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Teddys_Angel_Jinny
06-09-2001, 09:43 PM
Ko, you asked for it! You got it...

NOTE: This is a little bit different it's told as if they were in high school now. At the beginning of each chapter, you'll see the chapter number and who's telling it. I had to change some of the character's personalities around just a little to make it fit, but in the long run, I think it's okay. So, sit back, relax, and enjoy... Modest Intentions!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Chapter 1: Jinny

Monday, September 10, 2001 8:30 am

I walked down the hall of Tillman high school in San Francisco, California and up to my best friend's locker. "Hi, Magda!" I said, cheerfully.
Magda shut her locker door and stared at me. "Why, Jinny Exstead, I do believe you're wearing color today," she stated, and motioned to my red v-neck sweater.
I laughed. "Well, it was burning a hole in my closet and-- Ooo!" A very cute boy walked past us and smiled in our direction. I had never seen him before and, believe me, with my reputation, you know every boy in the student body, very well, if you know what I mean. "Cute!" I exclaimed. "Who's that, Mag?" I twirled a string of my hair around my finger.
Magda smiled. "That's Theodore Bluementhal. He transferred. Apparently, his father's the president of some big company and he was the star quarterback at his last school. I think coach is getting ready to make him first string. That'll knock John out, won't it?"
I smiled. "Yeah, but, oh, well! So, tell me more about this Teddy guy." We started walking towards first period.

"So..." I said, after we sat down in geography. "Go ahead, tell me more."
Magda rolled her eyes. "Well, from what I heard, he's interested in someone that you loathe."
"Hmm... Well, that narrows down the field." I joked.
Just then, Teddy Bluementhal waltzed in and sat next to me. Magda shot me a look that said, 'Way to go!' and I non-chalantly pushed my pencil off my desk. He bent down to pick it up. "Here. I think you dropped this." He handed my pencil to me.
I put a hand to my chest. "Why, did I drop this? Oops!" I took my pencil from him and started planning a way to get him, without him knowing what had hit him.

I g2g. How is it so far?

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§º§º§ Kenzie §º§º§

[This message has been edited by Teddys_Angel_Jinny (edited 06-09-2001).]

#1_Nancy_McKeon
06-09-2001, 09:56 PM
lol...Cute! I like it. The whole twirling her hair around her finger reminded me of Blair,but yes please go on. It's real good so far. Just something to get used to.

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Jinny: "Captain Amazing here decided to defend his wallet and laptop to the death. It didn't work,but you gotta admire the effort."
Theodore: "My whole life was on that laptop."
Jinny: "Ooh sad commentary."
Angela: "Did you see his face?"
Theodore: "White male. 18 to 22,Shaved head ,dagger tattoo on his wrist. I mean he caught me by surprise I could have taken him."

ISmellFine
06-09-2001, 10:02 PM
This is awesome! Write more!

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~*~*NMRox*~*~

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are gonna meet Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest]! We're gonna handcuff ourselves to her car... or better yet, to her! And you're not! And we're also gonna handcuff ourselves to Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest].

Jinny: All right, all right, enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun,
any questions!?

Jinny: You're a peach.

Jinny: God, she's got a bug up her ass for me.
C.D.: Why?
Jinny: Oh, how should I know? Maybe, I am not her idea of what a lady cop should
look and act like.
C.D.: Did she tell you that?
Jinny: No, everytime she looks at me I get this flashback of my Aunt Irene's expression
when I showed up at my sweet 16 wearing cut offs and a t-shirt saying ,"Got any lately?"

Magda: What is that?
Jinny: It's a list of guys that I've slept with, ones I can remember anyway. Our delightful
Captian's idea.
Magda: You're gonna need a bigger book.
Jinny: *looks at Magda* What do we really know about anybody, ya know? Any cop or Jinny haters here today?! Raise your hand!

Jinny: Captain Amazing here decided to defend his wallet and laptop to the death. It didn't work, but you gotta admire the effort.
Teddy: My whole life was on that laptop.
Jinny: Ooh, sad commentary.
Angela: Did you see his face?
Teddy: White male, 18 to 22, shaved head, dagger tattoo on his wrist. I mean, he caught me by surprise, I could've taken him.

Visit my website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

JoExstead
06-09-2001, 10:25 PM
This is really cool. It's different! And that's a good thing. Post more soon.

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
06-09-2001, 11:23 PM
Ko! I'm glad your like it!

Chapter 2: Magda

Well, you gotta hand it to her, I thought. I'll bet Jinny Exstead will have him by the end of second period. I watched as she pulled out a stick of Big Red and put it into her mouth. She leaned over and whispered, "To quote Cher from the movie, 'Clueless', anything you can do to draw attention to your mouth is good." She chewed it for awhile and started pulling it out and twirling it around her finger. Typical Jinny. She blew a gigantic bubble and made it pop loudly. Teddy looked over at her and whispered something in her ear. She giggled and shook her head.
I ripped a sheet of paper out of my notebook and grabbed my pen. 'What did he say?' I wrote and tossed it over to her desk.
She read it and wrote back, 'I'll tell you next hour.'
I nodded and our teacher came in. He stood there and surveyed our class a moment. He took his pen out of his pocket and pointed it at Jinny. "You!" he bellowed. "What's your name?"
Jinny blew another bubble and said, "Jinny Exstead."
"Ah, yes. I had your brother last year. John, wasn't it?"
Jinny nodded and replied, "Yes, and next year you'll have my other brother, Casey."
"Yes, of course." He turned and pointed the pen at me. "You! Who are you?"
I sat up straight. "Magda Ramirez, sir." I emphasized the 'sir' because, knowing Jinny, she call him Pig-Brain or Butt-Hole or something like that. Actually, all things considered, Mr. Fair was actually really nice. Jinny just had a certain way of making everybody hate her. Except when she played hard to get like she was now. Okay, you're probably thinking, 'That's not hard to get!', but, believe me, if you know Jinny, that's hard to get. I sighed as she twirled her gum again and dropped her pencil again.
Teddy retrieved it once again and handed it to her. "You know, you should be careful. I only do so many good deads a day." He smiled and she took her pencil.
"Gosh, there must be a magnet or something down there!"
It was working. Theodore Bluementhal had fallen for Jinny Exstead, and in less than 15 minutes.

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§º§º§ Kenzie §º§º§

NancyJoJinny
06-09-2001, 11:33 PM
MWAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! More!!!!

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too.

Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
06-09-2001, 11:41 PM
Chapter 3: C.D.

"Hey you guys! Wait!" I called to Magda Ramirez and Jinny Exstead. They turned around and waved. "It's hard to run with a 10 pound chemistry book. Oh, and you won't believe this! I have a new chem partner."
Magda's mouth dropped. "Dick changed partners?"
"No, he moved. Anyway, there's this new girl, Angela Smith*, and she couldn't be more preppy, and--"
I was cut off by Jinny sighing. "What's with her?" I asked Magda.
Magda rolled her eyes. "She's in love... again."
We walked over to the track where we had gym that period. "Really? With who?"
"With whom," Magda corrected me. "With the new boy, Teddy Bluementhal."
"Yeah, I saw him in the hall. He's cute."
"She played hard to get in geography."
I laughed. "The gum thing?"
Magda looked bewildered that I could laugh at that. "Yes, the gum thing! And it's not funny, C.D.! It's my gum!"
Jinny snapped out of her trance. "Nuh-uh! Today it was [i]my[i/] gum! So there!" She stuck her tongue out at us.
I put a hand to my chest. "Oh, I'm pained, really!"
"Oh, no!" Jinny stopped in her tracks.
"What?" Magda and I asked at the same time.
"No!"
"What?" We said again.
"Boys' athletics is this hour!"
"So?" Magda asked.
"So, Teddy's in boys' athletics! I can't see him like that!"
"Why not? You will before you're through with him." I stated.
"That is true." Jinny said. "Oh, well. I still can't see him like that."
"You'll survive," Magda said, and we led Jinny to the track.


*Guessing at last names!

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§º§º§ Kenzie §º§º§

hockeychiC518
06-10-2001, 10:39 AM
AWEsome!!! post more soon!

hockeychiC518
06-10-2001, 10:39 AM
AWEsome!!! post more soon!

WildChildJinny
06-10-2001, 10:49 AM
It's Angela Reide, but great story btw!

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

NewsiesGurl229
06-10-2001, 11:06 AM
AWESOME!!!! You wanna know something, I can just picture each of the girls acting that way!

Wild Child
06-10-2001, 12:14 PM
Originally posted by WildChildJinny:
It's Angela Reide, but great story btw!


She probably made up Smith because in the show she's married....and in high school...well,she's not so she just changed her name.

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

VoLLeYBaLLQT
06-10-2001, 12:18 PM
Post more I really like it!

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Nancy McKeon is my idol!!
06-10-2001, 01:40 PM
AWESOME!!

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Nancy McKeon is my idol!!!!!!!

Please visit my web page;

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JO- You are what you are and that's good enough for me!

JINNY- Everyone gets a chance to be forgiven

NATALIE_ Nothing's wrong with a little HEALTHY IDOL worship!

nancysbiggestfan
06-10-2001, 04:43 PM
I really like this fan fic!! Its great! Post more soon

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Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rox!!

Sometime in June:Nancy McKeon is doing another chat for Lifetime

Jinny: All right, all right, enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun,
any questions!?!
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Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.
~*~**~**~*~**~***~**~*~*~
Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

IM using AOL: NancysBiggestFan

Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

ISmellFine
06-10-2001, 04:54 PM
Post more! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

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~*~*NMRox*~*~

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are gonna meet Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest]! We're gonna handcuff ourselves to her car... or better yet, to her! And you're not! And we're also gonna handcuff ourselves to Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest].

Jinny: All right, all right, enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun,
any questions!?

