This is my first fanfiction So it might be bad. Forgive me. Ok here it goes.


Andy was lying in bed starring at the cilling. He was getting married in a week. He thought he had found the perfect girl. She was smart, beautiful, warm, compassionat. She was wonderful. So why was he so nervus a week before?
He got up to get a drink of water. He made his way through his tiny one room apartment. Sure he was one of the richest doctors in Peekskill, but he didn't want a big house untill he was married.Tootie was coming tomarrow and he couldn't wait. He hadn't seen her in a long time. The other girls still lived in Peekskill so he saw them often.He decided to go back to sleep.


"Tootie!" Jeff yelled from the living room, "We are gonna miss our plain of you don't hurry. We still got to pick up Amber too!"
"I am coming! You want me to look nice don't you?"
" you can do that on the plain, now come on!"
" Ok I'm here, do we got everything?"
"yes"
"Good lets go!"

Sorry this is so short. I didn't have much time today but I'll post more later.

Great!!! Post more!!!!!!

Good Start.

This is great...post more soon...and I m not lying...I wouldn't use my 500th post on a fic that wasn't good!!;)

Thanks so much for the compliments! Heres more


Tootie and Jeff arived at Amber's house in five minutes. They lived very close to each other. In the same neighborhood. Amber was very excited. She was going to Browdway that week. She wanted to be a Browdway actress all her life. This is why she is going.

(knock knock)
She opened the door. Tootie and Jeff was standing at the door.
"Hey Dorthy, Jeff! I'm so excited! Thank you so much for inviting me to come along! I know these are your friends and I'll probably be in the way and--"
"Amber it's ok," Tootie interuped,"you won't be in the way! My friends never see a moviesrar often, well except for me of course! Oh no, I am starting to sound like Blair now!"
"Don't worry honey, its not THAT bad yet." Jeff said playfully, "Are these your bags Amber?"
"Yes, I'll get them. But you can get this one."
She handed the biigest bag to Jeff.
"Man what do you have in here, rocks?"
"No, makeup."
"Ok, Jeff, Amber lets go I really want to see my friends now, and besides we will miss our plain."


"Beverlyann!" Mrs. Garrett called from down stairs,"come on, the girls will be here any minute!"
Mrs. garrett was so happy! She got to spend time with her girls, Andy was getting married, and Tootie was coming! Nothing could go wrong. Now if only Bev would get down here.
"Edna, What?"
"We have to clean the house! They will be here in a few minutes! And Tootie will be here in one hour!"
Bev looks around at the already spotless living room. Not finding one thing wrong with it.
"It looks fine to me." (ding dong) "It's to late anyway, there here!"
Mrs. garrett ran to the door. She opened it. There stood Blair.
"Blair! How are you? I haven't seen you sence well, last month!"
"I'm fine Mrs. Garrett. How are you?"
"Just great"
"Hi Bev!"
"Hey Blair."
They moved to the couch.
"I am so happy for Andy. He is gonna be so happy. Where is he?"
"He is getting Heather, his Bride-to-be, to bring her here to meet Tootie and Jeff and Amber."
"Oh, Well I can't wait to meet Amber. Jo and Nataile should be here soon. They were following me."(Ding dong)
"That must be them" Mrs. Garrett said as she raced to the door.
"Natalie! Jo!"
"Mrs garrett!" They said in unison.
"Come in sit down"
Everyone said hello.
"So," Nat started "When will tootie be here?"
"In a couple of hours" Said Bev
"I can't wait" Jo said. Everyone agreed.



Sorry this is so short. I just don't have much time to write. I wanted to have more diologe for Jo and Nat, but it would just be repeating what Blair said. With more depth.I lso didn't have time. Jo will play an important part later, so all you Jo fans will be satisfied also. It is a little slow right now, but it should get interesting tomarrow. I'll post more as soon as I can tomarrow.

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE *throwing temper tantrum* I want MORE!!! *sucking thumb* Ok...I'm all better now! ;)

Originally posted by #1JoFan
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE *throwing temper tantrum* I want MORE!!! *sucking thumb* Ok...I'm all better now! ;)



You're totally insane...I don't know you.......lol...TOTALLY KIDDING BEST BUD LAUDIE...........ok, now I'm crazy, it's SPREADING!
Anyway, she's finally right about one thing, which is that this is a GREAT fic so you should post more...

Calm down Lauren, Heres more!

Amber, Jeff, and Tootie got off the plain. They went to get their bags. Tootie was so excited. She counl hardly beileve she would see her friends in just a few hours.

