ok so here's a fanfic by me and caitlin.




Jinny to herself:My second AA meeting. Bunch of crap. Here's a list of all the AA meeting..blah blah blah. I don't know why I'm even doing this. Maybe to shut Magda up. Why is she so nosy all the time ? For once, just once, can she let ME live MY own life.
Jinny had had a bad day. The Captain yelled at her because she didn't get her facts straight. Is it her fault that witnesses lie ? And to top it off Magda had threatened to drag Jinny with her to the next meeting if she didn't show up for this. So not wanting Magda to show up w/ her at the next meeting Jinny decided she would do it.

Jinny walking down the hall to room 4 where this weeks meeting was. Suddenly a guy from nowhere came behind her.

Jinny:what the hell ?!?!
Guy:Say sumthin Jinny ?
Jinny:Uhh...and you are ?
Guy:Oh...uh I'm uh Tom..Tom Banks. (lol)
Jinny:And I care because....?
Guy:We go to the same meetings. We're in the same support group.
Jinny:Oh...

Jinny didn't care how cute he was (and he was VERY cute !) she just got this weird feeling around him. It wasn't a he-is-not-good-in-bed feeling but more a cop feeling. Knowing right from wrong. Danger from non-danger.

Jinny:Yeah well here we are...

She had never been happy to get into the room.She just didn't want to hear, talk or look at that creepy guy.

Jinny to herself after she took her place among the other recovering alcoholics :He is so familiar. I just can't put my thumb on it. Has he ever been to the division ? And how'd he know my name ? I've only been to one meeting. And I mentioned my name like once. *shudders*

Therapist Guy:Alright group. Let's start. Jinny you came.
Jinny sighs.
Jinny:Yeah....
Therapist:Great. That's good. Group let's welcome Jinny.
Jinny:Uh we did this last time.
Therapist:Yes I know but this time I would like it if you joined in.

So the group takes turns saying who they are and why they are here.

"I'm Maria and I have a drinking problem."
"I'm Ted and I drink too much."
"I'm Stephanie, I uh...I drank my life away."
"I'm Maggie. I drank and it cost me my kids. They're in a foster home right now."
"I'm Tom and I drink too much. I thought AA might help me relieve the tensions inside my body."
*He catches a glance at Jinny and winks at her. Jinny goes "oh god !"*
"I'm Dan and I drank and I abused my wife."

Then the therapist says:I'm Carol. And I used to drink. I've been sober for 25 years.
*Jinny mouths a whistle*

They all look at Jinny waiting for her to introduce herself and say that she has a problem.

Jinny:My name's Jinny and I uh..I uh *sighs* I drink...or at least I used to. Before I got suspended. *Tom chuckles. Jinny glances at him* Yeah....that's all.

Therapist:Good Jinny that's good. Admitting you have a problem *gets cut off by Jinny*
Jinny:Yeah yeah I know I know. Is the first step to recovery.
Therapist:Okay....

The group takes turns saying why they used to drink too much. Then it comes to Jinny.

Jinny:You know I dunno..I can't.
Tom:C'mon Jin. SHARE !
Jinny just looks at him.

Therapist:Ok. Meeting's over. Jinny we'll start with you at our next meeting which will be the day after tomorrow, Thursday.

They all leave.

Jinny goes out onto the street. She sees a pay phone so she goes to call her dad.

Jinny dials number....

JohnSr:Hello ?
Jinny:Hey dad it's me.
JohnSR:JinnyGirl. How was the meeting ?
Jinny:Yeah it was comforting. Anyways..I'm by the market. You want me to get you anything ?
JohnSr:Yeah..can you get some lettuce and carrots.
Jinny:ok. Anything else ?
JohnSr:And some herbal tea.
Jinny:Herbal tea dad ??
JohnSr:Yeah your old man's drinking herbal tea ? What do you think of that ?
Jinny:I dunno. OK I'll be home in 20.
JohnSr:You gonna get a cab ?
Jinny:Yeah right. Like I can afford one. No I'll walk. The excersise will do me good.
JohnSr:Ok bye.
Jinny:Bye.

