Janice Johnson
10-08-2021, 01:13 AM
My other recent Insight for my Stories was supposed to be mainly an insight and I ended up basically writing my Stories all over again with occasional insights to them.
Take two. ;)
Part 1
My Darryl Johnson Character was based on my twist on the Michael Jackson Character named Darryl in the Bad music Video, 18 minute version. Michael's Darryl was a Juvenile Delinquent who lived in the New York Ghetto who was sent to an upscale Boarding School and is back home on a school vacation and his Friends want him to mug someone to prove that he is still tough. Darryl plans to mug an old guy but feels bad and warns the man to run. He does and his Friends berate him for going soft. He turns into Michael Jackson and sings the Bad Song...:lol: His Friends respect that he has changed for the better.
My Darryl Johnson Character physically was based on Michael's Darryl character. Sean, Julian, and Mario were based on MJ's Darryl three friends. I even had them look like those characters. My Darryl Character lived in North Miami Suburbs and was sent to Marshall Johnson Academy Boarding School after his Mom found out he was mugging People, carjacking, ribbing convenience stores and burglarizing homes. On my very first Darryl Johnson story, he goes home on a school Vacation and his Friends dare him to shoot someone to prove he is still tough. He pretends to shoot the Victim, but the Victim falls over. Darryl understandably freaks out. Later, he is told this was an elaborate prank by his his Mom, Friends, a Policeman and the "Victim," and all of them end up LAUGHING. My first Darryl story got a lot of consecutive criticism basically saying that most people aren't going to pretend to shoot someone for a dare and the People in on it should be HORRIFIED that it looked like Darryl would have shot someone for a dare. They also pointed out that Darryl should be PISSED, not LAUGHING.
My second Darryl Story took the consecutive criticism to heart and made a better Version where Sean snapped and was shooting random People because he was upset that Darryl left him, Julian, and Mario to go to MJA. He coerced Julian and Mario into keeping their mouths shut by threatening to turn them into the Authorities for Criminal deeds they did themselves. Sean killed his latest Victim and Darryl who tried to stop the shooting was hit by Sean and fell as Darryl watched in Horror as Sean's latest Victim was shot right in front of him. Sean had an attitude of,"It's just a game. If they die, it's just a casual casualty. I wanted to show that Sean was cracked Sociopath.
This version of Darryl was more well received. A boy shooting People because he really snapped was more well received than the "Dared to," thing. Sean left Darryl to be the fall guy(Darryl called Police and Ambulance and was the only one of the four who was around the dead body) and Darryl was arrested and jailed until he admitted Sean was the Killer and was let go.
Sean thinking that Darryl was still in jail went to his house and tried to steal Darryl's money. Once again, Sean is no good. Darryl confronted him and I had Darryl ask for his money back($300!) And Sean gave it back to him and Darryl gave him $40. I wanted to show that Darryl still cared about him. He then kicked Sean out.
Later he finds out that Sean is blackmailing Julian and Mario into keeping secrets his shooting game. I had Darryl, Mario, and Julian dress up in disguise , knock out Sean and put him in a human sized bag and put breathing holes and "Kidnap," him l, tie him up, and pretend to be the ghosts of his dead Victims who were going to kill him. Sean freaked out of course and tried to run and knocked himself out. LMAO! :lol: They later took him home and untied him and put him in his bed.
I later had Sean regret what he did and try to commit Suicide and Darryl took him to the Mental Hospital. Sean later found out that Darryl ratted him out and made creepy calls to him disguising his voice. Darryl was freaked out of course.... Later he realized that Sean was the creepy caller by a slip Sean made when Darryl checked on him. Sean admitted he was the creepy caller and sounded like he was having a nervous breakdown. Darryl wasn't mad at Sean and calmed him down. Sean later got arrested and imprisoned for his latest Victim that Darryl tried to prevent the death of. He was sentenced to 30 years behind bars. And released when he was 47 and got a trade job, got married and had two kids. This was in an Epilogue I wrote. This Epilogue was the first time I wrote an Epilogue.
My third Darryl Story, Sean was kind of normal and wasn't a Killer. Sean, Julian, and Mario still hijacked cars l, robbed Convenience Stores, burglarized homes, and mugged People. Darryl went to North Miami High School and was sent to Marshall Johnson Academy Boarding School in Jacksonville, Florida, an All Boys School when his Mom interrogated him on where he was getting all this extra money from and he confessed.
Before he got sent to MJA, he had to do a bunch of Special tests and pass and work hard to get a Scholarship, and he did. He got Straight A's in everything except Math where he got D's and had to do Remedial Math. He got his Math grade up to a B. But even in MJA, he still had to do Remedial Math.
Darryl was greeted at MJA by Max Cartwright, his blonde and blue eyed Dorm Parent. Max gave Darryl a Tour and was really chipper and Darryl nicknamed him Skippy. I thought Skippy matched his personality. Max was surprised that Darryl was a Johnson and suggested that Darryl claim to be a descendant of Marshall Johnson. Darryl thought ,"No one would fall for me being a Descendant of Marshall Johnson because I am Black and Marshall Johnson is White." I claimed that Darryl had a light brown complexion like Chingy.
Max took him to his Dorm. In his Dorm, he saw two beds which meant he had a Roommate. His Roommate was Dave Winston, who was White with brown eyes and brown hair. He smiled at Darryl and they shook hands.
