It WAS CHRISTMAS EVE
it had actually snowed mag could not believe it jinny was working that day but mag was not
she woke up mag:gosh i forgot bens present (she had hidden it at work so he would not find it so she dropped ben off at gabriels.
and went to the division the cap saw her and came out cap:you dont have work today mag:i know i forgot bens present . cap http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh
mag:wheres jin
cap:i was so supprised she did not show up today shes never late(sarcastically)i called her house no answer
just then caps phone rang maybe thats her mag waited to see cap flicked the switch so they both could here jins excuse
police:we found a car in the river the id was in it it slipped on the ice jinny extead we did not find the body the window was open so the body could have came out the window but with how cold it is she probably is not alive
police:hello?
cap:yeah........um thanx

jinny was floting down the river her head bleeding she woke up grabbed a log floting in the water to hold her she was in and out of conciesness as she floted down some back waters

mag http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh my gosh cap (mag starts crying)
cd:whats wrong
cap:the police found a carin the river its jinnys
angela http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh my gosh
cd:did they find a body
cap shook her head no
mag starts walking out
cap:where are you going
mag:to look for jin she would do the same for me(she leaves

what do u think

You stopped...it's against the law to stop on fan fics you know...now I must go find your favorite tree and hug it to death.

In other words more please!

Oh and the hug it to death comes from my nickname at school...Hug-A-Tree. Yes I do hug trees!

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ill post more now

jinny finally was awake enough to know atleast where she was but was to weak and cold to swim to shore she had hit her head so hard it wa snot looking goodshe knew mag would come looking for her she pulled out her badge and threw her identidy card on the shore of the water she passed out again

i promise i will write more in 15 min.

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i'm waiting!!!! lol

i am back ready to listen to more?

mag got in her car and drove alongside the river she could not see anything sinse jin was in backwaters

cap:cd angela i want you to question the whittnesses see if they saw a body come up then help mag look

jinny snapped out of it again and tried to make herself stay awake and think what she was going to do

the cap called up a hilicopter pilot and told him to circle the area a few times

i am still writing more right now but what do u think

jinny remembered her cell phone she pulled it out did not work she took off the battery wiped it dry the bestshe could and let it sit on the log to dry a little

dont worry ill post more in 10 min

as mag was looking for jin she started crying thinking eather she had frose to death
or was freazing which earged her to keep looking

then jinny remembered her gun she pulled it out took out the cartridge and dried it off
she shot the gun up in the air once magda thought she heard somethin but could not be sure so she called the cap to get her a rescue boat

jinny did not know how bad she was she was sure hypothermia would set in soon she got to a calm part of the water and tryed to paddle to shore she made it after awhile
of laying there she shot her gun again

more to come tonight


[This message has been edited by aeysh1 (edited 10-23-2001).]

c'mon I'll seriously find your favorite tree and hug it to death...at least if you don't post more...and by the way, what is your favorite tree's name? My favorite tree's name is Allison (joking...)

Hug-a-Tree

this time magda was sure she heard somethin.
the cap showed up with the boats
cap:anything?
mag:i heard two gunshots
cap:lets go

jinny heard a car a little further down river she figured it was not LA but another city so she crawled back on her log and went in the river then her cell phone started working again the battery was low though jinny dialed up the caps number cause she figured mag would not answer
cap:mckafferty
jinny:hey cap its jinny (weak voice)
cap:are you ok
jin:what do u think
i am on a log floatind down some backwaters
listen cap i am doin so well but its beangreat maybe youll see me around tell mag goodbye if you dont find me
mag:who is that
cap:jin
mag grabs the phone its dead
jinny passed out
she woke up by bumping into a boat at a harbor she crawled up on the deck and saw a bar crawled in and said someone help me call a doctor a man walked over a doctor he set jinnys head on his knees doc:someone call an ambulence i need blankets you get over hear you to rub her legs or arms with your hands we need to warm her up itll take the ambulence awhile (the road was icey)get somethin clean to put on her head
doc:whats your name
jin:jinny im going to sleep
doc:no you need to stay awake
he shook her a little to help her stay awake
doc:where do you work
jinny:call this number tell them you found me
the bartender called
cap:mckafferty
bartender:yeah we found a jinny we dont know her last name
cap:is she alright
bartender:shes over half dead if thats what you mean we have a doc in here gives her the address an ambulence is on its way

[This message has been edited by aeysh1 (edited 10-23-2001).]

Originally posted by Billy Gilman's Best Fan:
c'mon I'll seriously find your favorite tree and hug it to death...at least if you don't post more...and by the way, what is your favorite tree's name? My favorite tree's name is Allison (joking...)

Hug-a-Tree
AGAIN

magda angela cap and cd junped in a car and were on their way the saw an ambulence coming from the place and figured jinny so they followed it at the arrival to the hospital they saw the emts pull jinny out on a stretcher she did not look good they followed in when they saw a doctor come out they asked how she was doing doc:well the cut on her head is pretty bad she lost allot of blood we have not looked for other injuries yet although i think she pinched a nerve or somethin she did not move her legs at all
maG:can that be cured it depends on the patients will physical theropy will help we are stitching up her hand she must have punched through the window
nurse:doctor we need you in the or
doctor leaves
captain sighs and sits on the chair

Originally posted by Billy Gilman's Best Fan:
c'mon I'll seriously find your favorite tree and hug it to death...at least if you don't post more...and by the way, what is your favorite tree's name? My favorite tree's name is Allison (joking...)

