Here is my Most Recent Fan-Fiction.

A Familiar Darkness: Electricity Cut
Series 1, Story 6.

Jinny walks up to the station angry at Theodore and pushes the door open carelessly. "Hey Jinny" one of the Officers say. Jinny glances over, "Hi." she says without stopping. She arrives at the Elevator and pushed the button to go to the Second Floor. Looks up then back down to the Elevator Door, "Damn Hurry up. I don't got all day." she says looking at her watch. Magda comes up from behind her. "Hey Jin." she says as she arrives beside her. Waiting for the elevator aswell. "Yeah Hi." Jinny says looking over to Magda then back to the Elevator who's door opens. A few men in Suits walk out as Jinny and Magda walk in. Mag steps forward and pushes the button to go to the Second floor where the Division is located. The door to the elevator closes and it begins to go up. Still not a word from Jinny. The Elevator Dings as the door opens once Again. Both Inspectors walk out into the Hall. As they walk down the Hall the lights flicker. Magda looks up,"Probably another one of those black out we've been having." she says. "Yeah" Jinny says solemnly. Jinny pushes the door open to the Womans Restroom and walks in Followed by Magda. C.D. looks over from her locker, "Hey Guys." she says putting on her gun holster. "Hey" Magda says walking in. Jinny walks straight to her locker without saying a word and opens it. C.D. looks at Jinny and puts her over-coat on. Magda looks at C.D. and shrugs. C.D. looks at Magda, "Well I'll see you guys later." She says closing her locker and walking out. Magda nods, "Okay." as she makes her way to her locker and opens it. Jinny sets her bag on the bench,opens it up and puts her scarf,etc in it. Magda does the same as her. Jinny finishes and goes to put her bag into the locker,but it doesn't seem to fit. "Damn it, Stupid thing won't fit in." she says stuffing it in her locker. Then slamming the door closed quickly. "What's up with you Jinny? You've hardly said a word this morning,and when you do. You aren't exactly Friendly." Jinny nods,"Yeah I'm fine. JUST fine." she says walking to the Sink then turning back around walking to the bench and sits. "Come on,Jin. Somethings a matter." Magda says. Jinny's voice lowers, "Teddy and I had a fight." she says to Magda. "You and him okay?" Magda asks sitting down beside Jinny. "Yeah,fine. Besides for the fight." Jinny shakes her head. "He makes me so damn mad. I could just spit." Jinny says standing up. "What was the fight about?" she asks looking up to Jinny. She crosses her arms, "Theodore,Casey,and John were over at my house last night. We rented a few movies. You know. And well. Casey and John got into it again. About god knows what." Jinny shakes her head. " I just wish they would knock their crap off. Especially John. He can't control himself." Jinny says getting mad again. "Oh,but uh how does that make Theodore mad at you?" Magda asks confused. "Well, when Casey and John were leaving they. Began to physically fight in the hallway. John started it,Yet again. I got in the middle of it to break them up." Jinny says. "I got a couple bruises,but Theodore totally flipped! He got mad at me for getting involved. I mean after all they are my brothers." she finishes. "Yeah,He was just worried about you ,Jin." Magda says getting up from the bench. "Yeah,but still. I'm not a little girl I can take care of myself!" Jinny reply's. "Can we get to work?" Jinny asks looking at Magda. "Sure." she reply's following Jinny out the restroom door.

So what do you think,So far?



[This message has been edited by #1_Nancy_McKeon (edited 06-08-2001).]

I think that you should continue. This is very good. I like your fan fictions very much. Thanks.


Jeanie

Please continue, it is really good. Your fics are always awesome, and I can't wait to read more!

ks

Ditto! Dittto! Ditto! Please, you know, write more.

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cool! write more!

I love it! I couldnt help laughing when she said "He makes me so mad i culd just, spit!" LOL!

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too.

Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

Thanks You Guys!!

