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Nancy McKeon is my idol!!
04-16-2001, 05:01 PM
This is my first fan fic. Please read.

JJ
04-16-2001, 06:45 PM
You didn't post anything

Wild Child
04-16-2001, 06:53 PM
Originally posted by JJ:
You didn't post anything

LOL....that might help. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Nancy McKeon is my idol!!
04-16-2001, 07:14 PM
Captain: Okay assignments , Jinny & Madga there is a mad rapiest running around Los Angeles. ( hands them a folder)

Madga: So Jin, its looks like the last victim was a 24 year old woman. Her name was Elena.

J- Hey she lives just a couple of blocks away from me!Lets go visit her. Err.. question.

M- okay come on.

( At elena's house)

j- so tell me what happened.
E- I can't ( sniffle) It happened too fast! IT WAS HORRIBLE!!
M can you describe the guy?
E- Umm.. Brown hair, muscular. I rea;;y can't tell you too much, I"m sorry.
J- that's okay we understand. whispers to Madga, we'll come back later.

M- okay. They leave.

( 3 days later)

J- okay I talked to the other victums, they all seem to bee young and around 30. Most live around my neighborhood. I 've gootten a list of possible suspects.
M- Lets bring them in.

( Later)

J- Elena which guy is he?
E- I don't really know , let me get a closer look.
M- well...
E- Number 3
J- u sure?
E- positive.
M- Number 3 please state yourname.

Gots o go

Jo's Girl
04-17-2001, 07:11 PM
Gr8!!

Wild Child
04-18-2001, 10:51 AM
This is good!Keep it going. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Nancy McKeon is my idol!!
04-18-2001, 04:18 PM
Okay

M- where's Jinny?
C- I dunno, probably drunk again!
M- maybe...
Bring( phone) Madga picks up
M- hello?
J- Madga? ( Whispers)
M- JInny?! Where are you?
J- I'm at home, I think the suspect to our rape case was just here and he...
M- he WHAT?! JIN TELL ME!!
J- he raped me! Oh Madga it was horrible!!
M- Oh my god Jinny! I"m coming over right now, I've got to get you to the hospital, what if he had HIV? OH MY GOSH!
J- hurry please..( jinny hangs up)( Madga can hear her crying.
Madga grabs her jacket and heads out the door.
c-Madga where do you think you're going?
M- Captain, come here ( whispers, Jinny was raped by the guy that was our suspect for our rape case!)
C- OH my gosh.. go get her to the hospital, what if he had..
M- THat;s what I thought!

Jinnys house.
Madga walks in and sees Jinny hunched over her bed with a towel over her crying.

M- JINNY!
J- Madga I"m so scared. ( say between sobs.)
M- lets get you to the hospital.
J- NO I don't want to.
M- NOW!!! Madga pulls JInny up and throws some clothes on her then picks her up and puts her in the car.
At the hospital

Doctor_ Are you with Jinny Exstead?
M- Yes anything on her?
D- she doesn't know yet but I"m afraid that she's...

Got to go!!!!!!


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Please e-mail me anytime at Nancy_McKeon_01@hotmail.com

Nancy McKeon all the way!!!!!!!

Nancy McKeon is my idol!!!!!!!

Have any of you written her a letter?

I did, still haven't gotten a reply!

Please visit my web page;

www.geocities.com/Nancy_McKeon_01/nancy.html

Jo's Girl
04-18-2001, 05:50 PM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! Would u hurry this is awesome!!! Please!!

[This message has been edited by Jo's Girl (edited 04-18-2001).]

NancyJoJinny
04-18-2001, 08:36 PM
(crying hysterically) MORE PLEASE!??!?!?!?!

Wild Child
04-18-2001, 08:58 PM
Aww did ya have to stop there? http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gifWell,this is going really good.Keep it up! Hope you can get more posted soon.

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Nancy McKeon is my idol!!
04-19-2001, 06:52 PM
Dr. She's pregnet
M- oh my gosh!Have you told her?
D- Yes, I told her just a while ago, I suggest you go talk to her.
M- okay, I will, is there a phone somewhere her? I need to call her boyfriend.
D- just down the hall.
M- thankx
Magda calls Teddy, he says he'll be down right away.Then she waslks into Jinny's room

M- Jinny? Are you okay?
J- OKAY?!!I have some guys baby! I don't even know the freak!!
M- well you can always have a abortion!
J- WHAT ARE YOU THINKING!!!!I ain't killing some innocent baby!
M- I was just suggesting.
Teddy walks into theroom
Teddy- JInny! Honey are you okay?
Jinny starts to bawl loudly.
Teddy- Jinny I have something to tell you.
J- what?

