Backround Info:
Jinny abd Teddy are still together, and living with each other and also engaged
Magda got married to gabriel and Ben's also doing really well
CD and her husband Bailey are doing really well
Angela and her fiance Peter are also doing well Kate is still dating her boyfriend Tom
-I haven't watched the show for a long time so I just made up a lot of characters-

M: Hey everyone are you all ready for Christmas....I'm so excited
J:yeah yeah, alright shut up Mrs. Cheerful!
M:You're in a good mood....what's wrong with you
CD:Yeah what's wrong with you?
J:I don't know what to get Teddy, I'm not good with these gift giving stuff, and being nice.....uhhhh
A:don't worry as long at it comes from the heart and you put thought into it he'll love it!
J: Alright thanks
(Kate walks in)
K:Are you all ready for the Christmas party, have you all done what I've told you to do?
J,M,CD,A: yeah!!!
K: Alright just checking! You all can go home now, you're shifts are over
j: Thank god! Bye everyone
M:Yeah byebye (They leave together)
M: Are you ready for party at Teddy's house?
J: Yeah I guess, but considering I'd rather die than go there!
M http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifLaughs) I'm sure it can't be that bad, what did you get him, to give to him tonight
J:I got him a colateral (SP) ring, I don't know if he's going to like it, but I still have to get him stuff for Christmas day......I hate shopping, you just wanna buy him something?
M:no Way but I'll go out with you tomorrow, and we can look for something
J:Alright thanks Mag (They both go to their cars)
(Back in office)
CD:Jinny semms really uptight
A;Yeah I don't think she likes all these family events cause she never really had a family
CD: Yeah I do feel bad for her, she's so nice, she just doesn't want to let it out
A:Yeah oh well
(Jinny arrives home, and is opening the door)
J:Teddy......Teddy are you home
T:Yeah Hun....I'm in the bed room
(Jinny walks towards the bedroom, and sees Teddy watching TV, and he's already dressed and ready to go)
J:Hey Sweetie (They share a qucik kiss)
T:Hey, hun, how waas your day??
J:It was good.......not bad
T:Well hurry up and get dressed so we can go hun
J:Alright (Jinny leave to go in the shower) (You hear the shower going, and Teddy is still watching Tv laying down on the bed)
(Go to Magda, walks in her house)
M:Hey Gab
G;hey how was you day hun
M: Good Good
B:Hey Mommy
M;hey Sweetie how was school today
B:It was good Mom......I got an A on my math test!
M:Oh good job.....also remember we're going to the Christmas party at the station tomorrow
G;How could i forgot you tell me everyday!
M:Sorry I'm excited
(Back at Jinny's, she walks out of the bathroom, with a kahki skirt, and a black sweater, and a towel wrapped around her head)
J:Teddy Hun, Im almost done (Then she sees him sleeping)(So she lightly kisses him)
T:I'm awake, I sware!
J:haha, I'm just gonna dry my hair, and then we can leave (Jinny comes out 5 minutes later) K, I'm done!
T:Wow that was quick, but we still have about 1/2 hour before we have to go, you wanna watch some Tv with me??
J: sure....she lies down with him on the bed, and they watch friends.


-What do you think of it sooo far??

This is good! KEEP GOIN'!

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²Tiffany²

Teddy: You all set for tomorrow night?
Jinny: I have my bullet proof vest polished if that's what you mean.
Teddy: Come on, Jinny.
Jinny: Oh, yes. Actually... I bought a dress.
Teddy: You did?
Jinny: There is no guarantee, however, that I am going to wear it.
Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: What's this dress look like anyway?
Jinny: Oh, yeah, OK. Low cut, skin tight, animal print, ruffle at the bottom. Don't you have lawyering to do?

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, this is my family!!!! Come on, it's your turn. Go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter!

A day with Blair is like walking up San Juan Hill. Every time you turn around she's yelling CHARGE!
~Jo Polniaczek

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Write more, girl, this thing gotta get done! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif Aah, the power of fanfics...

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers... Boy, I bet they tasted awful!

I'm a blonde babe that can beat boys at basketball, no prob!

~*Danielle*~
<3 y'all!

This is really good!!! Keep goin'!

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Luff,
NmRoX
[But you can just call me Jinny Exstead]

JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!!

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D :p

Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

MUST write more...and soon! I can't take the suspense!!!

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Nancy: I'm drawn to very flawed characters, because I have so many myself. And my friends are my friends because they seem to look beyond these flaws and love me anyway.

"War doesn't decide who's right, just who's left." -Source Unknown

alrighty here's a little more!
(At Magda's house, it's dinner time)
M:So Ben you excited about christmas?
B: Yep I sure am, and since I was really good this year do you think I could get a lot of present
G: Why are you asking us, you should be asking Santa
B:How old do you think I am, of course you guys get me the present and write from santa, duuuhhhhh!
M:hahah yeah I keep on forgeting you're growing up, I remember holding you in my arms right after you were born, it was the best day
B:Oh Mom!
M:Well it was
G: Hun this chicken is really good!
M: Thanks, and I rented a movie for after dinner if you wanna watch it?
B:Which one?
M:Miss Congeniality
G: Oh that looks really good
B: It's a girly movie, isn't it
G: Not really it's suppose to be really funny
(They finish and go to the couch after they clean the dishes, and start watching the movie)
(Back at Jinny and Teddy's)
J:haha that was really funny, I love that Chandler Bing he's so funny!
T:yeah he is, alrighty, hun we have to leave now
J:Why don't we watch some more TV
T:Jin, no we have to leave in order not to get there to late
J:Fine, but I'm bringing my bullet proof vest cause your whole family will be there!
T:You'll be fine
J:well remember what happened last time I met your parents, it wasn't very pretty
T: yeah I know, lol, but it'll be better cause I'll stay right with you the whole time,and I won't let you go, k sweetie
(They leave and get in the car, and Jinny turns on the radio)(Hanging by a moment by life House comes on)
(Jinny looks over at Teddy and Teddy looks at Jinny, you can tell they're in love)
(Lyrics)
*There's been for a changin Starving for the truth I'm closer then where I started I'm chasing after you I'm falling even more in love with you letting go of all I've held onto I'm standing here until you make me move I'm hanging by a moment here with you for getting all I'm lacking completley and complete, I'll take your invitaion, you take all of me, I'm fallin even more in love with you letting go of all I've held onto I'm standing here until you make me move I'm hanging by a moment here with you, there's nothing else to loose there's nothing else to find, there's nothing in ,the world that can change my mind, there is nothing else, there is nothing else, there is nothing else, I'm fallin even more in love with you holding onto all I've held onto I'm standing here until you make me move hanging by a moment here with you*
T:Jinny hunny, I'm here for you
J:Thanks Teddy, I'm here for you too
(They finally pull up to Teddy's parents house)(They both get out of the car)
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gifo I look alright
T: No you don't look alright.... you look amazing!
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifBlushs) thanks sweetie (gives him a quick kiss) as ready as I'll ever be
T: Alright lets go in
J:K,(They hold hands as they knock on the door)
TeddysMom:Why Hello, Teddy (gives him a kiss)
and Hello Jinny (give her a hug, and you can tell Jinny feels out of place when so goes in)
(Teddy and Jinny are still holding hands, and he introduces Jinny to everyone)

-How is it.....be honest.......also sorry fans of CD and Angela, and kate, they're really not going to be in this that much

OMG! Type more now, I'm dying to know what happens. You're a great writer.

