View Full Version : the day 'off'


aeysh1
11-12-2001, 07:31 PM
this takes place after jinny and teddy break up

it was a tuesday night jinny did not have work the next day she wanted to go to the bar or have a drink but did not she finally fell asleep the next day laying in her bed jinny woke up and turned on her scanner to see what was going on

police officer:yes we have a report of a shooting on 125 main a woman
jinny http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh my gosh mag!

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IMakeBurgers
11-12-2001, 09:11 PM
uuhhh...yeah! i want more...NOW

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§*¤~¤Jamie Chica Bungalo¤~¤*§ and Karli is Karli Chica Bungalo

Karli, IT BURNS!! LMFAO! NANCY MCKEON IS DA BEST ACTRESS IN DA WORLD!!!!

Crazy bitch~Magda

**LEMONADE SODA MAKES ME HYPERnessnessnessness**(lol Lauren)

Don't mess with crazy people!!~Me

Lisa, Lauren,Karli, Tiffany, and Jamie, da sLaNgSIsTaS!!!!

GUM IS GOOD!! LMFAO

My newNancy McKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/celeb2/nancy_mckeon) site..Check it out!

*singing* Take me there, I wanna go there, take me there, let's go there, take me to that great place...(I'm talkin' 'bout Nancy's house, if you haven't figured out)

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please e-mail or IM me at:
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aeysh1
11-12-2001, 09:41 PM
jinny quickley pulls on her clothes grabs her badge and gun gets in her car and speeds with her cop lights on to mags house she arrives she sees only one police car is there no ambulence she calls an ambunce it arrives and after it leaves with magda jinny starts to question cap arrives
cap:jinny what are you doin here howd ya know
jin:i was listening to my scanner
cap:hows mag
jin:I dont know im still quetioning omg ben

runs up to the police wheres her kid

police:kid? there is no kid

jinny runs in mags apartment and looks around and found a ransome note

whatchathink

IMakeBurgers
11-12-2001, 09:48 PM
wow! this is great! ok, i have a question...could you PLEASE use periods and capital letters at the beginning and ending of sentences...it is really easy to lose me..just ask people i talk to online http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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§*¤~¤Jamie Chica Bungalo¤~¤*§ and Karli is Karli Chica Bungalo

Karli, IT BURNS!! LMFAO! NANCY MCKEON IS DA BEST ACTRESS IN DA WORLD!!!!

Crazy bitch~Magda

**LEMONADE SODA MAKES ME HYPERnessnessnessness**(lol Lauren)

Don't mess with crazy people!!~Me

Lisa, Lauren,Karli, Tiffany, and Jamie, da sLaNgSIsTaS!!!!

GUM IS GOOD!! LMFAO

My newNancy McKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/celeb2/nancy_mckeon) site..Check it out!

*singing* Take me there, I wanna go there, take me there, let's go there, take me to that great place...(I'm talkin' 'bout Nancy's house, if you haven't figured out)

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
please e-mail or IM me at:
Jamiegirl2006@aol.com , WishiniwasNancyM@aol.com, NancyMcKeonfan4L@aol.com,or NancyMcKeonfan2001@yahoo.com

aeysh1
11-12-2001, 10:17 PM
i'll try no guarentees

(jinny runs out) cap heres a ransome note it says i need 1 million or the deal is off i kill little boy.
cap http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh gosh where do we drop off the ransome?
jin:it says he will contact the sfpd.i am goin to see how mags doin.
cap:me to ill callthe station. tell them to call me if this guy calls, by the way any prints?
jinny:no

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please visit my webpages on nancy http:home.talkcity.com/route66/aeysh/ www.nancy-mckeon-rocks.cityslide.com (http://www.nancy-mckeon-rocks.cityslide.com)
sorry i did not use capitals ill try next time.if you reply ill post more tonight.probably

IMakeBurgers
11-13-2001, 12:18 AM
More!

