A/N: I orginally posted the first to chapters of this fic about a month and a half ago. It was entitled "Missed Opportunities." I'm sorry I never finished, I got super busy with term papers and all. I have finished it COMPLETELY now, however, and if anyone still cares to read it I will post it all. I'm going to post it in chapters because there is alot, but since I have it all written the chapters will be up frequently. I hope you enjoy it, and PLEASE review!


“Missed Opportunities Made”


by: ks


Jinny and Casey sat on a park bench. Casey had his head in his hands with a distraught look on his face, and Jinny had a worrisome look on her face as well as she stared at him. She leaned over and put her hand on his knee.

“I know you’re probably getting some bad reps about your eh…situation…but you are a darn good cop. Don’t let what those guys at the station say effect you. They’re just talking about gays in general, not you. They don’t know about you. Don’t let dad bother you either, he’ll come around in his time.”

Jinny patted her brother on the leg and watched for any sign of conformation that he understood what she was saying. She breathed a small sigh of relief when he looked up at her and forced a smile.

She smiled back. “It’s who you are. You’ll be accepted for it, it just takes longer with some than with others. Trust me, I’ve been in situations similar to this before, just give it time.” She looked him in the eyes. “In the meantime you have my apartment, cell, pager, and work number. There is no reason that you can’t get up with me to talk, cause I’m always there to listen.”

Casey nodded, “Yeah, Jin. Thanks, I’ll remember that.”

“You better,” she said playfully.

They sat in silence for a moment and a call came over Casey’s radio and he stood to leave. “Thanks.”

Jinny rose to her feet as well and gave him a hug. “Anytime.”

She watched as he walked out of sight…

Once Casey was out of sight Jinny sat back down on the bench and put her face in her hands. “I don’t know how much more of this I can take,” she muttered under her breath.

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"Missed Opportunities Made" part2

STARRING:

Bonnie Bedelia-Kate McCafferty
Nancy McKeon-Jinny Exstead
Lisa Vidal-Magda Ramirez
Tracey Needham-C.D. DeLorenzo
Lela Rochon Fuqua-Angela Reid

Guest Starring:

Theodore Blumenthal: Jay Harrington


The Captain walked out of her office and took a look at the clock on the wall. She then looked around the room. “Eight o’clock and it seems all’s here…except Ms. Exstead of course.” She didn’t even bother guessing where Jinny was, nor did she asked Magda if she had heard from her. Instead she just begin passing out files…

“Jackson and Young, two bank robberies in as many hours. We’re thinking they were done by the same group--get on it.” She tossed the files to the two detectives and pulled out another one.

“Kilven and Sylanne, murder downtown outside a Mervin’s Bakery. Suspect in custody, but we need some hard evidence against him or he’s free by noon.” The two detectives nodded, took the file, and left.

The Captain looked down at another file and then up and Angela and C.D. and smiled. “Delorenzo and Reid, how are your babysitting skills?”

C.D. dropped the papers she was holding on the desk and placed her hands on her hips, staring at the captain in disbelief. “You’ve gotta be kidding me.”

“Nope,” the captain shook her head.

“I think it will be fun,” Angela said with a cheerful attitude.

“You would,” C.D. muttered as she took the file from the Captain and walked out of the Division.

“Have fun,” Magda said as Angela followed C.D. out the door.

The Captain turned to Magda with the last file. “Any idea where your partner is?”

“Not a clue, Cap,” she responded shaking her head.

The Captain sighed and crossed her arms. “If this continues then I will have to put Jinny on probation. There is no known need for this continued tardiness of hers…”

Before she could finish her sentence Jinny walked in the door. Once seeing the Captain staring at her she stopped dead in her tracks.

“This better be good, Exstead,” the Captain said.

Jinny sighed, “At six this morning I got a call from Casey, my brother, saying he needed to talk. I’ve been with him ever since.”

“Is everything ok with him?” the Captain said, still trying to keep her tough demeanor.

Jinny looked at the floor and then at the Captain. “We’re working on it.”

Kate nodded and handed the remaining file to Magda. “Try not to let it happen again.” With that she turned and entered her office.

Jinny breathed a sigh of relief.

“Everything ok?” Magda asked.

“Yeah, for now I think so.”

