Okay

(CD is out at dinner, with her new boyfriend Matt)
CD: So Matt, what are you doing tomarrow?
Matt: Uh hoping to do something with you.
CD: Uh Matt tomarrow I'm having dinner w/ Paul along with giving him the divorce papers.
Matt: Lunch.
CD: Fine.
(Angela's House her and Daniel are sitting ont the couch)
Angela: Is it time yet?
Daniel: Yes.
(Angela looks at one of those home pregnancy test things)
Angela: (Smiling) Positive!!!
Daniel: Angie that great!
(The next morning, CD comes in as usual while Angela comes in with a bunch of double chocolate fudge ice cream)
CD: What is that?!?!
Angela: Ice cream.
CD: WHY!?!?
Angela: Uh do I need a reason?
CD: Angela It's 8:00 am, why are you eating icecream?
Angela: Because.
(Jinny comes in and sits down. same with Magda, Kate walks out)
Kate: Jinny Magda School shooting go now and be careful. CD Angela armed robbery at the convinince store down the street.
CD: Got it.

G2G, but what a coincidence (SP) my boyfriends name is matt!!


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Live your life to the fullest, don't let any oppertunity slip away from you. If you do you will regret it.

[This message has been edited by Hug-A-Tree (edited 05-13-2001).]

Keep Going!!!!

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

(CD and Angela)

*in the car*

C.D: So, how r u and Daniel?

Angela: Great...jusat great! u and matt?

CD: Awesome...tonioght i am officaly divorced!

Angela: Congrates! *smiles*

Cd: You don't look to well...u okay?

Angela: Fine fine!!! Pull over!!!!!!!!

(CD pulls over and the tires squeak)

CD:? What?

(angela opens the door and barfs all over)

Cd: Dang, what u have for breakfast?

(Jinny and Magda)

*In the parking Lot*

Jinny: I hate these dumb ass kids thgat do this!

Magda: Jin,they have thier reasons!

Jinny: Not very good reasonable ons!

Magda: (...(heres a shot from inside the school) Lets go!!!!!


Your turn!

Hey GREAT!!!! Okay I'm happy I won a voice competition last night!!!!

(Jinny and Magda Go into the school, see two kids with guns)
Jinny: SFPD drop your weapons, NOW!
Magda: drop your weapons by the time I count to five, 1, 2, 3
Kid: SHUT-UP! Don't move or I'll shoot..

gots to go!



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Live your life to the fullest, don't let any oppertunity slip away from you. If you do you will regret it.

uh...u wrote only a lil bit!!!!

*In the CAr*

CD: Angela??? R u okay?

Angela: Does it look like i am okay?

CD: (puts her hand on angelas back) Sorry...i didn't know i was such a crazy driver??

Angeal: Your not... i am just ...*leans over and barfs again...CD holds her hair back* Thanx

Cd: Sure...so about why ur sick? Daniel cook breakfats again?

Angela: lol, no...but it has to do with Daniel.

(School w/ shotter, jin, and magda)

Jinny: Kid...listen...just drop the gun and no one will get hurt

Kid: Shut up u damn cop!

Magda: (puts her gun down) Jin..listen to him...

(Jinny starts to put the gun down when...some cop comes busting through the doors and holds his gun up at the kid. the kid freaks and shots and it hits......)

okay...now that's just cruel leaving me hanging there!!! Please write more!!!

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

LALALAAAAL!!!!!!!! Okay I'll give you more!!!

(In the car with Angela and CD)
CD: ANGELA TELL ME NOW!!! please.
Angela: Uh uh uh
CD: Spit it out!
Angela: Well I'm I'm...pregnant!
CD: Hey that's great!! I'm so happy for you!
Angela: Your turn, what's up with you and Paul here???
CD: Well I'm sick of him and I'm getting a divorce.
Angela: And Matt???
CD: Don't know, Don't know I know he likes me but that's about it. Well we're here. Let's go.
(School Shooting)
Magda: Jin, Jin, OMG call 911, get an ambulance out here right away. You're under arrest for attempted murder of a police officer. (reads him his rites) Jin, please make it. (Magda calls captain) Captain, this is Ramirez...Yeah Jin's been been shot. (Starts crying)Yeah Sure meet ya there. Bye.

