okay, this might be a boring begining, but you guys can all add excitment to it!!!!

(Station Amanda and Kate are fighting about something)

C.D: Wow, WWF in there!!!

Magda: Yeah, what is up in there?

Jinny: God bless Amanda i feel for her.

Angela: Jinny!!! Stop talking like that!!

(Amanda storms out of the office and slams the door)

Jinny: You poor thing!!!

Amanda: She doesn't understand me!!!

Jinny: She doesn't understand me either. She hates me to put it in easy terms.

Amanda: Try being her daughther!!!

Jinny: No thanx!!! I would probubly jump off a bridge if i was her daughter!!

Amanda: Not a bad idea!!

Magda: Jinny, what r u putting into this childs head?

Amanda: I am not a kid!

C.D: Jin, just stop before she really does do what u tell her to do.

Jinny: I didn't tell her to do anything!!!

(While fighting Amanda storms out of the Station saying "Mother, you'll pay" all of the girls turn around in suprise)

Okay, now someone else can add!!! HEHE maybe i will add more later to someone elses!!! how this was a pretty good start!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Jinny: She's got a bug up her a$$ for me!

Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

Hehe...WHo else but i would continue? I am posting the next part...just give me a chance to do it...which will be in like 10 mins.

Okay great start...so I'll add more.

Kate: Okay people gather around we've got a lot today.
Magda: Captain I don't want to be like intruding or anything but what just went on between you and Amanda?
Kate: None of your buisiness!!! Now back to work...DeLorenzo, Reid, We've got a homicide of Rachel Commens, Don't know what happened.
CD: What do we know? Like any possible suspects, witnesses?
Kate: Well a witness, Ashley Carmen, said that it was a male medium height mediom built, dark hair.
Angela: Did she see his face?
Kate: Don't know but I'd go and talk to her.
CD: Ok.
Kate: Ramirez (SP) Exstead, (Kate's cell rings) McCafferty, Yes I'll get two of my inspectors out there right away. (Hangs up) Girls change of plans There's a highschool going on shooting at _____ ***If you can think of a name put it in*** So get over there put on bullet proof vests and get out your weapon as soon as you get there.
Jinny: Got it captain.

You guys continue.

herez a little bit more k?

(Jinny and Magda go down to the scene of the school shooting, they see many frantic people in front of the buiding)

J- what's goin on here?
Person- R..room 304! in...the C hall. There is a boy there..h..he's armed!
M- Aright, come on jin let's go for it.
(jinny and magda run up to room 304 and kick open the door)
Zack- (points the gun at them) Stop! don't move or i swear i'll shoot.
J- (looks at magda and then back at the boy)
Zack- don't say another word.
M- listen..just calm down and think about what you're doing here.
Zack- i know what i'm doing!
J- put the g-d damn gun down!
Zack- i said not another word.
J- (looked at magda and nodded as if she was approving some kind of plan)
M- (looked back at jinny and nodded)
J- (runs up and knocks zack over trying to get the gun out of his hand...however while she is doing he takes a shot...)
(whole classroom gasps)
J- (takes gun out of his hand and takes a peice of rope and ties his hands together) there, that outta hold ya. (turns around to see everyone gathered around someone..laying on the floor.) Hey what's goin on? (runs over to see her partner laying on the floor bleedin and unconsious) Mag! OMG we need an ambulence...NOW! (takes magda's hand as her eyes start to fill up) you're gonna be okay..(fights back tears) don't worry.

someone else write!

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Jinny- Intimate? No. I mean, i sleep with him. But i sleep with all the guys in the divison. It's sorta how i break em' in."
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B- If I don't spend money soon i'm gonna pull my hair out!
J- good we'll finally get to see what color the roots are.

I did the last one someone else go

OK!!

Jinny http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifPacing around while Paramedics take her away, calls CD)

CD:Inspector DeLorenzo?

