Jinny Exstead woke up to a loud screaming noise in her ear, "Jinny girl get up!! you have to finish packing!" Jinny rolled over and turned to face her father who was yelling for to get to finish preparing for the long day that was ahead of her. Today she was going to the police acadamy hoping to follow in her father's footstep and her older brother, who was about to be a cop, footsteps and become a cop. Jinny reluctantly rolled over once more and dragged her self out of bed. She slowly moved her way to the bathroom and passed her younger brother Casey, who was 15 on the way and he had a warm greeting for her,"Hey Jin!! are you ready for the big day?" Jinny looked back at her brother and responded with not as much enthusiasm as him,"Thrilled."

After a nice hearty breakfast, the Exstead's packed up their car and headed on the road. Jinny was still groggy from her sleep but her father was trying to have one last bonding moments. She was a seventeen year old girl and to her sleep was more important but she tried to seem a little interested in what her father was saying just so they could part on a good note. After a LONG car ride the Exstead's finally pulled into the parking lot of the Acadamy. Jinny had woken up more and seem confident on the outside but in the inside she was flooded with nervousness. She thought to her self she was a 3rd degree blackbelt, that would help a lot right? Jinny followed her eager brother and father as she carried her duffle bag to the check in area. She met the commanding officer of the area and tried to be polite but she knew it was all a lie. She got a few last tips from her father before bidding goodbye as she walked to her dorm area. She put her duffle down on her bed and then some tapped her on came in and said, "Hi I am Magda and I'm C.D." Magda was a short Puerticran girl with her hair tied back in a ponytail and she was sleeping on the bunk below Jinny. C.D. was a tall girl who had blonde hair and they both looked like they were in great shape. C.D. had a single bed across the room. Jinny responded with a smile and said,"Hi, I am Jinny."


sorry not interesting...its just a start~

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Not interesting! That was like the opposite of not interesting! Keep it up!

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Rachel: (talking about a bag) Joey, it's unisex.
Joey: Maybe you need sex, but I had some last night!
Rachel: No, U-N-I sex
Joey: Well, who can say no to that!

You're a Peach! -Jinny Exstead

Ever Going to add more to this? It's definitely interesting, well written ,and I've enjoyed it so far. I just found it today..haha... Keep going!!!! :)

Oh, I remember reading this ages ago!! C'mon, Katie, finish this!!!! LOL

wow i didnt think anyone liked so i jus ended but i guess i could continue sometime this week, thanks miranda and susan for the replys!! (haha ray since urs was in oct. it doesnt matter jk...)

No problem. I just read it the other night, and was like damn she hasn't posted any after the first, and probably won't unless she gets more replies. So ta-da..I replied. Imagine that.. lol Keep going. It's good so far.

ill add some more tomorrow gotta think whats goin happen, i was going to post my other fic tonight, but my e- i me this guy *clears thoart* called so we watched a movie...soo umm i never got a chance...but i will tomorrow!(after i make my mom cookies:) )

first before i can continue, forget that jinny has introduced herself because i added a part into my story and its weird, and i cant get onto that name, sooo and Casey is 14 not 15:) well heres more, thanks for the replys!!