Jinny hangs up the phone.

She crosses the street and walks half a block down to the market. She enters.

Goes to the vegetable aisle.

Jinny:Ok..let's see.....Mmm....celery..brocclie...parsley..ah ha ! Lettuce. And carrots. Mm..does dad want big or baby ?? Well I'll get the big ones...save a few cents. They'll just have to be Bugs Bunny and chew on em. She then goes to the tea/coffe aisle and grabs a pack of herbal tea bags.

Jinny goes to the checkout stand.

Lady:Hello.
Jinny:*Smiles*Hey.
Lady scans the items.
Lady: $6.50.
Jinny:For lettuce, carrots and herbal tea ? Sheesh !
Lady laughs.
Jinny hands her $6.50.
Lady:Thank you *hands her reciept* And have a nice night.
Jinny:You too.

She walked to the door. She saw someone...a shadowy figure standing by the carts...

Jinny to herself:Mmm...whatever. $6.50 ? Man that's a lot for just 2 veggies and tea.

Jinny laves the market. She goes to the street corner. There was no one there so she decided to cross. Just then a car came towards her missing her by just a few inches.

Jinny yelling:HEY !! WATCH IT !!!!!! The nerve of some people. *By now the guy ahd taken off* Doesn't even bother to stop at a STOP SIGN !!!! Well at least I got 3 digits off his liscense. I'll deal with it tomorrow. I almost died.

Jinny did not like the creepy feeling she had. So instead of walking she decided to jog.

Jinny was almost at her dad's. Just a block left. One more.

All of a sudden a drunk popped up from nowhere. He looked like he hadn't had anything to eat for days. And he had a big bottle of brandy in his hand.


what do y'all think ?

it's gr8, post more soon.

O...this is REALLY good...u HAVE TO post more!!!

This is a really good start!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Originally posted by #1JoFan
O...this is REALLY good...u HAVE TO post more!!!
agree

"Geezus!" Jinny says as she puts her hand over her heart. She looks closer at the drunk man, "Tom?!?!" He slurs and hiccups, "Heya Jinny! Want some?" He holds up the bottle. "Yeah, yeah I do but not from you." Tom looks confused. Jinny shrugs, "Dunno what you put in there but I'm not that stupid as to accept a drink from you." "Wahetver, hey, you wanna come home with me?" He winks. Jinny rolls her eyes, "You don't have a snowball's chance in hell of me going home with you. Sorry that's a NO!" Tom gets a very pissed look on his face, "I SAID COME WITH ME!" He says and grabs her arm. "And I said NO!" She says as she pulls his arm off of hers and kicks him in the stomach. He falls over and knocks his head on the concrete and becomes unconscious.

"I'm Tom and I drink too much. I thought AA might help me relieve the tensions inside my body. What a bunch of crap!" Jinny says outloud to herself. She laughs, "Bye!" Jinny then sighs and jogs off, "If I don't have a heart attack before I get home then that's a miracle!"

Jinny opens the door to her father's house, "I'm home!" "Hey JinnyGirl, you get everything?" "Yeah, tea and the veggies." Say says as she holds up the bag. She then thinks to herself *And got almost run over by a car and then scared by a drunk*

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HAHA! Y'all: You don't have a snowball's chance in Hell Is my fav. line! LOL! I say it all the time!

:D :lol: :happyface

LMAO !! OMG !!! THAT IS TOO FUNNY !!!...YOU DON'T HAVE A SNOWBALL'S CHANCE IN HELL....WHAT A BUNCH OF CRAP...LOL...ALMOST GOT RUNOVER....OH MAN ! THAT WAS JUST TOO FUNNY !!! I'M GONNA GO CALM DOWN NOW !!

Originally posted by InspectorExstead
:D :lol: :happyface

LMAO !! OMG !!! THAT IS TOO FUNNY !!!...YOU DON'T HAVE A SNOWBALL'S CHANCE IN HELL....WHAT A BUNCH OF CRAP...LOL...ALMOST GOT RUNOVER....OH MAN ! THAT WAS JUST TOO FUNNY !!! I'M GONNA GO CALM DOWN NOW !!

