View Full Version : My First Fan Fic (I can't think of a name for it...)


AllIWantIsYourClutch
08-07-2001, 04:45 PM
OK This is my VERY first fan fic so it's really bad, but oh well...

After Jinny gets home from her intervention:

Jinny walks into her apartment and takes a good look around. She notices that all of her bottles are completely gone “Oh great,” she says to herself, “That’s wonderful! They took it all!” She walks into her bedroom, lifts up the mattress, and takes out the small bottle of vodka. She smiles and adds, “Well, not all of it!” As she unscrews the cap, the phone rings. She sighs, “Perfect timing.” Jinny ignores the phone and drinks a large sip of the vodka, and then she puts it back under the mattress. She grabs her coat and heads for Anchorside, while the phone continues to ring.

At Anchorside….

As Jinny enters Anchorside, she notices CD standing by the bar. “Oh great….” she mumbles, and heads for the door. CD stops her, “Jinny, we need to talk!” Jinny says, “Oh, CD, I think we’ve done enough talking for one night, don’t you?” CD replies, “Ok Jinny, that’s fine. Just tell me one thing. What are you doing here? You told all of us that you were going to try to stop, and here you are, walking into a bar! Not even an hour later…” Jinny smiles and shakes her head. “God, nobody trusts me anymore, do they? I came here to have some dinner. I haven’t eaten all night, and I’m hungry! Is that OK with you? Do you want to sit here and watch me eat?” “Jin, I’m sorry. I-I- don’t know what to say…” “How about goodbye?” Jinny snaps.

More later....Sorry that sucked...

Swimfan85
08-07-2001, 05:20 PM
Omg!!!! dont say that, it did not suck!!! it was awesome in fact!

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
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"I'm jaded and judgemental. I can't imagine why."
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Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

Jinny_Extead
08-07-2001, 05:44 PM
Keep going!!

BlairandJo
08-07-2001, 06:26 PM
One:It did not "suck"
Two:I love it!!!!!
Three:Post more soon;o)

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Its my life!This is
who I am!And you tell me
it does'nt matter!
-Jinny
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If you want something bad
enough you go after it no
matter what the outcome may be
-My Quote
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"Love beliver
So take the love He's giving to you
A love receiver
Cause everything He's
Promised is true
Love beliver
Listen to the song that I
sing
You are the child of the
King"
-Love Beliver.
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"Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl
(why be a good girl?)she
is a see-saw seeing if it
matters she is a game of
Chutes and Laders.
be a good girl (why be a good girl?)
she needs the one who wrote the definition of
a love without condition
be a good girl."
-Good Girl.

BlairW_1
08-07-2001, 08:54 PM
Great fic so far!!! Ya know, I've been wondering... Why is it that all y'all's first fics are so good, when mine sucked? I just don't get it! :X Write more soon, plz!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif buh-byezies now!

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My mouth runs like the Energizer battery: It keeps going and going and going and going...

Visit my site, <A HREF="http://www.danielles-teen-scene.cityslide.com!

Finished" TARGET=_blank>www.danielles-teen-scene.cityslide.com!

Finished</A> fanfics: "The Perfect Stranger in Peekskill", "Wounded Pride", and "Blair Gets Hooked".

Fanfics in production:
"Blair's Secret", "Love Conquers All: Jinny's Story", "Second Chance on Love", and "Is That Your Final Answer?".

&lt;3 you, Jacob! :)

~*Danielle, off topic queen, with my side-kick, Susan, and trainee, Teddys_Angel_Jinny!*~

BlairW_1
08-07-2001, 08:56 PM
BTW, excuse your lil self for saying it sucked, uh, me thinks not? http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif okay, I'm really gonna leave now. buh-byezies. But if I come back again, don't blame me! (That's why I'm the off topic queen, lol!)

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My mouth runs like the Energizer battery: It keeps going and going and going and going...

Visit my site, <A HREF="http://www.danielles-teen-scene.cityslide.com!

Finished" TARGET=_blank>www.danielles-teen-scene.cityslide.com!

