ok I have some other places and ones I've written by myself but this is my first for the public.
Also, jinny has a different boyfriend some people may not like him, but I do so I use him.

*The Division 9am*
Jinny walks through the door and sits at her desk expecting the cap to be all over her about being late. The cap comes out of her office and looks at jinny for a minute. "Exstead you're late." Cap then goes back in her office and sits down. Jinny just sits there glaring at the door then gets to work on the papers that are on her desk. As they are sitting there a man with blue eyes, light blonde hair, and a strong build walks in and goes over to jinny's desk. Jinny looks up at the hot guy standing at her desk "Can I help you with somethin?"
"I was wondering what to do with these?" the man replies holding up 2 parking tickets. Jinny tries not to laugh and says "down the hall on your right." The man walks down the hall and takes care of his tickets.
Jinny looks after him and gets back to work thinking 'nice a**'. Magda notices. "Who's that?" Jinny looks over at Mag "I have no clue he had some parking tickets to pay." Mag laughs "he's cute though."
Jinny thinking 'yeah I know' but says "yeah whatever I got work to do."

*Anchorside 6pm*
Jinny walks in and sits at the bar ordering a scotch as she sat down. She looks around and sees no cute guys so gives up and concentrates on the drink that is being set in front of her. Josh walks through the door. He walks over and sits on a stool near jinny, not noticing he's sitting next to the officer he talked to hours before. Jinny takes a sip of her drink and looks over at her new found friend. She starts to think 'hey haven't I seen him somewhere?' She turns to talk to him "Did you come to the police station today?"

should I do this? I'm not really sure if I should continue. If no one tells me if it's good or not I'm not going to continue.

This fan-fiction is good so far. You write really well.
For all the Teddy Fans just come on over to my fan-fiction. lol I'm joking. This is a good story so far even without Teddy being in it. Sorry I'm a Major Theodore fan. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif Talk to you later. Keep Writin. I'll read it as long as it doesn't get dysfunctional.

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"See I know people too. So next time....Don't screw with me"-Jinny

"Good evening. On behalf of radio staion GDBD I would like to thank you all for coming. And I would like to inform you you're under arrest..." -Jinny

I'm a huge teddy fan too but I also love this guy. wait till you get to know him. he's alot like teddy. I'm going to bed now but I'm going to continue the story tommorrow.

This is soooooo good!!!

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~Lauren~
Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo
Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me
Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com
or
musicdiva467@hotmail.com
or
chicago6789@hotmail.com
or
irishhottie77@hotmail.com
as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE!

This is a great start!! I'm a Teddy fan, but hey, I'm keeping my options open...hehehe...LOL http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif

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And from your vice president of the "I Live on the Internet Club" and the co-off-topic queen:

*^*^*~~~God Bless~~~*^*^*

thanks for responding all you happy people! since everyone that responded is gonna at least read this part I'll write.

*Anchorside 6:05pm*
"Did you come to the police station today?" Josh looks around and realizes Jinny is talking to him. He looks over at Jinny. "Yeah I did I. Aren't you the officer I talked to?" Jinny smiles, "yeah Jinny Exstead. And you are?" Josh looks down and then looks back up saying quietly "Josh Cooper" Jinny realizes he must be shy so decides to back off a little. "So how long have you lived here?" she decides as a reasonable question. Josh looks down at his watch looking very nervous. "About six years. Look I have to go." He gets up quickly and walks out looking upset about something. Jinny shrugs and goes back to drinking.

*Jinny's Apartment 6:30am*
Jinny wakes up and looks at her clock deciding she won't have to rush today. She rolls out of bed and rubs her eyes walking into the closet. After she gets dressed she walks out of the closet and into the hall towords the kitchen. As Jinny walks down the hall the phone starts to ring. She walks over and picks it up with a sleepy "hello?" The man on the other line replies "uh hi I'm Josh I met you yesturday at the police station and then at the bar..." Jinny opens her eyes. "Oh hi... I didn't expect you to call so early... or at all really." Josh looks at his clock. "Oh I'm sorry I didn't realize it was so early. Tori usually wakes me up later." Jinny looks confused. "Who's Tori?"

Ok those of you who know this character DON'T TELL WHO TORI IS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cool Story so far. I don't know who the character is,but hm..Him mentioning a Tori so obviously it's a girl..and since he seems to be interested in Jinny it's not a girlfriend,and Tori wakes him up early..I'm betting it's....Hmm. His Daughter?? Little kids get up early. *Shrugs* Post more.

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"See I know people too. So next time....Don't screw with me"-Jinny

"Good evening. On behalf of radio staion GDBD I would like to thank you all for coming. And I would like to inform you you're under arrest..." -Jinny

I dunno either...I'm thinking maybe.............arf arf!! No clue!