"Hey C.D. and Magda I'm J-" but Jinny was cut off short by her younger brother Casey who came into the run panting and said, "Hey Jin, this is from dad, it is what he says a "Survival Kit" "Jinny and Casey ebraced together and she said, "Bye Casey, I am going to miss you." Casey turned to C.D. and Magda and said,"Later ladies." Jinny turned so she was now facing C.D. and Magda and said, "Ya I am Jinny, and that was my younger brother Casey."
Over the next half and hour they all talked to one and other if they had been friends forever. When a geeky looking guy came to their door and said, "Ladies theres a meeting in the dining hall and sergent told me to tell the girls on floor B, which I am presuming is you and the other girls on this floor..." C.D. and Magda gave him "wtf looks" while Jinny spook up and said,"Thanks wiseass, you can go tell your daddy that we will be there at 6 o Clock sharp." The scrany, pale, male took out a pen and pad and pointed a finger at Jinny and said, "You, whats your name..?" Jinny responded with a little more then a hint of sarcasm in her voice and responded, "Jinny Exstead, thats E-X-S-T-E-A-D and dont forget to dot the "I" in Jinny" The Kid continued to stare at Jinny and said, "I am guessing you are Johns sister, o great jus what the police force needs another Exstead, you, I will be watching you..."Magda and C.D. exchanged looks thinking 'whoa she does not take any crap'.
At 6 o clock sharp as Jinny had promised she and Magda and C.D. entered the Dining Hall and the comanding officer was a stern looking figure said, "O Ms. Exstead I am so glad you were here promtly, we would not want you to miss anything." Jinny did not care what rank the man was and simply said, "Oh yea, what good is a party without me here." There were a few muffled laughs from the all rookies in camp and the officer was flaming with furry and said, "Exstead drop and give me 20!" he turned to face the crowd and said,"This is what happens when you are a wise ass." Jinny was not through and she said, "If you said so, this is not boot camp, but one handed or two handed....ahh im feeling good tonight so one handed." Jinny dropped down and did 20- one handed push ups in record timing, giving everyone a shock and the commanding officer said, "That is good, take your seat Ms. Exstead." The rest of the meeting was boring and while everyone was falling asleep Jinny was wide awake and pretended to be intrested. At the end of the meeting the officer on the top of his lungs yelled,"Everyone Dismissed, back to your quarters."
As Jinny left a rather hot guy slipped her a note which said, "S. Poker game tonight, 9, my room (4 Dorm C)" Jinny looked it over and said,"I be there...."

ok i add more later there will be serious issues addressed in this fic mostly because they are girls in the 80's and in the police academy...

YAYZZZZZ You added more!!!!!!!!!!! This is GREAT!! MORE NOW!!!!

Yay, you added more. That's cool. Interesting! I enjoyed it!! Add more soon. :- )

Hey, u posted more! :) now, can you post some more again???

MUST HAVE MORE FAN FIC !!!!!

Oh, this is great!! MORE PLEASE! :)

coool people replyed ill try and add tomorrow but i jus got home and im too umm "out of it" to add!! soo cya tomorrow

Well, I hope you're "into it" today, cuz if you aren't, I'm gonna hunt you down & shove some anti-depressents down your throat!!! Well, probably not literally, but I'll be thinking about it, cuz this story is too good to be left alone for this long!!!

Originally posted by BlairW_1
Well, I hope you're "into it" today, cuz if you aren't, I'm gonna hunt you down & shove some anti-depressents down your throat!!! Well, probably not literally, but I'll be thinking about it, cuz this story is too good to be left alone for this long!!!


VIOLENCE!!! That might just work!!

Yup, that's what I figgered!

im not sure what to write but heres a little more


Magda and C.D. exchanged looks with Jinny, like, 'what was that note all about' and Jinny said, "I'll tell you later". Back at their dorn room, Jinny climbed on to her bunk but C.D. and Magda are like, "Ok we are now in our room, tell us what the note said." Jinny let a laugh and said, "Strip poker, room 4, dorm C, nine o clock". C.D. and Magda looked a little uneasy and said,"Sorry Jinny I think you can count me out, come on its our first night, what happens if we get caught?" Jinny smiled evily, "Well we jus wont get caught, now will we...now are you guys in?" Magda and C.D. both shook their heads and said, "your on your own..."

At 9:00 Jinny peaked her head out the door to see if anyone was coming, and when the coast was clear she ducked out her room and snuck her way down to room 4 in dorm C. When she arrived there was about five other guys there and she was the only girl. The guy who invited her, introduced himself as Matt and said, "hey Jinny, I am really glad you could make it..."