Finished</A> fanfics: "The Perfect Stranger in Peekskill", "Wounded Pride", and "Blair Gets Hooked".

Fanfics in production:
"Blair's Secret", "Love Conquers All: Jinny's Story", "Second Chance on Love", and "Is That Your Final Answer?".

&lt;3 you, Jacob! :)

~*Danielle, off topic queen, with my side-kick, Susan, and trainee, Teddys_Angel_Jinny!*~

NewsiesGurl229
08-07-2001, 08:57 PM
Originally posted by BlairW_1:
Great fic so far!!! Ya know, I've been wondering... Why is it that all y'all's first fics are so good, when mine sucked? I just don't get it! :X Write more soon, plz!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif buh-byezies now!

Ditto, mine ALL suck, yours don't BlairW_1 but all of mine do!

AllIWantIsYourClutch
08-07-2001, 09:14 PM
Hehehehehe thanks people!


CD walks out the door as Jinny watches. When Jinny was sure that CD had left, she walked to the bar. She laid her head down on the bar and sighed. Sean, the bartender, came over to her, “Rough day?” he asked. “Oh God, you don’t want to know,” and as much as her conscious told her not to, she added, “Just give me something strong; 3 of ’em.” Sean set 3 small shot glasses in front of her. “5 bucks,” he said. Jinny pulled out a ten and said, “Keep the change.” She drank the first 2 in quick gulps, but took her time with the third one. Sean came back over. “Wow! That was fast, Jin.” Jinny replied unsteadily, “Sean…? Ya know that ten I gave you before?” “Yeah….” “Well give me 3 more of whatever those were.” “Are you sure, Jin?” She nodded

I'll post more later!

BlairandJo
08-07-2001, 09:21 PM
OOOOOOOO I LOVE.This is great!!!!!!!;o)

Jinny_Extead
08-07-2001, 10:41 PM
This is great!! Keep Going!

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Esperanza :)

AllIWantIsYourClutch
08-07-2001, 11:36 PM
Ok here's more:

A half an hour later, Jinny stumbled off of her bar stool and out of Anchorside. She got in her car, put the key in the ignition, and began to drive home.

After driving for about an hour, she realized that she was lost. Jinny now found her self driving on a nearly empty highway, with trees lining the road. She found herself feeling woozy. Like she was gonna pass out. She tried to fight it as much as she could, but she lost control of her car. She passed out as her car swerved into a tree.

Sorry it wuz short butim workin on it




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"Look buddy, I have PMS and I got a gun...any questions??"~ Jinny Exstead

"Oh please, folk, don't be shy! Apparantly anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right up!"~ Jinny Exstead

NewsiesGurl229
08-08-2001, 12:20 AM
HOW DARE YOU STOP!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE A CRIMINAL, IT'S AGAINST THE LAW TO STOP ON THIS FAN FIC!!!!!! Okay, well at least it SHOULD be!

disturbed child
08-08-2001, 01:00 AM
I love this! It's so gr8. Can't wait for more!

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~* glitterbabie *~

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Carter: So... what do you, er, think about tonight?

Abby: I think it’s the least I could do... no-one should be alone after killing a clown.

Dave: You killed the clown?

Carter: No.

Abby: Didn’t save him.

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Carter: You know what? Stop it.

Abby: What?

Carter: Don’t talk to me about Luka. I’m not your girlfriend and I shouldn’t really even be here with you.

Abby: Why not?

Carter: (Pausing) Because I don’t want to wish bad things for you and Luka. And I don’t want to sit on the sidelines waiting for you two to break-up. (Pauses) And I don’t want to be your friend. (Smiles gently) It might be convenient for you but it isn’t doing much for me.

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Britt is a Jineddy and Dana is a JinMag. I'm a Carby and a Jinanybody!

