View Full Version : 3rd Night, 2nd Surprise, 1st True Love


WildChildJinny
07-13-2001, 11:37 PM
Hey All! Here's my new fan-fic so please r&r

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*One Day @ The Division:*

(Captain Kate McCafferty is sitting down at her desk looking over cases when there's a knock on the door)

Kate: *looks up* Come in.

(Teddy Blumenthal walks in and then closes the door behind him)

Teddy: Hey Kate, Can I talk to you about Jinny?
Kate: *puts down the cases* Sure, talk away.

*Scene switches to outside Kate's office.*

(Magda Ramireze walks over to her best friend, Jinn Exsteads's, desk)

Magma: Hey, why is Teddy here?
Jinny: *looks in Kate's office @ Teddy. * I don't know.

*Back inside Kate's office*

Teddy: Well, do you think you can let Jinny take a week off from work.
Kate: When?
Teddy: Next week.
Kate: Why?
Teddy: Well, I wasn't planning on telling anyone this but....

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*10 minuets later*

(Teddy walks out of Kate's office and shakes her hand. Jinny looks up from her desk)

Teddy: Thanks again, I really appreciate it.
Kate: No problem. I understand.

(Kate goes back into her office and shuts the door behind her. Teddy walks past Jinni's desk on his way out but Jinn tugs on his arm so he stops.)

Jinny: What was that about? Why'd you have to talk to Cap?
Teddy: Well..... It's a surprise.
Jinny: You gonna tell me?
Teddy: Nope. So, you gonna be around tonight..say around..9?
Jinny: Ya, you gonna come by?
Teddy: Yup. See you later. * He kisses Jinny quickly and then leaves.*
Jinny: Hey you gonna tell me the surprise? *she shouts after him, but he's already gone.*

Magda: *walks over to Jinny's desk* So..... *hoping to get some details out of JInny*
Jinny: So nothing! He has a secret but he won't tell me!
Magma: *smiles* How you gonna get it out of him?
Jinn: *smirks* I have my ways. He's coming over tonight.
Magma: Good luck.

(Both Magda and Jinny smile at each other and go back to work.)

KO, that's all for now so PLEASE r&r! Remember ... the more you like the more I post! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif


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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

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I-M address Bixbabe926

NewsiesGurl229
07-13-2001, 11:49 PM
I like it!

sue z q
07-14-2001, 12:43 AM
Originally posted by Hug-A-Tree:
I like it!

Moi aussi! (Me, too!) I'm loving it, post more!



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Jo: Partners? You mean 50-50? Uh, 50-50-50-50-50?
Blair: Good, Jo, we'll let you do the books!

If ignorance is bliss, why aren't there more happy people?

Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most.

*^*^*~~~God Bless~~~*^*^*

Jo_Po
07-14-2001, 01:02 AM
please post more ASAP!


~Steph

XoVanillaRain90oX
07-14-2001, 10:20 AM
Post more!!!

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Lisa

Check out my 'New and Improved' Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

Jinny and Theodore Will Always Be Forever In Our Hearts....

BlairandJo
07-14-2001, 03:12 PM
MORE Please;o)

Love The Facts Of Life
07-14-2001, 06:04 PM
This is really good so far.Can't wait to find out what the secret is.

Swimfan85
07-16-2001, 03:49 PM
and i have my own ? y did ya stop there?!! this is great please post more!

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
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Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

WildChildJinny
07-20-2001, 08:20 PM
KO, here's more and thanx for the reviews!

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(It's 8:00 and there's a half an hour left at work and Magda and Jinny are finishing up on the paperwork but Jinny can't concentrate)

Magda: You finished with the case?
Jinny: Uh..no...
Magda: What? But you've been writing something for the past 20 minuets, if it's not the case then what is it?
Jinny: A list.
Magda: A list of what?
Jinny: Reasons....Here look. (she hands the paper to Magda and she starts to read it.)

Reasons: Jinny's list.

