It was early afternoon at the divison. CD Delorenzo and Angela Reide sat at their desks eating a late lunch. Magda walks in an sits at her desk, an angry look on her face.

CD: Ohh.. someone having a bad day?
M: Knock it off, CD. I'm not in the mood.

Just then Jinny Extead stormed into the division.

J: Mag! I SAID I was sorry! Look... I didn't mean to...

M: You know, Jin, forget it ok? (Magda gets up and walks towards the captain's office).

J: What are you doing?! (Jinny gets a look of panic on her face.)

M: Jinny, this isn't working. (Magda looks at Jinny's stricken face). I'm sorry. (Magda knocks on Captain's door and after hearing a "Come in!" she opened the door and walked in)

Jinny stood there watching the door close in her face.

A: Jinny, you ok?

Jinny whirled around and walked out the door to the division angrily.

CD sighed and looked at Angela.

CD: I guess I'd better make sure she's ok.

CD walked out the door and down the stairs to the locker room, looking for Jinny...

YOUR TURN!!!

ooo great start!! heres more

Jinny stormed into to the locker room and angerliy opened her locker and looked around to make sure no one was around. She took out a bottle of tequilla but hidding it in a way..

Just then CD walked and saw Jinny facing her locker..

CD: hey Jinny are you alright, wht just happened between you and magda?

(Jinny trys to stuff the bottle in her locker but CD notices it)

Jinny: uhh ya i am fine*poping piece of gum in her mouth*

CD: Jinny what was that?

Jinny: what was what?

CD: Jinny i am not an idoit, what did you just throw back in your locker, like i did not see..

Jinny: ummm nothing, water, thats all, you see it was nothing...

CD: lemme me see it

SRY that was messed up but once we get rolling it will be better by me~

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

it wasn't messed up! twas good. more:

Jinny slammed her locker door shut so CD couldn't see in it and turned to face her.

J: Look, it's MY locker, ok?!

C: Yeah, but it's in police headquarters!! And besides, if you didn't have anything to hide you wouldn't be so paranoid about it.

Jinny rolled her eyes and stared at CD.

J: Are you gonna leave now?

C: No. Not until you show me what's in your locker!

Jinny got a look of panic on her face and looked down at the ground.

C: Jinny? (CD looked concerned)

J: Look, this is MY locker MY life and MY problem, okay?!?!

Just then, Magda walked in...

YOUR TURN

(sorry it sucked.. lol)

no it doesnt post more soon please!!!!!!!!!

It didnt suck it was AWESOME!!!!!!!! PLEASE ADD MORE VERY SOON!!!!!!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

It doesn't suck! Mooooore.

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(-: Sourbabie :-)

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

"That sugarcane that tasted good. That cinnamon that's Hollywood. C'mon, c'mon, no one can see you cry. . ." - Imitation of Life by REM

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

NO JENN THAT WAS AWESOME!! heres more!
and thanks for the comments http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Just then Magda entered

Magda: You guys what is going on and here and Jin Capt. wants to speak to you in her office

Jinny: damn, nothing is going on here

CD: Jinny has something in here locker that she wont show me..

Magda: Jinny....

Jinny: As I said before, my life, my problems..

*Jinny tries to leave but CD blocks the doorway*

Jinny: Come on' CD get outta the way

CD: I am not leaving till you show whats in your locker..

*Jinny sorta gives a shove to CD*

CD: you did not just do that...


LETS GET READY TO RUMBLE!!! haha sry had to say that...

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

YOU ROCK! k.. here's more:

J: I think i just did.

Jinny tries to manuver her way around CD, but CD grabs Jinny's arm and hold her.

CD: Mag, open her locker.

M: CD... I don't think...

CD looks at Magda and holds Jinny tighter.

CD: Do it, Mag!

Magda looks at Jinny now, who is crying hysterically and screaming "let me go, damnit!" over and over again. Then she opens Jinny's locker and finds the bottle of tequilla.

M: Jin?

Magda looked back at Jinny with disbelief in her eyes.

J: I... I...

Jinny kicks CD just then, throwing her offgaurd and ran out of the locker room, leaving Magda and CD staring after her.

uh-oh theres gonna be troooouuuuble! This is GR8 so please post more really soon!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

Moooooooooore.

