Ok, I was REALLY bored, and didn't feel like adding to my other Division fanfic, so I decided to start a knew one. This has nothing to do with my other fanfics...just thought you should know....well, hope you like it.

“The End”

A 15 year old brown haired, blued eyed girl sat on some stairs in an alley, with a drink in her hand. She was by herself, and liked it that way. She was a loner…she didn’t need anyone! But, she wasn’t alone for long.
“Hey, Exstead!” A voice called from the end of the alley. The girl sighed and stood up to see who it was. The boy came running towards her, until she could finally make out the face.
“Oh God…Bobby! What the hell do you want?” Bobby ran up to her and smiled. He was a little taller then she was, with short blonde hair, and small brown eyes.
“I don’t want anything! Shawn just told me to come find you, so that’s what I’m doing!” Bobby was Shawn’s best friend, and Shawn just happened to be the girl’s current boyfriend. She slowly sat back down on the stairs and watched as Bobby did the same. Smiling, she took a big gulp of her drink, and then crushed the can in her hand. “What’s that?” Bobby was a very curious teenager…and it often got annoying.
“Just some beer my…” Before she could finish, she noticed another person at the opening of the alley. At first she thought it was one of her friends…until she noticed something shinny on his shirt. “Oh Crap!” Yep, it was a cop! She was trapped in an alley with a crushed beer can in her hand, and a cop coming her way! The cop speed walked down the alley to where the two kids were.
“Now, I believe I know you from some where.” The cop recognized the girl. She got into a lot of trouble, and he was always the one to catch her.
“Hey Officer Duca” She sighed, trying not to seem nervous. He smiled, and nodded to Bobby who he happily didn’t know.
“Now what are you doing back here, and what would that be in your hand?” He knew something was up, because with her something was always up! The girl’s palms got sweaty.
“I’m talking to my friend Bobby, do you mind!” She was as nervous as she could get, but under no circumstances was she going to let the officer, or even Bobby know that.
“Well excuse me for doing my job, will you ever forgive me?” Officer Duca was generally nice, but had learned how to handle the girl. She smirked, and looked at Bobby quickly.
“I though being a smart ass was my job?” The officer knew that she was trying to get him off the topic of what he was there for. He decided to lead her on a bit, and then ask her about it.
“Well looks like I’m moonlighting then…” Officer Duca was very handsome. Tall, dark, and handsome that is. He had bright blue eyes, and short, dark brown hair. He also had a 6 pack, which gladly the girl could tell by through his shirt. And even though she wouldn’t admit it to anyone, she had a little crush on him.
Now the girl herself was decent. Her blue eyes matched well with her brown hair, and her attitude. She was wearing blue jeans, ripped at the knees, and a black leather motorcycle jacket. Under her jacked was a flannel shirt over a plain gray one. So all together she looked pretty tough, not to mention the black boots she was wearing. And even though Officer Duca wouldn’t admit it to anyone, he was a little scared of her.
“Anyway, what’s in the can?” The girl just smiled and shook her head.
“Nothing, see it’s empty” She waved the crushed can extremely fast in front of him, so he couldn’t tell what it was. He smiled and nodded.
“Well then what WAS in the can?” He had a feeling it was beer, but couldn’t be totally sure. The girl took a deep breath and stared at the officer. She, for some reason, could tell what he was thinking,
“Just soda… you know, Coke” The can was red, so she figured Coke was the best soda to say. However she forgot the fact that she hated Coke and Officer Duca knew that.
“Oh really? And what happened to your deep hatred of Coke?” The girl’s once sweaty palms were dry as clams now. Bobby just stood there in suspense as if it was a movie. He really wanted to know how the girl would get out of this one. But she just smiled.
“Can’t a girl change her mind? We’re known for doing that you know.” Officer Duca laughed. As much as he knew it wasn’t true, he decided to believe it. He could loose his job for all the things he does for this one girl, but after all he owed her. He arrested her for nothing a couple of times, and got her into a lot of trouble. So he considered this to be his payment.
“What ever you say, Jessy. What ever you say.” Officer Duca smiled and walked out of the alley. Jessy fell on the stairs in relief smiled.
“I can’t believe you actually pulled it off! He actually believed you!” Bobby was amazed. Of course they both had no idea that Officer Duca really knew. “You don’t know how lucky you are!” Jessy sat up and looked at Bobby, her smiled now faded.
“Hell I do! If he caught me I would’a gone to Juive.” Jessy smiled at her success. She didn’t get caught, this time!


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>>Ray<<

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

God Bless Everyone who died on 9-11, and we're gonna get who did this back!

Well I'm still awake, and still bored so here's some more. And just to warn you I'm half asleep so it may not make sense...and if it doesn't I'll fix it tomorrow!

Jinny Exstead sat at the table in her living room while she stared at the wall. It was the day after the big “Intervention” that her friends had set up for her. And although she cried a lot, she was happy that they did it. She knew that they cared, that they really wanted to help. Of course she didn’t show her appreciation to well, at least not until the end of it. But it was hard for her, talking about her mother’s suicide was something she didn’t like to do, and didn’t do a lot.
A knock at her door interrupted her thoughts. Her thoughts about the beer she wanted so badly. She slowly got up from her chair and made her way to the door. Truthfully she was hoping it was Teddy. She had not seen or heard from him since that night she cheated on him. But when she opened the door it was her best friend, Magna.
“Hey, Jin. How are you holding up?” Jinny smirked and let her friend in. Mag walked in, as Jinny closed the door and followed her.
“I’m doing as well as I should be I guess.” Jinny watched as her friend kind of searched the place with her eyes. Jinny was a little disappointed. She knew her friend was searching for empty beer or alcohol bottles, and was surprised she didn’t have faith in her… especially after last night. “What are you doing here? Why aren’t you at the station?” Jinny wanted so bad to be able to put on her badge and her holster and to head off to work. But knew that no matter what she said she couldn’t go back for a while.
“Captain gave me that day off to stay with you.” Mag was hoping her friend would be happy about that, but Jinny showed no expression at the news. She wasn’t sure if she should be happy that Mag actually wanted to spend the day with her, or if she just wanted to make sure she didn’t drink anything. So, in response, Jinny just nodded and the two sat on the couch. Mag smiled… after giving the place a good eye search, she saw no signs of empty, or full bottles. She also noticed that Jin cleaned up her apartment a little. Not a lot, but still some. “So you cleaned up a bit, I see” Mag decided complimenting Jinny was the best thing she could do. Especially after what she put Jinny through.
“Ya, well what else am I supposed to do?” Jinny shrugged her shoulders and looked around at her place. It was still pretty messy, but it was also only 11 O’ clock. Jinny still had the rest of the day, and 89 more days to finish it. The thought of that depressed Jinny even more. She leaned back on her couch, and held back her tears. All she wanted to do was lay down and cry all day. How was she supposed to pay her rent? Or buy her food, or anything else? She was basically broke and there was nothing she could do. Well, she could ask her friends and family, but that was the LAST thing she would ever do. The absolute last thing!


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>>Ray<<

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

God Bless Everyone who died on 9-11, and we're gonna get who did this back!

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!please, please, please!!!!!!