*Me, Britt, and Dana are self appointed message board bad girls...we rebel against self appointed moderators...You know who you are!*

AllIWantIsYourClutch
08-08-2001, 07:21 PM
LoL thanks people! Heres more:

As Jinny opened her eyes, she found herself in a hospital room. Magda was sitting in a chair next to her bed. “W-w-what happened, Mag?” Jinny asked. Magda quickly rose from her chair. “Jin, you were in an accident,” Magda replied, “You were drunk. A truck driver found your car smashed into a tree with you inside. I came over as soon as I heard.” Jinny groaned and sat up in her bed, “You mean, you left Ben and came to see me? God, it must be like midnight.” “It’s 4 am, Jin,” Magda said, “You passed out because you were drunk and because of the accident.” Jinny choked back tears. “Does anyone else know?” she asked. Magda replied, “We tried to get ahold of your dad and Casey, but there was no answer.” Just then, the doctor came in. “Ah…Jinny…I see your awake. You must be in a lot of pain!” Jinny nodded. The doctor continued, “Well…I’m afraid I have some news for you.”




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"Look buddy, I have PMS and I got a gun...any questions??"~ Jinny Exstead

"Oh please, folk, don't be shy! Apparantly anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right up!"~ Jinny Exstead

Swimfan85
08-08-2001, 08:30 PM
"look buddy i got pms and a gun any questions?" so add more wait no i dont have a gun nor do i have pms so that doesnt work hmmm JUST ADD MORE THIS IS AWESOME!!(That works though)

NewsiesGurl229
08-08-2001, 09:04 PM
Originally posted by hockeybabe528:
"look buddy i got pms and a gun any questions?" so add more wait no i dont have a gun nor do i have pms so that doesnt work hmmm JUST ADD MORE THIS IS AWESOME!!(That works though)I don't have a gun, but I do have PMS, so you BEST BE ADDIN MORE SOON!!!

AllIWantIsYourClutch
08-08-2001, 11:40 PM
Ok,Ok,Ok sheesh! CALM DOWN!! Heres more!

Jinny stared at the doctor. “What kind of news?” she asked, “Good or bad?” A small smile formed on the doctor’s face. She chuckled softly. “Both. Which do you want first?” At the same time Jinny answered, “Bad,” while Magda answered, “Good.” The doctor chuckled again. “Well, you have 3 broken ribs, a concussion, a sprained wrist and ankle, whiplash, and because you were wearing your seat belt, you had some minor abdominal injuries. You will have to stay in the hospital for a few days to let your ribs heal.” Jinny, who can never resist a sarcastic remark, replied, “I’m praying that that was the bad news.”
The doctor, once again, chuckled and said, “Yes, that was the bad news. The good news is that there was no permanent damage. Your seat belt saved your life!” CD and Angela walked in. The doctor then said, “Well, I’ll leave you alone now. If you need anything, just press the red button on the side of your bed.” Jinny smiled. “Thank you.”




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"Look buddy, I have PMS and I got a gun...any questions??"~ Jinny Exstead

"Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparantly anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead

FOL_lover
08-08-2001, 11:51 PM
this is very good and i am very bored so i demand u post more immediatly. cuz ur fanfic is awesome!!!

AllIWantIsYourClutch
08-09-2001, 12:08 AM
hehehehe thanks! Ok heres more....

CD and Angela pulled two chairs over next to Magda’s. “Hey Jin,” CD said, “How are ya feeling?” Jinny groaned. “Uhh…My ribs hurt, considering 3 of ‘em are broken, and my head hurts, considering I have a concussion…” “God, Jinny! Why did you try to drive home knowing you were drunk?” Angela shot at her. Jinny replied, “Angela, look, I have had a rough night. First, I got suspended for 3 months. Then, I had all of you make me stand up in front of you while you tell me how much you ‘looooove’ me. Then, I got in a car accident and ended up here. Now, its 5 in the morning, and I’m guessing you didn’t come all this way, so early just to sit here and insult me, and if you did, I would appreciate it of you would leave.” Angela looked embarrassed, “Um…Jinny…I’m sorry. I didn’t mean anything by it. But, uh…maybe it would be better if I left.” Jinny replied, “Yeah, I think it would.”




