Here is a preview of a fic I might write,tell me what u think.......................


Kate was fixing herself a cup of coffee when a girl about 17 or 18 walked into the division. "Can I help you?"

"Uh,maybe, Are you Jinny Exstead?" The girl replied. She was a tall girl ,with shoulder length black hair,and green eyes.She looked quite a bit Like Jinny,only about 5 months pregnant.

"No,I'm not...."

"Is this where she works?" The girl was obviously very nervous.

"Yes it is,she's not working today though,can I take a message?"

"Uh....can I ask who you are?"

"I'm her captain"
"Uh....Just tell her: Kaitlyn Harris came by to see her........Tell my birth name was Elizabeth Marie.....Exstead." She ran her fingers through her hair ,just like Jinny does.

Kate looked at her in almost shock,She looked so much like Jinny it was scarey. "Will do."

"Uh....will she be in tomarrow?"

"Yes she will."

"Tell her I'll come back tomarrow,too" with that Kaitlyn walked out,not giving Kate a chance to reply.
"That was weird" Kate thought,as she headed for her office.
Then she stopped dead in her tracks." Was that........no,it couldn't be.........but what if.."







want me 2 go on?

omg, that is really good. Post more soon.

DUDE:) I WANT YOU TO GO ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That's so awesome! Keep it up!

YES YES YES I hope it's her daughter lol but then again, that would mean Jinny would have had her as a teenager. And I don't know if that's the kind of fan fic I would right, but that's just my opinion. Right what you like and don't let me stop you! Go girl!

Originally posted by Iliveforjayandnancy
YES YES YES I hope it's her daughter lol but then again, that would mean Jinny would have had her as a teenager. And I don't know if that's the kind of fan fic I would right, but that's just my opinion. Right what you like and don't let me stop you! Go girl!

lol. Actualy I have already stated on it,it is under a different thread. i couldn't think of a title,so......
if ya wanna read what I added to it ,just scroll down, and u'll see it. It's down near the bottom of the page.


i haven't worked on it in a loooong time, I kinda forgot about it lol.
I dunno if i'm gonna finish it or not, cause I got another idea,and it's kinda similar to that.

I know what the idea is! I helped!