**The Division**
Magda and Jinny walk in. Captain comes out of her office, "What time you two have to go to court,today?" Captain asks looking at the two. Jinny reply's, "11:45." she reply's walking past Captain to her desk. Taking her coat off and putting it on the back of her chair. "Okay,Everything ready to go?" Captain says looking from Jinny to Magda. "Yeah,We just have to go over the case folder and gets prepared." Jinny says. "Plus we'll run home and get changed before court. Other than that we're set." Magda adds. "Okay,So everything is worked out." Captain says with a nod. Magda nods back to Cap and sits down. "C.D. Angela..May I see you for a moment?" Captain asks pointing at her office and walking in. C.D. and Angela look up at eachother. Then make there way to Captain's office. "Any leads on that Kethern case?" Captain asks sitting down and putting on her glasses. "No leads yet." Angela says sitting down at the chair directly in front of Captain's Desk and hands her the case folder. "We have two witnesses so far. That can validate that Mr. Kethern the Ex husband came to Mrs. Kethern's house and they got into a verbal arguement." C.D. reply's. Captain looks at the two and nods. "No one see him hit her, to back up Carrie's Case?" she asks looking through the folder. Angela reply's," No one that we found yet." Captain slowly takes off her glasses, "Well you better find something or Mrs. Kethern's case is going to go belly up." she reply's. "We're on it,Cap." C.D. says turning the corner and leaving the office close behind is Angela.

Magda sitting at her desk looks over to Jinny that is having a hard time concentrating. "You alright ,Jinny?" Magda asks concerned. Jinny glances behind her, "Yeah fine. Thanks,Mag." Jinny says putting her elbow on her desk and rests her head in her hand as she reads a paper pertaining to the case they have to go to court for. "So uh what do you think will happen with this case?" Jinny says just loud enough for Magda to hear from her desk, looking down at the papers. "I think it's as good as ours. Everything was done by the book. We're just going in case they bring our names into it." Magda reply's. "Yeah. That's right." Jinny says solemnly.

I LUV IT!!!!! YAY (sarcastically) GRAND PRACTICE IN 30 minutes.

I Luv it!!! Post more ASAP!!!!

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

This is great! Post more SOON.

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§ Tiffany §

Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rox!!

Sometime in June:Nancy McKeon is doing another chat for Lifetime

Jinny: All right, all right, enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun,
any questions!?!

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

IM using AOL: NancysBiggestFan

Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

C.D.'s telephone rings, "DeLorenzo" she answers. Angela looks across to C.D. "Yeah, Great. Can you come in today? Thank You very much. You've been very helpful. Yes now is fine. Ok. Bye." C.D. hangs up. "What was that?" Angela asks. "We got a witness." C.D. reply's. "Witness to what?" Angela asks. "A witness that says Carrie Kethern isn't exactly telling the truth." C.D. smirks.

Magda looks around her desk, "Where's the folder,Jin?" she asks picking up paper and looking under them for the Folder for the case. "What folder?" Jinny asks looking back at Magda. "The one for the case we're going to today." Magda reply's. "Oh,that." Jinny says finally understanding what Mag was talking about. She turns back to her desk and looks around for it. "Not over here." Jinny reply's. "Where did it go?" Magda asks. "I'll go down and check in the Archives,Mag. It may have got taken down there." Jinny reply's. "Yeah okay. Want some help?" Magda asks. "No, I'll be fine. I'd like to be alone. Anyway." Jinny says getting up from her desk and walking out of the Division. C.D. looks over,"What's wrong with,Jinny?" she asks. "Her and Teddy had a fight." Magda reply's. "Oh,That explains it." she reply's with a nod.

Jinny pushes the button on the Elevator a moment passes and she walks into the empty elevator. Walks to one side pushes the button for the bottom floor. Which was the basement where the archives were located. She leans back on the side of the elevator as the door closes and begins to go down. When they reach the main Station floor the elevator stops to let people on. The door opens and in steps Theodore. He walks in,turns around and realizes Jinny is there. Jinny looks over at him and says, "Great." sarcastically. "You know what. I can just wait for another elevator." Theodore says putting his hand out as the doors begin to close. They open once again. "No, I'm just going down anyway. I think we can stand eachother for a whole 10 seconds." Jinny reply's. Theodore nods and steps back into the elevator holding his breifcase in his right hand. "I think we can manage that." he says as the doors begin to close and the two are alone. Jinny on her side of the elevator and Theodore on his.

(lol..Mean Place to Leave off,Huh?)

OMG! That is not a nice place to leave off!!! More!!! More!!!

I DON"T LIKE YOU!!! Okay so maybe I do. But that's mean I want to know more!!

this is too too cool! Please post more soon!