Jinny:Magda....The..some kid shot magda.(crying)Oh...its my fault.

CD:Well..call 9-1-1(Kate and Angela look at her)

Jinny:I did...There here now! I feel sick.

CD:Jinny, dont leave ill pick you up, you cant drive in this condition.

Jinny:Ok, ok, yeah...good idea.(hangs up)

Angela:What was that all about?

CD:Magda was shot...Come on i gotta pick jinny up.

Angela:Oh my...We...why...how?

CD:I..i dont even know...COME ON.

(High school)

Jinny http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifsitting at a desk surrounded by a bunch of kids, cd bursts in.)

CD:Jinny?

Jinny:Your here...

Angela:Come on...i want to be there when she wakes up.

Jinny:If she wakes up.

You go!!!!

okay, i will go again!!! i am not tring to hog actually i am not even that good., just bored. hehe

Angela: She will wake up, Jin!!

C.D: Come on guys lets go!!!!

(Walking out)

Jinny: OMG!!!

C.D: What?????? Are you okay????

Jinny: Yes...but i know what happened.

Angela: What are you talking about?

Jinny: Zack is Amanda's best friend and maybe they planned this together? They probubly were hoping Captain came so they could shot her...(suddenly a shot fired down the hall) (Angela Screamed)

C.D: What the hell?

Amanda: Where is my mother?

Jinny: Oh gosh!!!!

someone else go!!!!

Jinny: CD let's go!!!
CD: Captain OMG!!!! Jinny!! Look
Jinny: OMG!!! Where is he? Wheres the B**** who did this to her?
CD: Jinny calm down we'll get this guy, but it could be Zack I mean it makes sense first Magda now the Captain.
Jinny: Let's go talk to Amanda then bring him in for questioning. They've got the Captain is surgery.
CD: Let's go.
Jinny: Hey Amanda...We need to ask you some questions.
Amanda: Sure what do you need.
CD: Amanda we need to know what you and your mom were fighting about.
Amanda: It's none of your buisiness.

Someone els

I'll go!

J: Yes, actually, it is.
C: Amanda, don't you understand that murder is a serious offense.
Am: Do you see me with a gun? I don't think so.
A: No, but we have a hunch that you planned this.
C: Who did Amanda? Who helped you?
Am: (shifts uncomfortably.) I'm not tellin'!

There! That's my part!

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T: You're in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?
J: No, you're supposed to hide under the covers with me 'cause it's warmer! Come on!
†º† ~~<@ Kenzie @>~~ †º†

I've done two and don't want to hog it!!!!! SO WoULD SOMEONE ADD ON ALREADY!!!!!!!!!

okay, i only wrote a litle bit last time so here is more!!!


C.D: Amanda, you have to tell us!!

Amanda: No...i don't!

Jinny: (yelling) look Magda, my partner, just got shot and you are going to tell me why this shotting happened. Because obviously you know!!!

Amanda: Fine...i didn't plan it..totaly!

Angela: Totaly?

Amanda: Yeah, it isn't all m,y fault!!!

C.D: Well, what was your fault?

Amanda: Well, i gave him one of my mom's old guns and he promised he wouldn't hurt anyone. He just needed the gun for hunting...or so he said!

Jinny: Your underarrest!!!

Amanda: No!!! You can't do this! My mother won't allow this!! (pulls out a gun) nd maybe i won't allow this!! Tell my mother when you see her in HELL tht she should have hidden her extra guns in better places!!!

Okay, Jo's Girl you can go cuz we are hogging it, but oh well

K thanks I'll just do a little...