(Jinny and Teddy are sitting on the couch talking to one another)
T:So far so good
j:yeah
T:I told you it wasn't going to be that bad
J:Yeah it actually hasn't been that bad
T:I'm really thristy, do you want a drink
J:Sure
T:What do you want
J:Um I don't know suprise me
T:alright, I'll be back in just a minute
(Teddy hasn't left Jinny's side the whole night, so Jinny gets a little nervous)
(Teddy's sister Nikki sits down next to Jinny)
N:Hey you must be Jinny
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifa little nervou) Yeah that's me
N:I'm Nicole Teddy's sister, but everyone calls me Nikki
J:Nice to meet you (gets a little more at ease)
N: So you're the cop....what's it like being a cop....is it like always suspenseful, and stuff
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.giflaughs a little) yeah it is, I really love my job, and I work with a lot a great people, and my best friend
N http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh that must be fun......so are you and Teddy going to be visiting your family as well?
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifGets a sad look) umm....no we're not
(Nikki sees this and quickly changes the subject)(Teddy comes back)
T:Hey Nikki, get lost
N:Bite Me (Nikki leaving) Nice meeting you byebye Jinny, Bye jerkface (waves good bye)
T: don't mind my annoying sister
J:No she's nice

(Jinny and Teddy are sitting on the couch talking to one another)
T:So far so good
j:yeah
T:I told you it wasn't going to be that bad
J:Yeah it actually hasn't been that bad
T:I'm really thristy, do you want a drink
J:Sure
T:What do you want
J:Um I don't know suprise me
T:alright, I'll be back in just a minute
(Teddy hasn't left Jinny's side the whole night, so Jinny gets a little nervous)
(Teddy's sister Nikki sits down next to Jinny)
N:Hey you must be Jinny
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifa little nervou) Yeah that's me
N:I'm Nicole Teddy's sister, but everyone calls me Nikki
J:Nice to meet you (gets a little more at ease)
N: So you're the cop....what's it like being a cop....is it like always suspenseful, and stuff
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.giflaughs a little) yeah it is, I really love my job, and I work with a lot a great people, and my best friend
N http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh that must be fun......so are you and Teddy going to be visiting your family as well?
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifGets a sad look) umm....no we're not
(Nikki sees this and quickly changes the subject)(Teddy comes back)
T:Hey Nikki, get lost
N:Bite Me (Nikki leaving) Nice meeting you byebye Jinny, Bye jerkface (waves good bye)
T: don't mind my annoying sister
J:No she's nice

This is sooooo great! POST MORE SOON!

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²Tiffany²

Teddy: You all set for tomorrow night?
Jinny: I have my bullet proof vest polished if that's what you mean.
Teddy: Come on, Jinny.
Jinny: Oh, yes. Actually... I bought a dress.
Teddy: You did?
Jinny: There is no guarantee, however, that I am going to wear it.
Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: What's this dress look like anyway?
Jinny: Oh, yeah, OK. Low cut, skin tight, animal print, ruffle at the bottom. Don't you have lawyering to do?

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, this is my family!!!! Come on, it's your turn. Go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter!

A day with Blair is like walking up San Juan Hill. Every time you turn around she's yelling CHARGE!
~Jo Polniaczek

IM me using AOL: NancysBiggestFan
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pluh-leaze post more now!!!!

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Luff,
NmRoX
[But you can just call me Jinny Exstead]

JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!!

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D :p

Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

ya HAVE to post more and SOOOOON!!

(Teddy's mom comes over to the two)
TM: Hey you two, are you doing??
J:very good
T: yes, very well mom
TM: so Jinny are you going to your parents house for a party or something of that nature
J:Umm...no actually we're not
TM http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh why, doesn't your mom cook home made Christmas Dinners
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifjinny getting a little teary eyed) umm.... no she doesn't
TM http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh that's a shame
T: Ummm..... mom can we drop this
TM: I'm sure if you would like too
T: Sweetie you wanna put on the radio, lets listen to some christmas music to get you in a better mood (They walk to the radio and Teddy turns the sation-The Christmas Shoes Song comes on)
(Lyrics)
*It was almost Christmas time, there I stood in another line tryin to buy that last gift or two not really in a christmas mood, Standing right in front of me was a little boy waiting anxiously pacing around like little boys do, and in his hands he held a pair of shoes, and his cloths were worn and old, and he was dirty from head to toe, and when it came his time to pay, I couldn't believe what i heard him say sir I wanna buy these shoes for my momma please it's christmas eve and these shoes are just her size, can you hurry sir daddy says there's not much time you see she's been sick for quit a while and I know these shoes will make her smile and I wanna to look beautiful when momma meets jesus tonight,he counted pennies for what seemed like years, and the cashier said son there's not a enough here, he searched his pockets frantically then he turned and he looked at me he said momma meant christmas good in our house most years she just did without tell me sir what am i gonna do somehow I've gotta guy her these christmas shoes so I layed the money down I just ahd to help him out, and I'll never forgot the look on his face when he said momma's gonna look sooo great, sir I wanna buy these shoes for my momma please, it's christmas eve and these shoes are just her size, could you hurry sir daddy says these not much time you see she's been sick for quit a while and I know these shoes will make her smile and I want her to look beautiful if momma meets jesus tonight, I knew I caught a glimps of heavens love as he thanked me and ran out I know that god had sent that little boy to remind me what christmas was all about*
(Jinny couldn't listen it it any longer and ran out of the house crying)(A few people saw but not a lot, and Teddy chased after her)