Okay well I've got to shower and go to bed!

Okay... DON'T STOP!!! Please, please, please keep going ASAP! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

okay...lol

(CD & Angela)

CD: Lets go inside and see what this whole robbery is about?

Angela: Oky.....hold on(barfs)

CD: Jeez...girl u r sick...why don't u go home?

Angela: No, i can handle it! (she stands up and falls down)

CD: ANGELA?????

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Jinny: (tries to satnd up) Owww...what the heck?

Magda: Jin...(sobing) stay down..ur hurt!

jinny: No, i am fine! (stands up and falls back down)

Kid: (just stands there in amazment)

Magda: How do u feel now?

Jinny: Yeah....u lil shi...

Magda: (interupts) JINNY! just save ur breath.

Jinny: Yeah, of what left (passes out)

Come on gurl!!! MORE!!!

U go, I'm banned from the internet and my parents aren't home so I get on. This is really Hug-a-Tree I'll just get in trouble if i'm caught. And they just walked in the door. BUSTED!!!!!!!!

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Hey,
Quotes(These are commonly said things in my Jobie bethel):
Geez and were bustin our butts to get here on time, well even the Honered Queen is late.
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Girls Doug is going to tell us stuff we should improve on, so if he says anything that effects you, DEAL WITH IT! Doug please go ahead.
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For you new girls Dianne was our gaurdian for 5 years and she is very near to us. Now during this ceremony we honor her and if some of the older girls cry just ignore it.

Luv ya,
Jobie Girl 4ever

Okay I CAN ADD MORE!!! I'm also home sick from school!

***CD and Angela***
CD: Oh goody time to call 911. ***On Phone*** Yeah I'm inspector DeLorenzo and my partners pregnant and just collapsed...Okay thanks we're located at 1542 s. street. thanks. ***Off phone*** Uh angela??? Yay I get to call captain ***On phone*** Hey captian it's CD. Yeah Angela just collapsed. Yes I called 911. uh huh buh bye. ***off of phone*** Angela!!!!!!!

***Jinny & Magda***
**Paramedics arrive Magda follows them to the hospital**

Ur turn I don't know what to do, plus I'm supposed to be doin h/w.

Great place to leave me and sorry, i forgot u were banned for the internet!

(Hospital)

*Everyone is there and bump into eachother*

Magda: Wowo, i didn't know u guys knew about...(cut off)

CD: Well, i didn't know that u guys knew about....where jinny?

Magda: Wheres Angela?

Kate: It is not guys it is gals and there is one gal to each of u!

Madga and Cd look at eachother confused

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DR w/ Jinny: Lay down please!

Jinny: I am now awake and it will hurt so give me some drugs!

Dr: No, we can't until u lay down.

Jinny: I know what u do when i lay down...u strap me to the table and do ur thing with no drungs....nonononon. i am not falling 4 it!

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Dr w/ Angela: Um...were u hoping to keep this baby?

Angela: why? did i lose it? Oh, gosh!

DR: No, but u might!


You go when u can now!

AWESOME!!! Okay now that I'm back on the internet about 24/7 I can post more I'm listenin' to Billy Gilman the CUTEST GUY OF ALL TIME the best song in the world too "She's My Girl"!!!!

CD: Wait a minute, So y is Magda Here???
Magda: And y is CD here??? Is there something we don't know?
CD: I'm here for Angela, u?
Magda: Jin, what happened to Angela?
CD: She's pregnant, and collapsed. Jinny???
Magda: School shooting, nothing would've happened if those rookie cops didn't burst throught the door freakin' the kid out.
Kate: HOLD IT, Which rookie cops?
Magda: Thomas and Stanly.
Kate: Is there something I don't know?
Magda: I'll tell ya later.

***W/ Jinny***
DR: Whoa what makes u think we'll strap u down?
Jinny: Been there done that. I"m not bein strapped to the table bed thingy.
DR: I won't strap you down.
Jinny: And I should Believe u be (passes out)

***Waiting Room***
CD: Listen not like I really wanna leave at a time like this, but I've made plans that well I sorta gotta stick to. So would u call me if there's any thing on either one?
Magda & Kate: Sure.