1. He's gonna break up with me.
2. He's moving.
3. He's gonna break up with me
4. He's seeing someone else.
5. He's gonna break up with me
6. He's a drug dealer not a lawyer.
7. He's gonna break up with me
8. He found out that we're related.
9. He's gonna break up with me
10. He's gonna make me meet his parents again.
11. He's gonna break up with me
12. He's seeing someone esle.
13. He's gonna break up with me

Magda: What the h*ll is up with #6?
Jinny: (looks at list) Hey, it could happen.
Magda: Maybe, maybe he's gonna propose.
Jinny: (thinks for a second then shakes her head) NO, NO, NO, NO, NO! He's gonna break up with me, I just know it.
Magda: CALM DOWN! Here's your chance, it's 8:30, time to go home.

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Jinny's Parking lot @ her apartment.

(Jinny was thinking about Teddy the whole time that she was driving home.)

Jinny: (steps out of the car and says to herself) Maybe Magda's right. Maybe he will propose. (pauses) No, he's gonna break up with me, I JUST KNOW IT!

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Jinny's Apartment:

(Jinny had been home for only a couple of minuets when there was a knock on her door)

Jinny: (says quietly) Oh no. (takes a big breath) OK, well here goes everything.

(Jinny opens the door and Teddy walks in. Jinny closes the door behind him.)

Teddy: Hey.
Jinny: (kind of nervous) Uh..hi.
Teddy: (can tell that something is wrong) You ok?
Jinny: Ummmm...ya. I guess so.
Teddy: OK, Good. I need to talk to you.
Jinny: Bout what?
Teddy: Well, it's kinda spur of the moment but I think that you and I should.....
Jinny: (jumps to conclusions and interrupts) OMG! YOU ARE GONNA BREAK UP WITH ME!! (starts to cry)
Teddy: (shocked) No, No, No, (hugs her)
Jinny: You're not?
Teddy: Whatever gave you that idea?
Jinny: I'm a negative thinking person. What can I say?
Teddy: Say yes!
Jinny: Yes. Wait, what am I saying yes to?
Teddy: To what I was thinking.
Jinny: What were you thinking?
Teddy: I was thinking....
Jinny: What?!?!
Teddy: Here. (pulls an envelope out of his pocket and hands it to Jinny)
Jinny: (opens envelope and takes out 2 tickets) Tickets? I don't understand.
Teddy: They are... Tickets to Hawaii. You and I, just the two of us, are gonna spend a week in Hawaii.
Jinny: When?
Teddy: We leave in 2 days.
Jinny: (stands up) I can't take a week off from work. I'm so busy and Cap. would never let me. (hands the tickets back to Teddy.)
Teddy: (hands the tickets back to Jinny.) Yes, you can. I already talked to Kate and she's letting you go.
Jinny: Really?
Teddy: Really!
Jinny: Are you sure?
Teddy: I'm sure!
Jinny: We're going to Hawaii?
Teddy: We're going to Hawaii!
Jinny: (squeals with delight) Ohhhh!
Teddy: Happy?
Jinny: ECSTATIC! Thank you!

(She hugs him then kisses him. Teddy returns the kiss.)

KO how was that?




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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

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I-M address Bixbabe926

BlairandJo
07-20-2001, 08:23 PM
OOOOOOOOO I like post more soon;o)

sue z q
07-20-2001, 08:54 PM
Yeah! You posted some more! I'm loving it! Post more soon!

jo_24
07-20-2001, 09:53 PM
Hawaii? This is great! Keep ut the great work!

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"You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl."

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Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!

Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really never had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!

Teddy:God, Jinny

Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop.

Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter... it doesn't change anything... Yeah, that's what I thought!


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"Basically people are who people are. You're born, you die, you're pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing."~Jinny Exstead

Nancy is Slammin'!

WildChildJinny
07-22-2001, 07:59 PM
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Next Day @ The Division:

(Jinny is all excited about going to Hawaii with Teddy and again she can't concentrate on her work)

Jinny: Ever been to Hawaii Mag?
Magda: For the umpteenth time Jinny, No I have not been to Hawaii! (She is very annoyed because Jinny has asked her this several times already today.
Jinny: I wonder what it's gonna be like.

(Just then Kate walks by Jinny's desk on her way into her office)

Kate: Drop it Exstead! Get back to work, I know you're excited but you have to finish that case from yesterday. (with that she goes into her office and closes the door.)

