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Kate was fixing herself a cup of coffee when a girl about 17 or 18 walked into the division. "Can I help you?"

"Uh,maybe, Are you Jinny Exstead?" The girl replied. She was a tall girl ,with shoulder length black hair,and green eyes.She looked quite a bit Like Jinny,only about 5 months pregnant.

"No,I'm not...."

"Is this where she works?" The girl was obviously very nervous.

"Yes it is,she's not working today though,can I take a message?"

"Uh....can I ask who you are?"

"I'm her captain"
"Uh....Just tell her: Kaitlyn Harris came by to see her........Tell my birth name was Elizabeth Marie.....Exstead." She ran her fingers through her hair ,just like Jinny does.

Kate looked at her in almost shock,She looked so much like Jinny it was scarey. "Will do."

"Uh....will she be in tomarrow?"

"Yes she will."

"Tell her I'll come back tomarrow,too" with that Kaitlyn walked out,not giving Kate a chance to reply.
"That was weird" Kate thought,as she headed for her office.
Then she stopped dead in her tracks." Was that........no,it couldn't be.........but what if.."



"Morning,Jin" Magda greeted,when She saw her bestfriend walking into the division.
"Morning"
"Oh,Jinny can I talk to you in my office a minute?" Kate asked,walking toward her office,a fresh cup of coffee in her hand.
"Now what did I do?" Jinny asked,following her.
"You,didn't do anything ,Jin" Kate sat down at her desk."shut the door"
"Then what do you want?"She shut the door.
"Yesturday,there was a girl about 17,She said her name was Kaitlyn Harris,came too see you."
"And..." Jinny sat down in a chair a cross from Kate's desk.
"She said she'd come back today..."
"So..."
"She also told me to tell you,her birth name was Elizabeth Marie...Exstead." Kate sighed. "She was almost identical to you,Jin"
"What?!" Jinny couldn't believe what she was hearing."I...is this some sort of twisted joke?"
"No,Jinny,it's not."
"So,you're telling me,that the daughter I gave up for adoption,some 17 years ago,just came waltsing in here yesturday!?"
"Yeah,I am,at least I'm pretty sure it was her."
"OMG!" Jinny had kind of a half smile on her face. " And...And she's coming back today?"
"That's what she said"
"Kewl" was all Jinny could muster,She was shell shocked "Well,I'm gonna get back to work now,did she say when she was coming?"
"No" Jinny starts to walk out. "Jin?"
"Yeah?"
"She's about 5 months pregnant"
Jinny just nodded,and walked out.


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"Hey,Jin,what did Captain want?" Magda asked,as Jinny sat back down at her desk.
"Oh,nothing.Nothing important." Jinny answered. She would explain to magda later,right now she had bigger problems."Oh my god! How am i gonna tell him!?" Jinny asked herself.
"What Jin?" Magda thought she was talking to her.
"Oh nothing,nothing." Jinny replied,and went back to trying to find the best way to tell Jeremy that he has a daughter,that is 17.
"Oh my god,how am I gonna tell her she's the 1 that scares
me!? How she gonna react when I tell her she's a grandmother!?"
"Did you say something,Jinny?"Nate asked.
"I was talking to myself"
"Oh"
"Oh,why does my life have to be so complicated?!" Jinny thought to herself.
"Jinny,are you okay? You're acting kinda funny." Magda looked at her with concern.
"I'm fine,I'm fine..."
Then She walked in,Jinny knew it was her. "God,she does look just like me!" Jinny thought,fighting back tears. 'Stay calm,don't put the cart ahead of the horse,It might not even be her."
"Hi,you Jinny Exstead?" Kaitlyn asked.She herself was suprised at the resemblence.
"Yeah,You the girl that came by yesturday?" She just wanted to grab her and hug her till she turned purple.
"Your boss gave you the message."
"Yeah"
"Um...is there some place we can talk,...in private?"Kaitlyn rubbed over the slight tummy she was getting.
"Um...yeah,sure" Jinny looked around ,trying to think of a more private place.
"Here,use my office" Kate voluntered.She had just walked out of her office when Kaitlyn had walked in. She was even more shocked now,to see them side-by-side,it was just plain freaky.
"Thanx,Cap" Jinny said,she and Kaitlyn walked in and shut the door.
"Did you see how much that girl looked like Jinny?!" CD exclaimed
"I know!" Raina and Nate agreed in unison.
"Who is that?" Magda turned to Kate.
"She never told her!?" Kate thought to herself.
"Ummm...I dunno"
"She said she talked to you yesturday."
" Uh...well...all she said wasthat,her name is Kaitlyn Harris,and told me to tell jinny she'd come back today."
"Hmm"

"So,..uh.." Jinny didn't know what to say.
"Uh..." Kaitlyn ran her fingers through her hair. "So....what exactly did uh....your boss,tell you?"
"Uh... She said,that you came by,and said your name was Kaitlyn Harris,and your birthname was Cherilyn Marie...Exstead,and that you'd come back today." She sighed,glad the ice had been broken.
"So,I guess you know that I'm your.........at least I hope I am,I've been so peranoid ,What if Ihavethe wrong Jinny Exstead" Kaitlyn laughed nervously.
"You've got the right Jinny Exstead." Jinny smiled bigger then thought humanly possible. Tears began to stream down her face,she didn't bother trying to stop them.
"Oh god,I have so many questions for you!"Kaitlyn said,and hugged Jinny.
"I can bet,I have 10 times more questions for you!" She hugged her as tight as she could. "Here sit down."She motioned to a chair infront of Kate's desk,when she finaly let go of her daughter.
"So,...Kaitlyn,have you had a good life?Are ou happy? Are you healthy? What's your life been like? Do you hate me?" Jinny asked every question she'd ever had,in one breath.
"Yeah,I'm happy,I've had a very good life,h*ll,no I don't hate you.And call me Katie.
"Katie,you left out healthy,are you healthy?"
"....Yeah,I....uh...I'm... pregnant."She hesitated.
"Uh,yeah...my captain said she thought you might be."
Jinny nodded,it hadn't quite hit her yet,that she was gonna be a grandmother at 33. Kaitlyn nodded." So,uh....how far along are you?"
"I'm 19 weeks,uh....almost 5 months.
"Can I..uh.." Jinny reached her hand toward Kaitlyn's stomach.
"Of course." She took jinny's hand and put it on her beginnings of a belly.
"What say you, me go get some lunch,and talk?"Jinny suggested.
"I'd say Captain probably wants her office back."
"I'd love that" Smiled,They both got up and walked out.

"Hey,uh..Captain,if it's alright with you,I'm gonna go have lunch with....my daughter."Jinny put an arm around Kaitlyn.
"Of course it is,Jin" Kate patted Jinny's shoulder "take as much time as you need."

"Thanx" Jinny replied as she and Kaitlyn walked out of the division.
"Daughter!?" Magda exclaimed. She was shocked and confused.
"Come on,Mag,I'll explain eveything."Kate said,motioning for Magda to follow her into her office.


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YAY I LOVE IT..ITS GREAT!!! BUT IS HER NAME CHERYLIN OR ELIZABETH? :D

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"So....Are you ready for the big question?" Kaitlyn sighed.
"...Hit me with your best shot..." Jinny was almost certain she knew what the question was.
"....Why...did you give me up?"
"Well....I was only 16..and i needed to finish school..and I had dreams ,and i wasn't sure i could make them a reality,and take care of a kid.."Jinny looked at Kaitlyn,and wasn't quite sure how to read her expression"..not the way that a kid shud be taken care of..."
Kaitlyn had been waiting for that answer for a while,and now that she had gotten it she didn't know what to say or do..so she just nodded.
"I just wasn't ready to be a mother...and you deserved more then I could give you."Jinny was relieved,to finally get to tell her that.And let her know that the reason she gave her up wasn't at all because she didn't want her
Silence fell over the table,as they both got lost in their thoughts.

Kate walked into her office,and turned around to see Raina,CD & Nate pilling in right behind Magda.
"Is there somethin I can do for you guys?" She asked with a smirk.
"Yeah,start splainin' Lucy"Raina said.
"Yeah,what she said." CD agreed.
"Heh,I'm curious too,but i was mainly just following the crowd."Nate shrugged.
"Sorry guys..."Kate laughed" You'll just have to wait."
"Aww,Come on Cap,pleeeeease." Raina whined."How come you'll tell her,and ya won't tell us?"
"Because she's Jinny's best friend,and I don't think Jinny'll mind me telling her...now stop whining and get back to work."
"Fiiiine..." Raina sighed,and lead the train back out.
Kate shook her head,and began the story Magda had been waiting to hear.

Jinny sat there just starring at her daughter. Examining her features..her mannerisms...and comparing them to her own.
"What?" Kaitlyn asked, when she realized she was being watched.
"Oh,uh..nothin.."Jinny snapped out of her trance, "Sorry...It's just..amazing how much you look like me."She chuckled.
"Oh..." Kaitlyn smiled" Yeah..it's like looking in a mirror.

"...And Jinny gave her up for adoption."Kate sighed. She'd left out a couple of details she wanted to discuss with Jinny.
"I can't believe she never told me..."Magda shook her head.
"She was never fond of talking about it...it was very painful for her."
"I'd say so..."

"Well...I'm about to hit ya with another big question..." Kaitlyn washed down her pickle, with a big gulp of her chocolate and peanut butter milkshake. Watching her, Jinny remebered how she used to crave that all the time.
"Okay, but let me put my goggles on first." Jinny smirked.
Kaitlyn laughed,and began searching for the right words,"...Can you tell me about my father?"
"Uh,well...His name is Jeremy Schular...We dated in highschool...He was a year older then me...I never told him about you..."
"Why?"
"Well..I was going to,but I never got the chance before he went to see his dad...and,I had a few months to think about things,and i just thought it would be easier all around...not to tell him..."
Kaitlyn's cell phone began to ring,before she could think of what to say to Jinny. "That's my mom..."She said looking at the caller id.
"Hi,Mom.."She said into her phone," I uh...I just ran into a friend...I'll be home soon...ok,sorry...ok,I will...ok....I'll see ya later." She shut off her phone,and turned her attention back to Jinny. "She,uh..she knows I've been looking for you,she helped me.She just doesn't know I found you..I'm gonna tell her when I get home."She smiled. "I uh...I guess i should get going...."
"Okay...it was really...really,really,really,really nice to meet you."Jinny smiled.
"Yeah,you too."She laughed,"Can, I have you phone number?"
"Sure." Jinny grabbed a napkin and wrote,her cell,work and home number on it.While Kaitlyn did the same thing.
"Thanks a lot..."Kaitlyn said,folding the napkin,and putting it in the front pocket of her purse."..Bye..Jinny"
"Bye." Jinny sat there,and watched her daughter leave,before she got up,and walked back across the street to the division.

"So, how did things go?" Kate asked when she saw Jinny walk through the division doors,with a grin on her face.
Jinny didn't say anything,she motioned for her captain to follow her,and let herself into her office,shutting the door behind them.

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"Cap, today was the greatest day of my life." Jinny said,sitting on the corner of Kate's desk. kate smiled and and sat down in the chair across from Jinny." She is just like me,She looks like me,she acts like me,she talks like me...gawd it was like lookin in a mirror!"
Kate just laughed,and let Jinny continue.She hadn't seen her this happy in a very very long time.
"We didn't talk much..i guess we both were kinda in shock..."Jinny chuckled "But,we exchanged phone numbers and she's gonna call me"
"Thats great,Jin."
"And she had two pickles,and a chocolate,and peanut butter milkshake with her lunch...thats exactly what i used to crave all the time."
Kate thought for a minute, "Yeah,I remember that." She said with a smile.

"Okay,Magda...lets have it..." Raina said,sliding in her chair over to Magda's desk.
"Have what?"
"You know what...now spill the beans"
"I'll give ya the short version,and thats it." Magda said.
"Fiiiine...."Raina rolled her eyes.
"Jinny,got pregnant when she was sixteen,decided she wasn't ready to be a mother,and gave the baby up for adoption."
"D@mn,you weren't kidding,when you said short were ya?...We pretty much figured all that out ourselves,Mag."
"Well,thats all your getting."
"Well,how come she never told you?"
"Because,Cap said she didn't like to talk about it,that it was really painful for her."
"Hw did Cap know about it?"
"She knew Jinny back then..now,will you please leave - -"
"She did?How?"
"Jinny's dad used to work here, so they worked together...,okay,now leave me alone!"
"Okay,okay,sheesh...since when do you not wanna gossip?" Raina said rolling back to her own desk.
"I do NOT gossip."
"Yeah,sure..and I CAN keep a secret."

"Well,I guess I had better get back to work...Thanks for listening to me babble..." Jinny said. She was still smiling,as she made her way to the door.
"My pleasure."Kate smiled. "Oh,uh...I explained things to Magda by the way..I hope that was okay..."
"Uh...,yeah I guess so..." Jinny nodded,and left her captain's office.

Magda and Jinny exchanged smiles,as Jinny sat down at her desk.
"I take it things went well....." Magda assumed.
"You take it right,my friend. "Jinny smiled.
"I'm glad,Jin." Magda smiled back.
"Me too,Mag,Me to."
"So,uh...Jinny..." Raina rolled her Chair over to Jinny's desk this time.
"So,uh...Raina..."
"Magda gave me the 1-2, on the subject,how's about you givin' me the 3 and 4? hmmm?"
"Raina have you no tact?"Cd laughed,at Raina's determination,to find out everything on the subject.
"When it comes to stuff this big...No."She admitted.
Jinny laughed," I'll think about it." She said,seizing the oppertunity to torture Her.
"I guess thats better then a 'no'..."Raina sighed,rolled her eyes,and rolled back over to her desk.


"Mom?!" Kaitlyn called out,as she entered her house.
'"I'm in the kitchen!" She yelled back.
"Well,can you come in the living room,I need to talk to you!?"
"Ok,What's up?" Her mother asked,as she entered the room.
"Sit down." Kaitlyn patted a space on the couch next to her.
"Is everything okay?" Her mother asked,doing as she was told.
"Yeah,everything is great..."
"Then,what's up?"
"I,uh...I met my birth mother today."
"You did?" Her mother asked in suprise.
"Yeah,see I finally found out her name,and i figured out where she worked,and i went there,yesturday,but she wasn't there. And her Captain,took a message,and i went back today..and that where I was,I was having lunch with her." Kaitlyn smiled from ear to ear.
"Her captain?"
"Yeah, She's a police inspector. And her name is Jinny Exstead..and gawd,Mom it was like lookin in a mirror. I look just like her."
Sara smiled at her daughter's excitement," Is She nice?"
"Yeah,she is...and she's really funny..and she was really happy to meet me,too...wich was a big relief." She laughed.
"So, i assume you're gonna get to know her,then..."
"Yeah, she gave me her home,her cell,and her work number."


Kate had intended to call Jinny that night after work...but,instead she procrastinated. Not knowing how exactly to say it to Jinny, she put it off,using the excuse,that it was better to talk to her about it in person.


When Jinny got home tha night,she was feeling nostalgic,so she changed into something more comfortable,and dug out all her family photos. She came acroos one that she had put way in the bottom of the suprisingly large box. It was one of her when she was about 7 or 8 months pregnant,and showing very well. The resemblance between herself,and Kaitlyn became even more amazing as she starred at that picture,and started to think back to that day.......

"D@mn it Casey! No you can NOT take pictures of of the birth,as you school science project! Now get that d@mn camera outta my face,and go bug John!"
"Okay,sheesh...ugh! pregnant women!" Casey threw his hands in the air,as he jogged up the stairs.
"Want a beer?" John asked his fellow officer,who was kind enough to give him a ride home.,completely ignoring his daughter,and the fighting gong on around him.
"Uh,yeah..sure.." She said sitting down "So,how are you?"
"Miserable. my little brother,wants 2 take pictures of my naked tush,while a baby is coming out of it.So he can show it to his stupid
class. my older brother,has changed my name to Shamoo,and somebody is doing the tango on my bladder."Jinny said looking down at her rather large belly."
"You're the one that went and got yourself into this mess." John Sr. finale aknowledged his daughter,stretched out on the couch.
"Sit up,ang give me some room." He handed a beer to the redhead sitting in the recliner.
"ugh, thats easier said then done." Jinny said,as she tried to sit up, "A little help here,I'm doing this for you after all!"She snapped when he didn't offer her help.
"Don't you use that tone of voice with me!" He snapped back,reaching out his hand for her. "You may not be in best of comfort right now, but it's not my fault,you went out got yourself knocked up! You're the one that was dumb enough not to use a d@mn condom!"
With that,Jinny hoisted herself up off the couch,and made her way up stairs,holding back tears,she refused to cry in front of him.
"What?!" He asked,when he saw the stern judging look,on Officer McCafferty's face.
"You son of a bitch! How could you say something like that to her!?! She is your daughter,for crying out loud! She need syou right now!" Normally she wouldn't have butted in,but this was one time she had to cross the line.
"You just mind your own business,this is between me and my daughter!"
"No,not this time! Okay,yes she made a mistake! But she's already learning from it! She doesn't need you to punish her for it,She's probably already doing that herself! She is about to give birth to a child,and she is still one herself! She is most likely terrified! She needs her father's support!"
"If you care so much,you suport her!"
"I already am!, but it can't compare to the support she should be getting from you! Gawd,how the hell did you get so stupid and ignorant?!" She slammed her beer down on the table,as she stood up.
"Kate, I think it's time for you to leave." John said coldly.
"Yeah,I think you're right about that." She said,and walked over to the stairs.
"When Jinny saw,her coming she rushed to her bedroom,so that she wouldn't knwo she was listening.
"Jinny,can I come in?" Kate said,knocking on Jinny's open door.
"The door's open."
"Hey, I'm gonna go pick up my daughter from daycare,Come with me,and we'll go get some ice cream or somethin'."
"Nah,that's okay.."Jinny ran her hand threw her hair.
"I'm not taking 'nah' for an answer.Come on,don't cha wanna get away from these idiots for a while?"
"Okay,I'll get my purse."
"Ya don't need it,it's my treat." Kate smiled.

When Jinny was pulled outof her thoughts, she had tears streaming down her cheeks. She wiped them away,and answerred her ringing phone. "Exstead...Oh,Hi,Katie...no,this is a great time..." She smiled.

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"A...are you sure?..." Kaitlyn asked.
"Yeah, I'm sure...I was just looking through some old family photos...thats all." Jinny wiped more tears away.
"Oh..."Kaitlyn was very interested in seeing those pictures,but she didn't know how to ask Jinny...or if she even should.
"So..how are you?" Jinny asked.
"I'm good...I'd be better if a certain somebody would stop kickboxing my kidneys..."
"You used to do that to me."
"I did?" Kaitlyn smiled.
"Yep..it seemed like you never stopped moving.."Jinny laughed.Back then it often annoyed her,but now...She remember it as the greatest feeling in the world..at least to her anyways," once I bent over and you got your head up behind my ribs...and absolutely refused to move..I was stuck like that for ten or fifteen minutes,before finally decided to move."
"Aww...I'm sorry...I didn't mean to..."She laughed.
"apology excepted."Jinny smiled.
"Listen,I was thinkin'...if it's okay, that i might come by your work,after school tomorow..."
"Oh..yeah, thats fine."
"You're sure you won't be busy?"
"I'll make a point of not being."
"Okay...kewl..."Kaitlyn smiled. Silence settled over the phone line for a moment.
"Hey...uh..if you want i can bring some pictures to work tomorrow...if you want to see them..."Jinny offered.
"That would be great,I'd love that...I can bring some pictures to..if you - -"
"I'd love that."


Kate was stretched on her couch,trying to read her book,but she just couldn't get into it. She was too distracted.
"You should have called her."She told herself looking over at the phone."Nah..you should talk to her in person...Maybe you should just wait till she tells you,then tell her...You shoulda told her 5 years ago,when Casey told you...You should definately stop talking to yourself." She rolled her eyes at herself.Looking around the room,lit by on lamp, Her eyes landed on the upright piano standing in the corner of her living room,which she hadn't plunked anything out on,in a while. "What the hell." She tossed her book onto the coffee table,and went over to the paino. She sat down on the bench,and just starred at the keys. She remembered teaching Casey to play 'Rock A By,Baby' because he wanted to play it for Jinny.....

"D@mn it!" Casey snapped in frustration.
"Watch your mouth.."
"Sorry."
"Now just try again..,you're doing good."Kate stood watching Casey play over his shoulder.
"What the hell is that racket?!" John Jr. yelled down the stairs.
"It's not racket! It's the piano!"Kate yelled back.
"Well, who's playin it?A drunk cat?!"
"John close your mouth!" Casey yelled.

John was right. He did sound like a drunk cat,She thought,with a laugh.And began playing the song she'd taught Casey...

"Ooohhh, It's Casey,okay that explains the racket."John said walking halfway down the stairs.
"Nobody asked for your opinion,John!"
"That makes it more fun to give!"
"John, go away!" She gave him a look that could kill.
"And if I don't,are ya gonna spank me?"He asked, enthusiastically.He knew she wouldn't,he mainly said it just to piss her off even more.
"You disgusting,perverted,little son of a bi- -"
"Watch you mouth, Officer Red!" He cackled,running back up stairs.
Kate started to go after him,but Casey grabbed her arm,"Don't waist your time,He wants you to go after him."

...Casey never did play the song for Jinny,He decided he couldn't play it good enough.So Kate ended up playing it instead. But he did put on his list of things to do before he dies: # 14 Learn to play that stupid song for Jinny.


"well,I gotta go, I was supposed to have gone to bed like an hour ago.."Kaitlyn yawned.
"Okay...wow is it really that late?" Jinny asked looking at her clock wich read 1:05 am.
"Yep." Kaitlyn laughed.
"Well,I'll se ya tomorrow."
"Okay, Goodnight, Jinny."
"Goodnight." Jinny yawned,as she hang up the phone.


It was now almost 3:15,and there wasn't really any chit chat,everyone was concentrating on their cases. Except Jinny,who was so deep in thought,it was almost a trance. "Oh, Mary mother of g- -...Nate!" Jinny broke the silence in the room.
"My Mom's name is Marilyn." Nate said.
"Somethin wrong,Jin?" Cd,rolled her eyes at Nate.
"I'm gonna be a freakin' grandmother!"
"And,you just now realized this?"Magda held back her laughter.
"Yes!...I'm to young to be a grandmother!"
"Apperently not." Magda,and everyone else chuckled.
"Will stop laughing! This is serious! This could mean the end of the dating game for me!Who wants to date a grandmother?!"
"Oh,stop whining! I'm the one thats gonna be a great grandmother!..Oh Dear lord,I'm gonna be a great grandmother!" It wasn't till Kate said it that it really hit her,and soon after she realized she was a great grandmother,she realized she had let the cat outta the bag. She and Jinny starred at eachother for a moment.
"You,me,your office,now." Jinny said,getting up and going into Kate's office.
"Heh,yeah I was thinkin the same thing." Kate said,following Jinny.
"What the hell was that about? Magda asked.

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"As Raina and Ricky Ricardo would say :Start splainin Lucy!...What did you mean out there?"
"Uh...well...."Kate sighed,"I meant what I said..."
"In order for you to know that you're a great grandmother, you have to know that you're a gr- -"
"Grandmother." Kate nodded.
"You know?"
"Yeah..."
"How do you know!?!?!"Jinny yelled
"Casey told me."
"What? When??"
"Five years ago..."
"You've known for five years?! Why the hell didn't you tell me?!?"
"I..I don't know..I guess I was waitng for you to tell me or somethin."Kate shrugged ".Casey told me everything he knows,so my questions were answered,i guess I didn't wanna bring it back up for you.."
"Gawd,I can't believe you've known for five freaking years"Jinny mumbled more to herself then Kate.
" I can't believe i've only known for five freakin years."
"I..I'm sorry..I should have, I was gonna...I was afraid to..."
"I know...Casey told me...."
"Does Jeremy know?"
"No,I don't think so..."

Just a few minutes after Jinny and Kate went into Kate's office,Kaitlyn walked in. Her back pack was hanging on her right shoulder,and a photo album wedged under her left arm.
Jinny was nowhere in sight,so She sat her things on Jinny's desk,and turned to Magda,but before she could get a word out of her mouth Raina practically skipped over to her,"Hi,You must be Kaitlyn,I'm Raina.." She held out her hand.
"Uh..Hi,Raina.." Kaitlyn,looking completely confused,shook Raina's hand.
"Raina, go put these away,for me please.."Magda handed her a stack of files,that she had intended to put away herself.but she figured if She didn't get Raina busy quick,she'd probably hit Kaitlyn with about a thousand questions that really weren't any of her business.
"Okay.."Raina rolled her eyes" I'll be right back,don't you go anywhere."She said to Kaitlyn as she walked off.
"Wow, she's uh...friendly.."Kaitlyn chuckled.
"Yeah,and nosey too." Magda rolled her eyes.
"Is Inspector Exstead here?"
"yeah, but.."Magda looked into her Captain's office,to see Jinny pacing and obviously yelling about something, "She's in a meeting with the captain right now."
"Oh..is it okay if i wait?"
"Oh,yeah sure,have a seat..She'll probably be out soon."
"Thanks" Kaitlyn made herself comfortable in Jinny's chair.
"I'm Magda, Jinny's partner, by the way.."Magda held out her hand.
"Hi, my name's Katie.."She said shaking Magda's hand,
"Yeah, Jinny's talked about you all day."She smiled. "It's nice to meet you."
"You too"
"Okay,sorry about that." Raina said giving Magda a dirty look,and sitting on the corner of Jinny's desk. "So how are you?"
"I'm good,and yourself?" Kaitlyn replied.
"Oh i'm great." Raina smiled. "So,uh..."

"So...do I get t be formally introduced to my grand daughter" Kate asked breaking the silence that had settled over the room
"Yeah...sure..."Jinny grinned,"but,uh..let me talk to her first..okay?"
"That's fine.." Kate looked out the window of her office," Here's..your chance..."
Jinny turned around,and looked where Kate was pointing. with a smile she walked out,without saying anything,Kate close behind her.

"Hey,Raina, I have some files on my desk ,that need to be put away, would you please?" Kate smiled ever so sweetly.
"Yeah, sure..."Raina rolled her eyes and went about her asigned errand.
'Please excuse Raina..she's...well she's unexplain able." Jinny sat down on the corner of her desk.
"I heard that."Raina raised her eyebrow,as she made her way to the observation room,where the filing cabinet was located.
"Oh,You know we love ya!" Magda joked.
"Otherwise,she'd be dead by now." Jinny mumbled. Then she turned her focus to her daughter," Hi,how are you?"
"I'm good...I uh,brought the pictures."She smiled.
"Great, i brought mine too." then Kate elbowed Jinny. "But,uh..first,there's something I wanna talk to you about.."She held out her hand,to help Kaitlyn up.
"Mind,if we borrow your office,Cap?"
"Nope,go right ahead."She smiled.
"What is she talking to her about?" Magda asked,once they were inside Kate's office,with the door shut.
"I dunno."
"Yes,you do." Magda smirked,but didn't push the interrogation any further.

sooo, wutcha think,do ya like??

Okay frist off it's really not nice to leave me haging right there! you must post more....casue that was awsome...I wanna know what Jinny is gonna say to her daughter...Hurry hurry wright more...It worked the last time I said you about five mins later you posted more...LOL sooooo go get sha some more iced coffee, and get you lil hands uh typin:typing:


On another note this reminds me of you casue you are always saying that you are hitting your head on something... :wallbang

And one last note this is what I am gonna do to ya if you don't post more... :mooner: LOL j/k Just thought that was a funny smilie so I thought that I would share.

Originally posted by Bonnie Is Great!
Okay frist off it's really not nice to leave me haging right there! you must post more....casue that was awsome...I wanna know what Jinny is gonna say to her daughter...Hurry hurry wright more...It worked the last time I said you about five mins later you posted more...LOL sooooo go get sha some more iced coffee, and get you lil hands uh typin:typing:


On another note this reminds me of you casue you are always saying that you are hitting your head on something... :wallbang

And one last note this is what I am gonna do to ya if you don't post more... :mooner: LOL j/k Just thought that was a funny smilie so I thought that I would share.

K,it took me a lil longer then 5 ,minutes this time lol but i wasn't on Iced Coffee,wich is why it sucks,

It's not much, but heeeeere's more.................


"What's up?" Kaitlyn asked sitting in one of the chairs across from Kate's desk.
"Well...I was talking with your father's mother,and...How would you like to meet your grandmother?"Jinny flashed a hopeful smile.
"Is that a rhetorical question?"Kaitlyn asked. "Yeah, i do."
"Well, good.."Jinny smiled." She's here now,actually.."
"She is?" Kaitlyn bit her lip.
"Yeah, is something wrong?"
"No..just kinda nervous..."
"Don't be, She really wants to meet you..and you'll like her.."Jinny smiled.
"What if she doesn't like me?"
"She will, I'll go get her.."
"Okay.."

Kate was sitting at Jinny's desk, trying not to look into her office too much,but she couldn't help it.
Magda sat at her desk pretending to work.But was really watching what was going on in Kate's office,and watching Kate watching what was going in her office,with growing curiosity. Magda's curiosity peaked as she watched Kate looked up eagerly,when she heard her office door open.
"Hey, Cap..."Jinny motioned for her to come in.
Kate got up,and followed Jinny back into her office,with a smile on her face.

Jinny shut the door behind them,and then turned to face her daughter,and captain.
"Katie,this is your grandmother,Kaitlyn McCafferty..."She smiled. "Cap,this is your grandaughter,Kaitlyn Harris."
"Hehe,wow what a small world."Kaitlyn laughed,holding out her hand.
"Oh,yeah.."Kate shook her hand.
"It's very nice to meet you...Captain..."
"Call me Kate..and it's very nice to meet you too."
"Do I get to call ya Kate?" Jinny asked.
"No."
"Why?"
"Because, I said so."
"But,she does..."
"She's my grand daughter."
Kaitlyn flashed great big smile,very similar to Jinny's,when Jinny stuck her tongue out her.