Jinny: Amanda put down the gun.
Amanda: Oh shut-up. I don't gove a d***!!!
Angela: Amanda Pretty please put down the gun.
CD: Oh angela shut up with the pretty pleases.
Angela: Ok Amanda put down the gun or let's take this outside.
Amanda: No we're taking care of this here and now.
Jinny: Angela put down the gun now. If you don't I can and will shoot.
CD: Amanda put down the gun now. I'll give you until the count of five, 1, 2, 3,...Come on amanda put it down 4, (SHe drops the gun)
Jinny: Your under arrest. You (She read Amanda her rites) Let's go. CD get a warrent and get Zack now.
CD: When were you made the captain
Jinny: CD do you want me to let her go...I didn't think so. Now listen to me get a warrent and pick him up now!!!

ok, i figured i'd add some because i'm board and someone asked me too...

Jinny and CD slowly backed away
"Put the gun down" Jinny said as she put her hands up.
"We already had an officer shot, we don't need two more" CD said as she put her hands up too.
"I don't care! My mother hates me anyway!" Amanda yelled.
"Do you want to go in prison for life" Jinny asked nervously. "If you kill us you will"
"I'm going to jail no matter what!" Amanda said as she started shaking. "But I could kill you, and get away"
"No, you couldn't" A voice behind Amanda said.
"MOM!" Amanda yelled as she turned around! "What the Hell are you doing here?"
"I was going to ask you the same thing!" Captain said madly as she walked over towards her daughter. Then Amanda turned around and pointed the gun at her mother. CD and Jinny immeditly pulled theirs out.
"Put your guns down, or I'll shoot" Amanda told Jinny and CD "NOW!"
"ok, I'm putting mine down" Cd said as she put hers down. Jinny just kept standing there. "Jinny!" CD wispered, knowing Jinny didn't care about the Captain.
"ok, ok" Jinny said annoyed, as she put her gun down.


ok u guys can work on it now because i feel like crap, and i'm losing my voice....have fun!

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

Sorry, i didnt notice the last part....o well

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

it's okay at least we got 2 views.

i love them both!!! someone else continue!!!

Pretty please someone besides ME!!!!!!

or me!!!!!

Ok, I am a friend of Nancy McKeon Fan 8976, but i am in computer class right now, and i don't feel like registering, plus it's blocked so i can't anyway, so i'm just using her name. I've helped her write before. I'm na start from Jo's s just because it's easier to continue from.

C.D.: Ok, ok, calm down. Geez did someone have too much to drink this morning.

Jinny: No, just the opposite. Not enough!

C.D.: What? Only two s this morning.

Jinny: (mumbles) 4. But that's beside the point.

C.D.: Go lock her up. i'll go get the warrent and then we'll go get the Bas***d that shot magda!!

Jinny: Yeah, while you do that, i'll go visit mag in the hospital. Make sure she's ok.

(at the hospital in the lobby)

Receptionist: hi. How may i help you.

Jinny: (Just drank another , so she's a little drunk and can't think right) Uhhhh, wait, ummmm, oh yeah, Rimerez, uhh, Magda.

Receptionist: Magda?

Jinny: Well, her full name is Magdalena, but everyone calls her magda.

Receptionist: Ahh, yes here...she cannot be visited right now


Damn, class is over. See u later!!!

Ok, I am a friend of Nancy McKeon Fan 8976, but i am in computer class right now, and i don't feel like registering, plus it's blocked so i can't anyway, so i'm just using her name. I've helped her write before. I'm na start from Jo's s just because it's easier to continue from.

C.D.: Ok, ok, calm down. Geez did someone have too much to drink this morning.

Jinny: No, just the opposite. Not enough!

C.D.: What? Only two s this morning.

Jinny: (mumbles) 4. But that's beside the point.

C.D.: Go lock her up. i'll go get the warrent and then we'll go get the Bas***d that shot magda!!

Jinny: Yeah, while you do that, i'll go visit mag in the hospital. Make sure she's ok.

(at the hospital in the lobby)

Receptionist: hi. How may i help you.

Jinny: (Just drank another , so she's a little drunk and can't think right) Uhhhh, wait, ummmm, oh yeah, Rimerez, uhh, Magda.

Receptionist: Magda?