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¤Li§Ä¤

Please e-mail me anytime at Nancy_McKeon_01@hotmail.com

Nancy McKeon all the way!!!!!!!

Nancy McKeon is my idol!!!!!!!

Have any of you written her a letter?

I did, still haven't gotten a reply!

Please visit my web page;

www.geocities.com/Nancy_McKeon_01/nancy.html

NancyJoJinny
04-19-2001, 07:09 PM
You wanna kill me dont ya???? MORE PLEASE!

Jo's Girl
04-20-2001, 08:45 AM
Come on are u trying to kill us or somthin?

nancysbiggestfan
04-20-2001, 10:03 AM
You gotta keep goin. if you dont you are going to kill me. This is great!!!!

PLEASE DONT KILL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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nancysbiggestfan

BlairW_1
04-21-2001, 06:21 PM
I'm DYING!!! Please post more soon!

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From Lisa Whelchel's book, "Creative Corrections"

"The eyes of the Lord are everywhere, keeping watch on the wicked and the good." Proverbs 15:3

"Give thanks in all circumstances, for this is God's will for you in Jesus Christ." 1 Thessalonians 5:18

"A gossip betrays a confidence; so avoid a man who talks too much." Proverbs 20:19

~*^Danielle^*~
LYLAS/LYLAB!

E-mail me at Basketbaiichick@aol.com, BlairWarner33@yahoo.com, BlairWarner@gurlmail.com, MagdaRamirez1@AIM, or Magda_Ramirez_033@hotmail.com

NancyJoJinny
04-21-2001, 06:54 PM
MORE!

NancyMcKeonFan8976
04-21-2001, 09:50 PM
Come on girl!!! We are all suffering and dying to hear more!!!!

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Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

Nancy McKeon is my idol!!
04-24-2001, 09:49 PM
J- well..
T- we all know what happened to you was not your fault but since your pregnet and its not exactly MINE..
J- Oh my gosh, Teddy no! Please don't you have a heart?!
M- I think I need to use the bathroom. ( leaves)
T- I"m just not comfortable about this situation.
J- but.. its not my fault! ( STARTS TO CRY)
T- I"ll see you soon. ( leaves) ( Madga comes back in)
M- Jin, I"m so sorry.
J-I think I"ll have an ....


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¤Li§Ä¤

Please e-mail me anytime at Nancy_McKeon_01@hotmail.com

Nancy McKeon all the way!!!!!!!

Nancy McKeon is my idol!!!!!!!

Have any of you written her a letter?

I did, still haven't gotten a reply!

Please visit my web page;

www.geocities.com/Nancy_McKeon_01/nancy.html

Jo's Girl
04-25-2001, 08:20 AM
OMG!!!!! you've got to keep going!!!

NancyMcKeonFan8976
04-25-2001, 12:45 PM
What are you tring to do to US? MORE!!!! Pwease!

Nancy McKeon is my idol!!
04-29-2001, 06:02 PM
Jinny- I think I might have an abortion.
M_ WHAT?!!And kill an innocent little baby?
J- Well , Teddy... ( starts to sob)
M- okay, I'll talk to him.
J- plus how would u feel if your father was a mad rapist!
M- Umm...
J- I'd be doing the baby a favor!
M- still... its ur decision. ( leaves)
( Doctor comes in)
D- soo are so feeling okay?
J- yea why?
D- when we took your ultrasound, we found a little defect.
J- with me?
D- no your baby.
J- what?
D- you would have had twins but they are...


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¤Li§Ä¤

Please e-mail me anytime at Nancy_McKeon_01@hotmail.com

Nancy McKeon all the way!!!!!!!

Nancy McKeon is my idol!!!!!!!

Please visit my web page;

www.geocities.com/Nancy_McKeon_01/nancy.html

JO- YOu are what you are and that's good enough for me!

ISmellFine
04-29-2001, 06:18 PM
NNNOOOOOOOOnononononono!!! you can do this to me!!!! ahhhh!!!!!!! keep going, pleeeeeeeeaaaaaseeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!

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Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point.

Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

nancysbiggestfan
04-29-2001, 06:26 PM
You are goin to kill me girl!! Please KEEP GOIN!!!!

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nancysbiggestfan

Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!!


BIG Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

Jo's Girl
04-30-2001, 11:44 AM
NONONONONONONnonononononononono!!!! u can't do this u just can't I want to know more!

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
04-30-2001, 06:05 PM
OMG!!!!!!!!!! You have GOT TO FINISH THIS!!!!!!!!!!