After about an hour or so the guys where down to their boxers and Jinny even as skilled as she was at poker was down to hers and her bra...and jus as the Jinny was going to add more chips, the door burst open and there was the red-faced commanding officer and said, "MEN.....EXSTEAD WHAT THE @#1% IS GOIN ON HERE, get changed and Get to my office at once!!!"

:) hehee, I can see that happening, yup! more!!! :) plz?

WHY!?!? Why are you trying to kill me?!

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OMG! This is great! MORE! :)

this is soooo good!! post more asap!! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeez!

:'( No more?

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (PLEASE!)

well i will add more now cuz tonight heh when i come home i dont know wht i will say when i add, cuz my best guess is i wont be exactly sober so i figure hey why not now? lol righhht im addin...


**Once in the Officers office**

Everyone was standing up straight with there arms at their sides except Jinny who kept her composure and had her arms crossed with a smug look on her face. The officer continued to shout at them and said, "Never in my day has something so disgraciful happened, but then again we have never had a larger amount of girls...all of you should be in a lot more trouble but since it is your first night and i am feeling generous i am going to give you 2 weeks kitchen duty, are we all clear men and Ms. Exstead...?" Jinny just gazed into his eyes and said, "Crystel"


**Back to the Dorm Room**

Magda and C.D. were playing cards on C.D.'s bed and Magda said,"Ten bucks says Jinny got caught..." C.D. looked at her said, "Your on". About 15 minuets later Jinny came back into in the room and Magda finally popped the question, "You got caught didnt you?" Jinny looked up and was like, "Huh...o right ..yep..we have 2 weeks kitchen duty...this is goin suck.." C.D. took out her wallet and handed a 10$ bill to Magda and Magda let out a little "ha" and Jinny broke the silence and said, "You bet on me?" C.D. responded and said, "You didnt actually think you were going to get away with it, did you?" Magda went back on to her bunk and curiously eyed Jinny and said, "Well...what exactly is in the "survival kit" Jinny did not know how to respond to the question because what if Magda and C.D. told someone that she had alcohal on campus...so Jinny lied or wasnt completely honest and said, "Stuff..." Magda and C.D. exchanged nervous glances and Jinny says, "Dont worry I know what I am doing.."

*5 AM Alarm Sounds*

Jinny rubs her eyes and is still very asleep gets out of her bunk and changes into her uniform and headed down to the kitchen very she would serve her first day of punishment. Jinny was first to arrive and met her commanding officers eyes and he said, "For such a trouble maker, you are very punctual" Jinny let out a small laugh and thought, 'it is way to early for this' After breakfast was over with Jinny made her way down to the Gym with Magda and C.D. When they went there, they were joined by all of the other rookies. The officer in charge was Mr. Smith and he was old fashioned and thought the best place for a woman was in the kitchen, and not in the police force.

Once everyone had arrived he made a short introduction and speech saying, "Phsyical strengh is very important and I can tell by looking at you most of you young men most likely will excel in this area compared to young ladies in this class. We will first one by one climb this rope to the top and record our time and if we go as planned by the end of the term you will be able to knock half of your time. " Mr. Smith looked around for a minuet and said, "Johnson go first" Matt Johnson was the cutie that Jinny eyed and one of the guys who had invited her last night. He was a buff 17 year old guy with sandy blonde hair. He climbed up the rope and came down and Mr. Smith looked at his stop watch and said, "Amazing, your first time and it is already better then some peoples final time...who wants to go next and try to even come close to his time....?" Jinny gulped and stepped forward and said,"I will..." Mr. Smith had a smug look on his face and said,"Alright Ms. Exstead....give it a go, try not to break a nail.." To Mr. Smith's eyes Jinny was just a small 17 year old girl with the strength of 4 year old, but Jinny blew him away when she went up and down the rope in record timing... Mr. Smith had a head caught in the deerlights look and said,"Must be a problem with the stop watch, you are a girl, you can not do something that well...anyone have another stop watch?" A boy named Christopher rose and gave him a stop watch and Mr. Smith said, "All right, Ms. Exstead, shall we go again...?"
"If you say so..." and with that Jinny hoped on to the rope and made it up and down faster then before...and Mr. Smith grunted when he saw that Jinny had made the new record and said,"Must be beginners luck...sit down..."