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(-: Sourbabie :-)

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

"That sugarcane that tasted good. That cinnamon that's Hollywood. C'mon, c'mon, no one can see you cry. . ." - Imitation of Life by REM

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

omg that was awesome, dont know how i am going to top that wait i am not o well heres more http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Jinny rushes back to her desk

*capt comes out of her office*

Captain: Exstead, can I see you in my office now?

Jinny: In a minuet*says it really mean and pissy voice

Capt.: Exstead, what did you just say? In my office now...

*Jinny takes her coat off the back off her chair and head for the door*

Capt: Exstead I believe my office is this way..

Jinny ignores her and walks right on past CD and Magda for the door...

Magda: Jinny we need to talk..

Jinny: just leave me alone

*CD and Magda sorta follow her and see she gets in her car leaves and capt. just stands there dumbfounded

well that sucked but add more so i can do better next time around..



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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

don't you even tell me that wasn't good! BAH! MORE:


Jinny drove away for a couple blocks not knowing where she was going. She was starting to cry again and it was blurring her vision so she pulled over to the side of the road and cried.

*******

Magda and CD walked back into the Division, CD holding Jinny's bottle of tequilla.

Capt: Alright.. what's going on here?!

M: Captain.. Jinny....

CD: (cutting her off) THIS is what's going on.

CD slammed the bottle down on a nearby desk and crossed her arms. The captain just stared at the bottle and looked up at the ceiling.

Capt: Oh god...

M: It's my fault.. why she did this...

CD: No it's not! Jinny is an alcoholic, Magda! For crying out loud... get her some help.

With that CD walked over to desk and sat down.

Capt: She does need help. I mean... you requesting not to be her partner this morning was because of drinking.

Magda just stared at her captain. All she wanted to do was go and find Jinny.

Capt: Magda.. you said it yourself... she was hungover.

YOUR TURN!!!!! bwhahaha http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

agghh how dare u leave me hanging here!!! k heres more and everyone should read, "the day the world went weird" http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif

Jinny pulled over to the side of the road not know where the heck she was. She was alone-there were no cars around and no house, no nothing. She was balling with tears and wondering at which point did here life come tumbling down...she just sat in her car and her cell started to ring but she just kept crying

(back at the division)

Magda: shes not answering her cell

Capt: should I send people out looking for her?

Magda: I know Jinny, just give her space and eventually she will come back..but capt. whats gonna happen to her?

Capt: she will mostly not get arrested but will be placed in a rehab center and go through counsling...

CD: capt. are you going to fire her?

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

Capt: No... I won't fire her.

Captain sighs and heads back to her office, closing the door after her. Magda looks at CD.

M: Are you happy now?!

CD: WAIT JUST A MINUTE!!! WHAT THE HELL DID I DO?!! It's JINNY who screwed up, not CD!

M: I'm sorry... it's just... I don't want anything to happen to her, is all.

A: So what exactly happened this morning anyway? (Angela wheeled her chair over towards Magda's desk)

Sighing, Magda began to relate the mornings events....

YOUR TURN! heehee http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

okk thanks for leaving me there!

Magda: Well Jinny was suppose to come by and pick me up and drop ben off at school because my care was in the shop and when jinny was here on time i called Gaberial to take ben and me to Jinny cuz i still needed a ride so when we got to Jinny's her apartment was a mess and you could see the scattered bottles of beer and there jinny was lying on the couch asleep and looked like she drank a lot the night before...I had to lie to ben about what was wrong with Jinny and what was in the bottles...I mean we werent on the job and she was disappointing and if she can not even mantain our friendship i did not see how our partnership is gonna work out..

Angela: o my...

CD: that girl has serious problems..

*back to jinny*

she is still driving and has no idea where she is but she decides to call casey

Jinny: hey Casey I have a problem...

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

This is really good you guys! Keep going! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Jo: Partners? You mean 50-50? Uh, 50-50-50-50-50?
Blair: Good, Jo, we'll let you do the books!

If ignorance is bliss, why aren't there more happy people?

Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most.

*^*^*~~~God Bless~~~*^*^*

you MUST be getting me back for previously.. k. here goes:

Casey Exstead sits with the phone to his ear. It was his sister, Jinny, and she sounded upset.

CA: Jinny, what's wrong?

J: I... I don't know where I am.

CA: What's that supposed to mean?

J: Well.. I left work and drove and I don't know where I am... and (starts crying) Casey, I hate my life! (she is sobbing uncontrollably so she can't hear what Casey is saying) What?