"What do you think is going on?"Raina asked, CD & Magda who were sitting on her desk,descretely watching the goings on in Kate's office.
"I have no idea." Magda replied.
"I wanna know what Cap ment when she said : I'm the one thats going to be a great grandmother." CD added.
"Yeah..." And then Raina's eyes widened,when an idea struck her,"...Nah..."
"What?" They asked her.
"Nothin,nevermind...it's nothin,,just a crazy idea I had.."
"No tell us."
'Well,i mean...think about it...Jinny was whinning about bein' a grandmother,and then Cap said she was gonn abe a great grandmother...and Jinny ordered her into her office,and Jinny yelled about somethin'...and then Kaitlyn came,and they went and talked for a little bit,and then Jinny asked Cap to come in..."
"So what are you saying...?" CD asked.
"...And Cap seemed pretty eager to get in there..."Magda added to the list of odd behavior.
"..Yeah,and i'm saying...Maybe Cap is Kaitlyn's baby's great grand mother,and uh..Kaitlyn's..."
"Raina,Dear...you have just topped yourself...that is the craziest idea to come out of your head yet."CD looked at Raina like she were crazy.
"CD,I can't believe you.I never figured you for a gossip."Nate said smirking. "Get over here,and help me with our case...and Raina,Magda..you mind your own business to."
"Yes,Daddy." Magda said,going back to her desk.
"No,Daddy." Raina replied,and continued her snooping,until she saw that they were coming out.
"Hey,we're gonna go get some lunch...you want us to bring you back anything?" Jinny offered,grabbing her jacket,and putting it on.
"No thanks..."Everyone replied almost in unison.
"OKay,see ya later." Jinny replied. Kaitlyn grabbed her things off Jinny's desk,and the three of them left.
CD,Raina,and Magda all exchanged looks,"Nah..." They all shook their heads,and went back to work.

Okay,yeah I know that sucked. I'll try 2 post more soon..if ya want me 2 ...

:wallbang <---- Gawd,that musta been made 4 me!!lmao!

How can you say that was sucky?!?! no way it was VEry Bery good. Yes, how very bery good! I don't know what I just said I hope that you got it. LOL anyway you must post more before I start crying, and have a fit. It would look something like this. :crybaby: and that would be very bery bad...so post more so that I can be very bery happy!!! LOL now if ya can understand that...I think ya can understand anything. Hehehehehe more please!!!

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanx 4 the new page lol

Heeeeeeeere's more! :-)...............................

"Hi,James.."Jinny greeted as she ,Kate,and Katie..walked up to the bar.
"What's up,Inspector,..Captain.."He nodded."You ladies,want your usual?"
"I do."Jinny replied.
"And you ,Captain?"
"Nah,..gimme a ceasar salad."She smiled.
"Ceasar,instead of a House salad...bold change of pace."
"Careful,Buddy,she might arrest ya."Jinny laughed.
"Ah,she can arrest me anytime."He winked.
He was always saying stuff like that.
Kate rolled her eyes,and looked away,trying not to smile.She prayed that her face wasn't beat-red.


"You guys wanna go to anchorside,and get some lunch?.."
"Raina,we stopped at McDonald's on the way back from the crime scene,like 2 hours ago..did you foget?Because you were with us.."CD replied.
"Yeah,I know..and you guys know..but Cap and Jinny...they don't know..."
"Raina Washington,you should have been a russian spy,not a cop."Nate shook his head.
"Aww,thank you.." Raina smiled."Cd,your partner is so sweet,can I have him when i make inspector?"
"You go over there,and spy on them,and they find out...you won't live to take the test."
"Nathan,I am not spying...I am investigating..."
"Yeah,suuure,oookay."
"Aren't you the least bit curious?"
"Yeah,I guess so,but I am not going to follow then around San Fransisco,and SPY on them.."
"I'll say it one last time,I'm not spying,I am investigating...and I'm not following them around San Fransisco..I'm following them across the street...and I'm taking your partner with me."She said,grabbing CD's hand,and dragging her out the door.
Magda hesitated for a minute, "oh hell,wait for me!" She got up and ran to catch up with them.
Nate shook his head and went back to work on the case,that he was now working solo on.


Jinny sat there not paying much attention to the conversation,just starring at her daughter's belly,and watching her eat a ceasar salad with Thousand Island dressing, her second pickle,and washing it all down with a peanut butter,and chocolate milkshake.
"Jin? Jinny?" Katie tried to get her attention.
"Jinny Louise." Kate waved her hand in front of her face.
"I'm gonna be a grandma..."Jinny stated looking up at Kate.
"Oh,don't start whining again." Kate rolled her eyes.
Katie chuckled, "She's still grasping this fact,I see.."
"Yeah..she didn't realize it till today,right before you came."
"Ahhh,delayed reaction,huh...What's the matter,Jin? Don't cha wanna be a grandma?"
"No,it's not that...I just..didn't think i would be only 33 when i became one...."
"Oh,now you know how I wudda felt...had I known,that is..."
"I'm sorry..."
"I know"Kate chuckled.
"At least Casey told ya..."
"Yeah..Casey is my favorite Exstead."
"Casey's always been your favorite."Jinny pouted.
"He's the only sane one."
"Well,bump you too..Granny" Jinny flashed an evil smile.
"Jinny Louise Exstead,I swear if you ever call me that again,I'll - -"
"Kaitlyn-Olivia Rose McCafferty,I Swear if you ever call me Jinny Louise again,I'll - -"
"Okay,Children,Thats enough!"Katie was cracking up as she scolded them.
"But- -"
"Kaitlyn-Olivia,I don't wanna hear another word about it!"
"Haha,She told y- -"
"You hush,too..."She pointed her finger at Jinny,"...hmm,bossin people around is fun..."She smiled.
"Oh,Cap...she is definately your grand daughter." They all stared at eachother for a moment,and cracked up.


When Raina,CD and Magda finally located them in the very busy resturaunt,they were laughing and seemed to be having a good time together.
"Holy horse poop! Jinny,and Cap are getting along!"
"Holy horse poop?" CD questioned. "Never heard that one before..."
"Would you focus on the mission infront of us,please?"Raina replied.
"And here i thought we were on an investigation..."
"If your gonna pick on me,you can just go back and help your stubborn partner with your case.." Raina raised her eyebrow.
"There,that table will do for now.."Magda pointed to one,that wasn't in hearing distance,but they could probably get a good view of the targeted table.
"You're good at this Mag." Raina said,and made a beeline for the table.

James the bartender walked up,just as they sat down,"Afternoon,Inspectors,what can I get ya?"
"Hey James, i'll just have a diet coke." Magda replied.
"Make that two."CD added.
"You,bring me a lemonade,please?" Raina smiled.
"Sure thing,be right back." He said,and walked away.
"What are they looking at?" CD questioned,watching Jinny,Kate and Katie.
"Oh...must be pictures,Jinny brought some for Katie to see."Magda informed.
"How,sweet..."


"You were so fat!" Jinny cooed over a baby picture of Katie. "No wonder it hurt so freakin bad..."
"Jinny..." Katie laughed.
"I tried to tell her to get the drugs...but noooo,she just couldn't listen to me,the one who'd been there twice,noooo,she never listens to me, there's no way in hell I could possibly be right...noooo...."Kate shook her head.
"That was 17 years ago,and she still hasn't let me live it down."Jinny laughed.
"And I never will..."


"Damn it,I wish somebody would leave,so we could get a closer table.,We ain't gonna find out crap way over here." Raina took a sip of her lemonade.
"Tell me about it."Magda agreed.
"Well,Holly- -"
"Horse poop."CD finished for Raina.
"Cow puckey." Raina corrected with a smirk.
"You've been watching too many westerns.."
"An-y-waaays..a much better table just opened up..."
"Well,then come on,lets move...'Magda said,picking up her drink.

By the time Raina,CD,and Magda got a better table for their purposes,they had missed any useful conversation.
Kate,and Katie were now exchanging phone numbers,and Kate was getting ready to leave.
"See ya later,Cap."Jinny smiled.
"Bye,Jin.."Kate patted Jinny's shoulder.

"Aw,d@mn we missed everything.."Raina pouted.

"I'll talk to ya later?" Katie asked.
"Yeah.."Kate patted her belly," Bye.." She said and walked away.

"Hiya,Cap."Magda,Raina and CD smiled innocently,as she walked towards them.
"We were just grabbing a bite to eat.."Magda added.
"We won't bother them,we promise." Raina said.
"Good.."Kate looked at them suspiciously. "I'll see ya later.."
"Bye.."They all said in unison.

James was standing near the door,and when he saw Kate heading towards it,he went to open it for her.
"Thank you..." She smiled.
"Noproblem,you have a nice day." He smiled.
"You too."

"Why doesn't he just ask her out already?" Raina thought outloud. It was obvious,it wasn't the back of Kate's head he was watching,as she walked out.


I might have another glass of iced coffee in a lil while,if i do,i might add more...lol
oh,yeah...wut do ya think of James The Bartender?lol do ya like him?

Originally posted by MovieHuntress17
"Damn it,I wish somebody would leave,so we could get a closer table.,We ain't gonna find out crap way over here." Raina took a sip of her lemonade.
"Tell me about it."Magda agreed.
"Well,Holly- -"
"Horse poop."CD finished for Raina.
"Cow puckey." Raina corrected with a smirk.
"You've been watching too many westerns.."
"An-y-waaays..a much better table just opened up..."
"Well,then come on,lets move...'Magda said,picking up her drink.



lol:lol:

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay that was sooooooooo funny you must post more!!! Do I have to pitch in, and give money for the iced coffee...hehe...anyway to answer you question I loved the bartender James...Let me guess he's the father of Kate's other kid. LOL j/k

Originally posted by Bonnie Is Great!
anyway to answer you question I loved the bartender James...Let me guess he's the father of Kate's other kid. LOL j/k

Hmmmmmmm....that gives me an idea *grabs journal*...lol,j/k

I'll try 2 post more soon:D

Ha! Like you really carrie that journal around? LOL How many times have you forgotten an idea casue you didn't have your journal with you?!?!?!?! LOL j/k...I am really board, so you must post more, and end my bordem. Goes to look at smileys so it gives me something that I can leave you as a present...Nice of me huh? :mumble: Okay so I thought that looked a lil different. LOL

Originally posted by Bonnie Is Great!
Ha! Like you really carrie that journal around? LOL How many times have you forgotten an idea casue you didn't have your journal with you?!?!?!?! LOL j/k...I am really board, so you must post more, and end my bordem. Goes to look at smileys so it gives me something that I can leave you as a present...Nice of me huh? :mumble: Okay so I thought that looked a lil different. LOL

Hey now, Lil miss Missy...I do take my journal with me most places ;)lol... And as soon as my mind recharges....it's a lil empty from that 4 day roll i was on with our fic lol...I promise I will post more...maybe even 2day or 2morrow

:D

Originally posted by MovieHuntress17
maybe even 2day or 2morrow :D




i vote today ! more more more more more more more more more more more (keeps singing till emma posts!)

Heeeeere's More.........


"Why don't who ask who out?" CD asked, totally clueless.
"James. Ask Cap out." Magda replied.
"On a date?"
"Yes..."
"James has a thing for redheads..."Raina added.
"More specifically..a thing for redheaded police captains,named Kate McCafferty..."Magda smirked,
"He shamelessly flirts with her.Girl,where the hell have you been? Mars?"Raina chuckled.
"I must have...Gawd,I'm gonna hafta start snoopin more often..."
"We're not snoopin,we're investi- -"
"Investigating."CD finished for Raina. "Yeah,right...snooping."
"An-y-waaays...shall we focus on the reason we came here,now?...while we still have the chance?"

Kate walked back into the division with a huge smile on her face,which she gave up on holding back the minute she walked out of Anchorside.
"You look happy."Nate commented.
"I am." She nodded,and continued to her office. "I just met my grand daughter." She thought to herself.

After going through some of Katie's photos,it was time to go through Jinny's.
"Man,thats freaky..."Jinny and Katie said in unison. They were comparing their baby pictures. They looked at eachother and began to laugh.
"Is that Kate?" Katie asked. picking up a picture of Jinny who was holding a little girl,two guys,one a brunette about seventeen or eighten,The other about thirteen, And a red haired woman in a police uniform.
"Yep...and that is me...and you.."Jinny smiled,pointing to herself. "Your uncles John Jr.,and Casey...and...And thet is...your aunt Amanda,I'm holding...this was taken at the division,my dad was trying out his new camera..."
"Kewl...how old is Amanda there?"
"I'd say about three or four."

"Au- -" Raina was cut off,when Magda put her hand over her mouth.
"Shhh...Are you crazy?.."She whispered. "Eww gross,Raina!"Magda exclaimed,Raina had licked her hand to get her to move it. "That's disgusting.."SHe said wiping spit on Raina's shirt.
"haha,that'll teach ya to not to put your hand over her mouth."CD chuckled.
"She said Amanda was Katie's aunt!..That means,Cap has to be her grandmother!" Raina was doing her best not to scream it at the top of her lungs.
"Yes, Sherlock,we figured that out."CD replied.
"Am I the only one at this table that finds this shocking?!"
"No..but you're the only thats about to have a heart attack."
"Ooohh,This is sooo kewl!...We should call Cap grandma Katie from now on.."Raina cooed.
"Ha...Only if you wanna come into work as a ghost tomorrow."
"heh,yeah..I'm gonna hafta agree with Cd on that one." Magda nodded.

"Tonight is family poker night...it's a little family get together thing...i'm gonna tell everybody about you..."Jinny smiled."And next week..if you want to,that is..You can come..."
"I would love too."Katie smiled back. "Actually, my mom really wants to meet you...maybe you could come to dinner sometime soon?" She shrugged.
"I'd like that...when?"
"When is good for you?"
"umm...tomorrow night?...I think I can get my captain to let me off early."She laughed.
"Okay.."Katie laughed too," I'll talk to my mom."
"Okay...kewl..."Jinny,looked down at her watch "Y'now what...I really need to get goin, I got a lot of work to do...and i was supposed to be back about twenty minutes ago."
"Okay...your captain's not gonna be mad is she?"
"Nah..."
"Ask her if she wants to come too.."
"Okay,will do." Jiny said standing up. Katie stood up as well,and they shared a hug. "Bye.."
"Bye..Grandma." Katie smirked.
"Hey...do me a favor and give your mother a swift kick to the bladder,will ya?" Jinny said talking to her grandchild.
"Holy crap!...She did!"
"Thats my girl" Jinny laughed, She hugged her daughter once more,and they walked to the door together

"Lets go say hi to Mini Jinny." Raina smiled,and looked at CD,waiting for her to get up.
"Um.No."
"Um. Why?"
"Because...If we do,You'll start grilling her...and she just hapen to mention it to Jinny,and Jinny in turn will not be happy..."
"And Jinny might just mention it to Cap..and...well...that just wouldn't be a good thing."CD picked up where Magda left off.
"Could you imagine,having both Jinny and Cap mad at you at the same time?...ANd on the same side?"
Raina considered this for a moment..."Good point."
"What's a good point?' Jinny asked as she and Katie apraoched the table.
"Oh,uh...nothing."Raina smiled innocently.She was a good snoop,but a bad liar when she got caught.
Jinny looked at them judgingly for a moment... and then looked over to the table She and Katie had been sitting at..."You were evesdropping weren't you?"
"Nooo..."
"Then what were you doing?"
"...eating lunch..."
"Uh huh...'jInny nodded."Where's the food?...or is it that new invissible kind?"
"We already finished thank you very much."
"Hey,there anthing else i can get ya?" James asked,as he aproached the table. He got three 'no thanks' s in responce. "Are ya sure ya don't want anything to eat?"
"Heh, Yeah,we're sure..." Raina spoke for the group. After James walked away they all looked at Jinny like three scared puppies.
" I suppose you're going to teach us a lesson aren't ya...."Magda bit her lip.
"Oh yes."Jinny nodded.
"Heh..what are you going to do?"
"Oh,you won't see it coming." Jinny raised her eyebrow.
"Cap's gonna help ya isn't she?"
"Oh probably..."She nodded. then she looked at Katie who was holding back laughter. "You wanna help?"
"Suuuure...be a great bonding experience."She laughed.
"And so is Mini Me." Jinny stated.
"We're as good as dead."CD said sheepishly.
"Well,since we're leaving, you must be too...unless you have someone else schedlued to snoop on."
"No..no,we're ready to go."Raina nodded,as they all got up.

Kate was sitting on the corner of Nate's desk,going over the case with him,when Jinny walked in, with the look on her face,that she usualy has when she's plotting to kill somebody,followed by CD,Raina and Magda. Raina and Magda were holding hands,and watching Jinny's every move. CD was gripping at Raina and Magda for getting her into the mess.
"This is all your fault! I am going to die soon,and I won't be able to do even half the things I wanted to before I go,because I'll be too busy watching my back..because You two..just had to make me go snoop with you,and now not one...but two!.Two! Jinny's and Cap are going to kill me! Because you two can't mind your own business!"
"I take it you got caught." Nate said laughing.
"Shut up,it's not funny! I am going to die!" CD sat down at her desk.
"I tried to warn ya."
"I hate when you do that."
"Do what?"
"Say:I toldya so,without actually saying:I told ya so." She glared at him,as he continued to cackle.
"What's going on?Why are we killing CD?"Kate asked.
"Walk with me,talk with me,Katiedid."Jinny put her arm around her captain and lead her to her office. Stopping just before they went in,She turn to Magda,Raina,and CD. and let out an evil cackle.
"You guys are going down."Nate smirked.

So...wutcha think?hmmm? Shud I post more?

MOOOORE!!!! :clap:

OMG LMAO!! Child you are evil pure evil! Leaving me right there hanging on with one lil thread...I don't think that I can hang on for much longer so you must post more...

Originally posted by Bonnie Is Great!
OMG LMAO!! Child you are evil pure evil! Leaving me right there hanging on with one lil thread...I don't think that I can hang on for much longer so you must post more...

MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! *huge evil smile*
;)
Hmmmm.....shud i post more soon....or keep ya hangin 4 a while?..hmmmm....Mwhahahaha!!....

Glad ya liked it.

lol, yea so how bout more now?

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
lol, yea so how bout more now?

Lol,I will post more asap, promise:D

Originally posted by MovieHuntress17
Lol,I will post more asap, promise:D


!!!!YAY!!!!! bout time.....

Ahhhhhhmmm *coughs* she ^^ gave you an new page that calls for more please.....LOL





http://groups.yahoo.com/group/TheDivision_CSIFanFiction/

Heeeeere's more! hope ya like...........


"Oh come on...They're not really gonna hurt us.."Raina chuckled nervously.
"Raina...not just Jinny but Cap...and not just Jinny and Cap,but Kaitlyn...thats three generations of major bitches!Don't get me wrong I love Jin and Cap...but..you've seen them get mad."CD glared at Raina.
"I know...but you can't say that about Katie,you don't even know her...She seems very nice."
"Yeah,so do Jin and Cap....till ya make them mad."Magda remarked.
"Think about it. Katie is a direct decendant of both of them...she like a combination of the the two of them!..think about thiat if you will."Cd raised her eyebrow.
"Ahhhh!!!! It's the apocalypse!"Nate laughed.
"Did anybody ask for your opinion?"
"CD,if i waited for you to ask for it,I'd hafta take up knitting or somethin' "
"Here go to the crafts store."She said throwing a five dollar bill onto his desk.


"Captain...I knew you could be a bitch but thats mean!"Jinny said as they walked out of Kate's office.
"Oh,you ain't seen nothin' yet."Kate chuckled,and then looked directly at Raina,with an evil smile. "That fax come in yet?"
"Uh..y...yeah....here ya go,Cap."She handed Kate the fax. "And have I told you,you look fabulous...green is definately your color"
"Yeah,and your hair looks great too"Magda added.
"And i love those shoes."CD smiled.
Kate and Jinny looked at eachother,and shared an evil giggle.
"...Mini-me said she'd call later..I'll let her in on the you-know-what,okay.."Jinny grinned.
"Okay,tell her I said Hi."Kate smiled.
"Will do."


"You really think so?" Jinny asked the person on the other end of the phone. "I hadn't thought of that....you're gooood."
"Thank you,thank you."Katie laughed.
"What's good?" Kate asked.
"Katie's idea for the..."Jinny looked around at CD,Raina and Magda,"For the you-know-what."
"Ohhh...I wanna know."Kate gave Magda an evil smile."Tell her to give her...very young..grandma a call."
"Okay...Well, hey I gotta go,okay...I'll see ya tomorrow...She turned her attention back to Katie.
"OKay,bye."
"And you're very young grandma wants you to call her."
"Okay."Katie laughed.
"You need the number?"
"No,I got it,bye."
"Bye,sweety." Shortly after Jinny turned off her phone,Kate's rang.
"McCafferty."She answered. "Hi, Hunny...How are you?" She patted Raina's shoulder,and winked at her,as she walked back into her office,and shut the door.
"Grandma?!"Nate's jaw hit his desk with a thud.
"Yep."Jinny laughed." See...Cap is Katie's birthfather's Mother."
"See Nate,you woulda already known this,if you had gone with us."Raina said.
"Yeah,and I would also know that my death would be soon."Nate smirked. Jinny let out an evil chuckle.
"That's kewl,Jin...I guess congratu;ations to both of ya..."He smiled.
"Thank you.

"Uh huh...I hadn't thought of that...You are good at this."Kate held the phone with her shoulder,as she stacked some papers and put them in a folder. "Where did you learn how to be so mean?"
"I dunno...I guess it's an inherited instinct or something..."Katie laughed. "My mom is way to nice to do something like this."
"Ah...but your birth mother...and grandmother are not..."
"I guess I get it from you."She smiled.


"Bye,Nate."Jinny said putting on her coat.
"G'night."He replied.
Jinny turned to Raina,Magda and CD,"Bye, Ladies."She said with an evil smile.
"Bye.."Raina mumbled and so did Magda,and CD.
CD,turn to Magda nad Raina as soon as Jinny walked out,"If she doesn't kill you...I will...if i have the chance before it's my time!"
"Yeah,yeah we know!"Magda said. "But we don't have to worry,because they're gonna get to all of us..and probably at the same time."
Nate sat at his desk watching them,in delight. He thought it was the funniest thing he'd seen in a very very long time.
"Oh will you stop cackling?!"Magda Snapped,"You sound like damn hen that can't lay that egg!"
Wich just made him laugh harder,"It's funny!" CD got frustrated and threw a pen at him.
"Candace,did I just see you throw a pen at him?"Kate asked,sounding more like a school principle talking to a rowdy student then a Police Captain talking to one of a her inspectors. CD nearly jumped out of her skin,she hadn't heard Kate come out of her office. And Nate began to cackle even more.
"Sorry."CD mumbled to Nate,and plopped down into her desk chair.
"It's okay..."He laughed.
"And Nathan,Dear...Hurry up and lay that egg will ya..."Kate patted his shoulder. And this time,CD,Raina and Magda took the oppertunity to laugh.
Kate said her goodbyes,to everyone...making sure to give the three women a scarey smile,and then left.
"You guys are going down.."Nate practically sang.
"Shut up."Raina ordered,as she put on her coat,and got ready to leave.


Jinny walked into her father's house,with an excited...yet very nervous smile on her face. "Hi guys."She said,kissing each the three men at the table. After planting a slobbery kiss on John Jr's cheek she took the empty seat beside him.
He looked at her suspiciously for a moment,"Who's body do you want me to help you dispose of?"
"Nobody's."She chuckled,pinching his cheek.
"Dad,she's starting to scare me."
Jinny laughed,she figured she'd get a reaction like that,"I have news...happy news." She smiled. "Very happy news."
"What??'John Sr. asked.
"I met my daughter yesturday."She smiled form ear to ear.
"What?! Jinny that's great! Who found who?! What's she like? Does she look like you??"Casey asked all in one breathe.
"She found me,She is awsome,she is soo sweet,and smart,and funny...and yes...it's freaky how much she looks like me."
John Sr. just kinda sat there with a smile on his face...he was in shock,he didn't how he felt at the moment. And John Jr. just kinda sat there...he wasn't mad at the news...but he wasn't as happy as Casey was .
Jinny bit her lip as before she told then the next thing,She wasn't sure at all how they would take it,"She's also...7 months pregnant...heh,I'm a grandma."
Now,Casey and John Sr. were starringblankly at her aswell.
"Uh...Congratulations...i guess."Casey finally spoke up.
"Heh,thanks...she's really scared...We talk most of the night last night...I'm really glad she found me when she did,I wanna help her with through this."
Casey nodded his head,"Yeah...you'll probably be a big comfort for her."
"Yeah..." Silence fell over the room,and Jinny couldn't stand it. "Heh, Cap's pretty freaked out..y'know,she's trying to grasp being a great grandma... and a rather young one at that."She chuckled nervously.
"So,you know that she knows,huh?"Casey laughed.
"Yeah...and she met her today...we had a great time at lunch."
"That's great,Jin."
"What's her name?"John Sr. finally spoke.
"Kailtyn Harris."
"The same name as her grandma...small world.."He chuckled.
"Yep that's what Katie said...when I introduced her to Cap."
Nobody said anything for a second,and Jinny turned to her olderbrother who'd been silent the whole time. "Well..."
"Well what?" He shrugged.
"Don't you have anything to say?"
"So...are we gonna meet her...or what?"He shrugged.
Jinny wasn't really sure what she expected out of him...but this reaction truely suprised her,"Yeah....She's gonna come to poker night next week."She smiled. John Jr. just nodded his head.


When Raina walked into the Anchorside Bar& Grill,she spotted her Captain sitting at the bar,having a drink,and chatting with James the bartender. Whatever it was they were talking about,obviously made for pleasant conversation.Raina thought,judging by the smile on James's face. She thought about going over,and taking the empty stool next to Kate,but she was afraid to.,Sos he went over to the end of the bar,and sat down.

"Excuse me, James said,befroe he walked over to a customer to take her order.
'No Prob.."The redhead he was chatting with replied.

"What can I get for ya,Inspector."He asked.
"Just a beer.."She replied."and call me Raina."
"Bud light?"
"You know me too well."She laughed,as he handed the bottle to her.
"Anything else?"
"Yeah...the one hundred percent honest truth...and remember I'm a cop,i can tell when you're lieing."
"The truth about what?"He asked in confusion.
"About my captain...you have a thing for her don'tcha..."She smiled.
"What do you mean?"
"You know what I mean....You like her....Come on,it's obvious...you're always flirting with her.."
The blush in James's cheeks answered Raina question. "Just say it..." She laughed.
"o...okay...She is a...beautiful woman....and she seems as nice as she is pretty..."He shrugged.
"Aww,thats sooo sweeeet!"She cooed,"Ask Her out."
"What?"
"Ask her out."
"Oh...she's not gonna go out with me.."
"Why do you say that?"
"Because...she's a...swanky police captain...she's not gonna go out with a bartender."
"What does you'r job have to do with it...you're a nice guy...you seem to have been getting along pretty well over there,Ask her out damn it."She ordered.
"You actually think she'd say yes?"
"I don't see why not...you're a really nice,handsom guy...and like you said She's as nice as she is pretty..well she's also that smart....now go damn it."
"Okay,okay.."He sighed.
"Go,go."
"I'm going."He hesitated before he made his way back over to Kate.


"So...are you gonna get a granddaughter or grandson?"Casey asked.
"It's a girl."She smiled."Me...a grandma...gawd,I feel old."
"...I'm scared."John Jr. said out of the blue.
"Of what?"Jinny looked at him slightly confused.
"One of you was pretty scarey...Another one of you in somewhere in the world...Very scarey...Two of you in the same city...and another one on the way..Terrifying."He explained with a smirk.
Jinny punched his shoulder,"And....The second Jinny has a lil bit of Kate McCafferty in her."She smirked.
"Okay..." He said as he got up and grabbed a pad of paper and a pen.
"What are you doing?"
"Writing out my will...I'm as good as dead....Casey,you can have my old baseball cards...He said as jotted this down on the paper."And I guess you can give my gun collection to Magda's kid...if he wants them..."


Soooo,wutcha think? was it good?Did ya like it? Shud I go on? lol

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"okay,I don't think I'm on the right street then.I turned left instead of right...ooops."
"Nah,you're not on the right street."Katie laughed,"Turn around,and go back,and go across the intersection..."
"Okay,smart ass,I'm not that stupid..."Jinny laughed too as she pulled into a driveway,and turned her car around," I figured that part out myself."
"You'd think...being a cop...and for so long,that you could tell your right from your left."
"Shut up."
"If I do,you'll probably get lost again..."
"Haha...I'm kinda nervous okay,...and I thought you said right,not left."
"Don't be nervous, Everybody will like you...My little brother will probably have a billion and one questions for you...he is obsessed with cops and robbers.”
“Ok,I see a pregnant brunette that looks a helluva a lot like me,and she’s on a phone...Am I on the right track now?”
“Yeah,you’re on the right track.”Katie waved her hand,”Make a right...not a left,but a right at the pregnant brunnette.”
“Jinny laughed,and shut off her cellphone,as she pulled into the driveway.
Katie walked over and opened Jinny’s car door for her. “Hi.”She smiled.
“Hello.”Jinny turned off the engine,and put her keys in her jacket pocket. She decided to leave her purse in the car.
“Still nervous?”Katie asked,as they shared a quick hug.
“Yes.”Jinny laughed. She waved at The woman and little boy watching them through the window. The little boy waved back,His mom just smiled,and moved away from the window.
“Come on.”Katie laughed,grabbing Jinny’s hand and dragging her inside.


“Hi.”Kate smiled as she walked up the steps to the resturaunt.
“Hi.”James offered his arm. “How are you?”
“I’m good.”She took his arm,and they entered the resturaunt together.”How are you?”
“I’m fabulous.” He patted her hand,as they waited to be seated.


“Jinny,this is my mom,Sara,and my little brother Isaac.” Katie introduced.
“Hi” Jinny held her hand out to Sara,”It’s really nice to meet you.”
“Oh,you too.”Sara smiled,shaking her hand.”Katie has told me a lot about you.”
“Yeah she’s tol dme about you too.”
“Katie said you’re cop.”Isaac piped up.
“I sure am.”Jinny knealed down so she was eye level with the six year old.
“Kewl,do you hava badge..and a gun?”
“I sure do,ya wanna see?”
“Yeah,yeah!”
“Yes,please.”Sara corrected.
“Yes,please.”He repeated.
“It’s out in the car,come with me.”Jinny laughed. And the two walked out to her car together.
“She’s very nice.” Sara whispered to Katie.
“I know.”