"Ok Amber you must know something. My friends call me Tootie.You probably should too, if you want."
"Tootie?"
"Yes! It may not be much of a nick name, but its mine!"
"It sounds like an ice cream flavor. Ya know tootie frutie!"
"Ladies," Jeff began,"why don't we get something to eat at subway? It in the food court here. I saw it just a minute ago."
"ok" Tootie and Amber said.

As they go in subway, they over hear a very desturbing conversation. They stopped and listened. They just stood there and watched.

"Heather, when are you onna dump that loser and come with me?"
"Harvy, you know the plain!"
"Uh, tell it to me again."
"I marry the rich little doctor, then stay with him for a couple of months,to make it look good, then kill him. Make it look like an accedent and take his money. Just like always. After we run out of money, I find a new rich boy toy."
"We've done it again, my sweet!"They walked right past Tootie, Amber,and Jeff. Arm in arm.

"I think we need to get out of here now!" Tootie said
"Good idea." Jeff agreed
"Wait!" Amber said "We have to tell the police! We can't let her get away with this."
"We can't we don't know there last names or anything."
"Jeffs right, Amber we don't even have evedence."
"Ok lets go, I hope who she is doing this to will see what she is doing."Amber couldn't help thinking that she could do something, anything. Se just followed in awe at what she had just heard.



They finally get to mrs. Garrett's house. Amber loved the outside. It was so nice, calm. It made her forget compleatly about what she heard. Tootie was just so excited she couldn't think of anything else. She was practically jumping up and down by the time they got to the door. Jeff was happy to see tootie so happy. This was truely awonderful day. Besides well,you know.

Ok I'll post more later and thanks for the great replies!:D
Oh yea I have to tell you something. This story will mostly be in little posts, but what I lack in size, I'll make up in time. In other words, I'll post everyday.

Originally posted by Charlotte Rae Fan




You're totally insane...I don't know you.......lol...TOTALLY KIDDING BEST BUD LAUDIE...........ok, now I'm crazy, it's SPREADING!
Anyway, she's finally right about one thing, which is that this is a GREAT fic so you should post more...


HEHEHE...of course u kno me...EVERY1 wants to kno me ;)...but I didn't give craziness to u...I GOT it from u...hehehe...:crazy:<u and me!


Originally posted by Acting Girl 19


Calm down Lauren, Heres more!

HAHA!!! As long as you posted some more! ;) So...post more!!!

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!!LOL!You want me to go on?! (LAUDIE ARE YOU CRAZY?!?!wait......isnt' that what we've been discucssing!!!!!!?!?LOL!)

Originally posted by Charlotte Rae Fan
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!!LOL!You want me to go on?! (LAUDIE ARE YOU CRAZY?!?!wait......isnt' that what we've been discucssing!!!!!!?!?LOL!)

ME CRAZY?!?!?!?! I m not the one who said More a zillion times...I think u r the crazy one! ;)

I am dedicating this post to #1JoFan and Charlotte Rae Fan. To y'all :D


(Knock knock)
"They're here!" Mrs. Garrett shouted as she ran to the door.She was so excited because she knew who was on the other side of the door. It was Tootie. Tootie, Jeff, and Amber. She was right, because when she opened the door, her face lighted up, and she huged Tootie.