Okay,Sorry I had to leave it off at that last part. And also this one aswell. haha.. I'm just copy and pasting it as I go along. I have most of it written already. Just posting it slowly I can keep up with Writing it because I'm also writing two other fan-fictions at the moment aswell. Here you go:

A moment passes and they feel the elevator begin to go down. Everything is fine until it stops and the lights go out. "What the Hell?" Jinny remarks. "What happened?" Theodore says looking around. "What did you do to the elevator?" Jinny says angryly. "Not a damn thing. You're the one by the buttons,Jinny!!" Theodore shoots back.He drops his suitcase and stuff scatters all on the floor. Which it was dark so he couldn't see so he leans down and and begins feeling around on the ground for his stuff and stuffing it back in his breifcase. "Yeah well...What did you just do?" Jinny asks Theodore. "I dropped my breifcase." Theodore says stopping for a second and looking at the Direction he heard Jinny's voice come from. "Oh" she says still in her corner with her arms crossed.

Captain walks out of her office and looks around the Division that is only lit by the light from outside. "What happened?" she asks. "Must have been another blackout." C.D. reply's. Captain looks around, "Where is Jinny?" she asks. Magda looks up and reply's, "She was going down to the archives to get the folder for court today." Captain nods walks into her office and comes back out with a folder, "This one?" she asks dropping it to Magda's desk. "Yeah. That's the one Captain." she reply's opening it up. "Uh-huh." Captain says with a nod.

A few moments go by with Theodore still feeling around for his stuff on the ground. Jinny sighs and leans over to help him. Theodore hears her lean down and reply's, "No Jinny you don't have to help." "It's okay." Jinny reply's feeling around on the floor. Her hand bumps into Theodore's, "Sorry." she reply's quietly. She picks up a couple papers and feels around for Theodore's breifcase, "Right here" he reply's moving it over where Jinny can feel it beside her. "Okay." she says opening it up and putting the papers in. Theodore goes to put some papers into the breifcase aswell when one slides across Jinny's finger giving her a slight cut. "Ouch." she says pulling her hand back. "What's wrong?" Theodore says as he stops what he was doing. "Papercut." Jinny reply's holding her finger. "Let me see." he reply's reaching for her hand. Both of them stop and laugh slightly. "I don't think that will happen." Jinny says with a laugh. Theodore moves directly in front of Jinny still kneeling, "Are you okay?" "Yeah, I'm fine." she says. Theodore reaches out and fumbles around for her hand. He finally finds it and brings it to his lips and gives it a quick peck. A small smile comes to Jinny's face as he does so,but she doesn't say a word. "How's that?" he asks letting down her hand. "Better." Jinny says in a low voice. "I do my best." he reply's to her with a smile that slowly fades because he knows they are still argueing..

OHHHH!! This is getting good! (not that it wasn't already but you know what I mean) I LOVE IT! POST MORE A.S.A.P.~

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

Oooooh! MORE PLEASE!!!!! Im loving this story as much as the others you wrote! Which is a good thing!

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too.

Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! PLEASE!

That isn't legal--nor is it ethical! You can't stop there! I'm fragile as it is cause I haven't see a new episode in FOREVER, and now I get so involved in this fic and you stop there! Of all the places! PLEASE post more soon...this is SO RIDICULOUSLY GOOD!

ks

This is great!! Post more ASAP!!

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§ Tiffany §

Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rox!!

Sometime in June:Nancy McKeon is doing another chat for Lifetime

Jinny: All right, all right, enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun,
any questions!?!
*~*~**~*~*~*~**~*~**~*~**
Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

IM using AOL: NancysBiggestFan

Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

haha..Okay here is some more. I like the next part I'll post next after this. Then of course I like all Theodore/Jinny Scenes! haha

"Jinny I'm -" Theodore begins. Wanting to be over and done with with this fight. He can't stand them not talking. "No Teddy. I'm sorry. I shouldn't have gotten so angry. You were just worried I'd get hurt." she shakes her head, "You don't have to worry." she reply's as she stands. Theodore exhales, " I'll try not to." he says standing up aswell. Jinny smiles alittle and nods at Theodore. Although he can't see her. She reaches a hand up to his face and runs it down his cheek and moves it to his chest. Steps forward and gently kisses his lips slowly.