“And for your lovely date?” The waiter looked to Kate,as he wrote down James’s order.
“I’ll just have the same as him.” She smiled.
“Okay,comin right up.”He said,and walked away.
“So,how was your day?”James asked.
“It was good.”She nodded.”I had to give Jinny about thirty pep-talks today..”She chuckled.
“Oh?”He smiled.
“Yeah,she is having dinner with her daughter,...my granddaughter, and her family tonight...she was nervous.”
“Oh...are you still freaked out...about being a great grandmother?”He laughed.
“Yes.”She laughed.” I mean..I’m no spring chicken,thats for sure, but I’m still pretty young to be a great grandmother.”

“Mom,check it out!”Isaac said holding up Jinny’s badge wich was hanging around his neck.
“Kewl.”She smiled. “Dinner’s almost ready go wash up.”
Isaac rolled his eyes,and turned his attention back to his new bestfriend,”Can I pleeeeeeeeease,hold your gun?”He pushed out his bottom lip.
“No,Sir. It’s way too dagerous.”Jinny laughed. “Now,go wash your hands,like your mom said.”
“Fiiine.”He sighed,and headed down the hall towards the bathroom.
“Sorry about that.”Sara laughed.
“Nah,He’s fine..”She smiled. “He’s a cutie.”
“Glad you think so,Because I think you just made a new friend.”
“Well, good.”

“Oh well,in that case,let me lie and make myself look better.”Kate blushed slightly,”I’m fifty...five,instead of fifty.”
“Seriously I would never have guess you’re fifty...or near it, by looking at you.”
“Well,thank you...you’re just saying that,but thank you.”
“No,I’m not,I mean it.”
“Now,Kate wasblushing majorly. She liked James...a lot...especialy if he kept up compliment slike these.


At dinner,Jinny had sat in the middle,between Isaac and Katie. At the special request of her new buddy,Isaac.
Through out dinner, there was steady,pleasent conversation, Sara told Jinny a loty of stories about Katie when she was a baby,and even gave her a few pictures to keep,wich Jinny was very grateful for. Now they were all sitting in the living room,still chatting,and exchanging stories,While,Isaac played with Jinny’s badge,holster,and his water gun.
“Okay,Isaac,time for bed.Tell Jinny good night,and give her back her things.”Sara informed her son.
“Aw,Mom, I’m not tired.”He wined.
“Now,young man.”She said sternly.
He reluctantly took off the holster,and took his gun out of it,and handed to Jinny,along with her badge. “G’nite Jinny.”
“Tell ya what, I have a spare badge at home, you can borrow that one for a day or two.”Jinny smiled.
“Seriously?!”He asked with excitement.
“Yep.”
“Can I take it to school for ‘Show and Tell’ tomorrow?”
“Sure...just don’t loose it,okay.”She laughed.
“Okay,I won’t...I won’t even let Miss Joy hold it.” He smiled from ear to ear.
“Okay,Good nite.”
“Thanks a lot,Jinny! Good night.” He hugged his Mom,and sister,and then decided to hug Jinny too,before making his way to his bedroom.
“That was really nice of you Jinny.”Sara smiled,
“Oh it’s no problem...That there is a cop in the making.”
“Yeah most likely.”

“I had a great time,thank you.”Kate smiled,as the exited the resturaunt.
“No,thank you for coming,the pleasure was all mine.”
“Okay,is this some big show you’re putting on or are just naturally such a charmer?”She laughed.
“Eh...A little bit of both,I guess.”He chuckled,”Is it working?”
“Yes.”
“Well good...maybe It’ll help my chances at a second date...”He hinted.
“Maybe...”She smirked.

“Well, I gues I should get going.”Jinny said,standing up.Followed by Sara,and Jinny helped Katie to her feet.
“It was really...really nice to meet you Jinny.” Sara shook her hand again.
“Thanks,you too.”She smiled.
“I’ll walk ya out.”Katie offered.
“Okay.”Jinnyput her arm around her daughter. “Thanks for ,Dinner it was great,Good night.”


They were now standing in fron Kate’s car,neither knowing what exactly they should do next,or who should do it first. They both knew what they wanted to do,wich made the moment even more awkward.
“Well, uh...as I said, I had a really great time...thanks again.”Kate didn’t know what else to say.
“And as I said...Thank you, the pleasure was all mine.”She smiled as he kissed her hand. This action did little to ease the tention though.
“Gawd,I hate this part, i always feel so awkward.”Kate said frankly.
“Me too” He laughed. Her frankness was another thing he liked about her. No one said anything for a moment.
“Can I kiss you?”He mumbled.
“What?”She was mostly stunned at the fact that he actually asked. This was a first for her.
“C...can I kiss you?”
She stared at him for a moment,then she answered his question by kissing him.


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"Good morning."Jinny greeted everyone with a smile.
"Good morning."Raina replied,as she exchanged looks with Nate. "How are you?"
"I'm good,and yourself?"
"Suspicious."She expected a saracastic comeback from Jinny,but instead she watched her laugh,turn her attention to Kate.
Jinny and Kate exchanged smiles.
"Okay, We both know,that I'm smiling because dinner with Katie's mom went really good last night....But I don't know why you're smiling so big."Jinny laughed.
"Because...uh...You're smiling,because things went well last night just like I thought they would."
"Uh-huh."She nodded.
"No."Raina jumped in. "Well,yeah she's smiling because of that too,but She's also smiling because she had a date last night...with James."
Kate looked at Raina as if she were trying to think up twenty different ways to kill her with her own badge.
"Hey,I figure you're gonna kill me soon anyways,might as well make the best of the time I have left."She laughed.
"James who?" Jinny asked.
"James...."Raina couldn't remember his last name. "James The bartender."
"So,he finally got the guts to do it huh?"Magda laughed.
"Yeah...after Raina gave him a good peptalk and told him to :Ask her out damn it!"Kate looked Raina dead in the eye.
"Oohh,He told you about that,huh?"She smiled sheepishly.
"Yes he did."
"Are you mad..er...at me?"
"Your heart was in the right place...but if you do it again, You'll highly regret it."
"Oh noooo,Cap! If you some how cause her to go deaf,she won't be able to hear the gossip!That is sooo cruel!"Jinny joked.
"Hmmm....there's an idea.."Kate flashed an evil smile. "Next time ya talk to Katie,tell her there's a new plan."
"Cap,that's too cruel."Jinny laughed.
"An -y-waaaays....We can talk about your date later...I wanna know all about dinner with Katie's family last night." Raina changed the subject.
"I had dinner,with Katie and her mom and her brother...the dinner was good,Sara told me a lot of stories abotu Katie when she was little,and gave me some pictures,and Her little brother Isaac is my new lil buddy, so obviously it went good. That should answer all your questions well enough,subject over."
Raina took a minute to process everything Jinny told her..."Yeah...yeah,thats about it,Thanks."
"No prob."Jinny laughed.
"Okay,then we covered Jinny's night...now lets get back to you."Raina pointed to Kate.
"No,lets not. Let's gt back to work."She shook her head,and headed into her office,followed by Raina.
"Raina,don't cha wanna solve one more case before ya die?And the more ya bug me the sooner that will happen."
Raina didn't say anything. She spun around on one heel,and walked right back out of the office. To see Jinny and Nate cackling together.
"Shut up."

Three o'clock rolled around,and Raina still hadn't gotten a word outta Kate about her date with James,and she was going crazy...er.
"Well,hello there James."She could barely contain her excitement when He walked in holding a single red rose.
"Hello, Raina."He laughed,as she walked over and put her arm around his shoulders.
"Is that for the boss lady?"
"Maybe..."
"Oh,come on spill it! She won't tell me a thing,and I'm goin nuts!"
"Well,I don't know about her,but I thought it went fabulous."
"Is that all you're gonna tell me??"She starred at him in disbelief."I figured that out from the smile thats been on her face all day."
"She's really been smilin all day?" He smiled.
"Yep." She nodded.
"Have I really?"Kate asked,standing in the doorway of her office.
"You're doing it now."Jinny laughed. Kate tried to stop smiling,but it didn't work,instead she ended up smiling bigger.
"Aw, you make such a cute couple."Raina cooed."I am the ultimate match maker!"
"Jinny,hit her."Kate ordered.
"Seriously?"Jinny asked with excitement.
"Not too hard."
"Hey!"Raina rubbed her shoulder,where Jinny hit her."That was too hard!"
Kate gave Jinny a look,The look that makes ya feel like you're in a food fight at school,and the principle just caught you about to throw potatoes.Only Kate could make Jinny feel like that.
"I barely touched her! I swear!"Jinny glared at the teacher's pet.
Kate rolled her eyes,and turned her attention to the gentleman with the rose."Come on,before you get sucked in by this bunch a crazy psycho people." She headed back into her office,James close behind her.
"Hey, I'm not psycho."Jinny mumbled to herself,as she sat down at her desk.
"Nope,just borderline."Raina smirked.
"Watch it little girl...that punch was considered 'soft'....you don't wanna find what my 'hard' punch feels like."
"Yeah...and don't forget there's already a hit out on ya."Nate added with a laugh.
"Oh yeah almost forgot about that,thanks Pal."Jinny gave Raina the usual evil smile.
"Anytime,anytime."
"Yeah,thanks Pal." Raina glared at hime.
"Hey,I'm not stupid...I know wich side is the safe side."
"Mhmm...sometimes you're safer from the enemy,if you're on the enemy's side...though,you and I are not enemies"
"Very profound,Inspector Exstead."He clapped.
"Thank,you Inspector Basso."She laughed.


"So why,have you been smiling all day?"James smiled.
"Uh,well..."Kate pushed her hair behind her ear. "I..agree with you...about last night."
"Good...good,so we're on the same page...glad to hear it."
"Yeah.."She laughed. She glanced up,right as Raina glanced in...Kate manged to catch every time she looked in.

"Damnit, stop watching me watch you!."Raina thought."I'm trying to...investigate."

"So,am I gonna get that second date?"
"Um..."Kate pretended to be thinking about it. Truth was she decided last night. "I...guess so.."
"You guess so?" He chuckled.
"Yes...you get the second date."She laughed.
"Yesss!"He cheered.
"How does saturday sound?"
"My new favorite day of the week,are you off saturday?"
"I guess I can be...why?She smelled of the rose he'd brought her.
"Because it's gonna be a sorta day time...all day date."
"Oh.."She looked confused and suspicious
"Is eight thirty too early?
"Nah...Where are we going?"
"It's a suprise...Al I'm gonna tell ya is: jeans and boots will probably be best."
"Gimme a hint."
"That was your hint...but uh..Raina casualy mentoned somethin you like,a while back..."
"Wich would be?"
James thought for a minute." It involves carrots." Yeah,that would definately not give it away.
"What?"She looked at him totaly confused.
"Well, I gotta get back to work.."He said looking down at his watch. "I just wanted set up this date..and give you that."He pointed to the rose.
"No,...what about carrots?"
"They have something to do with the suprise."
"Yeah,ya told me that already.."
"You'll just hafta figure the rest out yourself...see ya Saturday."He laughed.He leaned forward,then stopped. Better ask..especialy since they're at her work,He thought.

"Ahh- -"Raina's scream was cut off by Jinny's hand.
"I swear if you lick my hand,I will drop kick your ass to Japan."She warned.
Raina nodded her reply.

When they heard someone get half a scream out,Kate and Jame stopped what they were...doing,and looked out her office window. They both cracked up,when they saw Jinny.with Raina in sort of a head lock,with her mouth covered. Jinny smiled really big,and waved at them. And Raina gave them two thumbs up.
Kate waved back,and she and James left her office.
"Bye, Raina."He laughed. Raina waved back.
"Byeeeee,Jaaaaaames."Jinny patted his shoulder.
"Byeeee,Inspectooor."He laughed.
"What what did i miss?"Nate asked,entering the division,with a snicker bar
"Hello! "Magda looked at him like he was stupid."They were smoochin..."
"Who was smoochin?"
"Cap and James..."
"Ooohhhh...."He nodded "Right on,James! Way to go,Dude!"He gave him a thumbs up.
"Thank you" James laughed.
Kate starred at Nate for a moment,she couldn't believe he'd just said that. She smirked to herself,and then turned to James, "See ya Saturday"
"You bet. Bye."He said,and walked out of the division backwards.
"Can I let go of her now,my arm is getting tired?"Jinny asked.
"Raina are you gonna scream?"Kate asked. Raina shook her head."Do you promise?Cross your heart?Swear on your badge?" She watched as Raina nodded her head as fast as she could. "Okay let her go."
Jinny let go of her,and they both let out a sigh of relief.
"Come on Jin."Kate motioned for her to follow her back in her office. "Not you,Raina."Kate stopped her at the door of her office.
"Fiiiine."Raina wined,andwent back to her desk."So whatcha need?"Jinny asked,making herself comfortable on Kate's desk,while Kate shut the door.

"You pig!"CD threw a pen,at Nate.
"Ow,what was that for?"
"For that comment."
"What comment?"
"You know. the 'Right on James, Way to go dude!' comment."
"Oh,that...'
"Yeah,that...what was 'that' supposed to mean?"
"nothin...I was just congratulating James,thats all."
"Yeah,congratulating him,for kissing Cap...why?"
"CD chill out it's not that big a deal, I didn't mean anything by it."
"Apperently you did.."


"Okay,where's Jinny,Katie?'Isaac tugged on his big sister's overalls,as they entered the division,with their back packs in tow.
Katie looked to Magda,and Raina answered the question before it even got asked,"She's in talking ot your grandma."She smiled from ear to ear. "Make yourself at home,they'll be out soon."
"K,thanks."Katie sat their stuff on Jinny's desk,and then sat herself in Jinny's chair. Isaac climbed into what was left of her lap.
"Is this your little brother?'Magda asked.
"Yeah...Isaac,this is Jinny's partner Magda."She introduced them.
"Hi,Isaac,how are you?"
'I am fine,how are you?"
"I'm good."She chuckled. "He's such a little gentleman.
"Ha!,yeah right. "Katie laughed. "Believe me,it's all an act."
"I'm Raina."Raina held out her hand,and Isaac shook it. "How old are ya?"
"I'm six,how old are you?"
"I'm 25."Raina laughed.
"He's five...but he's really excited because his birthday is just a couple of months away."Katie explained.
"A month and a half."He nodded.
"Wow,thats so kewl." Magda smiled. "You're a big boy.
"Yep!" He smiled back.

CD and Nate hadn't even noticed Katie and her brother come in,they were standing over in the corner.CD was fussing at Nate,and He was trying to stay alive.
"So you think our captian is hot,do ya?!"Cd said a little louder then she intended to. Nate's face turned beat-red,as everyone's attention was suddenly on them. And he wanted to die,when he realized that Kate and Jinny had come out just intime to catch that last part.
"Damn it,CD." He mumbled,and pulled her into the interrogation room. CD was having fun. She wasn't jealous or mad...infact she thought what he said was funny...especialy the look on Kate's face when he said it. She was doing all of this just to torture him.
Once CD and Nate were int he interogation room,everyone's attention turned to Kate. She looked around at all the starrign faces. "What?...Get back to work."She ordered. Everyone did as they were told...though there were a few whispers,still.
"Raina."
"Yeah,Cap?"She asked,trying not to laugh.
"Go."Kate nodded towards the observation room,with a smirk.
"Alright!"Raina jumped up.She was excited this was the very fisrt time she was actually told to snoop.

"Hi,Katie."Kate smiled.
"Hi,Grandma Hotty."She showed the same evil grin that her birth mother often used.
"That was good!"Jinny gave her daughter a high five.
"Yeah,I thought that was pretty good myself." She smirked.
"Okay,the subject has just officialy been changed." Kate stated.
Jinny and Katie shared one more laugh.
"Hi,Jinny."Isaac smiled.
"Hi munchkin,how was school?"
"It was great! Everybody thought your badge was really kewl!"
"Well,good."She ruffled his hair.
"Oh here.."Isaac got her badge out of his back pack,and handed it to her.
"Thank you kind Sir."
"You're welcome."
"Oh, Isaac,this is my grandmother,Kate."Katie introduced him.
"Kewl,you got the same name."
"I sure do."Kate laughed. "It's nice to meet you."
"it's nice to meet you too."He smiled.
"Let me up,Dork." Katie patted his leg. "Where's the nearest bathroom?"
"Follow me."Jinny laughed.
"Okay...and i need to talk to you..."
'Okay about what?"
"Just a couple things."
Kate go tthe feeling that whatever it was,Katie prefered to talk to Jinny alone.
So,I hear, you like cops." Kate bent down,so she was eye level with Isaac.
"Yep, I'm gonna be cop when i grow up." He nodded.
"Kewl."
"Kate, is the police Captain here" Jinny explained.
"What's that?"He asked.
"That means I am the boss Jinny and the rest of the cops here."
"Kewl!..can I see your gun,and your badge?"
"Sure,come on."She laughed.
"I'll be right back,okay,Dork?"
"Okay,Super dork."He replied,and followed Kate into her office.

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Originally posted by MovieHuntress17
"I swear if you lick my hand,I will drop kick your ass to Japan."She warned.
Raina nodded her reply.

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"Can I wear your holster? Please.."Isaac looked up at Kate with his big blue eyes.
"Sure.."She took it off the coat tree,took her gun out,then helped himput it on. "You know a lot about cops ,don't cha.."
"Yep. "He nodded. "Jinny let me take her badge to school today."
"She did? Kewl..What did everybody think?"
"They thought it was awsome!..."
"Kewl."

"So,what do ya wanna talk about?"Jinny sat down on the bench in the locker room.
"Uh,well a couple of things...but,uh...this might not be the place to talk about one....can I come over to your house tonight? I really need to talk to somebody about this..and I can't think of anybody better then you...you've been there."Katie pace around the locker room.
"Yeah,of course.."Jinny was really worried now.She knew it had something ot do with Katie's baby...and up coming motherhood."No problem."
"Great,thanks." She sighed,and sat down beside Jinny. "And the other thing...I was hoping that maybe you know of someplace I could get a job...I got fired a couple of days ago...because I was having trouble do some stuff at work. Y'know it's kinda hard to do a few things,with this big ole thing in the way."She patted her belly.
"Yeah,I know.." Jinny thought back seventeen years,to when she tottin her big pregnant belly around.
"And I really...really, really, really need a job...and it seems nobody wants to hire a knocked up seventeen year old thats gonna pop in a couple of months."
"Um..."Jinny thought for a moment. "I don't know of anything right now...but I'll see what i can find." She put her arm around her daughter. "Maybe, My favorite pain in the ass,can find ya something here to do."
"Your favorite pain in the ass..being..?"She smiled.
"Oh,you know her...She's about your height, curly red hair...bout shoulder length..constantly fussing at me.."
"Is her name,Kate orKatie orsomething like that?For some reason those names are coming to mind."She laughed
"Yep. Actually her name is Kaitlyn but she goes by Kate...sometimes I call her Katedid...just to piss her off."Jinny let out an evil laugh.
"You're crazy."Katie shook her head.
"How now be politicly correct..I am an ' Exstead ' ".

"It wont staple." Isaac pouted. "Make it staple."
"Okay,here."Kate laughed,and helped him staple a couple of papers together.
"Thanks."
"no prob...now just put them in this folder."She handed him the folder."Good job...and it goes in - -"
"Right here."He smiled,and put it in another larger folder.
"Very good...I can't wait till you're old enough to be a big cop."She laughed.
"Am I as good as Jinny?"
"Better...you don't talk back,and argue."She ruffled his hair.
"Kewl!"He smiled from ear to ear.
"Now, ya wanna go take this to Raina..Mini-Cap?"
"Yeah!"He jumped down out of her lap.
"Do ya know who she is?"
"Yep."He nodded,and grabbed the file off the desk.

"Here,ya go,Raina."He smiled,and laid the file on her desk.
"Thanks,Munchkin."She smiled, as he made his way back to 'his' office.
"Captain,really..."Magda,leaned against the doorway."Using a impressionable young boy..to do your dirty work."She laughed.
"I am not using him."Kate laughed. "He is helping me..."
"I'm the new Mini-Captain!"He anounced proudly,as He climbed back into Kate's lap."See my badge."He held up Kate's badge.Wich she had fixed,so the chain wouldn't be too long on him.
"Wow,Thats kewl."Magda laughed.
"Hey,go tell Inspector Exstead you want to see her inour office." kate pointed out to Jinny and Katie,who'd just entered the division.
"Okay." He jumped down again "Excuse me,I have work to do."He told Magda as he walked past her.

"Hey,Dork,wutcha up too?"Katie asked,as she sat down in Jinny's chair.
"Work."He stated."Inspector Exstead,We'd like to see you in our office,for a moment."
"Oh really?"Jinnylaughed."Okay,I'll be there in a sec."
"Okay."He said went back to Kate's office.
"She said she'd be here in a sec."
"Tel her now."Kate laughed.
Isaac,turned around and went back out.
"Now." He stated.
"Okay,okay."She laughed,she turned to Katie before she went."Do you see?Do you see what she's done to your brother? He's turning into another her!"She whispered.
"Exstead."He said,in a warning tone of voice.,and grabbed her hand.
Jinny shook her head,and followed him. Kate just laughed.

"You wanted to see me?"Jinny took a seat in one of the chairs across from Kate's desk.
"Yes."Kate laughed. "Got a new case for ya."
"Shoot."
"Pirates."
"Pirates?"Jinny and Magda asked in unison.
"Yep."
"Like Blackbeard."Isaac offered,climbing back into Kate's lap.
Magda laughed. "Real pirates?...this isn't a joke?"
"Nope.I'm serious. Real pirates..as in :Yohoho.."
"And a bottle rum too?" Jinny asked.
"Yep."Kate laughed.
"Mmm Rum...I miss Rum."Jinny lickedher lips.
"Jinny!"Magda shook her head.
"Tell ya what,I'll go home,and down a whole bottle..and think of you while i do it."Kate smirked.
"Aww,you'd do that for me?Thats so sweet,Cap."
"Yeah,I know."
"And I tell ya what,I'll run this place for ya,tomorrow,while ya recover from 'my' hangover."
"Nevermind."
"Thats what I thought."Jinny laughed.
"What's Rum?"Isaac asked.
"It's a drink."Jinny replied.
"Can,I have some?"
"Noooo."She laughed.
"Why not?"
"Because it's a grown-up drink."Kate explained.
"Oh."
"Knock-knock."Katie said,as she cmae in. "Come on,Dork,we gotta go."
"But,I'm workin."He wined.
"Well,maybe you can come back again,and work some more."She laughed. "We gotta go home,and do dumb ole home work."
"Okay."He sighed,and got down. "Here,Captain Kate."He took of her badge,and holster,and handed them to her.
"Thank you,Captain Isaac."She smiled,and put her badge back on.
'Tell,her thank you,for letting you help her work."Katie helped him put his back-pack on.
"Thanks."
"My pleasure...you were a big help."
"Thanks."
"Bye, everybody."
"See ya later."Jinny smiled.
"Bye,Super Cap."Isaac gave Kate a high five.
"Bye,Mini- Cap."She laughed.
"Bye,Exstead."He hugged Jinny.
"Bye,Harris."
"Byeee,Grandma Hotty."Katie laughed.
"No,you are not calling me that."
"Why not,It suites ya."
"Apperently Nate thinks so,too."Jinny added.
"Haha,We can see that smile Cap."Magda laughed.
"Bye,granddaughter."Kate decided not to dignify Magda's comment with a reply.
"See ya,Grandma"Katie looked down at Jinny.
"Gawd,that's gonna take some getting used to."She laughed. "I'll walk ya out.,be right back."


"So,do you wanna spend the night tonight?"Jinny asked as she helped Isaac buckle his seat belt.
"Yeah,That would be kewl,if it's okay with you..I'll hafta let my mom know."Katie replied.
"Of course it's okay with me,thats why I asked."She laughed.
"Can I come?"Isaac asked.
"Maybe,next time,Dork...me and Jinny got some grown-up stuff to talka bout,okay."
"Okay."He pouted.
"Not gonna work."She shook her head.
"Next time,Little Dude."Jinny rufled his hair. "You drive carefull,okay"
"Okay."
"If you get hurt,I'll hafta kill ya."
"OKay."Katie laughed,and started the car. "Bye.
"Bye."Jinny shut Isaac's door,and watched them drive away before heading back to the division.

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"Okay,seriously.."Jinny entered Kate's office,and sat down beside her partner." Pirates....not a game you cooked up with Isaac?"
"Seriously."Kate chuckled. "Pirates. real, live,modern day pirates..right here on the San Fransisco bay."
"Oh Joy."Magda sighed.
"So do we get to bring out the cannons....and the swords?"
"Very funny,Jinny..."Kate wasn't very amused"please...treat this like a serious case...this could be very dangerous...You saw Pirates of The Carribean..this isn't Johnny Depp...and now they have technology...radars...machine guins..instead of pistols..."
"Any scalywag tries to shoot me,I'll make him walk his ass down the plank."She smirked.
"I knew I should have given this to CD and Nate."Kate rolled her eyes.
"As mad as she is at him right now? She'd make him walk the plank."
"I don't see why she's so mad at him. "Kate twirled her hair.
"Of course you don't...you're enjoying it."Magda laughed.
"Wouldn't you?"She admitted. "Now back on track....here is the file for the case...do your research...before you go off half cocked and get yourself stuck on that plank,Exstead."
Jinny gasped. "Aye Aye Captain."Jinny saluted her,and marched out,file in hand.
Kate shook her head. "That girl is gonna get herself killed one of theses days."She thought out loud.
"What are the odds you'll be the one to do it?"Nate asked,as she and CD came in a made themselves comfortable.
Kate thought for a minute "Seventy/thirty."
"I'm suprised you didn't a long time ago."CD laughed.
"Me too."She replied.
"Oh come on you could never kill somebody..."Nate laughed.
CD glared at him .
"Now what?"
"Are you flirting with Cap?"She whispered.
"No."He lookd at her in disbelief.
"Oh really,because it looks like it too me." CD wanted too laugh so bad...she was amazed with herself..that she managed to stay so serious.
Nate shook his head,and turned his attention to the case at hand. "WHat's this I hear about pirates?"
"We will talk about this later."CD whispered.
"There are possibly some visiting our Fine San Fransisco Bay at this very moment."
"Seriously?"
"Yes."Kate thought if one more person asked her that.she'd scream."Right now, it's Jinny and Magda's case...but I might need you guys to help them out later."
"Okay,no problem"
"Anything for your gorgeous Captain,huh?"CD whispered with a smirk.
"Is it that time of the month or somethin,CD?"Nate replied a little louder then intended.
Whispering hadn't done a lot of good,Kate heard a lot of the conversation anyways.
"Look,whatever you two are arguing about...work it out...quick."Kate ordered,as she walked past them,and out of her office.
Kate whirled around,when she suddenly felt a pinch on her butt. "Inspector Basso..."Kate looked up at him in shock.
"It wasn't- -"
"Nate,you pig! I can't believe you! Captain I am soooo sorry!I apologize for this jackass,I am no longer dating." CD punched his arm.
"I didn't touch you,I swear!" Nate definded himself. "I'm too chicken."
"Oh,so if you weren't chicken...you would want to?"CD glared at him."Wich obviously means you want to!"
"No,thats not what I said- -"
"Thats what you implied!"
"No it's not!" Poor Nate's face was 5 different shades of red.
"Then what did you mean?"
"Grrrrr! Stop!"He wanted so bad to just scream.
CD couldn't help it,she burst out laughing,"Cap,I'm sorry...it was me! I did it."She cackled."I just had to see his and your
reaction."
"Your faces were priceless!"Jinny was cracking up. "Oh gawd,CD you and me gotta work together on April Fool's!"
"CD,that was cruel"Kate patted Nate's arm,and tried not to laugh. "Why are you with her..if she's so mean?"
"I guess it's an addiction."He shrugged.
"Man,I know all about that.."Jinny offered. "Addiction's a bitch ain't it!"
"Yeah,and so is the blonde standing next to me."He smirked.
"I suppose,I deserved that."She laughed. "I was never mad at ya...I thought what you said to James was funny."


That night Jinny was sitting on her couch flipping through channels on her tv,when there was a knock at the door.
She looked through the peep whole on her door,and saw herself ,seventeen years ago standing on the other side.
"Hi,here let me get that."Jinny took the duffle bag,and sat it by the door,come on in"
"Hi..nice place."Katie looked around,as she sat down on the couch.
"Can I getcha anything? Sumthin to drink or..."
"No thanks,I'm fine."She tried to smile.
Jinny sat down beside her, "Are you okay?"
"Yeah,I'm...I'm fine.."She nodded.
"What do you wanna talk about?"
"Everything..."She sighed. "I'm just...really scared..."She rubbed her belly."y'know...about birth..after birth...being a mom."
"Yeah,I know."Jinny sighed,and leaned back. "Let do you the same favor for you that an old friend did for me..."
"What?"
"Tell you the absolute truth about child birth."
"Okay."Katie chuckled.
"It hurts...like hell!..I have yet to feel a pain worse...but in the end...you are thuroughly rewarded."Jinny smiled and patted her daughter's belly. "But i want you to learn from another one of my mistakes...get the drugs...as much of every drug they will give you."
"Okay..I will definately do that."Katie noded. "Who was your friend?"
"Your grandmother."Jinny thought back to when she went into labor.


By the time Jinny found someone to take her,and they got there...it was too late to go for that epideral.
Jiny lay in the hospital bed,huffng and puffing,and nearly squeezing off the hand of the only person who'd really supported her through everything. Who was ironicly a person Jinny considered to be one of the biggest pains in her ass.
"D...did you find my dad?"
"Yeah..."She looked at Jinny grimly.
"He's not coming is he?"
"...No..."She sighed. She looked at Jinny,the expression on her young,scared face broke her heart. "Screw him...you don't need him."
"Yeah...He'd just pass out anyways."She tried too brush him off as another very strong contraction came on.
"Yeah..Men are wimps..they can put the kids,but they sure as hell can't watch it come out."
"Girl power!."Jinny tried cheer...but it didn't quite come out that way.
"Yeah!"
"In...Inspector Mac..."Jinny relaxed for what little time she had before the next contraction.
"What?"
"Thanks...for everything."
"No problem hunny."Kate smiled.
"No really...I couldn't have handled this alone."
"Sure ya could..you a tough little bitch."
Jinny smiled quickly disapeared as another contraction came on.