CA: Jinny... don't say that, PLEASE?! (Casey is crying too)

J: Ok.. I.. well.. no, I do. And Magda doesn't want me to be her partner... and CD caught me with alcohol at work... and...

CA: (cuts Jinny off) Alcohol at work?? Jin...

J: What!? Are you gonna get on my case too?!

CA: You need help. Admit it.

J: I know. (Jinny hangs up her phone and stares out the window, tears running down her face.)

wow, this is really great! keep going`!!!

Casey calls John

John: ya talk to me..

Casey: John, Jinny needs our help?

John: (shows concern) what, was she shot at again?

Casey: worse she is lost and shes at a point where hates her life and John I dont want her to end up like mom

John: Casey dont bring mom into this but i know what you are saying meet me down at the SFPD, K?

John and Casey enter the SFPD together..

John: where is Jinny?

CD: couldnt tell ya(says it in a mean voice)

Casey: nice to see you too

John: Captain McCafferty are there people looking for Jinny?

Caption: ummm not yet, Magda thought she would come back

Casey: shes lost...

:::Back to Jinny:::

Jinny is crying and called Casey back

Jinny: hey casey you always understood my the best and i want to say thank you for everything, i can take this anymore i am going stop my pain and the pain i am putting i am putting everyone thur...i am gonna miss ya casey and say to everyone i miss them...

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

OMG!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU!!! ::breathes:: k, more:

The answering machine clicks off, Jinny turns off her cell phone, and leans back into the seat. Opening her eyes a minute later, she looks at the gun on the seat next to her.

J: I don't know if I can do this... (she reaches for the gun)

*****
(Back at the SFPD)

Jo: So, what are we going to do?!

CA: Maybe she called me back or something.. let me check my messages.

They all stand there in silence as Casey dials his mailbox number. When Casey gets to Jinny's message, he goes pale and looks at John.

CA: We've GOT to find her... it sounds like she's going to kill herself!

M: Oh my god.

CD: I.. I didn't mean it this morning...

Jo: It's not your fault. Now, let's go.

YOUR TURN! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

This is great! Hurry up and post MORE!

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"You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl."

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Nancy is SLammin'!

Magda: why would she do this? she has so much,and theodore...omg theodore! theodore doesnt know what is going on!

CD: why did i do this it is all my fault

Casey: CD, if you ever are going to listen to John now would be the best time, it is not your fault!

John: you guys lets stop talking and go found her, CD, and magda which way did she go out?

CD: east, like heading torwards Neveda

Caption: ok i will send more officers looking and i will be out my self and notify theodore...

:::back to jinny:::

Jinny picks up the gun and slowly raises it towards her head...

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

Jinny then lowers the gun again. She had done this about 15 times now.

J: I don't even have the guts to kill myself.

::flashback::

Jinny Exstead is 14 and coming home from school. She just had a great day... she had even done well on her test. "I can't wait to tell mom" she thought happily.

Jinny ran up to her mom's bedroom and knocked on the door. Then she heard a gunshot from within. Throwing the door open she saw her mom lying there in a puddle of her won blood and screamed.

::end flashback::

J: AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!

Sweating, Jinny put the gun back down on her seat and then picked it up again.

J: Yeah.. but if i do this I'll see her again. (hold the gun to her head)

**** meanwhile****

John and Casey are driving around in John's car when they spot Jinny's car up the road a little.

Jo: Hold on... i'm gunning it. (John presses on the gas pedal and slams on the breaks next to Jinny's car)

What John and Casey see terrify them. Their sister is sitting in her car with her own gun to her head.

CA: JINNY!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YOUR TURN!!! mwhahahahaha! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Holy Ship!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!! MORE!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

well all, since it's katie's turn, you're going to have to wait cause she's aways for a bit... but have no fear.. she will be back! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

~*~jenn~*~

hey people whats up? im back did u miss me, of course u did, and when i was in Bermuda...i betcha did! ok neways heres more

Casey: Jinny drop the gun, lets talk about this rashonally*sp(cant spell right now sry!)

Jinny(crying): honestly casey what do i have to live for? my life is crumbling at me feet...

John: Jinny do not do that just lower the gun and whatever the problems are im sure we can fix them...