Jinny: You're a peach.

Jinny: God, she's got a bug up her ass for me.
C.D.: Why?
Jinny: Oh, how should I know? Maybe, I am not her idea of what a lady cop should
look and act like.
C.D.: Did she tell you that?
Jinny: No, everytime she looks at me I get this flashback of my Aunt Irene's expression
when I showed up at my sweet 16 wearing cut offs and a t-shirt saying ,"Got any lately?"

Magda: What is that?
Jinny: It's a list of guys that I've slept with, ones I can remember anyway. Our delightful
Captian's idea.
Magda: You're gonna need a bigger book.
Jinny: *looks at Magda* What do we really know about anybody, ya know? Any cop or Jinny haters here today?! Raise your hand!

Jinny: Captain Amazing here decided to defend his wallet and laptop to the death. It didn't work, but you gotta admire the effort.
Teddy: My whole life was on that laptop.
Jinny: Ooh, sad commentary.
Angela: Did you see his face?
Teddy: White male, 18 to 22, shaved head, dagger tattoo on his wrist. I mean, he caught me by surprise, I could've taken him.

Visit my website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

80skid
06-10-2001, 07:35 PM
Keep it up! PLEEEEEEASE!

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
06-10-2001, 11:55 PM
Once I get over the initial shock of 2nite's ep... I'll post more... Ko, I'm ready.

Chapter 4: Teddy

I walked up the bleachers and sat looking out over the football field. They have a pretty good team here, Coach is nice for letting me have my first day off. Cute girls... Cute, blonde girls.* Like, Jenny... "Jenny..." I said out loud.
"What?" a voice beside me asked.
"Oh... Jinny! You're here."
"Of course! Unless that's a bad thing. In that case, I'm outie!"
"No, no, it's fine really."
"Really? Okay... I was gonna help you get to know our football team. Our suckey football team."
I nodded. "Okay, that's fine."
She laughed. "Oh, good! Okay, that's my youngest brother, Casey." She pointed to a tall, blonde guy on the other side of the track. "He's lineman. And, that's my older brother John, he is-- was quarterback, but now that you're here, I'm sure he'll get the boot." Jinny smiled and traced her chin and mouth with one finger.
"Jinny, would you like to go to dinner one evening?"
"Sure! Why not? When?"
"Friday. It's my mom's birthday. Everybody's going to be there. Pick you up at 7?"
"Okay."
"Great. Talk to you later." I stood up and walked down the bleachers toward's the field.


*No offense to any blondes. I'm a blonde. More in a sec!

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§º§º§ Kenzie §º§º§


[This message has been edited by Teddys_Angel_Jinny (edited 06-11-2001).]

lil_Miss_actress
06-11-2001, 01:45 PM
MOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEE Pwease?

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From the musical "Gypsy"

Rose: Herbie he he he! He tried too-

Herbie: Again?

Rose: Herbie, don't your DARE apoligize to him!

Baby June: Honesly Louise!

Baby Louise: Mama, how come I have four fathers?
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He's a horses ass, but he's got a point.~Jinny

Teddy: I don't like this.

Jinny: I know but I like you.
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I'm not A bitch I'm THE Bitch and that's MISS bitch to you!

IM me at- JJuhrend

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
06-11-2001, 02:00 PM
Are you still reading this?

Chapter 5: Jinny

"I certainly hope so," I muttered.
C.D. and Magda sat down next to me. "We couldn't help overhearing you two," C.D. joked.
"Dinner with his parents? You guys are coming to the mall with me after school to get a dress."
"No! Jinny, I don't shop!" Magda exclaimed.
"Magda! If nobody comes with me, I'm liable to buy animal print! Who knows? His parents could own the ASPCA!"
C.D. and Magda exchanged glances. "Jinny, nobody owns the ASPCA."
I shifted on the bleachers. "I knew that. If you guys won't come, who's going to?"
C.D. got a grin on her face that spelled disaster.

"Angie!" I walked hurriedly up to Angela Smith. "Hi! I'm Jinny Exstead, I'm a friend of C.D.'s."
Angela shook my hand. "Yes, she mentioned you. So did your brother, John. I have a class with him. I think his exact words when describing you were, quote, 'My sister, Jinny's the 11th grade slut.' unquote. But I don't believe it! I hope you don't think me shallow. I want to get to know you and, I hope we can be friends."
"Sure we can, Angela! Um, the first thing you can do as my friend, is help me pick out an evening gown today after school, seeing as you have such great fashion sense and I don't. Maybe you could help me change my entire wardrobe!"
"Sure! I'll call home at lunch and meet you in the parking lot today after school."
"Thank you!"
"It's least I can do."
"Sure!"

I g2g. How do you like it?

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Teddy: Jinny, what are you doing?
Jinny: What am I doing? (louder) I'm having a drink! This is a party, is it not?
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Teddy's Dad: So, what about you, Jinny? Please, uh, tell us about some of your cases. The one's you're on. Please.
Jinny: (nods) Well, we just finished one where we nailed this step-father for abusing his step-daughter... yeah. She was three and a half.
Teddy's Dad: Oh, no! That's awful. You know, you can't pick up the--
Jinny: Then there's the one where... wait, we got one pending now, I'm telling you... okay, okay, you with me? So, the guy, he calls 911, okay? He says he's just killed his wife.
Teddy: All right...
Jinny: We can't find the body... Till we look in the refrigerator.
Teddy: Okay... hey, Jinny...
Jinny: Very neatly carved.
Teddy's Dad: Hmm...
Jinny: Mm-hmm.

BlairW_1
06-11-2001, 03:00 PM
Muahahahahahahahaha!!!! Love it! I don't know why I just laughed my evil laugh... Yes I do! You wanna know why? Cuz I felt like it! Kenzie Rogers, write more, or you shall perish in your entirety... Enough of that, I guess falling down shook up my brainz a lil...

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My mind is like lightning: one brilliant flash, then it's gone.

If you have two legs, run; if you have one leg, hop; if you have no legs, fly.

~*Danielle*~

ISmellFine
06-11-2001, 06:00 PM
More please!! I'm dying!!

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~*~*NMRox*~*~
(Nancy McKeon's biggest fan.)

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha!

Jinny: You're a peach.

Teddy: You all set for tomorrow night?
Jinny: I have my bullet proof vest polished if that's what you mean.
Teddy: Come on, Jinny.
Jinny: Oh, yes. Actually... I bought a dress.
Teddy: You did?
Jinny: There is no guarantee, however, that I am going to wear it.
Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: What's this dress look like anyway?
Jinny: Oh, yeah, OK. Low cut, skin tight, animal print, ruffle at the bottom. Don't you have lawyering to do?

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, this is my family!!!! Come on, it's your turn. Go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter!

Jinny: Captain Amazing here decided to defend his wallet and laptop to the death. It didn't work, but you gotta admire the effort.
Teddy: My whole life was on that laptop.
Jinny: Ooh, sad commentary.
Angela: Did you see his face?
Teddy: White male, 18 to 22, shaved head, dagger tattoo on his wrist. I mean, he caught me by surprise, I could've taken him.

Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!!

NewsiesGurl229
06-11-2001, 07:58 PM
More Please!

VoLLeYBaLLQT
06-11-2001, 08:07 PM
Post MORE!!!!!!!!PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's awesome!!!!!!!

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Teddys_Angel_Jinny
06-11-2001, 08:51 PM
Ko, here's more!

Chapter 6: Magda

I felt guilty. I knew that I shouldn't, but I do, I thought. I think I'll meet Jinny in the parking lot, so she won't kill herself... or Angela. I tried to concentrate on diagramming sentences for my last hour class, honors English, but my mind kept wondering. Wondering to Teddy... a-and Jinny. He was so muscular and why did she have to get him first? Why does Jinny Exstead get everything she wants, right, exactly when she wants it?! Oh, wow, did I just set the limit for selfishness, or what? I had so much more than Jinny. I had a loving family, a decent GPA, well, Jinny has that, too, but I have something that Jinny doesn't... a mother. The bell rang and I was snapped out of my thoughts. I shut my paper in my English book, stuck it in my bag, and walked into the crowded hall to Jinny's locker.
C.D. came up beside me. "Well, well," she said. "Look who's where." She nodded in the direction of Jinny's locker and there stood Teddy.
"Surprise, surprise," I muttered and asked Jinny, do you still want me to go to the mall with you?"
"Yeah," she said, but never took her eyes off Teddy. "Angela went home sick in 5th hour."
"Well! We better get goin' if we're gonna get there before the big after school rush. Come on, Jinny." I pulled her out of the door.
When we were outside she gave me an ice cold stare. "What was that for?"
"Let's go."
"Okay." We got in her car and drove off towards the mall.

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Teddy: Jinny, what are you doing?
Jinny: What am I doing? (louder) What am I doing? I'm having a drink! This is a party, is it not?

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Teddy's Dad: So, what about you, Jinny? Please, uh, tell us about some of your cases. The one's you're on. Please.
Jinny: (nods) Well, we just finished one where we nailed this step-father for abusing his step-daughter... yeah. She was three and a half.
Teddy's Dad: Oh, no! That's awful. You know, you can't pick up the--
Jinny: Then there's the one where... wait, we got one pending now, I'm telling you... okay, okay, you with me? So, the guy, he calls 911, okay? He says he's just killed his wife.
Teddy: All right...
Jinny: We can't find the body... Till we look in the refrigerator.
Teddy: Okay... hey, Jinny...
Jinny: Very neatly carved.
Teddy's Dad: Hmm...
Jinny: Mm-hmm.

JoExstead
06-11-2001, 09:01 PM
keep going!!! This is really good!

[This message has been edited by JoExstead (edited 06-11-2001).]