Jinny: Well, her full name is Magdalena, but everyone calls her magda.

Receptionist: Ahh, yes here...she cannot be visited right now


Damn, class is over. See u later!!!

Great job!

P.S. Do you guys need an extra helper? I'll add some if you want!

Any one can write!! It is a round robin. Go 4 it 80's Kid!!!!

(OK!)

Jinny: Why can't she be visited right now?
Receptionist (sp?): The doctor doesn't know how she's doing.
Jinny: I work with her. Can't she just have one visitor?
Receptionist: I'm sorry.
Jinny: Not half as sorry as I am... (starts to cry) She's my best friend.
Receptionist: All right, you can go in as long as you don't let anyone else know you're in there. Room 302.
Jinny: Thanks. (starts walking over there)

OK here's a cliffhanger for everyone! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif Who's next?!

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"Every day has a little something. Find it!" - Anonymous

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Okay, i will write a bit!!!

Jinny:Magda?

Magda: (speechless) (sleeping)

Jinny: Oh, gosh Magda. I didn't mean to have the bullet hit you...if anyone me!!! I am sooo sorry!

(Doctor walks in)

Dr.: Hey!!!!! What are you doing in here?

Jinny: This is my....sister. I was adopted!

Dr.: Oh, i am sorry! Family only, so...i was just making sure!

Jinny: yes, i understand. How is she?

Dr: .....

Some one else now!!! hehe

Ok ill do it...

Dr:She...only has a 25% chance of makeing it...SHe lost alot of blood.

Jinny:No....SHe cant die(turned to magda)Please dont die...(crying)

Dr:Were very sorry

Jinny:Can i have some time alone here?

Dr:Yeah(leaves room)

Jinny:Magda? I dont know if you can hear me but im so sorry...I fell just awfull about what happened...It was all me fault(crying)Im so sorry. (smiles but only for a sec and sighs)I guesse you cant hear me huh? Well, my shift starts soon and...the guysl wanna know how you doing so...im gonna go but il be back rell soon Ok? Bye...

(Leaves room)
(at work)

CD:Where were you?

Jinny http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifobviosly had just been crying)Hospital.

Angela:They wouldnt let me in family only.

Jinny:I lied to get in...(takes a breath)Uhhh 25% chance of living.

CD:W...WHat.

Jinny:Oh god...I dont believe i did this to her(puts head on desk crying)

CD:No, oh no jinny, you didnt do anything...the shooter did.

Jinny:I feel so guilty i dont know what to do..

Ok whoever wants to go go ahead!

Ok...I'll go...again.

(Station)
Angela: Yea Jinny this is not your fault.
Jinny: OMG!!! Ben what's he going to do without Magda? Oh God this is all my fault.
CD: Jinny would you stop saying that. This is not your fault. Oh and by the way We got Zack. We can question him now.
Jinny: Let's go.
(Questioning room with Zack)
Jinny: So Zack...Why did you do it?
Zack: Do what?
CD: You know. We've got Amanda all ready so you might as well tell us why you did it.
Zack: I don't know what your talking about.
CD: Well let's start with this why did you want Captain Kate McCafferty's gun?
Zack: I went hunting. Why...
Jinny: Someone shot Magda Ramirez my partner. Then someone shot Captain McCafferty. We have reason to believe it's you. Amanda told us you needed the gun and you told her you needed it for hunting. Instead she thinks that you were the one who did it. She also said she gave you the gun.
Zack: Well....

Someone BESIDES me go please!!!

Well, oh well, i am not tring to hog, but no one will write!!!!!

Jinny: Weel what?

Zach: I didn't plan for this to happen!

C.D: Well, what did u plan to happen?

Zach: Amanda will kill me...

Angela: Amanda is already under arrest and can't harm you, now we need you to tell us the truth.

Zach: Well, i had really wanted the gun for hunting with my Dad, but Amanda said that if she gave me the gun i had to do her a favor.