"So she was there when I was born?"Katie smiled.
"Yep...right beside me the whole time."Jinny nodded. "She went down to the nusery and took a picture of the baby she thought was you..for me."
"Do you have the picture?"
"Yeah.."Jinny disapeared into her bedroom,and came back witht he picture in hand.
"Yep,thats me."Katie smiled.
"Kewl." That was the only reply to what Jinny considered some of the happiest news she'd ever gotten.
"You are a lot closer to Kate then you let on aren't you?"
"Shhh...I got a reputation to uphold."Jinny smirked.
"Okay...okay,I'll take that as a yes."
"No comment."Jinny replied.

After talking for hours about Jinny's experiences..and Katie's...and getting much closer...And after Jinny eased her daughter's fears of motherhood as best she could ,they fell asleep on the couch together. About three A.M. Jinny felt someone gently shake her.
"Jinny...Jinny wake up."Katie shook her harder this time.
"What? Is somethin'wrong?"Jinny jumped up the minute she saw the terrified expression on Katie's face.
"Yeah..yeah..I think I'm in labor." She stuttered out.
"But you're only seven months along."
"You've got to be kidding me"Katie replied saracasticaly. "And here I thought I was over due."


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As soon as they got to the hospital and got situated,Jinny called Katie's Mom...then she called someone to come keep her from turning into a useless pile of jumbled up nerves. Jinny was in with Katie trying to keep her calm...but it wasn't doing a lot of good,because Katie could tell how nervous Jinny was. Jinny support system who'd gotten there so quickly Jinny wondered if she'd cheated and used her siren,was watching for Sara.
"Captain Kate!" Isaac called out as He let go of his mother's hand and ran over to her.
"Hiya,mini-Cap."She smiled,and ruffled his hair.
"Mom,this is Captain Kate."He informed.
"Hi,I'm Sara, Kaitlyn's mom."She shook Kate's hand and the started inside.
"Nice to meet ya...just wish it could have been under better sircumstances."
"Yeah me too."

"Jinny,.I'm scared."Katie watched the nurse inject something into her IV
"I know...I am too."Jinny admitted,and squeezed Katie's hand. "I'm sure everything will be fine."
"Yeah.."The nurse smiled reasuringly,"This drug usualy works."
"Usualy?"Kate asked nervously."As in not everytime?"
"Just relax,Sweety...everything will be fine."The nurse patted her arm. "I'm gonna steal your sister for a minute,okay?"
"I...I'm not her sister.."
"She's my birthmother."
"Oh,I'm sorry."The nurse smiled,"Well,then I'm gonna steal your mother for a minute."
"Ask Kate to come in,okay? I don't want to be alone."
"Okay."Jinny replied and walked into the hallway witht he nurse.
"The doctor wanted to speak with you in private."She explained. "I'll go get him."
"Okay."
"Normaly..we are not supposed too talk to anyone but the legal guardian about minor age patients.. or let them go back witht he patient...but I'm making an exception in this case."The young handsom Dr. Johnson explained,as He sat down in a chair,and motioned for Jinny to do the same.
"Okay..that doesn't exactly sound reasuring."
"Well,don't let it scare you either...I'm fairly certain that this drug will stop the labor..but that doesn't mean she won't go into labor again before term."
"So what is she gonna hafta stay in the hospital?"
"Not neccesarily..."
The conversation was interupted,when someone called Jinny's name. She turned around to see Sara,Kate and Isaac rushing toward her.
"This is Katie's mom."Jinny introduced the doctor.
"Hi, I'm Dr. Johnson."He shook Sara's hand.
"Sara Harris" She replied.
"Katie wants you to go sit with her."Jinny informed Kate.
"Okay..."Kate smiled."I'll tell her you're here."
"Okay,thank you."Sara replied,and turned her attention back to the doctor.
"Can,I come Captain Kate?"Isaaac looked up her with his big blue eyes.
"Yeah,I guess so,come on,Mini-Cap."

"Hi,Kate."Katie tried to smile.
"Hi,Hunny."She smiled back reasuringly.
"Katie,is my neice gonna be okay?"Isaac asked as He tried to climb onto the bed with her.
"I hope so."She took his hand,and helped him.
"Everything,is gonna be fine." Kate picked up her grand daughter's hand and held it
"Yeah,thats what everybody keeps sayin."
"Captain Kate is smart, Katie."Isaac layed beside her and snuggled up to her."Thats why she's Super Cap...So She's probably right."
"Listen to the child,Katie."Kate smiled. "He knows what He's talking about."
"I'm sure you do agree with him."She chuckled.

"listen up,Doogie!" Jinny got right in the young doctor's face. "That's my daughter in there,and she's in labor with my grand child..."
"Yes,Ma'am - -"
"So you had better figure it out! Rather this drug works or not,you had better do everything within your power to make sure the both of them leave this hospital alive! And if you can't then you'd better suggest a doctor that can! Do I make myself clear?"
"Yes Ma'am." Dr. Johnson nodded. "I will do everything I can,I promise."
"Good."
"Now,if you have no further questions, I woud like to consult with a couple of my colleagues."
"No, go consult all ya want."
Dr. Johnson looked at Sara questioningly.
"What she said." Sara pointed to Jinny with a smirk.
"Okay,I'll be back to talk with you soon."He said and walked away.
Sara starred at Jinny in awe. She was touched,and realived that she cared as much as she did about Katie. And she was glad to have her there,because she was a nervous wreck. But when Jinny said "That's my daughter...." it raised another issue for Sara again. Sharing her daughter. She knew it was selfish,but she wasn't exstatic about the idea. For her daughter...and for Jinny she was. But personally..it was gonna take some adjusting to.
"What?"Jinny asked.
"Nothing."Sara shook her head,and smiled. "...Thank you.."
"For what?"
"For being here..for Katie...and for caring about her...and wanting to be a part of her life...everything."
"Thanks for letting me...and for loving her,and taking care of her,and for being her mom."
"Thank you for letting me."
"Okay,enough mushy gushy love stuff! We got our point across."Jinny laughed. She hadn't even begun to thank Sara as much as she wanted to. But She wasn't a mushy person,so it would just hafta be done a little bit at time.
"Yeah."Sara laughed too. "Come on lets go see.....our daughter."
"I feel so old!"Jinny pouted.
"Don't even complain to me!"She smirked.

"No,Kaitlyn. She's not an accident...she's just...accidently early in your life." Jinny and Sara walked in on a little heart to heart between the Kaitlyns.
"Yeah."Jinny agreed. What Kate had said reminded her of something that had always made her feel better about not keeping Katie,and she thought she might like to hear it. "Ya wanna know what my all time favorite quote is?"
"Shoot." Katie said.
"Someone I hold very dear to me,told me this, when I was feeling selfish about giving you up....They said ..'Jinny, look at it this way...She is ment for this lady, she just had to take a detour through you.' That doesn't really aply here...but,uh...I thought you might like to hear it. It always made me feel better."
"Yeah, you took a detour through Jinny,because my road was under repairs."Sara smirked,and the room broke into laughter. Except poor little Isaac who had given up on understanding anything they were talking about,and was now in his own little world watching the medicine go through Katie's I.V.
Kate grabbed ahold of Jinny's jacket collar and pulled her down so she could whisper, "You remember that?"
"Of course I do."She whispered back. "Word for word. And I have repeated it to myself at least once a day for the past seventeen years."
"Aww,Jinny."Kate smiled.She knew she'd helped Jinny throught that time,but she wasn't aware she'd had such an impact on her.
"Aww Cap." She kissed the top of her favorite pain in the ass's head,and stood up straight again.
Katie figured that Kate was the one that said Jinny's favorite quote,and smiled as she watched them whispering to eachother.


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A few hours had passed,and so far no contractions. Isaac had fallen asleep...while he was watching the goo,as he put it,flow throw the IV in his sister's hand,So Kate took him home with her for the night. And while they were at home snug as a bug in a rug,in comfy beds. Sara and Jinny were trying ot sleep in the chairs in the room. Sara was using Jinny's shoulder as a pillow,and Jinny head was laying on top of Sara's.
Suddenly Katie was awakened by a familiar pain. "Oooowww! ow! ow! ow!"
Jinny,and Sara sat straight up.They looked at Katie,then at eachother,and then back at Katie.
"Hunny,are you okay?"Sara asked.
"Nooooo! Ooowww!"She yelled. "There's a baby trying to force it's way out of my crotch what do you think?!"
Jinny had to smile at that. She remembered saying the same thing to Kate,only she managed to phrase it more crudely then Katie.
"I'll go get a nurse." She said as she rushed out of the room.

"Super Cap?" Isaac whispered,as he tip-toed into her room,and climbed onto her bed."Yahoo...Super Cap?" He poked her shoulder a couple of times.
"Whats wrong,Mini-Cap?" Kate rubbed her eyes,and turned on the lamp,by her bed.
"It's scarey in there alone."He pouted. "I think there's a monster in the closet too...can i sleep in here with you?"
"Sure."She laughed. She was starting to wonder if maybe there was amonster in that closet. Amanda used to think the same thing...and her neice when she spent the night.
"Thanks." He said,as he got under the covers.
"No prob."SHe turned the light back off,and was just about to fall back asleep when she heard another whisper.
"Hey,Super Cap?"
"Yes,Mini Cap?"
"They're gonna be okay,right?"
"Who,Katie,and the baby?"
"Yeah."
"Yeah,I'm sure they're gonna be fine,Sweety."
"Okay,you can go back to sleep now." He said as he snuggled up to her.
"Okay,thank you."She smiled,and put her arm around him. It had been a while since she'd spent time with a five year old.
"No prob."
And this time just as they were about to fall asleep...the phone rang.

"McCafferty."She answered,sleepily
"The uh...the drug didn't work."
"What? Okay,we'll be there soon."Kate turned on the lamp beside her bed again."Get up,Sweety we gotta go back tot he hospital."She said to Isaac.
"Cap,I'm really worried."Jinny sighed. She couldn't believe this was happening. She also couldn't believe how much she'd come ot care for this baby,even though she was her grandchild,She'd only known she existed for four days.
"I know...I am too." Kate was thinking the exact same thing Jinny was. Well almost.She couldn't believe how attached she was to her great grand child already...even though she did not like the idea of being a great grandma,she liked the idea of having a great grandbaby.

Kate grabbed a t-shirt and jeans and threw them on as quickley as possible.
"I can't tie my shoes. "Isaac pouted as He watched her pile her hair into a green clip.
"Okay."Kate bent down and tied them for him. "Come on we gotta go."
"Why? Is Katie okay?"He asked as He rushed down the stairs behind her.
"Yeah,she's fine. We just gotta go talk to the doctor again."She said as she helped him into his coat.
"What about your coat?"He asked as He waited for her to lock the door.
"Eh,screw it."
"Don't say the 's-c' word."He scolded.
"Sorry."
"No prob. Just don't do it again."
"Okay"

"Are there anyother drugs?"Sara asked Dr. Johnson,and the older more experienced Dr. Wilcot.
"Well,there's one other."Dr. Wilcot sighed." But I don't recomend it - -"
"Why not?"
"There are some very serious side affects. It could backfire. It could cause birth defects...most times they don't accure,but there have been many...and to me the risk is too great. Especially with the other drugs that are already in your daughter's system."
"Okay...thank you for your opinion,I really apreciate it."She sighed as tears welled up in her eyes.Could...uh...could you come explain to Katie?..This...this is really her decision."
"Sure."


The sun had just come up a few minutes before Kate got Isaac,who'd fallen back to sleep on the way,out of his booster seat and carried him inside. He squinted at the bright lights of the waiting room,and burried his face against her neck,to block the light. Kate peeked into the window of the hospital room,and saw two doctors inside. When She and Jinny caught eachother's sight,she motioned towards the hallway,to let her know she'd be out there.

"Here,you can lay the lil guy on here."A very...very...very handsom doctor pointed to a gerny parked in the hallway not far from the room.
"Thanks." Kate shifted his weight onto her other arm again,as she walked over.
Her arms felt like they were gonna fall off soon. It had been a while since she carried a five old around.
"He must be worn out."
"Yeah he is...Thanks." She said as she laid him down.
"No prob."
"Doug!" Dr. Green yelled across the hall,and motioned for him to hurry over.
"Excuse me."He quickley said,and rushed down the hall.

Jinny was laying on the hospital bed beside Katie as the doctors explained everything to her. The doctors had left ,and now Katie was left with little time to make probably the biggest decision of her life. Jinny kissed her daughter's head,and excused herself from the room.
She wanted to comfort her as best she could,but first she needed to stock up on some comfort herself. Jinny looked down the hall and spotted Kate leaning against the gerny Isaac was cuddled up with his spiderman doll ,sound asleep on.

"Hey,how is she?What did the doctors say?"Kate asked.
"They said there's another drug they can try,but they don't recommend it."Jinny sighed.
"Oh...so what is she gonna do?"
"I dunno...I think she's gonna skip the drug,and have the baby..."
"Hey,come here."
Jinny gladly accepted the hug from her
captain / friend.
"Why does my life hafta be so d@mn dramatic?"
"Look at it this way. You're life certainly isn't boring."

Sooooooooo wutcha think?? Hmmmmm???well???? Hmmmm?????lol

that was AWESOME!! please post soon, i need to know what happens!!!

That was great! I think you should post more!

Yay,ppl r reading! lol,ty 4 the replies,glad ya like.

This is very short,but at least it's something,right?lol
Heeeeeeere's more.......

"Look at it this way. Your life certainly isn't boring."
"Thats very true. Very true."Jinny chuckled.
"And some thanks to you...Mine isn't either."
"I add spice to your life."Jinny smiled.
"Yes,and a couple of gray hairs."
"Cap?"Jinny lifted her head from Kate's shoulder.
"Jinny?"
"Did Isaac drool on your shoulder?"She asked wiping her cheek.
"It's a possibility." SHe looked down at her shoulder,and saw a wet spot on her coat.
"And you didn't feel the need to tell me this?"
"...Nah..."Kate laughed.
Jinny shook her head and laughed. "Come on."She said as she picked Isaac up,"Gawd,He's heavy."
"Yep."

Four hours later, Katie was following her birthmother's advice and getting the drugs. Jinny's eyes were wide as they slowly stuck the very long needle into her daughter.And they got wider as Katie squeezed Sara's hand,and in turn Sara squeezed Jinny's hand. "Fine time for Cap not to be here."She thought as she gritted her teeth. Jinny was the end of the so called 'pain chain' so she didn't have a hand to squeeze. Jinny was starting to wonder where Kate was. She'd left an hour or more ago,to take Isaac to school. Sara had told him he didn't have to go,but He wanted to. It was his turn to help take care of the class iguanna.
"Okay,all done."The nurse informed."You can let her relax now."She patted Jinny's shoulder with a laugh.
Jinny let out a huge sigh of relief and rubbed her hand. "Drugs...good. Your mother's grip....strong."
Katie laughed,and let out a sigh of relief as well. "Where's Kate?"She asked,as she laid back on the bed.
"That is a very good question." Jinny replied.

"Hi."Kate greeted the very tall young man,with sandy brown hair,She'd been waiting for,with a great big hug.
"Hi."He replied as they continued into the hospital,holding hands."Where's Jinny?"He asked.

When Kate still wasn't back twenty minutes later,Jinny decided to go outside and call her. As she neared the waiting room,she glanced in and saw Kate talking to someone but she couldn't see who. She entered the waiting room,and stopped dead in her tracks. There he sat,just as gorgeous as he was seventeen years ago.
"Hi,Jinny."He said as he got up and made his way over to her. "Long time,no see,huh?"
"Yeah..w...what are you doing here?" She starred at Kate,over his shoulder,as they hugged. She wasn't sure if she wanted to kiss her or kill her at the moment.

Soooooo,whatcha think of that lil bit??Hmmmmm?? Shall I go on??.....Any think they know who the dude is?

That was goooooooood! Hmmmmm Could the man posabibly be Kaite's dad????????? LOl I don't know just a guess???

You are doing an excellent job on this story. Keep writing, I can't wait to see what happens next!

that was GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREAT!!!!!!!!! can't wait for more!!!! :D :D

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that was GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREAT!!!!!!!!! can't wait for more!!!! :D :D

Yeah I agree!!!!:D

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"Mom called me."He explained,as he pulled out of the hug and held her hands. "You...look great."
"Thanks....you do too."She smiled slightly. Then she continued to stare at Kate,"Why did...'Mom' call you?"
Kate got up and walked over tot hem,"Because He needed to know."
"Does He know?"She looked back at him,"Do you know?"
"Yeah,I know..."Jeremy sighed,and bit his lip. "We,need to talk Jinny."
"Yeah,you're right we do...but I gotta - -"
"I know....I understand that now's not the best time, But I wanna meet her...as soon as possible...If she'll meet me."
"Yeah...yeah,she'll wanna meet you." Jinny smiled.
"Mom,says she's you twin..."
"Yeah..."
"Well,then she's gorgeous."
Jinny actually had to hold back a giggle at that comment. He was still the same charmer he was way back when. She glanced of at Kate was just watching the scene unfold with a smile,and back up at him.
"Still got that charm,huh?"She smirked.
"It's better now...I've had more practice."
"I bet you have." She chuckled.
"I uh...I'm gonna go see how my grand daughter is doing." Kate patted Jinny's shoulder and left them there alone.
"Can,we just talk for a minute?" Jeremy pleaded.
"...Yeah...I guess so. but just for a minute,I gotta get back up there."Jinny sighed. "Uh...come on lets go out side."
"Okay."

"Hi."Kate smiled as she entered the hospital room.
"Hey,we were starting to wonder about you."Katie replied.
"Sorry...I,uh...decided to get some stuff done and out of the way...how ya feelin?"
"Drugs....goooood."She smirked.
"Yes they are."Kate laughed.

"Why didn't you tell me?" Jeremy asked,as He took his jacket off,and put it around Jinny.
"Thanks."She smiled. "I...I just thought it would be easier...I mean,If I had told you..you would have - -"
"I would have wanted to try to raise her."
"Yeah...and,then you might not have been able to do all the things you had planned...And I would have felt like it was my fault...and,though your mother would have been proud of you...she still wouldn't have been happy about all the things you didn't do..and she would have hated me...and you probably would have too...I just wanted the best for everybody."
"Thats stupid...Sweet but stupid. I could never hate you....You didn't tell me i have a daughter,and I don't hate you. And Jinny...really...you stole my mother's car and - -"
"Borrowed."She corrected. "I borrowed your mother's car."
"Okay...you 'borrowed' my mother's car,drove it to L.A. and wrecked it....does she hate you?"
"Eh...no...She slapped me...didn't speak to me for a rather long while...made me pay for the repairs...but wrecking her car is not the same as wrecking her son's life."
"Jinny,you wouldn't have wrecked my life. Change the course of it but not wreck it."
"Well,okay...we can't change it now. I'm sorry,okay!"
"Okay..it's okay."
"Y'know that is one thing about you and your mother,that just annoys the hell outta me...you are sooooo freaking understanding! About everything!"
"Would you have prefered,that we cuss you out,and told we hate you,and would never forgive you?"He laughed.
"Well...no."
"Then learn to deal with us."
"I'm gonna have to...I doubt I'll ever get rid of you now."She smirked.
"Now,why would you want rid of this adorable face?'He asked,as he wrapped his arms around her.
"You are just as full of yourself now,as you were then."
"Yep."He nodded,and kissed the top of her head. "And you are just as gorgeous now as you were then."
Again,Jinny had to stop herself from giggling. no other guy had ever managed to make her wanna giggle. "Now what would you wife,think if she saw this picture?"
"Nothing....we got divorced three years ago."
"Oh." Was all she said. She didn't consider that bad news.


"What,is with you people and disapearing?" Sara laughed,as Jinny entered the room.
"Sorry...I uh...ran into an old friend,and I couldn't get him to shut up." She glanced over at Kate,with a smirk.

I know,that was short 2 lol. Whatcha think?? Hmmmmmm??Was it good???Do ya want more??lol

That was cute :)

Oh, how sweet. I love it. But, I'm a sap. Anyway, great job. Post more soon.

YAY!!! It took me a little while to figure out who Jeremy was but I finally got it. HORRAY FOR ME!

Oh, post more! :)

hahahahaha Jinny 'Took" or should I say "Borrowed" it, and took it to La, and then crashed it! LMAO Sorry That was my favortie part...More please!

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"Okay,Katie,it's time to go to the delivery room." Dr. Johnson took offhis rubber gloves and tossed them into the trash can. "A couple of nurses will be in a minute to get you. I'm gonna go make sure everything is set up."
"Okay."Katie let out a nervous sigh.
"You'll do fine."He patted her arm reasuringly and left the hospital room.
"Hey your gonna be fine...don't be nervous..."Jinny brushed her daughter's hair out of her face,"It's not like you're gonna feel anything."She smirked.
"Are ya ready?"One of the nurses asked,as they lifted the arms of the bed up,and toom off the breaks.
"As ready as I'll ever be."
"You're gonna be fine."She said reasuringly,as they began to wheel her out of the roo.
"Yep that seems to be the consensus here."She replied.
As they all left the room,and Kate watched them push Katie holding her mom's hand as tight as she could, down the same hall probably to the same delivery room,she thought back seventeen years.

"Inspector Mac ,I'm scared." Sixteen year old Jinny grabbed the redhead's hand,and clung to it for dear life.
"You're gonna be fine."Kate patted her hand reasuringly.
"I...I know..But the pain..."
"Well, I wish I could tell ya how bad it is...but I have no idea..."
"Yeah yeah, you got the drugs...lucky witch."
As they turned the corner,Kate glanced down the other hall,and saw Casey pulling his dad toward them. She glared at John Sr.,and turned her attention back to Jinny. She didn't tell Jinny that He'd come till a couple years later. She didn't tell her then,because she was afraid He wouldn't be there later,and She didn't want to disapoint her. And she was right. When Kate came out of the delivery room,Casey was waiting alone in the hallway.

Kate was brought out of her thoughts,when she suddenly felt an arm around her shoulders.
"Flashback?" Jinny asked.
"Yeah."Kate nodded with a smiled.
Just as the started down the hall,hand in hand,someone called out, "He wait up!"
They looked back to see Jeremy rushing toward them.
"Hey,what's goin on?"
"It's push time."Jinny replied. "They're on their way to the delivery room."

An hour and a half later,Katie was still in the delivery room,and Jinny was pacign a whole in the hallway floor.
"Jinny,please sit down."Kate pleaded.
"Jinny,you're making me dizzy."Jeremy added.
Jinny didn't hear a word they were saying.She was in her own little world. Her world of seventeen years ago.

"Push,push,push!..."The doctor instructed.
"I am,damn it!"She growled.
"Okay,relax now."
Jinny plopped back on the bed and let out a huge sigh. "I can't do this anymore!"
"Yes you can. Now push."The doctor ordered.
"No, I can't!"She protested. "Inspector Mac, I can't do it."
"You have too,Hunny."Kate squeezed her hand. "Come on,you're almost done."
"One more push,Jinny. Just take a deep breath." The doctor encouraged her."You can do it."
Jinny took a deep breath,and pushed as hard as she could,while tears and sweat dripped down her face.

"Jin?...Jinny?..Jinny Louise?"Kate tried to get her attention."Yahoo?Jin?"
"Huh? Sorry."She snapped back into the present.
"Sit."
"Nah I'm good."She shook her head,and switched directions.

"Push push push!..."The Doctor instructed.
"I am!"She growled.
"Okay,relax now."
Katie plopped back on the bed,and let out a huge sigh. "If it's this hard dopped up...Why would anybody wanna do it the natural way!?"
"Amen to that!" The nurse smirked.
"Okay,push."Dr. Johnson ordered.
"I can't...I can't do this anymore."
"You have to,Sweety." Sara squeezed her daughter's hand."Come on,you're almost done."
"One more push,Katie. Just take a deep breath." Dr. Johnson encouraged,"You can do it."

Fifteen minutes had past,and Jinny was stil pacing,and reminisceing.

"Okay, She's out."The doctor anounced,as He quickley handed the infant to the waiting nurse. "You can relax now."
Jinny laid back. And half a second later,sat up a again. "Wait a minute! Where is she going!? Don't I at least get to see her?!" She pointed to the nurse that just carried her baby out of the delivery room.
"Come on,Doc." Another nurse asked as she wiped the sweat from Jinny's forehead. "Just let her see her."
"No,I'm sorry. I can't. It's procedure."He shook his head.
"But,Doc - -"
"No."
"I don't even get to say goodbye to my own daughter?" Jinny mumbled,as she laid her head on Kate's shoulder and tears rolled down her face.

"Okay, that's it."Jeremy got up and walked over to Jinny.
Jinny was jerked out of her thoughts,when He picked her up,and sat her down beside Kate.
"Sit. Stay. Don't move."He ordered.,and sat down beside her.
Jinny didn't say anything. She just reached into her coat pocket and pulled out the picture of Katie that Kate had taken for her. She'd grabbed it off the coffee table,as She left so early that morning to bring Katie to the hospital. She smiled,and didn't take her eyes off the picture as she reached over and picked up Kate's hand.
Just then a nurse rushed out of the delivery room...the same delivery room,Jinny had Katie in.
They watched the nurse as He rushed down the hall with Jinny's very tiny grandbaby. He was heading for the neonatal intensive care unit. Shortly after, Sara walked slowly out of the delivery room and over to them.

Sooooooooooo,wutcha think?? Hmmmmm???Tell me tell me tell me!...and be honest!

It's just wonderful!....and the flashbacks add a good effect....I hope the baby is ok:( ...post more soon...:D

that was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good!!!!!! please post more soon!!!

You want honesty? I'll give you honesty. I HONESTLY think you should post more..NOW!!!!!! lol..thats hinest enough for ya? lol :)

*sugh* yet another avatar....lol mmmoooorrrrrrreeeee!!!!

Excellent Job. Keep posting.

hey that was awsome! Please let the baby be okay. And post more sooon please!!

Hello, we are still waiting. You've got me hooked, now. You must post more, soon.

Ty 4 the replies! Glad ya'll like it! Heeeeere's more............

"How is she?"Jinny asked. She and Kate..and Jeremy all jumped up as soon as they saw Sara.
"Katie is tired. and says she's getting her tubes tied."She tried to laugh.
"And the baby?"
"they dunno yet."
"Oh.."
Yeah.."Sara looked at Jeremy curiosly.
"Oh,uh...Sara..this is Jeremy Shular...Katie's father."Jinny introduced them. "Jeremy,this is Katie's mom."
"It's very nice to meet you."He shook her hand.
"You too."She tried to smile. "Uh,Jinny...can I talk to for a minute...please?"
"Yeah sure."

They walked down the hall a ways. "If it's about Jeremy..Don't worry about it. I know,and He knows now's the time."
"Okay.Sara nodded,"Thats what it was."
"And I'm not just gonna spring him on her...I'm gonna talk to her first."
"Okay good."
"Anything else?"Jinny chuckled.
"Nope." She said and they joined Kate and Jeremy again.

"Im gonna get back in there. It's nice to meet you Mr. Shular."Sara shook his hand again. "They're gonna move her back to the room in a little bit."She added just before she went back into the delivery room.

As soon as She could Katie went to see her daughter who so far was staying stable condition.
As She sat in the rocking chair,holding the teeny tiny person hooked up to so many machines,in her arms,starring down at her in amazement,She couldn't belive it was possible to love someone so much. Especially someone she'd just met. "Cherilyn Olivia Janine." She said out the blue.
"What?"Kate asked,as she,Sara,and Jinny looked at Katie in confusion.
"I Finally came up with a name for her."She explained. "Cherilyn,my birth name. "She patted Jinny's hand. "Janine...your middle name,Mom...and Olivia is for...Grandma Hotty."She smirked.
"I'm gonna kill Cd."Kate mumbled. "Uh-uh..I told you you're not calling me that."
"Well,since the name fits..."Dr. Ross,the very handsome doctor she'd talked to in the hall,mumbled just loud enough for Her and her grand daughter to hear,as He checked baby Cherilyn's vital stats. "Everything is still stable" He informed the young mother.
"Thats good right?" She tried to hide the smirk on her face.
"Yep."He nodded. "She's doing a lot better then most babies this premature."
"Do you think she'll be okay?"
"I don't know. It's really a fifty/fifty...one day at a time thing. But we are doing our absolute best."
"Okay,thank you." She said as the smirk turned into a frown,and tears welled up in her eyes.
"I'll get out of your way...If you need anything,just have the nurse page me."He said,and walked away.
"Hey,come on,Cheri...I know we're a crazy buncha people, but we love you...like crazy...and we'll take great care of ya..."Katie pleaded with her daughter,"I promise, I'll do my very best to be as good a mom as I can be."
"And we'll be awsome grandmas."Sara said.
"Yeah,we'll spoil ya rotten."Jinny added.
"And I'll top that of course...after all I'm the 'great' grandma."Kate gently picked up the tiny infants tiny hand.
"you just hafta be the best at everything don'tcha?"Jinny raised her eyebrow.
"Me? Nooo...I don't have a competitive bone in my body."She winked.

~Thursday~
Cherilyn Olivia Janine Harris was now one day old,and she'd already had a lot of visitors. Some of Katie's friends from school, even some of her teachers came by. And everyone from the division. She was quite popular with the staff too. Right now Katie was alone with her daughter at special request.Dr. Ross had just finished checking her stats, so far everything looked okay. She hadn't really improved,but she hadn't gotten worse either. Katie was humming a song to her that her mom used to hum to her,and rocking her,when suddenly one of the machines started making a long loud high pitched noise. and Then another began to do the same.
"Dr. Ross!"She yelled.