***Dinner w/ Paul***
Paul: So CD what was so important?
CD: Uh well paul, you know that we've been havin' problems lately like well...
Paul: CD get to the point.
CD: Paul U cheated on me time and time again, I'm really sick of it. I went to a lawyer and well got some divorce papers. I can't stand it anymore. Paul it's time we end it. I want a divorce.
Paul: U WHAT???
CD: Paul I"m serious. I don't think we can be together anymore, and I'm not willing to waste my time ***Phone*** DeLorenzo, hey magda, what, I'll be there in thirty minutes tops. Bye. ***Hang up*** Okay so paul I've got to go. Get back to me.

okay sry if i hogged it, but I kinda wanted to do that part. ur turn.

u r not hoggin! i love it! it was GREAT!!! AWESOME JOB!!!

*Jinnys Room*

Dr: Well, that was easy!
Nurse: what shoudl i do doctor?
*BEEP*
DR: Get her to the OR now! she is dropping!

*Angelas Room*

Angela: I might?
Doctor: Yes, u might!
Angela: No, explain it to me...i am confused
Doctor: WEll, the baby was ready to come before and ur only 2 months...so, that would be really bad!
Angela: Yeah, the babcy wouldn'tsurvive!
Doctor: We need to keep u over night to see how u r! ok?
Agnela: YES!

*Outside in the waiting room*

Doctors: Exstead? Reide?

Magda & Kate: YEs????????? *CD runs in*

CD Yes?

D 1: Jinny was dropping so we had to bring her to surgery.

D2: Angela should be okay. we need to keep her over night for observation. u may see her in room 967.

Kate: thanx.

Magda: (sittin in her chair wif her head in her hands) OMG!!!!!!!! *cring*

Your turn

U LIL' I DON"T KnoW WHAT TO WRITE!!!!!!!!!
aNYway

CD: ***Tryin to comfort magda*** Magda Jinny will be fine.
Magda: Oh my god. what if...what if...she dies?
CD: Okay don't say that she won't die.
Magda: Oh but she might ***Crying harder now*** Oh why couldn't it be me right now? ***Mag's phone rings*** Ramirez, oh hi ma,no I'm fine. Yeah can you watch Ben tonight and take him to school? Thanks ma, can I talk to him? thanx. Hey Ben ***Trying to sound happy so he doesn't think nethings wrong*** how was your day? well that's good. listen grandma's going to stay with you tonight and take you to school tomarrow, I'm working. Okay goodnight papi, I luv you. ***Hangs up*** Okay let's go see angela.


[This message has been edited by Hug-A-Tree (edited 05-25-2001).]

not like meanin to hog or NEthing.

***angela's room***
CD: Hey.
Angela: Hey, so uh u, paul.
CD: Shut-Up.
Angela: got it.
Magda: Uh Hey, just found out about ya.
Angela: Yeah like y I'm here in the first place.
Magda: Not the whole story but a short version.
Kate: Hey u need to get bettr, you'll be on desk a lil' while but still it's bettr than nothin'.
Angela: Where's Jinny?
CD: Uh well...Jinny was shot in the school shooting her and Magda Went to.
Angela: Is she okay?
Magda: She was slipping, she went into surgery, we don't know anything yet.
Angela: oh.
Magda: Captain, Shouldn't we call Jinn's family?
Kate: Yeah.

GO PLEASE!

okay....hehe, sorry bout that!

Magda: Don't call..they'll be mad at me!

Angela: For what? U didn't do nething!

Magda: I know, but...still they will make me nervous!

Kate: They deserve to be here, Magda!

Magda: Fine, i will hide in the bathroom! they can't get me in there!

CD: Yeah but i can!

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*Jinnys Dad's House*

(Poker Night)

JF: I wonder why jinny didn't call to say she wasn't coming! oh, well, she always wins!

C: *cell phone rings* Hell? What? OMG, we will be right there! *hangs up* You guys Jinny has been shot in a school shoting and she is slipping in the hospital!!!! lets go!

John: Can't we finish our game first? *serious*

C: JOHN!!!!!!

J: Fine, lets go!

Your turn and u r not hogging it!

Good I just like postin'.