Take two. ;)
Part 1
My Darryl Johnson Character was based on my twist on the Michael Jackson Character named Darryl in the Bad music Video, 18 minute version. Michael's Darryl was a Juvenile Delinquent who lived in the New York Ghetto who was sent to an upscale Boarding School and is back home on a school vacation and his Friends want him to mug someone to prove that he is still tough. Darryl plans to mug an old guy but feels bad and warns the man to run. He does and his Friends berate him for going soft. He turns into Michael Jackson and sings the Bad Song...:lol: His Friends respect that he has changed for the better.
My Darryl Johnson Character physically was based on Michael's Darryl character. Sean, Julian, and Mario were based on MJ's Darryl three friends. I even had them look like those characters. My Darryl Character lived in North Miami Suburbs and was sent to Marshall Johnson Academy Boarding School after his Mom found out he was mugging People, carjacking, ribbing convenience stores and burglarizing homes. On my very first Darryl Johnson story, he goes home on a school Vacation and his Friends dare him to shoot someone to prove he is still tough. He pretends to shoot the Victim, but the Victim falls over. Darryl understandably freaks out. Later, he is told this was an elaborate prank by his his Mom, Friends, a Policeman and the "Victim," and all of them end up LAUGHING. My first Darryl story got a lot of consecutive criticism basically saying that most people aren't going to pretend to shoot someone for a dare and the People in on it should be HORRIFIED that it looked like Darryl would have shot someone for a dare. They also pointed out that Darryl should be PISSED, not LAUGHING.
My second Darryl Story took the consecutive criticism to heart and made a better Version where Sean snapped and was shooting random People because he was upset that Darryl left him, Julian, and Mario to go to MJA. He coerced Julian and Mario into keeping their mouths shut by threatening to turn them into the Authorities for Criminal deeds they did themselves. Sean killed his latest Victim and Darryl who tried to stop the shooting was hit by Sean and fell as Darryl watched in Horror as Sean's latest Victim was shot right in front of him. Sean had an attitude of,"It's just a game. If they die, it's just a casual casualty. I wanted to show that Sean was cracked Sociopath.
This version of Darryl was more well received. A boy shooting People because he really snapped was more well received than the "Dared to," thing. Sean left Darryl to be the fall guy(Darryl called Police and Ambulance and was the only one of the four who was around the dead body) and Darryl was arrested and jailed until he admitted Sean was the Killer and was let go.
Sean thinking that Darryl was still in jail went to his house and tried to steal Darryl's money. Once again, Sean is no good. Darryl confronted him and I had Darryl ask for his money back($300!) And Sean gave it back to him and Darryl gave him $40. I wanted to show that Darryl still cared about him. He then kicked Sean out.
Later he finds out that Sean is blackmailing Julian and Mario into keeping secrets his shooting game. I had Darryl, Mario, and Julian dress up in disguise , knock out Sean and put him in a human sized bag and put breathing holes and "Kidnap," him l, tie him up, and pretend to be the ghosts of his dead Victims who were going to kill him. Sean freaked out of course and tried to run and knocked himself out. LMAO! :lol: They later took him home and untied him and put him in his bed.
I later had Sean regret what he did and try to commit Suicide and Darryl took him to the Mental Hospital. Sean later found out that Darryl ratted him out and made creepy calls to him disguising his voice. Darryl was freaked out of course.... Later he realized that Sean was the creepy caller by a slip Sean made when Darryl checked on him. Sean admitted he was the creepy caller and sounded like he was having a nervous breakdown. Darryl wasn't mad at Sean and calmed him down. Sean later got arrested and imprisoned for his latest Victim that Darryl tried to prevent the death of. He was sentenced to 30 years behind bars. And released when he was 47 and got a trade job, got married and had two kids. This was in an Epilogue I wrote. This Epilogue was the first time I wrote an Epilogue.
My third Darryl Story, Sean was kind of normal and wasn't a Killer. Sean, Julian, and Mario still hijacked cars l, robbed Convenience Stores, burglarized homes, and mugged People. Darryl went to North Miami High School and was sent to Marshall Johnson Academy Boarding School in Jacksonville, Florida, an All Boys School when his Mom interrogated him on where he was getting all this extra money from and he confessed.
Before he got sent to MJA, he had to do a bunch of Special tests and pass and work hard to get a Scholarship, and he did. He got Straight A's in everything except Math where he got D's and had to do Remedial Math. He got his Math grade up to a B. But even in MJA, he still had to do Remedial Math.
Darryl was greeted at MJA by Max Cartwright, his blonde and blue eyed Dorm Parent. Max gave Darryl a Tour and was really chipper and Darryl nicknamed him Skippy. I thought Skippy matched his personality. Max was surprised that Darryl was a Johnson and suggested that Darryl claim to be a descendant of Marshall Johnson. Darryl thought ,"No one would fall for me being a Descendant of Marshall Johnson because I am Black and Marshall Johnson is White." I claimed that Darryl had a light brown complexion like Chingy.
Max took him to his Dorm. In his Dorm, he saw two beds which meant he had a Roommate. His Roommate was Dave Winston, who was White with brown eyes and brown hair. He smiled at Darryl and they shook hands.