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
06-12-2001, 03:34 PM
Ko, here's more. Really, tell me the honest truth!

Chapter 7: Jinny

"I like this one!" I stated and held up a dress.
Magda grabbed it from me and glared at me. "Jinny, it's animal print. The last 100 dresses you liked have been animal print! There were about 20 snakeskin, 25 leopard, 15 tiger, and all the rest were a mix! Now, try on this one. It's very chic yet casual." She held up a black spaghetti strap dress with a jacket over it.
I looked at it for a second. "It's black, I'll give you that."
A sales clerk came over to us. "Can I help you ladies?"
Magda held out the dress. "Yes, I think we'll take this one."

Because I don't have any shoes to wear with my new dress, our next stop was the shoe store. Inside, Magda kept handing me no heel shoes.
"What about these?" I asked and held up a knee boot.
Magda took it from me. "No! Try this." She handed me a black shoe, with a wedge heel, and a rounded toe.
"Okay," I agreed and we went to pay for the shoes.

We sat down in the food court with our ice cream and laughed.
"I think we just totaled me dad's credit card," I said and ate a spoonful of ice cream.
"This has been pretty fun," Magda replied.
"Spending money recklessly? I'll eat to that!" We clicked our spoons together and I studied my best friend. Long, curly hair. Dark skin. Big eyes. She was the American beauty, but she never flaunted it. Magda was very laid back. She was the calmer of us. While I did things without thinking about them, Magda carefully considered anything and everything before she did it. "What time is it?" I asked her.
She looked at her watch. "7:30. Why?"
"Oh, no reason. Wanna catch a movie?"
She shrugged. "Why not? We're here anyway." We finished our ice cream, threw our bowls in the trash can, and set off towards the theater.

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Teddy: Jinny, what are you doing?
Jinny: What am I doing? (louder) What am I doing? I'm having a drink! This is a party, is it not?

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Teddy's Dad: So, what about you, Jinny? Please, uh, tell us about some of your cases. The one's you're on. Please.
Jinny: (nods) Well, we just finished one where we nailed this step-father for abusing his step-daughter... yeah. She was three and a half.
Teddy's Dad: Oh, no! That's awful. You know, you can't pick up the--
Jinny: Then there's the one where... wait, we got one pending now, I'm telling you... okay, okay, you with me? So, the guy, he calls 911, okay? He says he's just killed his wife.
Teddy: All right...
Jinny: We can't find the body... Till we look in the refrigerator.
Teddy: Okay... hey, Jinny...
Jinny: Very neatly carved.
Teddy's Dad: Hmm...
Jinny: Mm-hmm.

Jo_Polniaczek
06-12-2001, 07:05 PM
Pretty, pretty, PRETTY, PRETTY please post more soon?

WildChildJinny
06-12-2001, 07:14 PM
Gimme me a "M"
Gimme me a "O"
Gimme me a "R"
Gimme me a "E"

Gimme MORE!

LOL I ~<3~ LOVE ~<3~ This story

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

I-M address Bixbabe926

Joanna Marie_1
06-12-2001, 08:02 PM
C'mon now......keep writin this damn fan-fic!!!!!!!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

ISmellFine
06-12-2001, 10:14 PM
Don't stop, this is AWESOME!!!!!

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~*~*NMRox*~*~

[Nancy McKeon's biggest fan.]

JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!!

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D

Teddy: You all set for tomorrow night?
Jinny: I have my bullet proof vest polished if that's what you mean.
Teddy: Come on, Jinny.
Jinny: Oh, yes. Actually... I bought a dress.
Teddy: You did?
Jinny: There is no guarantee, however, that I am going to wear it.
Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: What's this dress look like anyway?
Jinny: Oh, yeah, OK. Low cut, skin tight, animal print, ruffle at the bottom. Don't you have lawyering to do?

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me, a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter!

Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

Nancy McKeon is my idol!!
06-12-2001, 10:19 PM
I DEMAND YOU TO POST MORE!!! lol

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Please e-mail me anytime at NancyMcKeonFan2006@hotmail.com
Im Me any time- nancymckeonfan01

Nancy McKeon is my idol!!!!!!!

Please visit my web page;

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JO- You are what you are and that's good enough for me!

JINNY- Everyone gets a chance to be forgiven

NATALIE_ Nothing's wrong with a little HEALTHY IDOL worship!

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Teddys_Angel_Jinny
06-12-2001, 10:32 PM
This is about to get a lot more interesting, I promise.

Chapter 8: Teddy

I was a nervous wreck when Friday finally rolled around. I barely made it through school and I had no idea how I was going to make it till 7 o'clock that night.
I had told Jinny that I'd pick her up at 7:00 sharp and she should be ready.
"Yeah, yeah. Here's my address and phone number. And if John answers the phone, hang up and call again."
"Okay." I laughed.
"One more thing..." she started.
"What?" I asked her.
"Never mind," she replied and tucked a strand of hair behind her ear.
"No, Jinny, tell me."
"Is there going to be liquor at this party?"
"Probably champagne. It's all my mom touches."
She chewed on her bottom lip. "Hmm... Well, then I'll have to bring something else. I need to go study for that geometry test I have next hour. See you tonight."
"'Bye." I said and watched as she walked down the bleachers and into the girl's locker room.

After school, I had a million things to do. First, I made sure the housewas clean and just for the heck of it, I re-alphabetized my CD's.
Around 6:30 I started getting ready. At 6:45 I went and washed my car. Real bright, Theodore, I thought. Washing a car in a tux. 6:50 I went home and changed and at 7:00 sharp I pulled into Jinny's driveway. I shut my engine off and went to the door. I rang to doorbell and waited.

VoLLeYBaLLQT
06-12-2001, 11:00 PM
Awesome, i love it post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ISmellFine
06-12-2001, 11:37 PM
Wow, this is really great! POST MORE!!!

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~*~*NMRox*~*~

[Nancy McKeon's biggest fan.]

JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!!

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D

Teddy: You all set for tomorrow night?
Jinny: I have my bullet proof vest polished if that's what you mean.
Teddy: Come on, Jinny.
Jinny: Oh, yes. Actually... I bought a dress.
Teddy: You did?
Jinny: There is no guarantee, however, that I am going to wear it.
Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: What's this dress look like anyway?
Jinny: Oh, yeah, OK. Low cut, skin tight, animal print, ruffle at the bottom. Don't you have lawyering to do?

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter!

Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

Joanna Marie_1
06-13-2001, 01:51 AM
MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanx a mill!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

VoLLeYBaLLQT
06-13-2001, 12:24 PM
Post More NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
06-13-2001, 12:31 PM
This is where it get's more exciting!

Chapter 9: Jinny

The doorbell rang. Casey was still gaping. "Sis, you look... gorgeous!"
"Thank you, Casey. I needed that. Go get the door."
"He's your date."
"I have to make him wait!" I stuck my head out the door. "John, pleasssse?"
John got up and answered the door. "She's not ready yet. Won't you come in?"
Daddy was relatively glad that I was dating someone who had a jeep rather than a motorcycle. I thought Dad would be nice to Teddy. That's when he turned on me. No, Dad, don't! I silently screamed. But he did. He walked up to Teddy and asked him, "You drink? You smoke?"
Teddy kinda shook his head. "No, sir."
I decided to make my appearance before things got really bad. "Teddy!" I said and threw my jacket over my shoulder.
John came up to me. "You look like a girl!"
"That's what I am! Ooh, and you're lucky that this is a new dress. Can we go now?"
Unfortunately, my dad noticed the paper bag in my hand. "What's that, Jinny?"
I laughed and puled my father over to the other corner of the living room. "Dad, girl stuff. Make-up."
"Oh, okay! You kids have fun now."
"We will!" I waved and drug Teddy out of the door.

More in a sec.

Joanna Marie_1
06-13-2001, 03:41 PM
MORE!!!!!!

ISmellFine
06-13-2001, 04:09 PM
Please! I'm lovin' this!


[This message has been edited by Nancy McKeon Rox (edited 06-13-2001).]

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
06-13-2001, 04:51 PM
Ko, I lied. This is where it gets more exciting.


Chapter 10: Teddy

We walked down the walkway to my jeep.
"Ah! You have a forest green jeep? Cool!"
"Yeah. Come on, we're running late."
"Look, I'm sorry about my father."
I helped her in the car and climbed in myself. I fastened my seatbelt and started the engine. "No problem. I should get used to it."

Later at the reception, I showed Jinny where my room was.
"Your room?" she asked and looked at my CD collection. "Hmm... Oldies but Goodies, [/i]American Hi-Fi[/i], Destiny's Child; Survivor. You have good taste, Bluementhal." She took a bottle of wine out of the paper bag. "Want some?"
"No, thanks... I'm gonna go to the bathroom. Excuse me." She nodded and I left. Actually, I shouldn't have. When I got back, Jinny had finished off the bottle of wine and had turned my CD player on Let's Get It On.
"Come on," she said.
"Jinny, what are you doing?"
"Come on!"
"My parents are downstairs!"
"Um... and your point is?"
"Come on. Mom's about to cut the cake."
"Okay, sir!"
I pulled her downstairs just as they started singing Happy Birthday to my mother. When we were done singing, my father made a toast to my mom. "To Mrs. Bluementhal, and may she live many more years. Now, to start the dancing off, my son, Theodore, and his girlfriend, Jinny!"
Jinny, being extremely drunk, went up to my dad. "Actually, Pops, can I start it off by myself?"
"I guess, but--"
"Great." She handed him my Destiny's Child CD and asked him to put it on #3 and climbed up on the table. Bootylicious blasted through the speakers and Jinny was right with the CD doing everything the song said. "I shake my jelly at every chance, when I whip with my hips you slip into my trance, I'm hopin' you can handle all this jelly that I have, Now, let's cover up while we scat some jazz."
My mother turned a kind of puke green and my father was cracking up at the sight. I shut off the CD player and Jinny fell into my arms.
"I'm taking you home," I said and carried her outside.