::Jinny isnt listening she still has the gun to her head and crying really hard so john and caset=y jump in the car and try to get the gun away from jinny but in the process a shot is fired and u hear a loud cry::

so you think you can come back and leave me there?! argh! k... here's more:

Casey slumped forward grabbing his shoulder. John had managed to pull the gun away from Jinny's head, but her finger was still on the trigger, and the shock made her shoot.

J: CASEY!!!! Oh no.. what have I done?!?!

Jinny's tears intensified as she rocked back and forth. John grabbed Jinny and slapped her.

Jo: Stop it! We have to help Casey! Now move over and let me drive.

Moving slowly, Jinny went to cradle Casey in her arms.

J: I'm sorry... I'm so sorry..

C: Jin... I'm....

YOUR TURN!!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

and so u still are here and leave me here::imitating u:: sry jk that was great

Casey: Ji..innyy i...ii l..ove u a..nd. i would ne...v..er leave you

Jinny: casey what did i do??! why do i always screw up everything?! first my life then my brothers, i dont deserve to live...

John: Casey, come on buddy we'll geta ya to a hospital and same with jinny

Casey: Jinny i will be o-

::Jinny shakes casey::

Jinny: what happened! he stopped talking!? hes breathing..

John: hold on y'all::speeds up really fast::

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

i REALLY hope I don't ruin your idea, whatever it is. here's more:

When they arrived at the hospital, Jinny ran out of the car with Casey and into the emergency room. Seeing the blood, the nurse behind the receptionist's desk ordered a gurney be brought in right away.

Almost immediately orderlies rushed out and grabbed Casey from Jinny's arms. Jinny was still sobbing hysterically, and when they took Casey away she started to hug herself. Meanwhile, John went over to the receptionist's desk.

Jo: His name is Casey Exstead. That's E-X-S-T-E-A-D. Uh.. his blood type.. uhh.. damn, I don't know!

R: That's ok, we can find out. Now, the best thing to do is have a seat, we'll let you know if anything happens.

Jo: Um.. actually, I'd like to admit my sister into the psychiatric ward... can you tell me how to do that?

R: Well, you CAN do it through here... why exactly? I mean... I'm sure she's distressed about her brother...

John told the nurse the whole story. When he finished, she already had the paperwork ready and was paging the two on-duty psychiatric nurses. When they arrived in the waiting room they went over to Jinny.

N1: Hey... are you Jinny?

Jinny looked up at the kind face behind the white uniform, and nodded. She didn't know what to do. She felt worthless.

N2: Can you come with us?

J: Where are we going?

N2: Just up to the 3rd floor, that's all.

Jinny knew what the third floor was. It was the psychiatric ward. She tore herself away from the nurses hands.

J: DON'T touch me!

N1: I'm afraid we have to bring you up there, Jinny.

Grabbing her, the two nurses, fought back against Jinny's struggles and lead her through the doors.

J: Let me GO!!!! JOHN!!!!!!!!!!!! HELP ME!!!!!!!!!!!


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so u screwed up my idea...well u took it basically! aghhh o well heres more

John: Jinny go on you need the help..

Jinny(kicking and screaming): how could you do this to me?!

Once on the floor at one of the discussion things...

Nurse: Jinny would you like to share anything...

Jinny: I am cop and will arrested all your asses if you dont let me go!

(captains behind her but she doesnt)

Captain: Ex-cop for time being

(Jinny turns around)

Jinny: capt. what the hell are you doing here and are you firing me?

Capt: no i am suspending you and i am here to make sure you dont do anything stupid...

::Back to John and now Magda, CD, and Angela is with him::

Magda: where is Jinny?

::but just then the doctor walks out::

Doctor: Exstead...

i'm SO sorry i took ur idea... but it just proves it was a good one, yah? wow.. i'm just full of it today.. lol. here's more:

John tensed up. Regardless of how Casey chose to live his life, he really did love his brother, and didn't want anything to happen to him.

Jo: Yes?

Dr: Well, Casey is stable. He's conscious again, but he'll have restricted use of his arm for the next month or so. Would you like to see him?

Jo: Yes, thank you.

The Doctor walked away, and John was about to follow him when Magda grabbed John's arm.

M: Where's Jinny?!

Jo: She's... on the third floor.

Magda held her hand to her mouth.

M: That's the psych ward.

Jo: Yeah, well, if you forget, Jinny almost killed herself.

John walked away and headed towards the emergengy room recovery room.

**Psychiatric Ward**

J: I don't belong here!!! I'm not crazy! LET ME GO!!!!!