Originally posted by hockeybabe528
Matt Johnson was the cutie that Jinny eyed and one of the guys who had invited her last night. He was a buff 17 year old guy with sandy blonde hair.

Well "something" had better happen betwen him and Jinny! MORE PLEASEHUN!

POST MORE POST MORE POST MORE POST MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIDS IS REALLY GOO

WELL....since its been a couple months and still have no idea where i am going with this, ill add heh


After what seemed to be a couple hours in hell the commanding officer blew his whistle which ment that the period was over with. Magda, Jinny, and C.D. all blew a sigh of reliefe and headed out to the shooting range where they would begin learning and handling of a gun..they hoped that this period would be a lot better then what they went through in the last period. As they were leaving Matt walked next to Jinny and said, "hey Jinny, your strong, I like that in a woman..." and Jinny looked at his huge body, and replied, "You got great abs...i like that in a man.." and gave him a sexy smile. Matt seemed to be hooked on Jinny because he could not help but smile and look at her and the same for Jinny towards Matt. He finally pooped the question, "Jinny mind accompanying me to the shooting range.." Jinny simply said, "It would be my pleasure..." and they were off. Magda and C.D. looked at each other and just sighed and walked silently to the shooting range.

When C.D. and Magda got to the shooting range C.D.'s eyes drifted towards the officer who was head of the program. He was tall, and tan with gorgeous brown hair, where nothing but old jeans and a wifebeater(exposing his very very large abs) He saw C.D. and winked at her and she just about died and went to heaven. It had been a long time since she had last had these types of emotions since her last boyfriend and the "incident" Magda did not notice anything because she was looking for Jinny and snapped C.D. out of her trance and asked if she had seen Jinny since she and Matt had left, but C.D. shook her head. Officer O'Learly took the roll call he begin introducing them to every part of the gun...

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She and Matt where entangled in each other in a small closet when they realized that their shooting period had begun and quickly rushed to get to the range. Once they had gotten there The officer said, "O Jinny and Matt, so good of you to join us..."It was obvisous what they had been doing and so most of the guys snickered while some of the girls who were jealous of Jinny getting with Matt murmered "bitch" and C.D. and Magda would had not know Jinny very long laughed at the fact she had no care for boundaries...

At the end of the period as C.D. was leaving Officer O'Learly pulled her aside...

Oooo, YAY!!!! MORE, FINALLY!!! Dat was great, just post more...like now or in the near future...not like 2 months from now...LOL j/k ;)

KEIGHTEE! MORE NOW DAMNIT!

It is about time!!! I was beginning to wonder (okay I was more than BEGINNING to wonder) if you had just forgotten us or something. I like this. More please.

Originally posted by hockeybabe528
He finally pooped the question

OMG...I m sry but that hasta be the funniest typo! :rotflmao: I m just suprised Caitlin hadn't seen it first! NEwayzie...dis rox...Post more soon!

Originally posted by #1JoFan


OMG...I m sry but that hasta be the funniest typo! :rotflmao: I m just suprised Caitlin hadn't seen it first! NEwayzie...dis rox...Post more soon!

HAHA! Good that funny. I need some humor now. LOL! I'm surprised that i didn't see it either!

okies heres more--blah blah i dont like this fic...but then again i think that it is not far to abandon fics either soo i am adding..


As C.D. turned around she did a hair-flip unknowingly and flashed her pearly white smile as she sweetly answered, "What?" It took a moment for Officer O'Learly to resonde because he was memorized by her beautiful, yet he regained his composure and calmly said, "I noticed how into the class you were, I really like dedicated students such as your self and anytime you want to come down and practice shooting, I am willing to give you pointers and help you with your form.." He then put his arm on her shoulder and she nervously brushed it off. Officer O'Learly looked up and responded to her reaction, "Sorry about that...it slipped..." and C.D. was screaming at her self inside for forcing him to take his hand off. She wanted to be ready to move on but she was not ready. She sighed and replied, "Its alright, if I have any questions or want help I will come to you."