Magda nodded, and knowing not to push Jinny any further she dropped the subject. “Ready to go.”

“Let’s do it.”


They both left the Division…


A girl of about 5 feet 7 inches in height stood in front of C.D. and Angela with her arms folded across her and her eyes looking each of them up and down. C.D. and Angela stood sizing up the girl as well…

“Inspectord Delorenzo”

“and Reid”

The girl slightly nodded her head. “Jeffcoat, no fancy title.”

C.D. turned to Angela and smirked, “Looks as if we have a comedian here.”

“Yeah, but there’s nothing about watching somebody be beaten is there?” Angela said bluntly.

“I would certainly think not,” C.D. answered.

They both turned to the young teenager and motioned to the nearest conference room. “Shall we?” C.D. asked.

“Like I have a choice,” the girl mumbled.

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Jinny and Magda sat in Jinny’s car outside “Jim Bob’s Drugstore.” They observing the place, while trying to determine how they should handle the case.

“So somebody’s really been robbing this place nightly, and the local TV station hasn’t even heard about it yet?” Jinny asked. “At least we know this isn’t a ‘fame crime’.”

“Yeah, but whatever is happening just isn’t making sense. I mean don’t you think its odd their security camera conveniently doesn’t work at the times of these robberies?” Magda said.

“Yeah, but there’s a different employee at work during every robbery…Conspiracy maybe?”

“It’s something.”

They sat in silence for a minute. A smile slowly crept across Jinny’s face. She cranked the engine and drove around the block, so their car wouldn’t begin to look suspicious.

“I have an idea,” she stated bluntly to Magda. “You look like someone in need of a new job…”

Magda nodded with a smile, catching on to what Jinny was getting at…

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“Sweetheart, are you sure we can’t talk this over?” Kate begged to her daughter who was on the other end of the phone. “I mean two months is a long time.” There was a pause. “I know your aunt can afford it, but still, I will miss seeing you.” Yet, another pause. “I know we don’t see each other much as it is…” Yet, another pause. “New York isn’t just down the road, dear.” Kate bit her tongue, as it looked like she had aged five years within the past fifty minutes. “I guess there’s nothing I can do about it then…I’ll see you when you get back. I love you.” With that Kate hung up the phone, not giving Amanda another chance to say anything. Kate walked around her desk and then out of her office. She looked up at the clock, and seeing it was noon, left the Division…

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"In the words of Cyndi Lauper, girls just wanna have fun. What's the point in planning for the future? I wanna get the most out of today."
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"Missed Opportunities Made" part 3


The manager of “Jim Bob’s Drugstore” eyed Magda cautiously. He was a man of about fifty, with greying hairs and a moustache. He rubbed at the edge of his moustache as he looked over Magda’s application once more.

“Well, Ms. Loreana Elpirez, I see no reason as to not hire you. Is the morning shift good for you? It’s from 6 to 10.”

“Why so short?”

“It’s just a trial thing, but you will get paid regular amount.”

“Four hours, and I still get the same amount of pay as if it were seven hours?”

“Yes, ma’am. I’m not prejudice, and if this works, then it will all even out.”

Magda nodded her head and smiled. “Sounds good to me, sir.”

The man nodded and slowly stood. “The assistant manager will be in shortly, and it will be his duty to show you the ropes and such, because I have a business meeting in a short while.” The man looked at his watch. “If you come back at two I’m sure he will be glad to show you around.”

Magda stood and nodded her head in agreement. She then shook the man’s hand and thanked him. “Have a nice day.” She left.

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C.D. walked around the table, never taking her eye off the girl. She wasn’t sure what to do. She hadn’t been instructed to question the girl, but she felt odd just sitting there in silence.

Angela sat across from the girl, wondering what it would be like to witness such a brutal attack. She too had no clue what to do, for she had never been put in this situation before. She was secretly looking to C.D. for leadership and guidance on this one…


Cynthia Jeffcoat folded her arms and stared up at the ceiling. “You two are real fun to be around. I thought I’d get stuck with a bunch of bozos who wouldn’t shut up, but instead I got stuck with a bunch of bozos who won’t talk.”