***Waiting Room, Magda's in the bathroom, everyone else is just sittin' there.***
DR: Exstead...
Everyone: Yes,
DR; well she's out of surgery there's not much more to say except she's in stable condition.
Kate: thanx.
Casey: When can we see her?
DR: Well she can't be seen by anyone right now.
John: Thanx.
***CD"S Cell rings***CD: DeLorenzo, oh Paul it's you. sure where? anchorside, fine. Meet ya there. yeah sure. bye. ***Hangs up*** Captain, call me on either, I've got a sorta very important thing to do right now.
Kate: Sure.
***Magda Comes out from the bathroom***
Magda: Any news?
Kate; Jinny is stable and out of surgery.
Magda: And that's it.
Kate: What'd u expect to hear?
***Anchorside w/ CD and Paul***
CD: Okay talk.
Paul: CD I'm NOT going to divorce you. I love you candy.
CD: Paul stop the candy Crap.
Paul: Well I do. And I won't give you up.
CD: Paul, I'm dating another guy who I happen to luv, I don't love you.
Paul: Fine CD it's over.
CD: Fine.

Ur turn

[This message has been edited by Hug-A-Tree (edited 05-26-2001).]

**Hospital**

Magda: Well, i dunno! She is fine! She did great! Or u can see her now...1 at a time!

Kate: Well, at leats it isn't bad news!

(Nurse calls from desk)

Nurse : DR. Exstead is dropping in room 874...

Magda: OMG!!! i jinkxed it!

**Bar**

Cd: Well, i have the papers with me so why don't we just get this over with now?

Paul: No, i won't sign!

CD: U just said...(interupted, by cell phone call) Hello?

Kate: She's dropping!!!!!!

CD: Your lucky i have an important place to go!

Your turn!!!!!!

Okay great!!!! Listen it's go 2 church sunday for Job's soooo I won't be able to post till later.

Hey...I'm not babysittin' NEmore...their parents got home early...

Okay well for the rest of today and part of tomarrow I've got camp staff training...I'm sorta a wrangler. and you need to continue. Sorry!

okay, i will write a lil more!

Magda:OMG...1..2..3..4..5....6...7...8....9...10! i am counting!

Angela: You okay! just calm down!

(hears from the room)

DR: We are losing her....we need more blood!

Magda: **passes out**

Kate: We need a doctor! AGAIN!

You go now!!!! When u get a chance

Okay why can I just picture the captain saying "we need a doctor! AGAIN!!!!" okay I think I'll post more

***DR. Comes Out***
DR: What's the problem?
Kate: Magda Ramirez, she just fainted.
DR: Okay we'll keep u posted.
***He Leaves CD comes running in***
CD: Is she okay? Wait where's Magda?
Kate: U wanna go for three people in the hospital now.
CD: What happened?
Kate: She Fainted.
CD: Beautiful. Jinny???
Casey: Uh don't know anything really yet.
CD: Angela
Kate: uh nothing.
CD: Well that's just great. okay what about Ben, shouldn't we call her family?
Kate: you do the honors.
CD: Okay.


UR TURN!

Come on gurl...post MORE!

sorry so long!

**Hospital**

Dr: Okay here she is...


Cd: Jinny!

Kate: Jinny!

CAsey: Jinny!

John: Jinny!

(Angela comes out)

Angela: Angela!!!!!

Everyone: **moans**

Angela: I am glad to see u all too!

**Hospital 2 hours later**

Doctor: Here she is!!

Cd: Jinny!

Kate: Jinny!

CAsey: Jinny!

John: Jinny!

(Magda walks in)

Magda: I wish....

Everyone:*groans*

Ur turn

Pleazzz continue. i am dying to post more

Then do, this is the only time I'll be on today and I can't be on long because I'm doing research on a certain song, and I'm trying to get on my Jobie website soooo you go. I've got a competition tonight so I can't be on. Like 24 hr practicing.

okay, i will write a lil bit while ur gone...even though we can tell nobody cares.

Angela: Hey, aren't u all happy to see Magda and i also?

CD: We want Jinny!

Magda: Yeah.

Angela: I do too...**puts her head down**

Kate: Hey guys..lets not get all weepy until we see her.

Magda: **starts to cry** i can't help it!!!!

CD: **walks over and hugs Magda** It's okay...we understand.

Jinny's Dad: I spy with my little eye...something red.

Casey: dad, what are you doing?

Jinny'd Dad: Trying to make the mood better!

john: well, u suck.