This is GREAT I luv Jessy.

wooooooohooooooo add more u no it rocks!! hold on hold on...is this jessy..like me? lol u no what i mean!! add more soon~

I'm glad you like it! Here's some more!

In New York, where Jessy lives, almost everyone is in a “group.” In those groups, there’s always the pretty and snobby one, the geeky one, the smart one, the funny one, the hot one, the quiet one, and the tough one. Well, in Jessy’s group, she was obviously the tough one. Her new boyfriend, Shawn, was the hot one… his best friend, Bobby, was the smart one… Kevin was the funny one… Jack was the geeky one… Nick was the quiet one… and Christy was the pretty, snobby one. All of them got a long most of the time. But Jessy and Christy just hated each other sometimes. They would yell, and make fun of each other, but that was only when Christy was being conceited or when Jessy was being just plain mean! Other then that they were best friends. They had an alley that they hung out in, and that’s where they usually were.
“Hey, Bobby, did you pass that science quiz?” Kevin asked his smart friend. Bobby smiled and nodded. “Of course you did, that was a stupid question. What’d you get?” Everyone was quiet and looked at him. He got a little embarrassed being the only one that could pass a test. But, he had dealt with it for the past 2 years, and so he would deal with it again.
“102…” He watched as his friends stared at him in disbelief. Shawn got up, and gave his friend a high five.
“That’s, awesome!” Shawn was the only one who really appreciated his friend’s brains. But that was probably because Bobby would only help Shawn study, and no one else. Jessy slowly got up from the ripped and torn couch that was in the alley. She walked over to Bobby and looked at him.
“How the hell did you manage to get a 102 on a 100pt test?” Jessy was baffled. She never scored over a 70 on a test… not even if she actually studied. And most of the kids in her “group” didn’t get over 80’s. But she really didn’t care… she didn’t think that knowing how the earth spins, or crap like that was going to help her in life. She didn’t know what she wanted to be when she got older, but she knew she wasn’t going to need to know that!
“Oh Jessy, lay off!” Christy was sitting on the ratty couch, looking in a mirror and putting on her lip stick. But she stopped for a second to scold Jessy. Jessy just shot Christy a look, and waited for Bobby to answer.
“It’s not that hard. I just through in some big words that sounded important!” All his friends laughed, including Jessy. She loved New York, and would never leave, NEVER!

hope you like it! I'll post more later!

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>>Ray<<

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

God Bless Everyone who died on 9-11, and we're gonna get who did this back!

Post more now! lol

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Confidence isn't something that you're born with and it isn't something that comes down on you one day like the rain. You get it from yourself,gradually, willfully and it's the best gift that you can give yourself.
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Rumors are just a person's way of trying to make you feel down about yourself. You just have to accept the fact that people will talk behind your back and you need to ignore it. That which doesn't kill you will make you stronger!
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In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!-Jinny Exstead.
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Originally posted by WildChildJinny:
Post more now! lol



ditto

this kicks!!! omg add more sooooooooooon please or even better how bout now?!!? well...we are waiting lol!!

MMMMMMMMOOOOOOORRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!

We all clear? Good. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

I'm glad you like it, here's more:

Jinny had noticed that ever since her friend got there, she hadn’t stopped smiling. Now Jinny knew that something was making her happy, and it sure wasn’t her.
“So, Mag, is there something you want to tell me? You know any good news?” Mag looked at her friend and smiled. She wasn’t sure if telling Jinny was the best idea, but she just couldn’t hold it in any longer.
“Well, actually I might…” Jinny was intrigued and moved closer to Mag. “Gabriel proposed to me last night.” Jinny almost feel off the couch in shock. Mag stared at her excitedly and awaited a response.
“Uh, wow Mag, that’s, that’s great! What did you say?” Jinny shook her head just to make sure she wasn’t hearing things. But when she looked at the glowing Mag, she knew it was true. However, under the glowing Mag, there was an extremely confused one.
“I told him I don’t know. I mean he’s been gone for so long… I just don’t know.” Jinny nodded. She understood what her friend was going through, and much rather be going through that then what she was actually going through.
“But he does make your life a hell of a lot easier, right?” Mag laughed at her friend. Of course he did, but she didn’t like going around saying that. He took Ben whenever she told him too, he cleaned, and he did everything. Jinny looked at her friend. She evened her so much. Mag had everything she had ever wanted, and what did she have? 3 months of suspension for drinking!
“Well, Mag, do you love him?” Mag paused for a second. She wasn’t sure if she was in love with the Gabriel now, or the Gabriel she had known.
“I think so…I just need some time to figure things out.” Jinny smiled at Mag. God how she wanted to know what love felt like again. And the only name that could pop into her head was Teddy. Why the hell was she so stupid to cheat on him? Why, why why?


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>>Ray<<

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

God Bless Everyone who died on 9-11, and we're gonna get who did this back!

why the hell did she stop there? why why why !? hah this rocks and u no it sooooooo adddd more!

Ih the words of Jinny: Why? Why? Why?......... Did u stop there? LOL! MOre Please!

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Confidence isn't something that you're born with and it isn't something that comes down on you one day like the rain. You get it from yourself,gradually, willfully and it's the best gift that you can give yourself.
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Rumors are just a person's way of trying to make you feel down about yourself. You just have to accept the fact that people will talk behind your back and you need to ignore it. That which doesn't kill you will make you stronger!
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In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!-Jinny Exstead.
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Lol! I'm REALLY happy that you like this! Katie convinced me to post a little more tIt was getting dark, and Jessy had to get home. She dreaded going home so much.
“Hey, Jessy, walk me home?” Christy was scared to walk home in the dark, but where they lived everyone was. But Christy felt safe with Jessy. She didn’t know why, but she did. Jessy nodded.
“Well, see you tomorrow.” Shawn walked over to Jessy and they started to kiss. Everyone rolled their eyes as they watched Jessy and Shawn’s tongue meet in their mouths. After about a minute or two, they stopped.
“Well it’s about time!” Christy was tapping her foot the whole time. Her parents were very strict, and if she weren’t home in 10 minutes, she would be grounded.
“Buh bye now!” Shawn smiled as Jessy and Christy walked away. Christy was speed walking as fast as she could, not wanting to be late. “Slow down, Chris, what’s the hurry?” Christy just shot Jessy a mean look.
“You know what the hurry is, Jessy. I know you hate going home… but I have to!” Jessy nodded and started walking faster, just for her friend. As she walked faster, the dog tag around her neck started bouncing up and down. This was really the first time Christy had noticed that Jessy had it and decided to ask her about it. “Uh Jess, whose dog tag is that?” Jessy paused for a moment and lifted it up so she could see it.
“My father’s, I think.” Christy looked at Jessy confused. Jessy just looked up and kept walking, Christy now behind her.
“What do you mean you think? How can you not know?” How could somebody not know about something like that. “Why don’t you just ask him…” Before she could really finish what she was saying, Jessy snapped.
“Because I don’t know him, alright!” Christy was now the one who stopped. “Didn’t you ever wonder why I have a different last name then my parents? Why I don’t look like them or act like them in anyway?” Christy was stunned. She had no idea what to say to her now angry friend.
“Well sure it crossed my mind, but…” Jessy, once again, interrupted Christy.
“They’re not my parents! I was adopted when I was a year old, by the horrible people I live with now.” Jessy was adopted my two alcoholics. Although she liked to drink herself, she hated when they did. When they weren’t drunk, they would call her useless and ugly and horrible and everything like that, and when they were drunk, they would just show it! They would hit her, and slap her, and hell even burn her, and she hated them for that. The dog tag was the only thing she had of her father, her real father, and intended to keep it!
onight so here it is!