"Tootie!" Mrs. Garrett said.
"Mrs. Garrett" Tootie replied. Everyone came over said their hellos huged ect.
"I would like to introduce my friend, Amber Cothorn. Amber, this is Mrs. Garrett, Beverlyann, Jo, Blair, and Natalie.Everone said hello.
"So, Amber how do you like New York so far? Nat asked.
"Oh I love It, I love browdway. I am so excited about going to a play and maybe looking into doing a play."
"Thats nice, but Nat do you really think she has had enough time to reallsee New York?" Jo questioned.
"Yes Jo! I think you can see a lot of a place in a couple of hours!"
"So," Tootie began "Where's Andy?"
"He was called in to work on one of his patients" Bev said
"It was just the flu" Mrs. Garrett stated
"He will probably be here soon."
(knock knock)
"Wow Blair thats amazing" Bev said
"Yes I know"
"Oh please" Jo said aloud.
"I'll get it" Mrs. Garrett went to the door."Hi Andy!"
"Hey Mrs. G" He replied
"Andy!" Tootie said as she ran to him."I've missed you so much!"
"Tootie!" He said as he huged her."I've missed you too."
"You remember Jeff"
"Yes, Hi how are you?"
"Good I can't belive this is you you were so small when I last saw you."Jeff replied
"And this is Amber Cothorn." Tootie continued
"Hi!" Amber said "I's nice to meet you."
"Yea you too. Your on that show aren't you?"
"Yea That show right." she said sarcastially.
"Man I can't belive you are getting married!" Tootie said
"Yea I think I have found the perfect girl."
"Andy you never did tell us her name" Nat said
"Heather."He said. Amber, Jeff, and Tootie all stared at each other. All three thought back to earlier that day at subway"She will be here in about two hours. Are you guys ok?"
"Yes were fine."Tootie said
"It is probably not the same person" Jeff mouthed to Tootie and Amber as everyone else was talking.
"It could be!" Amber mouthed back.
"Jeff's right, at least I hope he is. For Andys sake" Tootie mouthed to Amber.
"I have met her before," Jo began, "she is very nice. And perfect for you Andy, But there is something that bugs me about her."
"Your over reacting Jo. She's over reacting Andy." Blair said.
"I've met her too."Bev started
" Well of course you have Bev. He is your son!" Jo answered.
"I know! And she is a lovely girl."
"Well all we need is her to be here, then we can go out to dinner."







Hope you like this. I'll post more as soon as I can! Which will probably be tomarrow!

AWESOME! Oh wow! you're dedicating it to me...(oh yea, and Lauren) jk! Me AND LAUREN!! WHOA! THANK YA SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!LOL I go crazy when people start dedicating things to me..it seems soo......permanent...anyway, WRITE MORE SOON!! It's AWESOME!(BTW...your name is Amber, Tootie's movie star friend's name is Amber......connection?!?!LOL!)

Originally posted by Acting Girl 19
I am dedicating this post to #1JoFan and Charlotte Rae Fan. To y'all :D



Awww...that's so sweet! I feel so special!!! :D!

Originally posted by Charlotte Rae Fan

AWESOME! Oh wow! you're dedicating it to me...(oh yea, and Lauren) jk! Me AND LAUREN!! WHOA! THANK YA SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!LOL I go crazy when people start dedicating things to me..it seems soo......permanent...anyway, WRITE MORE SOON!! It's AWESOME!(BTW...your name is Amber, Tootie's movie star friend's name is Amber......connection?!?!LOL!)



:livid: GRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!! LIZZIE!!! U REALLY BOOST MY SELF ESTEEM!!! :boxing: < U r the one I m punching!!! :joke: Even though u are mean to me...*sniff sniff* I still LYLAS!!! :wink2:...actually...I find it VERY hard to be mad at u...so u get off...this time!

WOW!!! I M SO ********!!! (Lizzie...don't say NEthing!!!) I forgot to say the most important thing! POST MORE SOON!!!

Lizzie, There is no connection. I just couldn't think of a name:lookaroun :grineyes: I have decided to dedicate the whole thing to you two, cuz you are the only ones reading it. So heres more!



"Its been three hours, shouldn't Heather be here?" Nat asked.
"I bet she will be here any minute." Blair announced.
(knock knock)
"Ok what are you doing Blair? I know there is something going on with this whole 'knowing when people are oing to come' thing."
"She can hear the car pulling up in the driveway, I can here it to."
"Tootie!" Blair cried
"Sorry."
"I'll get it." Andy said as he went toward the door. As he opened it everyone came to meet Heather, before Tootie, Jeff and Amber could see her. "Everyone I would like you to meet Heather. Heather this is Blair, Natalie, Tootie, Jeff, and Amber. You know everybody else."
Tootie and Amber gasped, Jeff just started. They couldn't belive it. Especialy Tootie. There was Heather, the girl that was at Subway in the airport. The girl that was going to kill Andy and run away with Harvy.
"Is everything ok?" Mrs. G asked.
"Yea yea, everythings fine why do you ask?''
"Nevermind" said Mrs.G very curious.
"Hey aren't you two famose or something?"
"Yea they are" Said Jeff still stunned.
Amber did like a kind of sign language to Jeff and tootie. She pointed to herself, then put her hand to her ears to look like a phone, points to Tootie, nods head to kitchen. It was like I'll call you so we can talk in the kithchen. Confusing, but tootie and Jeff understood. Amber called her and her cell phone rang.
"I'll get it. Hello......ok...........yes there here......ok hold on. Amber, Jeff this is really for y'all also. lets go into the kitchen."