A Man walks into the dark Division. C.D. glances over then down to her note pad, "Mr. Glover?" she asks. "Yeah that's me." he reply's walking toward C.D.. Angela gets up, "Hello I'm Inspector Reide." she says "Right this way." C.D. says making her way to the questioning room. She opens the door to the room which is pitch dark. Angela walks past her into the room and over to the window. Opening the blinds letting some light in she reply's, "Please sit down. Can we get you anything?" "No,no thanks. I'm fine." Mr. Glover reply's as he sits. C.D. lies a peice of paper and pen on the table and scoots it over to the man. "We'd like you to write what you saw on this paper." she says. "Then we'll go over it once you are finished." Angela adds.

Magda looks over to Captain, "Shouldn't Jinny be back by now?" she asks. "Yeah unless she got down to the Archives and it was too dark to see anything. The elevators stop aswell when the lights are out." Captain reply's. "Hopefully she made it down there,and isn't stuck in the elevator." Magda reply's. "We'll know soon. Someone will call the telephone in the Elevator." Captain says as she picks up a folder from another one of the Inspector's desks and walk back to her office with it.

Gimme me a "M"
Gimme me a "O"
Gimme me a "R"
Gimme me a "E"

GIMME ME MORE!!!
I love this story! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

This is soooo good!! Pleeeeeaaase continue.

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§ Tiffany §

Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rox!!

Sometime in June:Nancy McKeon is doing another chat for Lifetime

Jinny: All right, all right, enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun,
any questions!?!
*~*~**~*~*~*~**~*~**~*~**
Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

IM using AOL: NancysBiggestFan

Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!


You did it again! PLEASE stop leaving me hanging like this, I really wanta read more! This fic rocks, so post more SOON!
THANKS!


ks

Okay Okay,Here is more! lol

By now Theoodore and Jinny's kiss had gotten more serious. Jinny reaches up to Theodore's cheek as she kisses him. He moves his arm around Jinny and rests his hand on her lower back. His hand moves up her back. She moves her hands to his tie and begins to undo it. Their kiss begins to accelerate. Jinny gets his tie undone and drops it to the ground beside them. The elevator still dark the two begin to kneel down. They get to the floor,and starts to kiss once again. Jinny begins to undo the top button on Theodore's shirt then the next...Then as she reaches for the third the light to the elevator turns on and it starts proceeding downward. It comes to a stop and the door opens. Revealing the two sitting on the ground near eachother in the middle of papers that somehow had slipped their mind before. Theodore buttoning up his shirt and Jinny handing him his tie. She exstends her leg out of the doorway so the door won't close again before she is ready to leave. Theodore looks at Jinny as he puts his tie on, "I don't know what happen. I'm not-" he begins before he gets interupted by Jinny, "We happened,Teddy." she reply's and leans over and kisses him once again. He stops what he was doing and puts his hand gently on her arm. They break off the kiss and look at eachother once more. "I have court later,and I have over an hour to get home and change. That's quite a long time to change. So uh would you like to..You know. Come over?" she asks with a smile as she moves her hair away from her eyes. "Yeah,sure. I mean if you want me to." Theodore reply's as he goes back fixing his tie. "Theodore,You know me." she says looking at him. "I wouldn't ask if I didn't want you...to." she says with a slight grin. "Okay." he says finishing with his tie and standing up. "Great. I'll see you alittle later. I'm going to leave here around 10:30" she says getting up. He smiles and nods at her as she leaves, "Bye Jinny." he says as the elevator door closes between them.

OK, all I can say is that... that can't be the end of the story, IT'S SO GOOD!

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

haha..Don't worry there is quite a lot more to come. I've just posted so much of the Story (That I have written so far) today. I'm running behind on it. See I like to have my story written far enough ahead of what I post. So I can post quite frequently. Without making people wait so long,but right now I just have about 5 more scenes written after that Scene I just posted. I write more at night. So I don't want to be real behind on this fan-fiction (like I did with "Surprisingly Enough") where I have to rush to write more. I like to take my time and think out the scenes carefully. lol Anyway, Sorry I'm babbling. I just wanted to let you know. That wasn't the end of the Story by far. Plus,I usually have a "Thank You" credits at the bottom once I finish a story! Thanks for Reading,Everyone http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Jinny: "Captain Amazing here decided to defend his wallet and laptop to the death. It didn't work,but you gotta admire the effort."
Theodore: "My whole life was on that laptop."
Jinny: "Ooh sad commentary."
Angela: "Did you see his face?"
Theodore: "White male. 18 to 22,Shaved head ,dagger tattoo on his wrist. I mean he caught me by surprise I could have taken him."