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>>Ray<<

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

God Bless Everyone who died on 9-11, and we're gonna get who did this back!

hehehe i did a damn good job of convincing ya if i do say so myself lol...hah this rocks and i look forward to more!

I'm sorry this isn't a lot, but i'm trying to do like 10000 things at once! Hope you like it!

Jessy paced back and forth in front of her house, stalling to go in. She hated her “parents” so much she was going to run away… but she had no where to go. The whole city was scared of her parents because they were lawyers, and good one’s too. Jessy continued pacing until she heard a horrible sound.
“Jessica Parker, you get your ass in here now!!” Parker was her parent’s name, and that’s what they called her. But everyone else knew her as an Exstead! Her father came storming out of the house, and ran at Jessy. Jessy, having been through this before, knew that the best thing was to stand there and take it. However, he did something this time that Jessy wasn’t prepared for. He grabbed her by the ear and flung her on the ground. She landed on her shoulder, and laid there in pain for a second. Then out of no where, her father ran over and kicked her hard in her side.
“Crap!” Jess rolled over in pain, as tears ran down her eyes. Her father was a big man. But not as in fat, more as in structured! He had decently big muscles… and a lot of strength! Tears continued rolling down her face, but she refused to cry.
“You little slut! What the hell you think you’re doing out so late?” He kicked her, again, and again until she crawled a few feet as fast as she could. But he just followed her and stepped on her back so she fell to the ground again, stomach first. She curled in pain, and tried to yell for help, but couldn’t get it out. Her father stood on her, one foot on her back, the other on the back, as Jessy started to choke. Finally someone came and ran at her father, knocking him down. Jessy watched best she could as they wrestled, but finally passed out.


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>>Ray<<

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

God Bless Everyone who died on 9-11, and we're gonna get who did this back!

Ohhhhhhhhh Billy....I cant wait for more.....this is soooo awesome http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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this kicks ass!! man i love it!!!!!!!!!!!! add more soon~omg!

Ok, well i'm bored so here's more!

Jessy woke up in terrible pain to realize she was on a train. Her whole body was in pain, and she couldn’t breath very well. It took her a second to realize where she was, but when she did… she freaked!
“Wha…Who…Huh?” Jessy paused for a second while her body started to throb. “Where the hell am I?” Jessy managed to get a few breaths out at a time, but thought she was going to suffocate. She started breathing heavily, and everyone stared at her. A man walked over to her and leaned over her.
“Are you ok?” Jessy jumped a little, startled by the man. She thought a sec, and then shook her head. “Ok… if you’re sure” The man started to walk away, when Jessy grabbed his coat.
“Wait a sec, where is this train going to?” The man looked at her like she was crazy. Jessy waited for him to answer, but when he didn’t she got pissed. “Hello! Are you there?” The man was surprised someone so young would be so rude, but decided to answer her.
“It’s a 4 day, non stop train ride to San Francisco!” The man slightly smiled, but as soon as Jessy let go of him, he ran. Jessy was really confused now. Why the hell was she on a train ride to San Francisco?
“San Francisco? San Francisco? San Fran…” Then it hit her. The dog tag she had around her neck said the name of her father, and his address. He lived in San Francisco and that’s where she was going! She put her hand around her dog tag and smiled. “Oh my God!” Jessy couldn’t believe it. But how the hell did she get on the train? And just with that thought, a shadow over came her. Someone was standing next to her blocking her light. She looked up to see a familiar looking face, with a black eye.
“Sorry, I was in the bathroom! You’re father can really pack one!” Jessy smiled as best she could with the bruise on her face. Her whole body felt good for that second. But when she went to get up, she fell back into the seat in pain. “Are you alright?” Jessy Smiled.
“Ya, Shawn, I’m fine. But what the HELL are we doing!!” Shawn backed up a little, surprised at Jessy’s anger, but then smiled.
“Well, after what happened with your dad, I figured you’d want to get away. And since my parents are dead, and my foster parents don’t care about me, I figured this was our big chance to go find you’re real family.” Jessy didn’t know weather to be happy or sad. I mean her real family abandoned her… but she wanted to know them so bad.
“Alright!” Jessy sighed, which was very painful. “As long as we’re on our way!”



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>>Ray<<

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

God Bless Everyone who died on 9-11, and we're gonna get who did this back!

this kicks...please add more soon!!!!!!!!like sooooooon!

Ok, this part isn't a lot, or even good....but i was trying to do like 1000 things at once so i wasn't really concintrating....anyway..i'll try and add more tonight!

Jinny and Mag decided the best thing to do was go out. And since they we’re both starving, they decided to get food. There is a 3 hour difference between New York and San Francisco, it was only about 4 O’ clock where Jinny and Mag were.
“So Jinny, where go want to go?” Jinny looked around and thought a bit. She was REALLY hungry, and after she thought a sec, she knew the best place to go.
“The Ancorside!” Jinny smiled, but Mag didn’t. Did Jinny get anything they were saying last night? If they went there, Jinny would be tempted to go to the bar, and get a drink. Mag knew that would happen, so she couldn’t take her there.
“No, Jin. Anywhere else?” Mag shook her head as Jinny glanced strangely at her. Why couldn’t they go there? Jinny didn’t understand. That was like the only place they ever went.
“Why can’t we go to the Anchorside?” Jinny yearned (big word for me) for a drink! Not that she would get one if they went to the Ancorside. She just wanted to go to have an excuse to be near the station. Mag looked at her friend and saw how lonely she was. She was going to be like that for 89 more days! Mag felt so bad she just couldn’t say no anymore.
“Alright Jin, but there is NO drinking!” Mag pointed her finger at Jinny, while keeping her other hand on the wheel. Jinny smiled. She was so happy her friend was letting her go. Not that she need permission or anything… she was just glad she had someone who cared about her.


[This message has been edited by JinnyX (edited 10-02-2001).]

this rocks add more soon....soooon sooon soon more more more~

MORE! I http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/heart.gif THIS STORY!