Jinny: Is it just me or does she hate me?
Magda: It's just you.
Jinny: *raises an eyebrow* Really? You don't think that she hates me?
Magda: Nope, she doesn't hate you, she's just mad at you. Now you HAVE to finish that case. If you don't, then she'll hate you. (Magda smiles and sits down @ her desk. Jinny also smiles and tries to finish the case.)

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After work @ Jinny's apartment:

(Teddy decided that since they have an early flight to catch the next morning that he should spend the night @ Jinny's.{ Of course, she doesn't mind} Jinny is packing and Teddy is sitting on the bed watching her.)

Teddy: You take forever to pack, don't you?
Jinny: Well, I'm packing a lot.
Teddy: But we're only gonna be gone for a week.
Jinny: So? Didn't you ever hear that girls ALWAYS take a long time to pack and the ALWAYS pack too much?
Teddy: Ya, but I didn't think that that applied to you.
Jinny: Ya well...HEY!

(Jinny picks up a pillow to throw @ him but he grabs it out of her hands and then he pulls her down on top of him.)

(Teddy kisses Jinny but she quickly breaks it off, picks up the pillow and hits him with it.)

Jinny: You're not getting out of it that easily! (She hits him again and then she starts to finish her packing.)
Teddy: You're no fun!
Jinny: Ya, I know. *smirks* But as soon as we get there I will be. Now let me finish packing. (She doesn't realize that she's already done.)
Teddy: But you're already done.
Jinny: Oh ya. Well anyways...are you hungry? Cuz I am. Do you wanna go out and grab a bite?
Teddy: Ya I'm hungry, but I'm hungry for you.

(He pulls her down on top of him again and kisses her deeply.)

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So how was that? Honest Answers PLEASE!

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

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I-M address Bixbabe926

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
07-22-2001, 10:21 PM
"Hungry for you"?

ˇLa chica, usted anuncia mejor más pronto!

(Girl, you better post more soon!)


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This is K the Off Topic Sidekick Trainee saying Good night, have a good morning, don't smoke, buckle up, drive safely, and always go off topic!

sue z q
07-23-2001, 12:13 AM
"Hungry for you." Owwwwwwwwwww, you go Teddy! This is gr8! Post more soon!

WildChildJinny
07-25-2001, 04:38 PM
Before I post more, I just want to know if anyone is still reading my story?

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

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Here's a poem that reminds me of Teddy and Jinny:

~<3~ Why I Love You ~<3~

You cheer me up when I am blue,
You make sure that I know just what to do,
Your gentle words and your sweet touch
Are why I love you very much.

~<3~ Isn't that so sweet? ~<3~

~*~<3~*~<3~*~<3~*~<3~*~<3

And this poem that reminds me of Jinny and her Mom:

~*~ I'm always here ~*~

When you sleep, I'm always here.
Don't be afraid, I am near.
Watching over you with lots of love,
I'm your guardian angel from up above!

~*~ OK, That brings tears to my eyes ~*~

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I-M address Bixbabe926

Joanna Marie_1
07-25-2001, 06:34 PM
ME! *Raises Hand Really High* ME ME ME!

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"As any of the local bartenders can tell ya, I'm a sympathetic ear" ~ Jinny Exstead

"Your born and you die pretty much the same person, all the rest is just window dressing" ~ Jinny Exstead

"People...isnt that just the craziest word u ever done heard?" ~ me *LOL*

BlairandJo
07-25-2001, 07:15 PM
I am me!!!!!!!!

Division Fan
07-25-2001, 11:42 PM
I am! Great Job!

NancyJoJinny
07-25-2001, 11:45 PM
I am now post more damnit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh, yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, uh yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight! and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy:Stop! What are you...
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter! *long pause* Yeah... Thats what I thought.

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

WildChildJinny
07-26-2001, 07:45 PM
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The Next Morning:

(The alarm is going off and Teddy wakes up.)