Yeah, Megan calm down and.... ADD SOME MORE!

Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!

MMMMOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEEE!!!!

hehe

lol..oh man i'm STILL laughing..ok..uhh...here's more....


Jinny's dad walks in...

JohnSr:Hey JinnyGirl. What up ?
Jinny:DAD ? What up ? umm...i think you're a bit too old to be doing that...
JohnSr:Oh please...a man is never too old. Listen they're have a 32nd annual sober and clean socer game.
Jinny:Oooh how fun. And who are "they" may i ask ?
JohnSR:Oh you know AA people..so they wanna know if you can go.
Jinny:Dad I don't do soccer. ok bad choice of words...i don't play soccer.
JohnSR:I know it's been a while...
Jinny:*getting mad* NO dad...when i say I don't play soccer...it means I DON'T PLAY SOCCER !
JohnSR:It'll be fun.
Jinny:I'll think about it..ok ? I'm gonna shower...
JohnSR:Ok...hey i made dinner...left you a plate.
Jinny:oh what is it ?
JohnSR:Shrimp and rice.
Jinny:uhh..shrimp and rice..wow. you're beoming quite the cook aren't you ?
JohnSr:*does a little elvis impression* thank you thank you very much !
Jinny is laughing...
Jinny:Ok dad...i'm gonna go shower.
JohnSR:Ok jinnygirl.


SO Jinny grabs her towel, a clean brand a pair of underwear and her pjs.

Jinny:That drunk...that TOM! i'm sure he needs aa. *laughs* tensions my ass...yeah his tensions are the price of liquior going up. The nerve of some people. and he ACTUALLY thought he was getting some...boy he must've been real drunk. i mean real drunk.

John SR is passing through the hall when he hears Jinny in the bathroom.

JohnSR:Jinny...you talking to yourself ?
Jinny:uhh..No ! i was practicing what to say when i call up those aa people.
JohnSr:Ok...

Jinny takes her clothes off and opens the water. She's taking a shower...when all of a sudden....

something flew through the window.

Jinny:WHAT THE HELL ? A ROCK !?

she looks outside the window...and there standing in her front year..well her dad's....is TOM!

Jinny:OH MY GOD !!!! What the hell is wrong w/ you. *she looks at herself* Oh my god..i'm naked...she grabs a towel. *this is the first time she's actually cared about a guy looking at her while she's naked*

She looks outside the window again. Tom is nodding his head and smiling.

Jinny:uh...NO !

SHe opens the window.

Tom:Hey..s..ex..y.
jinny:God i wonder how many beers YOU had. mr.i need aa or else my life is over.
Tom:Uh no see that's not true..i DO need aa. so uhh..you're really sexy jin hun...when you're naked.
Jinny:You know what ? that's against the law..looking in on someone...specially when they're taking a damn shower. You pervert. what the hell is wrong w/ you ?
Tom:Oh come on..you know you want me..
Jinny:Uh no ! that's ok ! Listen i'm gonna give you to the count of 5 to get the hell offa my lawn or i swear to god i'm gonna call the cops...no wait. i'm a cop ! i'm gonna come down there and arrest your drunk ass !
Tom:well no see Jinny this is your dad's lawn.

Jinny thinking:what the hell...how did he know that ? and how could he remember it ...he's so wasted ?!?!

Tom:Ok..i'm leaving...but if u change your mind..you know where i am...*kisses the air..pretending to kiss her*

*Jinny looks disgusted*

Tom leaves.

JohnSR knocks on the bathroom door...

JohnSR:Hey Jinny who is that ? what's going on ?

your turn caitlin....:D

Originally posted by InspectorExstead
your turn caitlin....:D

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH GREAT! Hmmm... lemme think, lemme think!

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE...uh...now!

omg, post more, it's so good

post more soon. it's so good.

Originally posted by #1JoFan
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE...uh...now!

HAHA, Ok. Here's more even though the now was more like a week! SORRY!