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I ~<3~ Nick!!!
¤°What's 4 Years Between A Girlfriend And Her Boyfriend?°¤
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Confidence isn't something that you're born with and it isn't something that comes down on you one day like the rain. You get it from yourself,gradually, willfully and it's the best gift that you can give yourself.
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Rumors are just a person's way of trying to make you feel down about yourself. You just have to accept the fact that people will talk behind your back and you need to ignore it. That which doesn't kill you will make you stronger!
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In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!-Jinny Exstead.
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Jessy was in terrible pain. She had cuts and bruises everywhere, and coughed up blood every once and a while. Shawn, who loved Jessy very much, couldn’t do anything about it. They didn’t have doctors on the train, and it was non-stop. So Jessy just sat there, thinking about her family.
“What are you thinking?” Jessy was gazing at the ceiling, and Shawn was curious. He wondered how she must feel, going to find her real parents.
“What if they don’t want to see me?” That was pretty much all Jessy could think about. What if they slam the door in her face, and her and Shawn have no place to go? But Shawn wasn’t worried about that. What he failed to mention to Jessy was he had no intention of going home. Like Jessy’s, his parents were alcoholics. Except they hit him weather they were drunk or not. However, he had never had them do to him what Jessy’s father did to her. He couldn’t believe someone could to that to another person! It was just so horrible. So Shawn had to think positively about the future.
“What do you mean? Who wouldn’t want you?” Jessy smiled the best she could. He was right… well not about her, generally. Who wouldn’t want their own daughter? She was sure they would at least talk to her. But her smile quickly faded. What if they didn’t like how she was? Here you have an all American, white, rude, and even a little prejudice girl! What if her family was the exact opposite? Oh well… she figured what ever happens, happens, and she would have to live with it!
“Ya…” Jessy leaned her head back and closed her eyes as Shawn watched. He could tell she was in pain, because every few seconds she would grunt. God her father was strong. He was so glad he got there when he did, other wise who knows what would have happened to Jessy? He watched as she slowly, and painfully, turned to her side. The back of her jacket had grass, dirt, bloodstains, and even a rip on it. If she saw that she would be pissed! She loved her leather jacket! When she was bored in school, and wasn’t asleep, she would play with the many zippers it had.
Now unlike Jessy, Shawn had no problems with the police. Sure he wasn’t the nicest kid around, but drinking and things like that he just didn’t do! Especially with the parents he had. They would have probably locked him in the basement if he did, just like they did when he came home with a C. Because of that, he also had to go to school everyday, sick, dying, or fine. It didn’t matter! He just couldn’t take the chance of getting anything lower then a B, not even a B-! Jessy’s parents didn’t care about her grades, they just hit her anyway. Only that wasn’t the worst they have done. Besides her father beating the crap out of her, the worst thing they have done is probably burn her. One day, she was just sitting on the couch, watching TV, and her father wanted to watch it. When she wouldn’t give him the clicker, he took the iron right out of her mother’s hands, and slammed it on Jessy’s arm. She had to run to the hospital herself, since her parents wouldn’t drive her. She hasn’t watched TV since, or worn short sleeves.


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>>Ray<<

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

God Bless Everyone who died on 9-11, and we're gonna get who did this back!

I love this add more sooooooooooooooon@!

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PlEaSe?!?

(LOL, I got a new signature AGAIN! Hehe, Good-Bye Nick and Hello Darren, AGAIN!)

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Confidence isn't something that you're born with and it isn't something that comes down on you one day like the rain. You get it from yourself,gradually, willfully and it's the best gift that you can give yourself.
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In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!-Jinny Exstead.
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ray we are waiting....lol ADD MORE! (the reason she hasnt added more is because she hasnt been on..well i havent cuz of my internet and i always get her to post more hah)

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-Queen Keightee Nancy McKeon of the T-Shirts, Tony Sopranos, Big Toes, Pencils, Paper plates, and Chocolate Eclairs.

6 Queens, 1 Goddess and a message board. One Code: Hell Raising
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Skate like the wind-shoot like Davy Crocket

-keightee!

It'll be greatly appreciated by many if you post some more.hehe. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif You're doing a really good job and I'm looking forward to
reading the end.I hope you're not like me
and you don't decide to finish it! I started to write my 1st fan fic the other day but I'm
ashamed to say that I QUIT.I guess writing isn't my thing.

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LOL katie! Hey, I'm BACK! I'm sooooo sorry! Thursday my internet was down, and i couldnt get on and then fri right after school i went to NH and just got back.....so as soon as I write more, I'll post it! Thanks so much!

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>>Ray<<

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

God Bless Everyone who died on 9-11, and we're gonna get who did this back!

Originally posted by JinnyX:
LOL katie! Hey, I'm BACK! I'm sooooo sorry! Thursday my internet was down, and i couldnt get on and then fri right after school i went to NH and just got back.....so as soon as I write more, I'll post it! Thanks so much!



omg ur internet was down too?! same here lol!!! amazing! u better add more soooooooon!

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-Queen Keightee Nancy McKeon of the T-Shirts, Tony Sopranos, Big Toes, Pencils, Paper plates, and Chocolate Eclairs.

6 Queens, 1 Goddess and a message board. One Code: Hell Raising
~~!!~~**~~!!~~**~~
Skate like the wind-shoot like Davy Crocket

-keightee!

Oh,good...you're back.I hope you post the rest of the story sometime soon. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Alright, here you go....sorry its not a lot! Oh, bye the way, the last sentence i wrote on the last part i posted was supposed to be: She hasn't worn short sleeves or watched tv SINCE!

Jinny loved the Anchorside. Especially because of the men she met there. But that wasn’t all of it. She had so many memories of her and her friends going there! It was the only place, besides her apartment, that she always felt welcome! She smiled when Mag pulled up in front of it, and jumped out of the car.
“Hey, wait up!” Mag laughed at her friend. She loved seeing her happy, which wasn’t very usual. Jinny had to many problems in her life, and didn’t have time to be happy a lot. However, now Jinny was very happy! She went to open the door, but something stopped her. She paused, and turned to Mag. “What?”
“I dunno?” Jinny just shrugged her shoulders and went to open the door. However, she realized the door was already opening, so she stepped back.
“Oh, I’m sor…” A man stood and looked at Jinny speechless. Jinny and Mag almost feel over when the realized who this handsome man was.
“Teddy?!” Jinny put her hand to her heart in shock. She didn’t think she was ever going to see him again, especially here. “What the hell are you doing here?” Teddy was just as shocked as Jinny was. He had heard that Jinny was suspended, and didn’t expect her to be there. But then again, where else would she be.
“Uh, I… you…” All Teddy could do was shake his head. He didn’t know if he should be mad at Jinny for what she did, or at himself for what he made her do. At the moment he figured not blame it on him. “I dunno why I’m here, but I bet all of San Francisco knows why you are!” Teddy was taken back by what he just said. He was so embarrassed that all he could do was walk away. Mag frowned as she watched him go, and then turned back to her friend. Jinny just wanted to crawl under a rock and die. Tears filled her eyes, as she almost fell to the ground. How could the nicest person in the world say such a horrible thing? All of a sudden Mag and Jin heard a familiar voice.
“Hey, you guys!” CD and Angela ran across the street to their co-workers. However, Jinny was to hurt to say anything back. She just stared down the way that Teddy went, as people kept coming in and out of the restaurant.
“Hey!” Mag smiled, and tried not to think of what had just happened. “How was work?” Mag smirked knowing that she didn’t have to go.
“Fun, actually…we got to spend the whole day talking to Cap about last night.” CD’s sarcastic humor made both Mag and Angela laugh. Of course it wasn’t long until they noticed there was something wrong with Jinny.
“Is Jinny really tired, or just drunk?” Angela asked. Mag and CD looked over, to see Jinny sitting against the front of the Anchorside. All three of them rushed over and knelt down beside her.
“Jinny, Jinny honey are you ok?” Jinny looked over to Mag and nodded. Mag sighed with relief and stood up. Then, CD and Angela slowly stood up, but keeping their eye’s on Jinny. Jinny started to get up, until she saw something she hoped not to see for the 89 days she had left.
“What’s going on here?” Jinny sat back down on the ground, as Captain pushed through Mag and Angela to see Jinny.
“Uh, Cap, Jinny was just resting.” Captain just looked at Mag, and knew she was lying. Cap walked in front of Jinny, and looked down at her.
“Exstead, get up!” Jinny jumped to her feet and stared the Captain in the face.
“What do you want? You’re not my boss for another…” Jinny paused sarcastically, and then smiled. “…89 days!” Captain wanted to slap Jinny, but controlled herself.
“Alright, see you then!” Cap walked off, trying not to show her anger. Jinny slowly got up and watched her go. Mag, CD, and Angela looked back and forth at each other, until finally Jinny broke the silence.
“I think coming here was a bad idea, Mag. Lets go!” Jinny stomped back to the car, as Mag waved goodbye too CD and Angela, and followed her.