I'll post more soon.:D Do you like it?

GREAT!!! ARE YOU KIDDING?!?! IT WAS AWESOME!!MRS.G IS GONNA SOOOOOO BE A HUGE PART OF THIS STORY!!!!!!O YEA!!!U HUH!! U HUH!!! ..sorry.....lol..I love it, and don't get discouraged, people don't read my fan fics, but yours, yours are good, people will read them! I could quote Balir and say, " No great artist is recognized until after she's dead," but that wouldn't really give you much hope at all!!:LOL: SOOOOOOOOOOOO, CHIN UP CHIN UP!! PUt a little laughter in your eyes!!lol.....I haven't watched that movie in forever, but that was one of my favorite songs, it always reminded me to BE HAPPY!!!!:):):)

I am so sorry I haven't been posting. I am not abandoning this. I just have had so much stuff happen to me. Not bad things. Well some bad but some good. And Lizzie, I read your fan fics and loved them! Don't think noone read yours cuz I did. WQell here is more.


"Oh no! What are we gonna do? What are we gonna do?" Amber asked panicy. It was resonable there was a crazed maniac killer in the other room.
"First we need to calm down. Then-"
"Jeff, There is a crazed maniac killer in the other room. She is going to kill Andy. If she knows we know she may kill us to. HOW CAN YOU TELL US TO BE CALM?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?" Tootie screached.
"Well if we are to loud, she might could here us."
"Oh"
"Anyway like I was saying, then we need a plan. We just need to sit here and think a while."
"What is going on here?" Mrs. Gartett came in all confused.
" Mrs. Garrett?!?!?!?!?!" Tottie said surprised.
"Well ya see mrs. Garrett, it is like this. Heather is...a...well-" Amber started
"A killer."
"Thanks tootie. a killer. And she wants to kill well"
"Andy"
"Thanks Jeff. Because he is a doctor and is rich and is going to run away with this guy named Harvy. And this is not the firt time she has don it."
"And we are tring to figure out a way to get her out of the house and Andy's life." Tootie said.
"Oh my. How do you know?"
"We saw her at Subway. In the airport."
"Oh no. Can I help? I mean I love Andy like he was my own nephew. I can let him die."
"Ok course mrs. Garrett! We need all the help we can get."Tootie said.
"I just hope it will work."


More as soon as I can.

OMG!!! Geesha Beesha (lol...Lizzie!) I m sooooooo sry I haven't replied in like a gazillion years!!! I hadn't even noticed u posted more!!!!!!!! LOL!! NEwayzie...post more soon...this really is a good fic...don't worry about not having many people respond...just as long as u enjoy writing it. Lizzie...I think the Mrs G. side of me just came out...I need to go hypervinalate. This is awesome!!!!

Ok...Lizzie's comp is screwed up...again...and being the wonderful friend I m...;)...I m replying for her...she says:

AWESOME!!!!! TWO THUMBS UP!!!

POST MORE SOON!!!

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE......."now you don't want me to lose interest do you?!"LOL! Mrs. G said that once, but we won't go into that now, POST MORE ASAP!!!

okay, you haven't posted in a while so I thought I'd give you a little encouragement! I really like this fic, so I'm sitting here....waiting....impatiently.......for more...lol! How's that for encouragement!!?!?
write more soon, I'm looking forward to it!

Thanks for the replies! Oh and thanks for the emcourarement! I haven't been posting I know. This is accually the first chance I have had on the computer, for at least 30 minutes, in a long time. So I hope you like it!


"I've got it!" Amber said enthusiasticlly. She had the perfect plan.
"You got what?"
"I've got the perfect plan. Ok heres what we will do. We'll go in to the living room all calm like. Then when its time to go to dinner, we will all take a seprate car. Just the four of us. So when we go home, we can say we have to go get some stuff at the store. We will call here, ask for Jo since she is a cop, tell her every thing, she will arest her, everything will be fine."
"Sounds fine to me" Jeff said.
"Do you think it will work? I mean, don't you think that who ever picks up the phone will know it is us?"Tootie asked
"I figured it all out. One of us will say we are Jo's partner. She will tell everyone she has to go down to the police station, so she can get backup or whatever she needs to arrest Heather."
"Thats not bad. I think it will work!" Mrs. Garett said.

They all went into the living room. They were scared, Mrs. G most of all."So shall we go?" she said.
"Ok, lets all meet at the resterant."Nat said.
"Mrs. G can go with us if she wants to. We have enough room." Jeff said.
"Ok."