~Saturday~
Jinny still hadn't talked to Katie about her father...with all the drama,and sadness going on, It just wasn't the right time.
"Hey",Jinny greeted,as She walked up to Sara. "How's Cheri?"
"Stable,thank God."Sara replied."Hey,have you seen or talked to Kate?"
"Nope,why?"
"Because,she was holdingCheri,and then she gave her back tot Katie and rushed out. We haven't seen her in probably twenty minutes."
"Oh,well I'll go look for her."Jinny said.
"Okay, uh...Dr. Ross said He saw her go that way."Sara pointed down the hallway.
"Okay."Jinny started down the hallway. She glanced into all the rooms with open doors,and checked the restrooms. She didn't find her there,so she took a left down the next hallway.She glanced into all the rooms with open doors,She checked the little waiting /children's play room. She reached the end of the hall,and still no sign of the missing redhead. But there was one more place to look,while she was in there. She pushed open the heavy door,and quietly entered the chapel. Sure enough,there she was. Sitting in the third row back from the front.
"Hey."Jinny whispered.
"Hi" Kate whispered back,as she watched Jinny sit down beside her. Jinny picked up her hand , and joined her as she continued what she was doing.


I'll try 2 post more 2morrow...if ya want me 2 that is;) ......

*Jumps up and down* That was great!!! MORE MORE MORE!! :)

Awww Emma that was soo sweet! I really enjoy your moments with Kate and Jinny. Anyway please post more soon!

Hmmmm New page You know what that means!! MORE MORE MORE!!! Yaaaaaaay does happy dance more more more! LOL

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Hmmmm New page You know what that means!! MORE MORE MORE!!! Yaaaaaaay does happy dance more more more! LOL

Yay! ty 4 the page! Heeeere's more 4 ya!

~Monday~
"Oh wow! She's adorable!"Jeremy smiled at the picture of his grandbaby,and his daughter. "Katie looks just like you!"
"Yeah, toldya."Jinny chuckled.
"Thanks for taking these for me,Jin."He pulled her into a big ole bear hug,and gave her a quick kiss on the lips. Wich kinda suprised her,but she kissed him back. They had almost picked up where they'd left off. Granted they had a lot of catching up to do,but they were practically as close as they were seventeen years earlier.
"Well,I'm gonna get back in there,now.."
"Okay."He replied."I'll get out of your way...and go stare at these some more." He chuckled.
"Okay..I'll talk to her as soon as I can - -"
"I know, I understand."
"That is something you don't get from Cap."
"What,my patience?"He laughed.
"Yep."
"Okay,well kiss them "He waved the picture in the air,"And my Mom for me,okay?"
"I'lle even put on extra lipstick."She smirked.
"Mom would fire you."He laughed.
"Yeah,She's been tellin me that for the past nine years I've worked for her."
"Bye."He laughed.
"Bye." Jinny stood in the hallway and watched him walk away.
"Was that who I think it was?"Katie asked. She'd recognized him from a picture Jinny had shown her.
Jinny jumped,and whirled around,to see who'd startled her. "What?"
"Was that guy who he looked like?"
"uh....yeah."Jinny bit her lip nervously.
"W..why didn't you tell me he was here? How long has he been here?"
"A..about...four days."Jinny shrugged. "I didn't tell you,cause I didn't think it was the right time to bring up the subject...y'know with all the drama going on."
"Oh...D...does he want to meet me?"
"He's dieing to meet you."Jinny smiled.
"Oh..."Katie mumbled,and nodded her head slowly." D..do you think you could still catch him before he leaves?"
"Yeah."Jinny nodded,smiling from ear to ear. "Do you want me too."
"You better run like hell." She nodded.
"Okay. "She said,and did just that.

"Jeremy!"She called out to get his attention,as she ran through the hallway like a banshee. "Jeremy!"
He turned around,and waited for her."What?" Where's the fire?"He asked as he caught her. She was running so fast,that she couldn't stop in time,and crashed into him.
"Katie..."She gasped for breath.."Hold on..let me...catch...my breath."
"Okay."
"Okay.."She began,still panting," Katie...wants to...meet you.."She walked over to a water fountain,and practically drowned herself.
"You talked to her? That quick?"
"She..She saw us talking,and she recognized you.."She got another gulp of water. "I showed her a picture of you...and she wants to meet you."
"Well,then come on,lets go!"
"Hold on." She said and continued to drink from the water fountain.
"Hurry up."


"Hey,where's Jinny goin so fast?"Kate asked.
"To uh...catch up with..uh...my father.."Katie said with a very nervous smile.
"Oh.."Kate smiled,and put her arm around her grand daughter. "Don't be nervous...He doesn't bite."
"I can't help it."
"Ya want me to tell you mom to come out here?"
"Yeah."
"Okay." Kate patted her shoulder and went to the neonatal to get Sara.


Jinny finally finished getting a drink of water. She straightened up,and wiped her mouth,with the back of her hand. "Okay,lets go."She said.
"Are ya sure ya don't want some more?"He smirked.
"Shut up and come on." She grabbed his hand,and they headed down the hallway together.

Katie grabbed her mother's hand as soon as she came out of the neonatal.
"Stop."Sara ordered, putting her foot of Katie's, to stop her from tapping it incessantly.
"Sorry."She said,and unconciously started tapping her other foot. But when she saw the coming down the hall some of the anticipation eased. She and Sara laughed at the sight,of him coming towards them,carrying Jinny on his back.
"Thanks for the ride,big boy." She said as she got down. "And Katie, Sweetie,no making me sprint like that,Okay?....gawd,I gotta start goin to the gym again."
"Okay."She nodded with a laugh.
Jeremy and Katie just starred at each other for a moment,trying to think of what to say to eachother.
"Wow,you look like Jinny."
"Heh...yeah." She grinned,and tooked her hair behind her ear.
"It's really nice to meet you, Katie." He held out his hand. He wasn't sure what he should do. Shake her hand or hug her?
"Yeah,you too."She nodded,and shook his hand. "Jinny's told me a lot about you."
"Yeah, she's told me a lot about you too."He smiled.

That wasn't a lot, but I'll try 2 post more asap. Wutcha think???

Awww gotta find out what happens with Daddy! LOL post more!

Awesome!! More, please.

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"Whoa!" Jinny yelled as she fell off the ladder. "Thank you. "She let out a sigh of relief when she landed in Jeremy's arms.
"It's raining gorgeous babes! Yahooooo!" He laughed.
"You can put me down now."She smiled.
"Yes I can,but that doesn't mean I want to."
"But,ya have to."She gave him a quick kiss,"They're gonna be here soon,and we're not done decorating."
"Traffic is thick." He said,and kissed her back.
"Hey,save the mushy gushy crap for later,and put that banner up." Kate interupted their make-out session with a smirk.
"She is very bossy." Jeremy said,as he put her down.
"No kiddin!"Jinny laughed as she climbed back up the ladder.
Three months had gone by Everyone had gotten to know eachother,and gotten close. Jinny and Jeremy had rekindled a certain old flame. Kate and James had gone out a couple more times.And Dr. Ross had asked her out a couple of times,though she'd yet to say yes or no.
"Hey,Jeremy,think fast!" Jinny yelled,as she let herself fall into his arms.
"I like this game, this is fun." He laughed.
"If thats them, I'm blaming you two, for the decorations not being ready." Amanda rolled eyes,as she went to answer the door.
"Hi." Raina greeted with a smile,as she entered the house.
"Are they here,yet?" Magda asked,as she followed right behind her.
"Nope not yet,but they will be any minute."
"You don't even have the decorations up,yet?" Raina asked.
"Correction. THEY don't even have the decorations up yet."Kate pointed to Jinny and Jeremy,who were kissing.
"Oh go get a room."Raina smirked."And get out of our way,so we can get this finished."
"We're done...for now. "Jinny laughed,and grabbed a bag of ballons. "Here, you're the one with the most hot air in ya,blow these up." She said,and tossed them to her.
"I am going to choose to ignore that." Raina glared at her,and opened the bag of balloons.
Ten minutes later Amanda had just finished taping up the last balloon,when the front door opened,and in walked Katie with her three month old daughter in her arms. The daughter who most of the doctors said probably wouldn't live past thirty days.
"Suprise!" Everyone said.They didn't yell because they didn't want to wake up Cherilyn.
"Aw,wow, thanks,guys." Katie smiled.
"Well, you never got a baby shower,while you were pregnant,so this is a..'Baby shower/welcome home Cheri' party."Sara explained.
"Sit in your party chair,Katie!" Isaac pointed to the rocking chair decorated with balloons and streamer. "I decorated it. Super Cap helped me put the tape on."
"Well, it's very pretty, you did a very good job." She laughed,and sat down. "Thank you."
"My pweasure."He nodded. "Can I hold her?"
"May,I please." Sara corrected.
"May, I ,please?" He said with a sigh.
"Sure, get up here." Katie patted her lap. Isaac climbed into her lap,and got comfortable,and She carefully laid Cheri in his lap.
"You can take your hand off."
"No, I gotta hold her head,she can't hold it up by herself."
"Why not?"
"Because she's a little baby."
"Smile." John Sr. instructed,as he took a picture of the three. "I'm pretty good with a camera,if i do say so myself...and I do." He gloated,as he showed Kate the picture.
"It's adorable."She laughed.
"Oh,that reminds me!" Kate anounced. "Hey,Jinny, can ya grab my purse for me?"
"Sure. " Jinny grabbed the purse off the coffee table,and handed it to her.
Katie,opened the front pocket,and got out a note with the name Kate written on it. "Here, Dr. Ross,told me to give this to ya...Grandma Hotty."
"I'm gonna kill CD." Kate sighed as she took the note. "And,how did the picture remind you of Dr. Ross?"She asked as she unfolded it.
"Well, You said 'Adorable'...and Dr. Ross is...."
"Adorable."Kate finished for her. She rolled her eyes,as she read the one sentece,followed by a phone number,on the note.
"What's it say?"Jinny asked as she snatched it from her. "Oooo." She smirked,as Kate snatched it back. "Cap,just put the man out of his misery."
"Yeah,if ya don't wanna say 'yes' just shoot him,so He'll stop wining." Katie laughed.
"Oh, Casey says that Him,and John Jr are really sorry they couldn't be here,but they had to work." Kate said.
"BOOOLD segway." Amanda laughed.
"This is Katie,and Cheri's moment,lets focus on them,okay?"She said,as she folded the note again,and shoved it in her pants pocket.
"Gimme the little rugrat." Jinny smiled and reached for her grand daughter. " It's my turn to hold her."
"Ooo,photo-op!" John Sr. smiled,and aimed the digital camera at Jinny,and Cheri. "Smile,Grandma..I'm sorry, I mean Neenee." He smirked. Neenee was the title they'd gotten Jinny to agree to. She didn't want to be called Grandma, or anything like that, because it made her fell old. But 'Neenee' sounded grnadma-ish...but young grandma-ish,as Jinny put it. "Okay,now lets get a picture of both the grandmas,and Cheri." John Sr. motioned for Sara to stand beside Jinny.
"Okay, now lets get one of the great-grand parents." Sara said,as she took the camera from John,and Jinny handed Cheri to him.


"When your dad,takes pictures,he really takes pictures doesn't he?"Katie chuckled,as she clicked through the pictures,they'd just loaded onto the computer from the camera. It was lunchtime,the party was over,and Kate had made everyone go to work...except Jinny,and herself.
"Yep, He gets a little camera happy sometimes."
"Well,I'm glad He got camera happy today." She smiled down,at her daughter,laying sound asleep in her arm. " I don't think We have enough ink in the printer to print all of these out."
"Oh well, I'll just e-mail them to my computer at work and print them out there."
"And won't you get in trouble for wasting...company ink?"
"Hmmm...you might be right, My boss not like it too much if she finds out,that i used the printer to print out pictures of her great-grand daughter." Jinny smirked.
"Just because your captain is your daughter's grandmother, doesn't mean she's gonna let you get away with murder."
"Eh, I don't think She'd miss Raina,till her head quite hurtin,and she realized why." Jinny let out an evil laugh.
"Is Raina,still waiting for us to get revenge on her for spying?"
"Nah, I finally put her out of her misery,and told her we weren't gonna do anything...this time."
"Oh..."Katie laughed.
"Lunch is ready. " Kate said,as she walked into the family room, starring at the note from Dr. Ross.
"Oh,just call him and say yes. Nothin's stoppin ya."Jinny stated.
"Do ya think I should?"
"Uh...D'oh."Kate laughed. Otherwise,we wouldn't keep tellin ya to say 'yes'....Come on,whats it gonna hurt?"
"Nothin."
"Exactly, now go call him."
"He's probably not home." She shook her head,and shoved the note back in her pocket.
"That's his cell phone." Kate informed her. "He told me to tell,you to call anytime."
"I still dunno." She shrugged.
"Do ya want me to call him for ya?"Jinny asked as she picked up the phone.
"No, I don't."She snatched the phone out of her hand.

Sooooooo, wutcha think??? Hmmmm??I wanna know,tell me! lol

I think that was absolutly wondeful!...now you gotta post more REALLY REALLY soon....:D

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Originally posted by maria1986
I think that was absolutly wondeful!...now you gotta post more REALLY REALLY soon....:D

What she said!

Ty 4 the replies! And I'm sure you're gonna like this part to,Cat lol
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"Okay, I called him,are you happy now?" Kate said,as she entered the family room.
"Depends,do you have a date?"Katie asked as she changed Cheri's diaper,with her mom watching closely over her shoulder.
"Yes,we're goin to dinner tomorrow night."
"I'm happy." Jinny,Katie,and Sara said in unison.
"Good. I'm glad that you're happy that I'm gonna look like a cradle robber."
"You're not a cradle robber. Mrs. Robinson is a cradle robber. "Jinny smirked.
"I'm almost old enough to be his mother."
"Keyword,Katydid, 'Almost'." Sara said as she took a bite of her pizza.
"Y'know, I used to know somebody named Kate Robinson." Katie laughed.
"You're not helping any."Jinny held back her laughter.
"Almost still counts."
"No it doesn't." Sara stated.
"Look at it this way. You are sampling,the midlife crisis,that you are well intitled to,for being the hard working,straight-laced,play by the rules,do-gooder,feminist hard ass,you've been all these years."
"Yeah,what Jinny said." Katie smirked.
"Something tells me, i don't wanna hear this conversation." Jeremy said,as he turned around and left the room again.
"C'mere." Jinny motioned for Kate to lean close to her. "And,may I remind you of the very sexy,and young D.A. Allen O'Conner?" She whispered into her ear. Kate just starred at her in shock. "Hehe,I know a couple of things about,like you know things about me." Jinny winked at her.


"Wahooo!,Kaitlyn! you naughty girl,you!" Jinny cackled. "Too freakin bad,those things are so freakin big,or I'd barrow your whole drawer!
"Assuming,you're not talking about me..."Katie laughed.
"No, I am talking about the other one...And for the record, If I go through your drawer,and see this stuff, I'll talk to your mother about convent school....Would ya look at this, Even over my shirt,and my bra,the cups are too big! I feel so...flat...it's like comparing Mount Olympis to...Mullberry Hill!"
"Jinny,get it off,put it back,and get out of my underwear drawer now!"Kate ordered.
"Okay okay, sheesh."Jinny laughed, continuing to rumage through the drawer. "Ooooo! Hmmmm,you might need these tonight." She smirked. "Hurry up,and pick out an outfit,so you can pick out a purse to put these in!"
"Put what in?" Katie asked,from inside the closet.
"Um,well...you're obviously not naive about this subject,but I don't think you want that image of your grandmother in your head."
"Ooohhh..."She nodded her head." Ewwww!"
"Haha, ya got the image didn't ya?" Jinny laughed.
"Yeah..."
"There now it's gone." Kate said as she lightly hit Katie in the back of the head. "Jinny, i'm gonna count to three,and if that drawer isn't shut,and your ass in this closet, I'm gonna get my gun."
"okay okay sheesh!" Jinny shut the drawer,and rushed into the walk-in closet. "Why? Is there something else in there,you don't want me to see?" She raised her eyebrow.
"No,there's not,now help me pick out an outfit."
"What about this?"Jinny pulled out a tight strapless black mini dress.
"Hell no,that was a gag gift from Amanda."
"Can I have it?"
"Sure,and the thigh high leather boots that go to it,are over there."
"I LOVE your daughter's sense of humor!"She cackled,as she grabbed the boots,and decided to try her new outfit on.

"Katie,I swear if you make me look like a hooker,Your mom will be raising Cheri!"
"Oh would you chill out..."Katie laughed,as she grabbed a tube of lipstick off the counter. "Style in clothing,is not hereditary,just because the woman rocking my daughter is dressed like a hooker,doesn't mean I will do the same to you....but for the record,I claim Amanda's next 'gag gift'."
"And why did I even agree to this anyways, I've picked out my own outfit,and did my own hair and make-up for many dates."
"Because ,this isn't just any date,it's the first of your mid-life crisis."
"I'm not going through my mid life crisis."
"Well, you should. I mean most people do it when they find out they're gonna be a grand parent...you are a GREAT grand parent...you're behind schedule my dear."
"No,You and Jinny were ahead of schedule." She smirked.
" Yeah yeah. " She laughed." And you're doing this because, I love to do make up,and hair,and all that stuff,and you know that I'm a bigger nag then both of my mom and Jinny combined. And I think Jinny was just looking for an excuse to go through your underwear drawer."
"Probably."
"The two best ways to learn about somebody,is their underwear drawer,and they're purse."
"yep.....Uh-oh!"


"Hairbrush,lipstick,other various cosmetic products typically found in a purse...boring,boring,boring....Hmmm,what do ya say,we take a look inside Nanna's wallet,now?Hmmm?...Do you like that idea,Cheri?" Jinny asked the infant laying in her car seat. "Yeah?...I do too." She laughed as she opened the walet," Hmmm...Visa,American Express...other verious credit cards...loads of dough..but We won't count it,because there's probably more interesting stuff to look at....Ah,yep! I'm so smart...slap me some skin,Cheri berry...No?Okay,fine be that way....Lets look at the pictures in here now."She took the photo book out of the walet,and looked through it.

"How much longer is this gonna take? I'd like to get down there before that crazy woman ransacks my purse."
"Why? What's she gonna find in there,that ya don't want anyone to see?"
"Nothing,I just don't want everything in my purse spread all over the coffee table.."


First Jinny came across one of Kate and her children . Then one of Jeremy,and one of Amanda when they were babies. After that was a picture of Kate's neice and nephew,and after that,the poor cat that her nephew killed.
"You're Nana seems to be very family oriented..."
And then she found one of Amanda and Jill,and one of herself and Jeremy,and one of Katie,Cheri,Kate,herself,Jeremy,Sara and Isaac. "Awww,I feel loved,don't you feel loved,Cheri?" She smiled,as she held the photos up for Cheri to see. "Okay,done with the wallet...hmmm,I wonder what could be in there..."She said,as she tossed the wallet aside,and unzipped a small pocket inside the purse.

"Okay,you're done. You can look now." Katie smiled,as she pulled the towel off the mirror. "You look great,I did a good job."
"Yes you did." Kate laughed,as she inspected her hair and make-up in the mirror.
"See,you under estimated me."
"No i didn't, just judging,by the taste,and since of humor of the person you came out of,I was a little nervous."
"Ya gotta love her." Katie laughed.
"Yeah,otherwise, I wudda killed her looong ago.Am I free to go?"
"Yeah."

"Why,Kate McCafferty!" Jinny laughed. "Yes,it is a very interesting find,Cheri...Your Nana is just full of suprises."
"Jinny,I'm gonna kill you!"
"Uh-ooooohhh,Busted!" Jinny made a shocked face at Cheri,as she began shoveling stuff back into Kate's purse. "It was all the rugrats idea! She made me!"
"The kid can't burp on her own,how the hell could she force someone twice her size,strength,and supposedly mental capacity do anything?"
"You look at that adorable little face, and tell me that you be able to say 'no' to it"
"Hey,don't bring my innocent young daughter into this crime." Katie laughed as she picked her up out of her car seat.
"Innocent my ass,it's all an act! That is one sneaky,manipulative little brat right there." Jinny laughed.
"It runs in the family." Kate raised her eyebrow,as she rearranged her purse.
"Yep,and you're the ring leader." Jinny picked up Kate's wallet,and put it in the purse she was using that night,along with make-up,incase she needed a touch up later. "I slipped a lil somethin-somethin into your wallet,that might come in handy later." She winked.


"Good evening,Dr. Ross." She smiled and stepped aside,for him to enter. "Kate will be down in a minute."
"Great thanks." He nodded. He examinded the black mini dress,and thigh high stiletto boots Jinny was still wearing. "You look nice."
"Thank you, I borrowed it from,Kate." She smiled.
"Hmmmm...." He thought with a smirk. That smirk was exactly the reaction Jinny was going for.
"Excuse me for a moment." She said,and walked half way up the stairs. "Oh,Katie,Dear!"
"Wich one?" They yelled back in unison.
"The one who's date is here!" She replied.
"Okay,Be there in a sec."
And a sec later she came walking down the stairs looking like a million bucks.
"Hi." She smiled.
"Wow,you look great."
"Thank you."

Soooooooooo?? Wutcha think?? Hmmmm???

Originally posted by MovieHuntress17
Ty 4 the replies! And I'm sure you're gonna like this part to,Cat lol

Soooooooooo?? Wutcha think?? Hmmmm???


Yeap! Loved it!!!!!!!!!!! :) *biiiig grin*

freakin awesome post!! more please!!:)

Heeeeeeere's more,hope ya like.......................


"Oh I see..."Kate said with a chuckle.She wasn't at all interested in the conversation,but she didn't want to be rude. The conversation died,and they sat in silence for a moment. "Excuse me,please, I'll be right back." She said,and left the table and headed to the restrooms of the resturaunt. She leaned against the wall in the hallway,and let out a sigh of relief.She was kind of suprised.This wasn't the evening she had predicted. He was a nice guy,and funny,and VERY good looking. But as far as dating went...it wasn't gonna work. They had nothing in common,And she was ready for the date to be over.
"You look like you just escaped from the date from hell."
Kate looked up to see John Jr. standing next to her," Nope, just taking a break from him." She sighed.
"What's the matter with him? Boring?A Jerk? Too handsy? I can go kick his ass,if ya want me too." He smirked.
"No,that won't be necessary,Thanks anyways." She rolled her eyes. "But you can do me another favor...call my cellphone in ten minutes."
"Ah,the old 'emergency,gotta go' trick."He chuckled.
"Yep,it has worked for me many times."
"Okay,what's your number?"
"568-7677."


"I am so tired." Katie sighed as she collapsed onto the couch.
"Get used to it." Sara smirked. "And be grateful you have such a good little girl."
"Oh,I am. I am." She nodded. "Was I as good as her?"
"Yep."
"Oh i see how it goes, You gave me all the grief,kickin and rollin,and never letting me sleep...and,when you were born...Oh jeeez!...but for her,you were a good girl." Jinny stuck her tongue out at Katie.
"Okay,Isaac,time for bed." Sara informed the now six year old,who was playing his Looney Tunes game on playstation.
"But you said I could stay up late."He wined.
"And You did stay up late,now get."She said,turning off the game. "This one however,was a monkey on speed."
"Jinny, will you tell me the 'Little Red Ridinghood' story again?"Isaac pouted.
"Sure,Munchkin,I'll be in there in a minute."


"You've got to be joking."Kate laughed. "You can call anytime now,Johnny." She thought.
"I'm serious. It really happened."
"I'm glad I'm not a doctor."
"And,I'm sure I'm glad I'm not a cop."
"I've seen some pretty grusome stuff...i don't know if it's a good thing,or a bad thing,but after a while ya get kinda used to it." She glanced down at her watch to see if it had been ten minutes yet. "Finally!" She thought,when her phone began to ring. "Excuse me,it might be work." She said as she got her phone out of her purse,and answered it.


"Hmmm...y'know what,I think I'm gonna go meet everybody at Anchorside..."Jinny smirked.
"Assuming Kate and Dr. Ross might have gone there,after dinner,so you can do a little spying,while you hang out?"Katie laughed.
" Now do you just think like me,or are you psychic?"
"I think like you...and I still can't figure out why that scares Kate,and everyone so much."
"Me either."
"Oh well,get goin...and take the camera."
"Aye,Aye Captain!" Jinny gave her daughter a kiss on the head,and jumped up.
"Captain?! Where's Captain!?" Isaac asked,as He ran into the room.
"No,She's not here,Sorry Munchkin."Jinny laughed.
"Oh..okay...don't trick me like that!"He through his arms in the air,as he headed for his bedroom,wich He was supposed to be in,asleep.
"Well,good night to you too." She laughed.
"Are you gonna change?"
"No. I look goood." She flashed an evil smile."But,I am gonna go dig into your make-up bag,if ya don't mind."
"Of course not."

"I owe you." Kate said,when she exited the resturaunt,and saw John Jr. sitting on a bench,with his cell phone in hand.
"Okay, go to Anchorside with me,and we'll call it even"
"Eh,what the hell. Lets go."She said,rather suprised by the invitation. But she figured,she was all dressed up,and no place else to go,so...


"Hey,wait up!" Jinny called out,as she ran as best she could ion stilletto boots,to catch up with the gang.
"You look nice."Nate said,examining Jinny's outfit."Ouch!" He rubbed his arm where CD punched him.
"Thanks,I stole the outfit from Cap."She smiled.She just couldn't resist getting Nate's reaction.
"Really?"He smirked,and rubbed his arm again,after CD punched him again.
"Well,no, I asked her if I could have it first." She admitted.

"Oh gawd,you can't be serious!" Kate exclaimed. She was cracking up at a story about a date,John jr. was telling her.
"I swear on my badge."He laughed.
"O gawd,thats hilarious!" She took a sip of her beer. She was very suprised that she was having such a good time with him..and that they'd been there so long,and it only seemed like a few minutes. When she was at the resturaunt with Dr. Ross,they'd been there for thirty minutes,and it had felt like an eternity.

"I'm telling you the full moon causes weird things to happen."
"Nate,My friend,you are crazy." Jinny stated. "That is nothing but the power of suggestion caused by,crazy myths,created and believed by crazy people like you."
"No,it's not."He protested,as he pushed open the door to Anchorside,and held it for the ladies in his group..wich infact,was everyone but himself.
"Nothing has ever happened to me when the moon was full,and it's full now,and nothing weird is happening."
"Same here." Cd added.
"Then what do you call that?"Magda pointed to a booth towards the back.
"Uh...."Jinny starred at the sight of her captain,and her older brother..who to her knowledge hated eachother,laughing,and apperently having a pretty good time," Pure coincedence."
"Yeah,okay." Magda laughed,as they sat down at a table.
"I thought they hated eachother." Nate smirked.
"They do. They...are probably drunk."
"Jinny,that doesn't help your case any." Raina smirked. "First of all...Cap drunk? how often does that happen?And thats a rhetorical question. And second. Cap gettin drunk with John Jr?"
"Oh shut up." Jinny stuck her tongue out at her.
"You just hate it when,I'm right,and you're wrong,don'tcha."She smirked.
"Okay,changing subject." Jinny raised her eyebrow.


"So till this day,CD claims,I said 'Good night,Mommy.' right before I passed out."Kate chuckled." But I don't remember it. I don't remember anything,after I got shot,till the anestesia wore off."
"Is there a scar?"John asked, trying to calm his laughter.
"Yeah..."
"Can I see it?"
"Yeah,sure...in your dreams."
"Why not?"
"Because it's,in an area that would require you to see a rather private body part." She motioned to her chest.
"Oh,now,I really wanna see!"
"Okay,sure....tonight when you go to sleep,maybe you'll dream about it."She smirked.


"So, how's Grandma hood going for ya?" Cd smiled.
"It's pretty kewl,actually."Jinny chuckled.
"If my grandma,dressed like you are right now,I'd shoot myself."
"And,why is that,Nate?"
"She's 76,enough said."
"Oh gawd,that was an interesting mental picture!" CD,along with everyone else at the table laughed.

"Y'know, I felt bad for ditching Doug ,but I'm glad I did."
"Me too...well,except I never felt bad about you ditching him."John Jr smirked.
"I've had a good time toni- -" Kate was cut off mid sentence.

"Oh my god!" Jinny spit her rootbeer all over the table,as she watched her big brother lean in and kiss her captain."Five...four...three..two..."Jinny started to count down till Kate punched him,but when she got to one,instead She saw Kate kiss him back.
"And If I saw my great-grandma do that,I would shoot myself!."Magda smirked.
"It's the full moon,I tell ya!" Nate laughed.

Soooo,wutcha think??? Hmmmm??? Did ya see that comin?? Did ya?Did ya? tell me! lol

:'( *sniff* How could you do this to me? :( Poor Rossyboy...


but nevertheless... HILARIOUS! lol :)

OMG that was was...WEll I can't put it into words! LOL I mean yes huge suprise that she ended up with John!! anyway MORe please!

Mahahahaha I haven't even been on in a few days, and my first day back a gave a nice NEW PAge!!!!! mawahahahahahaha MOre please!

Originally posted by Bonnie Is Great!
Mahahahaha I haven't even been on in a few days, and my first day back a gave a nice NEW PAge!!!!! mawahahahahahaha MOre please!

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"Wahoo!,Yeah John!" Nate cheered as they watched the kiss grow longer,and longer.
"Okay,that was funny once,Nathan."CD warned.
"Oh my god." Jinny mumbled. She took a sip of her rootbeer,and missed her mouth. "Aw,crap!"
"Gawd,I wish I had gotten that on tape!" Raina cracked up,as she helped Jinny wipe up the spilled rootbeer.

"Heh...well,uh..."Kate looked at John Jr,rather stunned at what just happened."Heh...certainly didn't see that comin..."
"I,uh...kinda figured...you'd slap me...heh.."He was stunned to,but went in for another kiss.
She returned the kiss,but quickly pulled away,"Uh,I uh..I gotta go."She quickley got up. "See ya."
"See ya." He said,as he watched her walk away.

Kate caught eyes,with Jinny,and everyone else as she passed the table. She paused for a moment,then continued on her way,without saying a word. "Just fabulous! Now I'll never hear the end of it!" She thought with a sigh. They watched her walk away,and then they watched as John jr. ran after her,not even noticing them.
"Cap,must be a good kisser."Nate smirked. "Ouch! CD stop hitting me!,I was joking." He added,as he rubber the back of his head.
"You can only joke like that so many times,before it starts getting you in trouble...and you have passed the limit."