C.D. stopped her pacing and bent so she was eye level with the teenager. “Cynthia, if you want to talk then feel free to do so. It’s obvious this is something you’ve never been through before so we’re trying to not push your buttons too hard. If you want to get into interrogations then please let us know and we will begin questioning you until you turn blue from lack of oxygen. Please, however, do not get on our case for trying to give you a break.”

The girl starred at C.D. and then looked at the floor, not saying a word. A small smile crept across Angela’s face at seeing how C.D. had just handled the situation. She then watched as C.D. motioned for her to step out in the hall.


C.D. closed the door behind her and turned to Angela. “This kid is gonna be torn to shreds on the witness stand, and she isn’t even talking to us. I say we take her one and one, see if she’ll give either one of us an inch.”

Angela nodded in agreement. “We can do it over lunch. I’ll go order us something.”

C.D. nodded and watched as Angela walked off. She then positioned herself against the wall, deciding to give the girl some time to herself.


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Jinny and Magda sat in Jinny’s car outside a Wal-Mart. They were each eating their lunch that they had just bought at a fast-food joint.

“So he offered you normal pay, for just four hours?” Jinny questioned, making sure she had heard Magda right.

“Weird, I know. The guy’s place has gotten ripped off six times in the past two weeks, and he has the money to pay his employees twice what the average store clerk makes, for shorter shifts. …It just doesn’t add up.”

“And you’re supposed to go meet with assistant manager and start tomorrow? He didn’t even run your application to any of your references.”

“Good thing, too. I think he would’ve gotten suspicious.”

“Yeah, well he’s gotten me suspicious just hiring you on the spot like that.”

“I know, Jin. Soon we’ll find out what’s going on though.”

“Yeah, I guess… Something is feeling odd though.”

They sat in silence for a few minutes…

“So, are we gonna tell the Captain about this?” Jinny asked.

“It’s policy to inform her of all our operations.”

“Yeah, but you and I both know this is something she’ll shut down immediately.”

“But if she does find out about it second hand…”

“Yeah, I guess you’re right. She’s on my case as it is.”

Magda laughed and took a sip of her drink…

“Everything ok with Casey?”

“Yeah, he’s just having a hard time living a ‘secret life’.”

“I thought your family knew.”

“His fellow cops don’t though.”

Magda nodded knowingly and then smiled at Jinny for encouragement.

“It’ll be ok though, Jin. You’ll see.”

“Hope so.”

Jinny put her food aside and cranked her car. “Better get you to work so you can meet your new boss.”

“What about Cap?”

“I’ll go tell her about it as soon as I drop you off.”

Magda nodded as they pulled out of the parking lot and began their drive to “Jim Bob’s Drugstore”…

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Kate McCafferty took out her cell-phone and put in a call to the Division. “Dianna, hey, it’s McCafferty here. Please direct all my calls to my cell, and if anyone needs me please inform them I’m at Anchorside.” She pushed the END button on her cell phone and motioned for another drink…


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"Missed Opportunities Made" part 4

C.D. Delorenzo pushed herself up off the wall once she saw Theoroe Blumenthal approaching her.

“Hey, Theodore,” she said with a small smile. “Good to see you again.”

Theodore nodded his head in acknowledgment and transferred his brief case to his left hand.

C.D. smiled at him. It was obvious he was on the nervous side. “First time questioning and eye witness?”

He shifted his weight back and forth and forced a smile. “Yeah, the first time Jinny, I mean Inspector Exstead, had everything laid out for me. Since then I’ve been working under my boss very closely on every case.” He sighed. “Unfortunately he’s out of town this week and he left word he thought I was ready to handle things on my own. …So here I am.”

“Don’t worry, you’ll do fine.”

“Hope so.”

There was a moment of silence between the two.

“Has she said anything to you?” Theodore asked C.D.

“No, and we really haven’t pushed her. She’s only fifteen, and it’s pretty obvious her emotions are fragile. At the moment she’s wearing a tough act.”


They both turned at the sound of someone approaching. It was Angela.

“Hey Theodore,” she said with a smile as she set the food that she had just gotten down in a nearby chair.

“Inspector Reid,” he acknowledged, doing his best not to sound nervous.

“So, how you gonna handle this?” C.D. asked.

“I guess while I go talk to her mother, she can eat, and perhaps you two can go over her statement with her?”