I know it is short I just don't have enough time any more I will poat more as soon as I can.

AWESOME!!!(I woulda posted sooner, but my internet has been screwed up..again, can you believe it?! and I haven't had much time on the boards lately)
POSt SOON!!

MORE!!! I hadn't even noticed u added more...ya c...I hang out on da Division boards a lil too much these days...

Ok I am now going to add more finally. I am going to try to finish it before spring break is over. Oh and thanks for all the comments. even though there was only two.



They were headed to the most fancy French restarant in town, The cordon Blue. Everyone was excited. The people in Jeff's car were scared out of their minds. Partly because they are going to dinner with a crazed phycopathic murderess, partly because what they were all about to do.

"Ok so when we get back to the house, you Amber..."Tootie said speaking in short sentences.
"....will say I've got a tremandous headack."
"Then me and you and Jeff...."
"....will go to the store, but actually go to the nearest tellophone both."
"Then we will call Mrs. G..."
"...Where I will answer it and give it to Jo telling her it is her partner..."
"....and Amber ...."
"...will explain everything to Jo then...."
"excuse me I am the one who is going over this plan!"
"sorry"
"thats ok. ....And then Jo will get whatever she needs, go back to the house, make an arrest, and this deal will be kaput. any queations? No good."

They arive at the restarant. Everyone gets out of their cars. Except Jeffs car. Just as they were about to go Amber shouted
"Wait!!!!! What if someone has head ack medicen?"
"Noone has it they never do. Mrs. G might have some."tootie said while looking at her.
" I'll say we don't."
"What if Bev says you do?" Jeff asked.
"I'll say I used the last pill yesterday"

Everyone agreed and they went to eat. Everyone went in the restarant together. The party was so big they had to put two tables together. Everyone was laughing and talking and having a good time. Some not as good as the others, but even they were having a good time. All the while Tootie was thinking that it was hard to believe that Heather was a killer. But it was true, and she won't get to Andy. Not if she could help it.


more soon!do you like?

I LOVE IT!! POST MORE SOON!!!

TOTALLY AWESOME ! ! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I had typed the whole thing last night but my computer messed up,so I hafta tipe it all over again!Thanks for likeing this fic(Lizzie and Lauren) Heres more!


They got back to the house at about six' o clock. They started talking awhile. Heather was supposed to stay untill 8. After about ten minutes Amber stood up to say she had a headack.

"I think I am going to go back to the hotel. I have a terrible headack."
"OH no you can't! Stay I'm sure Mrs. G has some asprin." Nat pleaded
"Oh yea Edna we should have some."bev said
"Well I had a terrible neck ack the other day and I took the last two." She said.
"I'll just go to the hotel we ave some there don't we?"
"No I took the last one today." Jeff said.
"I'll just go to the store."
"You don't know where it is. Jeff and I will go with you." Tootie said.
"Ok."
"We will be back in a couple of minutes."

Everyone said goodbye and they were on their way. They stoped at the closes phoneboth. It was in front of Burger King. They went in the both and Jeff put a dime in.
"Hello?"Mrs. Garrett said in the way she usually says hello.
"Hi Mrs. Garrett Its me Amber."
"Oh? Jo's partner?"
"Ya, put Jo on Now Please."
"Ok," To Jo,"It is your partner."
"Thanks Mrs. G."
"Jo? Before you say a word please pretend that I am your partner. Please it is a life or death situstion."
"Ok Whats up?"
"This is Amber, Tootie, and Jeff ok Heather is a murderer."
"What?"
So they start explaning. jo new they were telling the truth. It was Tootie after all. It was hard to believe that heather. Of all people, Heather.
"So can you make an arrest?"
"Do you have evidence?"
"Evedence? Well we..."
"Let me have the phone(on the phone to jo) Can yo arrest her?"Tootie said when she took the phone out of Amber's hand.
"Is there any evidence?"
"Well"
"Listin I will meet you in a couple of minutes. Where are you?"
"We are at the phone both in front of Burger King. We will be inside and get a Coke or some thing."
"ok"
"Oh and Jo, bring Mrs. G She knows two and she should know what we can do."
"Sure thing see you in a couple of minutes. Bye."
"bye"






Thats all for now. I had it all finished yesterday too! Stupid computer had two mess up! I hope you like it! Tell me what you think I will post the rest as soon as I can.

AWESOME, AWESOME, AWESOME....I use that word a lot.....what else could I use.......uh.....AWESOME!!!!!