Just as Kate remembered her purse,and turned to go back for it,John Jr,came outof the resturaunt,with it in hand.
"Here,you might need this." He said as he handed it to her.
"Yeah,thanks." she said,as she hailed a taxi.
"No prob."
"Well,uh..."Kate tried to think of something to break the extrememly awkward silence."I,uh...actually...had a nice time tonight."She said,obviously suprised that she had had a good time.
"Yeah...me too..."He nodded,"You're great kisser." He winked.
"Uh,thanks...you're not so bad yourself."She smirked,as she got in the taxi,and it drove off.

*************The Next Day*************

All day so far,Jinny had and Kate had been watching eachother's every move.Jinny was watching her,because she was acting somewhat awkward,and because she was hoping for some clues about last night,and she just couldn't help it,because she was so stunned about what she saw lastnigt. Kate was watchign Jinny,because Jinny was watching her,and it was driving her crazy.And She knew at some point Jinny would probably have some questions for her.Raina had already had a billion.

"You didn't answer your phone last night."Raina smirked. "Why,did you answer your phone last night?"
"Because,I didn't want to listen to you."
"Why?What were you doing that couldn't wait?"
"Nothing,Raina."
"Why didn't John Jr,ever come back,after He rushed after you?"
"I don't know. I wasn't there..."Kate shrugged. "Maybe,He went home."
"Ah, but who's home?Be straight with me Cap.Your home?"
"No!"
"Then why didn't you answer the phone?I called,and Jinny called,and we didn't get an answer."
"I told you why! Because I wasn't in the mood to get the third degree."
"Uh-huh,okay."
"Raina,leave me alone!" Kate said,as she motioned for Magda,and Jinny to follow her into her office.


"Captain,it's been three freakin months, And we haven't found any hard evidence,to prove that there's any dirty work goin on."
"And thats why,Magda my dear,you're going undercover!"Kate said with mock enthusiasm.
"Aw,Cap get somebody else,please!"She wined. "I got Ben,and- -"
"Ben,is at Disney World with his grandmother.And Gabe's not gonna mind,because He's on tour."
"Damn it."Magda pouted. "There are some draw backs to having a singer for a husband."
"I'm sure there,is but oh well. Stop wining,and get to work."
"Fine."Magda left the room,but Jinny stayed comfortable in her chair,eyeing Kate curiously.
"There somethin else you need?"
"Just...trying to figure out..when,why and how the hell,Dr Ross and my brother switched places last night."
"We had nothing what so ever in common,and the date was going terribly. John was there,and I had him call my cell phone- -"
"Ah,the old 'emergancy,gotta go'trick,I've used it many times myself."
"Yeah,and then John asked me to go to Anchorside,and I figured,I was all dressed up,and no place better to go,so what the hell.."Kate sighed. "And we talked,and swapped stories- -"
"and spit." Jinny raised her eyebrow.
"So,ya did see that huh.."She bit her lip.
"Yep...great timing too. Right when Nate and I were arguing about the effects of the full moon."
"Who's point did we prove?"She smirked.
"Nate's. And now he won't shut up about it."

Okay,thats all I can think of 4 now,hope ya liked it,let me know,please!

lol that rocked!!!!!!!

mmmmmoooooorrrrrrreeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oohhhhh my gooooood! lol i just read it! lol when i replied i just replied cuz emma told me to but ....i.... whoa:o

Okay so I never went to sleep, but even sleep deprived, that was AWSOME More please....I work 1 to 5 today so when I get back I hope ther's moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

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Thanksgiving this year was like playing musical chairs.First Jinny,Jeremy,Katie,Cheri,and Isaac went to Kate's,where Amanda and Jill made brunch for everyone. Then they went to Katie's house for lunch/Dinner,where Jinny and Jeremy met the rest of Katie's family,and hit it off pretty well. Now Jinny,Jeremy,Katie,Cheri,and Isaac plus Kate,and Sara were going to Jinny's for dinner.They arranged it that way so that they wouldn't have to eat a lot of John Sr.'s cooking.

"Are you sure you don't have a dog?"Katie whispered to her uncle.
"Certain."Casey chuckled.
"Casey killed him."John Jr. joined in the conversation.
"I did not."
"Yes you did,when you fed him Dad's pancakes."He smirked.
"Well,did ya expect me to eat them,without testing them first?"
"Your lack of balls cost us our dog."
"Well,if you're so brave,eat this."Kate,who'd been tricked into sitting beside John Jr. by Jinny,Katie,and Sara,held a spoonfull of John Sr's homemade stuffing to his mouth."Oh,don't tell me,a big,tuff,moncho man like you,is afraid of a little bite of stuffing."She smirked,as she watched him hesitate.
"Of course not,Little Lady.Thats what we big,tuff,moncho men are for. Protecting pretty,little,weak things like yourself."He smirked,and took the bite.
"Is it that bad?"Jinny laughed,as she watched him quickly spit it out.
"No..."He grimaced. "Pain...foot...ouch..."
"Does your foot hurt?"Kate asked with an evil smile.
"Yes."
"Would you like me to move mine?"
"Yes."
"What's the magic word?"
"Please."
"Eh...."She thought for a moment,"Okay."
"Thank you!"John Jr. let out a huge sigh of relief,as Kate removed her foot from his.
"Oh,no problem,Moncho Man. Thats what we pretty,little,weak things are for."She winked,and the whole room broke into laughter.
"Oh my god,you got him to say please!"Casey said,in between cackles.
"Stillettos.Not just for making you taller."Katie smirked,and gave Kate a high five.

"Whatcha doin?" Jinny asked Isaac,who was hiding behind the couch with John Jr.
"We're huntin."He stated.
"Now,shhhhh! You're gonna scare the prey away!"John Jr. whispered.
"What are ya huntin?"She whispered back.
"Babes."Isaac smiled.
"John!"Jinny slapped him on the shoulder.
"What? It's good for him.Every young boy needs a sport."He smiled devilishly.
"That one."Isaac pointed to someone.
"Wich one? The redhead?"
"Yeah."
"Ya see,Jin...the kid's a natural...look at the babe he picked out."He smirked. "Come on,Kiddo,lets go in for the kill."He whispered. Isaac jumped onto John Jr's back,and they crawled around the room,hiding behind furniture when possible.
Jinny shook her head and found the best seat for the show,she wasn't gonna miss this for the world.
"What are they up to?"Katie asked.
"Huntin for babes."Jinny smirked,"And they're goin after the redheaded one."
"Oh,I gotta see this!"She laughed,and sat down beside Jinny.

"Get down! The prey is looking this way!"Isaac whispered. And they quickley disapeared behind the recliner.
"Is the coast clear yet?"
"I dunno,boost me up."
John Jr raised up a bit.
"Okay thats good."Isaac whispered,when he was just high enough to see. "The coast is clear,Moncho Man."
"Hold on,Brave Boy,it's gonna be a bumpy ride!"
"Yee haw!"

"This is gonna be soooo funny!"Katie did her best not to laugh.
"I knoooow! Look at her,she doesn't suspect a thing.."Jinny snickered."Just contently chit chatting with your mom,and Casey..."
"Shloudn't we be trying to stop John Jr. from corrupting my young brother?"
"Eh...nah,this is an exception,It's to funny to stop."

"Okay,here's the plan Brave Boy."John Jr whispered. "You go out there,and use your blue euyed blonde cuteness to keep the prey distracted okay?"
"I can handle that."He nodded,as he climbed off John Jr's back.
"I'm sure you can. And I'm gonna come up from behind and grab the prey, and...uh.....let's see...I'll.."
"Spin her around and throw her on the couch!"
"And slap her on the butt too!" He added.
"Sounds like a plan,Moncho Man."
"Okay,get in there,and be careful it's a jungle out there!" The two exchanged their secret signal,and Isaac went out on his assignment.

"Hey,Super Cap."
"Hey Mini Cap."Kate ruffled his hair. "You have fun?"
"Yeah,lots!"Isaac smiled ever so sweetly. "Did ya catch any bad guys yesturday?"
"Yeah,a few."She smiled.
"What kind?" He asked,glancing behind Kate a couple of times. "Any robbers?"
"Yeah..."She nodded, "A couple - -AHHH!!"
"Hiya,Little lady!"
"John,Damn it! Put me down!"
"Okay."He said,and spinned around with her a few times,before throwing her on the couch. "There ya go."He laughed,and scooped Isaac up.
"Gimme five,Brave Boy!"
"Good job,Moncha Man!'Isaac giggled,and gave him a high five. "Huntin babes,is fun!"
"Shhhhhhh! Brave Boy!"John Jr. put his hand over his mouth.

"Oh my god, this is some awesome footage!"John Sr. cackled as he watched what he'd recorded on his video camera.
"John you had better delete that,if you know whats good for you!"Kate warned.
"I ain't afraid of you! I got three other cops to protect me!"He laughed.
"Uh...."Jinny tucked her hair behind her ear.
"Yeah...what she said..."Casey pointed to Jinny.
"Hey,you forgot to slap her on the bu- -"Isaac was cut off by John jr's hand again.
"I'll get to that later."He whispered in his ear."okay? Now shhhhhh, lets not talk about huntin babes no more,for now,okay?"
"Okay."Isaac whispered,after pulling John's hand away.
"Okay,kewl."John put him down. "Hey,Dad,lets see that video!'He laughed.

"Are you mad at me?"Isaac asked,as he climbed into Kate's lap.
"No..."She rolled her eyes. "It's impossible to stay mad at those big blues."
"Yeah,John said they would work."He nodded,with a smile.
"Don't listen to everything that idiot tells you,okay?"She said as she glared at John,
"Brave Boy, Shhhhh!" He replied,flashing a super sweet...yet evil smile at Kate.

"Well ,actually I already knew the before he told me."
"Oh I see."She chuckled.
"Yep."He nodded.
"Are you mad at me?"John Jr. asked.
"Yes."

"Other then the long talk I'm gonn ahafta have wihtmy son,tonight,in order to undo some damage...Thanksgiving at your house is hilarious!"Sara laughed.
"Thank you,thank you."Jinny laughed,as she bowed."You should see christmas here."
"Gawd,did you see how mean they're being to eachother?"Katie laughed.
"They're are being even worse tonight,then they ever have been to eachother."
"Thats because of what happened at that bar not too long ago."Sara explained."There's performance pressure now."
"Yep."Jinny nodded." They are trying to prove any,and everyone's doubts about their hatred for eachother wrong....and maybe their own.....My therepist has turned me into an amatuer int he process of tightening my loose screws."
"I can see that."Katie laughed.

"John stop it!"
"John stop it!"
"Act your age,not your shoe size!"
"Act your age,not your shoe size!"
"I'm an ass whole."
"I'm an ass wh- -Hey!"
"Hey!"Kate laughed. now the tables where turned.
"Okay,game over."
"Okay,game over."
"you can stop now."John jr. sighed.
"You can stop now."Kate sighed.
"Damn it woman!"
"Damn it woman!"
"Stop!"
"Stop!"She laughed.
"Gawd,I need a cigerette!"

"Oh my god,they are acting like a couple of highschoolers!"Jinny laughed.
"Oh,thats so highschool,it's worse then highschool."Katie added.
"Excuse her,Ladies."Jeremy said,as He threw Jinny over his shoulder and carried her away.
"Did you wanna see me?"She laughed.
"Yep." He rweplied,as he started up the stairs.
"Where are we going?"
"Your room.'"He slapped her on the butt.
"But, Jeremy what if we get caught?"
"Oh,major flash back!"He laughed.
"I knooooow...trippy."She laughed.

"Hey,Super Cap,can i play with your badge,and holster,please?"Isaac asked.
"Yeah,sure..."She smiled. "I'll go get it outta my car."
"Mine's on the coat tree..."Casey offered.
"Ooo! You put your's on,and I'll put Captain Kate's on,and we can play cops!"
"Who's gonna be the bad guy?"
"Uh....Captain Kate!"
"Me?" She laughed.
"Yeah,you can be Calamity Kate!" John Jr smirked.
"I don't beleive anybody asked you."She glared at him,and pushed his arm off her shoulder.
"I don't believe I care either."
"Captain Kate,will you go get your holster,pleeease."Isaac wined.
"Yeah, I'll be right back."She said. She deliberately bumped into John Jr as she walked past him.

"So,did you want to talk to me about something?"Jinny asked right after Jeremy threw her down on her old bed.
"Happy Thanksgiving."He replied,and kissed her passionately.
"Happy Thanksgiving."She laughed. "Is that all you wanted?"
"Yep."He smiled. "just wanted to get away from the crowds for a little while."
"Ohh....yeah,it's kinda nice to be alone..."

"Hey,let me use the lighter in your car."
"Ow!Damn!"Kate rubbed her head,where she'd hit it on the roof of her car. She stood up straight,and looked at the person who'd startled her. "You just had to sneak up on me like that didn't you?"
"Sorry."John Jr. mumbled,with a smirk. "Can I borrow your lighter?"
"Stop laughing!"Kate glared at him.
"I'm not laughing."He snickered.
"Then stop snickering!"
"Okay..."He smirked."Can I borrow your lighter?"
"Why should I let you?"
"Because I asked you nicely."
"And nearly gave me a concusion."
"And i apologozed."
"And you laughed!"
"I snickered!"
"Whatever!"She slammed her fist onto the roof of her car."God,you are such a pain in the ass!"
"You're so sexy when you're mad."He laughed.
"You are such an asswhole when you're breathing."Kate shook her head,and started up the steps to the porch,but stopped when John grabbed her shoulder.
"Yes,Joh you can borrow the dam- -"

"Hey,Grandpa,aim your camera at that!"Katie laughed,as she pointed out the window.
"At what?" casey asked,as he,Isaac,Jinny& Jeremy,John Sr and Sara piled around the window.
"Ooohhhh..."Jinny burst into laughter.

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"You are such an asswhole when you're breathing."Kate shook her head,and started"

OMG LMASSO! OMG that whole thing was tooo funny! AWsome, and funny! LOL YOU MUST POST MORE!

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Okay this is for Emma other fanfic, for some reason it won't let me respond on it. Anyway Great job Emma! Keep up the great work, and keep on posting MORE!

lol,ty! glad ya like...and i will post more(on both fics hopefully) as soon as i get over this lil case of writer's block

Heeeeeere's more,Hope ppl r still reading.........


The next thing Kate knew she was in...another liplock with one of the most annoying men she thought she'd ever met.She hesitated at first,but she kissed him back. Wich made her dislike him even more.Because He confused her,and she hated being confused.

"My mother is kissing my girlfriend's brother."Jeremy said,hoping it would make what he was seeing a little more believable. He knew nothing about the previous kiss. "Whyyy??...They can't stand eachother. Thats the way it's been since they met. I have never met two other people that dislike eachother so much. Whyyyy are they kissing??"
Witnessing Jeremy's reaction made everyone laughed even harder.
"If this what Thanksgiving is like in the Exstead family, I can't wait for christmas!"Katie smirked as they all watched the kiss quickley grow passionate...that is until they realized they had an audience,at wich point Kate slapped him.
John Jr. laughed,and rubbed his stinging cheek,"Damn,woman,you blow hot and cold!"

"Now,see that...that I've seen several times...thats what was supposed to happen,way before tongues became involved." Jeremy stated.
"Thanks Pops,I REALLY wanted that image of my grandma in my head!" Katie said saracastically,and slapped her father's arm.
Wich of course made Jinny laugh even harder.

When Kate came inside,everyone tried to act nonchalant,and like they hadn't seen anything....except for Jinny,who started laughing so hard ,she began to cry.
"Well,I really need to get going...I have some stuff I need to get doen tonight."Kate explained,completely ignoring Jinny. She grabbed her purse,and gave everyone a hug,and a kiss. Still trying to ignore Jinny's laughter she hugged her as well.
"Before,you even think about puttin those lips on my cheek,theres a spare toothbrush,upstairs under the sink."Jinny smirked.
"Shut up." Kate walked to the door just as John Jr came in. John Jr flashed a sly grin,as he took her coat off the coat tree,and helped her into it.
"Thank you."She said,trying not to make any eye contact. "Happy Thanksgiving,and goodnight everyone."She said as she stepped out the door,wich John Jr had opened for her.
"Whoa,she really let you have it!"Casey commented.
"Yeaaah."John Jr licked his lips as he closed the door.
"I ment when she slapped you." He rolled his eyes.
"Pleasure pain!"John Jr. smiled.
"oh crap she forgot her cassarole dish."John Sr said.
"Here,I'm goin out to smoke a cigarrette anyways."John Jr said,and grabebd it off the table.
"Was it that good a kiss,John?"Jinny cackled.
"Made me wanna roll over,light up,and watch Leno."John Jr smirked as he went out the door.
"People please!"Katie slapped herself in the forehead."I NEED my mental health! I have a child to raise!"
"Hey,you just got that image of you're grandmother...She's MY mother!"Jeremy shook his head.
As soon as John Jr shut the door behind him,everyone piled around the window again.

"Damn it!" Kate exclaimed,as she tried one more time to get her car to start without success."Wonderful! Just freaking wonderful!"
"Open the hood."John Jr sat the dish on top of the car,startling her.
"Stop sneakin up on me like that!"
"Sorry."He smirked. "Open the hood."
Kate did as she was told,and waited while he looked for the problem.
"Try starting it again."He instructed. Kate again did as She was told. "Okay stop."
"What's the problem?" She asked as She got out.
"The starter. Ya need a new one."
"Oh Joy."She sighed.
"Come on,I'll give ya a ride home."
"you don't gotta,I'll call a cab."
"No you don't gotta waste your money.Come on."

"Waaaaaait a minute! Where are they going??"Jeremy asked,as he watched John Jr open the passenger door of his car for Kate.
"Probably to her place."Jinny smirked. Both Jeremy and Katie slapped her. "Whaaat...he's taking her home."She played innocent,"Oooohhhh...I see,now...He's 'taking her home'...I get it now....They smooched...then her car breaks down...and he gives her a ride home....classic..." Again Jeremy and Katie slapped her ont he shoulders. "Ouch! stop that!"

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It was a mystery what happened after Kate and John Jr left that night.Neither of them would say anything about it.Whenever it waas brought up. One of them would simply state "Shut up, Jinny." And that was it. Not even Raina could get details out of Cap. Did nothing happen? Did he just drop her off at her house? Or if the details came out,would Jinny laugh her ass off,while her boyfriend tried to knock himself out?

"So,are you going to the New Year's party tonight?"Raina asked as they entered the elevator. "John Jr will probably be there."
"First of all,Raina dearest. I couldn't care less rather He's there or in Japan tonight."Kate stated."...And yes...I'm going."
"Are ya gonna get drunk?"She smirked,as she pushed the button for the sixth floor.
"I don't have any specific plans too,no."
"But there's a possibility?"
"Why?Do ya want me to get drunk for some strange reason?"
"No,just y'know...incase ya need a designated driver is all."
"Yeah,okay...whatever,if I change my mind and get drunk on my ass,I'll give ya call."Kate rolled her eyes.

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"Okay! The party can start now!"Raina anounced as she entered the room. "Raina has arrived!"
"Yo,Raina!" Nate called out,as he waved to her.
"S'up,Buuuuuddy!"She left a huge pink lipstick print on his cheek.
"You're drunk,already ain'tcha."He laughed.
"Nope. Trust me,Big boy,you'll know it when I've had a few too many."She laughed.
"I can vouch for that!"Kate handed her a glass of wine.
"Keep,pourin down her Cap,this i wanna see."He laughed,as he grabbed Cd's hand a drug her out onto the dance floor.
"Nate,I don't wanna dance!"
"Cd it's a New Year's party...loosen up!"

"What are you giggling at?"Kate asked Raina,and Magda.
"Nooooothin."They giggled in unison.
"So,how many have you had so far?"John Jr asked,as he threw his arm around Kate's neck.
"John,what are you doing here?"
"I dunno,I guess I've developed a Kate-dar."He smirked.
"A Kate-dar?"
"Yeah..I mean,I have spotted a two or three hot,big boobed redheads here tonight,but you're the one I decided to flirt with."
"Flirt or annoy?"She raised her eyebrow.
"Ahh...'Hard to get'! I love it!"He laughed.
"How many of these have you had?"Kate tool the beer out of his hand,and downed it.
"That woulda been myyy....fifth. How many does that make for you?"
"third."
"Captain!"Magda looked at her in shock.
"C'mon Mag,lets go dance."Raina grabbed her hand and drug her onto the dance floor.

"And leave them alone,and see what happens."She added with a smirk.
"Okay."Magda laughed.

"Whoa,you're behind! It's a good thing I have a spare."John Jr laughed,and handed her the other beer he was carrying.
"What the hell."She said as she downed it as well."Jinny decide not to come?"
"I guess so,I haven't seen her." As soon as Magda and Raina were gone,is was as if He'd switched personalities.

"Innnnteresting....."Magda said.
"Yep."Raina agreed,"As soon as we're gone...she suddenly isn't annoyed by him..."

"You uh....you wanna dance?" John Jr asked,just as a slow song came on.

"Veeerrrrry innnnteresting."Raina and Magda smirked. As they watched them dance.
"Come on,lets eavesdrop."Raina said,and they dance their way across the dance floor.

Katie sat in her rocking chair by her window,feeding her daughter. She was thinking about how,this time a year ago,she was out at a party,counting down till the new year. She would have liked to be doing the same thing this year. Jinny had volunteered to babysit so she could,But Katie said 'no'. She wanted to be there for her daughter's first New Year's. She looked down and smiled at the now sleeping baby.She started to move her away from her,but the minute she did,Cheri wimpered and grabbed ahold again. "Okay,okay.."She chuckled.


Thirty minutes,a dance,and a couple beers later.
"Y'know what,I think I'm gonna get outta here."Kate said,"This isn't my scene,I only came to shut Raina up."
"People go to great lengths to shut her up,don't they?"John Jr laughed,as he walked out with her.
"Yeah...but often,it only works temporarily...She's still giving me a heard time about Thanksgiving."
"Yeah,just when Jinny shut up,she had to find out."
"Thats Raina,for ya."She smirked,"Y'know,I didn't have as bad a time,as I thought I would tonight...Thanks."She patted his shoulder.
"Anytime,anytime." He smiled.
"I am in no condition to drive."Kate admitted.
"I'll drive ya."
"You drank more then me."
"I'm a better driver after a few drinks."
"Having ridden with you before...I believe that."She laughed. "But still...Lets just get a cab."
"Aye aye,Captain!"


"Where's Cap?"Magda asked.
"Dunno."Raina replied. "Hey,Cd,Nate...you guys seen Cap?"
"Yeah...i saw her go outside,I think she left."Nate informed.
"With John Jr."Cd smirked.
"Innnnnnteresting."


"How's about a nightcap?"John Jr suggested as the cab pulled into Kate's driveway.
"Suuuure...what the hell.It's New Year's eve."She replied as she got out of the cab.
"Here ya go,Man."John Jr paid the cab driver,and got out.
"Just a nightcap."She made clear.
"Okay."He nodded.


Katie had finally gotten her daughterback to sleep,and was now comfy on the couch with Jinny,watching Time Square on TV. Sara had began Datien Dr Ross,and was on a date with him.
"Ten...Nine...Eight...Seven...Six..."They counted down,as the ball slowly began to drop. "Five!...Four!...Three...Two....Happy New Year!"They laughed,and eacht took a sip of their Welches Sparkling Grape Juice.


Back at the party, When They got to one, A kissing fest broke out,Nate planted a big one on CD. Raina and Johnny shared a rather passionate one. And Magda had long since snuck out to go visit her old friend Jonah.

At Kate's house, one nightcap,had turned four nightcaps.........And They completely missed the countdown.



Okay,soooo wutcha think????Hmmmmm????

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that was GRRRRRRRRRRREAT!!!!!!!!! :) :)

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That was fantaaaaastic! New Year's is so fun.... Post more soon!

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*clears throat* new page!!

*takes a bow* k, I guess you need to post more now!! :D
Ty 4 the page!

Happy New Year, People!! Heeeeeeeere's more! Let me know what ya think!.................


"Good morning."Jinny smiled,when Katie came into the kitchen.
"Mornin."Katie replied,as she picked her daughter up out of her highchair."Happy New Year,Cheri."She said as she kissed her bald head.
"Here ya go."Jinny dished some scrambled eggs onto a plate,and handed it too Katie.
"Thank you."She sat it on the table,and grabbed a fork from the drawer. "I see Mom got home,pretty late last night."She smirked.
"Yep."Jinny laughed."I think she's really hit it off with Cap's discard."
"Jinny,his name is Doug."Katie laughed.'What time is it?"
"Eight thirty."
"Ooo,crap I gotta get goin!"She jumped up,and handed Cheri to her Neeny."Bye Cheri Berry."She said giving her one last kiss before she headed to work. "Bye,Jin."
"Bye!"She called just before she heard the front door shut. "Come on munchkin,lets go get dressed and go do somethin."She said,as she headed upstairs,to borrow some clothes from Katie.

"Owwwww!"Kate moaned,as she grabbed the pillow next to her and put it over her face. She started to get up and close the curtains,when she realized something was holding her down. She looked down,and slapped herself on the forehead.
"John wake up!" She slapped his shoulder. "Come on,wake up."
"Somebody turn the sun off!"He put Kate's hand over his eyes. Then he pulled it away and looked at it,then he looked at the face it belonged to,and then down at where his head had been."This is the way to start off the new year!!"He smirked,and layed back down.

"Ya wanna go what?"Jinny asked her granddaughter,as she buckled her into her carseat,"Yeah wanna go see Nanna? Okay,yeah,We can go see Nanna."

"John,if you tell anybody...and i do mean ANYbody about this,you will HIGHLY regret it!"
"Okay."He laughed,as he tightened his grip on her waist.
"John I mean it!- -Owww..."She rubbed her forehead. No more yelling,she decided. "Move."
John adjusted his position some,but didn't get up."Let me up."She pried his arms loose,and shoved him off of her. "
"I am loving 2004!"He smiled from ear to ear,as he watched her get dressed.
"Shut up."She threw his boxers at him,"Get up,get dressed,and go."She said,as she went to get an asprin.

Just as Kate got the bottle of asprin out of the cabinet,there was a knock at the door.
"Fabulous."She thought as she went to answer it.
"Mornin,Jin"She greeted,with a forced smile.
"Mornin." Jinny looked around the house,to see every curtain closed,and she had an asprin in one hand,and a beer in the other."Hmmm...a hangover kit...You're Nanna's got a hangover,Cheri!"She laughed.
"Nanna's head :Ouch. Neeny's mouth:Shhhhh."Kate said,as she put her hand over Jinny's mouth. "Come on,lets go make some coffee."She said as she ushered Jinny into the kitchen.
"Oookaaay..."Jinny watched suspiciously,as Kate repeatedly glanced back towards her bedroom. "So,I take it you're gonna need a ride to work?"
"Naah,I think I'm gonna take the day off..."She washed down the asprin,with the beer.
"Hold this,while i go used the bathroom,please."Jinny handed Cheri to Kate,and headed down the hall. Kate watched her nervously.
"Please don't go near my bedroom,please don't go near my bedroom!"She thought.
Just as Jinny shut the bathroom door,John Jr came out of the bedroom,lacking a shirt.
"Whats up,Munchkin?"He said,as he took Cheri from Kate,"Who are you here with?"
"She's here with Jinny.."Kate took Cheri back,"Zip your pants,put your shirt on and go."
"But,what if I wanna say 'Hi' to my dear,baby sister?"He smirked,and took Cheri again.
"Ya don't."She took Cheri back,again. Then she heard the bathroom door open,and shut. "Stay."She ordered him.
"Now thats an order I don't mind following."He popped her on the butt,as she left the kitchen.

"Hey,Jin,c'mere."Kate grabbed her hand and lead her over to the piano. "Y'know...I was thinkin about moving the piano over there."She pointed to the oposite corner. "What do you think?"
"I think,thats your bra hanging from the lamp."Jinny laughed.
"What!?"Kate looked where she was pointing."Crap!"She exclaimed as she quickly grabbed it.
"Did you have fun last night?"Jinny smirked,as she picked up a man's shirt off the floor."Or do you remember?"
"I don't remember..."She mumbled.
"Is he still here?"
"No.."Kate glanced towards the kitchen.
"How's about that coffee?"Jinny asked,as she headed to the kitchen.

"Hey,little sister." John jr smiled,as he got a beer out of the refridgerator.
"Oh...my....god."Jinny burst into laughter.
"Hey,thanks,I was lookin for that."He said as he took his shirt from her,and put it on.
"What did I say about Neeny's mouth?"Kate asked,as she put her hand over Jinny's mouth,and glared at her. "Jinny why don't you give your brother a ride home?"She suggested,as she grabbed John's hand and dragged him to the door.

"What no goodbye kiss?"He smirked.
Kate kissed her hand and then slapped him with it,"There,goodbye."
"Rough lovin...kinky."He smiled,"I like it."
"Get out."She said as she opened the door,and shoved him out it.
"Okay,before,I go..."He pulled her out the door with him.
"What John?"
"I really enjoyed last night."
"If you remember last night,then you're gonna loose your manhood."She raised her eyebrow.
"Well,before things went blurry...I had a good time...and I'm sure after things went blurry I had a goooood time."He smiled,and kissed her,"And I will remember January 1st 2004 with great fondness."He popped her on the butt,and went to Jinny's car.
"I hate your brother."She told Jinny,as she hadned Cheri to her.
"Yeeeah...but I think ya hate likin'em even more."She smirked. "Byeeee..."


Okay,thaz all i got time 2 write 2nite,but hey,at least i got some of the New Years post posted ON New Years...Thats a major accomplishment for me lol

EXCELLENT post!!! LOL, i loved it!!

gimme some more!!!! :) :) :D :D

This is great!