(jinny couldn't listen to it any longer and ran out of the house crying, a few people but now a lot saw,and teddy chased after her)
T:jin hun
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifcyrying)what.....
T:jin come here (hugs jin, and she holds on not wanthing to let go of his confort) it's ok sweetie I'm her for you, you can talk to me I love you
J:I love you too, I can't lsiten to that song ever again, i just can't it reminds me of my mom way to much, and how she wasn't there for christmas that year, and never was after that and never will be anymore, and when youy mom asked about the home cooked dinner, christmas used to be my favorite time of year, because that's exactly what my family would do, we would get together and actually be civil, and loving, but after mom died it all fell apart. I've never had a real christmas ever . Since the day after she killed herself was the day I kissed my childhood goodybye, and became a serious adult
T http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh jin i don't know what to say
J:don't say anyting just hold me (teddy sat ther with his arms around jinny for a few minutes not even realizing how cold it was outside until about 10 minutes jinny snaps out of her tance) alright I'm better you wanna go back inside now
T:sure but only if you think you're ready
J:I am sweetie
T:alrighty (kisses the top of her head-) let's go
(they sit down at the table)
T:you want something to eat
J:yeah but I'll go up with you (afraid of someone asking her question about why she ran out, so she stayed close to teddy)
-at mag's-
the movie is over mag and g abare laying on the couch cuddled together, and ben is on the floor in front of them sleeping as well
-back at party-
(they're in a love seat(lol)talking with teddy's cuz's matt, and julia
ju:so jin do you like being a cop
J:I love my job I don't know what I would do if I didn't have it
M http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh that's cool......so how long have you 2 been together
T:a year and a week
M http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh really taht's a long time
T:yeah the best year and a week of my life
(looks at in with a loving smile)
TD: alright everyone gather around the tree it's time to open up the presents
T:alrighty jin let's go
J:alrighty i jsut wana let you know I don't know if you're going to like what i got you because I'm not good at these gift things
T:Jin you don't have to worry, you didn't even have to get me somthing just being with you and having you in my life is the best present you could ever give me
aww thanks(quick kiss-go into den where's teddy's huge family is)
(teddy motions jin to sit down on his lap)
(kids open presents and thanks teddy)
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh they love you so much that's so cute
T:yeah they're my little buddies, they're awesome
J:well here's what I got you(hands him box)
T:thanks jin(opens it, and finds a colateral (SP) ring,w/hands)omg I love it thanks so much(puts it on)
T:here's what I got you
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifopen box to find a silver braclet)
T:read what's wiritten inside of it it's my favprite part
(braclet reads- Jinny ddearst i love you more than words can say you're amazing love teddy always and forever
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifmg you're to much I love you so much teddy I can't even describe it
(lays back against teddy's chest so her head is right up his,and he rests his chin on top of her head)


--what do you think of it be honest

I'm being 100% honest when I say that I Luv It!!!! Keep going!

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Jo: Why would you want to be popular? You have to smile and talk to people and all that stuff.

I truly mean this: This is so awesome! I love the whole idea about it being Christmas time and all PLEASE KEEP GOING!!

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[This message has been edited by Division_Fan_Lisa (edited 06-19-2001).]

This is so awesome, I need more. More, more, more. okay, I have to get a hold of myself. Please write more soon.

Okay, MAJOR fan of this story!! Just kept it coming.

Here's some more:

(The party's just about ending and everyone are syaing their goodbyes)
T:Bye mom
TM:Bye Teddy (Gives him a kiss on the cheek) and Bye Jinny
J: Bye,thank you for having me, I had a lot of fun
TM:The pleasure was all mine (Gives her a warm smile)
T:Bye Dad
TD: Bye Teddy, and bye Jinny
J:Bye
(They leave, and go into the car)
T:Well was it as bad as you thought it was going to be
J:Not really.......it was a lot better than the first time
T: haha yeah (They continued with side converstation until they got home, and they got out of the car, and went into their apartment, and changed into their PJ's) (Teddy pulled down the covers of the bed and climbed in, Jin climbed in after him)
J:I actually did have a lot of fun tonight, thanks for bringing me!
T:No problem, you're going to be a new addition to the famil, so I figure if they meet you know they can get to know you better
J:Aww thanks
T: You want to watch a movie?
J:Sure, um what movie
T:Let's look through the channels
J: k
T: Oh Sleepless in Seattle you wanna watch this
J: Sure (They watch it and you can tell something bothering Teddy)
T: Jin...
J:Yeah
T: Can I tell you something
J:Sure you can tell me anything.........shoot.....
T:Well you know how you told me about your mother and your family and your past
J: Yeah
T: Well for a while I blamed myslef for my friends mothers death, and it was partically my fault, and to this day I believe I killed her, but I didn't really mean too
J:I'm sure that's not true........you wanna tell me what happened
T: Sure....here goes....Well it all happened when I was 15, Chris my best friend and I were staying after school for basketball, and so practice ended, and we were on our way out to catch the bus, and I had remembered I had forgotten my german book, so I needed to go back and get it because I had a big test the nexy day. So anyway no matter how fast we ran, we couldn't catch the bus is had already pulled away, so we were stuck there standing, and I stranded. So I decided to call my mom to come and pick us up, so I called my mom and she was un able to come, because she was backed up at the office, and she said dad couldn't pick us up either. So Cheis decided to call his mom, and ask her, so he did, and she's was such a nice lady, so of course she said yes, so she dropped what she was doing to come and pick us up. So we're sitting there waiting, we knew it would atleast take 20 minutes for her ot get there from where she was, so we waited and waited, and waited, 20 minutes pass by and she's still not there so we think you know what she couldn't have hit traffic,you know it was just about that time. So we continued to wait there, we waited and waited, and waited, it seemed like forever. Until my cell phone rung, it was Chris's saying his mother has been in a car accident, and that my mom was coming to picl us up. Of course Chris got nervous and started panicking, he immideatly thought the worst. We finally get pick up and get to the hospital, but we get there to late, his mother died about 20 minutes after we got there. Chris's dad was crying, and so was Chris, he just lost his mother, and she didn't deserve to die. And you know what if I didn't need to get my stupid german book, because I wanted a good grade on my test the next day she'd still be here. If we hadn't have missed the bus then she would still be there today, but no we did, and she's dead it's all my fault!
J:OMG Teddy I ahd no idea,I'm really sorry, and it's not your faul
T: How can you say that Jin, it's my fault and you know it
J;No it's not believe me, I thought my mom killed herself because of me, you know, maybe if I didn't fight with John and Casey as much, or if I didn't give her as many problems, or grief maybe she wouldn't have done it, but after i while a realized it wasn't my fault, and you have to do the same, and i'm here for you if you even need to talk
(At this point they're both crying, and at that point their relationship has moved to another level) (they sat their holding onto each other)
J:I love you Teddy
T:I love you too Jin (And they both go to sleep cuddled together)

--how is it coming so far...alright?? or not??