Capt: Jinny, stop it! They're just going to evaluate you... because you're a suicide risk.

Jinny stared numbly at the Captain after she said that. The word suicide echoed in her mind, and she couldn't let it go.

Capt: Jinny... I remember when I first saw you...

J: Stop it! STOP IT!

Capt: Jinny, do you remember how you felt when your mom killed herself?

Jinny couldn't take it anymore and she started to sob hysterically. The nurses reacted quickly, and within less than a minute a hypodermic needle was being stuck into Jinny's arm. Less than a minute after that, Jinny slumped down in the nurse's arms and they placed her on a gurney.

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Yall this is awesome! PLEASE write more really soon!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

yeah!!!!!!!! c'mon i like this one a lot

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-colleen-
**************
jinny: who in the hell are you?
***************
JO rocks!!!!!!!!
***************
J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
***************
AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo

ok yes very good idea haha great job i will add a little more sorry if i am a bit distracted cuz im watching the red soxs game..bases are loaded 2 outs and Chris Styns is up but pitching change...ok yea neways we have a fan Jenn!


Jo: hey casey how you doing*not knowing really what to say*

Casey:*trys laugh a little* ha ya i am doing great, im in the best condition of my life

Jo: right..

Casey: so where is Jinny?

Jo: third floor..BUT im sure she would be down later after she seduces all the male doctors*trying to make a joke*

Casey: hah right, she could always get whatever she wanted that way..

John: this isnt easy for me, but ur my brother and ill always- uhu..lov ya so get better soon

Casey: thanks

::Back to Jinny::

Captain: Jinny i think we should talk..

Jinny: why does everyone wanna talk bout everything...im screwed i know that but what do they want me to admit that even more..?

Capt:

ok jenn im letting u do the capt. jinny part more cuz im soaking wet from my little neighbors got me soaked with water bucket for plants and water guns..

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

okie dokie http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif
here's more:

C: Jinny, it's not that... it's that I don't think you REALLY know what people think of you.

J: Yeah I do. They think I'm a slut and an alcoholic, and they're right!!

C: No. That's not what they think. They get on your case because they love you.

J: Whatever. Look, will you get me out of here?

C: No.

J: Why not?! Like I said before, I don't deserve this!

C: You NEED this, Jinny.

J: How do you know what I need?!?

Jinny started to get hysterical again, and a nurse walked in. As soon as Jinny saw the nurse, she made herself quiet down. She didn't want another dose of whatever they had given her.

J: I'm fine! Really.

Captain turned to the nurse.

C: She is.

The nurse walked away and Captain turned back to Jinny, giving her a sympathetic look.

C: Jinny, I know you didn't want to talk about this before but...

J: Please.. don't. I... I can't.

C: Jinny...

Jinny's eyes teared up as she thought of her mother. About how beautiful she was, and about how when Jinny was little she used to crawl up on her lap while she read her "The Three Little Pigs." It was her favorite story.

J: I miss her...

YOUR TURN!

i'm having a mental block.

ok what is up? u write so much and i dont o well i dont care, atleast u started the fan fic like i told ya to cuz im smart but ur smart for adding and im not strange i was born with toooooo much sugar in my blood do i remind y'all of daria cuz someone said i did but i dont...

thanks Joanna_Marie or something like that sry forget ur name but thats the basic idea for the idea cuz im stuck with bad ideas and her idea was good, so thanks

Captain: of course you do, she was a great woman, see dont you feel better u said something, wasnt much but hey its a start

Jinny: no i feel like crap

Captain: Ok...

Jinny: I apperciate what people are trying to do by telling me i need help but i dont so if ya dont mind moving im gonna go now

Captain: ya i do mind and if ya want ur badge back ur gonna keep ur a$$ in this ward..

Jinny: I am getting some sleep

Captain: we will discuss this tomorrow

::after everyone is asleep Jinny gets up and says shes gonna see casey and convince some doctor dude::

Jinny: hey casey

Casey: Jinny-wht the heck were you thinking? are you alright...

Jinny: i am sorry i didnt mean to will you ever for give me*breaks down crying*

Casey: Jinny, all i want is for you to be okay..i will be fine

::they embrace each other and after a heart warming convo. Jinny says she has to go but instead of going to the ward on the 3rd floor she finds a window and hops out and somehow(its beyond me) Jinny manages to get to Magdas::

Jinny(knocking):MAGDA!!