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~*Amy*~
CookieCupcake24@aol.com
AIM- MacNCheeze565
SFPDInspectorCD

"Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparently anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead.

"I give people chances who earn them...except insurance guys."~ C.D. DeLorenzo.

Rose~ It's a letter from St. Olaf. It's from the Department of Water and Coffee.
Blanche~ Coffee?
Rose~ No thanks. It makes me jumpy.

Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown, BUT, it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and b*t*h-slap that mother @#?!&! upside the head.

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DON'T CALL ME EASY MAC!

http://www.nancymckeon-division.cityslide.com

This is really swell(I sound like a Brady kid...hehe). Scratch the swell and put great...no scratch great and put terrific(no I still sound like a Brady kid.) Great?...Excellent?...Wonderful?...Spectacular?...Ok..I could go on for days but I will shut up...just finish ok? Or else you will have me rambling on and on and on and on and I will be like the ENERGIZER BUNNY! Ok...can NEone tell I m dilarious(sp?)? I m gonna stop talkin now! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/outtahere.gif

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~Lauren~
Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo
Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me
Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com
or
musicdiva467@hotmail.com
or
chicago6789@hotmail.com
or
irishhottie77@hotmail.com
as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE!

[This message has been edited by #1JoFan (edited 11-15-2001).]

Originally posted by NancyRulz24:
I dunno either...I'm thinking maybe.............arf arf!! No clue!



LOL, that's what I'm thinking...or a daughter...hmm...the question of the day...lol

MMMMMMMOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEE!!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

cow.

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~*Amy*~
CookieCupcake24@aol.com
AIM- MacNCheeze565
SFPDInspectorCD

"Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparently anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead.

"I give people chances who earn them...except insurance guys."~ C.D. DeLorenzo.

Rose~ It's a letter from St. Olaf. It's from the Department of Water and Coffee.
Blanche~ Coffee?
Rose~ No thanks. It makes me jumpy.

Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown, BUT, it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and b*t*h-slap that mother @#?!&! upside the head.

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DON'T CALL ME EASY MAC!

http://www.nancymckeon-division.cityslide.com

ok it's NOT a cow!!! lol I'm writing more now just give me a few more minutes to finish it up.

ok I'm really happy about this cause people are reading it and everyone at my school (except my teachers) says I'm a bad writer.

*Jinny's apartment*
Jinny is on the phone talking to Josh. "Who's Tori?" she says confused. Josh laughs. "oh that's right I never told you she's my..." Just then the phone gets disconnected. Jinny realizes he's gone and hangs up, then walks into the kitchen. She grabs a bagel and eats it. She then walks into her room wondering what happend with Josh to make him hang up. Jinny grabs her gun, holster, badge, and bag and leaves for work.

*Josh's Apartment Right before he hung up*
"oh that's right I never told you she's my..." Just then Tori ran in and accidently tore the cord out of the wall as she came. Josh kept talking before he realized Jinny was gone and looked down at Tori. "You just HAD to do that didn't you?" Tori just tilted her head to one side and looked cute.

ok so what do you think Tori is NOW???

ARF!! ARF!!!

hehe MOO

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~*Amy*~
CookieCupcake24@aol.com
AIM- MacNCheeze565
SFPDInspectorCD

"Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparently anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead.

"I give people chances who earn them...except insurance guys."~ C.D. DeLorenzo.

Rose~ It's a letter from St. Olaf. It's from the Department of Water and Coffee.
Blanche~ Coffee?
Rose~ No thanks. It makes me jumpy.

Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown, BUT, it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and b*t*h-slap that mother @#?!&! upside the head.

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DON'T CALL ME EASY MAC!

http://www.nancymckeon-division.cityslide.com

Originally posted by TheGreatTDFan:
ok I'm really happy about this cause people are reading it and everyone at my school (except my teachers) says I'm a bad writer.




Thats real nice!


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~*Amy*~
CookieCupcake24@aol.com
AIM- MacNCheeze565
SFPDInspectorCD

"Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparently anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead.

"I give people chances who earn them...except insurance guys."~ C.D. DeLorenzo.

Rose~ It's a letter from St. Olaf. It's from the Department of Water and Coffee.
Blanche~ Coffee?
Rose~ No thanks. It makes me jumpy.

Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown, BUT, it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and b*t*h-slap that mother @#?!&! upside the head.

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DON'T CALL ME EASY MAC!

http://www.nancymckeon-division.cityslide.com

hehe. I like this fic...MORE!

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-Queen Kaley Jinny Exstead: Prez of the ILOTI Club [In no way are we connected with the IDIOT Club]

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are going to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon and Jay Harrington, and you're not.

Jinny [and me]: Don't screw with me.

