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andress_jade
07-19-2011, 06:13 PM
I just started writing a Frasier fanfiction story with of course Niles and Daphne.;) I want you to tell me what you think of the first chapter. I will give you the link for the story on fanfiction.net and you tell me what you think. Any help at all would be appreciated. Thanks! :D

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7196690/1/I_Adore_You_Heart_and_Soul#

Kristen
07-20-2011, 03:31 AM
I just saw that story on FF, and I was wondering if it was you that wrote it! So happy to see someone else writing N/D stories. I can never get enough of those! :) Feel free to R&R (read and review) my stories as well. The link is in my sig!

- Kristen

Schmoopie
07-20-2011, 03:48 AM
I write stories on ff.net and I'm also a beta reader if you need someone to beta your story. I'm a huge N/D fan so I can't wait to read this! I'm just about to watch the very last episode (the only one I haven't seen!), so then I can read pretty much every story without having spoilers! Just send me a PM if you're interested!

Kristen
07-20-2011, 03:54 AM
I just want to say, b/c I know Andrea is too humble to say it herself, she's written some incredible N/D stories also. I melt every time I read them (which is a lot, as Andrea already knows! ;) ) It's so awesome to see so many authors taking their shot at writing about our fave couple!

- Kristen

andress_jade
07-21-2011, 05:15 AM
I just posted Chapter 2, go check it out!

Kristen
07-21-2011, 05:34 AM
Already R&R'd it. Great job, Andress! I'm begging you, please don't leave me hanging too long w/ that chapter. ;)

Pat
07-21-2011, 07:26 AM
I've written a few stories in my day, like Happy Days - 10 years later.

I've also written a western and am working on my second. I am trying to get the first one published.

Saying that, I think you have a great tallent.

andress_jade
07-21-2011, 10:27 PM
Chapter 3 is posted. Go check it out. :)

I know I have been writing a lot of chapters lately but I am really on a roll with this story. There is more than likely going to be an update every day if it all goes well. I appreciate all your feedback and I'm glad you are enjoying my story. It really helps motivate me to write more.
Enjoy! :D

andress_jade
07-22-2011, 02:14 AM
I wanted to go ahead and post these on here to give you and idea of what Niles and Daphne's kids might look like. It might help you when you are reading the story to picture them after seeing these.


http://www.morphthing.com/showimage/5t/bda34d0dc4298128a223cdc2af208fc6/0/9877078/Baby-of-thumbnail-aspx-jpg-and-jane-leeves-006-jpg.jpeg
Their daughter

http://www.morphthing.com/showimage/5t/c22ddb59379bc8a622a353004b7f834b/0/9877065/Baby-of-thumbnail-aspx-jpg-and-jane-leeves-006-jpg.jpeg
Their son

andress_jade
07-22-2011, 07:31 PM
Chapter 4 is posted!

andress_jade
07-25-2011, 02:09 AM
Chapter 5 is up! Sorry it took so long for me to post it, I was out of town for a day and couldn''t write, so I hope you enjoy it. It's a special treat for all you N/D fans. ;)

Schmoopie
07-25-2011, 02:29 AM
Cool! Sorry I've been a little behind on my reading but I will R&R soon!

Schmoopie
07-25-2011, 02:37 AM
I wanted to go ahead and post these on here to give you and idea of what Niles and Daphne's kids might look like. It might help you when you are reading the story to picture them after seeing these.


http://www.morphthing.com/showimage/5t/bda34d0dc4298128a223cdc2af208fc6/0/9877078/Baby-of-thumbnail-aspx-jpg-and-jane-leeves-006-jpg.jpeg
Their daughter

http://www.morphthing.com/showimage/5t/c22ddb59379bc8a622a353004b7f834b/0/9877065/Baby-of-thumbnail-aspx-jpg-and-jane-leeves-006-jpg.jpeg
Their son

Wow, that is cool!

Kristen
07-25-2011, 03:20 AM
Another great chapter as usual! :) N/D being that in love always makes me melt!

andress_jade
07-27-2011, 12:52 AM
Chapter 6 is up! Read at your own risk, it's pretty dark. :confused:

andress_jade
07-27-2011, 05:06 PM
Chapter 7 is posted!

Kristen
07-27-2011, 07:06 PM
Even though I've already reviewed on FF, I just have to say one more time that this chapter does seem to be your best yet! :) The references to David's birth and grabbing Daphne's hair were def. melt-worthy. *Sigh* Looking forward to more!

- Kristen

Leigh Ann
07-28-2011, 09:02 AM
Even though I've already reviewed on FF, I just have to say one more time that this chapter does seem to be your best yet! :) The references to David's birth and grabbing Daphne's hair were def. melt-worthy. *Sigh* Looking forward to more!

- Kristen

I agree...I love your story so much. It even had me worried about Daphne keeping the baby or not. Can't wait to find out about David now though. Hope he's ok, but I'm sure he will be! :)

andress_jade
07-28-2011, 05:21 PM
Chapter 8 is posted!

Family Ties Forever!
07-29-2011, 03:35 AM
That'a a good story. Are there more chapers or is that the end?

andress_jade
07-29-2011, 11:32 AM
That'a a good story. Are there more chapers or is that the end?

Have you read all 8? If so, there is more coming.

Family Ties Forever!
07-29-2011, 12:48 PM
Have you read all 8? If so, there is more coming.

Yes, I read all eight. I just wasn't sure if that was the end or not. Thanks.

andress_jade
07-29-2011, 02:41 PM
Chapter 9 is posted!

I wasn't ending the story at Chapter 8, as much as you thought I might have been. I know the way I ended it, it seemed like the last chapter, but there is a lot more to go. I am glad you are enjoying it. Your feedback is greatly appreciated. Enjoy! :D

andress_jade
07-31-2011, 02:01 AM
Chapter 10 is posted!

andress_jade
07-31-2011, 08:58 PM
Chapter 11 is posted. I am really happy with this chapter. I really put a lot of thought into it. I hope you like it! :D

Leigh Ann
08-01-2011, 08:44 AM
Chapter 11 is posted. I am really happy with this chapter. I really put a lot of thought into it. I hope you like it! :D

It was a great chapter! Loved the Daphne's dream or vision or whatever she had of the baby. Hope you'll show the actual birth! Kind of don't want your fic to end...Too good! :)

andress_jade
08-02-2011, 02:28 AM
Chapter 12 is posted! I really had a case of writers block with this chapter so I hope you like it. I think it turned out pretty good. Enjoy! :D

andress_jade
08-02-2011, 03:22 PM
Here is another picture of what their third child might look like. It's a girl.

http://www.morphthing.com/showimage/5/79fa99e4c77ec88834f22da6d40f2297/0/10034922/Baby-of-thumbnail-aspx-jpg-and-jane-leeves-006-jpg.jpeg

andress_jade
08-03-2011, 03:37 AM
Chapter 13 is posted! :D

andress_jade
08-04-2011, 12:37 PM
Chapter 14 is posted. I know I am late getting it up, but there was a bad storm here last night and we lost power for a few hours. I hope you like it. :)

andress_jade
08-06-2011, 04:36 AM
Chapter 15 is posted!

andress_jade
08-07-2011, 01:54 AM
Chapter 16 posted!

andress_jade
08-08-2011, 01:17 AM
Chapter 17 posted!

Schmoopie
08-15-2011, 09:08 AM
Sorry it took me so long but I finally got caught up on your story! I love it and can't wait for more updates!