U didnt just do this!!! Not again! Please post more and SOON.

My nerves are wearing down to nothing cause of TD tomorrow and now ur doing this to me.

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§ Tiffany §

Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rox!!

Sometime in June:Nancy McKeon is doing another chat for Lifetime

Jinny: All right, all right, enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun,
any questions!?!
*~*~**~*~*~*~**~*~**~*~**
Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

IM using AOL: NancysBiggestFan

Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

HOW DARE YOU!!!! LOL! Well I want more, this rox! MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!!!

Please hurry and post more!! Its killin me. Besides i need something to keep me occupied til tonight at 9.

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§ Tiffany §

Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rox!!

Sometime in June:Nancy McKeon is doing another chat for Lifetime

Jinny: All right, all right, enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun,
any questions!?!
*~*~**~*~*~*~**~*~**~*~**
Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

IM using AOL: NancysBiggestFan

Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

Anytime now. Anytime. LOL but seriously please hurry.

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Tiffany

Teddy: You all set for tomorrow night?
Jinny: I have my bullet proof vest polished if that's what you mean.
Teddy: Come on, Jinny.
Jinny: Oh, yes. Actually... I bought a dress.
Teddy: You did?
Jinny: There is no guarantee, however, that I am going to wear it.
Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: What's this dress look like anyway?
Jinny: Oh, yeah, OK. Low cut, skin tight, animal print, ruffle at the bottom. Don't you have lawyering to do?

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, this is my family!!!! Come on, it's your turn. Go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter!


IM me using AOL: NancysBiggestFan

Originally posted by Hug-A-Tree:
HOW DARE YOU!!!! LOL! Well I want more, this rox! MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!!!

You sadi it! Awesome!!!!

Sorry I didn't post any sooner..I am in California right now. Been busy. Just got my computer hooked up. Here is some more. Post more A.S.A.P.

**Questioning Room**
"So you saw Mr. Kethern arrive and leave without lying a hand on Mrs Kethern? Is that correct?" C.D. asks reading over his statement. "Yes. That is right." the man nods. "Can you verify this information. In anyway?" Angela asks sitting across from his at the table. He nods once again, "In a matter of fact. I can. I'm Carrie Kethern's boyfriend. I was inside the house when he arrived and left for that matter." Both Inspectors look from the man to one another.

**The Division**
Magda looks at her watch and thinks, "Jin's still not back. Wonder what's taking her so long?" Several seconds after that Jinny walks through the door, "That folder is nowhere to be found,Mag." Jinny explains. Magda looks up at her then picks up the folder that is lying on her desk and hands it to Jinny, "Cap had it in her office." she reply's. "Oh great. So we got stuck in the elevator for nothing." Jinny says taking the folder from Magda and walking to her desk. "You were stuck in the elevator? and what do you mean by "We"? " Magda asks surprised. "Yeah I was." Jinny smiles. Magda gets up and walks over to Jinny's desk, "We?" she asks again. Jinny looks at Magda whome is now sitting at the edge of her desk, and nods. "Who exactly is the we?" she asks. "Teddy and I were stuck in the Elevator." Jinny says. "Ooh, I see. So?" Magda asks with a smile. "So?" Jinny shakes her head with a smile trying not to make it sound like a big deal. "We're not fighting anymore." she explains. "Well I bet you aren't." Magda laughs. Jinny gives Magda a look like what's that supposed to mean,but can't have it remain too long on her face without laughing. "We didn't do anything,Mag." she says. Magda gives her a look. "The lights came on and the elevator door opened." Jinny laughs. "That explains it." Magda says with a smirk.
A short time later C.D. and Angela walk into the Division. "I see you're back,Jin." C.D. reply's walking through the Division toward Captain's office. "Yeah." Jinny reply's. "She was stuck in the Elevator." Magda adds. "Ooh,That must have been boring." C.D. says arriving at Captain's doorway and walking in. "Not exactly" Jinny laughs. Angela looks back at Jinny and gives a look. Jinny grins at her.