Kate: now, i know where jinny gets her weird personality from.

Jinny's Dad: Yeah, she takes after her Mom.

Everyone: **rolls their eyes, because he was totaly serious**

Okay, now it is your turn!!!!



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aOL SN: nancymckeonfan8976
yahoo sn: nancyfan8976
email/mca messanger:nancymckeonfan8976@hotmail.com

Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

Uh Hey people, We really really don't know if you're reading this or not. But if you are PLEASE RESPOND!!!! We just want feedback on if we should go or not.

***Hospital, dr. comes out***
dr: Exstead,
Everyone: YES!!!
DR: well she's uh yeah well...
Magda: Say it already
DR: well uh she's awake but very disoriented (SP) and we don't know why. We don't know if she's going to make it.
JinDad: Thanx.
***He leaves, cd's cell rings***
CD: Delorenzo, Paul hi. Well it'll have to wait. Listen Paul what I'm doin' is important. UGH Paul shut up. Listen we can do this tomarrow. Okay. bye. ***hangs up***


UR TURN!

Hey! I'm stll reading!

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§º§º§ Kenzie §º§º§

I love this story. I just don't post a lot of reply's.

Okay gurl it's still ur turn but Thanks for responding. We just want to know if we should keep goin' or not. Even if you didn't like it, we would still probably post.

Love it!

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Jo: So things change. You're born, ya move on, ya die, that's life.
Tootie: They're so perfect for each other!
Jo: Yeah, she makes peoples sick and he cures them.
Blair: The moon was but a chin of gold a night or two ago. And now she turns her perfect face upon the world below. The Moon. Emily Dickinson.
Jo: It’s freezing. Jo Polniaczek

Kerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!

Post mooooooorrrrreeee NOW!

PS don't screw with the Paul and CD parts, I WANT TO DO IT!

Girl! Whatchu thinkin 'bout slowin this story down ~n~ not postin within 33.125 seconds of my reading it? Oh, you got somethin comin 2 ya!

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My mind is like lightning: one brilliant flash, then it's gone.

If you have two legs, run; if you have one leg, hop; if you have no legs, fly.

~*Danielle*~

ATTENTION NANCYMCKEONFAN8976:

THIS IS HUG-A-TREE AND SHE IS GETTING VERY VERY UPSET WITH YOU. SHE WOULD LIKE TO POST MORE BUT YOU ARE NOT POSTING. AND I"M ABOUT TO HUNT YOU DOWN AND KICK YOUR BUTT! SO I THINK YOU BETTER POST, AND I MEAN NOW!!!

Thank-you girl you better post.

[This message has been edited by Hug-A-Tree (edited 06-10-2001).]

okay, Kerrin is posting!!!! Sorry, whats ur sn Hug-A-Tree

fine, i won't mess with Cd and Paul...i guess i just suck at writing bout them http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif

Dr: Anyone like to see her?

Everyone: ME!

DR: How bouts we have family first?

Everyone: Okay...*glum*

**~Jinnys Room~**

Casey: Jin??

Jinny: I am fine, how r u?

Casey: Oh, gosh!

Jinny: Yes, a nice day isn't it?

John: Great now i have a gay brother and a retarted sister.

Jin Dad: Shut-up john. She is just a lil jumbled because of everything thats happened!

Jinny: I feel the same way.

Casey: Jinny do u want nething??

Jinny: I want...i want...i want....my best friend!

John: you don't have ne friends **laughs*

Jin Dad: Get out! NoW

John: Dad, comeon. i am sorry!

Jin Dad: GET OUT!!!

**John leaves**

Casey: Jin, hun, who is ur best friend??

Jinny: UM>......

Casey: C.D?

Jinny: Nope...

Jins Dad: Kate...

Jinny: Hell no!

Jin Dad: She respondes to Kate!!!

Casey: Angela?

Jinny: Nope..Maaa...*can't say it straight*

Casey; Magda?

Jinny: *nods*

Casey: We'll go get her!!!!

Jinny: *smiles*

**~Magda walks in alone~**

Magda: Hey.

You don't suck at CD and Paul, I just have waited to write this for like EVER!!!

Jinny: Listen, I know that what happened happened. And uh did you tell the captain about the rookies charging through the door? AND IT BEING THEIR FAULT??