Ko, is that remotely interesting?


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"In the words of Cyndi Lauper, girls just wanna have fun. What's the point in planning for the future? I wanna get the most out of today."
Jinny Exstead
http://www.lifetimetv.com/shows/division/images/nancy.jpg

[This message has been edited by Teddys_Angel_Jinny (edited 06-13-2001).]

Jinny_Extead
06-13-2001, 05:24 PM
Keep on going... this is great!

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Jo: Why would you want to be popular? You have to smile and talk to people and all that stuff.

[This message has been edited by Jinny_Extead (edited 06-13-2001).]

WildChildJinny
06-13-2001, 05:42 PM
OMG, Is it interesting? Let me see....HELL YA! This is a great story, write more soon! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

I-M address Bixbabe926

ISmellFine
06-13-2001, 07:01 PM
OMG!!! That's hilarious!!!!!!!!!! I can imagine her doing that!!!! HAHA!!! POST MORE NOW MY EVIL MINION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OK, sorry. I'll go now.

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Luff,
NmRoX
[But you can just call me Jinny Exstead.]

JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!!

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D

Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

ISmellFine
06-13-2001, 08:18 PM
Pleasy squeezy, lemon peasy?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

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Luff,
NmRoX
[But you can just call me Jinny Exstead.]

JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!!

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D

Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

Joanna Marie_1
06-14-2001, 12:52 AM
That was great....PLEASE post more SOON!!!!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

Joanna Marie_1
06-14-2001, 11:27 PM
c'mon now add more PLEASE!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

ISmellFine
06-15-2001, 03:36 PM
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ!!!!!!!!

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Luff,
NmRoX
[But you can just call me Jinny Exstead.]

JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!!

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D

Blair: I don't sweat, I glisten.
Jo: Well, you're glistening like a pig!

Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

WildChildJinny
06-15-2001, 07:42 PM
PLEASE~!!!!!!~ Post more REALLY soon!

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

I-M address Bixbabe926

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
06-15-2001, 07:51 PM
I'm sorry I haven't posted more yet, but somebody (evil glares at Danielle) was supposed to meet me at 6:30 but NO!

I'll post more after I figure out how Magda's gonna chew Jinny out.

BlairW_1
06-15-2001, 08:28 PM
I was at Best Buy getting a microphone! NA way, you can write it yerself, K, or ask LA, she'll probably help ya.

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My mind is like lightning: one brilliant flash, then it's gone.

If you have two legs, run; if you have one leg, hop; if you have no legs, fly.

http://www.std.com/bfvf/festival/2001/images/big/bdinerchicaonphoneweb.jpg

~*Danielle*~

Joanna Marie_1
06-17-2001, 12:52 AM
Dont leave us hangin here c'mon!!!!!!!!!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

BlairW_1
06-17-2001, 09:28 AM
Sorry about not calling you back, K, I was watching Childhood Sweetheart? on Lifetime. Have u ever seen it? Itz good! T2YL, k? kk. ko. k oi. Goodness, there's a lot of words starting with k! Kewl, isn't it? BTW, post more on this story or I'll kill you! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers... Boy, I bet they tasted awful!

I'm a blonde babe that can beat boys at basketball, no prob!

~*Danielle*~
<3 y'all!

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
06-18-2001, 12:26 PM
Sorry I haven't posted more yet. I can only write on a Division fanfic after I see a new eppie or The Division. <-- That was redundant wasn't it? Oh, well!

Chapter 11: Magda

It was late when Jinny decided to drop by my house. I answered the door in my robe and half asleep and there stood Jinny. "Jinny?"
She walked into the living room. "Magda, before you start on what time it is, have to tell you something."
My jaw dropped. "Jinny, are you pregnant?"
"No!" She snapped back. "It's something I did to Teddy's parents!"
"What'd you do?" I asked and stuck my hands in my robe pocket to warm them up.
"Well, I got--"
"Drunk?" I completed her sentence. It's easy to do that with Jinny.
She nodded. "Yes. Anyway, we went downstairs and his mom cut the cake and I got--"
"Up on the table and danced to Bootylicious?"
Her eyes got really big. "How did you know that?"
"Teddy called me after he took you home to sober up. I knew you'd be over here. Jinny how could you do that? In front of his parents? I can understand how you could do it if it was just you and Teddy, but," I lowered my voice to a whisper and leaned close to her. "In front of his parents?"
"I'm sorry, Magda! From the way you're going on, you'd think that you had a crush on Teddy!"
"Jinny! We'd better stop before we wake everybody up!"
"Fine!"
"Fine!"
She walked out the door and I went upstairs.

More in a sec. I'm about to get to a really good part!

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"In the words of Cyndi Lauper, girls just wanna have fun. What's the point in planning for the future? I wanna get the most out of today."
Jinny Exstead
http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/Ep12pic38JinTheo.JPG
^ That picture makes me think of Jessica Andrews' song 'Show Me Heaven.' :sigh: It's so 'pecial!
On Monday, June 25th, Danielle, Leigh Ann, and I are going to fly red-eye to LA and hurt Deborah Joy LeVine till she says she'll put Jinny and Teddy together! Anyone who wants to may join us!

ISmellFine
06-18-2001, 02:01 PM
MORE!!!! NOW!!!!

------------------
Luff,
NmRoX
[But you can just call me Jinny Exstead]

JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!!

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D :p

Blair: I don't sweat, I glisten.
Jo: Well, you're glistening like a pig!

Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

BlairW_1
06-18-2001, 07:48 PM
:::screams::: You know, K, this has been the longest second of my life! At the rate this second is going, the little chile will be born before it's up! (Which, in reality, it will be born in 18 hours!)

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers... Boy, I bet they tasted awful!

I'm a blonde babe that can beat boys at basketball, no prob!

~*Danielle*~
<3 y'all!

Joanna Marie_1
06-19-2001, 12:40 AM
More this is really good!!!!!!! Why dont u post like 4 or 5 chapters at a time and keep us occupied while u try and post more!!!!!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
06-20-2001, 11:57 PM
Ko, I'll post quite a lot tonight cuz I probably won't be on tomorrow. So, here goes!

Chapter 12: Teddy

Now, one thing you have to understand is that I'm not the kind of guy that can't admit when he's wrong. So, when I tried calling Jinny on either her cell or home phone I was a little bit surprised when she hung up on me. This went on for a week until I finally decided that we had to talk about this. So, exactly one week and one day from the time she had ultimately embarrassed me and herself in front of my family, I drove to her house and knocked on the door.
Jinny opened it, red faced and puffy eyed. She motioned for me to come in and we sat down at the kitchen table. "I'm glad you're here," she said.
"I wanted to tell you that I'm sorry."
She looked at me in astonishment. "Why are you sorry? I'm the one who embarrassed you in front of everybody."
I knew I was about to get her crying again so I asked her if she could sneak away for an hour or two. She told me that Casey, John, and her dad had driven out to visit her grandparents and wouldn't be back until tomorrow.
I took her hand and led her out to my car.
We drove in silence and finally reached the condemned house on my street. I led her inside and felt her body tense up.
"Isn't this building being torn down soon?" she asked timidly.
I smiled and kissed her lightly on the lips. "We're fine. I come here a lot. I know where it's safe." She nodded and we ventured on into the house until we came to the mster bedroom. I opened the closet door and showed her what lay inside.
"Kittens!" she exclaimed and pointed to the tint bodies in the bottom of the closet. "Oh, Teddy! They're wonderful!" Her eyes shifted from the kittens to their mother. "Who taught her that?" she asked.
"Taught her what?" I said. "How to have kittens?"
"No," Jinny answered. "How to be a mother."
"Mother's know," I shrugged.
"Not all of them," she said quietly.

Chapter 13: Jinny
As soon as the words left my mouth I regretted saying them.
"What did you say?" Teddy asked.
I felt like I had to explain to Teddy. I owed it to him. He deserved to know why I...
I sat down on a sheet covered couch and patted the spot next to me. "You might as well sit, Theodore Blumenthal, because I have a long story to tell you. When I answered the door... The reason why I was crying was... My brothers and father drove to... They went to the cemetery where mother's buried." I felt hot tears welling up in my eyes. Don't cry, Jinny! Don't you dare cry! I urged myself but I knew it was no use, so, I just let the tears fall down my cheeks.
Teddy put his arm around me. "Jinny, I'm sorry. How did... How did she die?"
I sniffed and wiped away a few tears. "I remember it like it was yesterday. I came home from school and went into my parents' room. My mother was standing there with my dad's gun pressed to her temple." I choked down a sob and tried to continue with my story. "She... She told me to go b-back to the living room, but I... was s-stubborn and wouldn't listen." I left myself cry. "She pulled the trigger and I screamed. I don't even remember who found us. I can just remember looking at my mother's blood surrounding her in this puddle and I thought, 'This isn't my mother! It's not! It can't be!' It was. I'll never forget it." I let all the tears that I hadn't cried in the past three-and-a-half years spill out.
Teddy's jaw dropped and he pulled me close to him. "Jinny, I had no idea!" He hugged me even tighter and just let me go on. I must've cried for about an hour but it seemed like a second with Teddy rocking me back and forth. In the past four years I had never felt so loved.

