she escorted him out and drew the curtain shut around Jinny's bed, Teddy was left not even being able to see her.*

Teddy: God please. I know I haven't been real religious in my life, and I can't remember a single time I went to Church unless it was for a funeral or a wedding. And I know I only pray for things I want, and not for the sake of just praying, but I beg of you. Take my life. Do with me what you wish, just please please don't take Jinny or my unborn baby. Please, please, please. He kept saying over and over as he leaned against the wall and slid down till he hit the floor. He rested his head in his hands and started bawling.

*About a half hour later, which seemed like two hours to Teddy, a nurse finally came out calling for Mr. Blumenthal. Teddy stood up quickly causing blood to rush to his head making him dizzy. But that was the least of his worries.*

Teddy: Yes, yes Ma'm how's my wife?
Nurse: Well, uh I don't know how to tell you this, but...
Teddy: Please just tell me I can't take this imagining the worst case scenerio and not being sure how she is!
Nurse: Well you're wife is fine...now. But I'm very sorry, she lost the baby.
Teddy: Oh my God. She must be devistated.
Nurse: Uh Sir, you're wife doesn't know yet. We were just concerned with getting the rest of the miscarriage out of her before it caused any permanent damage. She was so worn out and fell right to sleep afterwards. So she doesn't know she lost the baby.
Teddy: I have got to go to her.
Nurse: Well she's sleeping now.
Teddy: That's fine I'll just keep her company until she wakes up.
Nurse: Well if you insist, I guess that's ok I would just advise against telling her about the baby until she's feeling better.
Teddy: Yeah well I don't care about what you're ADVICE is okay? When she wakes up she's going to want to know what happened, and I'm sure as HELL not going to lie to her. How long do you think she can go without wanting to know what happened anyway? She's not stupid, you know. My wife is a very smart woman, and she'll figure it out before anyone has to tell her. Now if you'll excuse me I'm going to go sit by her bedside till she wakes up.

*And with that, Teddy walks away. Once he gets into Jinny's room, he's reminded immediatly how much he hates hospitals. Then he looks over to Jinny. She's sleeping, looking so worn out and tierd. As quietly as he can, he pulls a chair from the corner of the room over to Jinny's bedside. And as she slept, he held one of her hands in his and with his other hand he stroked her sweaty hair away from her eyes. Teddy just sits there for hours as she sleeps, never once leaving her bedside. Several hours later, Jinny awakes to see Teddy holding one of her hands, and his other hand is on her head near her hairline. She smiles when she sees that he had rested his head on her stomach and fallen asleep. Jinny tries not to wake Teddy but she does, as she starts to sob softly. Teddy wakes up and looks up at Jinny.*

Teddy: Jinny. he says. All he can do is look at her wondering what to do or say now.
Jinny: Hi Teddy.
Teddy: Hi baby, how are you feeling?
Jinny: Sore. she says as she instinctively looks down at her stomach. Then slowly looks up to Teddy.
Jinny: I lost the baby didn't I?
Teddy: Oh Jinny. I'm so sorry. I prayed for you like I've never prayed for anything before in my life. But I guess it wasn't enough. This MUST be my punishment for something that I've done in my life.
Jinny: Teddy stop that crazy talk. This is in no way a result of something you did in the past. That's just plain crazy.
Teddy: Ok. Then maybe I caused it. I was tickling you before you took a shower, maybe I caused you to miscarry.
Jinny: Teddy, that's ridiculous. she says putting both her hands on his shaking right hand.
Jinny: Baby, you're shaking. I can't take seeing you like this. As hurt as I am to have lost the baby, you seem like you're taking it worse. You DID NOT cause this, okay? You have got to understand that.
Teddy: Ok. I guess I understand. I just don't know what to say to you, ya know? There are no words in the world that will comfort you.
Jinny: Baby, as long as you're here with me that's enough. It's better then words. I just don't know what to do now I mean I feel like a part of me is gone. It probably sounds silly.
Teddy: No no baby, it doesn't. I mean I have no idea what this must be like for you, but I can only imagine having you're child just taken away it must really feel like it's a piece of you. I mean, I don't want to sound insensitive at all but just know that we can try again. I mean obviously not right away, but when you're ready. I just want you to know, I'm not like most guys who when there wives have miscarriages, they treat them like they have some kind of disease and don't want to have sex with them anymore. I'm not like that so that's all I meant by the try again comment.
Jinny: Teddy, it's ok I understand don't worry. I would never think for a single second that you wouldn't want sex from me, you horny animal.

