"All for You" (Part 1)

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-In Jinny's Apartment-

Jinny: "No Teddy, don't leave me! Don't go! Teeeedddddddddyyyyyyyyy!"

She wakes up screaming with tears streaming down her face.


-At the Division-

Cap: "We've got a new case, Exstead and Ramirez. A homicide; male, age 52, gunned down in his meat shop. We've got a witness.... should be a piece of cake."

Jin and Mag leave.

-At the meat shop-

After seeing the crime scene, they talk to the witness.

Witness: "Well, I was getting ready to go in to pick up my order, when I heard a gun shot. Then a man ran out the side door."

Jinny: "Did you get a good look at the guy?"

Witness: "Sure."

Magda: "Could you work with a scetch artist?"

Witness: "Yeah."

-Back at the Division-

Jinny: "Some prints came in off the body. He tried to gag him and then shot him. His name is Antonino Shanbwa."

Magda: "Well, let's get this guy in for questioning."

Jinny: "And why would he want to hurt this Mr.Green? But let's get lunch first."


-On the way to lunch, in the car-

Magda: "I'll have someone check and see if this guy's got a record."

Jinny: "OK... Mag, can we talk?"

Magda: "About the case?"

Jinny: "No... something else."

Jin gives a look.

Magda: "Oh.. you mean about Teddy Dearest?"

Jinny: "Yeah, well... it's just that I've been having dreams about him. Crazy dreams...."

Magda raises eyebrows

Magda: "Oh....."

Jinny: "No... recently Teddy's been shot, he's left me, he's died, and a bunch of other stuff. Mag, what does it all mean?"

Magda: "Well, I think you're afraid of losing Theodore."

Jinny: "What? No way." laughs

Magda shakes her head and sighs.

Magda: "Jin, you're in love, and you're affraid of loosing the best guy you've ever found...."


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How do you like it so far? I promise it get's better!


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I love it! Great start! post more soon.

I Love it.Post more soon;o)

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Its my life!This is
who I am!And you tell me
it does'nt matter!
-Jinny
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If you want something bad
enough you go after it no
matter what the outcome may be
-My Quote
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"Love beliver
So take the love He's giving to you
A love receiver
Cause everything He's
Promised is true
Love beliver
Listen to the song that I
sing
You are the child of the
King"
-Love Beliver.
~~~~~~~
Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl
(why be a good girl?)she
is a see-saw seeing if it
matters she is a game of
Chutes and Laders.
be a good girl (why be a good girl?)
she needs the one who wrote the definition of
a love without condition
be a good girl.
-Good Girl.

[This message has been edited by jo_24 (edited 07-10-2001).]

Ooh great post more! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Lisa :rotflmao:

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http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word of advice for you--Read-- its the best thing to do to get you further in life and because my english teacher would kill me if I didnt mention reading :lol:

awesome post more soon http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Definitely post more!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

"That sugarcane that tasted good. That cinnamon that's Hollywood. C'mon, c'mon, no one can see you cry. . ." - Imitation of Life by REM

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"All for You" (part 2)


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-Jinny's apartment-

Theodore and Jinny are watching a movie. Lights are low.


Teddy: "You know what, Jin?"

Jinny: "What?" she smiles.

Teddy: sarcasticaly "I kinda like you."

Jinny: sarcasticaly "I kinda like you too."

Teddy: "What I really mean is.... I love you..."

Jinny: "I love you too..."

they kiss.

Jinny thinking: I know why I'm afraid of loosing him! How could I not see it before?

-later that night-

Teddy has left. Jin sits on the bed thinking and crying. She holds a brochure in her hand.
After a few minutes she picks up the phone and dials.

Woman: "Hello."

Jinny: "Yes, my name is Jinny Exstead, and I'd like to sign up for your evening class."

Woman: "Which one?"

Jinny: "The... the... the alcholol abuse program."


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Sorry so short- I'll post the 3rd part later! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif


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"You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl."

Nancy is SLammin'!

awesome!! cant wait for the third part!

ahhh! this is awesome!

~*~jenn~*~

I love it!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Its about time she got help.LOL.
Post more soon;o)

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Its my life!This is
who I am!And you tell me
it does'nt matter!
-Jinny
~~~~~~~
If you want something bad
enough you go after it no
matter what the outcome may be
-My Quote
~~~~~~
"Love beliver
So take the love He's giving to you
A love receiver
Cause everything He's
Promised is true
Love beliver
Listen to the song that I
sing
You are the child of the
King"
-Love Beliver.
~~~~~~~
Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl
(why be a good girl?)she
is a see-saw seeing if it
matters she is a game of
Chutes and Laders.
be a good girl (why be a good girl?)
she needs the one who wrote the definition of
a love without condition
be a good girl.
-Good Girl.