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>>Ray<<

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

God Bless Everyone who died on 9-11, and we're gonna get who did this back!

hmmm wonder why u added more? hahahehe add more sooooon, next time u come on ill get you too! hahah and ms. congenality and clueless were great!

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-Queen Keightee Nancy McKeon of the T-Shirts, Tony Sopranos, Big Toes, Pencils, Paper plates, and Chocolate Eclairs.

6 Queens, 1 Goddess and a message board. One Code: Hell Raising
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Skate like the wind-shoot like Davy Crocket

-keightee!

WEll, this is for Katie lol!

Finally after 4 days, the train made it to San Francisco. Shawn slowly helped Jessy off the train, and to a main street.
“Well, we’re here!” Shawn and Jessy stood in the middle of the sidewalk and looked at the very unfamiliar city.
“What do we do now?” Jessy looked at the ground in pain. She all of a sudden wanted to go home, back to New York! They both felt lost, and lonely, and wanted to see their friends. Of course, Jessy had no way of knowing that wasn’t going to happen.
“What’s the address on your dog tag?” Shawn lifted the tag off of Jessy’s shirt and looked at it. Jessy waited impatiently as Shawn took his time reading it.
“Well, what does it say?” Jessy demanded to know! She was in pain, and was nervous, and just wanted to get this over with as soon as possible. Shawn frowned as he looked at the tag. He had no idea where he was! Which meant he had no way of finding out where the address on the tag was. “Hello? What the hell does it say?”
“I dunno! Ok! This was a stupid idea!” Shawn and Jessy looked at each other and wondered why they were yelling. It wasn’t going to get them anywhere, and it was just stressing them out. “I’m sorry… but I don’t know where we are, so I cant find where we’re going!” Shawn wasn’t yelling anymore, which made Jessy feel better. They looked around until they saw one of the trolleys stop.
“Maybe we should get on one of those and see where it takes us…” Jessy pointed to the trolley, as Shawn looked at it and smiled.
“Good idea, c’mon” Shawn picked up Jessy, and carried her on to the trolley. They rode around and saw nothing. After about 20 minutes, they noticed the San Francisco Police Department.
“Hey, maybe they could help us.” Jessy looked at Shawn, who just smiled. He helped Jessy off the trolley and the two headed in the station. They walked around for a bit, until they came to the division. Mag, CD, and Angela looked at them until Mag realized Jessy was hurt.
“Oh my God, what happened?” Mag ran over to Jessy, who just limped back. CD and Angela got up to see what was wrong.
“I’m fine, I just wanted to know where this was.” Jessy took off her dog tag and gave it to Mag. Mag read it over and was silent. CD and Angela looked over Mag’s shoulder to read it, but couldn’t see. “Well, do you know where it is?” Mag was still silent. She looked over Jessy, to see if she had seen her before, but she didn’t recognize her.
“Did Jinny put you up to this?” Mag laughed. Shawn and Jessy looked at each other confused. They were starting to believe Californians were crazy.
“Who’s Jinny?” Jessy shook her head, and was getting a little scared. CD and Angela stared at each other. They were just as confused as Jessy and Shawn. Mag was now even a little confused herself. She had thought Jinny was bored at home and wanted to play a joke on them, but they didn’t seem to be kidding.
“Where did you get this?” Mag was now serious.
“It’s my fathers. I was adopted when I was 1 and I live in New York. But my foster parents are alcoholics, and my father beat me the other night… as you can see. So I decided to come find my real father, and that’s all I have of his.” Jessy hoped they knew where that was, and that her father was still alive. However, Mag was still confused. She decided she should tell this strange girl where the address was, and let John deal with it.
“Ok, well go all the way down to the street until the 2nd street light. Once you get there, take a right, and then another right. You’ll see a big brown house about half way down the street, and that’s it.” Jessy almost fainted. She was really going to meet her real father. But deep inside she wanted to know who Jinny was even more. She didn’t know why, but she just did!


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>>Ray<<

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

this is awesome...whooooooohooow add more for me!!!! this kicks assss

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-Queen Keightee Nancy McKeon of the T-Shirts, Tony Sopranos, Big Toes, Pencils, Paper plates, and Chocolate Eclairs.

6 Queens, 1 Goddess and a message board. One Code: Hell Raising
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Skate like the wind-shoot like Davy Crocket

-keightee!

I'm lovin' it,girl! Keep on posting!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

I really like your writing style.You have a
good imagination.

Oooooo, just started catching up, love it! Can't wait for more!

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Thanks so much for your complimeants! I'm really glad you guys like it! Here's more!

Mag took another good looked at Jessy before she left, and got an idea.
“Wait a second!” Jessy and Shawn were walking away, but stopped and turned around. “I have an idea. Why don’t I take you to the hospital to get looked at, and then I’ll call this address and have your father meet you there.” Mag wanted to make it seem like she didn’t know who the person on the tag was. Jessy and Shawn looked at each other, and Jessy shook her head.
“I’m fine! I don’t need no doctor!” Jessy hated the doctor. They always asked her questions about why she was there, and she didn’t like to think about it. Mag got up and slowly walked over to them.
“Are you sure?” Mag insisted. She was starting to get the feeling this girl really was related to Jinny. She was just as stubborn as her, and looked a little like. Shawn knew that Jessy needed a doctor too, so decided to try and convince her.
“Ya Jess…are you sure?” Shawn playfully hit Jessy on the back, and made her cry out in pain.
“Ouch!” Jessy yelled. She wanted to fall on the floor and cry, but knew that she couldn’t. “What the hell! That hurt!” Everyone was quiet and turned to watch them. Mag winked at Shawn, and took Jessy lightly by the arm.
“We’re going to the hospital!” Jessy wanted to fight back, but she was in WAY too much pain.