*They both try to laugh and make light of the horribly unfair situation. Just then the Doctor knocks on the door.*

Jinny: Come in. she says arranging herself better on the pillow.
Doctor: Hello, Jinny. How are you doing?
Jinny: As good as can be expected I suppose. she says on the verge of tears.
Doctor: I understand that. I'm sure you feel different.
Jinny: Well of course I do. I came here pregnant, and now I'm not. So yeah I guess you could say I feel different. she said a bit sarcastic.
Doctor: No I meant different in that you may have had a miscarriage, but it was A miscarriage.
Jinny: I'm not sure I understand.
Doctor: Mrs. Exstead. You're still pregnant.

LOVED IT! (Even though I know what's going on) STILL LOVED IT! When can I expect to read more? :D

Does it make you happy to kill fictitious unborn children that you created? Build them up and then crash it all down? Is that how you want to be remembered? Is it!? Is it!? Murderer!
I don't think it's right and I don't think you do either, Angela.

Will the agony ever end??

LOL :o

JINNY..BABY..LOVIN IT! AND THE BABYS STILL IN JINNYS TUMMY ! YAY. PLZ MORE!

Teddy: What?
Jinny: Yeah what?
Doctor: You're still pregnant. You miscarried a baby girl, but you're still pregnant.
Jinny: Doctor I still don't get it.
Doctor: The best way I can explain it Jinny, is you were carrying twins and you miscarried one, but you still have the other one and it's perfectly healthy. Didn't the nurse tell you?
Jinny: No she didn't tell me a thing.
Teddy: Yeah I didn't like her from the beginning anyway.
Doctor: Well, would you like to know the sex of the baby?
Jinny: No.
Teddy: Yes.
Jinny: Please hun, I want it to be a surprise.
Teddy: Ok that's fine.
Doctor: So Jinny, it's in your best interest to stay here another day or so and once you feel a little better it will be fine for you to go.
Jinny: Ok no problem thanks for everything Doctor.
Doctor: Sure.

*Jinny looks to Teddy as the Doctor leaves.*

Jinny: Baby, I don't know whether to be happy or sad.
Teddy: I know me too. But there's a reason for everything even if we don't know it right away.
Jinny: I know Teddy, I know.

*Later on Teddy and Jinny, decide to let everyone at the Division know what's going on. So, Teddy makes the VERY long distance call to California all the way from there honeymoon spot in Hawaii.* lol

*Phone rings*

Kate: McCafferty? Oh, wow. Hi Teddy. Didn't expect to hear from you till you got back from the honeymoon. You and Jinny must be so happy! You're not? Why? What's wrong? the Captain asks as she feels her stomach sink.

*The Captain always instantly worries as if they're all her kid's. After a few seconds of silence all you hear on Kate's end is I see. Well, give her my best, and then she hangs up. At this point, everyone in The Felony Division, is dead silent and knows something horrible has happened. And as Kate walks out of her office and into the bullpen, Magda is the first one to make a comment.*

Magda: Captain. What's wrong?
Kate: Uh. It's Jinny.
Magda: She's calling from her honeymoon, so you and I both know something is wrong. Why don't you tell me what it is?
Kate: Well I really don't know how to say this, but Jinny had a miscarriage in Hawaii, and she lost the baby.
Magda: Captain, that's horrible. She must be devistated, why didn't you let me talk to her?!
Kate: Well first of all that was Teddy, Jinny is resting. And second of all, she wasn't as upset as she would have been if she would have had a miscarriage.
Magda: Wait what do you mean? She did have a miscarriage right? You just said she lost the baby!
Kate: Well technically. She was pregnant with twins, but she only miscarried one.
Magda: Oh my God. Poor Jinny. She must be feeling so sad and confused, not knowing whether to be happy or sad.
Kate: I know. But all we can do is pray for her and hope she has a better pregnancy this time around.
Magda: I know I agree.

*And with that Kate goes back into her office and Magda fills everyone else of The Division in on the devistating news, as they had only caught bits and pieces of Kate and Magda's conversation. While back at the hospital, Teddy just sits there staring at Jinny when suddenly she wakes up.*