This is good. Post more ASAP!!!

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Tiffany

Teddy: You all set for tomorrow night?
Jinny: I have my bullet proof vest polished if that's what you mean.
Teddy: Come on, Jinny.
Jinny: Oh, yes. Actually... I bought a dress.
Teddy: You did?
Jinny: There is no guarantee, however, that I am going to wear it.
Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: What's this dress look like anyway?
Jinny: Oh, yeah, OK. Low cut, skin tight, animal print, ruffle at the bottom. Don't you have lawyering to do?

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, this is my family!!!! Come on, it's your turn. Go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter!


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Sorry I didn't post any sooner..I am in California right now.




Oh, I see.. We've been wondering where you were. You mean my curse didn't work? http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif Anyway, post more soon!

Eeeeeeeeek! Don't stop there, keep goin'!
Good to see your computer is up and runnin' again! Have fun in Cali!


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I "HATE" when people dont finish fan-fics!!!!!!!!!!!! Please finish it!

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Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

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I "HATE" when people dont finish fan-fics!!!!!!!!!!!! Please finish it!



Don't worry, she's gonna finish it. She was posting real quick, but she went to California so she just recently got her computer hooked up, and you know she's having to enjoy the sun in Cali! I'm sure there will be more soon. ...Hopefully real soon http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif


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Yeah, I'm SO sorry I haven't been posting as frequently as I was. I'm in California and only get on my computer when we go to my mom's friend's house. So that's not a whole lot. Be sure I will finish this one and As for "Surprisingly Enough". I have not had ONE fan-fiction on here I have not finished,and I'm proud of that. So just so you know I'll post A.S.A.P... http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif Thanks for Reading. (Thanks ks.)

**Captain's Office**
C.D. drops the folder on Captain's desk. Kate puts on her glasses and opens up the case folder,and begins to read the Statement from Mr. Glover. She nods and looks at the two Inspectors. "Well, Bring Carrie in and see if you can get her to admit she's been lying. I'll try and make a case for you." Captain comments closing the folder and sliding it back across her desk. "Thanks Captain." Angela says picking up the folder. Both Inspectors leave Kate's office.

"So Jinny how were you not "Exactly" bored in the elevator?" C.D. asks with a smirk bringing the conversation back up. As she walks to her desk. Jinny laughs, "I have my ways." she reply's. Magda smirks at Jinny's reply. Angela looks at Jinny. "Fine fine. I wasn't alone in the elevator." she explains. "You weren't?" Magda says sarcastically with a laugh. Jinny looks over at Magda and gives her a look. "No. I wasn't." Jinny says then looks down at her watch. "Mag,we better get going. If we don't want to be late for court. " she says trying to get out of the conversation. Magda sighs, "Fine Jin" she says looking over at Angela and C.D. who are still in the dark about what happened. Jinny gets up,puts her coat on,and walks past Magda desk. "I'll meet you at the Courthouse." she says. "Okay Jinny." She nods as she gets up from her desk and looks over at the door and watches Jinny leave. Mag says to the other two anxious inspectors, "It's safe to say Jin and Teddy aren't fighting anymore." "I see." C.D. says nodding and looks over to Angela who has a smirk on her face.

This is great! Cant wait for more.

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Tiffany

Teddy: You all set for tomorrow night?
Jinny: I have my bullet proof vest polished if that's what you mean.
Teddy: Come on, Jinny.
Jinny: Oh, yes. Actually... I bought a dress.
Teddy: You did?
Jinny: There is no guarantee, however, that I am going to wear it.
Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: What's this dress look like anyway?
Jinny: Oh, yeah, OK. Low cut, skin tight, animal print, ruffle at the bottom. Don't you have lawyering to do?

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, this is my family!!!! Come on, it's your turn. Go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter!