Magda: No but I will.

Jinny: I'm glad your my best friend@

Magda: Me too.

Okay got to go.

okay...here is more

Magda: The doctor said u might not make it....**head down**

Jinny: Mag, don't worry about me. i am a survivor!

Magda: Jinny, i am serious, *looks uop wif a tear in her eye**

Jinny: Magda, come here

**Magda comes up to the bed side and grasps Jinnys hand**

Jinny: I will make it and if i don't i will wait for you and always remember u. i will always be with u!

Magda: *in tears (as well as me)** Jinny, please don't leave me!!! **sobbing**

Jinny: Magda, i don't want to, but God choses and i will be with my mom and wait for u.

Magda: Take me with u!

Jinny: Ben...what about Ben. And i might not even end up dying!!!

Your turn

you better keep writing this damn fan-fic....I get very upset when people dont finish their fan-fics!!!!!!!!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

Great so far! Oh, a little favor... Joanna Marie_1, there are some young kids on here that probably shouldn't hear that kind of language, so could you kind of tone it down a little? Please?

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My mind is like lightning: one brilliant flash, then it's gone.

If you have two legs, run; if you have one leg, hop; if you have no legs, fly.

~*Danielle*~

thanx so much guys. Britt where have u been? i have been waiting forever to talk to u! my new sn: actrees2b8976. Aaron keeps going on ur name! please talk to ur sister!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif

Ok I'll tone it down........its a habit(I cus a lot) PLEASE!!!! Finish This Fan-Fic!!!!!!!!! Its awesome!!!!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

LALALALALALALALALA!! Okay I don't have to post more, but I will!

Magda: God, Jinny, I'm just so scared.

Jinny: Magda, nobody knows what's going to happen until it does. And if he chooses it's my time to go, then it is.

Magda: Ya know that's the first time in a long time you've made sense on somethin' like this.

***They both laugh a little***
(Magda leaves Jinny alone for a little while)

Jinny: *to herself* God, what if I don't make it?

Your turn, I'm missin' the TNN/CMT Country weekly music awards.

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From Billy Gilman's Song-One Voice
"We need some help,
down here on earth, a thousand prayers,
a million words,
but one voice was heard."

From Jessica Andrews' song-Who I Am
"I am Rosemary's granddaughter, a spitting image of my father, and when the day is done mama's still my biggest fan."

And last but not least,
From Billy Gilman's song-Oklahoma
"Suitcase packed with all his things,
Car pulls up the doorbell rings, he don't wanna go, he thought he'd found his home."