Teddy: Hey baby. How are you feeling?
Jinny: Ummm, fine I guess. she says trying to wake up.
Teddy: I called the Division for ya. Everyone knows.
Jinny: Really? Well what did the captain say?
Teddy: She gave her best, and there prayers are with you.
Jinny: Oh that's so sweet. I plan to be back on my feet just as soon as I can.
Teddy: Whoa whoa Jinny, why the rush?
Jinny: I don't know. I just can't help but wonder if maybe I lost the baby because I wasn't active enough. But I always thought when you were pregnant you were suppose to take it easy? I just don't know anymore. she says breaking down.
Jinny: Maybe I was suppose to do a mixture of the two. Yeah that's it.
Teddy: Hey Jinny, hun calm down. It wasn't anything you did, or didn't do. God just wanted another angel is all. he says trying to soothe crying Jinny.
Jinny: But why did it have to be MY angel?
Teddy: Maybe because God couldn't find anyone better.
Jinny: Oh. she says with just a slight smile.
Jinny: I guess we don't know what we got till it's gone....in more ways then one.
Teddy: What do you mean?
Jinny: Well, for one thing we didn't know I was pregnant with twins and from second we couldn't enjoy her because she was taken away so soon. So we didn't get to learn anything about her.
Teddy: Well, I suppose you're half right. Except we do know one thing about her.
Jinny: What?
Teddy: That she would be as kind hearted, loving, tough, and couragous as her Mommy.
Jinny: Oh sweetheart! she says while hugging him and burying her face in his neck.

*Scene fades to the crown vic that Magda and Jinny always shared. Inside, are Kate and Magda.*

Kate: Ok.... I never thought I'd have to look at a map to get anywhere in San Fran., but I think you have offically gotten us lost. she says to Magda while trying to read the map she got out of there glove box. Magda tries to ignore Kate and keeps driving.
Kate: Wait! MAGDA STOP! Magda jacks up on the brakes, throwing them both foward and then back again causing Magda to wack her head on the back of the head rest.
Magda: OWW! What Captain, what?
Kate: You were suppose to turn left there.
Magda: What?!
Kate: Well that's what the map says.
Magda: No. I mean you yelled at me for that?! Geez Captain with all due respect, I know where I'm going. Jinny and I are in this area all the time!
Kate: Oh really? Then why does Jinny always drive?
Magda: Oh I dunno. Maybe because I'm the one reading the map! she says sarcastically.
Kate: Watch your tone, Inspector! Honestly, I don't know how Jinny puts up with you!
Magda: Simple. I let her drive! Unlike a certain someone in this car.
Kate: Well! Fine. Whatever. Drive. Drive till your hearts content. But when we don't get to the witnesses house in time, my ass won't be the one getting written up. Kate says using her position as leverage as she tries to fold the map, which she's unsuccesful at doing. Several minutes later, she's still at it an Magda looks at her out of the corner of her eye, trying so hard not to laugh at her Captain.
Magda: Having some problems? she asks with a hint of laughter in her voice.
Kate: The damn thing is fighting back! she says now in total hysterics.
Magda: Hang on. she says as she pulls over to the side of the road, takes the map and folds it effortlessly, before placing it back in the glove box and pulling back out onto the road again.
Kate: Ok. I give. How did you do that?
Magda: Experience. I wasn't just being sarcastic when I said I'm usually the one reading the map! she says causing them both to laugh.

*The joke that Magda has just made, was so out out of her character and it allowed Kate and Magda to bond rather then butt heads. But in Hawaii...Jinny wasn't so cheery.*

Teddy: Baby, I really think we should stay here and finish our honeymoon and enjoy ourselves as much as possible.
Jinny: Yeah well, that feeling isn't mutual. I wanna go back to California. As soon as possible.
Teddy: But baby, we've only been here for a week.
Jinny: DAMN YOU TEDDY, I wanna leave!! You act like my losing a baby wasn't that big of a deal!
Teddy: Sweety, I'm not trying to be insensitive, I just thought we could go back to the beach house and relax for the rest of our honeymoon before going back to the states was all I meant.
Jinny: I know. she says sighing. I know. I just don't think I deserve to be with you here in this beautiful place. I can't even carry both your babies to full term! I'm such a failure! With everything in my life and now this!
Teddy: Jinny stop it right now. Stop that crazy talk.
Jinny: it's not crazy! It's true! I'm a horrible, horrible person! I'm being punished for something I did in my life, I know it! I'm just so sorry that I.....