C.D. and Angela nodded in agreement and watched as Theodore walked down the hall. Once he was out of sight Angela turned to C.D.

“Boy is he nervous,” she said.

“Yeah, let’s see if we can get Cynthia talking comfortably to us first,” C.D. said.

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Jinny thanked Dianna and pushed the END button her cell phone. She then turned her vehicle around so she was heading in the direction of Anchorside. Once there she parked her car and went in.

“Jinny, what can I get for you today?” the bartender asked.

“Nothing right now, Jack. I’m here on business.”

Jack looked surprise, but didn’t say anything. Instead he continued serving others…


Jinny surveyed the room looking for the Captain. She finally spotted her over in a corner booth, sitting by herself, starring out the window. She made her way to the booth and slid in across from the Captain. As Jinny slid in, the Captain turned to her and quickly snapped back into reality.

“Hey Jinny,” she said as she quickly pushed her drink aside and began to “fix” herself up.”

Jinny eyed the empty glasses sitting in front of the Captain, and couldn’t resist teasing her. “Drinkin’ on the job, Cap?” she questioned.

“Something you know all I about I assume,” Captain said with a glare.

Jinny held up her hands in surrender and didn’t push the Captain any further, knowing something was obviously bothering her.

The Captain got agitated, “What is it you’re here for Jinny?”

Jinny became serious and began explaining the situation to Captain. “Well, you know that case you gave Magda and I today…we have a plan as to how to solve it. We just need your condolences first.”

The captain shifted in her seat and tried to make herself comfortable.

Jinny continued hesitantly. “We think that this is going down with the employees, and perhaps the management behind it.”

“Why would the manager still from himself?”

“We’re not sure of that yet, but we do have a plan as of how to find out.”

“Ok, let’s here it.”

“Magda can begin working there. She will be in no danger. At all times a police officer will be either outside, or inside the store.”

“I don’t like it.”

“She will be fine, and her cover won’t be blown.”

“How do you know they’ll give her a job?”

Jinny hesitated. “She already has it.”

The Captain stared at her hands for a moment, and then looked up at Jinny. “And you did this without my permission?”

“It doesn’t start until tomorrow, Captain. If necessary she can make up some excuse and get out of it.”

The Captain sighed. “I’m in no condition to make this decision now.”

Jinny leaned back and folded her arms. “It’s safe and nothing’s going to happen.” She watched the captain. It was obvious to Jinny now that the captain had had about five drinks too many, something she obviously didn’t do often because she wasn’t hiding it very well.

“I want to know every move you two plan on making,” Kate stated bluntly.

Jinny stared at the captain curiously. Something was going on with the captain, but she didn’t know how to go about asking the captain about it, for she and the captain weren’t on good terms as it was.

“Yeah, ok.”

“I sense, that you sense something big is going on.”

Jinny nodded, “I do.”

“Then we’ll bust them for it,” Kate stated sharply.

Jinny watched as Kate looked at her bill and laid the money she owed down on the table. Kate then stood to leave, but lost her balance and slumped back into her seat.

“Captain, how about I give you a ride to your house so you can maybe rest and change?”

Kate starred at Jinny, and then nodded her head agreeing. She didn’t know what to say to Jinny since she was always getting onto Jinny about her drinking…


They both left the restaurant in silence…


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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

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Blair: Hold it, you ruined my watch.
Jo: No I didn't, it's a stop watch...it stopped

Jo: So things change, you're born, ya move on, ya die, that's life.
Blair: Don't get too mushy on us!

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The assistant general manager, Larry Fulder, had been showing Magda around for almost half an hour now, and so far everything seemed very routine to Magda. Now he was heading back to his office to inform Magda of the policies she would have to know by heart.

Once in his office he sat down behind his desk and motioned for Magda to sit on the couch.

“Ok Loreana, according to your application you have worked in drugstores before, so you know standard procedures. This drugstore however, since privately run and owned, has a few personal rules you might not have had to follow, along with customer policies.”

Magda nodded and begin to listen intently.