Jinny: What kind of favor?

Zach: I can't..(started to cry)

C.D: All right you are under arrest...

Zach: Wait....the favor was to use the gun to...


Some one else BESIDES me too can go now!!!

come on, anyone. be creative!!!! hehe

OTHER than me please!!!

hey jo's girl after i finish my fan fic w/ NancyJoJinny wanna do a fan fic together. WE seem to be the ones who like to add!!!!

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Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

DOnt get so ticked...il write...You knwo this is very dranining on my mind!

Zack:Tpo use the gun to....Shoot her mother...And it was a mistake..I nenver should ave agreed...

Jinny:Is that it?

Zack: What else is there to say? She wanted me to kill her mother end of story!

Jinny http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk...we need Amanda back here...(turns to uniform officer)Get him outta here and get us Amanda.

(about 2 hours later)

Jinny:We spoke to zack...ANd he told us what happened...Why you gave him the gun.

AManda:He wanted to go hunting!

CD:He told us everything...You wanted him to kill captain! WHat did she say to you that would make you want to do that!

Amanda:..........

Someone Besides me keep going and NancyMcKeonFan8976 sure if you have aol im tell me I'm NMKisnumber1.

Someone Besides me keep going and NancyMcKeonFan8976 sure if you have aol im tell me I'm NMKisnumber1 or (NancyJoJinny on this page don't kill me i got this a while ago on aol im) NancyJinnyJo.

Amanda: She told me that I was too messed up and I sleep around too much, She called me a S*ut and said that I drink too much and wished she could disown me!

Jinny: Drink too much?! NOT POSSIBLE!!

CD: JINNY!
Jinny: sorry, okay so that why you wanted to kill her? Didn't you know that murder is a very dangerous crime! And didn't you tell Zack what your mother looked like! HE SHOT MY PARTNER TOO!

Amanda: I did, but I guess he got nervous and shot the first police he saw!

Cd: Amanda you do know that you will be in jail for a long time if your mother or Madga doesn't make it!

Amanda: I"M SORRY all right? God D*** it whats wrong with you people?!

Jinny: (stands up) what's wrong with us?! You tried to kill ur mother!

Amanda: so your point is?

your turn!
This is my first fan fic so its pretty bad, but i tried!

okay, jo's girl my sn on aol is "nancymckeonfan89"

Jinny: Out point is that oyu're going to get into a lot of troble for what you did!!

Amanda: My mom, will get me out!

Jinny: You think she will?

Amanda: Yes, she will!

Jinny: After you planned to have someone kill her for you?

Amanda: I am her oly daughther, her pride and joy. She won't let me rot in jailk.

Jinny: Well, we will see about that!

Okay, i am tired=, lol, someone else continue!!!

Jinny: Amanda we know your mom and she doesn't bail anyone out.
CD: Yea I mean you may be her pride and joy but you still gave someone a gun and told them to kill her. She won't try to bail you out for that.
Amanda: Listen i'm sorry ok. I wasn't thinking but she had no right to call me a s*ut. Or tell me what i do wrong i'm a twenty year old i can care for myself.

ok someone else go.

okay i will go!!! oh "Jo's Girl" e-mai lme at

nancymckeonfan8976@hotmail.com

about the fan fic!!!


Jinny: sorry is not good enogh! My partner has 25% chance of living!

Amanda: Oh well!

C.D: Oh..well? If she dies you are in jail for a lonnngggg tie, huh!

Amanda: Do i look like i care all that much?

Angela:Come on Amanda! Doc't make this harder on you!!

(Jin's cell phone rings)

Jinny:Exstead? Oh..gosh! thank you doctor!!

Next!!!!!!

(Station)
CD: Who was that Jinny?
Jinny: The Doctor now let's go.
CD: Wait what happened?
Jinny: I said SHUT UP AND LET"S GO NOW!!!!
CD: fine.
(Hospital)
CD: So explain this to me what happened?
Jinny: Well...