*Teddy cuts her off by giving her a sweet, deep, kiss that lasted several minutes. As he kisses her he wipes tears off her cheek with the first finger of his left hand, and pushes her hair back with his right hand, before finally pulling away from the kiss.*

Teddy: Jinny. None of this was your fault. If I wanted to leave, I'd be long gone already. But I'm not. I'm sticking around and I'm in it for the long hall. Don't you see? One baby, two, ten or none. I don't care. You are enough for me. Everything else is just window dressing. he says while thinking out loud.
Teddy: Hmmm where have I heard that before? he asks her.
Jinny: I dunno. she says laughing.
Teddy: But do you understand me now?
Jinny: Yes I do. I just really feel like this is my fault someway. For being an alcoholic or something.
Teddy: Well it's not your fault. And you didn't drink while you were pregnant right?
Jinny: Of COURSE not! I didn't even want a drink the whole time!
Teddy: Ok then. That would be the only way this would be your fault. And if you decide to finish off the last week of our vacation here in Hawaii, I promise to make it worth your while when we get back to the beach house.
Jinny: Hmmm. Well, it seems like you're making me an offer I can't refuse!
Teddy: Alright then! he says smiling and kissing her once more.

Awesome! That was great girl! Sorta sad in the begining but then it got really good. LOVED the Kate/Magda scene hehe. Soo funny!

BTW, stick to one screen name girl!!!!! lmao :p

*Back at the Division, Magda is trying her hardest to concentrate on the case she has but she can barely remember the facts of the crime. Another Mini-Mart robbery had occured in San Francisco, and Magda and Kate were suppose to go and speak to the Cashier who got robbed. But all Magda could do was think about Jinny, and what she must be going through in Hawaii. She hoped Jinny was taking it easy, and enjoying what was left of her honeymoon with Teddy. Once at the Mini-Mart Magda was less then professional, while interviewing the Cashier. *

Alright Miss, can you explain to us what happened?
Cashier: Sure. Um a guy came in with dark blonde hair and a beard. He had on a light blue shirt, and jeans. she explains shaking a little.
Magda: Go on. she says while writing in her notebook.
Cashier: Well, he pointed a gun at me and said to open my draw, or I'll shoot you and open it myself. So I agreed, and I think he got away with about $600 bucks.
Magda: Okay um, and about how tall was he?
Cashier: I'd say about 2'11".
Magda: Oh, I'm sorry. Maybe you mis understood me. I asked his height not his wieght.
Cashier: That was his height...approx.
Magda: How could he be 2'11"? What was he a midget or something? she asks sarcastically while laughing.
Cashier: Yes, actually.
Magda: Whoa wait a minute. You mean to tell me you let a midget take all your money?!
Kate: Ramirez! she says shocked.
Magda: What?! That's the funniest thing I ever heard.
Cashier: Oh really? Tell me what would you do with a cocked gun pointed at you?!
Magda remains silent.
Kate; Inspector can I see you over here, please?
Magda: Uhhh sure, Cap. she says slightly embarassed.
Kate: Magda, has it honestly been so long that you've forgotten you were in a similar situation?
Magda: Well I wasn't attacked by a midget.
Kate: And apparently height matters when your life's at stake. And as I recall, you weren't standing very tall when you were being attacked.
Magda doesn't say anything in return, she just stands there shocked that her Captain actually went there and said that.
Kate: We'll finish this later, Inspector. she says as she walks back to the victim of the robbery.

*So later, she did finish it. In her office. As Magda walks in, she shuts the office door and took her seat at her desk.*

Kate: Take a seat. she says to Magda who is standing by the door.
Magda: No thanks, I think I'll stand.
Kate: Sit. NOW. she says pointing to the chair in front of her desk.
Magda plops down in the chair facing Kate. as Kate folds her arms.
Kate: So, you feel like telling me what that was all about back there?
Magda: Um I don't know, Cap.
Kate: Do you know who you reminded me of when you made that remark about the robber? Jinny. she says answering her own question.
Magda: Jinny? she repeats with a questioning tone.
Kate: Yup. That was something she totally would have said. And that's what your reaction was all about, wasn't it?
Magda: Uhhh I don't think I know what you mean.
Kate: I think you do. You KNOW what I mean is you're letting Jinny's miscarriage, and sorrows interfere with your job performance.
Magda: Well can you blame me?! she asks raising her voice.
Kate is quiet for a few moments before speaking.
Kate: I'm afraid I'm going to have to write you up for this.
Magda: Are you serious?
Kate: You can't be treating victims like that. It's that simple.
Magda: Fine, write me up whatever. Do what you have to do. She says throwing her hands up in the air. I give up.
Kate silently writes out the slip and hands it to Magda. Magda snatches it away, and heads for the door.
Kate: Magda. she calls to her.
Magda turns around with the office door slightly open.
Kate: No I can't, Magda. Magda gives her a questioning look.
Kate: No, I can't blame you. And don't worry. She will be fine. I promise you, she's strong and she always lands on her feet.
Magda: I know, Captain. And thanks. she says waving the paper at her boss.