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Jinny wraps the towel tighter around her and opens the door and pokes her head out, "Nothings going on Dad." "But I just heard someone... " He points into the bathroom. "Nope no one hear. Please can I finish my shower?" She asks. He nods, "yeah." He turns and walks away, "I coulda sworn I heard someone... I know I did. Ahhh whatever...." Jinny smiles and shuts the door and continues with her shower.

The next day Magda and Jinny are on break and they are at a diner getting some lunch. Jinny puts down her menu and looks at Magda.

"I think I got this guy who's been following me." "You do?" "Yeah, I mean he has been at the AA meeting but the thing is he has no problem. He's not a drunk. And then he came to the house last night and he threw a rock into the bathroom, I was taking a shower...." "Do I even want to know?" Mag says with a smile on her face. Jinny shrugs and shakes her head, "Probably not."

"So really Jin, a stalker?" Magda asks. "I guess, but I don't want him to be a stalker," Jinny sighs, "I don't seem to have good luck with those." Mag smiles and goes back to looking at the menu.

The waitress comes and takes their orders then their menus and then returns with their meals. Once the food is in front of them and they start to eat it, Jinny shrugs, "I don't know, it just kinda scares me. Having someone there and watching you, when you don't want them to our you don't know them.... I just...." *She looks out the window and the color drains out of her face* Mag notices Jinny's face and asks, "What Jin?" Jinny points out the window, "He's right there, in that car." Mag turns around and looks.

Toms sitting in his car, parked outside the diner and he seemed to be waiting for something. The guess was that he was waiting for Jinny to come out.

Jinny turns back to face Magda, "So, how we gonna get out?" "We're going to go out the front door like normal." "I'm not gonna go out if he's there!" "Oh Jinny stop it! You sound like a child. Don't be scared of him. I mean c'mon, you're a cop if anything he should be scared of you." Magda smiles and Jinny does the same. She sighs then nods, "K, fine, out the front door." Magda nods and they continue with their lunch.

Once they're done they pay and leave out through the front door. As soon as they are out of the diner Tom opens his car door and steps out in front of them.

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Again, I'm sorry it took so long! But there's more so you can annoy Megan for more! LOL!

CCCCCCAAAAAIIIIITTTTTLLLLLIIIIINNNNN!!!!!! I want more...o well...it isn't your turn...MMMEEEGGGAAANNN!!!!!!!

Originally posted by #1JoFan
CCCCCCAAAAAIIIIITTTTTLLLLLIIIIINNNNN!!!!!! I want more...o well...it isn't your turn...MMMEEEGGGAAANNN!!!!!!!

HAHA YEP! Now you gotta yell @ Megan not me.. *evilly frin* :lol:

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
Again, I'm sorry it took so long! But there's more so you can annoy Megan for more! LOL!


lol...oh gee thax...you're swell...OMG !!! U POSTED !!! YAY !!!!! AHH ! I AM SO HAPPY NOW...I AM ON CLOUD NINE !!!! :D ok i gotta think..hmmm...i'll post in like an hour or two i gotta think though !! ah..again...:D

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl


HAHA YEP! Now you gotta yell @ Megan not me.. *evilly frin* :lol:

not anymore toots ! cuz megan has come to the rescue with more !!!!

..so Tom has just stepped out...

Tom scared Magda.

Jinny:TOM ! WHAT THE HELL !
Tom:Hey sexy. Mmm..who is this.
Magda:InspectorRamirez. That's who.
Tom:MMM...you think your uh station has considered posing for Playboy cuz damn that would me niice !
Jinny:What the hell do you want ?
Tom:well...*checks out magda's butt*
Jinny gives him a disgusted look.
Tom pinches Magda's bootay !

Magda:Omg !
Jinny:WHAT ?
Magda:tom here just pinched my butt.
Jinny:Ok that's it. Look tom the station is across the street and you're not making fine choices now are you ?
Tom:look check it out *pulls down his pants andhis boxers revealing his..you know*

Jinny thinking:Not bad...JINNY ! the guy is stalking you now is not a good time for sex.