Chapter 14: Teddy

We sat there for a second after Jinny had finished crying. My shirt was soaked, but I didn't care. I just wanted Jinny to know how much I cared for her. "Hey..." I said, brushed her lips with mine. "You got me wet."
She laughed. "It's nice to laugh after you finish crying, y'know?" she said and smiled. "But, you know what's even better?"
"No. What?"
She pinned me on the couch and started kissing me intensely. I pulled her off of me and she lunged forward again with her eyed closed and her lips puckered. "Jinny... Jinny? Stop. I don't want it to be like this."
She kind of looked hurt. She hung her head and sighed. "You know, you're right?" she said without looking at me. "Before my mom died, I wasn't gonna go past kissing till I was married. Then... she killed herself and I started drinking... John started hating everyone and Casey... he's the only normal one, I thought. He was 11 when mom died, y'know. He and John didn't take it quite as hard as I did."
I nodded and kissed her again. Only this time I pinned her.

Chapter 15: Jinny

I don't remember the exact time we woke up. I just remember feeling lighter than I had in ages. I wanted to run home and call everyone and tell them that Teddy and I had gone all the way! And that neither of us were drunk when it happened!
I guess Teddy felt the same way I did because on the way home he complimented me.
"You don't know how many men have said that to me!" I replied and smiled, tossing my head back and letting the wind make it fly out.

As soon as I got home, I called Magda and C.D. on three-way. They both wanted to know where I had been all day, because they had been trying to call both me and Teddy to see if we wanted to triple with them and their boyfriends to a movie that night. I said we could go and then explained where Teddy had taken me.
"The couch?" Magda exclaimed.
C.D. laughed. "Did ya pin 'im?"
I smiled and replied, "No, actually, he pinned me."
Magda sighed. "I wish Gabriel and I were like that."
C.D. sighed too. "Ditto."
"With Gabriel?!?" I teased and we all laughed. "Hey, I've got an idea. Why don't you two come over to my house after the movie and we'll go to Blockbuster and get ice cream and soda and chips and we'll have a slumber party!"
Magda scoffed. "A slumber party? Don't you think we're a little old for that?"
We were silent for a minute then we all answered Mag's question, "Nah!"

What do you think? Honest opinions here, people! Please?

hockeychiC518
06-21-2001, 09:47 AM
OMG!!! THis is sooooooo ATD!!! when you get a chance please post more! you made my first offical day of summer vacation!~

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Wild Child
06-21-2001, 11:12 AM
This is so great!!!!!I'm loving it!

BTW hockeychiC518:I like the pic in your signature.LOL....


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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

WildChildJinny
06-21-2001, 11:42 AM
WOW! WOW! WOW! THIS IS SoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOo GOOD!
And those were GREAT chapters!

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

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I-M address Bixbabe926

Joanna Marie_1
06-21-2001, 07:41 PM
MORE!!!!!!! PLEASE this is GREAT!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

XoVanillaRain90oX
06-22-2001, 12:49 PM
your a REALLY GREAT WRITE!! Please post more. Today was my last day of school and im already bored. I need something to entertain me for the next 73 days LOL

WildChildJinny
06-23-2001, 02:29 PM
I need more, I must have more!! This story is SoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOo(There I go again w/ the OoOoOo thing) GREAT! You have to post more ASAP! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

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I-M address Bixbabe926

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
06-23-2001, 02:34 PM
Y'all I am so sorry I haven't posted more, but I've been working non-stop on my website for the past week but I'm finally done! *Yeeessss!* And I'm also working on the soundtrack to this story so I'm really busy! But if you wanna visit my site, turn your speakers up and click this link...
www.the-division.cityslide.com (http://www.the-division.cityslide.com)

Oh, yeah, the quotes section isn't very big yet but I'll add more later when I have more time. It was hard to link everything but if you want me to add anything to it, e-mail me, ko? Ko. Have fun! Oh, yeah. Everybody on 'The Division' except Captain has a song. Try to figure 'em out. And e-mail what you think to me. I'll post the winners at a later date! I g2r. T2YL!

Wild Child
06-23-2001, 03:12 PM
Originally posted by Teddys_Angel_Jinny:
But if you wanna visit my site, turn your speakers up and click this link...
www.the-division.cityslide.com (http://www.the-division.cityslide.com)

Oh, yeah, the quotes section isn't very big yet but I'll add more later when I have more time. It was hard to link everything but if you want me to add anything to it, e-mail me, ko? Ko. Have fun! Oh, yeah. Everybody on 'The Division' except Captain has a song. Try to figure 'em out. And e-mail what you think to me. I'll post the winners at a later date! I g2r. T2YL!

I love your site so far.You did a great job.I signed the guest book too.
I'll probably email you my guesses some other time.Anyway,good job!
The story is awsome too.Can't wait to rea more!


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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Joanna Marie_1
06-24-2001, 07:41 PM
AHHHHHHHHHH I need more!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo
06-25-2001, 11:05 AM
Oh u gotta finish!!!!!!

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
06-25-2001, 02:30 PM
Here's more...

Chapter 16: Magda

At around 2:30 the next morning, C.D. was lying on Jinny's bed. And Jinny and I were lying on the floor. We were playing 'Truth or Dare.' (Childish, I know, but hey! We were having a sleepover.)
"Jinny," I said. "Truth or dare?"
She smiled. "Dare."
C.D. and I laughed. "Okay. I dare you to call Teddy up and make him think that you're some psycho killer or axe murderer or something. Freak him out." What is it about sleepovers that make people crazy? I thought, and watched as Jinny picked up the phone and dialed Teddy's number.
C.D. fell off Jinny's bed laughing and Jinny put a finger to her lips and said, "Shh! It's ringing." She cleared her throat and started talking in a demonic voice. "I'll get him my pretty--" She switched to her regular voice. "Hello? Oh, I'm sorry. I must have the wrong number. Yes, hi! No, I understand. Okay. Nice talking to you, too." She hung up the phone. "B****," she finished her sentence.
C.D. (who had climbed back on Jinny's bed) fell off again and asked, "Who was that?"
"Guess," Jinny answered. "It was his ex-girlfriend, Jennifer aka Jenny."
"Ooohh!" C.D. exclaimed. "And she actually told you?"
Jinny nodded.
I couldn't believe it. Teddy and Jinny... the inseperable were being ripped apart, by Jenny! Or is it Jinny? I was even more confused that Jinny (or Jenny) was.

I g2g. What do you think?

WildChildJinny
06-25-2001, 03:19 PM
Finally, you wrote some! But now you're gonna have to write some more, 'cuz I <3 This Story!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

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I-M address Bixbabe926

ISmellFine
06-25-2001, 04:15 PM
Come on, post more please!!!

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~*~*NMRox*~*~
[But you can just call me Jinny Exstead]

Jinny and Teddy rock!

Proud member of the Jinny and Teddy shouldn't break up club.

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D :p

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
06-26-2001, 07:14 PM
Okay... Do you trust me now? Do actually believe that I was gonna disappoint you? Excuse me while I say... HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Kayo, on with the fanfic!

Chapter 17: C.D.

Jinny kinda moped around for the rest of the sleepover. She didn't cry, though. Magda and I kept telling her that it was okay to cry, but she kept saying that it was okay and that she thought that he deserved her, but we knew that as soon as we left her house she'd run right back up to her room and cry her eyes out.
I can't say that I really blamed her. I told Jinny, "I used to have a boyfriend, who shall remain nameless, that was scum! Actually, I was kinda glad when I caught him cheating on me so I colud dump the flea." Magda glared at me. "Oops! Jinny, I'm sorry! I didn't mean to call Teddy scum, it's just that..."
"It's okay, C.D.," she answered. "I'm not upset about Teddy... Theodore. Actually, I think Jenny's only doing it for revenge. She's still upset that I slept with her boyfriend. She's one to talk. She's the one that's slept with the entire male student body!"
Magda raised her eyebrows and said, "What about you, Jinny? Like you haven't?"
Jinny looked offended. "No! Occording to my calculations..." She pulled out a notebook and flipped to the first page. "She's 50 of 191 and I'm only 49. So, you see, actually Magda... No wait!" She retrieved a pencil from a shoebox and addeded a name to both lists. "So, she's 51 and I'm 50. That's hardly half."
"Who's the 50th?" I asked.
She shrugged. "Theodore."
Magda sighed. "Oh, my..."

More in a sec...

hockeychiC518
06-26-2001, 10:58 PM
awesome post more when u get a chance!!!!!!!

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*~~**~Katie~**~~*

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo
06-27-2001, 11:51 AM
this is the longest second of my life...please post more! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

WildChildJinny
06-27-2001, 12:07 PM
Gimme a "M"
Gimme a "O"
Gimme a "R"
Gimme a "E"

Gimme MORE!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

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I-M address Bixbabe926

NancyRox11
06-27-2001, 12:27 PM
ditto

BlairW_1
06-27-2001, 02:02 PM
K, you have the strangest seconds of anyone I know... Mrs. Bray will be suprised to know that, won't she??? http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif I'll tell her when I go swimming there this weekend... There's gonna be trouble!!!

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers... Boy, I bet they tasted awful!

I'm a blonde babe that can beat boys at basketball, no prob!

~*Danielle*~
<3 y'all!

Bang A Gong
06-27-2001, 02:36 PM
I love it!

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Okie dokie artichokie?!

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

C-U-T-E, don't you wish that you were me? U-G-L-Y, you aint got not alabi! M-A-M-A, I know how you got that way!

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hockeychiC518
07-02-2001, 11:08 PM
kenzie are u going to add more soon?? pleaseeeeeeeeeeee it is sooooooooo good!

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
07-02-2001, 11:31 PM
It's my birthday and y'all want me to post more? Abachu! (Happy, D?) Okie dokie... artichokie...

Chapter 18: Teddy

Jinny managed to avoid me completely for two weeks. When I called her, she hung up on me, so I would call either Magda or C.D., and ask them why she hated me. Both of them just answered, "You should know!" Then they's hang up on me.
When I got an invitation in my locker for a co-ed sleepover at C.D.'s house, I looked at it as the perfect opportunity to reconcile my relationship with Jinny. There was a handwritten note on the back of mine. I recognized the handwriting as Jinny's. It read,
"I know you're thinking of asking me to this thing. Go ahead! I might have a date, and I might not. You never know! But, if I do have a date, I'm sure Jenny would be glad to go with you. She slept with you, didn't she? See you at the party, scuz.