At the hospital, Jessy went into the room with the doctor while Shawn and Mag waited in the waiting room. After about 5 minutes, Mag stood up, took out her cell phone and dialed a number.
“Hello?” John Sr. answered his phone, sounding very tired.
“Hey, Mr. Exstead, It’s Magna.” John smiled at hearing his daughter’s best friend’s voice. He admired her and thanked her so much for what she had done the other night.
“Oh, hey Mag! How are you?” Mag thought that John Sr. was brave for what he sat through the other night. But tried to think about it as little as possible.
“I’m good, thanks, how are you?”
“Oh, I’m good! How’s Jinny doing? She hasn’t called me today.” Mag frowned. The truth was she hadn’t seen Jinny since the other night. But of course she couldn’t tell that to her father.
“Oh, Jinny’s good, but that’s not why I called.” Mag tried to get off the topic of Jinny and onto the topic of Jessy as soon as possible. But Jinny’s father laughed and figured it was one of his sons.
“What did John Jr. do now?” John and Mag both laughed. Mag hadn’t talked to John Jr. since the Intervention, and truthfully didn’t mind.
“It’s not John, or Casey. It’s about…” Mag didn’t know how to say this. She didn’t know if it was a joke, or a mix up, or what? She was scared to know the truth. “Well, today I was in the station, and this girl came up to me asking if I knew where an address on a dog tag was…the address was yours.” John was silent. It couldn’t be who he thought it was. It couldn’t be…
“Jessy” Mag fell into the chair next to her. He knew who she was! Shawn watched Mag, very interested to know what was going on.
“Uh, you know about her?” John was silent again. He couldn’t believe that Jessy had actually wanted to meet him and know him.
“Where is she?” John finally answered, very worried. Mag was still very shocked, and wished that Jinny were there.
“We’re at the hospital…apparently her adoptive parents are…” She didn’t want to mention the fact that they were alcoholics. “Well, her father beat her really bad, so she came to the station with, her boyfriend I guess, and I took her to the hospital.” John was shocked that someone would beat a child! How could people do that? It just wasn’t right and he felt guilty.
“I’ll be right there!” He hung up the phone and rushed outside to his car. Of course on the way, he bumped into John Jr. and Casey.
“Hey, dad, where you going?” Casey asked, wondering where his father would have to rush too. He just looked at his two sons and kept walking to the car.
“Get in!” He ordered. But they just stood there looking unpleasantly at each other. “NOW!” John Jr. moaned and got into the passengers seat, as Casey unhappily got into the back.
“Dad, what’s up?” John Jr. asked. But his father ignored him and just rushed to the hospital, totally forgetting Jinny was supposed to be coming over. But luckily Jinny made it too the house in time to see her father driving away, so she followed him.


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>>Ray<<

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

very, very good, MORE, more, more!!!!!!

I have one word to say...AWESOME!

get on so i can tell u to add more soooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! come on come u no this rocks!

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-Queen Keightee Nancy McKeon of the T-Shirts, Tony Sopranos, Big Toes, Pencils, Paper plates, and Chocolate Eclairs.

6 Queens, 1 Goddess and a message board. One Code: Hell Raising
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Skate like the wind-shoot like Davy Crocket

-keightee!

Well, I was posting this for katie, but she just got off, so i'll post it anyway!

John, John Jr., and Casey all rushed into the waiting room of the hospital. Mag stood up, and ran over to them.
“Hey, guys” She smiled, trying to make everything seem ok. John Jr. was really aggravated now! He had asked his father repeatedly what they were doing, and he had just ignored him!
“Would someone mind telling me what the hell is going on?” Everyone backed away from him, a little embarrassed. Just at that moment, Jinny walked in, but no one seemed to notice.
“John, shut up!” Casey yelled, trying to stand up to his brother. John Jr. walked over and looked down at his younger brother.
“Watch it, Mary!” John lifted his fist to punch Casey, but Jinny stepped in front of him.
“Hey! What the hell is going on? And why wasn’t I invited?” Jinny wanted to lighten the situation up, even though she had no idea what the hell it was. Everyone was quiet and looked at Jinny. She looked pretty good for someone who had been sober, well almost, for four days.
“Jinny?” John Sr. walked over to his daughter. “How’d you know we were here?” Jinny rolled her eyes, knowing he had forgot she was coming over that day.
“I used my telepathic powers, dad!” Jinny paused for a second, letting her father realize she was being sarcastic, and then started up again. “I was pulling up to your house when I saw you drive away! So I followed you! Not that hard no is it…now tell me why the hell we’re…” A nurse walking over to them interrupted Jinny. At first, they all thought she was going to yell at them. But then they realized John Jr. and Casey had their uniforms on, so she wouldn’t dare!
“Excuse me…” The nurse was frightened by the yelling, but knew she had to talk to them. “Uh, are you with Ms. Exstead?” John Jr., Jinny, and Casey looked confused back and forth at each other. Jinny walked up to the nurse, and looked right at her.
“I’m Ms. Exstead…” The nurse looked at her and shook her head. Jinny looked back at her father really confused.
“No, Ms. Exstead is in the other room.” The nurse was now just as confused as she was. “Are you her mother?” Jinny almost feel over. John Jr. and Casey did, onto the chairs next to Mag and Shawn.
“Her what! How old is this kid you’re talking about?” The nurse looked at Magna, hoping someone would explain this to her and to Jinny.


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>>Ray<<

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

THIS ROCKS RAY KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AGHHH parents! g2g love it

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-Queen Keightee Nancy McKeon of the T-Shirts, Tony Sopranos, Big Toes, Pencils, Paper plates, and Chocolate Eclairs.

6 Queens, 1 Goddess and a message board. One Code: Hell Raising
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Skate like the wind-shoot like Davy Crocket

-keightee!

It's getting better and better. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

awesomeness post more soon!!

Originally posted by FOL_lover:
awesomeness post more soon!!

Ditto! Just change the soon into a NOW!

LOL! I http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/heart.gif IT!

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Confidence isn't something that you're born with and it isn't something that comes down on you one day like the rain. You get it from yourself,gradually, willfully and it's the best gift that you can give yourself.
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In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today! -Jinny Exstead.

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl:
Ditto! Just change the soon into a NOW!

LOL! I http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/heart.gif IT!


ur right it should be now soooo...this is awesomeness post more NOW!!!!!!! i'm so glad u reminded me to put in the right word! lol

Ok, this is like not a lot, but i gotta go to bed soon....and i just realized something! This fanfic is going to be really, REALLY long! Anways here's more!