Magda:Omg you're sick.
Jinny:yeah and you're also under arrest. Pull your pants up..NOW ! *Tom pulls his pants up*
Tom:Arrest bitch nah ! i ain't doin nuthin.
Jinny: ERRR !! Wrong answer. You're under arrest for assaulting not one but two police officers. I hope you're happy.

Just then a officer walks by.

Officer:inspectors...
Magda:hey.
Jinny:OH hey bill listen our friend, tom, here, was assaulting us so can you do the honors and take him in ?
Officer:Sure what'd he do.
Jinny:Uhhh...he pinched InspectorRamierz's ass and he also flashed for us...how nice. hmm ?
Officer laughs.
Jinny:Yeah Tom can now go across the street to the division and talk to the wonderful captain. Oh my i sure envy you. you gee golly lucky guy you !

Tom laughs.

Tom:Yeah you make jokes now JINNY..but we'll see who's making the jokes later on. see you later chicky baby ! *blows her a kiss*

Officer takes him away.

Jinny:ugh man he's sick.
Magda:Boy you weren't kidding were you ?
Jinny:never thought I'd say this..but told you so !
Magda:aright aright. You got me.
Jinny:*laughs*yeah...
Magda:ok I'm gonna go back instead and pee then we'll leave.
Jinny:okey dokey pokey.

magda leaves.

Suddenly a man comes behind Jinny and taps her on the shoulder. Jinny didn't realize who it was. So she turns aound and knees him in the stomach.

Jinny:TEDDY ! WHAT THE HELL ?
Teddy:JInny uhh..ow.
Jinny:I'm sorry.

Jinny to herself:TEDDY ? What the hell is HE doing here ?

Teddy:Uh was that Tom you were talking to ?
Jinny:Yeah you know him ?
Teddy:Yeah he....


I didn't wanna deprive you of being bugged Caitlin...lol. SO your turn ! Have fun !

:D

Originally posted by InspectorExstead




I didn't wanna deprive you of being bugged Caitlin...lol. SO your turn ! Have fun !

:D


LOL!!! CCCAAAIIITTTLLLIIINNN!!!!!!! Pweety pweez wit suga on top and a cherry?!?!?!

Originally posted by #1JoFan



LOL!!! CCCAAAIIITTTLLLIIINNN!!!!!!! Pweety pweez wit suga on top and a cherry?!?!?!

WOW! I didnt even know that she added more.. Lauren I gotta read it 1st! LOL!

ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!?!?! ARE YOU F*CKING KIDDING ME?!?!?!?!? DAMNIT MEGAN! WHAT THE HELL AM I SUPPOSED TO WRITE NOW! AHHHHH! DAMN! E-MAIL ME W/ IDEAS CUZ I GOT NONE! WOW!!!!!!!!! ARE YOU SERIOUS! ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!?!?!

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl


WOW! I didnt even know that she added more.. Lauren I gotta read it 1st! LOL!

LOL...ok...u have read it...so post!!!:)

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!?!?! ARE YOU F*CKING KIDDING ME?!?!?!?!? DAMNIT MEGAN! WHAT THE HELL AM I SUPPOSED TO WRITE NOW! AHHHHH! DAMN! E-MAIL ME W/ IDEAS CUZ I GOT NONE! WOW!!!!!!!!! ARE YOU SERIOUS! ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!?!?!


:lol: ...life's a bitch and then you die so **** it and let's get high...on nancy...well not ON nancy but you know.......umm no kiki i ain't kiddin...by the way you mind if i call you kiki toots ? just wing it....that what i do..i never write stories ahead of time. anyway...i just wrote you an e-mail w/ ideas....don't forget to have fun ! :D

11 days!!! 11 days without dis fic and I need more!!!

Originally posted by InspectorExstead
Suddenly a man comes behind Jinny and taps her on the shoulder. Jinny didn't realize who it was. So she turns aound and knees him in the stomach.

Jinny:TEDDY ! WHAT THE HELL ?
Teddy:JInny uhh..ow.

LMBO!!!!!!!! OMG, that cracked me up when I read it... :lol:

CAITLIN!! POST!!