Love, Jinny

P.S. -- I'm allergic to roses, chocolate, and anything else that you want to give me.

J.E.

P.P.S -- If you don't know why I'm mad at you, think hard. Think really, really hard.

J.E."

Well, that's just great, I thought.

I showed up at C.D.'s house Friday afternoon and was shown into the basement where everyone was dancing to Bootylicious.
"Hey, what's wrong, Teddy?" Jenny asked me and started stroking my chest.
I pulled her hand off. "Just stop that, Jennifer! This song brings back memories."
"M-memories of her, right?" she asked.
"Right!" I snapped and went back upstairs, Jenny following close behind me.

When we got upstairs, Magda was snapping eye illusion photos. "Hey, Teddy!" she said. "Come here and pose like you're kissing." She motioned to Jenny and me and before I knew what was happening, Jenny had cupped my chin in her hands and was kissing me. The last thing I saw was Magda snapping the picture, and Jinny coming upstairs.

Chapter 19: Magda

I realized what I had done all too late. Jinny came up to me and grabbed the Polaroid out of my hands. She shook it making it develope faster.
Teddy broke away from Jenny and came towards Jinny. "Jinny, I can explain--"
"Oh, you know what? So can I!" Jinny exclaimed. She shoved the picture under his nose and everyone came up from the basement to watch a big fight.
Teddy frantically tried to hold his own. "It's not what it looks like!"
C.D. came up beside me and said, "Busted..."
"Oh, really? Because it looks like you were kissing that... that... slut!" Jinny spat out.
Jennifer cocked her head. "Me? A slut? Huh, that's like the sheep callin' the rice white!"
Some spectators started chanting, "Fight! Fight! Fight! Fight!"
Jinny pointed at Teddy. "Don't go anywhere, I'm not through with you yet!" Then she lunged at Jenny and soon they were rolling around on the living room floor going at it.
C.D. smiled and said, "And I thought this party would be boring!"

Okay, my fingers are about to fall off and it's time for me to enjoy the last bit of my birthday cake!

[This message has been edited by Teddys_Angel_Jinny (edited 07-02-2001).]

JoExstead
07-03-2001, 12:30 AM
Keep Going! This is really good!

sue z q
07-03-2001, 12:38 AM
HaHaHaHa! The sheep calling the rice white! I'm allergic to roses, chocolate, and anything else you want to give me! This is hilarious! Keep it coming!

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"Blow it out your gucci bag!" -Jo
~God Bless~

hockeychiC518
07-03-2001, 10:27 AM
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! glad u posted more http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Bang A Gong
07-03-2001, 01:11 PM
Hahaha this funny! I love it, post more. Oh......and HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!! :-D

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

Do you know that real eyes realize real lies?

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80skid
07-03-2001, 01:28 PM
Ditto on both it's good and happy birthday!

NancyRox11
07-03-2001, 02:19 PM
It's awesome! And HAPPY BIRTHDAY! :-) :-D

XoVanillaRain90oX
07-03-2001, 10:23 PM
Post more and Happy B-day http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif *mines in August*

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Check out my Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.

BlairW_1
07-04-2001, 12:04 AM
Originally posted by Teddys_Angel_Jinny:
It's my birthday and y'all want me to post more? Abachu! (Happy, D?)



YOU SPELLED IT RIGHT!!!! :P Hey, wait a minute, that's my word! I would get Tiff to beat you up, but she's in Tennesee visiting CoD, and anyway, you got me a present a day after your bday! Oh, I'm also sorry for sort of... forgetting... it. Mom hasn't said anything about Tulsa yet, I'll email ya when she does. Great story!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif I always seem to forget to say that. It's the first thing on my mind when I start typing, but it never makes it's way onto the page... See? There I go again on my mindless rambling! (sp?) Sorry, y'all, I'm goin through a very rare blonder-than-usual streak. Little Grasshopper hit her head on the side of the pool, and she said it knocked her stupid! Well, stupider than she was... (That's what she said, don't think I'm mean to my Little Grasshopper, I went around Mrs. Bray's pool and rescued (sp?) all the grasshoppers from it.) There I go again, I can't even keep on a topic when it's not the topic! Anyway, I think my brain is water-logged... Is that a word? I hope I'm not like this for Quiz Bowl. Oh, Little Grasshopper is too going to be in Competitive Academics! State champs is still almost guaranteed! Well, so was Mrs. Gray coming with us next year, so we can't be so sure about anything anymore... I really need to stop typing, my sunburn is aching. Did I tell y'all about my sunburn? I don't think so. Sunday, I spent an hour in Mrs. Bray's pool, no sunscreen. Monday, 5 hours in Mrs. Bray's pool, no sunscreen. Today, 1 hour in Mrs. Bray's pool, some sunscreen. Later today, 4 hours in Falen's pool, no sunscreen. But my burn doesn't hurt as bad as my other one, I can be thankful for that! I know someone who got 3rd degree burns from sunburn! Now, I've had those, they're no picnic. It's when your skin is burned down to the muscle and bone, for all y'all who don't have a doctor as a cousin. Really, I need to stop typing! Okay, on the count of three, I'm X-ing out. 1... 2... 3... I can't do it! I haven't typed 4 3 days! Did y'all miss me? Ko, I'm gonna make K mad, I'm sposed to be lookin for ******** in her story. (No, it's not a bad word, I just don't wanna tell; it's K's project.) Buh-byezies!

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

*¤.¸¸.·´¨`»Danielle«´¨`·.¸¸.¤ *
<3 ya! :)

sue z q
07-04-2001, 12:35 AM
You crack me up, BlairW_1! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif Oh, yeah, and back 2 the topic: Please post more!

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Jo: Partners? You mean 50-50? Uh, 50-50-50-50-50?
Blair: Good, Jo, we'll let you do the books!
If ignorance is bliss, why aren't there more happy people?
Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most.
~God Bless~

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
07-04-2001, 12:45 AM
Originally posted by BlairW_1:
4 hours in Falen's pool, no sunscreen. I'm sposed to be lookin for ******** in her story.


I got stung! For the first time in my 12 years I was stung by a sweatbee! And it hurtz! I'm talkin serious pain! And I burned! And hurry up with the ********, plz! I've been waiting 4 eva!

Y'all, I'll post more after the swelling in my arm goes down a lil.

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
07-04-2001, 01:36 AM
How r the ******** comin, D?

Oh, never mind...

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Q: How many women with PMS does it take to change a
light bulb?

A: One. Only ONE!! And do you know WHY? Because no
one
else in this house knows HOW to change a light bulb! They don't even now that the bulb is BURNED OUT! They
would sit in the dark for THREE DAYS before they figured it out. And, once they figured it out, they wouldn't be able to find the light bulbs despite the fact that they've been in the SAME CUPBOARD for the past 17 YEARS! But if they did, by some miracle, actually find them 2 DAYS LATER, the chair they dragged to stand on to change the STUPID light bulb would STILL BE IN THE SAME SPOT!! AND UNDERNEATH IT WOULD BE THE WRAPPER THE STUPID @*!#$% LIGHT BULBS CAME IN! WHY? BECAUSE NO-ONE EVER CARRIES OUT THE GARBAGE!! IT'S A WONDER WE HAVEN'T ALL SUFFOCATED FROM
THE PILES OF GARBAGE THAT ARE 12' DEEP THROUGHOUT THE
ENTIRE HOUSE. THE HOUSE!! - IT WOULD TAKE AN ARMY TO CLEAN THIS #@*$!#@!... HOUSE!
I'm sorry... what did you ask me?
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That's true you know, so, next month, don't screw with me! :D

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
07-06-2001, 09:23 PM
Y'all, before I can post more, I'm gonna need about 4 or 5 peeps to email me. I have a special project 4 them. So, if you can e-mail me, I'll fill you in and we can get started!

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"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps not record of wrong doings. Love does not delight in evil, but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres."
1 Corinthians 13: 4-7

Swimfan85
07-06-2001, 10:26 PM
ok hey i emailed ya!


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Lorelai: It's shorter?
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BlairW_1
07-07-2001, 04:32 PM
Wahhhhh!!!!! Y'all are takin my job of gettin ********!!! Oh well, I'm not good at it NE wayz...

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Teddys_Angel_Jinny
07-09-2001, 07:00 PM
Y'all, I'm really sorry that I haven't posted more any sooner but we've been busy, haven't we Katie? Anyway, I can't wait to get to the end, but I'm not gonna rush it. You're about to get a very big cliffhanger, too...

Chapter 20: Jinny

After about 15 minutes of Jenny and I rolling around on the floor, Teddy jumped in and saved her from me. It's a good thing he did, too, or else I'd be rotting away in prison for the rest of my life. I swear, I would've killed her. But, I didn't get the chance.
After it was over, Magda politely told C.D. that we weren't gonna be able to spend the night, so she took me home.
Just as I had predicted, she lectured me on manners and how it wasn't nice to punch someone in the eye repeatedly.
I said, "Yeah, whatever," and went inside. Actually, I would have been better off staying and beating the crap out of Jenny instead of what I found when I came home...

"Casey!" I screamed, dropped my bag, and ran over to my little brother. I picked his head up out of the puddle of blood on the rug and asked him what had happened.
He explained to me that he had told John and Dad that he was gay, and that John had beat him up for it. I called Magda and had her take him to the hospital. Then I went to find John...