Jinny noticed how the nurse had kept looking at Mag, and how she obviously knew what was going on. So she slowly turned to Mag (who was now standing), walked over to her, and stared her in the face! Just like she did to the nurse.
“Mag! What the hell is the lady talkin’ bout!” Mag backed up a little…and almost fell on Shawn.
“Hey! Chill out!” Jinny froze and looked down at the 15 year old kid. Jinny was really freaked out now.
“Uh, Mag…please tell me that kid is Ben and I’m just going blind!” Mag shook her head, and put her hand, gently on Jinny’s shoulder.
“That’s not Ben… that’s Shawn!” Jinny just threw her hands up in the air, and shook her head. John, John Jr., Casey, Mag, Shawn, and even the nurse all looked at Jinny, wondering what she was going to do next. But, Jinny just sighed, and lowered her voice.
“Ok, some one tell me who the other little Ms. Exstead is, who Shawn is, and why I’m the only one who doesn’t seem to know!” John Jr. and Casey stepped forward, next to Jinny.
“Jin, you aint alone! We have no idea either!” John Jr. was just as aggravated as Jinny was! But Casey seemed to know that it would all unfold. Finally, the nurse walked over to Jinny, hoping she would find out who is who!
“Excuse me, again, but who is the mother and father of Ms. Exstead.” Now, Jinny started to get mad again!
“My mother killed herself when I was…” Jinny was interrupted by a mean look from her older brother, and her father’s hand on her shoulder.
“Not you, Jinny girl, Jessy. I am Jessy’s father…”

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ADD MORE SOOOOOOOOOONN HEHEHE this rocks and u no it!

oh my...I can't wait to read more! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

More! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif

Sorry i haven't posted for a day or so but I had writiers block!!!! But now i'm cured to here's more!

Jinny, John Jr., Casey, and even Mag almost fell to the floor. Shawn stood up, and walked over to John Sr. John Sr. just looked down at the teenager, wondering and hoping that he was friends with Jessy.
“You’re Jessy’s dad?” Shawn looked up at the older man, very surprised. “Aren’t you a little…” John Sr. nodded before Shawn could finish. He then walked over to the nurse, and looked down at her.
“Where is she?” The nurse looked up at John Sr., and then at everyone else with him. She paused for a second, and then looked back up at John Sr.
“Well, she’s in the other room. She has 3 broken ribs, and needs stitches in a few places. But I had a question about an odd triangle shaped scar on her right arm…” Casey looked at Jinny, who looked at John Jr., who looked at John Sr., who looked at Mag, who was already staring at Shawn.
“What?” He acted clueless, knowing that Jessy didn’t like people knowing about the iron incident. Mag, who was sitting in the chair, looked at him.
“The scar. What is the scar on Jessy’s arm from?” Shawn looked down at the ground, trying to avoid Mag’s evil stare…but it was no use. He sighed, and stood up.
“Well, around a year ago, Jessy was watching TV. Well, her parents are like MAJOR alcoholics, and had a lot to drink that night. Anyways, her father wanted to watch something, but Jessy wouldn’t give him the clicker… so he grabbed the iron out of her mother’s hand’s and put it right on her arm.” Everyone looked back and forth at each other in shock. And it wasn’t only that. It was just now hitting Jinny, John Jr., and Casey that this was their little sister they were talking about, and the fact that Alcoholics had done this.

After that it was silent for about 5 minutes, until finally the nurse broke it.
“Well, you two are obviously cops, are you planning on doing something about this?” The nurse was now looking at John Jr. and Casey. Casey had no idea what to say, but John Jr. did!
“Hell no! This kid aint my sister! And even if she is it aint my fault!” John Jr. turned around and walked out, no one wanting to stop him. Again, all was silent. Everyone wondered what everyone else was thinking. Jinny walked over to her father, who was now sitting. She opened her mouth to say something, but someone beat her to it.
“YO!” Jessy stood watching the strangers with her arms folded. Everyone turned to look at her, as Mag and Shawn smiled. “I’ve been waiting in that God Damn room forever! Can someone please stitch me up or do whatever the hell it is you have to do so I can leave! I just want to go home!” The nurse nodded and walked away, as everyone kept looking at Jessy, Shawn ran over to her with a big smile on his face.
“Jessy!” He went to go hug her, but her hand stopped him, She shook her head, and put her hand down.
“I’m still mad at you! I didn’t need to come here, I don’t have the money to pay for it, and who the hell are all these people looking at me!” Shawn stepped back, scared that she might slug him. But she wasn’t even thinking that. All she could think about was who all these people were. “Well? Is someone going to answer me?” John Sr. slowly walked over to the younger girl… to HIS youngest girl.
“I’m John Exstead…” John was scared of what Jessy’s reaction would be. He kept thinking ‘what if she doesn’t like me, or hates me? What if she thinks I’m too old?’ Little did he know Jessy was thinking the almost same thing! She wondered if he would think she was as worthless are her adoptive parents said she was. If he would beat her, and hit her like they did. If he would be exactly like they were. But the thing she really wanted to know was why her mother wasn’t there.
“Are you my father?” Jessy wasn’t exactly sure if this was her father! It could’ve been her uncle, cousin, grandfather, anything! John knew what she was thinking. He knew that she thought he was her grandfather, because he was old enough to be!
“Dad…” Jinny really wanted to see her father get out of this one. She didn’t think he wanted this… father hood all over again. She figured since he didn’t do anything for them while her, John Jr., and Casey were growing up, why would he want to do anything for her! Jessy turned to look at the women who just called HER father dad! She wondered if that was her sister… or even her mother. She was starting to get nervous, and wanted to run out the door!
“Yes, Jessy, I’m your father.” Jessy looked back at the older man. She didn’t know why, but that didn’t make her feel any better! She still felt empty, and lonely, and hated by everyone else there! Jinny and Casey looked at each other. They didn’t understand…
“Dad, you can’t be!” Jinny yelled! She wasn’t sure if it was out of anger, disappointment, or jealousy, but it felt good! “Mom died when I was 14! She would have to be at least 18 to be our sister… and she sure as hell don’t look 18!” Jessy really felt hated now, so she ran… right out the door! Shawn knew that he could run nowhere near as fast as she could, so he just watched her go!
“Jinny! Look what the hell you did! That is your sister, and you are a cop! You must have better judgment then that!” John Sr. was scared for his daughter. She was hurt badly, and in a new city… alone! He could understand why Jinny would be mad, and should’ve known that Jinny would do something like this. “Now you go find her and bring her back!” Jinny threw her hands in the air and shook her head.
“Or what, dad! You can’t take away my home, my job, or my boyfriend because 2 out of the 3 I don’t have at the moment!” Jinny was now letting all her anger out! Not just at her dad, or Jessy… but at Teddy and Captain, and everyone else who had pissed her off lately!
“Jinny, Jinny, come on! I’ll go with you!” John Sr. was so proud of his youngest son, even if he was gay. Casey was always looking out for him, Jinny, and even John Jr. But sometimes they all made it hard for him. Jinny just gave her father a mean look, and followed her brother out to look for Jessy!



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>>Ray<<

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

This is great! I NEED MORE NNNNOOOOOWWWW!!!!

This is getting so exciting!

OK, i know this isnt a lot....but my eyes are really itchy, and i cant like see anything so this is all i can write tonight!