Magda: jinny wht the he_x_ (hah h.e. double hockey sticks get it? good movie too) are you doing here?

Jinny: I need your help...please promise to not tell anyone cuz angela will tell cd and cd will tell capton

Magda: Jinny...

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
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Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

this is great!!!!! u can't just leave me like this in suspense!

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"You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl."

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Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!

Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really never had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!

Teddy:God, Jinny

Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop.

Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.....it doesn't change anything... Yeah, that's what I thought!


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"Basically people are who people are. You're born, you die, you're pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing."~Jinny Exstead

Nancy is Slammin'!

M: Jinny! What are you doing here?!

J: I just told you... I need your help.

Magda stared at Jinny wondering what was on her mind. Opening the door wider she let Jinny in.

M: What... do you...

J: Magda, I COULDN'T stay in the psycho ward! I'm not crazy... only crazy people stay there! I... I....

M: Jinny, calm down, ok? I know you're not crazy, but you tried to kill yourself...

J: I know. LISTEN, ok?! I need a place to hide out... please...

M: I can't. I'm taking you back to..

J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifcutting her off) No! Magda, just listen, ok?!

M: No, you listen. Are you aware of what you sound like?!

Jinny looked at Magda confused, then decided it was best to just find her own place to stay. Turning away from Magda she ran down the hallway.

M: JINNY!!! JINNY!!!!!

Magda ran after Jinny, but when she got outside her apartment building, Jinny was nowhere to be found.

YOUR TURN!!!

M: o Great Captains going really like this one...

::calls caption and wakes her up::

Captain: what...

M: we have a problem..

Caption: wht..

M: JINNYS GONE!!!!!!!!!

::Caption jumps up::

Captain: Ok call CD and Angela and John and met me at the Division

::Jinny is wandering the streets when she passes by the bar and decideds to go in::

Jinny: give me some of your hardest stuff

Bartender: Jinny nice to see you again

::After a lot of drinks and Jinny is fallen-down drunk CD passes by the bar and spots Jinny::

omg! grr.. k... here's more:

CD walked into the bar and over to where Jinny was sitting... or, barely sitting.

CD: Jinny?

Jinny turned around and fell off her stool. Catching her, CD sighed and hoisted her into her arms.

J: CD.... You're tall....

CD: Yes Jinny, I am. Now you're going back to the hospital.

J: Ok...

Jinny passed out in CD's arms. Walking over to a booth, she sat Jinny down and called the Captain, letting her know that she found Jinny and was bringing her back to the hospital.

CD: Ok.. come on... let's go.

CD lifted Jinny once again and carried her to her car.

***At the hospital***
The nurses were waiting for Jinny when CD brought her in, and so was John. When he saw his sister, he started to crumble. John had never been the one to have emotions, epecially ones that would make you cry, but he knew his sister was in trouble and he couldn't do anything to help her.

YOUR TURN.

sorry it was so short, but i couldn't think after i wrote mine.

Captain: CD thanks for finding her

: http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gifoctors come out::

Doctor: she is being taken in for her stomach to be pumped because she comsumed a very large amount of alcohal, she will need to be watched for a couple days then be transfered too floor 3

Captain: thank you

Angela: why does Jinny do this to her self, why?

Magda: no one knows why Jinny does wht she does, i dont even know if she knows

::a couple hours later a doctor comes out::

Doctor: Exstead..

EVERYONE: YES!?

Doctor: she is very weak, but she is fine, she can have visitors now

Magda: Captain since John isnt in any condition to see her right now why dont you go in

::In Jinnys room::

Captain: we need to talk

Jinny: listen ive told you before there is nothing to talk about..

Captain: no you listen, ive had it up to here(holds up hand)with you, you a great cop and a great person but no one can see that if you dont solve your problems or at least try..

k, here's more:

J: I DID try to solve them! If John and Casey hadn't of found me, I would have.

K: Jinny, don't say that. You know you don't really want to be dead.

J: How do you know, huh?! How can you possibly know?!

The yelling that Jinny was doing made her tired, and she slumped back against the bed again. Tears sprang to her eyes as she, looked away from the Captain. The truth was, she knew she needed help. She even wanted it. But it was SO hard.

K: Fine Jinny, have it your way. I'll send Magda in.

As the Captain was leaving, Jinny was still thinking and was lost in thought when her partner came in.

