View Full Version : New Fic, me and Caitlin. MOO!
Jinny Girl 02-01-2002, 10:41 PM Magda stood plastered to the side of a building with hr gun drawn. Jinny was about a block away. They had to surround this guy. They had been waiting to long to catch him. He deserved to be back on death row. Thomas Jenkins was his name. A convicted mass murderer who escaped from prison 2 months ago. Everytime anyone was about to catch him, he managed to slip away. Magda listened carefully. He was back there alright. Sneaking around in an alley. 'He thinks he's lost us... HA' Magda thought. She spun around and pointed her gun directly at him.
"FREEZE! SFPD! Put your hands above your head!" Magda yelled. He didn't put his hands above his head... At all. he drew his gun and pointed it at her.
"Nice try!" he said. His gun wasn't actually loaded but he was the only person who knew that.
"look bud, I'm gonna give you to the count of 3 to drop the gun----- 1!!!!!" She started.
"You don't have the guts to shoot me!" He said 'What the hell?' he thought 'Their gonna give me lethal injection anyway!'
"2!!!!" He didnt move... "LOOK YOU ARE REALLY TESTING MY PATIENCE HERE!!! Now I dont want to kill you now... So Just put down the gun... You have one more count left."
"... Who cares they;re gonna kill me anyway!" he said.
"THREE!!!!!!!!!!" Magda fired but he jumped when she said 3 and it missed him. It was dark and she could not see into the alley very far, but she heard something.
"Who's there!?" she yelled... She turned on her flashlight.
"It's me.... O God,,, You shot me..."
"Omg JINNY!"
ok caitlin dear!
InspectorExstead 02-01-2002, 11:52 PM :eek: NOOOO ! POST NOW !!!! OMG....THIS IS SOO GOOD. OMG...YOU HAVE TO POST MORE.....OR ELSE I WILL NOT SLEEP TONIGHT...OMGOMGOMG. THAT WAS JUST SO...KEEP POSTIN !! NOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo 02-02-2002, 12:12 AM this is awesome! but don't desert the "Unexpected romance"!!!
Babes_Cat 02-02-2002, 01:20 AM Originally posted by JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo
this is awesome! but don't desert the "Unexpected romance"!!!
Damn I know, I got this and The Unexpected Romance and A One Night Stand Comes back To haunt Her.... I got 3 going.... Am I in over my head? YEP I AM!
sue z q 02-02-2002, 02:29 AM CAITLIN!!!
POST!!!
LOL, I don't care how many ya got going, POST ON ALL OF EM!! LOL
Swimfan85 02-02-2002, 11:53 AM lol susan!!!! i agree come post for me!!! wel....darren?? come on hurry up girl!!!lol
Jinny Girl 02-02-2002, 12:09 PM POOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOST! I cant wait to see what happens next ur killing me!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHH!... This is like... my story isn't it? heh...:blush:
[b][u]O WHAT THEN HELL CAITLIN POST MORE!!!!!!!!:bash:
And shame on u for posting a reply without making more story!!!!!:nonono:
Ewan's My Man 02-02-2002, 02:09 PM POST MORE...NOW!!!
Babes_Cat 02-02-2002, 04:20 PM Originally posted by hockeybabe528
lol susan!!!! i agree come post for me!!! wel....darren?? come on hurry up girl!!!lol
Post more for Darren? Umm say what?
sue z q 02-02-2002, 04:35 PM Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
Post more for Darren? Umm say what?
CAITLIN!! You're avoiding me!!
POST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOL ;)
Babes_Cat 02-02-2002, 04:59 PM Originally posted by sue z q
CAITLIN!! You're avoiding me!!
POST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOL ;)
Im what?
Sorry Guys! I just added more to the one I am doing with Lisa then I will reply to Megans and then this one! hopefully later today!
SORRY! :kiss:
Jinny Girl 02-02-2002, 05:07 PM Caitlin, your head is an Egg.
:smash: '
Your head is now a fried agg baking on the blacktop parking lot of the KMART in Plainfeild. In a matter of moments your head will be eaten by a homeless man.
:livid::angryfire: POST BEFORE THE HOMELESS MAN EATS YOUR HEAD CAITLIN! :angryfire::livid:
InspectorExstead 02-02-2002, 08:30 PM Originally posted by Jinny Girl
Caitlin, your head is an Egg.
:smash: '
Your head is now a fried agg baking on the blacktop parking lot of the KMART in Plainfeild. In a matter of moments your head will be eaten by a homeless man.
:livid::angryfire: POST BEFORE THE HOMELESS MAN EATS YOUR HEAD CAITLIN! :angryfire::livid:
caitlin post before the homeless man eats your head if he eats it you'll have to post..eyeless..lol. :D
Babes_Cat 02-02-2002, 11:30 PM Originally posted by Jinny Girl
Caitlin, your head is an Egg.