C.D. left the room to have Magda waiting at the door for her giving her a look like 'what happened...and I want details...' Jinny was also waiting but at the moment she preoccupied with a lip locking session with Matt. C.D. and Magda laughed as Magda torn Jinny away from her lover. Jinny looked at Magda and said, "Matt was going to escort me down to the dinning hall..." C.D. and Magda looked at her and said, "Ok we will save you a seat a lunch.."

After lunch Jinny and Matt where washing dishes with a lot of soap and one thing lead to another and they where involved in a full fledge bubble/water fight. All of Jinny and Matt were covered in bubbles while the floor was becoming relitivly soaked. Jinny ran a little and slipped back falling and as she went down her head hit the corner of the table. Matt had no clue what to do there was Jinny laying on the floor motionless with a deep cut in her head with blood gushing out...Matt started screaming and within moments Officer O'Learly came rushing in and asked, "WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED??!?!?!?"

OH MY LORDY JEEPEERS!!! MUST FIND OUT WAHT HAPPENS NEXT!!!

hehe, in other words...

POST MORE! LOL :p

Originally posted by sue z q
OH MY LORDY JEEPEERS!!! MUST FIND OUT WAHT HAPPENS NEXT!!!

hehe, in other words...

POST MORE! LOL :p

DITTO! That sums it up for me! MORE PLEASE!

MORE!!

hiyah since i am on vaca i will be adding soon to this fic! prob not today unless late tonight since i am going to the red sox-yankees game and then out to my friends so i will try and add later

Hurry up and POST MORE!!

Originally posted by TeddyisMINE!!!!
Hurry up and POST MORE!!


welll...you might have to wait till tomorrow cuz im like drunk but i didnt have anything to drink...i had lots and lots of pepsi...yah at least i think pepsi...an no when i was drooped off at my housee i didnt triop ofver a rock lol

Wow... i just started reading this and it's great!!! Post more!

Originally posted by hockeybabe528



welll...you might have to wait till tomorrow cuz im like drunk but i didnt have anything to drink...i had lots and lots of pepsi...yah at least i think pepsi...an no when i was drooped off at my housee i didnt triop ofver a rock lol

LOL well go get some black coffe & sober up!;)

lol ok hey whats up...i have no idea wht is going on with this fic...but i will add more because as i have said before i dont like abandoned fan fics, yah so here we go

Matt was too dumbstruck and didnt know how to reply to the comanding officers questions. Officer O'Learly screamed, "Well, dont just stand there call for an ambulence!!" Matt ran quickly to the phone slipping a little on the bubble suds. Once the ambulence arrived there had become quite a crowd around the ambulence and Officer O'Learly said to Matt, "I am going to ride with her to the hospital, I will be in contact with you later, I expect a good explantion of what happened." Matt looked up and said, "Yes Sir"


Later that night Jinny slowly and groogly opened her eyes and saw nothing but black for a minuet or two. Then she blinked a couple of times and opened her eyes to look at her surroundings. She thought that she saw her brother Casey and said, "Casey?" He said, "Yah, Jin i am here for you," Jinny not remembering any of the days events questioned Casey about what had happened. Just then there was a knock at the door and Matt stepped into the room. Casey got the picture and said, "I guess I will tell dad and John Jr. the good news, I will see you in a little bit." Jinny smiled and mouthed a thanks to her younger brother.
She looked at Matt and it had been obvious that he had been crying and he spoke up and said,"Jinny I am so sorry, are you alright, do you need anything?"


Ok well i know it is a weird place to leave off but I am going mini golfing....heh who said i didnt have a life....lol righhhhhhht

post more soon!!!