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"Look buddy, I have PMS and I got a gun...any questions??"~ Jinny Exstead

"Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparantly anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead

NewsiesGurl229
08-09-2001, 12:20 AM
Please post more!!! now!!!! i want more fan fic!!!!!!!! nnnnnnnnoooooooooowwwwww!!!!!

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Lu: Patients don't speak Spanglish either. (From Strong Medicine)
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CD: Any second thoughts yet?
Angela: Not yet.
CD: Good, because I need all of you back, the 'kick a** take no prisoners' version. If there's anything less we need to talk. (From The Division)
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Jinny: He's a horse's a**, but he's got a point. (From The Division)
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I am considered a Billy Gilman, Jessica Andrews, The Division, Strong Medicine, and Reba McEntire Freak. In other words I only talk about those 5 things. BE PREPARED!!!

~~~Kate Hug-a-Tree~~~

(The Kate part is real, hug a tree's just my nick name at school and everywhere!)

PS If your teacher ever tells you to Hug-A-Tree, don't...that's how you get the nick name hug-a-tree!

AllIWantIsYourClutch
08-09-2001, 12:29 AM
I wrote more... I have nothing better to do... I have lots more written, but I'm gonna keep u in suspense!


“I feel bad now…” Jinny said, “She shouldn’t have left….Anyway…I don’t wanna talk about what happened. I just want to forget about it.” “Jin, maybe we should leave so you can get some sleep,” CD suggested. “Yeah, we’ll call you later. Want us to tell Cap?” Magda asked. Jinny sighs. “Yeah, she’ll have to find out sooner or later. Tell her not to come see me though! She’s one of the last people I want to see right now! &lt;pause&gt; &lt;sigh&gt; Yeah…I’ll talk to you guys later, and thanks for coming by.” After CD and Magda left, Jinny immediately drifted into a long, dreamless sleep.




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"Look buddy, I have PMS and I got a gun...any questions??"~ Jinny Exstead

"Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparantly anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead

AllIWantIsYourClutch
08-09-2001, 12:48 AM
OK this is my last one for the night. Sorry they arent very long, but I'm tired!!!

Jinny woke up at around noon the next day when the phone rang. She answered it with a low, “Uhhhh?” On the other end she heard, “Jin? Hey, it’s me, Captain. How ya doing?” Jinny groaned, “Oh great…. You woke me up ya know. I’m guessing you heard from Mag?” “Yes I did,” Cap said, “And I’m sorry I woke you up, but Jinny, you understand now why I suspended you, right?” Jinny hung up on her. The phone rang again. Jinny let it ring. Her “roommate”, an 90 year old lady, yelled from behind the curtain, “Will you answer the phone already?!?!?!” “NO!” Jinny shot back. She heard a mumble from the other side of the curtain, “Hmph! Kids these days…”



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"Look buddy, I have PMS and I got a gun...any questions??"~ Jinny Exstead

"Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparantly anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead

NewsiesGurl229
08-09-2001, 03:46 AM
how dare you stop! HOW DARE YOU STOP!!!! CONTINUE FOR THE DOGGIES I SAY, CONTINUE FOR THE DOGGIES!!!!!!!

Oh god, I'm losing it, this is sooooo not good...DANA I"M BLAMING MY INSANITY (SP) ON YOU!!!!!!!!! I READ 1 TOO MANY OF YOUR FAN FICS!

Swimfan85
08-09-2001, 12:18 PM
this is awesome!!!!! please continue!

AllIWantIsYourClutch
08-09-2001, 03:38 PM
LoL OK heres more for the doggies...

When Jinny woke up from her nap that she took after the incident w/ the phone, her dad and Casey were sitting next to her bed. Hey Jinny Girl…” her dad said. “Mmmm…hey dad, hey Casey,” Jinny replied. “Jin, are you ok? The doctor told us everything.” Jinny said , “Yeah, well I really don’t want to talk about it right now.” The three of them sat in silence for a while, until John stood up and said, “You guys want something to drink? I’m gonna go get a Coke.” Jinny and Casey both shook their heads. When John left the room, Jinny held Casey’s hand and began to cry. Casey felt tears coming to his eyes also. Jinny began to speak, “Casey, I want to apologize to you. I haven’t been a very good sister and-” Casey interrupted her. “Jin, don’t talk like that! You’re the only one who understands me! You listen to me! No one else does! Not even Dad!!” John was back from the vending machines and peeked in the door. When he saw Jinny and Casey holding hands and crying, he turned and walked the other way.