Great job!! post more, now.:)

That was great! Now you can post more!:D

that was off the hizzy....fo' shizzle...so post some more..:D

Ok i started reading this fic a while ago but i never finished. I'm glad i did that was great. Post more soon.:)

I just caught up here too! Yaaaaay! Now post more LOL

Originally posted by maria1986
that was off the hizzy....fo' shizzle...so post some more..:D
:confused:

Originally posted by 1strunfan
:confused:

yeah...lol...I noticed that and was like "what the hell was I thinking when I typed that???..."...I was prolly drunk or something...lol...too much Snopp Dog....:rolleyes:

I'm glad to know it wasn't just me. I know, I'm totally out of the loop on all the new lingo, but that sounded like a whole other language to me. :lol:

Originally posted by 1strunfan
I'm glad to know it wasn't just me. I know, I'm totally out of the loop on all the new lingo, but that sounded like a whole other language to me. :lol:


:lol: want me to start talkin some german? ;)

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
:lol: want me to start talkin some german? ;)



:wave: **raises hand** i do, i do!!!

and i'll break out in spanish and then feel like an ass b/c you know every word i'm saying!! ;)

I do too. Althought you could tell us all how stupid we are and we wouldn't know it. LOL Anyway, go for it.

Originally posted by 1strunfan
I do too. Althought you could tell us all how stupid we are and we wouldn't know it. LOL Anyway, go for it.

LOL okay then...

ihr seit doch alles vollidioten... that means you're all idiots ;)) LOL j/k of course...

Emma, schreib mehr!!!!! And that means Emma, write more!!!!!

so, yeah :)

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
LOL okay then...

ihr seit doch alles vollidioten... that means you're all idiots ;)) LOL j/k of course...

Emma, schreib mehr!!!!! And that means Emma, write more!!!!!

so, yeah :)

How do you say "This is extremely short,but maybe it's all I've written so far,hope ya like......"

"I DON'T Like your jackass of a brother!"Kate protested.
"Don't tell me it's loooove."She laughed.
"Jinny,If I ever say yes to that,promise me you'll take your gun and put me out of my misery."
"I'll use John's gun,and frame him for it."Jinny said as she walked to the car. "Oh,and can I give ya a tip?"She asked as she opened the door ot the back seat,to put Cheri in.
"What?"
"Before ya go anywhere...ya might wanna cover up that hickey the size of Lake Michigan."
"What!?"She looked down at her chest,to see a huge purple mark,"Crap!"
"Put on a turtle neck sweater."
"You of all people should know that a turtleneck on New Years day,is screaming :Somebody got laid!"
"Somebody did!"She laughed. "And the poor idiot is probably beating himself up, his childhood dream came true last night,and he can't remember one moan or groan."She pointed to John Jr.
"Shut up- -wait a minute! Childhood dream?"
"Well,he wasn't exactly a child,but his teen years."Jinny smirked,and got in the passenger's seat,since John Jr had apperently decided to drive.
John Jr honked the horn to make sure he had Kate's attention,and then...kissed his window.
"Oh Jeez."Kate thought out loud,as she quickley stopped herself from laughing,and flipped him the bird.
"You know my number!"He replied with two thumbs up. Kate shook her head,and went back inside.

And how do ya say "I'll post more as soon as i get the time,and inspiration to write it....that is if ya want me too";) ;)

Originally posted by MovieHuntress17
How do you say "This is extremely short,but maybe it's all I've written so far,hope ya like......"

And how do ya say "I'll post more as soon as i get the time,and inspiration to write it....that is if ya want me too";) ;)

LOL that was really great so far... and ya know what? Makes me think of how CD was wearing turtlenecks all the time ;)

and it means... "Ist zwar extrem kurz, aber das ist alles was ich bisher geschrieben habe, also hoffe ich es gefällt euch."

and "Ich werde bald mehr hinzufügen, sobald ich die Zeit dazu habe und die Inspiration um es zu schreiben.... nur wenn ihr wollt dass ich das mache allerdings"

LOL doesn't german suck? ;) And hell yeah ya gotta post more! :)

that was AWESOME!!! can't wait for more!!! :D

Here's a lil more,let me know wutcha think.................

Jinny dropped John jr off at his car,and then went back to Kate's house and took her to get her car.
That afternoon,Kate went by to see her great granddaughter,and tell Jinny...
"If you tell anyone...and I do mean ANYone about what happened you will HIGHLY regret it."
"My lips are sealed."Jinny laughed,as she finished changing her granddaughter's diaper.
"Hunny,I'm home!"Katie called out as she entered her home,and hang up her coat. "Ha! Somebody got laid!"She exclaimed,pointing to Kate's green turtleneck sweater.
"Did not."Kate glared at her.
"Yes you did.Jiny told me."She laughed."My grandmother,and my uncle....my life is such a friggin soap opera!"
"Jinny!"Kate slapped her shoulder.
"You shoulda told me BEFORE I went to have lunch with my daughter."She smirked. "You know we tell eachother everything."
Kate rolled her eyes,and turned her attention back to Katie,"If you tell anybody...and I do mean ANYbody ,You - -"
"Will HIGHLY regret it!"Jinny finished her sentence for her.
"Jinny says, that hickey's as big as lake Michigan...and we know my birth mother can exaggerate,so...is it?"
"Yes..."Kate mumbled.

"Crap!"Sara exclaimed,when she finally noticed the hickey on her neck,as she was brushing her hair. She dug out a turtleneck sweater,and put it on before heading to the kitchen.

"Thats the last thing you wanna wear today."Kate stated as Sara passed the couch.
"Why?"Sara stopped and looked at here.
"It's New Year's Day."
"Screams somebody's hiding a souvenir."Jinny added.
"Kate...You're wearing one...."Sara smirked.
"Yknow what,I think we should leave CHeri Berrie with her grandpa,and go see a movie tonight."Kate changed the subject,with a grin.
"Ooohhhh...John Jr?"
"Jinny!,Gawd you're as bad as Raina!"Kate slapped her shoulder
"Actually,you're the one that told me...just now."Sara smirked.
"You shoulda been a cop."Kate glared at her.
"So,uh...what do I do to hide it?"Sara asked.
"Hide what?"Jinny laughed.
"You know what."
"Just tell me,so I know for sure."
"The hickey!"She rolled her eyes.
"Oil based concealer."Jinny,Kate,and Katie stated in unison.
"Ladies,I would like you too meet your grand daughter,Cheri."Katie introduced her daughter to the women starring at her with raised eyebrows.

I'll try 2 post more monday.

omg that was soooooooo funny!! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

i hope u post more soon!!!! :D :) :)

Great job, as usual. Post more soon. The German looks really cool, I bet it sounds neat too. But, I don't even dare to try and actually read any of it.

POST MORE
POST MORE
POST MORE
SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG, I forgot to reply to this one! This was really good, post more soon!

Goin post anytime soon?:wazzup

Hehehe,it's a lil later then monday I guess but heeeeere's more..............


"You left with John Jr The other night"Raina stated as she entered her office.
"Good morning to you too,Raina."Kate replied,as she put a file in her filing cabinet.
"Ah,and you don't deny it."She smirked."Good morning to you too...I bet yesterday was a better morning for ya though,Huh?"
"I am not going to dignify that with an answer."
"Oh,thats a yes in all capitol letters,and bold font.
"Raina,I didn't sleep with John Jr. We shared a cab.The driver took me to my house,and then took John to his." Kate turned around and glared at her.
"Hmmm,Just like Thanksgiving?"Raina smirked,"Holly cow!That things the size of lake Michigan!"
"Nice try,not gonna work."
"No,I shudda known that you're to smart,to be tricked into admitting you got a hickey."
"Thats right- -Damn it!"
"Hahaha...I'm goooood"She laughed.
"A wit like,that and yet you're nowhere near solving the Stevens murder...why is that?"
"Actually,I have two witnesses coming in today,and a possible lead."
"Glad to hear it,let me know when the witnesses get here."
"Will do."Raina opened the office door,but closed it back,"One more question."
"WHat?"Kate sighed.
"Was it gooooood?"She smirked.
"I dunno...i don't remember."Kate mumbled."But,uh...the kiss right before her left yesterday morning..."She grinned.
"Wahoooo!"
"Shut up.And don't you repeat that to anybody."
"Yes ma'am."Raina smiled,as she left the office.

As Raina passed Jinny's desk,they exchanged a knowing look,and a chuckle
"Whats so funny?"Magda asked.
"Oh,nothin."Jinny smirked.
"So did you have a good New Year,Jinny?"Raina asked.
"Ah,yes..."She smirked," Babysat Cheri Berry,and we went to spend the morning with Nanna...and see Uncle John...."
At that Raina's eyes grew in diameter,and she couldn't wait to grill Jinny for details.
"Well,speak of the devil..."She said,as John Jr entered the bullpen.
"Hey,Jin."He mumbled.
"Hey."
"Morning,John."Raina smiled.
"Mornin."He replied,as He knocked on Kate's open door,as he went in,and shut it behind him.
"Your brother's coming to see Cap?"Mag asked in suprise."Innnteresting."
"Yes,very,very innnteresting."CD raise dher eyebrow.

"What can I do for ya?"Kate asked.
"Well...."He smirked.
"John."
"Okay,seriously."He ran his hand through his hair nervously. "I uh....i was uh..."
"You were uh...?"
"Wondering if....you found my belt?I couldn't find it yesterday."
"Nope,sorry haven't seen it."
"Okay,well...you know my number if ya find it..."He said as opened the door.
"Okay."
"One more thing."He said as he shut the door again
"What?"
"Well...I was thinking,and uh...maybe we should um...y'know,that one night at Anchorside,after I helped ya ditch Dr.Boring?"
"Dr.Ross....Yeah,I remember..."
"Well, maybe we should do that again...only skip Dr Boring all together....and go someplace different..."
"John,are you asking me out on a date?"Kate smirked.

"How would you feel if they started dating,Jinny?"CD asked.
"Oh yeah right."She laughed."That'll happen when the sun turns purple."
"Look at past events Jin. Anchorside....the mysterious Thanksgiving...The New Years party...."
"I still doubt it will happen."

K,I know that was short,but thats all I can write tonight,hope ya enjoy! Let me know whatcha think,please

Originally posted by MovieHuntress17
Hehehe,it's a lil later then monday I guess but heeeeere's more..............



I'd say! Sheesh. Not very long. You'd think that if someone keeps us all waiting for so long, they'd at least post alot when they post. :rolleyes:

Great job!:D Now post more!

Originally posted by 1strunfan
I'd say! Sheesh. Not very long. You'd think that if someone keeps us all waiting for so long, they'd at least post alot when they post. :rolleyes:

Great job!:D Now post more!

Lol, glad ya liked!
Heeeeere's more..........

"Eh...y...yeah,I guess you could call it that..."John shrugged. "If thats what ya call going to dinner,then maybe dancing or somethin,and maybe topping off the evening with...breakfast..."
"Breakfast,Huh?"Kate rolled her eyes.
"Yeah...well, A guy can dream,can't he?"He smiled slyly.
"Alright I'll think about it."
"The date?"
"The date."
"Including bre- -"
"Don't push your luck."
"Okay...then,I guess,I'll just hafta,turn on the old Exstead charm that no woman can resist."
"I can resist it."
"No,no no no,I don't think you can."
"Yes,I can."
"We'll just hafta wait,and find out on our date, Saturday night, 8 pm, I'll pick ya up."
"I didn't say I would go."
"Fine,call me when ya decide."
".....I'll meet ya at the resturaunt."
" Ya know where Dominique's is?"He smiled,the classic John Jr smile.
"Yeah."
"Great."He started to leave,but then turned and walked over to her.
"What?"
He chuckled,and kissed her,"See ya didn't slap me...you're not gonna be able to resist."
"Get outta here,before I shoot you."She glared at him.
"You wouldn't." He smirked,as he walked back over to the door
"Okay,you're right....not in the middle f the police station...Not even you are that dumb."
"Ooo,ouch! "He put his hand over his chest,"Got me right here."
"Get out!"She threw the pen she was holding at him,and hit him in the shoulder.
"Okay,okay."He laughed,as he exited the office.

"Woo,what a firecracker."He laughed,"Bye,Jin."
"Bye."She laughed,and jumped out of her chair. She And Raina,and CD crashed into eachother,as they tried to enter the office at thesame time.
"Oww!"They laughed,and crashed shoulders again.
"You stay."Jinny stated,and stepped into the office,"Okay,now you,CD. Okay,now it's your turn Raina."

"WHat do you clowns want?"Kate sighed,because she already knew.
"What was that about?"They asked at the same time.
"He kissed you."CD stated
"Again."Jinny added.
"Whats going on?"Raina asked.
"I'm just confused. I missed something somewhere."Magda said,as she came in.
"It's none of your business."
"Come on Cap...ya want us to kick Magda out?She's the only one that doesn't have a clue about New years?"Cd suggested.
"What about New Years???"Magda threw her arms in the air.
"Hehe,ooops"CD smirked.
"Nothing,Magda. They are making something out of nothin."Kate sighed. "We dance at the New Years party...that all."SHe glared at Jinny,and Raina. "And as for today,it's none of your business."
"I doubt it was business...because,if it were business,you wouldn't refuse to tell us."Raina said.
"And you guys are definatley not friends- -"
"Depends on how you define friends."Jinny smirked.
"...plus the fact that He's just not the type,that stops in to say 'hi' while he's in the neighborhood..."Cd continued.
"Come on,Cap tell us pleeeeeeaseee?"They wined.
"Fine! Fine,fine,fine!"She sighed,"He...he wanted to know if I found his belt,yet." SHe mumbled.
"His what?"Magda's chin hit the floor.
"His belt."
"Why?Why doesn't he have his belt?Why would you know where it's at???"
"Because...he lost it at my house..."
"How?And why did He take it off???"
"I think you can figure it out."Jinny cackled.
"Oooohhh...."Magda cracked up.
"Well,now that everyone knows,I guess I don't hafta worry about,telling anyone they'll regret it if they talk."Kate rolled her eyes. "But i will say,that if anyone brings the subject again,you will regret it."
"Y'know she says that a lot...what do ya think she would do,to make us regret it?'Jinny asked,as the filied outo f the office.
"I dunno...but I'm not gonna find out."Raina replied.
"Me either."CD added.
"CD,you're like a foot taller then the woman."Jinny laughed.
"Yeah but the munchkin still scares me."

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~Saturday~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

"Hey,Cap."CD tapped on the open door,"Ya still workin on that?"
"Yep."Kate nodded. "I'm gonna get this done if it takes me all night...it looks like it may."
"Okay."She chuckled,"Well,I'm outta here,G'night."
"G'night."she replied.


"That was John."Casey said,as He hang up the phone,"He's not coming."
"Why?" John Sr asked.
"He said,He's gonna hafta work a double."
"Well,It was so nice of him to let us know so far in advance."Jinny rolled her eyes.

Kate finished what she was doing,shortly after CD left. She looked at her watch. Seven-thirty time to go.
"I can't believe I said yes."She thought as she put her coat on,and grabbed her purse. "Maybe I should call and cancel."She turned off the light,and locked the door,as she walked out "No,just go."

Kate pulled into the parking lot twenty minutes late.
John saw her pull in and walke dover to her car.
"I was beginning to think,I was stood up."He said as he opened her door for her.
"Sorry."She replied,as she got out.
"No problem...So ya ready to be charmed?"He smirked.
"Bring it on."
"You look fabulous."He took her hand and put it on his arm,as they headed for the resturaunt.
"Thank you."She smiled,"You look good,too."
"I love your perfume."He leaned in for a better whif.
"I'm not wearing any."
"Oh,wel..then..."
"So,When are ya gonna start charming me?"She smirked.
"I already have."
"Oh,well then it's obviously not working."
"Oh,I think it is."
"I'm sure a lot of thing you think are wrong."


K,that wasn't much either lol,but Thats all I have time to write before work, hope ya liked!

I really didn't like it much.












I loved it! It was a little longer, too. You are really getting with it lately! Go you! Now, get back here and post more.

Hey, that was great! I just caught up with it. Post more right away!

~"CD, you're like a foot taller than the other woman." Jinny laughed.~

Yeah, being tall certainly has its advantages....;) :D It comes in handy!

Originally posted by "Snowfall"
Hey, that was great! I just caught up with it. Post more right away!

~"CD, you're like a foot taller than the other woman." Jinny laughed.~

Yeah, being tall certainly has its advantages....;) :D It comes in handy!

LOL yeah, I loved that one too! WHOO HOO!!!! :D

OMG LMAO You have to post more!

I'm workin on it,lol. Gald y'all liked! I'm pretty busy this week but I'll post more asap! Anybody got any suggestions?:D

Well...it's been a while since i posted,i hope peeps r still readin! Let me know wut ya think,pleeeez!

"Wa..what the hell."Magda stopped dead in her tracks,as She and her date passed near a table,Two people she knew ere sitting at." Well,well,well..."She smirked,watching as He brushed her hair off of her face,and she smiled.He was obviously flirting with her...a lot.
"Who is that?"Jonah asked.
"Oh,uh..just some friends...Kate and John."
"Oh..."
"Come on,lets get to our table before they see us."She gave his hand a tug.
"It doesn't look like they really care what you're up to at the moment."He said as he followed her.


"Just admit it,I'm charming the pants off you."John Jr smirked,"No pun intended."
"Oh you ment it."Kate rolled her eyes. "And No you're not....I'm wearing a skirt."
"I stand corrected."He grinned slyly,and placed his hand on her knee.
"You can look,but ya can't touch."She smirked,and took his hand off.
"Can I touch this?"He asked as he held her hand.
"Yeah,fine..."She rolled her eyes again,"Whatever."
"And these?" He asked,as he leaned in and kissed her, "Whats so funny?"He asked as he watched Kate suddenly start laughing.
"You.Me. Us. Here."She laughed. "I never in a million years figured I'd end up on a date with you."
"And having your skirt charmed off ya?"He smirked
"Yeah."She laughed.
"So I am charming ya!"He smiled.
"Maybe...okay...just a little."She admitted,"A teeny, tiny,itsy, bitsy, microscopic bit."
"And the night is still young."
"Yeah,well...that still doesn't mean you're gonna get what you're after."
"All I'm after is a night out on the town with a beautiful woman..."
Kate looked down at her lap,trying to hide the smile on her face,but He saw it,and his ego expanded.
"...You still being here for breakfast in the morning,will be a highly enjoyable bonus,that I'm really really...really hoping for."
"You always were a big dreamer."Kate smirked.


"Cap and John Jr are on a date...I don't believe it."Magda said. "Kate McCafferty and John Exstead Jr. are- -"
"Magda I didn't come to talk about your captain's social life,I came to spend time with you while We still have the chance before Gabe gets back."Jonah stated.
Magda glared at him.
"What?"
"Nothing."

"I love this song."Kate said,as Selena's 'I Could Fall In Love' began too play.
"Thats good to know."John Jr said as He stood up,and held his hand out too her,"May I have this dance?"
"Yes you may."She smiled,and took his hand as she stood up.

"Oooo,come on lets go dance."Magda grabbed Jonah's hand as she stood up.
"Okay,okay."He laughed,as they headed to the dance floor.

"Wooo!You stink!"Berg exclaimed,as He pulled his shirt over his nose,and picked up Cheri.
Berg was Katie's best friend in the world. He had been since second grade. They were always there for eachother.
He was waiting in the living room when she took the pregnancy test. She tried to take the rap,when He stole his dad's car,and they got busted.He was with her when she told her mom She was pregnant. She acted as his Bodyguard all through Junior High.He helped her find her birth mother,and encouraged her when she started to chicken out about going to meet her. She pretended to be his girlfriend to impress his cousin who was visiting. He punched out the captain of the football team,for calling her a slut,and got suspended for it,and didn't care.She some how managed to sneak him up to his room at two in the morning,when he got drunk at a party,without waking his parents or his little brother and sister.And did his homework for him that night. His parents never did find out about it.
And now he was practically like a father to Cheri.
"Kay, My family is sooooo crazy!"Berg exclaimed as he handed Cheri to her mother. "Cheri made ya a present."
"Who did what now?"Katie asked,as she took her daughter to her room,and layed her on the changing table.
"Well,My mom isn't speaking to my dad,because He said He doesn't like her tuna cassarole. My sister printed up a buncha stuff about child birth she found online,and left it laying on her bed just to freak Mom out.The minute Joey heard Mom tell Dad she thought Cassie is pregnant He started naggin Cassie to let him video tape the birth for a school project.And She told them it was a joke,but made her take a pregnancy test to prove it."He explained as he followed her.
"I can top that with one sentence."She smirked.
"Oh yeah?Do it."
"My grandmother slept with my uncle on New Year's Eve."
"Wich Grandmother!?Wich Uncle!?"Berg raised his eyebrow.
"Kate, And John Jr."
"I thought they hate eachother."
"They do. They just can't keep their hands off eachother."
"I am so glad my grandmother reminds everyone of Sophia Patrillo,and my uncle is gay."


The two couples were on their third dance in a row now,They had been dancing very near eachother the whole time,yet no one noticed.
"I can't belive Cap,and John are on a date."Magda mumbled.
"Why do you care so much??"Jonah sighed
"John is Jinny's big brother. And supposedly they hate eachother."
"Who hates eachother?"
"Cap and John."

"John do everyone in hearing distance a favor,and stop singing."Kate laughed.
"Oh,I wasn't aware anyone else was around."He smirked,pulled her closer and continued to sing.
"If you wanna get lucky tonight shut-up."
"Don't go breakin my heart- -"John Jr stopped singing imediatly,"Does this mean i am gonna get lucky?"
"No."
At that John began to sing again,"I couldn't if i try- -"

The couple dancing next to Magda and Jonah left the dance floor,revealing,Kate and John Jr to them.
"They don't look like they hate each other."
"I...don't...believe it."Magda stated.


"Well,I'm gonna get outta here.I gotta go pick up Robert at his friend's house."Berg grabbed his coat
"Okay,Bye."Katie smiled.
"Bye."He replied as he put on his coat."Bye,Cheri."He kissed the top of the infants head,before he left.
Five seconds later he let himslef back into the house,"Oh,and Kay.."
"Bee?..."
"Thanks for making my family seem normal."He smirked,and left.


Sooooooooooo,wutcha think???Tell me! Tell me! Do ya want more?Hmmmm??

Wow it has been a long time:D Thanx for posting it was good, POST MORE SOON




:clap:, :yourock: and :thanks:

duuuuuuude! I just realized how long it's been since i posted on this! I'm a try 2 work onit sum now...if i can get past this writer's block!

How rude of you to keep us hanging on for so long, if I had any fanfics at all, I would never keep anyone hanging for that long! mawahahahahahahaqhahah


Awsome job btw!

Originally posted by Irish_Rose_Kate
How rude of you to keep us hanging on for so long, if I had any fanfics at all, I would never keep anyone hanging for that long! mawahahahahahahaqhahah


Awsome job btw!

She's got fan-fic amnesia again. Somebody hand me a frying pan so i can fix her,and make her remember her 204028 fan-fics that she's kept us waiting on 4 like 9729048476464346024 years!

And this ain't much,but here's more. Hope peeps r still readi,let me know wutcha think!

Magda starred at the two of them. Dancing,and kissing,they were oblivious to her. Kate pull away from the kiss,and they starred at eachother with a smirk.
"If I start singing again,will you kiss me again?"He whispered into her ear.
"Maybe...or I might just cover my ears."She whispered.
"I'm gonna take that as a 'yes'."He smirked,"And I'm gonna give ya a heads up..."
"On what?"
"I'm about to dip ya." He said,and did so before she had the chance protest.
It was when John dipped her,that Kate came face to face with the shocked hispanic woman.
"Uh...Hi,Cap."Magda couldn't help but smirk,even thought she was in a rather comprimising situation herself.
"Heh..Hi,Mag.."She replied,as She stood up straight,"H...how are you?"
"I'm okay,and yourself?"
"I'm uh...good..."She glanced from her to John Jr.


"Whats the matter,Squirt?" Katie asked her little brother,when He walked intot he living room,in his Spiderman Pjs,and dragging his Spiderman blanket behind him.
"Had a bad dream.'He pouted,plopping on the couch beside her.
"Aww,I sorry."She ruffled his hair."Ya want me to come lay with ya,till ya fall asleep?"
"Mmhmm."He nodded.
"Okay..."The exhuasted brunette pealed herself off the couch. "Come on."
"Is Mommy back from her date with Doug yet?" He asked as They walked down the hall to his bedroom.
"Nope,not yet."


"Uh,...hey,Pal.."Jonah slapped John's shoulder,then ran his finger across his lip
John quickly ran his hand across his mouth,and looked at Jonah questioningly. Jonah smirked,as He gave him a thumbs up. kate's face turned as red as the lipstick,that John had just wiped off the corner of his mouth,as She looked at Magda questioningly.
Magda shook her head,"You're fine."She mouthed."...Oh,uh...Jonah...You've met my Captain. Kate McCafferty...Jonah's the doctor that operated on me when I was shot..."
"Yeah,...Hi.."Kate shook his hand."
"Nice to see ya again,Captain.."
"You too."She nodded.
"And this, is John Exstead...Cap's date.."Magda smirked,as She introduced them.
"Nice to meetcha..."They shook hands.
There was no point,in denying that it was date,since Magda had obviously already seen otherwise.So Kate decided to change the subject."Gabe's concert is gonna be on tv tomorrow night,right?"
"...Yeah..."Magda glanced at Jonah nervously."at 9:30..."
"I'll be sure and watch it...When is He coming home from His tour?"
"Uh...Next week."She smiled awkwardly.
"Great,my nephew wants his autopragh so bad,do think you could ask him for it?"
"Sure. No prob..whats his name?"
"Macualay"


"And Spiderman,and Snow White lived happily ever after." Katie finished her and Isaac's version of Snow White and The seven dwarfs.She looked down to see He was sound asleep. He looked so cute,she didn't wanna get up and risk waking him...till Cheri cried and she had to. So she turne doff the lamp on the night stand,and went to sleep too.


"Thanks."Kate smiled,as John jr helped her into her coat.
"You're welcome."He replied. He tucked the waiter's tip under one of the plates,took her hand,and placed it on his arm,and they left together.

As Kate and John Jr passed their table,Magda and Kate caught eachother's gaze. Kate knew that Magda wasn't having a friendly dinner with Jonah,and Magda knew that Knew. Without saying anything they sort of agreed,that Kate didn't see Magda &Jonah,and Magda didn't see Kate & John.


Jinny kicked her apaertment door shut,as She took her coat off and tossed it on the counter,along with her scarf and keys. Then she kicked her shoes off,next to the couch before heading to her bedroom. "I know,I turned the light off."She thought,when she saw the light shining from under her bedroom door. Just then She saw someone's shadow. As quickly and quietly as possible,she walked backwards to her kitchen,so She could keep her eyes on the door. She carefully reache dinto the cabinet over her refridgerator,where she hid her spare gun. As SHe pulled the gunout of it's hiding place she accidently knocked something off the top of the fridge. "Crap!"She thought,as She cought it and put it back where it belonged.
"Ow! damn!" She heard a man's voice exclaim,as she tip toed down the hallway,gun in hand. Her heart was pounding as She put her hand on the nob,and took a deep breath,as she quickley opened the door,"SFP- -"


"Dinner was nice."Kate smiled as She and John Jr walked through the parking lot together. Actually she thought it weas better then nice,but she wasn't gonna abmit it.No way.
"Yeah it was."John nodded."So,uh...anyplace else ya wanna go?...Or ya wanna call it a night?"He asked as they neared his car.
"I dunno...you?"
"I wanna call it a night....in the morning."He smirked.
"I shoulda seen that one comin...."Kate rolled her eyes,"Come with me."She grabbed his hand,and led him to her car.
"Where are we goin?"
"Somewhere."
"Where?"
"Someplace,I think you'll like."She flashed a sly smile.
"Ooohhhh!"He smiled from ear to ear

Magda watched in amazement,as her captain,and her supposed rival,walked to her car hand-in-hand,and got in.
"I don't believe it."She shook her head.
"Hey,yahoo...hello..."Jonah waved his hand in her face,"Mag...Are we gonna stand here all night,or get in the car,and go to...."
"Yeah.."She said,and they got in the car.
"You are absolutely flabergasted by them,aren't you?"He asked as He started the car.
"Jonah....they hate eachother. They always have. Cap has actually held a gun to his head before...."
"Never woulda guessed by lookin at them tonight."He chuckled.
"I know! What the hell is wrong with them? Cap is...smart,intellegent,classy...John...John is John.A big jackass,that loves to antagonize her...or used to,anyways. What is wrong with them?"
"Maybe thats not them...maybe they are imposters posing as them...and the real Captian...and what's-his-name have been kidnapped!"Jonah smirked.

Sooooooo,wutcha think?????Hmmmm??/ANybody still readin??

k,now that i'm done with that,I'm go reply 2 all of Michelle's fics...2 help refresh her memory. toodles.;) :lol:

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MORE ASAP:D

Awww Emma awsome job more please.

There's prob'ly nobody reading this anymore,but i'm bored lol,so here's more,hope ya like if u read!


"Maybe thats not them...maybe they are imposters posing as them...and the real Captian...and what's-his-name have been kidnapped!"Jonah smirked.
"That's got to be what it is."Magda stated,"That...or....I've officially lost my mind,or this is one very very very strange dream."
"You're over reacting,Magda."Jonah rolled his eyes."People change,opposites attrack,and weirder things have happened."
"This coming from the person that wasn't there when John told a criminal that was being arrested that a high powered police captain,thats friends with the chief is the perfect hostage for next time. Plus she's pretty to look at,and fun to argue with."
"Oh my god,thats great!"
"Stop laughing! He could have taken John's advice!"