He smiled at her eagerness and began explaining. “We have a few families who use this drugstore that sometimes buy an abundance of drugs at once. It isn’t that they are doing anything illegal, but it is that they are leaving town and need drugs, so we provide them with an abnormal amount. However, the drugs they call for are very rare, so we are only allowed to give out so many at a time. Therefore, we put them in allergy prescribed bottles, or Tylenol bottles, just so they won’t get into any trouble. Also, when we enter these amounts into the computer, instead of three hundred, it’s thirty. We round to the nearest tenth, no matter whether we give them ten or hundred. Always just enter the first to digits.” He paused to make sure she was getting everything. “ These families come in at all times, and we get new families weekly, so the list I give you will be ever changing. You also may notice a price difference for these families. That price different is what’s allowing you to make the amount of money you are, so there’s no need to question it. Sometimes the drugs we provide to these families may be listed as illegal, but they are not—trust us. We have trained professionals here that would never put anyone’s life in danger. Also, on some days, at certain times, I may ask you to take a certain amount of money out of the cash register. Do not question me. We just do this because the bank that keeps our money will only store a certain amount.” He paused and smiled at Loreana. “Everything good?”

“Yes, it all sounds fair to me, and you can expect no questions from me whatsoever.”

Larry smiled and pulled out a sheet from the top drawer of his desk. “Good, as you know you can start tomorrow, and if this works your hours will expand. Here is a list of the families. Please memorize them so you do not have to pull out this sheet while on the job. Also, if someone approaches you with a thousand- dollar bill and asks for Earl, tell the druggist behind the back counter, his name is Calvin, and he will take care of the customer.”

Magda nodded her head and smiled. “Yes, sir. It won’t be a problem.”

Larry nodded and then stood, motioning towards the door. “We will see you bright and early in the morning then, Ms. Loreana.”

Magda smiled and left the store after thanking the man. She then called a cab and left…

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C.D. and Angela watched as Cynthia finished her food and then looked up and faced them.

“I saw the dude outside. I’m assuming he’s gonna be defending?”

“You’ve assumed right then,” C.D. stated.

“I’ll talk.”

C.D. and Angela nodded and settled back to listen.

“At about two in the morning two nights ago our doorbell started ringing. I thought maybe it was my mom who had gotten home early because she had been out of town visiting her sister and we expected her sometime Tuesday morning or afternoon. My dad went downstairs to answer it and I sorta lagged behind at the top of the stairs. I’d flunked a Spanish test the day before and told my mom about it over the phone, needless to say she wasn’t very happy so I wasn’t in the biggest hurry to see her face to face.” She paused for a moment, wishing it would have been her mom at the door… She then continued. “Instead some man barged in and shoved past my dad. My dad fell to the floor, not expecting the man to barge in like that. The man turned and yanked my dad up, and began beating him. After about two minutes of that my dad was motionless, so the man ransacked our dining room and living room. I thought maybe he was looking for something, but he left empty-handed after about a ten-minute search. After I was sure he was gone I called 911 and then ran downstairs to check on my dad. He was bleeding real bad and didn’t breathe. I freaked…” “Then our neighbor walked in and tried CPR and stuff, it worked until the cops and ambulance got there. When the cops got there the neighbor was knelt down over my dad, so they just assumed he’d killed him, and then arrested him. My neighbor didn’t kill my dad---he’s a good guy. Cynthia wiped away a single tear that had escaped her eyes. “That’s all there was to it.”

“And did you recognize the man who broke into your house?” Angela asked.

“It was my uncle—my dad’s brother.”

“And you’re sure of this?” C.D. asked.

“I’ve told about fifty different people I’m sure of it, you two just make fifty-two. I’m one-hundred percent positive.”

C.D. and Angela looked at each other, wondering how this young girl was going to make it through the after effects of such a trauma…

“You’re dad’s gonna make it,” C.D. said softly.

“I know,” Cynthia said as she began crying.

C.D. and Angela rose from their seats and walked out of the room. Theodore was standing there waiting for them.

“Her story hasn’t changed, and it’s obvious she’s telling the truth. She’s signed her statement. All you have to do is prepare her for trial,” C.D. explained.

Theodore nodded. “Ok, thanks a lot.”

C.D. and Angela nodded.

“We have to go now. It seems Jinny has a plan cooking and we have to sample the food,” C.D. said.

Theodore managed a laugh. “Tell her I said hey.”

“Will do,” C.D. said as she and Angela left…

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

“He really said that?” Jinny asked in amazement.