A day with Blair is like walking up San Juan Hill. Every time you turn around she's yelling CHARGE!
~Jo Polniaczek

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Thanks for posting more! This fic is the best. Hope you have fun in Cali and post more as soon as ya get the chance!


ks

Here is More:

Jinny half way to the elevator. Magda walks out of the Division. "Hey Jin,Wait." she says trying to catch up to Jinny. She stops,turns around,and waits for Magda to catch up. "Hey." she says when Magda finally get to her and they begin to start walking again. "Why you in such a hurry?" Magda asks as they reach the elevator. Magda steps forward and pushes the button. Before Jinny can answer the door opens and there stands Theodore. Magda looks from Theodore to Jinny. Finally understanding why she was in a hurry. "Hey Jinny." he says then look to Magda, "Hey Magda. How are you?" he asks as the two woman join him in the elevator. "I'm fine. You?" she asks taking a spot in the elevator. "I'm doing just fine." he reply's and looks at Jinny with a smile. Magda nods,"Good to hear it." she smiles. A couple seconds go by and the Elevator door reopens exposing the First floor to the station. All three of them exit the elevator. Magda looks at her watch, "I better get going,and leave you two alone. Remember court starts at 11:45,Jinny." she reminds her partner. "I'll be there,Mag." she assures her. "Okay. Bye Guys." she says waving and walks off toward the other side of the Station. Theodore and Jinny continue toward the Station parkinglot where Theodore's car is parked. "You won't mind dropping me off at the courthouse,right? If so I can take my car." Jinny asks looking at Theodore who is walking next to her. "No it's no problem,Jinny. " he says shaking his head as they arrive at the door,and he opens it for her. Jinny walks out followed by Theodore. "Thanks." she reply's looking back to him.

**Magda's Apartment**
Magda walks into her apartment ,closes the door ,and goes straight for the bedroom. Walks through the bedroom foor and over to the bed,and checks the clothes that are lying on her bed. That she had set out earlier that morning for court. "Okay" she says to herself,and takes off her jacket and walks back out of the room.

This is great! Post more as soon as u can.
Hope ur enjoy CA.

GREAT! Can't wait to read more!

ks

Please post more soon this is getting really good!!!

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**The Division**
Captain gets up from her desk,walks out of her office,and looks around. She asks," Jinny and Magda leave already?" C.D. nods at her,still on the phone. "Yeah they did,Captain." Angela answers as she gets up from her desk, " Excuse me." she says as she walks past Captain and out the Division door. Kate scans the room,nods,and heads back for her Office.

**Station Restroom**
Angella leaning over the sink with her elbows resting side by side beneith her on the edge. Her hands dripping wet with water gliding across her face. She exhales slowly. Not feeling too well she looks back down,ready to head toward the toilet. After a moment she stands back up straight and takes a breath. "Okay" she says exhaling slowly and walking toward the restroom door. "OH god." she says all of a sudden,turns around ,and darts into a stall.

**Jinny's Apartment**
Theodore walks out of the bathroom. His hair wet and a towel wrapped around his waist. He walks into the hall and in to Jinny's bedroom. Jinny clothes behind with a black robe folded around her. She walks into the room drying her hair with a towel. "So when do you have to be at the Courthouse for the trial?" Theodore asks as he gets dressed. Jinny finishes and shakes her head, "Not for another half an hour." she reply's as she tossed her towel on the bed and walks to the closet. "Good we don't have to rush." He says buttoning his shirt the rest of the way. Jinny turns around and smiles at him, "Do we ever?" she asks with a grin. Theodore shakes his hand and laughs alittle knowing what she meant. "Good point" he says with a smirk.

More more and more..lol..It's almost finished...haha..I think:

**Magda's Apartment**
She reaches for the phone, "Hello." Magda answers. "Yes this is she." she reply's to the person on the other line. "Not for another hour and forty five minutes?" Mag asks with the phone pressed to her ear. "What happened to-" she gets interupted. Nods, "What? They're not even sure they need us there?" she says annoyed. "No,Allen you got this all wrong. Jinny and I were just-" he interupts her again. "Okay,Bye." she says as she hangs the phone up. Sighs once again and picks the phone from it's cradle again, dials a number,and waits.