*While CD is thinking of her future marriage to Nate, he is two rooms away dealing with other private matters of his own.*

Nate: (on the phone) Yes, yes. Sure, I can meet you. It uh, just has to be a secluded place. Ya know, so we can have privacy. He says looking over his left shoulder.
Nate: I will bring you're favorite wine, I promise. he says wispering into the phone.
Nate: OK see you then. I love you, too.

Nate: (on the phone) Yes, yes. Sure, I can meet you. It uh, just has to be a secluded place. Ya know, so we can have privacy. He says looking over his left shoulder.
Nate: I will bring you're favorite wine, I promise. he says wispering into the phone.
Nate: OK see you then. I love you, too.

OOOOOOOOH COME ON!!! Angie, what are you doing?? lol It adds mystery and I love that but ya gotta write more soon so I know who it is!!!!!

That was great! MORE!:wave:

Season Two Episode Four Devistation (cont.)

*With Nate thinking there's nothing wrong with him having a date with another woman other than his fiance, he gets ready for his evening. With CD left feeling confused, hurt, and needless to say angry, she forces herself to ignore her emotions and think of ways to end it with Nate. After all, she can't be pregnant and have a fiance that's cheating on her. At least that's what CD thought. Maybe it was her overly active emotions due to the pregnancy getting to her. Or maybe not. But all she knew for sure was that she had to confront him about it.*

(Nate and the "mystery woman" at dinner)

Nate: Wow, this is a really nice setup you have here. he says to the woman.
Woman: Ya know, Nate, I'm really glad you decided to meet me.
Nate: Oh no problem, Lisa. We haven't seen each other in so long. And you were one of my frew really good friends back in high school. And I didn't have many, so I really valued your friendship.
Lisa: Valued? As in past tense?
Nate: Okay, okay. Value. Feel better? he asks sarcastically.
Lisa: Yes much. she says while laughing.
There is an awkward silence. Lisa is the first to break it.
Lisa: So what's new in your life?
Nate: Oh alot. I'm an inspector now for the felony Division for one.
Lisa: Oh wow. And how is that going for you?
Nate: Awesome. It's where I met my current fiance. And she's pregnant too! he says excitedly.
Lisa: Fiancee? You have a fiancee? she asks with a disapointed tone.
Nate: Oh yeah! And I never knew any one person could be this happy. It's amazing!
Lisa: Is that right? Well, I see. Is all she says.
Nate: What's the matter? I would have thought you'd be happy for me.
Lisa: Happy for you? Are you crazy?!
Nate: What are you talking about?
Lisa: Oh my God. I can't believe you don't remember our agreement.
Nate: Umm no I'm sorry I don't.
Lisa: Well does this refresh your memory? (mocks Nate with a deep voice) When we graduate high school, if were not married in five years we'll marry each other. Well, it's 15 years later Nate.
Nate: Oh wow Lisa. I was 18. You can't honestly expect me to live up to that!
Lisa: Actually, I did. I didn't take you for the promise breaker type.
Nate: Promise breaker type? Lisa you can't be serious.
Lisa: Of course I'm serious. I couldn't understand why you didn't contact me to set up the marriage arrangement so that's why I planned this evening and you agreed to it, so don't tell me you weren't interested.
Nate: Ok let me make something real clear real quick. I love my fiance. More then life in itself. She is my whole world. And I couldn't even PRETEND to imagine my life without her. And as far as my agreeing to bring the wine on the phone and saying I love you, is because I DO love you. As a friend. A really awesome friend. And NOTHING more. And I thought it would be a nice gesture to bring your favorite wine. But that's all it was, and I apologize if I gave you the wrong impression.
Lisa: Well you sure know how to lead a girl on.
Nate: Ok Lisa. That's it. You are certifiably insane, now. You changed for the worst when we lost touch after high school. And no matter what you say, think, or do, I'm not leaving the love of my life for someone who just contacts me outta the blue. Now if you'll excuse me CD is waiting for me. And with that, Nate leaves Lisa at the table and sets off to confront CD.

*When he got back to his house, everything that CD could find that belonged to Nate was out on the sidewalk. Nate, really confused and scared, went up to the door where he read a note that said: "Nate I heard you on the phone earlier tonight. And I'm NO FOOL. How could you do this to me?!" I thought we were madly in love with each other. But I was decieved. Take all your **** and go back to the girl you just left, jerk! P.S. The baby and I will be just fine...on our own.

Your ex,
CD.

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^^^^^^^^^^^I think that says it all! OMG!!! I hope that gets fixed. Write more ASAP GIRLIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

whooo hoo...you tell him CD...great writing, keep it coming :D