Originally posted by sue z q


LMBO!!!!!!!! OMG, that cracked me up when I read it... :lol:

CAITLIN!! POST!!

cool toots cool...:lol:

Originally posted by #1JoFan
11 days!!! 11 days without dis fic and I need more!!!

11 days ?! JUST 11 days ? jesus ! the week's gone by so slow...........

18 days! 18 days w/o more! LOL! Geezus I am soooooooooo bad!

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"He...." Jinny asks. "He's, ummm, a family friend I guess you could say." Teddy shrugs. Jinny laughs, "HIM? HIM? Geez, why in the hell would a family like yours befriend someone like him?" "I'm gonna take that as offensive." He smiles, "He knows my brother somehow." Jinny rolls her eyes, "He knows me somehow. He's like another stalker. He goes to the AA meeting, which he doesn't even need, he knows that I stay at my dad's house and where it is, he... " Her voice gets louder with each example of him being and stalker. Teddy grabs Jinny's shoulders and tried to make her calm down. Jinny puts her hands up, "I'm OK. I'm just, uhh, gonna go. Bye." She gets out of Teddy's grasp and walks into the Division.

Tom is brought into the "questioning room" and Cap, Magda and Jinny are already sitting in their. Tom sits down, still handcuffed and stares at Kate. "Geezus, what the hell is wrong with you? I DIDN'T DO NOTHING! You can't charge me with anything." "We can and we are," Madga says, "Assault of two police officers. There's the charge." Tom rolls his eyes and laughs. He goes back to staring at Kate, "So you're the "Captain" Geezus, whats so scary about you. I could take you. Ms. Captain of a division, all high and mighty." Cap smiles, "He a friend of yours Jinny? He sounds like you." Jinny gets a disgusted look on her face and shakes her head and stand up. "Yeah that's right baby! We're more than just friends, she's mine![/b] Jinny turns around and looks at him. Tom just smiles. Jinny sighs, "Geez, can ya just take him out of here?" Magda gets up and pulls Tom up out of the chair and takes him out of the room. Jinny walks out after them and sits down at her desk. As Magda is taking Tom out of the division and downstairs, Casey walks in. Jinny looks up and sees him, "Cas, what are you doing here?" Casey points the way that Tom and Magda went, "Who's he?" "An a$$hole." Casey laughs, "Cute too. What did he do?" Jinny just looks up and him and her jaw drops. "You did not just say that"

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GEEZUS THAT SUCKED! SORRY!

FINALLY!! Gees, Caitlin, getting slow on me, huh? LOL j/k ;)

POST MORE LISA SO I CAN SAY...

CAITLIN! POST!

:rotflmao:

Originally posted by sue z q
FINALLY!! Gees, Caitlin, getting slow on me, huh? LOL j/k ;)

POST MORE LISA SO I CAN SAY...

CAITLIN! POST!

:rotflmao:

Susan, *pssssssssssst* This is the FF I'm writing w/ MEGAN not Lisa!

AND YOU'RE SLOWER! Haha JK! Yep, I'm getting slower... *sighs*

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
Susan, *pssssssssssst* This is the FF I'm writing w/MEGAN not Lisa!

AND YOU'RE SLOWER! Haha JK! Yep, I'm getting slower... *sighs*

OMG, LMBO!!!!! I'm sorry, Megan!!! KK, lemme rephrase...

POST MORE MEGAN SO I CAN SAY...

CAITLIN! POST!

LMBO, thanks for the heads up, Caitlin... ;) haha

Originally posted by sue z q


OMG, LMBO!!!!! I'm sorry, Megan!!! KK, lemme rephrase...

POST MORE MEGAN SO I CAN SAY...

CAITLIN! POST!

LMBO, thanks for the heads up, Caitlin... ;) haha

Anytime, Hun. Anytime

MOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!

Originally posted by sue z q


OMG, LMBO!!!!! I'm sorry, Megan!!! KK, lemme rephrase...

POST MORE MEGAN SO I CAN SAY...

CAITLIN! POST!