"Hey! What the h*** is up?" I asked and pratically broke down the door to John's room.
"Oh... Casey told you, did he?" He shut off his stereo and walked over to me.
"Yeah!" I exclaimed. "And he told you. But you did something I didn't. You almost murdered him!"
"See, that's always been the difference between me and you, sis. You're compassionate."
"To some people!" I answered and lunged for John. We fell onto the floor and went at it. My second fight in less than an hour.

Chapter 21: Teddy

At about ten the phone rang at my house. I answered it and heard Jinny's voice on the other end. "How did you know that I was home?"
"I already called C.D.'s and when you weren't there..." Her voice trailed off.
"Deductive reasoning."
I could hear her crying softly in the background.
"Jinny, are you okay?" I asked.
There was a pause as she pulled herself together. "Could you come pick me up? Maybe we could talk?"
"Sure." I answered.

I took Jinny to a cliff that looks over the city. I took her in my arms and held her there for a moment until she calmed down enough to tell me what was wrong.
She looked at me with those big green eyes and I just melted.
"Jinny... Please... I know you're mad at me but please tell me what's wrong!"
"I'm not mad at you. I'm mad at that slut that I wrestled with. And for what's wrong... Casey told us tonight that he's gay and John... got mad and did something about it. Magda took him to the hospital. 13 stitches! I just... I don't I can take my life anymore!"
I furrowed my eyebrows. I do that when I think. Then, I said something that surprised me. "Let's go to Vegas and get married!"

Chapter 22: Jinny

I laughed. At first I thought he was kidding. Then, when he looked at me insistanly, I knew he was dead serious.
"What... did... you... just... say?"
He smiled. The "Teddy" smile. "Let's go to Vegas! We can get married by Elvis!"
I raised one eyebrow and tried to convince myself that he was kidding. It didn't work. "Teddy, I have to ask you two questions and I don't want you to take them personally but, are you drunk or high?"
He took my hand and held it. "No! I'm serious! So, will you marry me in Vegas?"
"I guess... Sure! Drive on! We can be there by eight tomorrow morning! And then we'll be back by approximately 6 tomorrow night! Let's go!"
Teddy looked at me. "Really?" I nodded. "Sweet. Let's roll!" He started the car and we took off down Highway 580 towards Los Vegas.


Sorry if it's not much. I have to leave in 45 minutes but I'll be back later tonight so I'll probably post more then!


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"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps not record of wrong doings. Love does not delight in evil, but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres."
1 Corinthians 13: 4-7

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"El amor es paciente, el amor es amable. No envidia, no se jacta, no es orgulloso. No es grosero, no es de buscar auto, no es enojado fácilmente, mantiene no registro de la injusticia hace. El amor no se deleita en la mal, pero en rejoices con la verdad. Siempre protege, siempre confianza, siempre esperanzas, siempre perseveres." 1 Corinthians 13: 4-7

†ß† Kenzie †ß†

[This message has been edited by Teddys_Angel_Jinny (edited 07-09-2001).]

80skid
07-09-2001, 07:36 PM
I think I'm going to need some...

MOOOOOOOOOORE!!!


Please. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Swimfan85
07-09-2001, 07:42 PM
great!!! this is awesome, i was waiting for u to post more and yes kenzie we've been very busy http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif

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Rory: Do you know what happens to people when they're late on their first day?
Lorelai: It's shorter?
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sue z q
07-09-2001, 09:34 PM
http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eek2.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eek2.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eek2.gif OMG, OMG, OMG, they're getting married?! This is so sweet. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif I just have one question, you may have already said this earlier but to refresh my memory, how old are they? Oh, and, post more!

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Jo: Partners? You mean 50-50? Uh, 50-50-50-50-50?
Blair: Good, Jo, we'll let you do the books!

If ignorance is bliss, why aren't there more happy people?

Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most.

*^*^*~~~God Bless~~~*^*^*

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
07-10-2001, 11:45 PM
Okay... I just heard the Division promo on the radio, and I'm in a really good/hyper mood and that's a good thing. I have the sweetest line for Jinny to say in the next chapter. It made me cry when I thought of it. In fact, I'm still not sure how I thought of it. Maybe I should go swimming with Taylor more often. You know, I think he inspired me with the 'pechal line in this chapter... Oh dear, I've gotten off topic. I need that 12 step thing too. On with the fic! Oh, BTW, these are the last three chapters. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif I'm sorry, y'all, but you're gettin a very cool surprise at the very end! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif If y'all want me to, I can write a sequel!

Chapter 23: Teddy

We got to Los Vegas at 9:15 the next morning. We ate a hurried breakfast and went to get married.

The Elvis impersonator guy asked me, "Do you Theodore Blumenthal, take Jinny Extead to be your lawfully wedded wife?"
I looked at Jinny. "I do."
"Elvis" repeated the vows for Jinny.
She took a deep breath and said, "Teddy, I can't say 'I do' because if I say it, and, then, I don't, it's gonna hurt you. And I don't want to hurt someone that I care about that much. Besides, we're 18! We still have college and we could find someone else. I love you, just, not in the way that you want me to... I'm sorry."
"So... Are y'all gettin' married or not?" Elvis asked us.
We both laughed and I said, "No. Come on, Jin. Let's go enjoy the rest of our infatuation!"
Jinny laughed and playfully hit my shoulder. "Haha. Shut up! Come on. I'll race you to the car!"
"That is so childish!" I informed her.
"Duh! Come on, we'll get back just in time to stop by Magda's house. We can tell her that we thought about getting married, but decided against it, because, we're still falling in love with each other."
"Ready... Set... Go!"

*tear* Wasn't that sweet?

Chapter 24: Jinny

"You almost got married?" Magda exclaimed. "Are you crazy?"
"Way to go, Jin!" C.D. said and pumped her hands in the air.
"But we didn't!" I replied.
Teddy put his arm around my shoulder. "We decided that we're still falling in love with each other. Now, I bought this in Vegas. It was for our wedding but since we didn't get married, I still have 24 pictures!" He waved a camera around.

Mrs. Ramirez counted as we (including Angela) posed for a picture. "1, 2, 3!" She snapped the picture just as American Hi-Fi's song Flavor of the Week came on the radio.

Final thoughts: Okay, I learned my lesson. Friends are more important than anything. And, don't ever run off the Los Vegas to get married with your boyfriend unless you absolutely, positively know what you're doing! Oh, you're wondering what happened after this ended? Well, Magda, C.D., and I stayed best friends! (Teddy snapped a picture for each of these. They show up on screen as each is announced.) Jenny and I went on with our lives. C.D. and Angela tried to get along. Don't tell C.D. I said this, but I think that Angela's growing on C.D.! As for Teddy and me? Well, I'll let you use your imagination for that one...

(Pictures are shown as each is announced.)

CAST:
Nancy McKeon as Jinny Exstead
Lisa Vidal as Magda Ramirez
Tracy Needham as C.D. De Lorenzo (I know married name.)
Lela Rochon Fuqua as Angela Reide
Jay Harrington as Theodore Blumenthal


The special things come later...



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"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps not record of wrong doings. Love does not delight in evil, but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres."
1 Corinthians 13: 4-7

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"El amor es paciente, el amor es amable. No envidia, no se jacta, no es orgulloso. No es grosero, no es de buscar auto, no es enojado fácilmente, mantiene no registro de la injusticia hace. El amor no se deleita en la mal, pero en rejoices con la verdad. Siempre protege, siempre confianza, siempre esperanzas, siempre perseveres." 1 Corinthians 13: 4-7

†ß† Kenzie †ß†

sue z q
07-11-2001, 12:00 AM
Awwwwww, that was very sweet. I really enjoyed the end. My jaw dropped when Jinny didn't say "I do." I really thought you were gonna have them get married. Maybe in your sequel, right? Right. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif Very good story!

P.S. You can join BlairW_1 and I in our 12 step program! LOL

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Jo: Partners? You mean 50-50? Uh, 50-50-50-50-50?
Blair: Good, Jo, we'll let you do the books!

If ignorance is bliss, why aren't there more happy people?

Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most.

*^*^*~~~God Bless~~~*^*^*

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
07-11-2001, 12:46 AM
Here's the special parts... Thank you, Katie! I appreciate what you did for me! The first three are her's!

BLOOPERS

Nancy: So, tell me more about this Teddy guy! (Falls onto floor because she's more interested in Teddy than where she was sitting.) Crud! Help me up! (Nobody can help her up because they're all laughing so hard.)

Lisa: Typical Jinny.
Nancy: (Blows gigantic bubble and makes it pop... all over her face.) I told you I shoulda had a stunt double do this!
Lisa: Oh, my... Are you all right?
Nancy: It's stuck!

Lisa: Well! We better get goin' if we're gonna get there before the big after school rush. Come on, Jinny. (Pulls her out of the door. But you know Nancy sorta slipped and fell on her butt.)

Nancy: (Drops her pencil.) Oops!
Jay: I'll get it. (Leans over to get it, but tips the desk over and both the desk and Jay crash to the floor.) Help! I've fallen and I can't get up! Nancy! Lisa! Help! (Like with the other, no one can help him up because they're laughing too hard.)

Nancy: I certainly hope so...
Tracy: We couldn't help overhearing... (Trips and falls down the bleachers.)
DJL: Are you okay? Somebody help her! (Everybody cracks up laughing.)

Elvis: Do you, Jinny Exstead, take Theodore Blumenthal to be your lawful wedded husband?
Nancy: (Pause.) I do! (Pulls Jay's head to hers and kisses him.)
Jay: You're gettin' it!

Jenny (Who played her?): Me, slut? Huh, that's like the sheep callin' the rice white!
Nancy: (Lunges for her but Jay and Lisa hold her back and she starts laughing hysterically.) I'm sorry, you guys... I'm sorr-- I'm sorry.