Magda nodded her head. “I was as shocked as you. I really wish I would have been wired.”

“Yeah, we couldn’t risk it though. Besides, we’ll catch him in action.”

“I have a list of all the families who are buying the illegal drugs. We can run a background check on them and see what turns up.”

Jinny nodded as she swung her legs back and forth off the desk she was sitting on. “We have approximately twenty fake prescriptions written by Doctor Stevenson from the clinic just up the road. He was happy to do it. Anyway, they will last us five days since your shift is only four hours.”

“I’m impressed, Jinny. You’ve really put some thought into this case.”

“Hey, if there’s one thing I hate its drugs, and when they get put out on the street illegally I take it personal.”

Magda smiled, “That’s good to hear.”

Jinny got off her desk and sat in her chair. She laid out the files and figures she had been going over and began explaining them to Magda. “Ok, so every hour on the hour we will send an undercover cop into the drugstore. They will be there for an hour because you will have them fill out a ton of forms, and then they will sit and wait for the prescription to be filled. After that, another undercover-man will come in, and we will repeat the process your entire shift. There will also be a different vehicle that each officer arrives in. It will be rigged so that someone stays in the car and is able to take pictures of every person who enters the drugstore during that particular hour. By the end of your shift we will have four hours worth of pictures from four different vehicles and cameras.”

Magda nodded, “Sounds good to me.”

“Good.”

Jinny got off the desk and put on her coat. Magda did the same.

It was eight at night, and each of their shifts had ended an hour and a half ago. There was no one left in the division but the two of them.

“I wonder where Cap’s been all day,” Magda thought to herself out loud.

“She’s sick.”

“What’s she got?”

“O.P.D.” Jinny said hiding a smirk.

“What?”

“O.P.D. Obnoxious Personality Disorder,” Jinny explained cracking a small smile.

Magda rolled her eyes and laughed at Jinny.

“You got a strange sense of humor,” she laughed as she walked out the door.

“I try,” Jinny said. She breathed a sigh of relief. Magda hadn’t questioned her extensively about Cap, so Jinny didn’t have to reveal she had found ‘Captain Wonderful’ drunk…

In the parking lot the two partners said good bye to each other and went their separate ways…

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Jinny walked down the hall to her apartment door. She fumbled for her keys, and once finding them she unlocked the door and entered the apartment to find Teddy sitting on the couch watching TV. He looked up as she entered and gave her a smile.

Jinny wondered how he had gotten in, but she didn’t question him. She took off her coat and put her things down in a nearby chair. She then walked over to the couch and sat down beside Teddy, who put his arm around her.

“Rough day?” he asked as he pressed the ‘mute’ button on the television control.

“Rough morning,” Jinny sighed.

“Yeah, I called here about seven just to talk, but I got no answer. I assumed you got called in on a case.”

Jinny smiled, not being able to resist the temptation of the moment. “I had a date,” she said resisting a smile.

“Oh really,” Teddy said playfully while praying she was joking with him.

“Yes, with a guy by the name of Casey.”

“As in your brother Casey?”

“Yes indeed.”

“Oooooh, ok.”

Jinny smiled as she snuggled closer to Teddy.

“Everything ok with him?”

Jinny sighed and didn’t say anything. She hadn’t told Teddy about Casey’s ‘situation.’ She was secretly afraid to…

“Tell me when you’re ready, Jin, and not a second sooner,” Teddy said understandingly. He turned off the TV completely and then lifted his arm and switched off the lamp that was on so the room was completely black. He reached up to the afghan that was lying on back of the couch and spread it out over Jinny. He could tell she was stressed and tired… Within minutes they had each fallen asleep…

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“I wonder where Cap’s been all day,” Magda thought to herself out loud.

“She’s sick.”

“What’s she got?”

“O.P.D.” Jinny said hiding a smirk.

“What?”

“O.P.D. Obnoxious Personality Disorder,” Jinny explained cracking a small smile.

Magda rolled her eyes and laughed at Jinny.
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Jinny:This Is Who I am.

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[This message has been edited by InspectorJinnyExstead (edited 06-27-2001).]