FINALLY! Jinny's going 2 rehab! Post some more when ya get the chance!

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Jo: Partners? You mean 50-50? Uh, 50-50-50-50-50?
Blair: Good, Jo, we'll let you do the books!

If ignorance is bliss, why aren't there more happy people?

Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most.

*^*^*~~~God Bless~~~*^*^*

"All for You" (Part 3)

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-The next morning-

Jinny and Magda are at their desks.

Magda: "Guess what."

Jinny: "What?"

Magda: "Turns out this Mr.Shanbwa has a record. He did time for dealing drugs."

Jinny: "Well, let's go talk to him."

-In the Interogation Room-

Mr.Shabwa: "I'm telling ya, I didn't shoot mo guy in a meat store."

Magda: "Then why did the witness pick you out of the line-up?"

Mr.Shabwa: "I dunno. Maybe they was trippin'."

Jinny: "Well, we know you made quite a few people be trippin'."

Mr.Shanbwa: "What?"

Magda: "We know you sold drugs."

-That evening at the Clinic-

Hostest: "Now, as I go around the room, please state your name and why your here."

Man: "John Luke. My wife said she'll leave me if I don't stop drinking."

Everyone continues to state their name and their reason for coming. Then it's Jinny's turn.

Jinny: "I'm Jinny Extead, and um... um... I can't do this!"

Jinny runs out, leaving her coat.

-30 minutes later-

Jinny realizes she's left her leather jacket. "I can't do this," she thinks. "Yes, I can. Oh, I'm not sure!"

She walks back in the room.

Hostess: "Jinny, I see you're back."

Jinny: "Well, you see, I just came for my jacket..."

Hostess interupts: "Jinny, it's OK. Everyone is here for the same reason. Try it again."

Jinny sits down. "Well, as you know I'm Jinny Exstead, and I have a drinking problem...."

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Sorry so short! How ya like it? Get's better!

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"You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl."

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Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

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Nancy is SLammin'!

Getting closer and closer to lil flames if you don't already have some! I'm just helpin'! Gr8 story! Post more soon, please!

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"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps not record of wrong doings. Love does not delight in evil, but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres."
1 Corinthians 13: 4-7

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"El amor es paciente, el amor es amable. No envidia, no se jacta, no es orgulloso. No es grosero, no es de buscar auto, no es enojado fácilmente, mantiene no registro de la injusticia hace. El amor no se deleita en la mal, pero en rejoices con la verdad. Siempre protege, siempre confianza, siempre esperanzas, siempre perseveres." 1 Corinthians 13: 4-7

†ß† Kenzie †ß†

I'll help ya get some flames! lol This is great! Post some more soon! Please?

You better post more.I really hope that in this story and the season finle of The Division That she gets help.I love it MORE
NOW Oh Um...Please;o)

Pleaze post some more!!!

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Lisa

Check out my 'New and Improved' Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

Jinny and Theodore Will Always Be Forever In Our Hearts....

Thanks for all the kind words! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif Here's part 4! Sorry this one is so short!

"All for You" (Part 4)

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-A few days later, at the Division-

Magda: "Jinny, good you're here! We found out why Mr.Shanbwa killed Mr.Green. Seem's Mr.Green loved to gamble, and he owed Antonio quiet alot of money. That's why Antonio sold drugs before, because he lost a bet. This time, it was Mr.Green's turn to pay."

Jinny: "Let's get a warrent and go pick him up."

-Later, at Mr.Shanbwa's apartment-

Jinny and Magda: "Freeze, SFPD!"

There stood Antonio packing his bags, ready to run from the cops. Jinny screamed: "Put you're hands in the air!" Antonio hopped out of the window, and started running. Magda and Jinny followed. Jinny finally caught up with him.
She tackeled and handcuffed him.

Magda: "Murder and resisting arrest. Looks like you'll be spending a while in jail."

Mr.Shanbwa turned to Jinny and whispered in her ear,"You better watch your back."

-At the Anchorside Bar-

Magda and Jinny are celebrating the case.

Magda: "Only one drink, Jinny? Are you feeling ok?"