M: Hey Jin. How ya doin?

Jinny turned to Magda and saw the sincere look in her eyes. That look alone made Jinny feel guilty for what she had done these past few days... and these past few years. Attempting to smile, Jinny grabbed for Magda's hand and pulled her closer.

J: Not so good. But... Magda.... I... I want to get help.

Now that she said it, Jinny was scared. She looked into Magda's face again and saw what she thought was a look of some kind of joy.

M: Jin, that's great. You do know, however, that you'll have to.. go back up to...

J: Yeah, I know. But I want to.

Magda's smile was from ear to ear. She leaned over and hugged Jinny tightly. Standing back up, she smiled again.

M: It's gonna be alright....

YOUR TURN!

awesome job girl!!! girlssssssssssssss just wanna have fun~!!! ok thats my song*cindy* heres ur song, music makes people come together...ok nvm im ok!

Jinny: hey mag, can you loosen up a little your cutting off my cirulationg*laughs a little*

Magda:*laughs a little 2* but shes crying, i am sooo proud of you Jinny

Jinny: so does this mean when i come back we are still partners?

Magda: only under one condition

Jinny: what-

Magda: as long as your the kick ass, take no prisoners version

Jinny: of course, what else would i be? *they hug*

::CD comes in and Magda leaves after Magda talks to CD in the hall for a minuet::

CD: soooo what were u saying a couple weeks ago people cant change, well ms. exstead you have just proven your self wrong, i have known you for a while and maybe dont always agree with everything you do but this is one thing i will support 110% and you ever need anything call..

Jinny: k thanks CD, i will

CD: o ya please let me know in advance-i gota get this on tape, Jinny asking ME for help

*they laugh and hug then Angela comes in*

Angela: hey Jinny

Jinny: hey angela

Angela: how you doing

Jinny: better, know that i know people can change thanks to CD

Angela: she also prove you wrong

Jinny: ya

Angela: dont you hate it when that happens

::they laugh and hug and John comes in::

John: i was worried

Jinny: thanks

John: dont do anything stupid like this again, ko?

Jinny: ko

John: ya, you know that i am not very good with this emoitional crap but i am worried bout you and if you ever need anything just call and ill be there for ya got it sis?

Jinny: ya old' bro

::they hug and a few days later captain comes in to take Jinny up to the 3rd floor::

ur turn! sry if that was bad~im not good with "normal" lol


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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
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I'm jaded and judgemental, and you wonder why
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Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

k, here's more, sorry it took so long....

Jinny sat watching television when there was a knock at her hospital door, glancing up, she saw someone she never expected to see.

J: Teddy... I...

T: Hey Jinny.

Teddy smiled uneasily as he walked a little farther into the room. He hadn't seen Jinny since they had broken up a week before this whole thing started, and he didn't know what to say.

J: Uh.. come in, sit down...

T: Ok. So.. um.. Jinny, how's things?

J: Things? Things are... ok. I mean, these wackos put me on meds and my roomate is schizophrenic... literally... but other than that, just fine and dandy.

Teddy could sense the sarcasm in Jinny's voice and laughed. He missed her so much. Looking at her laying in her bed, he smiled to himself. 'She's getting help' he thought.

T: Well.. great to hear. So when you getting out?

Jinny frowned. She didn't know when she was getting out, but she hoped it was soon. She knew she had to do this though, and sighed.

J: Who knows. But... Teddy... why are you here?

YOUR TURN!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

sry i didnt add more last night bcuz i let my bro go on my comp and i couldnt move my legs cuz i rode my bike for like 20 miles(in all together..not all at once) then me and my "friend"(hes bachelor number 2) went walking round town, then after mini golf me and my friend scooted to 7/11(at which a starbucks frapaccino thing exploded over..classic) but neways thats nough of my excuses and heres more

Teddy: uhh...i was to make sure you were ok..

Jinny: ya well im just dandy as you can tell..

Teddy: ya thought so

Jinny: that isnt the only reason you can here was it?

Teddy: how would you no? ya uhh.. your right

Jinny:thought so..

Teddy: Jinny i need to ask you something..

Jinny: shoot

::Teddy just stared in her eyes for a minuet, gosh how he missed her so much, he missed everything about her, even down to her sarcasism, that just made her turn me on even more but now we will know if its ment to be or not::

Teddy: Jinny i know you were drunk and proabley couldnt think about what you were doing and i need to know do you love me..