YES! Its better than alright, its EXCELLENT, GREAT!! POST MORE SOON!!!

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This is more than alright, it's fantastic!! You've gatta keep going. I'm so into this story. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

This is great! Keep it coming.

This is SOOOOO good!!!
Post more!

--over at Jinny/Teddy's apartment--
(They still sleeping with each others arms around them)(Phone rings once, and no one picks up, rings again, and Teddy stirrs a little, it rings again, and Teddy picks it up)
T:Hello(Grogy)
M:Hey Teddy....
T:yeah
M:It's mag
T:Oh hi, what's up
M:Not much is Jinny awak yet??
T:Ummmm no not yet
M:Well do you think you can wake her so I can talk to her
T:Sure no problem...(Gently shakes Jin, and she doesn't wake so he kisses are really qucikly)
J:Mhmmm
T:Mag's on the phone
J:Alright thanks Teddy........(into the phone) Hey Mag
M:Hey Jin.....you wanted to go shopping right....
J: Yes I do, what time is it...
M:About (Looks at watch) 9:10
J:uhhhh.......
M:Why did I call to early...
J:Nope it's just that I went to bed like 3 hours ago, I'm tired, that's all
M:Oh really long night.....(Gets a smirk on her face)
J:It's not what you think, it was one of the best nights of my life, but not doing what you think, I just found out a lot of new stuff about Teddy and I got to tell him a lot of my past (Smiles at him)
M:Ohhh that's good, so do you want to go later....
J:No we can go soon....to get it over with, you know
M:Alright, good idea
J:Alright Mag I'll pick you up at around 10:15
M:Alright, I'll cya later
J:k, byebye (Jinny and Mag both hang up the phone)
T: What was that.....
J:Oh it was Mag, we're going out shopping
T:Oh alright, well good luck I know how much you love shopping
J:haha yeah so I better go and get ready
T:Yeah you know what, I could use a shower, you need one
J:Yeah I do I was just about to go and take one....good me too (She smiles, and they leave for the bathroom)
(Mag gets ready and it waiting for Jinny)
J:Alright Teddy I gotta go and Pick up Mag now
T:Alright, I'll miss you
J:Miss you too, byebye
T:Bye Jin! (Kisses each other GoodBye)
(Jinny's goes to pick up Mag)(Beeps horn and Mag comes out)(They drive to the mall)(And go in)
M:What kind of things do you want to get him
J:Ummm,I dunno cloths that aren’t work cloths
M:Alright you wanna stop here
J:Abercrombie?? do you think he’ll like it
M:Yeah they have nice cloths in here
(Looking around)
M:So what did you two talk about our pasts, it was practically the best night of my life
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifur pasts, it was practically the best night of my life
M:aww that’s cute, Teddy has changed you....and for the better might I add
J: yeah he did
(You see them leave with a lot of shopping bags, and get inot the car-A&F,Aero,AE, Macy’s, Brookstone, Sharper Image and a lot of other bags)
(Jinny drops mag off and then goes into her apartment, and puts the bags in her room but they’re gift wrapped so teddy doesn’t know what they are)(She sees him sleeping, and lays down with him, and she falls asleep until the next morning because they only got 3 hours of sleep the night before)
--Next Morning--(Day of Division party)
T:Sweetie wake up.....Jin, you gotta get up, we have th party at the station to get too
J:nooooo
T:Jinny hun get up now!
J:Fine, I’ll go and get ready
T:Alright good that’s better(Jinny goes and gets dressed, comes out with pants and a sweater, and Teddy’s also wearing pants and a sweater)(They leave)
(They get there, and set up)
(Everyone is talking to each other, and having a good time-when someone comes in the doors with a gun, and shoots one round of bullets, a lot miss people, but one hits Jinny- and she falls to the ground-Teddy Screams as her sweater gets filled with blood)
K:911-yes, there’s an officer down-and she’s been shot get here as quick as possible
(Will Jinny live??)
--how do you like it

DO YA WANT ME TO DIE HERE?!?!?
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--over at Jinny/Teddy's apartment--
(They still sleeping with each others arms around them)(Phone rings once, and no one picks up, rings again, and Teddy stirrs a little, it rings again, and Teddy picks it up)
T:Hello(Grogy)
M:Hey Teddy....
T:yeah
M:It's mag
T:Oh hi, what's up
M:Not much is Jinny awak yet??
T:Ummmm no not yet
M:Well do you think you can wake her so I can talk to her
T:Sure no problem...(Gently shakes Jin, and she doesn't wake so he kisses are really qucikly)
J:Mhmmm
T:Mag's on the phone
J:Alright thanks Teddy........(into the phone) Hey Mag
M:Hey Jin.....you wanted to go shopping right....
J: Yes I do, what time is it...
M:About (Looks at watch) 9:10
J:uhhhh.......
M:Why did I call to early...
J:Nope it's just that I went to bed like 3 hours ago, I'm tired, that's all
M:Oh really long night.....(Gets a smirk on her face)
J:It's not what you think, it was one of the best nights of my life, but not doing what you think, I just found out a lot of new stuff about Teddy and I got to tell him a lot of my past (Smiles at him)
M:Ohhh that's good, so do you want to go later....
J:No we can go soon....to get it over with, you know
M:Alright, good idea
J:Alright Mag I'll pick you up at around 10:15
M:Alright, I'll cya later
J:k, byebye (Jinny and Mag both hang up the phone)
T: What was that.....
J:Oh it was Mag, we're going out shopping
T:Oh alright, well good luck I know how much you love shopping
J:haha yeah so I better go and get ready
T:Yeah you know what, I could use a shower, you need one
J:Yeah I do I was just about to go and take one....good me too (She smiles, and they leave for the bathroom)
(Mag gets ready and it waiting for Jinny)
J:Alright Teddy I gotta go and Pick up Mag now
T:Alright, I'll miss you
J:Miss you too, byebye
T:Bye Jin! (Kisses each other GoodBye)
(Jinny's goes to pick up Mag)(Beeps horn and Mag comes out)(They drive to the mall)(And go in)
M:What kind of things do you want to get him
J:Ummm,I dunno cloths that aren’t work cloths
M:Alright you wanna stop here
J:Abercrombie?? do you think he’ll like it
M:Yeah they have nice cloths in here
(Looking around)
M:So what did you two talk about our pasts, it was practically the best night of my life
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifur pasts, it was practically the best night of my life
M:aww that’s cute, Teddy has changed you....and for the better might I add
J: yeah he did
(You see them leave with a lot of shopping bags, and get inot the car-A&F,Aero,AE, Macy’s, Brookstone, Sharper Image and a lot of other bags)
(Jinny drops mag off and then goes into her apartment, and puts the bags in her room but they’re gift wrapped so teddy doesn’t know what they are)(She sees him sleeping, and lays down with him, and she falls asleep until the next morning because they only got 3 hours of sleep the night before)
--Next Morning--(Day of Division party)
T:Sweetie wake up.....Jin, you gotta get up, we have th party at the station to get too
J:nooooo
T:Jinny hun get up now!
J:Fine, I’ll go and get ready
T:Alright good that’s better(Jinny goes and gets dressed, comes out with pants and a sweater, and Teddy’s also wearing pants and a sweater)(They leave)
(They get there, and set up)
(Everyone is talking to each other, and having a good time-when someone comes in the doors with a gun, and shoots one round of bullets, a lot miss people, but one hits Jinny- and she falls to the ground-Teddy Screams as her sweater gets filled with blood)
K:911-yes, there’s an officer down-and she’s been shot get here as quick as possible
(Will Jinny live??)
--how do you like it