Nancy: Yes! Hi! No, I understand. No, don't go find him... Actually, I think that you and you should just... (Holds phone away from ear.) That was freakin'...

... And cut! That's a wrap!

DELETED SCENES

Deborah Joy LeVine (DJL): This scene between Jenny and Teddy in the basement at C.D.'s party is a scene that we just kinda lifted out of the movie. It was kind of funny, actually, because this scene is competely adlibbed. This was not written in the script and just happened more or less. I really like their performances. Jay Harrington is great in this. So, this should be interesting to see.

Jenny: (Is said inbetween kisses.) You... (kiss) love... (kiss) me... (kiss)... don't you (kiss).
Teddy: No, not really. I love Jinny. With an "I".
Jenny: She's not even blonde!
Teddy: Exactly! She doesn't wear make up, she doesn't act like you do...
Jenny: Oh... So you're saying that you wanna be with her?
Teddy: Yes.
Jenny: Too, bad! Cuz you're mine!

DJL: When we really started cutting the movie, one of the very first things that we got rid of was the story of Jinny's parents. Her mother's suicide is brought up very briefly, but in the original script, it goes much deeper than the finished version of the movie does. So, this is a deleted scene of Magda confronting Jinny about her family.

Magda: Hey! What's up with you? Why don't you ever let me come over to your house when your dad or John's home? I mean, you let me be around Casey...
Jinny: Just drop it, okay?
Magda: No! I won't! What is it?
Jinny: Read. (Pulls out a newspaper article and gives it to Magda.)
Magda: (Reads aloud.) "Virginia Exstead, 35, was found dead Tuesday afternoon. She is survived by husband, John Exstead, 36, John Exstead Jr., 16, Virginia Exstead, 14, Casey Exstead, 11. Graveside funeral services will be held Friday afternoon at 2:00 pm." Jinny, I'm sorry, I didn't know.
Jinny: Well, now you do. (Grabs the article from Magda puts it in her glove compartment and leaves.)

EXTENDED SCENE

DJL: The scene with Jinny and Theodore in the car on the overhang, was originally about 30 plus seconds longer. We cut out part of it to fit in with the rest of the story, and part of it was cut just because we didn't like it in the movie. So, what you're about to see, is the full steadicam shot of the car scene.

Teddy: Jinny... Please... I know you're mad at me but please tell me what's wrong!
Jinny: I'm not mad at you. I'm mad at that slut that I wrestled with. And for what's wrong... Casey told us tonight that he's gay and John... got mad and did something about it. Magda took him to the hospital. 13 stitches! I just... I don't I can take my life anymore! Ever since my mom died... My family fell apart. She was our whole world. She kept Dad from drinking. She kept John from murdering Casey. She kept me from murdering John. Everything was... perfect when she was here. The house was so warm... Not temperature warm, love warm. Then... she decided she couldn't live anymore. I can't say I blame her. After she died, I thought, "I have to go to!" I prayed every night, "God, if you can hear me, take me now!" It never worked. I see why now. I was meant for you! That's why I lived!
Teddy: I'm glad you lived. (They kiss.) Hey, I've got an idea. Let's go to Vegas and get married!
Jinny: (Laughs. Then get's serious.) What... did... you... just... say?
Teddy: Let's go to Vegas! We can get married by Elvis!
Jinny: Teddy, I have to ask you two questions and I don't want you to take them personally but, are you drunk or high?
Teddy: No! I'm serious! So, will you marry me in Vegas?
Jinny: I guess... Sure! Drive on! We can be there by eight tomorrow morning! And then we'll be back by approximately 6 tomorrow night! Let's go!
Teddy: Really? Sweet. Let's roll!


Soundtrack and Cast and Crew Interviews coming soon! I want your honest opinions!
*Thanx again, Katie!*

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"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps not record of wrong doings. Love does not delight in evil, but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres."
1 Corinthians 13: 4-7

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"El amor es paciente, el amor es amable. No envidia, no se jacta, no es orgulloso. No es grosero, no es de buscar auto, no es enojado fácilmente, mantiene no registro de la injusticia hace. El amor no se deleita en la mal, pero en rejoices con la verdad. Siempre protege, siempre confianza, siempre esperanzas, siempre perseveres." 1 Corinthians 13: 4-7

†ß† Kenzie †ß†

80skid
07-11-2001, 09:02 AM
This is ADORABLE! I love it!

Wild Child
07-11-2001, 09:53 AM
OMG! This is soo awsome!I loved the bloopers and and deleted and extended scenes!You really did an awsome job on this fan fic!

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Wild Child
07-11-2001, 09:55 AM
OMG! This is soo awsome!I loved the bloopers and and deleted and extended scenes!You really did an awsome job on this fan fic! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eyes.gif

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Swimfan85
07-11-2001, 10:36 AM
ooo i loved the bloopers as well!! and i didnt know bout the deleted scenes!! those were awesome, definitly write a sequal!!!!

XoVanillaRain90oX
07-11-2001, 11:11 AM
ooh so good!!!!

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Lisa :rotflmao:

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Bang A Gong
07-11-2001, 01:06 PM
You're crazy! LOL. Luv it.

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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

"That sugarcane that tasted good. That cinnamon that's Hollywood. C'mon, c'mon, no one can see you cry. . ." - Imitation of Life by REM

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jo_24
07-11-2001, 07:05 PM
That was adorable! I loved the bloopers part! Check out my new fan fic "All for you"! This is one of the very best yet!

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"You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl."

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Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

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Nancy is SLammin'!

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
07-11-2001, 07:11 PM
Am reading and lovin All For You. I'm too lazy to post a reply... But I love it n I need MOOORE! On AFY. I love it. Thank you 4 the kind words. Check out the sequel coming soon!

Plot: Magda's been elected captain of the cheerleading squad and she convinces Jinny to join for nationals. But then, secrets are let out about the two that threaten the Titans' chance at nationals. (In need of a name.)

BlairW_1
07-12-2001, 04:26 PM
YES!!!!! You're posting the fanfic!!!! Oh, Angela... grrr.... hehee, the scene in the pool, that's hilarious! And Pookie wanting to be Teddy... (giggle, choke) aak! Now, when fanfics are becoming dangerous to your health, that's bad. K!!! Last night at church I went to youth!!! YES!!!!! I'm staying in there, too, and I'm gonna be in youth choir and... you ready 4 this? Drama!!! Finally, something mom can't object to, except for the Tuesday practices and stuff. Well, I'm waaaaaayyyyy too off topic, so adios, mi chicas, I'm off to edit MagdaRamirez the Quiggle's homepage!

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I'm the self appointed moderator around here, so y'all had better not argue while I'm around! Anytime y'all argue, I report it to Coily2 or TJ (I have his email address... MUAHAHAHAHA!!!), and y'all are gonna be in trouble!!! :P Seriously, I don't like fighting, so plz don't, or I will report ya. Thanx for your co-operation!

~*Danielle, Muldrow Quiz Bowl Captain*~

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
07-12-2001, 04:30 PM
Originally posted by BlairW_1:
YES!!!!! You're posting the fanfic!!!! Oh, Angela... grrr.... hehee, the scene in the pool, that's hilarious! And Pookie wanting to be Teddy... (giggle, choke) aak! Now, when fanfics are becoming dangerous to your health, that's bad. K!!! Last night at church I went to youth!!! YES!!!!! I'm staying in there, too, and I'm gonna be in youth choir and... you ready 4 this? Drama!!! Finally, something mom can't object to, except for the Tuesday practices and stuff. Well, I'm waaaaaayyyyy too off topic, so adios, mi chicas, I'm off to edit MagdaRamirez the Quiggle's homepage!



Let's throw her to the alligators! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

jo_24
07-12-2001, 08:36 PM
Let's throw her! What BlairW_1 said wasn't in my fan fic! but do reply! I want it to have those little flames beside it! LOL!

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"You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl."

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Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

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Nancy is SLammin'!

Diamond_Dust_31
02-01-2003, 01:49 PM
Hello, ladies and sirs! Well... ko.... I know I actually finished this one! Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NEwayz, after a strange turn of events....... (Don't ask unless you have like 4 hours to listen to a really boring story) I'm am now back and better than ever........ I said all that to say this.......... Did y'all like these stories? 'Cuz if ya did, I can write more...... Just say the magic word!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just to let y'all know..... I missed y'all!!!!!!!! So, let me know. YEA or NAY!!!!! :wave:

Babes_Cat
02-01-2003, 04:52 PM
Originally posted by Diamond_Dust_31
Hello, ladies and sirs! Well... ko.... I know I actually finished this one! Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NEwayz, after a strange turn of events....... (Don't ask unless you have like 4 hours to listen to a really boring story) I'm am now back and better than ever........ I said all that to say this.......... Did y'all like these stories? 'Cuz if ya did, I can write more...... Just say the magic word!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just to let y'all know..... I missed y'all!!!!!!!! So, let me know. YEA or NAY!!!!! :wave: KENZIE! OMG! *dies* CHICKADEE! YOURE BACK! AHHHHHHHHH YES YES YES YES YES THIS ROCKS! I MISSED YA! AND........... I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE YOU! :loveya: :D

Diamond_Dust_31
02-03-2003, 12:22 PM
Originally posted by Babes_Cat
KENZIE! OMG! *dies* CHICKADEE! YOURE BACK! AHHHHHHHHH YES YES YES YES YES THIS ROCKS! I MISSED YA! AND........... I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE YOU! :loveya: :D



CAITLIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So ya want it huh???????????? Well, I missed all y'all too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;)

Babes_Cat
02-03-2003, 03:43 PM
Originally posted by Diamond_Dust_31




CAITLIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So ya want it huh???????????? Well, I missed all y'all too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;) Oh yes, I want it! :D Pwease! :kiss: