ok i'll tell u this right now this wont exactly follow the way td going right now because i think i will have teddy in it

-at the division-

(camera shows jinnys empty desk than shows magda glancing from jinnys desk back to her paperwork)
(the cap comes out with someone)
cap:ok i would like u all to know this is a new officer raina washington
(few people go shake hands with her) (after everyone is seated again mag goes into kates office)
mag:cap
kate:yes
mag:(closes the door)did u hear jinny finally decided to go to rehab
kate:wow talk about a miracle but good for her.
mag:i know uh i just thought i'd clue you in
kate:thanks
(magda walks out and sits down at her desk)
cd:so how long has jinny been in rehab now?
mag:a week and a half they dont want me coming to visit or calling till they worked with her two weeks
cd:how much trouble do you think they're having with her?
mag:tell me about it.........wheres angela?
cd:i dont know shes late
mag:as jin would probably say first time for everything
cd:yeah....you miss her already dont you?
mag:i guess
(angela comes in with a huge smile on her face and walks right into the caps office without even saying hi to the others and closes the door)
cap:angela your late
angela:i know
kate:then why are you smiling?
angela:i'm pregnant
kate:really? how far along?
angela: a month and a half...thats what i need to talk to about
kate:we can give you light duty.......
angela:thats not it..... we're moving
kate:why
angela:we agreed that san fransisco is not the best place to raise a baby
kate:oh...
angela :but i'll still be here for a month or 2 depends on how fast we find a place
kate:ok...well(says with a smile) get out of here you have work to do
angela:(starts walking out)
kate :oh and angela
angela:yes ?
kate:congratulations
angela:thanks(walks out)
(walks over to mag and cd)
angela:guys .........i'm pregnent
mag:congratulations
cd:yeah wow lot happen in a week
angela:have i been off that long?
mag:how far along
angela :almost 2 months
(mags desk phone rings)
mag:hello? really...... that bad? ok i'll be over soon as i can(hangs up)
mag:that was jinnys rehab they said they are having alot of trouble with her and she wont get out of bed i'm going to ask the day off to see her

what do ya think?

sweet~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! add more!!! great start

MORE!

oooo...this is good. great topic. more!

wow since i got so many replys already i'll post more give me 15 minutes

(mag gos into the caps office)
mag:hey cap
kate:wow my office is just full of people this morning(looks up from what shes reading)something wrong?
mag:can i take the rest of the day off ?
kate:might i ask why
mag:its jin.......i'm visiting jinny
kate:magda number 1 you are a very bad liar
mag:ok i just got a call from jins rehab their having some trouble with her
kate:by all means go
mag:thank you (starts to walk out)
kate:oh and magda ?
mag:yeah?
kate:she appreciates what your doing for her
mag:thank you captain
(walks out)

-at rehab-
(mags just getting out of her car)
(walks in and up to the desk)
mag:jinny extead?
lady:oh yes we've been expecting you i'll take you there
mag:thank you

(walking down the hall)

lady:here it is room 302 look before we go in i want to tell you whats going on she lays in her bed everyday under a blanket at night she watches some tv but thats it
(she sticks a key in) o yeah this room is extra secure because of her depression (unlocks the door opens it)
(MAGDA WALKS IN)

i'll leave ya hangin though i might post more tonight

A-D-D M-O-R-E!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!

just for you hockybabe528 lol

(mag walks over to jinnys bed but cant see jinny cause jin has a blanket over her head as shes laying there)
mag:jinny its mag
jin;hm
mag:(pulls covers off jinny)jinny!
jin:what?!(jin says while blocking the light from her eyes)
mag:(mags mouth drops open to see jinnys eyes red from obviously crying) jin jinny i'll be right back(she walks out with the lady) how long has she been doing this
lady:at least a week
mag:well arent you guys trained to help her
lady:well ya see.........
mag:never mind(goes back in by jinny)jin i'm back
(jin got the blanket over her again)
mag:jinny!(pulls the blanket completely off the bed)
jin:what do you want!?
(mag sits on jins bed)
mag:jin why are you doing this ?
jin:doing what?!
mag:from what i hear yuo wont go anywhere
jin(under her breath) thats cause i cant
mag:what was that?
jinny: nevermind
mag:jin answer why are you doing this?
jin:mag ......its just so depressing
mag:what do you mean?
jin:mag do you know why the tv and vcr in my room are stck into the walls?
mag:uh..
jin:so no one will hang themselves on it and you know what else i cant even have my belt because they are afraid of that you know you want to take a walk at 6:oo you cant its to late your locked in
mag:what if you have to use the bathroom?
jin:you press this button and a nurse which takes you into the bathroom and waits in the bathroom!
mag:i can see how that can be a pain......
jin:mag look at my walls they are padded! no pictures with glass in the frame
mag:well this would not have happened if you would have been better your first few days
jin:why your still locked in! now leave me alone(pulls the blanket over her head