Ack! Jinny... die?!?!?!!?!? Hmmm... NO. Hehehe. Post more!!

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[But you can just call me Jinny Exstead]

Jinny and Teddy rock!

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D :p

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

HOW COULD U DO THIs?!? U left me haning. PLEASE POST MORE SOON! THIS IS GREAT.

Alrighty Here’s a little more:

(The paramedics arrive on the scene)
P1:What happened
(Teddy was in to much shock to answer so CD answered for him)
CD: Someone she put away for a Robbery came back and shot her
P2:Alright well we’re going to take her to the hospital, only one can come with us
T: Oh I want to go, Mag is it alright if I go
M: Sure, I’ll be right behind you
(Strap Jin to a Gurney and are on their way to the hospital)
(In the Ambulance)(Teddy is talking to the Paramedic)
T: So do you think she’ll be alright
P1:It’s to early to tell, we have no idea where the bullet punctured her if anywhere
T: Alright.........Jin Hunny, you’re going to be alright, I know you will pull through for me
(Arrive at the hospital)(They wheel Jinny into the ER)
D1: what are her ABC’s
P1:They’re dropping fast
T http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifCharges in) Help Her....Please.....Help Her!
D2: Carol Please get him out of here
N1: Sure Doug (Gets Teddy out of there)
T: No I want to stay!
N: No it’s for the better if you don’t
T: But I love her
N: I’m sure you do, please stay out here
T: FINE!!!!
(Teddy hears all of them going over Medical Terms that he has no idea about, but he can’t bear to looks at so he turns away)(He leans against the wall, and slides down to the floor and kinda goes numb)(He recalls all the good times they’ve had together, and then all of a sudden he hears a monitor)(He gets up and looks in and he hears)
D1: Give me the paddles she’s flat line (Carol hands him Paddles) Charge Em’
N1: Charging
D1:200...Clear
D1:250..clear (Still flat line)
D1:300 clear (Still flat line)
D1:360.....CLEAR (Still flat line)
D1:Charge 360 again....now....Damn it still flat line!. Charge again...........

--What do you think

You're nasty.....for leaving us right here and not even writing more quickly!! Ahhh!!! more more more more!!!! Now would be good too!

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Originally posted by JJ:
You're nasty.....for leaving us right here and not even writing more quickly!! Ahhh!!! more more more more!!!! Now would be good too!



not exactly how i was going to say it but i 100 and 10 % agree with what JJ said!!! PLEASE POST MORE!



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This is sooo great! Please continue! And SOON.

Can't wait for more!

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Nancy McKeon is #1!!

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Check out my Division Website!
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"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do.

Here’s a little more:

D1:Clear 360...damn it she’s still flat line....come on pull through....... 360 again.... clear
N1 http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gifoctor we have a faint pulse!
D1:Good, check her vitals, and we have to get her into surgery ASAP, and let the man out there know she’s been revived (Doug the doctor walks out to Teddy)
D1:Excuse me sir (No answer from Teddy) (A little louder) Excuse me
T: Oh yes, how is she doing
D1:We’ve been able to get her heart started and she’s going to have to go in to surgery to remove the bullet from her, and there a chance she might not survive
T: ohhhh.......do you think she’ll make it
D1:It’s not confirmed cause she’s still in critical condition, I’m sorry I wish I had better news for you
T:No, knowing she’s alive is enough good news for me
D1 http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifSmiles) Alright, I’ll update you whenever possible
T: Alright thank you
(Magda and everyone else comes running in)
M:How is she
Cd:Is she going to be alright
A:yeah is she
T: Well they brought her here and then x-rayed her for where the bullet is , and then she crashed, and they took a few minutes to try and revive her
M:noooo.....she was to be alive she’s my best friend
T: Mag it’s alright, they were able to and she’s been wheeled up to surgery, but there’ s a possibility she won’t make it
M: OMG
K:OMG what are we going to do without her
T:It’s alright cause if I know Jinny, and I think I do, she’ll pull through she won’t leave me, she knows that I love her way to much, and I wouldn’t be able to live without her
A:Let’s go up to the surgery waiting room
All:Alright (They all go into the elevator, and go up to the waiting room
(They’re sitting there for 2 1/2 hours but it seems like eternity to them)
M:I’m worried about her
T http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gifon’t be she’ll pull through, she’s though
(Doug the doctor walks out with the Nurse Carol)
D: Do you know how’s she doing??
T:No we haven’t been able to find out from the doctor
D:well we’ll go in there and check
All:Thank you
(Doug and Carol go into the surgery room, and through the microphone they ask how she is)
Surgeon: She’s doing very well actually we’ve removed the bullet and are stitching her up now
D: Alright thank you Peter
(Go back to waiting room)
D:She’ll we done very shortly and everything looks alright, as of now
T: Oh thank god, I knew she’d pull through
M:yes thank you very much doctor
(Surgeon comes out)
S:I’m guessing Dr. Ross and Nurse Hathaway already informed you that she came out of surgery with flying colors, we still have to monitor her though, to make sure everything else is alright, we have to run some tests too, but as of now she’s not awake because of the anesthetic
T:Alright
S: In the mean time you all should go home tomorrow’s Christmas Eve
T:I’m not leaving her
M: Me either
CD:Mag I know you don’t but you have a husband and a son to go home too, we all have to go home to our familes
M:Jinny is part of my family
T:CD’s right Mag, you should, I’ll call you to let you know if anything happens
M: Alright but you better Teddy if the littles thing even happens you have too
(They all say goodbye and then leave)
T http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifGoes up the Doug and Carol) Can I see her
D: Yeah You Can
T: Thanks (Goes into Jinny’s room)(Is Shocked with how motionless she is, and kinda gets scared)
T http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifTakes Jinny’s hand) Sweetheart.......I don’t know what to say, this is suppose to be one of the best holidays all year, accept of course your own birthday (laughs to himself) But it hasn’t been for me, why did this have to happen to you, first you mom died around Christmas and now you hurt, what is this, why is god doing this to you. I love you sooo much, I don’t know what I would do if I lost you, I have to be strong for all the people you work with but the truth is, I’m scared to death of losing you, and I don’t know what I would do with out you, I don’t think I could go on living, I would miss you too much, Jinny Hunny you’re my Soul Mate, you have to pull through do it for me. Sweetie pull through for me I know you’re strong (Teddy kisses her lightly on her lips afraid of hurting her, and gets in the bed with her, making sure of not hurting her, he lays right next to her, and put his arm around her)