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Okay! Bulldogs are here to stay!

Hit 'em in the right knee
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Hit 'em in the
We need touchdowns!

~Kenzie~

InspectorJinnyExstead
06-04-2001, 03:41 PM
Originally posted by Teddys_Angel_Jinny:
OMG!!!!!!!!!! You have GOT TO FINISH THIS!!!!!!!!!!



This Is Great Finish this please

Nancy McKeon is my idol!!
06-24-2001, 09:05 PM
Doctor- Jinny think you should know that ur twins are Simease Twins. We aren't sure, but wehen we did ur ultrasound we found 2 heads and two hearts beating and two sets of legs and two sets of arms but it seems that they are connected.

JInny- wha..

D- IN ur case IF they are Simease then they won't be too hard to separate.

J- Uhh.. Ohhh.

Then JInny totally breaks down she grabs a hosipital robe and slipps on her slippers and runs out of the room. She stops ad thinks inn the hallway. Suddenly she starts to run again. THis time she runs toward Magda's house.


Halfway there she tripps and passes out.

Later that night-

Magda is on the way to the hosipital. She has decided to take the isolated way ( the way JInny took , but Magda doesn't know that. ) She suddenly sees a body sprawled on the floor.

She gets out and looks.

Madga- OH my god Jinny!

Madga quicKLY GRABS HER UP AND puts her in the car and drives as fast as she can to the hospital.

When she gets to the Emergency Room she totally goes ballitistc.

M- This is one of ur patients! Didn't you even go after her! YOu know shes not capable on her own right now!

D- We are checking her over right now. She just woke up.

M- Fine

After about 20 minutes.

Doctor comes out- Ms;. Rameriez I"m afraid that Ms. Exstead is...

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Lisa
Please e-mail me anytime at NancyMcKeonFan2006@hotmail.com
Im Me any time- nancymckeonfan01

Nancy McKeon is my idol!!!!!!!

Please visit my web page;

http://www.geocities.com/nancy_mckeon_01/Nancy.html

JO- You are what you are and that's good enough for me!

JINNY- Everyone gets a chance to be forgiven

NATALIE_ Nothing's wrong with a little HEALTHY IDOL worship!

This is the cast of The Division

http://a40.g.akamai.net/7/40/2718/6d3920bd1e988f/www.lifetimetv.com/shows/division/images/five_women.jpg

Nancy McKeon as Jinny

http://a40.g.akamai.net/7/40/2718/db6f0bfad82923/www.lifetimetv.com/shows/division/images/exstead

Nancy McKeon as Jo
http://www.sitcomsonline.com/photos/nanmck01sm.jpg

NewsiesGurl229
06-24-2001, 10:57 PM
NOOOOONOOONONNOONONONONONONO!!! You MUST finish this!!!!!!!!!!

Joanna Marie_1
06-25-2001, 01:24 AM
OMG I know u didnt just stop there!!!!!!!!! Don't do this to me!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo
06-25-2001, 10:35 AM
Oh i swear if you don't finish this i'm going to end up killing you!! You have got to finsih it!! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!

NancyJoJinny
06-25-2001, 11:24 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! You have too post mor eor ill hitch hike too your house with a phyco killer and break down your door!!!!!!

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh, yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, uh yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight! and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy:Stop! What are you...
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter! *long pause* Yeah... Thats what I thought.

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

Nancy McKeon is my idol!!
06-25-2001, 09:08 PM
Doctor- I'm afraid Ms. Exstead is in serious condiition, when she passed out she fell, and her baby is in critical condition, it might...

- M- WHAT?!
D- Die
Magda- I'm goin'n go in to see her now!
D- Wait you can't, the doctor started but Madga left.

M- JINNY! Did the doctor tell you?

J- Yes, I"m kinda happy! I didn't kill the baby.

D- Ms. Exstead, if the baby dies, you are in great danger, soo we need to take you into the operating room.


~* Later while JInny is in Surgery *~

Madga , Cd, Angela and tHE Captian are in the wating room.

The Doctor comes out.

Umm I"m afraid Ms. Extead's condidition was worse than we thought, she...

InspectorJinnyExstead
06-26-2001, 12:52 PM
YOU CANT STOP HERE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!!

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Jinny:This Is Who I am.

*YeeHaw!*

JinnyExstead897
03-18-2004, 03:58 PM
WHAT R U NUTS DON'T LEAVE US HANGING!!!!!!!!!

bananasplit
03-18-2004, 10:29 PM
post more soon!