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Magda handed the lady her filled prescription and flashed a smile. “Thank you Mrs. Burnett, and I hope your son gets to feeling better soon.” She watched as the lady left the drug store, then she glanced up at the clock on the wall. She had been at work two hours now, and nothing out of the ordinary had happened. She looked over at Angela, who was using the alias Leann Sirus in order to get a bogus prescription filled, sitting in a chair and patiently waiting.

“It should be any minute now Mrs. Sirus,” Magda said with a smile.

“Thank you, miss,” Angela said. She was enjoying playing someone else.


“Loreana,” the assistant manager called from his office.

Magda quickly made her way back there, nodding to Angela that something could be going down.

Magda smiled at Larry as she entered his office. “Yes, sir?”

“One of our special clients will be in soon. Please inform Calvin to have some DE ready.”

“DE, sir?” Magda questioned, trying not to sound suspicious.

“That’s correct, now be gone with. I’m a busy man, Loreana.”

“Yes, sir.”

Magda left the office and when she walked by Angela she coughed, which was the signal for Angela to go make a call to Jinny and notify her something could be going down. … Angela waited a moment or two before she went to the phone booth at the back corner of the store. She quickly dialed Jinny’s cell number. She breathed a sigh of relief and smiled to herself. She and Jinny had developed a code of speech, just in case the telephone was near the manager’s office, which it was.

“Yes, Lyla? This is your sister Leann,” Angela said into the receiver once Jinny had answered her end of the phone. “I just wanted to let you know I me be an hour or so late. Please tell Breon I’ll be there as soon as possible though .” With that Angela hung up the phone and made her way back to the chair she had occupied the past half-hour. She purposely dropped her keys and groaned as she picked them up, which was a signal to Magda that Jinny and the Captain had been informer of the situation.

All they could do now was wait…

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Jinny put down the phone and turned to the Captain who was in the seat beside her. “Something could happen within the hour, or A.S.A.P. They’re not sure what, but something.”

The Captain nodded and looked out her window.

They were in a restaurant parking lot a block away from the drugstore. Jinny was a bit uncomfortable with the Captain, considering they had nothing to talk about so all they did was sit in silence, and she didn’t know whether or not to bring up yesterday at the Anchorside…

She couldn’t bring it up now though, because C.D. was leaving her car and heading towards Jinny’s. She slipped in the back seat of Jinny’s car and shut the door behind her.

“What’s up?” C.D. asked. She knew something was up, because as soon as Jinny got the call from Angela she had rolled down her window, which was a signal to C.D. and the other five cops who were in the parking lot that something was up…

“Something may be going down within the hour,” the Captain explained as she continued staring out the window.

C.D. nodded, “Ok, we’re ready for it.” … C.D. starred at the Captain a moment longer, wondering what was wrong with her, and then looked at Jinny for answers. Jinny just shrugged however, confused about the situation herself. C.D. eyed Captain for another minute and then left the vehicle without another word…



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Magda impatiently sat on the stool behind the counter. She wanted so badly to know what DE stood for. The suspense was killing her…

“Loreana,” Calvin called to her, which caused her to snap out of the trance she was in.

“Yeah,” Magda asked jumping off the stool.

“Will you please go ask Larry what form of DE he means?”

“Sure.”

She raised an eyebrow at Angela, and then made her way to Larry’s office once again.

“Calvin wants to know what form of DE you mean.”

“DE number two. Tell him extra morphine, the product is gonna make us big bucks.”

Magda nodded and turned to leave. She was trying to hide the fact that her blood was now rushing with adrenaline.

“Loreana, when the VIP customer comes, his name is Eric V., slip one thousand dollars in a bag for him. Don’t question it, just do it.”

Magda nodded and left the office. As she closed the door behind her she stood still for a moment, trying to process what was going down…” Once gathering her thoughts she went and told Calvin what was going on. She then took out a slip of paper and wrote, in code, what was going down. She exclaimed to Angela her prescription was ready, and as Angela took the bag from her Magda gave her a slight nod, meaning to check the bag once she left. Angela thanked her and left…


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Angela didn’t bother getting in the vehicle that was awaiting her. She motioned to the undercover cop in the vehicle to go to the restaurant, and then she herself began jogging in that direction.

Once there she walked over to the car that Jinny and Captain was in and slid into the back seat, closing and locking the door behind her. …When C.D. saw Angela return from the drug store, she began heading there, because it was now her turn to was for a prescription to be filled…

“What’s up?” Jinny asked.