Jinny: "Mag, I have something serious to tell you."

Magda: "Jin, are you pregnate?"

Jinny: "No! Come on!"

Magda: "Then what?"

Jinny: "Magda, you know when you said I was affraid of loosing Theodore? Well, I thought about it, and I know why I'm so affraid that he'll leave me. The drinking. I've been going to an alchohal abuse program. We're supposed to bring out best friend to the last day, and... will you come with me?"

Magda (really shocked): "Jin, that's wonderful! Sure, I'll come with you! Teddy must be shocked!"

Jinny: "He... um...."

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Only 1 more part left! (And maybe a sequel!) Is anyone still reading this?


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"You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl."

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Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

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Nancy is SLammin'!

I'm still reading it! Please post more soon!!


~Steph

Yep Still reading.MORE NOW!!!!Please;o)

(First day of Advanced Band, Mrs. G asked us our names...)
D: My name is Danielle, I play trumpet, and I... I'm a band student! (Looks down in mock shame.)
K: My name is Kenzie, I play clarinet, and I... I can't do this!!! (Bursts into real tears... *We'd been working on tears*)
B: My name is Ben (stands up on chair.) And I'm Emporer of the world!!! (At this time, Mrs. G. falls off her stool.)

Sorry, just thought I'd like to add that, and I'm suprised that she didn't put it... I'm gonna miss band!!!!! WAAHHHH!!! OMG, EXCELLENT STORY!!!!! You've gotta put more soon!!!!!!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif pwease?

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~*Danielle, Muldrow Quiz Bowl Captain*~

"All for You" (Part 5)

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-Jinny and Teddy are at a fancy restaurant, celebrating their 6 month anniversary-

Teddy raises his glass for a toast

Teddy:"To the most beautiful woman I know."

Jinny:"Oh, Theodore."

They hit glasses.

Teddy:"Jinny, are you ok? You've barely touched your wine."

Jinny:"Teddy, I went to an alcohol abuse program. I was so affraid of... losing you."

Teddy:"Jin, that's great! But, you'll never lose me."

They share a pasionate kiss.
Teddy drops a fork on purpose, and gets on one knee.

Teddy:"Jinny, you mean the world to me. I was going to ask you this regardless if you had gone through the program then or not.... we could've worked through it, together."

Jinny:"Teddy..."

Teddy:"Jin, I love you with all my heart. Will you marry me?"

Jinny:"Of course!"

They kiss, and he slips the pricey ring on her finger.

-The Wedding-

Magda is the maid of honor and CD and Angela are bridesmaids. Casey is a groomsman. Everyone has entered except Jinny. Then the music starts... Teddy looks back...Jinny is walking up the aisle, escorted by her father. Jinny is crying. The wedding procedes as planned. Jinny recites the vows. Preist says this before Jin.

Jinny: I Jinny, take you Theodore, to be my lawfully wedded husband. To have and to hold, from this day forward, for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health, to love and to cherish, and forsaking all others, until death do us part....

-Later-

Teddy: "With this ring, I the wed."


~*~~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*THE END*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Did you like it? Should there be a sequel or not?


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"You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl."

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Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!

Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really never had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!

Teddy:God, Jinny

Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop.

Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

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"You're born, you die, you're pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing."~Jinny Exstead

Nancy is Slammin'!

Is anyone still reading this? If so, you need to reply back!

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"You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl."

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Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!

Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really never had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!

Teddy:God, Jinny

Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop.

Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

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"You're born, you die, you're pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing."~Jinny Exstead

Nancy is Slammin'!

YEAH please write more please!!!!

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-colleen-
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jinny: who in the hell are you?
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JO rocks!!!!!!!!
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J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
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AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo

I-I... can't do this! (Bursts into tears.)

That was sooooo funny! Anyway, I http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/heart.gif'ed it! Yes, there should be a sequel!

Loved it, and a sequel would be great!

ok my name is jesse and i am no terrified kenzie and danielle..runs for cover...haha sry

awesome!!!!cant wait for sequal~!

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
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Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

Thanks for all the kind words! I know it was funny at the end, but I had to end it! LOL! I'm not sure about a sequel anymore. I need new ideas- email me! ladyb_jo_24@hotmail.com

Thanks a bunch!

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"You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl."

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Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!

Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really never had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!

Teddy:God, Jinny

Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop.

Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

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"You're born, you die, you're pretty much the same person. All the rest is just window dressing."~Jinny Exstead

Nancy is Slammin'!