Its not too long, but i cant think!!




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"Look buddy, I have PMS and I got a gun...any questions??"~ Jinny Exstead

"Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparantly anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead

NewsiesGurl229
08-09-2001, 04:13 PM
Thank you, the doggies are happy now!!!

WOOF WOOF WOOF!!!!!

The doggies thank you!

Yeah, now I WANT MORE, SO DO THE DOGGIES!!!

Jinny_Extead
08-09-2001, 05:39 PM
I love it!!!

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Esperanza :)

AllIWantIsYourClutch
08-16-2001, 04:14 PM
If anyone is still reading....I wrote more. Its really hard to think!

Casey saw his dad looking in through the door. He stood up, wiped his eyes and said, “Uh, Jinny, I’m gonna go, but I’ll see you later, OK?” Jinny smiled and nodded. “I love you Casey.” Casey smiled and said, “Right back at ya.” Jinny sighed and laid down. She picked up the phone and began to dial Magda’s work number. Magda answered the phone, “Ramirez (sp?)?” “Hey Mag. It’s me,” Jinny said. “Hey Jin. How ya feeling?” “A little better, but I’m still really sore. It hurts everywhere.” “Why don’t you buzz the nurse and ask for some medicine for the pain?” Magda suggested. Jinny groaned, “Yes, Mommy!” Magda sighed and replied, “Oh, Jinny, Jinny, Jinny….” Just then , the doctor walked in. “Oh…uh…Mag, I gotta go. Doc’s here!” Jinny hung up the phone. The doctor smiled and said, “Jinny, last night your friend Megda-” Jinny cut her off . “Magda.” “Yeah, Whatever,” The doctor said, “Anyway, she told me about your intervention last night. She said that you have an alcohol problem and that you need help with it.” Jinny was getting angrier and angrier. “Look Doc! The only problem I have right now, is YOU! I don’t need you to tell me what to do!” The doctor sighed, “Jinny…The hospital has an alcohol program that some people find very helpful. I hope you decide to join it. It is, of course, your choice. Whatever you want.” “I want you to leave! That’s what I want!” Jinny yelled.



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"Look buddy, I have PMS and I got a gun...any questions??"~ Jinny Exstead

"Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparantly anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead

nancysbiggestfan
08-16-2001, 04:31 PM
MORE MORE MORE! Oh yea, did i happen to say MORE. Hehe. Cuz its really good!

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²Tiffany²

LYLAS or LYLAB
Peace Out!

Teddy: Hey, I'm making you an offer you can't refuse.

Jinny: Look, you know who I am, OK? You know who my family is. Why the hell do you even wanna be with me at all?
Teddy: Because, I love you.
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Jinny: Basically, people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing.
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IM me using AOL: NancysBiggestFan

Divisionbabe05
08-16-2001, 04:32 PM
Awesome!!!!!!

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I am a Jineddy! A Jineddy is a person who wants Jinny and Teddy to be together! Morganne is a Jinanybody and a Carby, but thats ER...Dana just happens to be a JinMag, which is a lil strange, but o well...its interesting!

*People* Isnt that the craziest word u ever done heard? *LOL*

*Me, Morganne, and Dana are self appointed message board bad girls...we rebel against self appointed moderators...You know who you are!*

Swimfan85
08-16-2001, 09:06 PM
i want more, thats all i want!!!!!! hah awesome http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

AllIWantIsYourClutch
08-18-2001, 11:45 PM
AHH!! I can't think of anything else! If you have any ideas, e-mail me at CookieCupcake24@aol.com

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"Look buddy, I have PMS and I got a gun...any questions??"~ Jinny Exstead

"Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparantly anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead