TeddyisMINE!!!!
05-03-2002, 12:02 PM
Here is a preview of a fic I might write,tell me what u think.......................
Kate was fixing herself a cup of coffee when a girl about 17 or 18 walked into the division. "Can I help you?"
"Uh,maybe, Are you Jinny Exstead?" The girl replied. She was a tall girl ,with shoulder length black hair,and green eyes.She looked quite a bit Like Jinny,only about 5 months pregnant.
"No,I'm not...."
"Is this where she works?" The girl was obviously very nervous.
"Yes it is,she's not working today though,can I take a message?"
"Uh....can I ask who you are?"
"I'm her captain"
"Uh....Just tell her: Kaitlyn Harris came by to see her........Tell my birth name was Elizabeth Marie.....Exstead." She ran her fingers through her hair ,just like Jinny does.
Kate looked at her in almost shock,She looked so much like Jinny it was scarey. "Will do."
"Uh....will she be in tomarrow?"
"Yes she will."
"Tell her I'll come back tomarrow,too" with that Kaitlyn walked out,not giving Kate a chance to reply.
"That was weird" Kate thought,as she headed for her office.
Then she stopped dead in her tracks." Was that........no,it couldn't be.........but what if.."
want me 2 go on?
Kate was fixing herself a cup of coffee when a girl about 17 or 18 walked into the division. "Can I help you?"
"Uh,maybe, Are you Jinny Exstead?" The girl replied. She was a tall girl ,with shoulder length black hair,and green eyes.She looked quite a bit Like Jinny,only about 5 months pregnant.
"No,I'm not...."
"Is this where she works?" The girl was obviously very nervous.
"Yes it is,she's not working today though,can I take a message?"
"Uh....can I ask who you are?"
"I'm her captain"
"Uh....Just tell her: Kaitlyn Harris came by to see her........Tell my birth name was Elizabeth Marie.....Exstead." She ran her fingers through her hair ,just like Jinny does.
Kate looked at her in almost shock,She looked so much like Jinny it was scarey. "Will do."
"Uh....will she be in tomarrow?"
"Yes she will."
"Tell her I'll come back tomarrow,too" with that Kaitlyn walked out,not giving Kate a chance to reply.
"That was weird" Kate thought,as she headed for her office.
Then she stopped dead in her tracks." Was that........no,it couldn't be.........but what if.."
want me 2 go on?