Can't Wait for their concert here!

~~~ALLIECAT~~~(Aka hug-a-tree or Allie or Allison)

MORE!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

KERRIN, POST MORE!

Okay, i am sorry! i was real busy!

Magda: Well, lets not talk like that.

Jinny: Magda, i want you to watch out for Casey. Dont let John mess with him.

Magda: Jinny...

Jinny: And make sure my Dad doesn't smoke to much.

Magda: *crying* Jin...

Jinny: Hey, i will be with my Mom again!

Magda: *lokks down and fiddles with her fingers*

Jinny: Dont cry

Magda: I can't go with out u1

Jinny: Oh, come on! The world will be better without Jinny Exstead!

Magda: No...the world will be boring and ur my partner.

Jinny: But, u didn't even want mt to be ur partner in the begining!!!

Magda: Jin, i was just scared of maybe i would mess up...

Jinny: *questioned look* HOW?

Your turn!

Post more!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif This is really good!

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers... Boy, I bet they tasted awful!

I'm a blonde babe that can beat boys at basketball, no prob!

~*Danielle*~
<3 y'all!

Magda: Well...I dunno, you are kinda I don't know. Do I need a reason? Geez Jin, I thought I was gonna loose you for a few minutes.

Jinny: No How did you think you would mess up? I really want to know.

Magda: Well your kinda...I dunno, private maybe. You just don't open up. so when I talk to you I don't want to push you.

Jinny: WHAT? okay so I don't open up. Your afraid you'll push me. MAGDA. Where do you get this stuff?

Magda; I don't know.

I gotta pack for Grand. So your turn. I'll be gone until Late Saturday night. So post as much as you want.

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Jinny:This Is Who I am.

*YeeHaw!*

KERRIN, ARE YOU STILL ALIVE??? I would like to have you post more.

Hey Hug-A-Tree i think Kerrin is dead lol so i think you should just finish this one. hey what is ur sn? by the way so we can chatt.

Nope, she's alive and well, or as well as she can be while waiting for Kenzie to post more. Ok, Kerrin's mad at K for the same reason you're mad a Kerrin, maybe everyones even?

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

*¤.¸¸.·´¨`»Danielle«´¨`·.¸¸.¤ *
<3 ya! :)

cant we all just get along so kerrin can finish this and i can read the rest i know it sounds selfish but its not fair to keep people waitin for such a good fan fic to end
pleez if she is alive tell her to finish

Well, as u all prolly know Kerrin was grounded for a while and yesterday was her b-day so she hasnt been online in a while!! Plus I think she is still in school(sux for her)!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

jeez this much into summer and she is still in school, bummer hopefully she cant write more soon hey joanna whats ur sn?

Originally posted by Joanna Marie_1:
Well, as u all prolly know Kerrin was grounded for a while and yesterday was her b-day so she hasnt been online in a while!! Plus I think she is still in school(sux for her)!




Thanx Britt, i am alive and well! I was grounded and in school and June 27 was my 15th birthday! So, i am very sorry! Here is more!

Jinny: What are you tlaking about Mag? You're the only one that i do open up too!

Magda: Yeah, well...*wipes a tear* i just didn't want to do nething that u didn't want but never said nething about.

Jinny: *coughs* No, i would...*coughs* say something about that is i didn't agree with it!

*Kate Walks in*

Kate: Hey how long u 2 gunna chat 4?

Magda: *turns to Kate* I dunno? Sorry! *turns back to Jinny*

Jinny: *passed out and monitor is beeping like crazy!*

Kate: gosh she saw me and wnet crazy?!

Magda: OMG!!! Jinny!

*Doctors rush in*

Your trun!

Okay, I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU WANT ME TO DO THE SUSPENCEFUL PART.

DR: Wait outside please.

(Kate and Magda go back to the waiting room, Magda is freaking out, and Kate is tryin' to comfort her)
Kate: Magda it'll be okay. Jinny will be fine.

Magda: What if she's not, huh??? Jinny's my best friend, I don't know what I'd do without her.

Kate: She'll be fine, Jin's always been a fighter. It's not like she's gonna give up now.

Magda: You don't know that.

(A doctor comes out of the room, He looks very discouraged.)
DR: Exstead...

Have fun Kerrin I like suspenceful parts, I can just get you back with them. OKAY, E-MAIL ME KERRIN, Look in your fanfics I put my e-mail there.

You gotta post more soooooooon I Love It!!!!
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Its my life!This is
who I am!And you tell me
it does'nt matter!
-Jinny
~~~~~~~
If you want something bad
enough you go after it no
matter what the outcome may be
-My Quote
~~~~~~
"Love beliver
So take the love He's giving to you
A love receiver
Cause everything He's
Promised is true
Love beliver
Listen to the song that I
sing
You are the child of the
King"
-Love Beliver.
~~~~~~~
Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl
(why be a good girl?)she
is a see-saw seeing if it
matters she is a game of
Chutes and Laders.
be a good girl (why be a good girl?)
she needs the one who wrote the definition of
a love without condition
be a good girl.
-Good Girl.

okay...well...i love them too

Magda: No...she can't be dead! *screams*

Kate: Shhhh, lets hear what the doctor has to say before we jump to conclusions!

Doctor: She is in a coma...

CD: Oh, gosh!

Magda: She'll never come out!!!!!!!!! *screams*

Kate: Shhhhhh....

doctor: I can tell you that we stablized her though. which is good in some cases...

Magda: Some Cases??????????? *scream*

Kate: Thats is CD take her outside!!!

(Magda starts to cry and CD Takes her arm. They walk outside)

Kate: I am sorry Doctor! Is there anything else you can tell me without Magda screaming? By the way thats her best friend in there so u can't blame her!

Doctot: Yes, there is!!!!!!!

Your turn!!