"You thought I was takin ya back to my place,huh?"Kate smirked as She leaned against a post on the dock
"It had crossed my mind."John Jr admitted
"Well I ment to make ya think that."She chuckled,"It's fun messing with your head."
"Yeah,i've noticed you enjoy it quite a bit."
"Oh you're a fine one to talk!"
"What do ya mean?"He smiled innocently.
"don't even try to act clueless!"SHe slapped his shoulder.,"Almost every chance you get,you try to antagonize me."
"You're just so cute when you're mad."He laughed devilishly and slapped her back.
"Don't hit girls!."She made this slap hurt.
"You started it!"He rubbe dhis shoulder,and slapped her again.
"You sound like my nephew!"She slapped him harder ,"He's four!"
"Ouch!Stop!"He slapped her again.
"You're the one acting like a child!"She slapped him again,"I'm just defending myself."
"If you slap me one more time! I'll.....throw you in the bay!"
"Hey,that one hurt!"She slapped him yet again"You didn't throw me in."She smirked.
"Oh,so ya want me to huh?'He scooped her up.
"John,No! no!"She protested,"Put me down! If you do I'll shoot you!"
"You don't have you're gun with ya."He chuckled,and started to throw her.
"John!"She screamed.
"Haha,faked ya out."He laughed,as He put her down.
"You over grown brat!"She hit him in the head,Don't do that again!"
"I won't. This time I'm really gonna throw ya."He stated,and did just that. A couple of moments went by and She still hadn't come back up."Okay! Haha! Very fuuny! You can come back up now!"

"I know what this is!"Magda said just as Jonah started to kiss her.
"Good,I'm glad you know what a kiss is."He gave her a weird look.
"No i mean. With Cap & John."
"Oh."Jonah rolled his eyes,"What do ya think it is?"He asked with a sigh.
"A joke. And Jinny's in on it. Because Jinny knew we were goin there tonight. And SHe told them to go there.They just wanted to see how shocked I would be. "
"Well they both should have gotten into show biz,because they are damn good actors!"

Her heart was pounding as She put her hand on the nob,and took a deep breath,as she quickley opened the door,"SFP- -"
Jeremy screamed when the bedroom door suddenly flew open,and there stood Jinny with her gun aimed and ready."Whoa! Chill,it's just me!Don't shoot!"He put his hands above his head.
"Jeremy!What the hell,are you trying to give me a heart attack!?"She lowered her gun.
"No,I was trying to suprise ya!...I intended it to be romantic and sweet..."
"well,It was...it really was...but you should know better then to suprise a cop like this! Especially a tired one!"
"Yeah,you're right I'm sorry."He began to laugh.
"It's not funny! I could have blown your head off!"She protested as He wrapped his arms around her waist.
"Death by suprise romantic evening gone wrong."Jeremy cackled,"An embarrassing way to go,but at least the last thing i saw would have been beautiful."He gave her a quick kiss."Ya think my mom was mad when ya killed her car...."
"Oh lord!"Jinny gave in and began to laugh as well.

"Okay! You're even now!"John called out.Kate still hadn't surfaced,and He was getting nervous. "McCafferty,the joke is gone way too far now!"He scanned the dark waters nervously,and saw no sign of her. "Aw *****!" He exclaimed as He dove into the water after her.

Sooooo???Is anybody still readiiiiiing?????Whatcha think?
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It's about time you posted. That was funny. Post more SOON.

Originally posted by consentida
It's about time you posted. That was funny. Post more SOON.

Glad ya liked,Twinny, here's more fer ya.......

"KATE!?!?"John Jr called out,now terrified.
"What?"She asked cheerfully,as SHe watched him look for where the voice came from."Up here."
John spotted her standing on the dock,dripping wet and swam back as fast as he could. "You bitch!!!!"He yelled as He climbed the ladder on the dock. "You scared the hell outta me!!"
"I'm sorry!"Her smile faded as He grabbed her by the shoulders,and backed her against the post."John,calm down!"
"I wanna slap you into next week soooooooo bad,right now!!!"He glared down at her,"That was not fair game! I thought you were dead!!"
"I'm sorry! I shouldn't have taken that far,okay. I'm sorry!" Kate sighed. She watched as He paced around.
"Gah! I Have never wanted to hit a woman as much as I do right now!"
His statement didn't sit well with Kate,and now she was mad aswell,"Don'tcha have the guts to do it?!" She exclaimed. Kate's eyes grew huge as He raced torwards her with a raised hand. His hand flew toward her with great speed ,but suddenly she found herself in an extremely passionate liplock.
After a long while they stopped for air.
Kate put her hand over his that was holding her face,"Damn,you blow hot and cold."She whispered with a smirk.
"Oh,I'm still very pissed off."He replied and kissed her again. In The midst of their heated make out session that was getting hotter,they lost their balance and fell into the water.
"Woo! The water's cold!"She squeeled. They laughed for a moment,then went back to kissing in the cold water. Until a few moments later,when the lights of a passing boat interupted them.
"Y...y....y...y'know...w...what...let...lets....."Kate shivered in his arms,"go...go someplace..."
"A...a...little...w...warm...mer?"He finished for her.
"Yeah."


"Come on...Come on Cheri Berry..."Katie tried to talk her daughter into eating creamed sweet potatoes for breakfast. "It's gooooood!" She put the spoon to the five month old's mouth.
Cheri kept her mouth firmly closed.
"here I'll prove it."Katie took a bite herself."Ugh! Omy gawd,this nasty!"She exclaimed,and spit into a napkin,and took a big sip of her orange juice,"Ugh! Gross!."
Cheri found this quite amusing,and smiled as She let out a squeel.
"Sorry,kiddo."Katie said as She took the oppertunity,ans put the spoon in her mouth."It's for you're own good,really."
Cheri's smile imediately faded as she swallowed the horrible tasting mush.


"So how was you're night? Magda asked her partner. "You're smile says Jeremy paid a visit."
"Yeeeah."Jinny chuckled,"And it was soooo funny....the poor guy,was trying ot suprise me,so he let himself into my appartment whiel i was gone. And when i got home,and heard someone in my room, naturally i grabbed my gun and..."
"Oh lord!" Magda laughed.
"We scared eachother to death! I came so close to blowing his brains out.....His eyes were huuuuuge!"
"He should know better then to suprise a cop like that...especially you."
"Oh,He definately knows better now!"
"So after that...."Magda cackled,"...what happened?"
"Uh-uh, nope, I don't give those kind of details."Jinny smirked.
"Wooooo!"


"Ugh! move your arm!"Kate thought as She tried a couple of different aproaches to freeing herself from John's grasp. As If he'd read her mind,he moved his arm...only instead of letting go of her,he tightened his grip. "Oh great!"She rolled her eyes. Giving up on being gentle, She pulled his arms loose,and shoved him off of her,wich took quite a bit of effort. "Oh geez."She chuckled as his snoring continued uninterupted. Shivering,she jerked what was left of the blanket on the bed off,and wrapped it around herself. "If only I had a camera."Kate thought out loud,smirkign at the sight of the very very handsom,younger,buck naked cop that was snoring like a freight train. Then she went to get her clothes out of the dryer.

Yawning,John rolled over,and threw his arm across Kate, only it landed on the bed instead. pealing his face off the pillow,He looked over,to see a note laying where her head had been not long ago. He rubbed his eyes,and picked up the note.
It read : Hey,sorry I wasn't there for breakfast. maybe next time.....Oh,and do something about that snoring problem. You sound like you're sawing a log.
"Maybe next time...hmmmm."He thought with a sly smile.

"So where is Cap,anyways? "Jinny asked,glancing at the clock on the wall.
"She called,and said She overslept."Raina informed."She said She'll be here asap."
"Oh."
"Yep."
"But Cap never oversleeps."Jinny said.
"Well, She said she was gonna work late last night,so..."Cd shrugged.
"Yep, I'm sure she did."Magda thought with a smirk.


Sooooo???whatcha think?? It sucked,didn't it?

Yay. Post more.

Just 4 u Twinny....partly coz ur the only 1 readin or so it seems.......


It had been almost two weeks since their suprisingly successful attempt at a date. They hadn't gone on another yet,but they certain had...gotten to know eachother much better. They thought they were keeping things a secret,but everyone had their suspitions that something had happened since New Year's Day. And those who didn't started to that day at the picnic int he park.
"Ugh! Why did i ever sleep with you?"Kate whispered,and shoved John away from her.
"Cause I charmed the skirt off ya."He brought up yet again the arguement they'd had a several times since that date.
"noooo you didn't."She protested,"I scared the pants off of you."
"Noooo,you just don't wanna admit,that you can't resist my charm."He flashed an 'Denis The Menace' kind of smile.
"Ha! What charm??"Kate scoffed,as She grabbed a beer out of the cooler.
"The charm I used to charm the skirt off ya."
"You didn't charm the skirt off me."Kate shook her head,"Open this. I scared the pants off of you."
"No,you didn't."John stated,as He opened her beer for her,"First of all: I wasn't scared. At all. I knew you were joking."
"Ha! Yeah,suuure, ooookay."Kate laughed,"And second of all?"
"My pants were already off when i asked ya out. Infact! Infact, they've been off since New Year's day."
"You're pants have been off since the day you hit puberty!"
"Ah,yes. That is very true. And you have just proven my point,Sexy."He slipped his hand onto her butt,and She dug her nails into his hand."You couldn't possibly have scared the pants off me,if they were already off."He continued trying to shake the pain out of his hand," Therefore, I charmed the skirt off of you."He smiled triumphantly.
"Shut up." She deliberately stepped on his foot,as She walked away.
"Admit it!" He grabebd her arm,and pulled her back.
"Lower your voice!"She whispered.
"Come on,admit it."He pinched her cheek.
"No."She slapped his hand
"Why?"
"Because there is nothing to admit. You didn't charm the pants off of me."She stated and walked away.
"Skirt!"He corrected as he grabbed her hand,and pulle dhe rback again.
"Whatever!"She yelled,and started to walk away,but turned around.
"Come back to admit it?"
"Nope."She stated,and poured her beer down his pants.

"What the hell are they fighting about??"Jinny asked.
"I'm not so sure i wanna know."Katie raised her eyebrow

"Cold...and yet something of a turn on."John shivered.
"Oh my gawd! How???"
"You're so sexy when you're mad."He laughd.
"Really?"She smiled,"Then you'll probably find it excitingly sexy,when I brake this bottle over your empty head." She held the bottle in the air.
"Heeey! Whoa there filly!" He grabbed the bottle,and tried to take it from her

"What the hell is going on over there?"Sara asked as she walked over to Jinny,Katie and Magda,and Jeremy.
"They're fighting,and playing tug-o-war with a beer bottle."Katie informed.
"What are they fighting about?"
“Who knows.”They all shrugged.
“Something about a skirt...”Jinny added.
"Did John pee in his pants?"Sara asked.

“Gimme,the damn bottle!”John tugged on it.
“No!”Kate kept a firm grip.”Why do ya want it so bad?”
“Because you might hit me with it!”He gave it as hard a tug as He could,and it flew out of her hand,smacking him in the face.
“Oh my god! Are you okay!?”
“Y...yeah....yeah...i think.” He blinked,”I can’t feel my nose...is it bleeding?”
“A little,maybe I should take you to the emergancy room.”
“Naw...I’m..oookay....”He sighed,”Why the hell did you let go!?!?!”
“Why the hell did you pull so hard!?!”
“Don’t yell at me,you broke my nose!! I’m supposed to yell at you!!”
“I did not break your nose! You’re the one that pulled so hard!”
“You wouldn’t let go! Why wouldn’t you let go!?”
“So i’d have it at hand, if i decided to hit ya with it!”
“Bitch!”
“Jackass!”Kate yelled,and then was quiet for a moment,“Y’know what...”
“What?”
“I think we argued the pants off of eachother.”
“like now?”He smiled.
“...come on....lets go back to my place....so i can fix your nose for ya.”She smirked.

“Now,how the...” Katie looked at them in amazement,and confusion.
“Are they both bipolar?”Jinny asked.
“I think they’re both just plain nuts!”Jeremy stated.
“I think they’re goin to get some...”Magda thought .

Soooooo????Whatcha think???? Hmmmmmm????

:lol: That was great. (!!!)

OMG I loved the whole beer bottle thing that was great! LMAO anyway post more please!!!! and I am still reading....

Hey, has this great fic died or what? :D
I'd like more of it pleeeeeeease!

I'ma post more asap lol, i've been tryin to get time lol. Got any suggestions?

Yup! More about the crazy great grandma and John Jr! :D

or anythbody else.....:D

Originally posted by Georgiakj
Yup! More about the crazy great grandma and John Jr! :D

or anythbody else.....:D

Here you go. Hope it's crazy enough for ya! ;) Let me know.....



"K,they've been gone for like an hour and a half."Katie pointed out as She swinged holding her daughter. "It doesn't take that long to fix a bloody nose."
"Yeah,where the hell did they go?"Jeremy added.


"Okay,okay. We really need to go back now."Kate giggled,and looked over at the clock on her bedside table,"It doesn't take an hour and a half to fix a bloody nose."
"I have a big nose." John winked.
"Well,yeah. Ya do. Huge. But not big enough for them to believe that it took an hour and a half to get it to stop bleeding."
"You think my nose is huge?" John propped himself up on one elbow,"Well...I think your...hooters are huge."
Kate looked down at her chest for a moment,then back up at him,"Did you intend for me to be insulted by that?"She smirked.
"Nah..i just wanted to see if i could say it,and not get slapped."
At that Kate slapped him.
"Ow."He rubbed the side of his head," Hmmm...so you're into the rough stuff,huh?" He pulled her under him,"I gotta admit,McCafferty. I never figured you for the kinky type."
" I'm not."She laughed," Get off of me. Come on,we gotta get back,before they come lookin."
"Shut up,before you kill the mood." He kissed her before she had time to protest again.

"Maybe they went to her place...and lost track of time."Jinny smirked.
"I'll put my whole pay check on it."Magda thought.
"The only reason you're keeping that joke going,is to drive me crazy isn't it?"Jeremy glared at his girlfriend
"Yep."Jinny smiled. "And because it's funny."
"Him going crazy,or Kate &John jr's fatal attraction?"Sara laughed.
"it didn't seem fatal the other night." Magda mumbled.
"What??"Everyone exclaimed in unison.
"What what?"Magda starred at them.
"What do you mean by 'it didn't seem fatal the other night' ??"Jinny asked.
"I said that out loud?!"
"Yep."
"What do ya mean??"Jeremy asked.
"Weeell...."Magda smiled sheepishly," Ya can't let them know I said anything. But....I uh...ran into them somewhere a couple of weeks ago....they seemed to be enjoying eachother's company quite a bit."
"how much quite a bit?"Jinny raised her eyebrow.
" Dancing,kissing...lots of kissing...They were holding hands when they went to her car....quite a bit."
" No wait. Now who was this?"Katie asked." I thought we were talking about Kate & John. I'm majorly confused here."
"We are talking about Kate & John."Magda said.
"Kate McCafferty & John Exstead Jr?"
"Yeah. And you guys can't say anything,okay? Don't say anything to them!"

A few minutes later Kate decided that they absolutely had to go back.
"John- -John- -"
John ignored her,and continued to kiss her.
"John...stop."
He did just so,moving from her lips to her neck. After a moment he continued further down.
"Ooo....okay, maybe just a lil longer....."She laughed. "Okay, no,really. Stop....John...stop...."
"Ooow!"Johnjr. exclaimed when Kate grabbed his hair,and pulled his face away frm her chest.
"John. Stop."She smirked.
"Let go of my hair,ya kinky freak."
"Get up,get dressed, we gotta go."
"No we don't." He started to kiss her again. And she grabbed his hair.
"Yes we do. get up."
"You tease!" He pouted as He got up and searched for his clothes.
"Oh,you got that right!" She smiled slyly as She tried to reach her bra....wich had fallen behind the dresser.
"Could ya move the dresser for me?"
"No."
"Why?"
"Because I'm enjoying the view of you trying to reach behind it very...very much." John Jr smiled.
"Pervert!" Kate pulled open her underwear drawer and pulled out another bra.

"You're mom is sleeping with my brother."Jinny snickered. "She slammed him up against the wall once,and hit him....i'm sure She's done it since then...but she probably kissed him instead."
"Shut up."Jeremy glared at his girlfriend.
"Ya remember the time She helped him practice his lines when he was Romeo in the school play? And He kissed her,and She bit his tongue?"
"What about it?"
"I doubt the bit his tongue the last time he kissed her!"Katie cackled.
"Nooo! Definately not!"Magda laughed" The night i ran into them,it looked like SHe might accidently though!"
"Magda I should take Jinny's gun and shoot you."Jeremy glared at her.
"Why?"
"Because you can't keep a damn secret! She's never gonna shut up about this!"
'Well,look who finally decided to get dressed."Jinyn smirked. Pointing to the short redhaired woman,and the tall brunette cop across the park,walking towards them.
"hmmm...they're fighting about something...trouble in paradise? Or maybe that punch was mearly so he could claim that the hickey is a bruise."Sara smirked.

"Ouch! That hurt,Woman!"John Jr rubbed his shoulder,then slapped her's.
"I know your daddy taught you not to hit girls!"Kate punched him again.
"Stop hitting me!"He slapepd her arm again.
"I swear if you hit me again,I will knock you into next week!"
"Stop hitting me!"
"I told you not to unhook my bra!"
"Okay,ya know what! Thats it!"John tossed her over his shoulder.
"Put me down!"

"Okay,She of all people should know slapping his ass is not the way to get him to stop."
"Jinny, I swear if you make one more joke!"Jeremy warned
"Um...i was being serious."She tried not to laugh.


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:lol: Oh man that was hilarious. Post more!

LMAO Emma is Kinky Is what I think! mawhahahahaha! more more more more more more more more... Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! That was awsome!

Originally posted by Irish_Rose_Kate
LMAO Emma is Kinky Is what I think! mawhahahahaha! more more more more more more more more... Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! That was awsome!

Me??:angel: Noooooo,not meee. :angel: There's not a kinky bone in my body. :angel: ..........well....maybe my sense of humor.
;) :D :lol: but your sense of humor is kinkier!

Loooove it! Mooore! Pleeease!

Ok i haven't posted on this in a year WHOA! lol so yeah i'm posting now for the sake of it. Hope peeps are still reading!!



"I have decided to give becoming a cop some serious thought." Katie stated as She took her birth mother's holster from the coat tree and put it on.
"Right on!"Jinny cheered and handed her badge to her which she hung around her neck.
"How do I look?"Katie laughed.
"Throw on my leather jacket,and you can go to work for me tomorrow....no one will know the difference."
"Until it comes down to having to use the gun,and I end up shooting Magda in the foot."
"That would be bad."
"What's this talk about shooting Magda in the foot?"Katie's adoptive mother asked as She entered the room.
"I am very seriously considering following in my birth mom's footsteps,and becoming a cop."
"You kidding right???"
"No. Why?"
"You know how dangerous police work is!"
"Yeah..."Katie shrugged.
"Have you lost your freakin mind??"
"I have come to the conclusion that minds are he! reditary,and sense Jinny never had one to give me..."
"Ha ha- -Heeey!"Jinny began to laugh,but realized the joke was on her.
"That was classic!"Sara cracked up."I Don't know what was funnier...what you said or Jinny's reaction!"
"I highly resent that."Jinny pouted.
"Oh come on. You know it was funny."Katie laughed."I thought you were proud of being crazy."
"Being crazy does not mean I don't have a mind. I do...Though my testimony may not hold up in court, I do have a very intelligent...yet crazy mind." Jinny as well as Katie and Sara began to laugh harder as She defended herself.
"okay...seriously now..."Katie calmed her laugh to a chuckle," I really think I wanna be a cop."
"And I think you'd be good at it."Jinny said.
"Thank you,I do too."She smiled," I am a direct descendant of three of the best cops in San Francisco,and two of them are still on the force,I'll definitely learn well."
"Are you sucking up?"Jinny grinned.
"Yeah..."
"What do ! you want?"
"To go on a ride along."
"I think I can swing t hat."
"Thank you!" Katie kissed Jinny's cheek, Then jogged upstairs when She heard Cheri begin to cry over the baby monitor.
"Jinny..."Sara said.
"Sara...."
"You say you wish there was some way to repay me for loving and raising her so well... I just thought of something."
"What?"
"Take her on that ride along....and scare the living hell out of her!....Safely though."
"Okay."Jinny laughed,"And what if She still wants to be a cop?"
"Then I guess it's out of my hands...I liked it much better two weeks ago,before She turned eighteen and all I would have had to do is refuse to sign the permission slip."
"Will I be doing the same thing when Isaac wants to go on a ride along?"
"Absolutely!"
"Cap had me do the same thing when Amanda thought She wanted to be a cop."
"Okay the fact that a veteran police captain thinks it's too dangerous does not make me feel better."
"Oh no, it wasn't for Amanda's safety...it was for the citizens of San Fr! ancisco's safety."
"Oh."Sara tried not to laugh.


"C'mon,John. Y'know ya want one of these furry angels!" John Jr's partner Michelle encouraged as they walked through the hallway lined wth barking dogs in cages.
"I dunno." John shrugged.
"You could teach it to do tricks and fetch you the remote..and a beer,so you don't hafta get off you lazy ass to get it yourself."She winked.
"I think about it." And then a thought hit him,Tricks huh? He grinned to himself. And I've got the perfect name picked out. "I just might come back by after work."


Everyone who passed by the supply closet door,including Jinny, never gave it a first thought,let alone a second. The possibility that at that very moment something besides brooms,mops,dust pans and ladders was inside it. If jinny had known what was going on in that closet She might become the first person to literally die laughing. However her boyfriend and D.C. Haysbert would not be amused at all.
John Jr broke the long, steamy kiss and stared at the redhead He had pinned to the wall with a 'Cat that caught the canary' grin.
"What?" She asked.
"I'm in the supply closet with the captain.Do know how many guys fantasize about something like this?" He planted another passionate kiss on her and then worked his way down her neck. His hands were busy unbuttoning her shirt,while his lips made their way farther down.
"We really shouldn't be doing this here." A sly grin grew across her face. " We really need to get outta here. A Janitor could- -"
"Shhh."John kisses her lips.
'We've been in here too long,people are probably starting to- -" She was cut off by his lips again.
"Be quiet. Nobody will suspect a thing if you shut up." He kissed her again,and his hands moved down to the hem of her skirt.

"Are you nuts? We can't!" She protested as He lifted her skirt up.

"Hey,Magda have you seen Cap anywhere?" Raina asked.
Magda looked up from her paper work, "Last time i saw her was like twenty minutes ago."
"What did she just vanish?" Raina threw her arms in the air,and she continue don her search. She passed nate on her way out of the bullpen,"Hey have you seen Cap?"
"bout fifteen minutes ago."
"Where?"
"Her office."
"Oh..." Raina rolled her eyes.

" I am absolutely nuts!" John Jr lifted her onto the table," Nuts about you."
"Oh bull! Don't even use that on me! You use that line on every woman you meet!"
" Ok,so I'm not nuts about you,I'm nuts because of you." He planted a deep smoldering kiss on her.
"You were nuts long before we ever got together." Kate tried to catch her breath.

" Teddy,please tell me you've seen Cap."Raina pleaded.
"Short,redheaded woman in a blue power suite?" Teddy replied.
"Finally! Where was She?"
"Anchorside. We had a breakfast meeting this morning." He smirked.
"You haven't seen her since?" Raina pouted.
"Nope,sorry."
'It's okay." SHe sighed,and continued her hunt the missing cop.

" John,we can't..." Kate protested as He guided her thong down her legs." It's too risky,we could get caught."
" Would you just stuff it? I gotta be back on my beat in..." He looked at his watch" thirty minutes, I don't have time for you fake protests."
Kate flashed a 'Cat that caught the canary' grin, "Okay.' She giggled,grabbing his belt buckle and pulling him closer.

"Jinny!" Raina called out as SHe rushe dover to her. They caught up with eachother infront of the seemingly empty utility closet.
"Still not found Cap?" Jinny asked.
"I guess you don't know where she is then?"
"Not a clue. Stacy told me you were looking for her."
"Well as soon as you see her, cuff her to you and drag her ass back to the bullpen!"
"Will do." Jinny laughed, just as they were about to head in oposite directions, a loud thud echoed form the closet.
"What the hell?" They said in unison. Both shrugged it off,figuring it was a janitor,and went on their ways.

"Crap!" Kate whispered as his belt missed the table and fell to the floor with a crash.
"They'll think it was a janitor." John Jr reassured as He struggled to unclasp her bra.
Growing impatient she took it off for him." If we get caught,I'll shoot you." SHe said as SHe unzipped his pants.
"Your threats only make it more fun." He grinned.
" Freak."
"Takes one to know one."
"Kiss me."She demanded as She worked the buttons on his uniform shirt open.
"Aye aye,Captain!" He gladly followed orders.

Making her way back to the bullpen ,Jinny heard another strange noise come from the utility closet,and paused for a moment,outside the door.She heard it again...and again...and again. Jinny recognized that sound."Who the hell...?" And then it dawned on her. Smirking,She went back to the bullpen.
"Found Cap yet?" She asked holding back a smile.
"Nope." Raina sighed.

" Shhh!" Kate exclaimed.
" I'm trying!" John whispered. He burried his face in her neck,trying to hold back another grunt.Kate bit her lip to keep herself from letting out a moan that would absolutely bring attention to their hiding place.

" I swear She's disapeared off the face of the earth!"Raina plopped down at her desk. " She is not in this building anwhere.I give up."
" Oh don't do that,Kiddo." Jinny gave her shoulder a reasuring punch," I'm sure she'll turn up soon."

Magda was so glad to finally get a chance to take a break. She was making a beeline for the break room. She was determined to get her break,and she wasn't going to give anyone the chance to stop her. But when she walked by the supply closet something else stopped her. She thought she heard a moan.She wondered if maybe she should go in. What if a janitor was hurt? Then she heard it again. And again. Nope. It wasn't a painful moan. Whoever wa sin there was definitely not hurting. I don't even wanna know! She thought as she continued on her way.

A few minutes passed by,and they both tried desperately to get their breathing under control again.
" How long till you hafta get back to work?" Kate asked,pulling her panties back on.
John Jr looked at his watch," Five minutes."
"You better mov eyour ass before you get wrote up." She smirked.
"You're just twisted enought to do it aren't ya?" He tucked his shirt into his pants." Even though it's your fault I'm gonna be late."
"Yup." Kate stated," Gotta keep up apearances.Besides You're the one that couldn't wait any longer."
He rolled his eyes.
"I'll go out first. You wait a minute,and then come." She stated.
" I always do." He grinned

Magda couldn't help but glance at the supply closet door every few seconds.She was curious to see who had the guts...or stupidity to do such a thing in a police station sopply closet.She finally got her answer whens he saw her captain sneak out. Highly intrigued,Magda continued to watch the closet door. Just as She predicted not long after John Jr exited the small room too." Well,I be damned." Magda raised an eyebrow. She saw them coming toward the breakroom,and quickly sat down at a table.



"No."Kate stated.
John jr whispered something else in her ear as they walked out of the closet and down the hall to the break room.
"No."
John whispered to her yet again as She poured herself some coffee and sat down next to Magda.
"Here's the file for the Turner case."She said to Magda. "And NO John!"
John whispered something else in her ear.
"If you don't stop bugging me then 'No' is the only answer you will ever get from me again,catch my drift?"
"Fine!"He sighed."Jeez, It was just a question...ya don't gotta be so cruel."
"And If ya don't get back to work right now, I'll write you up."
"I thought there were supposed to be perks with sleeping with the boss..."He whispered in her ear.
"The sheer pleasure of my company is that perk."She whispered back with a smile.
"Ha...right...yeah."He scoffed,"Bye,Katydid...bye Mag."
"Bye."Magda replied as He left.
"He is such a pain in the ass! Wanna! help me make his murder look like it was self defense?"
"What was all that about anyway?"
"Just him being stupid...."She smirked."Why does He love to bug me so much??"
"He thinks you're soooo sexy when you're mad."Magda laughed.
Only a short moment went by before Kate's cell phone rang.
"McCafferty."She answered," No."She stated to the person on the phone,and hang up.
"John?"Magda smirked.
Kate simply rolled her eyes in response.

" So,ya gonna take one of the adorable little guys home?" John Jr's partner nudged him with her elbow.
" I don't think so." He replied.
"Why not?"
"I don't know if my building even allows pets."
"Check into it."
"I might."john Jr shrugged.
" Can I help you?" A worker at the shelter asked.
" Yeah." Michelle replied," We're lookin for Bill Delius."
" He's in the back, I'll go get him for ya."
"Thanks."
"C'mon Kate." The worker said as He lead the dog he was holding into it's pin.
"What's the dog's name?" John Jr flashed a sly grin.



"Okay so what's the big news?"Kate asked as She entered the Exstead home,and hang her holster & gun and purse on the coat tree.
"Weeeell, I got something to tell ya - -"Katie was cut off by her uncle.
"Hey, Glad you're here!" John Jr smiled ever so sweetly,as He tossed his arm around her.
"Are you drunk?" Kate asked him as He walked her to the couch and motioned for her to sit down.
"No, I am perfectly sober. Have a seat."He sat on the couch and patted his lap.
Kate scoffed and sat beside him.
"Fine be that way."He smirked. "Kate, come here!" He whistled.
"What the.. ?Kate looked at him like He'd lost his mind. Then suddenly a beautiful Golden Retriever appeared from the kitchen.
"You didn't!" Kate glared at him.
"Kate...meet Kate."And evil smile grew across his face. "Kate, Shake."
Kate..the dog held out her paw for the other Kate to shake.
"Don't be rude! Shake her hand!" John jr nudged Kate.Giving John the 'Go to Hell' look Kate shook the dogs paw.
"Watch this...I love this!"John cackled." Kate sit."
The dog sat down.
"Kate,lay down."
"I hate you."Kate said as the dog laid down.
John jr giggled devilishly,and flashed his Dennis The Menace smile "Kate...roll over."
Kate The Dog immediately did as She was told.
"That's my favorite one." He laughed. "Now why can't you be that well behaved?"

"How do you know I can't?" Kate asked in a seductive whisper,and flashed the grin that He couldn't resist.
What the hell,Katie thought as She exchanged a confused look with her father.
"Kate...kiss me."John Jr tested.
Kate smiled, and leaned in closer. She let her lips brush lightly against his as She said "Hell no."

Yeah a lot of that really sucked.
Sooooo?? Is anybody still reading????Hmmmm???

That was great!!
I have missed this fanfiction so much
keep going!!

Hey!!
I was just wondering if you are still going to work on this fanfiction. I understand if your not, but its really good and i wanna know whats going to happen.

Hi. :D
Yeah,I'm still working on it lol Sloooooowly but surely. I'll post more asap. Promise ;)