Angela pulled out the slip of paper Magda had wrote something on and handed it to Jinny. “Can you decipher it?”

Jinny starred at it. She and Magda had gone over this code writing for an hour that morning at Magda’s house, so it was fresh on her mind…

xCIREx…giveTHOUSone…PORTimvery…PHINE=more

Jinny reread it, making sure she hadn’t missed anything, then she handed the sheet of paper to the Captain.

“And what the hell is this supposed to mean?” the Captain questioned sharply.

“The guy coming within the hour is named Eriv. He is a VIP customer and Magda had been instructed to give him one thousand dollars.”

“Why?” Angela questioned.

Jinny shrugged, “I don’t know, but it also says the medicine he is getting is filled with a lot of morphine.”

“That drug is illegal with and without a prescription,” the Captain stated.

“I know,” Jinnny shrugged.

“Weird,” Angela said…

Jinny zoned out from the conversation that was now taking place between Angela and the Captain. She had just seen a squad car drive by, and Casey was driving it. Her mind drifted to earlier that morning… She had woken up on her couch. Arms were wrapped around her waist. For the first time in a long time though they hadn’t been strangers arms and she hadn’t felt uncomfortable in them. They had been Teddy’s arms and she felt safe embraced in them. She had tilted her head back to see him smiling at her.

FLASHBACK


“Morning,” Teddy said.

“Good morning,” Jinny said as she put her head back down and settled close to him once again.

They sat in silence for a few moments…

“Casey isn’t straight,” Jinny finally whispered without warning.

Teddy at first wondered is he had heard her straight. After Jinny didn’t say anything else he knew he had heard right.

“He told me a couple months ago, and has been having trouble with the people around him ever since. Even John turned on him.”

Teddy gently kissed Jinny on the forehead. “It’s not anything I’m gonna hold against you, Jin, or him for that matter. It’s a decision he made.”

Jinny let out a breath she didn’t realize she’d been holding. “Thank you.”

Teddy smiled and leaned down giving her a quick kiss. “Go back to sleep, the sun isn’t even awake yet.”

…Within moments Jinny was sleeping peacefully…


END FLASHBACK


Jinny snapped back into reality as a call came over the radio. It was Jimmy, the undercover cop who was watching the store. He informed them he just got the signal from C.D. that it was time to move…

Jinny quickly jumped out of the car and broke out in a quick sprint; the other cops weren’t far behind.

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Magda handed the medication to the man along with the money like she had been instructed to do. She watched out of the corner of her eye as C.D., who was using the alias Erin Kalsy, motioned to the undercover cop outside it was time, and then C.D. walked over to Eric.

“You a VIP, too,” C.D. asked him under her breath.

“Sure am,” the mad stated as he looked in the bag at the money.

“How much do the sponsor ya with?”

“One thous,” he said.

“I get three. Wonder why?”

Eric stared at her hard, feeling as if he’d been ripped off he stormed into Larry’s office. “You’re giving the chick here more than me? I make you five grand a week and you pay me one a week. You told me I’m getting the better deal. Like crap, I ain’t getting’ no better deal. I’m putting’ your new drugs on the street and taking’ a risk of getting’ busted and you’re ripping me off. That’s gonna stop.”

Before Larry knew what was happening Eric had drawn a gun and was pointing it at the assistant manager. Before a shot could be fired C.D. and Magda had burst into the office and each were pointing a gun at each man.

“S.F.P.D. Drop it, Eric!” Magda yelled.

“You got cops in here?” Eric yelled at Larry.

“I didn’t know she was no cop,” Larry yelled back.

“Good job, jack ass,” Eric yelled as he dropped his weapon and raised his hands.

“Both of you, on the ground and hands where we can see them,” C.D. yelled.

C.D. and Magda cuffed the two men…


Jinny ran into the drugstore with her weapon drawn to find Calvin rushing to get out the back door. Jinny quickly put her weapon back in the holster and chased the man out the back door into the alley. Within a few seconds she had caught him and slammed him on the ground.

“S.F.P.D! You shouldn’t have even tried running, buddy,” she stated. She then cuffed him and as she walked him back to the drugstore she began reading him his rights.

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