Hug-a-Tree

Hahahaha! I was talking about u today! My friend said something about hugging trees and i was like, "I know someone who hugs trees! Shes from a faraway land!" and my other friend goes, "Shes from a faraway dam?" And I said, "Yeah! Shes a beaver....thats why she hugs trees!*sacractically*"

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Originally posted by NancyRulz24:
Hahahaha! I was talking about u today! My friend said something about hugging trees and i was like, "I know someone who hugs trees! Shes from a faraway land!" and my other friend goes, "Shes from a faraway dam?" And I said, "Yeah! Shes a beaver....thats why she hugs trees!*sacractically*"


hehe! I've actually been called a beaver before...I have a friend who tried to eat a tree once...(truth) she ended up in the ER though...never found out why...so I don't eat the trees, I just hug them!

Oh and more fan fic please!

as they were waiting mag started talking with them about some of the things jinny said or did funny things forgetting the caps their cd says i remember the time she came out of caps ofice and said somethin to the effect of god she has a bud up her butt for me i said why she goes how should i know maybe i asked if cap told her that she said no but everytime she looked at cap she saw her ant ireanes expression when she showed up to her sweat 16 wearing cuttoffs and a t-shirt that said got any lately
thay all atarted laughing then remembered the cap but supprised to see she was laughin too

the doctor comes back out well i was right about her legs
mag:can we help her with this
doc:well if you dont mind her screaming at you you can bent her knees and move her joints it will be very painful for her
cd:can we see her
doc:in about five minutes the nurses are just finishing up
doctor comes out doc: okay 2 at a time she will be groggy though
magda and the cap go in first
jinny was bruised and she looked awful

anyone reading this?

i'm reading...post more SOON!!!!

im reading it...aDD MORE~

jinny rubs her eyes well look who it is
mag:hey jin how are ya
jinny:well i felt like i was in a freezer now i can feel again and that almost hurts worse(jinny tries to sit up then cringes and lays back in pain)
mag:jinny just press the button to raise your bed
cap:well it looks like how awake you are youll be back on the squad in no time
jinny:i know about my legs you guys
mag:well jin we will help you and youll be back to yourself in no time
jin:maybe i want to see how painful it will be mag bend my leg (magda did just a little bit jinny cringes )mag keep going (mag does and jin screamed alittle )wow am i going to have fun
mag:your lucky your alive
jin:didnt you hear the gunshots
mag:ya but we couldnt find you jin the doctor said if you would have been asleep the whole time youd be dead now
jin:du thats why i stayed awake well not really jinny

want more

i want more...NOW!!!

mag:so what happened jin
jin:you know what happened the car crashed and i punched through the window and swam to the top
nurse waLKS in

jin:hey nurse when do i start that theropy you were talking about or whatever

nurse:well you will go home in a wheelchair in about 1 week then you rest for 1 week depending on your job you could go to work during that week then you come back
jin:yippi
cap:you can do filing
jin:i'm just going to have a hell of a time arent i
nurse:well i have other patients see you later

leaves

jin:see you later! get me a new nurse shes to happy
mag:jin!

g2g what do ya think?

finally a week passes magda and jinny getting ready to leave

mag:jin i still dont get why you havent told your dad or casey even
jin:cause thay dont need to worry about me i can take care of myself
mag http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.giflosing patience)no you cant not yet
jin:not ever
mag:jin......
nurse:well time for your shot
jin:whatcha mean shot
nuse:its for pain now pull up your sleeve
jinny:no
mag:jinny
jin:they make me feel funny it makes me feel so out of it
nurse:well we cant make you but here magda these are for when the pain gets bad enough
jinny http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifmockingly) this is for when the pain gets bad enough

nurse leaves

in car

jinny:so are we heading straight home(shifts a little) ouch!
mag:jin take the pill
jin:no where are we goin
mag:well i have to pick somethin up at the station then ill take you home. have you told theadore your hurt
jin:no
mag:jin youve been dating for weeks
jin:its my business

get to the station

mag:jin you wait here
jin:fine!!!!!!!

magda goes up to the station

jinny:gosh whats taking her so long i have to pee

jinny opens the car door pulls out her wheel chair and sets it on the ground opens it and shifts herself on it she then takes the elevator to the ststion fllor where magda is and after goin to the bathroom goes into the station

magda was faced the other way talking to cd and angela captain comes out of her office
cap:what are you doin here mag said you were waiting in the car
jin:i had to go to the bathroom and it was not easy getting up here do you have a problem with that
mag:jin i would have been down in a sec
jin:why dont i just go to work now

just then theodore walks in

teddy:jinny why are you in that wheelchair
jin:just a spair thing emergeny ya no i was just buugging the cap (low voice while ebowing the cap) right cap

magdas standin behind jin shaking her head
theodore:jin stand up
jin:what am i your slave
mag:jin just show him fine ill show him
jinny holds on the front of her desk and holds herself up with her hands
theodore:jinny can i speak with you
jin:well i am kinda bus......
cap:go head jin

is anyone readin this

jinny: whatcha want
teddy:what happened are you goin to be okay why didnt you tell me
jin:its no biggy
teddy:no biggy! your in a wheelchair what happened
jin:you should know didnt you read the paper on monday
teddy:no i was late for work
jin:i was in a car crash my car went into the river i pinched a nerve
teddy:will ya be okay?!!!!
jin:uh.......why does that matter to ya?!!!!
teddy:no i just want to help you
jin:can we talk about it tonight my place7:00
teddy:i guess (leans down and kisses jinny on the cheek
jin http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.giflooks a little embarrassed)bye

jinny wheels herself back in

jinny:thanks allot

is anyone readin this if ya are reply ill post more then