I've done enough on this.

okay...i will do more!!!

**hospital**

DR: She is dropping! we are doing all we can!

Jinny: OH, GOSH!!!

DR: i am sorry! *walks away*

Amanda: Can we go now?

Jinny: Listen u little punk! *holds fist up to her*

CD: Jinny!!!!!!

Now someone else go!!

ok i give it a try...i gusse

Amanda: o i am so scared of a 32 year old alchoalic who sleeps around, ive already put 2 hell of good cops in the hospital and its not going to be hard to put a slut like u it it...

CD: yea amanda but do you realize where you will be going for a long time?

Jinny: ok Amanda i am sick of your crap, you me outside now...

CD: Jinny what the hell are you doing?

Amanda: O YEA bring it on!

(Jinny and Amanda start to get up in each others faces)

Jinny: o i'll bring it all right...

(CD trys to break them up...)

sorry if that was weird but all i gotta say is NEXT ON SPRINGER..

(My turn!!)

CD: Hey!
Jinny: What?
CD: Break it up! We're in a public place here!
Jinny: So? I'm a cop. I can do whatever I want in a public place whenever I want!
CD: Under these circumstances?
Amanda: What circumstances?
CD: Two cops in the hospital? Another (glares at Jinny just a little) possibly on the way? Come on. Let's go back in, wait for any results, anything...
Amanda: I'm not coming with you.
Jinny: What the...?
(Amanda leaves. Jinny stares at CD)

All I have to say is... NEXT!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Love is patient and kind, it is not jealous or conceited or proud; love is not ill-mannered or selfish or irritable; love does not keep a record of wrongs; love is not happy with evil but with the truth. Love never gives up, and its faith, hope, and patience never fail. Meanwhile these three remain: faith, hope and love, and the greatest of these is love.

GOOD!!

Jinny: Why did you do that?
CD: Listen two cops are already in the hospital, you don't really need to join them, do you?
Jinny: Well Amanda was askin' for it anyway.
CD: Who cares.
(Inside both girls are in there, angela gets there)
Angela: What happened?


NEXT!

I'll give it another shoot...come on people make them get into a fight haha

Angela: hold on CD, Jinny whats going on here

CD: Jinny almost got beat the crap out of her by Amanda

Jinny: i could of taken her...least i wasnt the smart one who let a possible murder out of my site..I am going after her(starts to head off)

Angela: why did i even ask...

CD: Jinny...

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Jinny: They all start laughing at you. I mean we're not talking little girly giggles ,Theodore. We are talking ear splitting humiliation inducing derition here!"
Thoedore: "Why?"
Jinny: "Cause you're BUCK-NAKED my friend....

"one time at band camp..."-American Pie

"im wearing a dress..ive got gel in my hair...i havent got sleep in two days...im armed...dont mess with me"-Miss Congenality

okay...i will go and start the fight! hehe

**Kates House**

(Jinny gets there and starts pounding on the door)

Jinny: AMANDA I KNOW UR IN THERE SO COME ON OUT...I KNOW HOW TO BREAK DOWN DOORS AND I THINK UR MOM WOULD PRETTY MAD BOUT THAT!

(Amanda opens the door)

Amanda: What do u want?

Jinny: Come on outside so i can beat ur ass!

Amanda: You wish!

(Jinny and Amanda go outside)

Amanda: So, Bring it on! i am waiting!

Jinny: You might have killed my partner and another cop that i don't knwo...but still!

Amanda: Yeah, and ur next! (Punchs Jinny in the jaw and she falls to the sidewalk. stands up and charges at Amanda.)

Jinny: You asked 4 it!

NEXT!!!

HAHAH!!!!!!