LMBO, thanks for the heads up, Caitlin... ;) haha



no problemo toos...i understand how not reading a fanfic can have some side affects. hmm..what to write what to write...omg..u left me w/ a cliffhanger and i dunno what to do ! i love it ! :D

heya toots..tootsies...hmm..whatever...here's more...i'm gonna try to add a lot...cuz i'm bored, as usual....

So Casey has just told Jinny that he thinks tom Banks is cute...

Casey:Why not can't I think someone's gay. Jin don't tell me you're turning into JohnJr.
Jin:No, Casey, it's not, it's not that. It's just that-
Casey:What? Jin, is something wrong?
Jin:Your boyfriend's name over there his name is Tom Banks.
Casey:Tom Banks..sounds familiar.
Jin:Yeah anyway..he's been stalking me.
Casey:What?
Jin:He's everywhere, AA meetings, when I returned from the grocer, when I was talking a damn bath!
Casey: Ok Jin, just calm down. Are you sure?
Jin:What do you mean am I sure?
Casey:Are you sure that he was stalking you? You didn't make him think you were available or wanted him or-
Jin:NO! NOO ! CASEY! HOW COULD EVEN THINK THAT?!
Casey:I dunno...I mean AA meetings, a man can go to those if he has a problem, grocer, he was probably there. there's somethign we call food and uh...survival.
Jin:Yeah haha. He didn't need the AA meetings cuz I saw him DRUNK ! yeah and fine whatver that is HIS business but he was looking in at me while I was showering.
Casey:DO you know if he actually SAW you?
Jin:no...what are u taking his side now?
Casey:no..it's just that-
Jin:and he assaulted me and magda!
Casey:WHAT?!
Jin:yeah...showed me a preview of upcoming attractions if we went out. Pulled his pants down, for me, gosh I just feel so lucky now !
Casey:wow...didn't know that.
Jin:He still cute?
Casey:*looks around the division* *coughs* Listen Jin, omg, look at the time. I gotta go !
Jin:Casey- *gives him a sisterly look*
Casey:Yeah he is. I'm sorry. Bye. *gives Jin a kiss on the cheek*
Jin:bye.

Casey leaves and the captain comes over.

Jin: Oh...hi.
Cap:Jin..listen we're gonna take your uhh..friend...tom banks down to get a BAC. I'm guess he's drunk over the legal limit so we'll get him on two charges.

*Officer brings Tom by* *Tom stands there and looks at Jinny and just nods*

Jinny:stop ! STOP!
Cap:Jinny, lower your voice, INSPECTOR !
Jin:What is it captain ? Ever since I got back you've been down my throat about every damn thing I do.
Cap:Yeah well it's kinda hard to trust you after u screwed up big time last year.
Jin:yeah, last year. Not this year, last year.
Cap:Jin, today's not a good day and you're friend tom banks isn't really helping the process of me getting a betetr day.
Jin:HE IS NOT MY FRIEND !
Cap:Fine, whatever.
Jin:No, not whatver. He has been STALKING *shouts it loud enough for tom to hear, but doesn't look at him* me for the past dya or days or whatever. AA meetings, grocery, he was even outside of my house-
Tom:dad's house.
Jin:*looks at him w/ an evil look* WHATEVER ! MR.I'M GONNA PULL MY PANTS DOWN AND ASSAULT TWO OFFICERS !! As I was saying, he was outside of my house, my father's house, and I was taking a showe but who should appear but my very dear friend tom, tom! good ol' tom !
Cap:Jin, I'm sorry-I didn't know...
Jin:Yeah I think that was sorta the problem. No one-

*Police officer who was by Tom makes a painful noise and falls to the ground*
*Tom was getting his handuffs off while the cap and jin were talking and runs away*

Jin:OMG !!
Cap:GO ! GO AFTER HIM !


Jinny runs after him and chases him for about three blocks.

Jinny:TOM ! STOP RIGHT NOW ! YOU'VE ALREADY DONE THREE BAD THINGS...DON'T GO FOR FOUR.
Tom:*laughs while running*
Jin:I'm gonna get you. So just stop now *is out of breath*
Tom: Not in this lifetime INSPECTOR !Oh what's the matter Jin, outta breath ? Must be from that conversation with the captain. Or the beast.
Jin:HEY ! Nobody calls her the beast, but me !