--ya like

Why do i have the strangest suspicion u watch ER? Its great! U HAVE too post more reall REALLY soon!

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh, yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, uh yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight! and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy:Stop! What are you...
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter! *long pause* Yeah... Thats what I thought.

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

haha yeah ER is my other favorite show! LOL! I'll post more, but now I have practice! BuhBuy

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Check out my Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.

A little more you'll love this:

(next morning)(Teddy's still sleeping in the same bed with Jinny)(All of a sudden her monitor goes flat line, and blue lights start flashing)(--that's what happens when something goes wrong with someone, so everyone on that floor will know-saw that on ER, LOL)
T:OMG we need help, HELP Where's the Help Damn it!
D:It's alright I'm here....
(Carol the nurse also runs in)
C:I'm sorry sure you must leave now
T: No I don't want too
C: No you must
T:Fine! (Goes out side the room)(Kinda fades out like the last time, doesn't realize how long he's there for)(Doug the Doctor finally comes out moments later)
D:Teddy?? hello (No answer) Hello!
T: Yes how is she
D: we've tried numerous times to revive her, and I'm sorry there's a
--what do you think

OMG! More More!!!!

ok ya HAVE to post MORE and SOON!!!!

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!~!Lisa!~! *not Vidal or Whelchel, just 'Lisa'*

Check out my Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.

DON'T LEAVE IT THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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~*~*NMRox*~*~
[But you can just call me Jinny Exstead]

Jinny and Teddy rock!

Proud member of the Jinny and Teddy shouldn't break up club.

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D :p

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

Alright here’s a little more:

D: I’m sorry there’s a.........
T: What she’s dead?! NO!!!!!!
D: no she’s not, she’ not, I’m trying to say there could be so possible brain damage, ranging from coma, to just not remember things, or she could just wake up in the next 5 minutes and be fine, but that’s not likely but not entirely impossible
T: Oh thank go she’s not dead
D: Oh no sorry to worry you
T: Oh it’s alright, just as long as she’s alright
D: Do you wanna go and see her
T: Yes, Please!
D: (Laughs) Sure, this way (Doug leads him into the ICU room)
T http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifTeddy enters and sees her lifeless body, and has to turn away for a sec) Alright, thank you for everything you’ve done for me
D: Oh no problem
T: Hey Jinny Hunny- well you came back to me, you scared me so bad- you can’t do that again to me! (Pulls out cell phone) Hey Mag.......yeah this is Teddy........yeah she crashed and then they revived her.........yeah she’s in a coma right now............yeah......uh huh.......yep.......alright cya soon (Hangs up cell phone)
(Mag Later arrives)
M:How is she
T: She’s getting better, don’t you have a Christmas party to be at or something
M:yeah I told Gab I’d meet him there later, and for him to take Ben
T:Alrighty, are you sure you wanna stay here
M: Definitely she’s like a sister to me, not only my best friend too
T: Alright
(Mag sits there, just making conversation with Teddy, and talking to Jinny about all the good things)(She then leave about an hour later) (It’s around 8:30 right now christmas eve)
T:Bye Mag
M:Bye Teddy, and bye Jin, pull through hun (Leaves)
T http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifSits down in the chair next to Jinny’s bed) Jinny Sweetie pull through, please (Turns on the radio to a Christmas Station- the mariah carey song comes on- all I want for Christmas)
(Lyrics-Teddy is looking and Jinny Crying while hearing this song)
*I don’t want a lot for Christmas, there is just one thing I need, I don’t care about the present underneath the Christmas Tree, I just want you for my own, more than you can ever know, make my wish come true, all I want for Christmas is you, I don’t want a lot for Christmas there is just one thing I need, I don’t care about the present underneath the Christmas Tree, I don’t need to hang my stocking there upon the fireplace, Santa Clause won’t make me happy with a toy on Christmas Day, I just want you for my own, more than you could ever know, make my wish come true, all I want for Christmas is you, yyyyooouuuuuu baby, I won’t ask for much this Christmas I won’t even wish for snow, and I just wanna keep on waiting underneath the missle toe, I won’t make a list and send it to the North Pole upon St.Nick, I won’t even stay awake to hear those magic reindeer click, cause I just want you here tonight, holding onto me so tight, what more can I do, oh baby all I want for Christmas is you, yyyyooouuuuu baby, All the lights are shinning so brightly everywhere, and the songs the children the laughter fills the air, and everyone is singing I hear those slay bells ringing, santa won’t you bring, and you wanna reel it in please bring my baby to me this Christmas, I don’t want a lot for Christmas this is all I’m asking for, I just wanna see my baby standing there outside my door, ohhh I just want you for my own more than you could ever know make my wish come true, ohh baby all I want for Christmas is yyyyooooouuuuuuuu, baby!
T: (He continues weeping, cause the song describes what he wants so well) Jinny Hunny, do you hear that all I want for Christmas is you! (Starts to pray) God......Please....Please.....Just let Jinny survive and I will never ask you for anything again, please! (He sits there all looks at her)

this is really good please post some more http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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!~!Lisa!~! *not Vidal or Whelchel, just 'Lisa'*

Check out my Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.

Oh Oh Oh *tear* This is so good! Post More ASAP!

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

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I-M address Bixbabe926

Alrighty here's a little more: But then I'm going away for the weekend so I won't be able to post until Sunday! Sorry!