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§*¤~¤Jamie Chica Bungalo¤~¤*§ and Karli is Karli Chica Bungalo

Karli, IT BURNS!! LMFAO! NANCY MCKEON IS DA BEST ACTRESS IN DA WORLD!!!!

Crazy bitch~Magda

**LEMONADE SODA MAKES ME HYPERnessnessnessness**(lol Lauren)

Don't mess with crazy people!!~Me

Lisa, Lauren,Karli, Tiffany, and Jamie, da sLaNgSIsTaS!!!!

GUM IS GOOD!! LMFAO

My newNancy McKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/celeb2/nancy_mckeon) site..Check it out!

*singing* Take me there, I wanna go there, take me there, let's go there, take me to that great place...(I'm talkin' 'bout Nancy's house, if you haven't figured out)

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
please e-mail or IM me at:
Jamiegirl2006@aol.com , WishiniwasNancyM@aol.com, NancyMcKeonfan4L@aol.com,or NancyMcKeonfan2001@yahoo.com

aeysh1
11-16-2001, 12:21 AM
in the hospital
jin:magda remeraz
nurse:3rd floor room 12

jinny runs for the steps

Ewan's My Man
11-16-2001, 04:56 PM
This is good...like Nancy McKeon Forever said...periods and all that is good...I get lost allllll the time!

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aeysh1
11-17-2001, 07:35 PM
cap:thanx (yells to jinny )there is an elevator
jinny:steps are faster (and runs up the steps)

they both get upstairs and go in mags room

nurse:sorry no one inn while i inject

jinny holds up her badge

jin:will she be alright

nurse:ya, shell be fine in a few weeks. just dont say anything upsettin to her. patients like this are more likely to suffer deppression and it will slow down her healing

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo
11-18-2001, 12:38 AM
Lets go for longer sectiosn!! Yaya....but other than that! GREEEEAATTTTTTT!! oh, and periods and captial letters are great! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif quotes would be cool too......lol

aeysh1
11-19-2001, 08:21 PM
jinny:hey mag
mag:jin wheres ben
jin:he uh well he
cap:uh
jin:he said he was going to stay with gabriel today
mag http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh, okay
cap:so how ya holdin up
mag:they gave me some pills to knock the pain outyhe problem is they knock me out
jinny:hey look on the bright side you wont have to hear the caps voice for awhile
cap:jinny
jin:well..
mag:jin stop while your ahead
mag:this is so boring
jinny well here i brought you a present
mag:the tv remote

JinnyRulz2932
11-19-2001, 09:51 PM
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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people are who people are..youre born and you die pretty much the same person-all the rest is just window dressing-Jinny01 Nancy McKeon rulz

aeysh1
11-19-2001, 10:29 PM
jin http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.giflaughs)well ben wants you to feel better. i got a case i think ya know which one. ill be back tonight
cap:i have togo to get some rest

station......

phone rings

jinny:sfpd jinny extead
man:i hear your that wamans partner that got shot
jinny:ya
man:is she gonna be alright
jin:yes
man http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk i am the one that shot her dont bother tracing me im on a stolen cell phone
jinny:what do ya want is ben ok (motion to the cap she puts her speaker on and listens)
man:he will be if ya get my stough here ill give ya 30 seconds to talk to him
man:get over here come on
ben http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifcrying) he....hello
jin:ben its me jinny
ben:jinny
jinny:yeah your moms fine we'll gety ya outta there soon
let me talk to that man
ben:his names richard
jin:THANKS ben
jin:whatdo ya want
man:look i got nothin against your friend its against you

hang up......jinny pacing in caps office

jin:richard richard i cant think of a rich thats mad at me

aeysh1
11-20-2001, 08:48 PM
cap:it might not be his real name
jin:i still should check around do ya have that cell phone number
cap:yeah here
richard:what do ya want
jin:why ya angry with me
richard:i cant tell that will give it away
jin:WHERE DO YA WANT THE MONEY?

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