**Jinny's Apartment**
"Can you get that?" Jinny yells as best as she can from the bathroom with a mouth full of toothpaste. "Yeah no problem,Jinny." Teddy reply's from her bedroom. He then passes the bathroom door on his way down the hallway toward the telephone. He arrives at the phone and picks it up, "Hello?" he answers. "Yeah it is. This Magda?" Theodore asks. Jinny finished up with brushing her teeth, shuts the light off in the bathroom,and walks into the Living room and joins Theodore in the living room. "Yeah,Jinny's in the restroom right now. Brushing her teeth I assume." he says to Magda on the other line not knowing Jinny was finished already. He turns alittle. "Right here's Jinny. Uh-huh. Bye." he says and hands the phone to Jinny. She laughs takes the phone and puts it to her ear. Then before she says anything she moves it back down and covers the mouthpeice with the palm of her hand and looks at Theodore. About to say something,but before she can ask he reply's, "Magda." with a smile. Jinny nods with a slight laugh and nods. Then puts the phone to her ear and says, "Hey what's up, Mag?" Jinny asks as she walks over to the couch and sits. Then leans over to pick up one of her shoes, "Oh,I see. Not for another hour and a half?" she says sitting back up. Theodore sits down beside her and looks confused. Jinny glances over to Theodore and says,"I don't have to be in for another hour and a Half!! Maybe not at all." "Well shouldn't you check with Captain then.?" Teddy asks. Jinny shakes her head, "No,she gave us the rest of the day off." she leans back onto the couch. "Uh-huh. Okay Mag call me if you hear anything. Ok,Bye." she hangs up the phone and sits it beside her.

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Great! Post More as soon as ya can.

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**Division**
Angela walks past C.D.'s desk as she goes to her desk. "What happened to you?" C.D. asks looking at her partner. "You don't look too well." she adds. Angela doesn't say anything,but sits down at her desk. "Just another joy of pregnancy." she finally says as she leans back onto her chair. C.D. laughs slightly, "And You thought I was crazy for having my tubes tide." she says with a small smirk. Angela gives her a look, and goes back to work. "Yeah that's what I thought." C.D. says then looks back down to her work.

**Captain's Office**
Captain nods, "Yes. Okay Magda." she says as she looks at a few papers in front of her as she listens to what Mag is saying. "Right..uh-huh." she says. "Good luck if you ever get to court. Bye" Kate says and hangs up the phone. "If it's not one thing. It's another." she says to herself as she takes off her glasses and leans back in her chair.

**Division**
After several moments of the two Inspectors working quietly. Angela typing up a paper for the D.A. on the computer,and C.D. going through some phone records. Angela looks up to C.D. and says, "I'm hungry. Want to get some lunch?" C.D. looks to her partner and raises an eyebrow, "Oookay." C.D. reply's. "Great." Angela says as she begins to get up from her chair. "Wait a second." C.D. says. Angela freezes. "I'm not going to have to watch you eat anything weird am I?" she says managing to keep a straight face. Her partner just gives her a look and continues to get up.

aww, this is good! keep it going.....i sa Angela pregnant in the real show?

**Jinny's Apartment**
Theodore gets up from the couch and begins to head toward the kitchen. "So you don't have to be in for awhile?" he asks. "Yeah. Turns out they may not need us at all. Where are you going?" Jin asks as she stands. Theodore stops at the kitchen enterance ,turns around to look at Jinny, and says, "Just to make some coffee. You want some?" Jinny puts her hand up, "Nah I'm fine." she reply's as she stetches slightly. Theodore responds, "Okay." but continues to stand and watch her. She looks back up and smiles, "What?" she says playfully as she looks down. Theodore ,smiles and shakes his head alittle, "It's nothing." he says gently to her. With a look on his face that calmed Jinny's heart no matter what the situation was. When she was mad she couldn't stay mad. When she was around him she couldn't help but smile. When she was worried or sick he just had something about him that made her feel like there weren't a care in the world. When he wasn't there it seemed like something was missing. He made her forget about everything that had gone on in her life before him. Made her focus on the present and the future. Their Future.

The End

Thanks To Everyone Who Read!!!

Also Thanks to:
Jeanie, Sabrina, C.D., Cap, and my Mom. For reading it and helping me along with ideas!! I appreciate it!! I couldn't have done with without you all.

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Jinny: "Captain Amazing here decided to defend his wallet and laptop to the death. It didn't work,but you gotta admire the effort."
Theodore: "My whole life was on that laptop."
Jinny: "Ooh sad commentary."
Angela: "Did you see his face?"
Theodore: "White male. 18 to 22,Shaved head ,dagger tattoo on his wrist. I mean he caught me by surprise I could have taken him."
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This is gr8 so far! I love it. Can't wait for more!

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

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Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

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