Jinny chases Tom for another two blocks but Tom is faster than her. So Jinny eventually looses him and heads back to the Division.

Cap:Well?
Jin:well what? he's gone?
Cap:*let's out a deep breath* great.
Jin:Hey, this is your fault. if you hadn't been so into the conversation none of this would've happened.
Cap:It takes two to converse Jinny.

Magda comes up to them.

Mag:Hey guys, Jinny don't take this personally but, you look like hell.
Jin:*smiles* oh gee mag, how could I NOT take THAT
the wrong way.
Mag:What happened ??

what do u'all think ? KiKi you're turn ! :D

AHHHHHHH...OMG OMG OMG OMG!!! I NEEEEEEEEEEEED MORE!!!

Wow! OK, almost 1 month... Anyone even want me to add more? ('sides Mimi ;))

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
Wow! OK, almost 1 month... Anyone even want me to add more? ('sides Mimi ;))
Add MORE!!!!!!!

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
Wow! OK, almost 1 month... Anyone even want me to add more? ('sides Mimi ;))

this is mimi's..cousin..frini. yeah i want more! :D

I WANT MORE!!

after like two months or whatever...here's more. i have no idea what to write...

Jin:What do you think happened?
Mag:He got away?
Cap:HE GOT AWAY?!
Jin:Excuse me, you were the one all bitching and-
Mag:Jin..*waves her finger*
Jin: oh, don't Jinny me. Screw you ok. No..you know what I'm sorry. But you don't understand.
Mag:make me.
Cap just stands there.
Jin:You don't know how hard it is...being stalked. It's no walk in the park. You never know when you're gonna die. You don't know if today will be the day you die or if you'll ever see your dad again. You don't know how scary, yes scary, it is to have someone be right there 24/7 watching your every little move.
Cap:*sighs* jinny, I had no idea.
Jin:Yeah, I think that was part of the problem.
Mag:*hugs her, Jin doesn't move*
Jin:I'm gonna go home and just leave.
Cap: ok. Listen, don't worry. I sent some cops out there and you'll be fine.
Jin:What, are you gonna send one to my home too?
Cap:No, I think you'll be ok tonight.
Jin:*nods* yeah, well I've got an AA meeting tonight and I'll see you tomorrow I guess.
Mag and Cap:Bye.
Jin:*nods*

Jinny leaves the Division and remembers she does not have a car.

Jin:great. just great. *looks up at the sky* anything else?

Since Jinny didn't want to go back inside and call for a taxi, she decided to walk home.

The walk took Jinny a long while because she was going at a slow pace.

Jin:*looks at her watch* ****. I'm gonna be late for AA.
Tom:I could give you a ride.
Jin:*startled* turns around and realizes that Tom is not there* great, now I'm going insane. Just great.

She finally reaches her dad's house. She opens the door and goes inside and runs up the stairs. She bumps into her dad on the stairs.

Jin:hey dad, can't talk have aa. *leaves*
JohnSr:Jinny? You ok? *no answer* *JohnSr. just shakes his head*

Jinny showers, dries her hair and gets dressed. She walks down the stairs and is about to go out of the door when her dad stops her.

JohnSr:Jinny?
Jin:*turns around* what dad?
JohnSr:You ok?
Jin: dandy.
JohnSr:Jinny-
Jin:look dad, stuff happened. stuff I do not wish to go into right now. ok? I'm gonna be late.

Jinny leaves. Her taxi was outside waiting for her.

She gets in the car and gives the driver the directions. She even pictured Tom's face as the driver's.

She finally reaches the place where tonight's AA meeting was being held. She starts to go inside when she notices a familiar face walking towards her.

Jin:Teddy? What are you doing here?
Teddy:Jinny, we need to talk-now.
Jin:*looks puzzled* ok...

how did you ppl. enjoy that....

this is awesome! don't make us wait another 2 months!!!!!!

AWESOME!!! POST MORE SOON!!!!!

More then a month and where is my mind @? :crazy: Let's see if I can get a-writing on this fic........... hmmm.............