Jinny: *Tackels Amanda* You little jerk! You know whats its like too loose your mother!?!?! You may want her dead now... But one day youl regret it!!!!
Amanda: *Wrestles then pins jinny* You lousy slut! You dont know anything!!! You cant tell me what to do!
Jinny: *Pushes amanda off and pulles her too her feet and slamms her against the side of the house* Nobody calls me a slut.
Amanda: I did! *Pushes Jinny*
Jinny: *Pushes her back* Good for you!
Amanda: And you know it!!! *puches Jinny in the eye*
Jinny: AH! Oh... you want a peice of me?
Amanda: BRING IT ON!!
Jinny: *Punches Amanda out* Ding. I win.

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

ok this part may seem weird but whatever

just as jinny starts to get a couple of cop cars arrive to the scene

Jinny: ok you can take her-

Officer: Inspector please you have the right to remain silet anything that you say or do may be used against you in the court of law...

Jinny: what in the hell is this all about?

Officer: do you really think you should be using swears in a time like this?

Jinny: a time like wht?

Officers: resiting arrest hmm how long is that again?

(she finally gets in the car and they go down to the station)

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Jinny: They all start laughing at you. I mean we're not talking little girly giggles ,Theodore. We are talking ear splitting humiliation inducing derition here!"
Thoedore: "Why?"
Jinny: "Cause you're BUCK-NAKED my friend....

"one time at band camp..."-American Pie

"im wearing a dress..ive got gel in my hair...i havent got sleep in two days...im armed...dont mess with me"-Miss Congenality

Awesome! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif


(The police car arrives at the station. Jinny walks in, trying to act as if she hasn't just been arrested: I know that sounds stupid but it's what I thought up... She notices Teddy)
Jinny: Hey.
Teddy: Anything new with Magda?
Jinny: Nothing from what I know. I do know...
(Officers come in)
Officer: So, resisting arrest. I'm not so sure how long you'll be in for that.
Teddy: Jinny???
Jinny: Long story. I'll tell you later. If there is a later.
Officer: Come on, let's go, let's go.
Jinny: You know I'm an inspector, don't ya?
Officer: Gives us more reason to do something with you.

NEXT! Sorry if mine's a little stupid.. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

This might be a litte stupid, but...

[The officers put had cuffs on her and take her to a cell in the near by jail.]
Jinny: HEEEEY!!! Don't I get a phone call? *sits down on the bed* Geez. I can't believe I'm in here. *she hears somebody walkig own the hall. She gets up and looks, it's Teddy*
Teddy: Jinny!
Jinny: Teddy, I'm down here!
Teddy: What did you do?!??!
Jinny: Well... umm... I...
Teddy: Spit it out!
Jinny: I kind of... got in a fight.
Teddy: A fight? With who?!
Jinny: Amanda... the captain's daughter.
Teddy: Geez, Jin! How do you think you're gonna get outta here?!
Jinny: I don't know.

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Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point.

Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

Jinny: Here comes the other shoe.

Jinny: I can coddle.

Jinny: Three eggs scrambled soft not runny, hashbrowns crispy not hard, rye bread lightly toasted not burned, butter on the side, and don't forget the jalepeno's, extra hot if you have any.

Jinny: Cause you're buck naked my friend! Alright Teddy, just how nervous are you?

Jinny: You're a peach.

Wanna talk about Nancy? E-mail or IM me at NancyMcKeonRox@aol.com.

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Nancy's a very cool lady! She's even cooler than the real Slim Shady. She's a bad ass chick who's tough as can be. That's why she's cool -- It's plain to see.

Personal Quote: All mean people suck except for me, NancyJoJinny, Adele, and Joanna Marie_1.

okay...nothig is stupid in a Round Robin!

Teddy: Well, how can i help?

Jinny: You can't. i can do this on my own!

Teddy: u sure?

Jinny: Yeah!

**Teddys leaves**

**Captain walks in** (dundundundundundundun)

Captain: Jinny what the he** are u doing in there?