(Teddy's sitting their just staring blanking at her just thinking about how this could happen to him he didn't understand hasn't Jinny payed enough throughout her life, and when she just got i started in the right direction it gets taken away from her)(It's around 11:45 that night)
T http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifTurns on the TV) Hey Jinny it's Friends, we always watch it together, your favorite ones on, where Joey walks in with all of Chandlers cloths on, and says Hi I'm Chandler Could I be wearin anymore cloths.,(Starts to weep)I still think the Vas Vegas one is funnier sweetie, but oh well (the show ends and Teddy looks at the clock- it says 11:58) Jinny Hunny it's almost Christmas-(12:00) Merry christmas Sweethear (Kisses her lightly on her lips)I have your presents at home but I wanted to read you the card that I got for you
(The saying and what he wrote inside the card)--All my life I have been dreaming like someone like you not knowing if my wishes would become true, and not knowing all my prayers would be answer, but all the wrong, and bad in the wolrd disappeared the moment you took my heart. It was Love at first sight, and I knew from that point on you would be my soul mate, and I would do anything to be with you, and we finally did get together, ad God took it away from me. I feel Complete when you're with me, and I feel empty when you're not there, and right now, I feel like dieing, knowing that you're suffering and there's nothing I can do about it. You're the only reason to live, and we're made for each other we're suppose to be together, we're soul mates! I thought that we would have children, and raise them, and then watch them grow up, and then they would have children, and we'd be grandparents, and we'd grow older, and soon we'd be celebrating out 50th wedding anniversary cause there's nothing that can keep up apart on faith can, and I have to be strong I know, but it's killing me that you're not ok, you have to pull through cause I'll die without you. You're the love of my life,.....(breaks down) you are my life! Love You always and forever Teddy-(take sher hand in his, notices she's wearing the bracelt her got her, he's just starring at it)(Then he feels something, he thinks Jinny moved her hand)
T http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gifoctor she's alive (Doug and Carol come running in)
D: are you sure you saw her move
T:Yeah there she goes again
D: Let me check her vital signs, you're right she's doing a lot better, aright we'll be back to monitor her
T:I knw you wouldn't leave me, you pulled through for me!
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifopens her eyes)(Grogy)Hey Sweetie
T:OMG Jinny Sweetheart (gives her a big hug making sure not to hurt her but not wanting to let go) Merry Christmas
J: Merry Christmas to you too- and I heard evrything you said, I love you so much Teddy
T: I love you too Sweetheart

--Alright what do you think, I won;t be posting anymore until Sunday I'll be away, sorry, hop eyou like this as of now

Love love looooooooooooooooooooooooove it!!!!! Can't wait for more.

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

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[This message has been edited by Sourbabie (edited 06-22-2001).]

This is really great...
I guess I can last until Sunday hehe


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!~!Lisa!~! *not Vidal or Whelchel, just 'Lisa'*

Check out my Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.

Sooo good! Cant wait for more!

(Teddy is still staring at Jinny in astonishment)
J:Why are you starring at me
T:I'm just so happy you're awake and now I can talk to you, and you can hear me
J: You think I couldn't hear you when you were reading the card you got me for christmas
T:You heard that
j;yes, I did and it was the nicest ting anyone has ever done to me
T;Well I meant every word of it, Jinny, you're my world to me, I don't know what i would do without you, I would have no World!
J:Oh thank you so much Teddy
T http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh right I have to call Mag (gets on pohone)Hi mag?....yeah it's teddy......yeahi got some really good news Jinny is awak and is doing well!....yeah come on over....alright see you in a few! Byebye!9To jinny) Well she'll be here soon!
J:yeah I can't wait, but it's christmas I think ben might be a little bumed
T:Well he knows how his mom love you like a sister
(Mag arrives there with Ben and gabriel)
(mag runs over to Jinny- who is still her her bed)
M:Oh Jin, you're awak, you;re doing so much better i"m so happy for you!9hugs her but to make sure she doesn't hurt her)
J:yeah I'm happy too
G;nice to see you're doing better Jin, Mag was really worried
J:Oh you didn't have to, you know i'm tough mag, I would pull through for the people I love
(Ben goes over, and asks Mag to bend down and whispers something into her ear)
M:yeah sure ben (She smiles)(Jinny Looks at her)
B http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifBen stands up on the chair by her) here Jinny, I made this for you (She hands him a card, and a snowman (You know the ones they made in Billy Madison with the cotton balls glued to a piece of paper and stuff))Here Look Jinny, I made this Snowman for you in yesturday cause I really wanted you to get better! And I made this card for you too, see!
J:yeah Ben I see thank you
B http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifpen it, Open it! (she opens the card)
see it says Feel better Jinny, and merry Christmas! I made it all by myself!!(Ver Proud)
J:Yes, and you did a wonderful job as well, thank you soo much ben!
B: You're very welcome Jinny 9He gives Jinny a Big hug)
M http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh Ben be careful
B: (sad look) I'm sorry Jinny I didn't mean to hur tyou
J:Oh no it's ok ben you didn't, and thank you I really love the card, and the snowman, you're very talented!
B: Thank you!
(they continue to just chat there for about an hour more and then mag, and gab, and ben leave)

--how do you like sorry I havent written in a while I was away all weekend, but a lot of people didn't really anyway so no big deal, tell me if you think it's turning sucky because I think it is, and I want your honest opinion!

Okay, you want my honest opinion? My [b]honest[.b] opinion is that it's... GREAT!!! Seriously, it doesn't suck one bit! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif I'm glad you got back, and why did you sign off? Unless you got a new screen name or something, I haven't seen you on! (Well, I've been recording things, but...) I can't wait until you write more! (My contacts are drying up, I gotta get off soon, so if somehow you have telepathy, get on now!!!)

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers... Boy, I bet they tasted awful!

I'm a blonde babe that can beat boys at basketball, no prob!

~*Danielle*~
<3 y'all!

This is great! Please Post More soon! K.

(After mag, and Gab, and Ben leave Teddy calls CD)
T:Hey CD......yeah Jinny's woken up.....yeah it's great news......no you don't have to come down here, Paul's sick stay with him......alright I'llt ell her you wished her the best! Alright merry Christmas to you too...bye
J:How's CD doing
T:Good Good
(Doug the doctor walks in)
D:Hey Teddy...Jinny. Jinny How are you feeling
J;Ready to get out of here
D:haha, let me just check all your vitals and your charts (Looks them over) Alright we just have to monitor you for about another hour or so, and then you can leave
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifSmiles) oh thank you
D:no problem (leaves)
T:he's nice
J:yeah he seems like it.......I can't wait to get out of here, and get home
T;Yeah me either
(About an hour or so passes, and Jinny is able to leave)
(They get home, and Jinny sits down on the couch)
T:do you wanna open up your presents or do you just want to relax
J:Can we relax for a little while.....and then open up the presents
T:Sure (He sits down with Jinny, and puts his arms around her, and she leans her head back, and relaxs)(They end up falling alseep there, and are awaken by a phone ringing)
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifGrogy) Helllloo
(Reciever):Hello is this Jinny Exstead the sister of John Exstead
J:yes, why what's happened
R:Well you're brother was brought in this morning beater to death, and we need you to identify the body
J:What you've got to be kiding this is a joke right (Sits up, and wakes teddy up)
R:No I'm sorry it's not
J:noooo it can't be!
R;I'm sorry butit is
J: I'll be down there right away (Hangs up the phone)
T:What's wrong hun
J:John's dead......they found his body this morning beatn to death....I have to go there and ID the body
T:OMG
J:Yeah this is a big mistake i know it, it can't be the right person!.......