Teddy: (looks at Jinny sleeping next to him, he smiles and then he kisses her on the forehead.) Jinny, It's 6. You need to get up. We have a 7 o'clock plane to catch.
Jinny: (opens eyes a little bit and groans) It's too early! (pulls the covers over her head.)
Teddy: Get up! (he pulls the covers off of her, takes her hands in his and pulls her out of bed.)
Jinny: I'm up! I'm up!
Teddy: Good, now get ready we have 2 leave in a little bit cuz it takes a half an hour to get to the airport.
Jinny: (yawns) Ya, I know, I know. (heads into the bathroom)

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At the Airport: 6:45 AM

(Jinny and Teddy are waiting to board the plane.)

(A voice comes over the loud speaker.)
Speaker: Flight 269 now boarding for Hawaii.

Teddy: (picks up carryon bags) Here we go.
Jinny: I'm so excited!
(They start to walks towards the terminal.)

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In Hawaii:

(At their hotel room.)

Teddy: (opens door, walks in and Jinny follows him in) We're finally here!

(Jinny walks over to the doors that lead out onto their balcony and opens them.)

Jinny: OH MY GOD!
Teddy: What? (walks over to where Jinny is standing.)
Jinny: Look at that! (she points outside then walks on onto the balcony.)
Teddy: (Walks on onto the balcony also.) WOW!

(They are standing on the balcony looking at the view. Their hotel is right on the beach and there is a beautiful sunset over the ocean.)

Jinny: Gorgeous.
Teddy: (puts his arms around Jinny from behind) Ya, just like you. (Kisses the top of her head.)
Jinny: (smiles.) You flatter me.
Teddy: Hey, I'm just speaking the truth.

(Jinny leans on Teddy and they both just stand there looking at the view.)

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Not 2 good but w/e~!~

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Here's a poem that reminds me of Teddy and Jinny:

~<3~ Why I Love You ~<3~

You cheer me up when I am blue,
You make sure that I know just what to do,
Your gentle words and your sweet touch
Are why I love you very much.

~<3~ Isn't that so sweet? ~<3~

~*~<3~*~<3~*~<3~*~<3~*~<3

And this poem that reminds me of Jinny and her Mom:

~*~ I'm always here ~*~

When you sleep, I'm always here.
Don't be afraid, I am near.
Watching over you with lots of love,
I'm your guardian angel from up above!

~*~ OK, That brings tears to my eyes ~*~

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I-M address Bixbabe926

WildChildJinny
08-02-2001, 07:02 PM
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Next Day:

(Teddy wakes up and hears the shower running. He groans and then closes his eyes. The shower shuts off and a couple of minuets later Jinny comes out of the bathroom in her bathrobe.)

Jinny: (Shakes Teddy.) Get up!
Teddy: Why?
Jinny: Because I want to go out to breakfast!
Teddy: You Want to go out to breakfast? (he stresses the You want)
Jinny: Yup!
Teddy: Since when do you get your way?
Jinny: (leans in and gives Teddy a quick kiss) Since always. Now get up!
Teddy: Ok, Ok.

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At The Hotel Resturant Downstairs:

(Teddy and Jinny walk in and are sit down at the table.)

Jinny: When I said that I wanted to go out to breakfast, I ment out of the building.
Teddy: Jinny, be happy. We're in Hawaii! Away from work.....
Jinny: Ya, ok you're right.... (looks at the beer and wine menu on the table.) Oh, Oh look. They have...
Teddy: (inturrupts) You are not having a beer at breakfast.
Jinny: Ok... (smiles) How bout a wine?
Teddy: No, Jin. No.
Jinny; Why?
Teddy: It's too early.
Jinny: No it's not. It's never too early for me!
Teddy: I don't find that hard to believe.
Jinny: I heard that......


OK that SoOoOoOo sucked! I'm worry, I don't now what else to write.....

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Here's a poem that reminds me of Teddy and Jinny:

~<3~ Why I Love You ~<3~

You cheer me up when I am blue,
You make sure that I know just what to do,
Your gentle words and your sweet touch
Are why I love you very much.

~<3~ Isn't that so sweet? ~<3~

~*~<3~*~<3~*~<3~*~<3~*~<3

And this poem that reminds me of Jinny and her Mom:

~*~ I'm always here ~*~

When you sleep, I'm always here.
Don't be afraid, I am near.
Watching over you with lots of love,
I'm your guardian angel from up above!