Jinny: well u know how we are always putting people in jail i thought it would be interesting to see the other side of it and hold on i thought u were in the hospital??

Captain: Jinny cut the crap...and i had minor injuries so i was realeased...

Jinny: i got in a fight...

Captain: a bar fight...?? jinny u no better

Jinny: umm...no with your daughter...

Captain....................

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Jinny: They all start laughing at you. I mean we're not talking little girly giggles ,Theodore. We are talking ear splitting humiliation inducing derition here!"
Thoedore: "Why?"
Jinny: "Cause you're BUCK-NAKED my friend....

"one time at band camp..."-American Pie

"im wearing a dress..ive got gel in my hair...i havent got sleep in two days...im armed...dont mess with me"-Miss Congenality

Captain: This is some kind of stupid joke right?
Jinny: Unfortunately for my sake... no?
Captain: You know something?
Jinny: WHat?
Captain: Your never getting out of there. *walks away*
Jinny: Thanks a bunch capt.

***Angela and CD come looking too see if she got beat up by amanda***

CD: Haveing fun in there?
Jinny: Guys... *grabs bars* Get me out of here.
Angela: Cant do that.
Jinny: Please, please just get the keys from the guard dude!
CD: Do you know what captian whold do to us if we did that!?
Jinny: Fine.
Angela: Look, we have too get back too the hospital. Wel tell you if anything happens.
Jinny: Yeah thanks.
CD: Oh and Jinny?
Jinny: What?
CD: You have a black eye.
Jinny: Great.

Whoevers turn!


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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not!

Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

okay, i am in school so can ony write a lil bit

**jail**

Jinny: Hey guard dude?

Guard: Yes?

Jinny: can u let me out?

Guard: nope.

Jinny: I will give u the greatest of ur life!

Guard: no

Jinny: Please. i am real good!

Guard: No

Jinny: I am a cop and a ! so i will please u!

Guard: Well, maybe i can let u out....

Jinny: You won't regret it!!!!!

Next!

what is up with this i keep trying to write "sex" where Jinny says "I will give u the greatst....SEX of ur life" but it is not there and jinny says "I am a cop and a slut" and it didn't show up....uhhhh this is a pain in the a$$

okay, if u guys didn't like that u can redo it!!! okay?

Jinny: you know we could be good for each other (runs her hand through his hair)

Jail guard dude: yea i know...sigh

Jinny: then all you have to do is let me out..and u wont regret it..

Jail guard dude: ohh ok...(he starts to unlock it)

(then good ole captain comes down)
Captain: excuse me wht is going on here?

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Jinny: They all start laughing at you. I mean we're not talking little girly giggles ,Theodore. We are talking ear splitting humiliation inducing derition here!"
Thoedore: "Why?"
Jinny: "Cause you're BUCK-NAKED my friend....

"one time at band camp..."-American Pie

"im wearing a dress..ive got gel in my hair...i havent got sleep in two days...im armed...dont mess with me"-Miss Congenality

I am not good at writing, but somebody add some more!!!!!!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

jail guard:justmoving her to another cell
cap:well dont bother i'm going to speak with her in the *****(whatever they call the questioning room )
jail guy http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh ok

questioning room

cap:jinny how could you do this shes my daughter your a cop shes in the hospital gatting stiches
jinny:smiles a little and holds back a laugh
cap:you think this is a joke
jin:not at all and if you'd just listen to me.......
cap:I dont want to hear it

jin:captain please just listen to me for 5 minutes
cap:fine
jin:did you even hear the case yet
cap:not all.....
jinny:your daughter gave someone a gun of yours a cops gun if he'd knock you off
cap:what
jinny:read the case for yourself
cap:why'd you beat her up?
jin:the thought of actually killing your own mother. i would have wanted one on my 15th birthday
cap:what happened to your mother
jinny:SHE SHOT HERSELF OKAY!!!!!HOW COULD SOMEONE WANT THEIR MOTHER TO BE DEAD