:smash: '
Your head is now a fried agg baking on the blacktop parking lot of the KMART in Plainfeild. In a matter of moments your head will be eaten by a homeless man.
:livid::angryfire: POST BEFORE THE HOMELESS MAN EATS YOUR HEAD CAITLIN! :angryfire::livid:
Dana........ If he eats my head then I will never be able to post anymore!
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"Yeah, it's me, Jinny! So what? You just gonna stand there and not help me?" "OMG! Jinny I am so sorry!" Magda snaps out of her shocked state and runs over to where Jinny is. "Where did I shoot you?" She asks. "First off why the hell did you shoot me?" Jinny yells. "I didn't know you were there! Where did it hit you? ANSWER ME!" Jinny rolls her eyes, "My stomach." Mag gasps, "I did? EW! OMG! Jinny I am so sorry!" "Yeah so I've heard" Jinny replies sarcastically, holding her stomach, " So, ummm, you gonna help me or call someone?" "Is it really bad?" Mag asks. "Well it wasn't but yeah, it has been since you have done nothing to help except make me talk to you and lose energy!" Magda takes a deep breath and gets out her cell phone, "OK, sorry, AGAIN! I'm calling, I'm calling for help you just sit down and rest k?" Jinny obeys and leans up against the building wall and closes her eyes and holds her stomach. Its not bleeding that much but is damageable.
A short while later the ambulance arrives and Jinny is taken to the hospital and taken away to surgery. Magda is left to sit in the office and call Kate and tell her what has happened.
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Damn, Y'all I AM SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SORRY! That sucked......... *sighs* Sorry. Dana your turn!
sue z q 02-02-2002, 11:35 PM ooooooo, stupid Mag!! Whoop, dat'd be stupid me...nvm... ;)
Now Dana, please post, cause then I can say...
CAITLIN!! POST!!
:lol:
Babes_Cat 02-02-2002, 11:38 PM Originally posted by sue z q
CAITLIN!! POST!!
:lol:
WOW! SUSAN! You like saying CAITLIN! POST!
Am I fun to boss around? Hmm....? *raises eyebrows*
HAHA YEAH! STUPID YOU! :p YOU HOOKER! MWHAHAHAHAHA!
Babes_Cat 02-04-2002, 07:50 PM Umm excuse me DANA! You hound me for more but you have yet to add more yourself! HAHA! J/k! I know you coming!
XoVanillaRain90oX 02-04-2002, 07:54 PM POST DANA POST!!!!
Jinny Girl 02-04-2002, 08:18 PM I AM HERE!! AAAAAAAAAH!
"McCafferty?" Captain answered her phone.
"Capt. It's magda..."
"Hey magda.. Whatsup? How'd the arrest go?" Captain asked.
"it went bad, the guy got away and I shot Jinny." Magda said.
"You what???" Captain said in that "WTF!@?" voice.
"yeah she was somewhere behind the guy and he jumped when I shot and it missed him and hit her!" Magda said "This is ALL my fault... I should have checked to see if she were there."
"It's NOT your fault... if she alright?"
"I don't know... I hit her in the stomach (cap mumbles "geezus.." in the background) and she's in surgery... she could be dead for all I know." Magda said.
"Don't say that... I'll be there right away... Call my cell if anything happens in the 5 minites it will actuallu take me to get there." Captain hung up and drove to the hospital going about 60 MPH in a 15 MPH school zone... But it didn't matter because she's a cop and she can do whatever she wants... Untyil someone notices that is. A patrol officer pulled behind her whith the whole lights and sirens thing so she pulled over.
"Excuse me Ma'am.." He said "But you were going about 4 times the speed limit. I'll need to see some ID." He said. Kate handed him her wallet and he opened it up. "CAPTAIN! Hi... Oh you changed your hair it looks so nice!"
"Shut up." Captain said as she took back her badge and drove away very very fast again.
'Not to self: Fire him.' she thought.
ur turn... The homeless mans a comin!
Jinny_JoFan 02-04-2002, 08:34 PM GOD GIRL POST MORE THIS IS AWESOME
KerriBerri687 02-04-2002, 09:24 PM post more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pleeeeez! this is sooooooo good!
InspectorExstead 02-07-2002, 12:35 AM Originally posted by Jinny Girl
"CAPTAIN! Hi... Oh you changed your hair it looks so nice!"
"Shut up." Captain said as she took back her badge and drove away very very fast again.
'Not to self: Fire him.' she thought.
:lol: ...lol...that was a classic moment..lol..post more caitlin !!!!!!!!
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