Five Queens and a Message Board. One Code: Hell Raising

The one and only [dum dum dum]: Nancy McKeon Supersite (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)!

ok since all the people seem to be liking this story I'll continue. Please don't stop reading because of any of my other posts on the td mb.

*Josh's Apartment 7:00*
Josh looks at Tori and laughs then picks her up. "I can't stay mad at you for very long." Tori looks up at her dad. "I love you, daddy." Tori has long brown hair and green eyes. She looks more like 6 than 4. Josh hugs her close then puts her down. "You hungry?" Tori smiles and nods happily. Josh smiles. "Ok what do you want?" Tori thinks for a minute the smiles. "Heart-shaped pancakes." Josh laughs, "I should have known. Your favorite." He gets up, picks Tori up, and walks into the kitchen to make the pancakes.

*Parking Lot of The Division 7:20am*
Jinny just arrives in the parking lot when she remembers that it's one of those rare occasions when she doesn't have to work. She turns the car around and spots a payphone. Deciding to give this Josh Cooper a call, she gets out of her car, walks over and goes into the booth. Taking down the phone book, she looks through her pockets for change. Instead of change she finds her cell. Jinny finds Josh's number in the phonebook and calls him.

The convo will be posted tommorrow I g2g to bed the effects of the spinal tap are showing.

Awwww...a little girl...how cute, don't ya just love cute father-daughter scenes? LOL, MORE! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Dammt! It's not arf! arf! Hehehe.... MOOOOORE!

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~*Amy*~
CookieCupcake24@aol.com
AIM- MacNCheeze565
SFPDInspectorCD

"Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparently anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead.

"I give people chances who earn them...except insurance guys."~ C.D. DeLorenzo.

Rose~ It's a letter from St. Olaf. It's from the Department of Water and Coffee.
Blanche~ Coffee?
Rose~ No thanks. It makes me jumpy.

Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown, BUT, it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and b*t*h-slap that mother @#?!&! upside the head.

*************************
DON'T CALL ME EASY MAC!

http://www.nancymckeon-division.cityslide.com

This is great...keep it up!

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~Lauren~
Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo
Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me
Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com
or
musicdiva467@hotmail.com
or
chicago6789@hotmail.com
or
irishhottie77@hotmail.com
as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE!

I'm not going to be finishing this story because of amy. you can thank her. she has made me belive in no self worth in myself. this story is now over.

*Earth 8am*
A huge miteor hits and destroys the earth.

I can't come back to this message board because amy made me so unhappy and made me feel unwelcome here,

w/e girl...amy didnt do nothin to you...o so what? we are givin u a hard time, but thats only because you yelled at us when u first got here. You dont like us, we dont like you...thats the way it goes hun.

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I am a Jineddy! A Jineddy is a person who wants Jinny and Teddy to be together! Morganne is a Jinanybody and a Carby, but thats ER...Dana just happens to be a JinMag, which is a lil strange, but o well...its interesting!

*Me, Morganne, and Dana are self appointed message board bad girls...we rebel against self appointed moderators...You know who you are!*

"Trust in my self rightious suicide, I cry when angels deserve to die" - System of a Down

"Hoe, but can I get a ride? No. C'mon n*i*g*g*a* why? Cuz youz a hoe, youz a hoe, youz a hoe, I said that youz a hoe" - Ludicris

Originally posted by TheGreatTDFan:
I'm not going to be finishing this story because of amy. you can thank her. she has made me belive in no self worth in myself. this story is now over.

*Earth 8am*
A huge miteor hits and destroys the earth.

I can't come back to this message board because amy made me so unhappy and made me feel unwelcome here,

I'm sorry someone was mean or rude, but that's one person in, oh, prolly hundreds here at the boards, and I for one, would like you to stay. It just takes a while for people to get to know ya, just give it some time, and finish this wonderful fanfic! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Jesus Christ! What the hell is wrong with you???????? WHAT DID I DO?!?!?! If I do recall, you started insulting me first! Oh well. Leave if you want. I'm not going to waste my time arguing with you.

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~*Amy*~
CookieCupcake24@aol.com
AIM- MacNCheeze565
SFPDInspectorCD

"Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparently anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead.

"I give people chances who earn them...except insurance guys."~ C.D. DeLorenzo.

Rose~ It's a letter from St. Olaf. It's from the Department of Water and Coffee.
Blanche~ Coffee?
Rose~ No thanks. It makes me jumpy.

Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown, BUT, it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and b*t*h-slap that mother @#?!&! upside the head.

*************************
DON'T CALL ME EASY MAC!

http://www.nancymckeon-division.cityslide.com

Sara is dead. She killed herself last night. This post is for those of you who don't go to the other mb. She took an overdose of the medicine Toprimax which she was taking for her Lupus.
Sam