--do ya like

This is great! Cant wait for more!!

You stopped, how could you stop. This is so good, you have to keep going.

(They go down to the hospital to see if it really is casey)(They go into the morgue)
(The person there shows her the body)
Mortision(SP): Is this is
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifLooks quickly and hten has to look away)
Yes......yes that's casey
T http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifShe turns around and hugs teddy) it's ok Jin (they walk out,and go home)
J:he dead he's really dead
T: I don't know what to say
J;There's nothing to say that's going to bring John back
T; I know I'm sorry
J:Sorry isn't going to do anything, I just wanna be alone right now, if you don't mind
T:Alright (And with that said Jinny leaves)
(Jinny goes to the Anchorside, and has way too many drinks........she has zambuka (Which sucks cause it burns on the way down, and gets you drunk soo quickly, believe me I know, yuck!)some dacaries, and some scotch, just hard liquor, and she got this way from playing quarter, and chandalier)
J:Gimme another ooonnnneee bar tender
BT:No I think you'e had enough......
J: nahhhh gimme ooonnnneee more, pwease
BT:Noopppe
J:Fine!....(Makes googly eyes at some guy at the bar)
Guy:Hey can I buy you something
J:This guy ova hheerree said nnooo more for me
G:Alright then you just wanna come back to my place
j:Sounds good too me
(They leave, and go to his car)

--should I continue

Th is soooooo awesome!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHH I need more NOW!!!!!!!!!!!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

MORE NOW!!!! MORE NOW!!!

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!~!Lisa!~! *not Vidal or Whelchel, just 'Lisa'*

Check out my Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.

This is sooo great! M O R E!!!
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Ok... Who's dead, Casey, John, or both? Other than that, great sad story!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers... Boy, I bet they tasted awful!

I'm a blonde babe that can beat boys at basketball, no prob!

~*Danielle*~
<3 y'all!

sorry it's suppose to be JOhn

PLEASE post more soon!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

PUH-LEASE POST MORE BEFORE I DIE FROM LACK OF FAN FICTION!

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!~!Lisa!~! *not Vidal or Whelchel, just 'Lisa'*

Check out my Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.

Alright here's some more.....sorry I was away at camp

(Jinny and the guy are on their way back to his place, and just for the story let's call him Doug)(They're in his car, and almost to his house)
D:So.......you sure you wanna do this
J:I'm positive
D;Alrighty (gets to his house and pulls in the driveway)Let's go (And gets out of the car)
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifkey dokey (and gets out of the car and stumbles, and falls down)
(Doug can see this but still goes over, and helps her up, and leads her into his house)

post more soon!

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!~!Lisa!~! *not Vidal or Whelchel, just 'Lisa'*

Check out my Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.

OMG! You have to post more soon!!!!!

OMG I NEED MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE?

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

(they go inside)
D:so do you wanna do what I wanna do (gets a mistchavus (SP)look on his face)
J:I sure do
D:Alright (They move it towards the bedroom)
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifthe alcohol is stating to ware off, and is coming to her senses)Ummmm acutally I don't think it's such a good idea
D:well since you're here it can't hurt
J:Nah, I'm gonna leave
D:NO! YOu're not.....come here
J:NO! (he grabs her)
D:No I said you're staying with me
J:No I don't want to.......I'm part of the SFPD
D:you think I care
J:Assaulting a police officer.....big offense
D:Yeah right, if you live to tell it (Jinny kicks him and runs out the door)(He catches up to her though,--they're on his front lawn--)(he hits her a few times, and Jinny can't do anything cause he's on top of her, and he weighs a lot more than her)(A neighbor sees and calls the cops)(cops get there really soon)(Aresst him, and see if Jinny's alright, and gets taken to the hospital)
(At the hospital)
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifIn exame room with doctor) I'm feeling fine really, just my wrist is bothering me
Doctor:It may be broken, I'm gonna take some x-rays
J:Fine if you have too (Sounds Angry)
D:Yes I must, anyone I can call
J:Yes (Writes down Teddy's #, and gives it to the doctor)
(Doc goes and calls teddy and tells him what has happened)(Teddy rushes right over)(Walks into Jinny's room)
T:Ohhh Jinny Hunny are you alright
J;I'm fine (has gruises up her arms, and has a black eye)
T: Ohh sweetie (gives her a hug, she kinda cringes cause of the bruises)I'm sorry he did this to you on top of the whole John thing
J:It's alright, now that you're here, I can feel safe


---what do ya think---

this is great!!

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!~!Lisa!~! *not Vidal or Whelchel, just 'Lisa'*

Check out my Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.

J: Can you just take me home, and stay there with me
T:Sure (they leave, teddy with his arm around Jinny)(They get home)(Teddy goes to unlock the door but when he puts the key in the door it opens already (Like someones beenin there))
J:What's wrong teddy
T:I think someones in there
J:Let me check it out
T:No let me go first
J:No this is my job let me do it (They walk in side by side)
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifDoes all the stuff like lookc sin the closets and stuff)(Everything is trashed, the mirrors, plates, silver wear, TV, Cd's are everywhere)OMG who did this, whoever did is gonna be in big trouble!
T http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gifon't get mad honey
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gifon't get mad, someone trashed our home
T:Well call Kate, and people over to come and investigate it
J:Alright (Takes out her cell phone)!!! Hello Kate, yeah someone broke into my house (She finally looks into the bedroom)
-----It reads on the wall-----
--Jinny you're Gonna PAY!!!!--

no one liked it, so I don't think I'm gonna post anymore, and I guess I'll just leave it how it is

NOOOOOO!!! PLEASE post more! i did like it... just that sometimes in a day things get pushed down so far and you forget about them... but PLEASE post more!

~*~jenn~*~

I've been reading it and..so...uh... PUH-LEASE POST MORE!

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Check out my 'New and Improved' Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

Jinny and Theodore Will Always Be Forever In Our Hearts....

Your story is really great! You can't stop! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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1) having a lot to say, and
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