Jinny: Teddy..

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~"I'm jaded and judgemental. I can't imagine why."
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Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

k... here's more:

J: Teddy... I... I do. But that doesn't matter, you don't deserve me.

T: Jinny... don't say that! You're getting help... things can work....

Tears welled up in Jinny's eyes and she smiled at Teddy. Only a great guy like him could forgive her. Looking into his eyes, she knew that she really did love him... she never stopped.

J: I... I know... but only if you want them to....

T: I do! Jinny... let's start over, ok?

Getting up and walking towards Jinny's bed, Teddy reached out his hand and grabbed hers, squeezing it. A tear sprang to his eye, and he smiled.

Then a nurse walked in carrying a paper cup. Smiling, she walked over to Jinny. "Here you go Jinny" she said, handing her the cup.

Jinny got a panicked look in her eyes and glanced up at Teddy. Taking the cup, she placed the medicine contained in it in her mouth and took the water that the nurse gave her. Swallowing, she smiled weakly at the nurse.

J: Teddy...

YOUR TURN http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

k heres more and i think ill add more spice to it? and is ne1 reading it?

Jinny: Teddy i love you, i just dont want you to leave me when you realize that you deserve much better then me..

Teddy: Jin-hun, shush i love and from the moment that met i knew there was something inside of you that i could never forget, dont say im like the other few, ive opened up my heart and now the rest is up to you..

Jinny: Theodore i love you!

Teddy: you called me theodore..

Jinny: thats ur name isnt it?

::Magda knocks on the open door::

Magda: hey Jin can i come in, we need to talk

Teddy: k, jin hun i ttyl, love ya

Jinny: ya, teddy, i love...you

Magda:*standing there in shock..and thinking well jinnys different, shes been open with him in front of me, people can change*Hey Jin how you feeling?

Jinny: great i am glad ive got people-

::all of a sudden jinny stops and turns ice cold and looks helpless and knocked unconsince(sp..told ya M i sucked at spellin)::

Magda: Jinny??! wake up? please...tell me this is some sick practicle joke, DOCTOR!?

Doc: wht happened

Magda: she like just stopped..wht thats not suppose to happen shes not sick sick, shes sick but not really shes getting help, but why is she do this? she was in any life theartening position...?

Doc: m'am could you please wait outside

Magda: i think not, i am a cop of the SFPD, and i am exersizing my right to be in here

Doc: miss please..

ok u take over from here!



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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~
"I'm jaded and judgemental. I can't imagine why."
**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

why did u leave me there?!

Two orderlies rush into the room to drag Magda out of the room. Even though she is screaming that she's a police officer they don't listen to her. Then the nurse that administered Jinny's medication comes in wringing her hands.

N: Doctor... oh no... I gave her the wrong meds. They were Sara Richman's fast acting sedatives... I... I don't know how I...

D: Forget HOW... I need rescussition (see C, I suck too lol) equipment in here STAT.

The nurse ran out of the room, wondering how she could have done such a stupid thing. Reaching the nurses station she paged the emergengy medic crew for the ward and within a minute they were in Jinny's room.

*****
Magda sat the ward waiting room wondering what happened to Jinny. She wasn't SICK. She was just... well... recovering. Magda hated to use the words Depressed and Alcoholic. It made her stomach flip.

YOUR TURN! (hope i didn't ruin ur idea)

AHHH! I... need... more... fic... before... go crazy... Oh, wait! It's too late for that! I'm reading it! This is awesome! More soon plz!

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This is K the Off Topic Sidekick Trainee saying Good night, have a good morning, don't smoke, buckle up, drive safely, and always go off topic!

Oh my gawd!!!! This fic reminds me of ER! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!

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I LOVE it YOU better post more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SOON;o)

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Its my life!This is
who I am!And you tell me
it does'nt matter!
-Jinny
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If you want something bad
enough you go after it no
matter what the outcome may be
-My Quote
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"Love beliver
So take the love He's giving to you
A love receiver
Cause everything He's
Promised is true
Love beliver
Listen to the song that I
sing
You are the child of the
King"
-Love Beliver.
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"Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl
(why be a good girl?)she
is a see-saw seeing if it
matters she is a game of
Chutes and Laders.
be a good girl (why be a good girl?)
she needs the one who wrote the definition of
a love without condition
be a good girl."
-Good Girl.