~*~ OK, That brings tears to my eyes ~*~

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I-M address Bixbabe926

NewsiesGurl229
08-02-2001, 07:25 PM
I like it! Can't wait for more!

NancyJoJinny
08-02-2001, 07:32 PM
lol keep posting!

BlairandJo
08-02-2001, 08:25 PM
That soooooooooo did not suck.Post more soon;o)

WildChildJinny
08-11-2001, 12:11 PM
Hey! I really wanna know if anyone is still reading this. If they are then I'll post more but if not then I'll just stop writing.

FOL_lover
08-11-2001, 01:24 PM
I'm reading!!!!! Please post more!!!!!

NewsiesGurl229
08-11-2001, 01:24 PM
UH MEEEEEEEEE!!!! Write more for the DOGGIES please!

WildChildJinny
08-13-2001, 09:25 PM
Write more for the doggies?!?! I'm not even gonna ask!

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(Jinny and Teddy spent the rest of the day at the beach soaking up the sun.)

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Next Day:

(Jinny and Teddy decided to be complete tourists and see the sights and shops)

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Later That night:

(Jinny had been taking a nap but now she is reading in bed and Teddy had dissapeared about an hour or so ago. But just then he comes into their hotel room and gaves Jinny a quick kiss.)

Jinny: Hi, where were you?
Teddy: I have a surprise for you!
Jinny: Uh oh another one! What is it?
Teddy: (smiles and takes her hand and pulls her out of bed) Come on......

(They leave their hotel room and walk out onto the beach. Teddy had made Jinny close her eyes so she couldn't see the surprise.)

Teddy: We're here.
Jinny: (opens eyes.) OMG! Teddy you didn't have to.

(In front of them is a picnic, some candels and a bottle of wine.)

Teddy: Surprise!
Jinny: (smiles) Thank you!

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About a half an hour later:

(Jinny and Teddy had eaten and now they are walking hand-in-hand in the water, just up to their ankels, and Jinny splashes Teddy.)

Teddy: Hey!

(Jinny laughs and runs away and Teddy runs after her and catched up.)

Teddy: Come here! (He taked her arm and pulls her to him and kisses her.)

Teddy: (breakes off kiss) Can I ask you something?
Jinny: (sarcasticly) I dunno, can you?
Teddy" OK, MAY I ask you something?
Jinny: (smiles.) Yes. What?

Teddy: (gets down on one knee) Jinny, I love you so much and I want to spend the rest of my life with you. So, will you marry me? (He pulls the ring out of his pocket.)
Jinny: OMG! (Covers her mouth w/ her hands) Yes, (startes to cry.) Yes, I'll marry you.

(Teddy puts the ring on her finger and then jumps up, hugs her and then he kisses her again.)

Teddy: Jinny, I love you so much.
Jinny: I love you too!

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It feels weird to be writing about Jinny and Teddy together when, they really aren't together any more!

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*!*Caitlin*!*
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IM Address: Bixbabe926
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In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!-Jinny Exstead.
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Jeanie
08-14-2001, 03:09 AM
Actually when I started writing which hasn't been that long ago I think and this is only my opinion but to me they are the easiest for me to write for. I enjoy writing about Jinny and Theodore. Some like Angela are hard to write for but with Jinny and Theodore scenes I have no problem writing them.



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Jeanie

Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Joyce DeWitt
08-15-2001, 10:57 AM
write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
heehee i want more

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Jack: "This is a job for the man of the house."
Janet: "I did not kiss Larry!"
Chrissy: "Snort snort."
Mr. Roper: "Not tonight Helen, I got a headache."
Mrs. Roper: "Not tonight. That would be a good title for my autobiagraphy."
Mr. Furley: "Once a tippytoes, always a tippytoes."
Cindy: "I guess I messed things up, huh?"
Terri: "Janet? Shut up and get married."
KEC JNS
p.s. I'M PETER LORRY!
UP YOUR ZIGGY W/ A WA-WA BRUSH!!!!!!!!!!!!

BlairandJo
08-15-2001, 11:23 AM
More I need more!!!!!!Please;o)