It was stupid for Jessy to have come there. She was put up for adoption for a reason! And now she was alone in a strange city. She walked around until she came to the station again.
“Oh great!” She threw her hands in the air, like Jinny, and sighed! She was right back where she started. But then again…maybe that was a good thing. Shawn had brought a backpack with him, and one time when he was in the bathroom, Jessy went through it. She found all the money he brought, and took 100 of it! She figured that was just enough to get her a train ride home…or at least to somewhere. Now all she needed was the directions of how to get there, and that’s why being at the station was good. She walked up the stairs and went to open the door, when a young, tall, and handsome young man came out.
“Oh, sorry!” He apologized to the girl, after almost hitting her with the door. He looked her over, as she just stared at him. He noticed that she was beat pretty badly, and felt like he should do something. “Are you ok?” Jessy snapped out of her dream and nodded. The man just nodded with her, and pulled out his business card. “Well, if you ever need a good ADA, I’m you’re man!” He handed Jessy the card, and held out his hand. “Theodore, Theodore Blumenthal.” Jessy smiled and shook his hand.
“Jessy, Jessy Exstead!” Jessy smiled, and walked inside, before Teddy could say anything. So he figured it was just coincidence and decided to ignore it!

Jessy walked inside, back into the division where she had been before. She looked around, and noticed a desk with the name Jinny Exstead on it. At first, she didn’t think anything of it. But then it hit her…Oh my God! That was Jinny in the hospital saying all that stuff. The same Jinny that Mag mentioned earlier that day. CD and Angela were to busy to notice that she was there, but Cap wasn’t.
“Hey, can I help you?” Cap walked out of her office, and over to Jessy. Jessy looked up at the older women, nodded.
“Ya, can ya tell me where the train station is?”


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>>Ray<<

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

more!!!!! please!!!!!

Originally posted by FOL_lover:
more!!!!! please!!!!!

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ray how could u leave me hanging like that? now ill be waiting here all day for more ::u no why..lol::

PLEASE post more A.S.A.P!! The suspense is
killing me! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

I know its not a lot, but it's all i can do tonight! More tomorrow!

Jinny and Casey looked around at one of the parks in San Fran. After about a half hour, they sat on a bench to rest. Jinny had calmed down since the hospital, and started to think about the good things about Jessy.
“Well, bro, you’re not the youngest anymore!” Casey laughed, a little shocked that Jinny was joking about this now. He looked at his older sister and smiled. He really hoped that they found Jessy… and that she was like Jinny. But the one thing they couldn’t figure out was who her mother was. They new unless their mother somehow faked her death, it wasn’t her. Oh well! Finding Jessy was their number one priority at the moment, and that’s what they had to do.
“Well, I guess we better keep looking.” Casey smiled as he stood up and looked down at his sister. Jinny sighed, stood up, and started walking… her brother right behind.

Cap laughed a little at Jessy’s question.
“Where are you going?” Cap knew that if she wanted to go somewhere locale, she would use the trolleys.
“Home!” Jessy was smart and knew that telling the Cap of a police force that you’re on the other side of a country without a parent was pretty stupid. Cap just looked down at Jessy, knowing there was something wrong.
“Well, where exactly would home be?” Jessy shook her head. She was never going to get home at this rate.
“Listen, are you going to tell me or not?” Wow! The girl reminded Cap of someone so much, but she didn’t know who. Cap just shook her head.
“Not until you tell me where you’re going!” Jessy looked around while she bit her bottom lip out of aggravation.
“I guess that’s a no!” Jessy turned around, and started to head out when she bumped into Jinny. Jessy and Jinny both looked at each other, and then at the Cap real fast. But that once glace that Cap was able to see of them together almost gave her a heart attack.
“Jessy…” Jinny smiled, and unexpectedly hugged Jessy, Of course Jessy cringed in pain… and in shock. This was Jinny? The same one that had hated her an hour ago? The same one that claimed they couldn’t be sisters? Jessy was convinced Californian’s were crazy now!


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Ray

Rachel: (talking about a bag) Joey, it's unisex.
Joey: Maybe you need sex, but I had some last night!
Rachel: No, U-N-I sex
Joey: Well, who can say no to that!

You're a Peach! -Jinny Exstead

Originally posted by JinnyX:
“Listen, are you going to tell me or not?” Wow! The girl reminded Cap of someone so much, but she didn’t know who. Cap just shook her head.


Hmmmm...I can't imagine...lol Post more soon! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

hey ray come on line so i can bug u enough to post more!!! lol love it as always!

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please... http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Hey....i know this isn't a lot....but it's all i could do! hope u like it!

Cap watched the two, and realized now who the girl reminded her of.
“Exstead!” Casey, Jinny, and Jessy all looked up. The Cap now panicked. She slowly backed away into her office, shaking her head. Finally, she made it too her office and slammed the door. Jinny of course just thought it was because now there were 4 Exstead’s. But, little did she know it was for an entirely different reason. CD and Angela now realized what was going on, and ran over to them.
“Hey, what’s goin on?” CD asked. Jessy looked at the familiar strangers from earlier, and then back at Jinny. Jinny just shook her head at CD and Angela, and then looked at Jessy. CD and Angela looked at each other, and then decided to leave them alone. They slowly walked back over to their desks, trying not to pay attention to the Exstead’s.
“Jinny?” Jessy wanted Jinny to say it was her, even though she already knew. Casey and Jinny looked at each other, wondering how she knew who Jinny was.
“Uh, ya” Jinny smiled, and Jessy smiled back. She was so happy that it was her.


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><Ray><

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

this rocks!!! add more heheh i no u will!!

Dammit!!! Why don't you post already?!? haha...I'm kidding.I'm just getting a
little impatient here because it's so
good and I'm anticipating more.hehe. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

[This message has been edited by WAY2cool4u (edited 10-31-2001).]

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[This message has been edited by WAY2cool4u (edited 11-06-2001).]

Originally posted by WAY2cool4u:
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[This message has been edited by WAY2cool4u (edited 11-06-2001).]

dont worry ive been bugging ray enough so she will be adding soon...hhe

That's good. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Post,girl...POST! LOL. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

I'm SOOOOOO Sorry that I havent posted lately! But my life finally caught up with me! I really appreciate the complements, and so if anyone is still reading this i wrote a little more, hope you like it!

Kate ran in her office and straight for the phone.
“Exstead” Kate smiled at the sound of the familiar voice.
“John, it’s Kate. Is that girl…” Kate was too scared to ask, not wanting to hear what she already knew. But, John knew what she was talking about and sighed.
“Yes, that’s her. That’s Jessy!” Kate fell back into her chair, and almost fainted. What was she going to do? This couldn’t be happening!
“Well you better get your ass down here NOW!”

Shawn and Magna watched John as he hung up his cell phone. Shawn couldn’t help thinking about poor Jessy. She had been put through so much, and just came here to get a break! But, that obviously wasn’t what she was getting! John turned to the two younger people and smiled.
“They found her! Now lets go!” John, Mag, and Shawn all ran for the car. Shawn felt a little better, knowing that she was safe, but still felt guilty. After all, this was his idea!

LOL THIS ROCKS!! TOOK U LONG ENOUGH!!!!!! MAYBE POST BEFORE NEXT YEAR IF POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!LOL

Originally posted by BauerBabe2018
LOL THIS ROCKS!! TOOK U LONG ENOUGH!!!!!! MAYBE POST BEFORE NEXT YEAR IF POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!LOL


lol i guess it wasnt possible...come on ray.....add A-D-D

more!

DO yoe ever plan on posting more!?!
Come on already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D

ok ray*who wrote this* goes online sometimes and when i talk to her next ill make her add...she keeps saying she will be...but now ill make her!