Damn u Kerrin!!!!!!! *LOL*

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

OK I Need More or someones going to die!J/k
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Its my life!This is
who I am!And you tell me
it does'nt matter!
-Jinny
~~~~~~~
If you want something bad
enough you go after it no
matter what the outcome may be
-My Quote
~~~~~~
"Love beliver
So take the love He's giving to you
A love receiver
Cause everything He's
Promised is true
Love beliver
Listen to the song that I
sing
You are the child of the
King"
-Love Beliver.
~~~~~~~
Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl
(why be a good girl?)she
is a see-saw seeing if it
matters she is a game of
Chutes and Laders.
be a good girl (why be a good girl?)
she needs the one who wrote the definition of
a love without condition
be a good girl.
-Good Girl.

I'm like half dead right now, and don't know what to write, so u can continue.

Come...on! Think...be creative!!!!

okay...i will do a lil more...then u go!!!

Dorctor: Well, we have had cases like this before and it is hard for the family and friends to go through this...

Kate: I understand...

doctor: So...i am sorry! We will try our best!

Casey: You bet ur ass u will!!!

Jin Dad: Casey!!!!!

(Nurses runs out of Jinnys Room)

Nurse: She is awake!!! *confused look on her face*

Doctor: what!?!?

okay...better place now??????

Come on girl! i helped u out and everything!

Sry been so long...I've been half dead and working on other fan fics...

Nurse: She's awake!

Doctor: I'll be right there.

(The nurses go back to Jin's room)

Doctor: I'll keep you posted...Meantime that's a good thing.

Kate: Thanks.

(The doctor leaves, CD and Magda come back in)

CD: So...

Kate: She's awake.

Magda: WHAT???

Kate: She's awake.

CD: Are you serious...

Kate: Hold it, we're talking about Jinny...why would I lie???

Sry been so long...

Nurse: She's awake.

Dr: I'll be right there.

(the nurses leave)

Dr: well I'll keep you posted

(the dr. leaves the room

CD: (she drags Mag back in) well???

Kate: she's awake.

Mag: what?

Kate: she's awake

CD: are you serious?

Kate: I'm talking about one of my inspectors...why would I be joking???

Mag: you gotta point there. Can we see her?

Kate: not yet.

Magda: When adn y not???

Ur turn

okay thanx...

**~Hospital~**

(A cop brings in the kid that shoot Jinny)

Cop: Inspector Rameriz...?

Magda: Yes?

Cop: Is this the kid that shoot ur partner?

Magda: YES...that mother, fathers, sisters, brothers, uncles, cousins, aunts, step-grandma...

CD: (interupts) Thats enought we get it!

Cop: Thanx...

Kid: *yells* I hope that bitch dies! *laughs*

Magda: Yeah, well, i hope u rot in jail!

Kate: MAGDA!

Magda: *looks down*

(Doctor comes out)

Doctor: Um...Jinny is asking to see her Mother first!

Jinnys Dad: Jinny's mother is dead. *questioned look*

Your trun....

(Everyone looks around)

Kate: Well, who could it be?

Jin Dad: I dunno...uh...

(Kate looks at Mag, Mag is lookin at CD, CD lookin at Ange, Ange at cap)

CD: Hey, let's send Mag in, she's her partner and best friend, maybe that's who Jin wants.

Mag: I ain't goin...no way no how.

CD: C'mon Mag, we gotta find out who Jinny is talking about.

Mag: I already said I ain't goin...no way

Kate: Well who could JIn be talkin about???

Ur turn

(Mag goes in)

Magda: Jin?

Jinny: Magda hey!

Magda: Hi, how r u?

Jinny: Great...

Magad: Was it me u wanted to see?

Jinny: Oh, neone would do?

Magda: Jin, are u feeling ok?

Jinny: Yes, why?

Magda: U wanted ur mom and she has been dead for a log time now....

Jinny: I didn't want my mom i said i am going to be a Mom!

Magda: *shocked*

Your turn!!!!

go girl!!!!!!!

Gaw Damnit I hate when yall do this sh** meaning when yall leave fics hangin like this!

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"As any of the local bartenders can tell ya, I'm a sympathetic ear" ~ Jinny Exstead

"Your born and you die pretty much the same person, all the rest is just window dressing" ~ Jinny Exstead

"People...isnt that just the craziest word u ever done heard?" ~ me *LOL*

Sorry...until August 1st I won't be on much so you can add as much as you want including now because I've got to go.