so what do you think?

Originally posted by aeysh1
just for you hockybabe528 lol
so what do you think?


lol sweet.............i think....I LOVE IT!! add more!!!

This is really good.Add more soon! Please:D

ok thanx for replys heres more

-back at the division-
(magda walks into the doors)
cd:hey mag i thought....
(cap comes out)
kate:i thought you were going to see jinny?
mag:i did....cap can i talk to you a sec?
kate:come on in
mag:thank you
(magda walks in and closes the door)
kate:so hows the patient?
mag:not so good thats why they called me over
kate:they called you over? why jin being a smart a@@
mag:captain thats not even funny she wont get out of her bed shes so depressed they put her in maximum security...
kate:wow that is bad
mag:captain can the division send her something i'll pay just your signatures...
kate:i wouldn't hear of that we buy the....flowers?
mag:jin hates flowers how bout chocolates
kate:ok any particular kind?
mag:anything without nuts preferrably milk chocolate
kate;ok i'm on it

so whos reading this?

I'm reading this and it is AWESOME!!!!!!!!! Please Post More!!!

I am now!! LOL I wasn't before but I am now it's so good already!

welcome newcomers!
than you for reading my fanfic

buh-bye

oh almost forgot i'll try to post more tonight

thanx for the replys heres more!

cap:hey magda what do you think about you cd angela visiting her?
mag:you left out one person add captain
cap:do you really think it would do her any good to see me she'll get frusterated
mag:definately at least if she get frusterated she'll be doing something
kate:well-...ok
mag:how about saturday?
kate:you mean tomorrow
mag: (looks at the caps calender) i guess i do (she said with a smile) i'll tell cd and those guys
(walks out)
mag:cd angela come here
(they walk over)
mag:if it works out with you guys we are going to visit jin tomorrow, us and the captain
angela:works for me
cd:ditto
mag:ok then meet me at anchorside and you can follow me there . meet me at 10:00
angela:ooo early
mag:jinny has had enough sleep!
cd:what does that mean?
mag: o you'll see
(walks into the caps office)
mag:captain we are meeting at anchorside at 10
kate:i'll be there

whatcha think?

ya i made another page! (';')

sorry just wanted to say that

heeeeeeeeeeey this rocks!!!!!!!! addddddd some more!

magda sat in the parking lot at anchorside
mag:5 to 10 whare are they cant they be early? uhhh.....(she said while getting out of her car and walking into anchorside
(walks up to thebar)
man:can i help u?
mag:1 breakfast borrito everything
man:brave one
magda*smirked*
(angela walked in)
man:anything else
mag:coffee, hey angela!
angela:where is everyone i thought i was running late?
mag:i'm sure they'll be here
(the man hands mag her breakfast)
angela:uh i'll have your yogurt cup and orange juice
mag:poor jin i saw what she eats there ew
man:hands her the orange juice) the yogurt is on its way
angela:thanks (she takes a sip)
man:here you are thank you
angela:thank you
man:the total is3 bucks and 7 cents

i cant post more tonight i will post more ........soon!

magda and angela sit down and start eating
angela:you've already visited jinny right?
mag(swallowing a bite of borrito shakes her head)

the captain and cd came in talking

mag:i was beginning to think you werent gonna show
kate:magda its 2 minutes after 10........well you'll lead in your car magda and we will follow
cd:cap what do you want
cap:breakfast borrito
(cd walks up to order)
mag:remember dont give her another intervention lets just act like we are just visiting not that we are worried
cd:ok cap heres your borrito
kate:thanks well lets hit it

what do you think?