I know i have others open but i can do them all!

"Uhhh... Hi." A girl about 13, 5'6" walked into the division. "Can i help you with something?" Jinny said as she sipped on her coffe. "Umm... Maybe... Im looking for my sister, i think she works here but i dont know what department" She looks like me Jinny thought to herself "Whats her name?" "Its, Jacky or Jessy, or Jenny... Jinny... Thats it Jinny Exstead. Do you know her?" Jinny choked on her coffe "Me... thats me... Who are you???" The girl looked shocked, and it took her a second to speak up "D...Dana(hahaha!) Exsted. Wow... were sisters??? We look alike." Jinny didnt understand how she could have a sister and not know. "Yeah... I was thinking the same thing." They stood in silence for a few seconds, CD angela and Magda all came through the door. "Hey Jin..." Magda waved "Whos the kid?" " SHes my sister." Magdas eyes widened. "Sister??? you know you guys look alike." Dana smiled a little, " I know." She looked jinny over "Do you eat?" "What?" Jinny wasnt exactly sure what she meant by that. "Your a stick!" she replied " Your what??? 5'6"??? You must only weigh like 110!" Jinny liked hearing that " Thanks... No matter what i eat i dont gain weight... WHere are you from?" Dana shifted around. "Jersey.... This place is much more fun... But the bars there are fun too." "What!?!" Jinny exclaimed "Bars... you what 14..." Dana felt the need to correct her "im 13" Jinny was annyed at this " 13... you cant go to bars" "Ehhm... Lets just drop is shall we? Look if you can get the day off... we need to talk" Jinny glanced into kates office and saw her talking to the DA. "Yeah lets go."

***Back at jinnys apartment***

Jinny unlocked her door and Dana just pushed on by and walked over to an open beer bottle on the coffe table. "Nice" She said as she picked it up. Realizing there was a little left she drank it and threw it into the trash. " Hey, Kid you cant drink that!" Dana rubbed her eyes "Too late i already did." Jinny picked up a bottle of liquor and stuck it in her room. Dana leaned in too see what it was. "Whats that?"
Jinny looked up at her as the bottles cliked together "Everything... But i am the only one here who can drink it!" Dana walked out. "Great!" SHe called from the other room. she looked in jinnys fridge and viewed the bottles. "Geezus woman how much do you drink!?!?!" Jinny came in and closed the refridgerator door "Not... that much." Dana laughed and then shut up. Jinny thought for a few seconds then decided to ask. " How can you be my sister anyway?" Dana just glaered "I thought you caould tell me... Mommy was single when she had me and deid when i was 2 1/2... You had no idea i was around?" " None! Im still in shock" Dana sneezed but Jinny just turned around and said nothing... And Dana didnt really give, They were so alike. Jinny sat down on the couch and Dana followed her and sat down. It took jinny about 12 seconds before she got up, got a beer and sat down. Dana bit her lip. "Can i have a sip?" Jinny raised one eyebrow. "Are you kidding? NO!" Dana leaned back "Ok,ok sorry! You are way too over protective of your beer!" Jinny took a big sip and dana just watched her. Jinny finished it off and got 2 more. She kept them far away from dana.

***About 1 hour later***

Jinny had drank qute a bit. Dana thought it was funny, but she was a little concerned. " Do you always drink like this?" Jinny took another sip and stared "Like what?" Dana grinned " Never mind" Hse sneezed again "Dana, are you sick??? You have been sneezing all day!" Danas eyes were red "I have allergies!!! Im allergic to everything!" Jinny got cockey "Well soooooorry!" "So... Where do i get too sleep?" Jinny looked around her apartment. "Right here! I dont have that much space" "I noticed that..." Dana hated this place but she wanted to get to know her family better... Right now she might as well go to sleep... It bugged her to talk to drunk people. She started to think what people thought of her when she was drunk. Who really cares? She rubbed her eyes and lyed down, the light was still on and jinny was still there. "Im exaused... Im going too sleep. Night Jinny! well talk tomorow." Jinny smiled at her " You can come too work... Meet my friends... My boyfriend... Your father and your brothers. If he is your father..." Dana cut her off. "He is... Mommy was pregnant when she moved" jinny laughed a drunk laugh "Your 13, shes dead and you still call her mommy????" Dana closed her eyes and tiredly said "And i call Daddy daddy. And you jinny. Before i go to sleep... What are my brothers names? How old are they?" Jinny was in a talkative mood, so she talked "Casey is 29 and hes gay..." Dana lauged but jinny ignored it "ANd johns 35 and hes been married 4 times and is on the brink of divorce... And daddy smokes and drinks." Dana though what a nice family then asked her last question "Your 32, and you still call him Daddy?" Jinny took a sip of her beer and finshed it and got up to go in her room, but turned back at the last second and smiled. "And i still call Mommy mommy, and you dana. Good night dana. " Dana was to tired to talk, but mumbled "Good night Jinny."

I g2g more later!!

Ok nobodys responding but i dont care im jus gonna keep goin.

***The next morning***

Jinny came into the living room, wearing a mens button down shirt and sweat pants. Dana was awake just didnt feel like standing up. Jinny didnt exactly look very happy, her hair and makeup were all messed up but she just went into the kitchen and forgot all about Dana. Dana looked at her watch, it was exactly like Jinnys "Hey what time do you have to go to work???" Jinny came back out with some orange juice and took a sip. "Uhhh... 8." Dana was a little surprised. "Uh, stupid sister person, its 7:45!" Jinny slammed her orage juice down on the table and started for her room "I know im late...Im always late!!!" Dana laughed "Good for you!"

***At the station***

Jinny came in with Dana an hour late. Kate was not pleased "Exstead! Your late." Jinny moaned and sat down "I know im late." Dana sat on jinnys desk. Kate eyed her suspiciosly. "Whos the kid?" Dana got a littla annoyed "Kid kid kid! Everybody keeps calling me kid!!! Im dana! Dana Exstead!!!!!!" Kate licked her lips "Let me guesse... shes your daughter?" Jinny took that as an insult " NO! shes my sister!!!!!!!!" Kate didnt really care... She had way too much work to do. "Poor kid." She said as she went into her office. Dana pulled overe a chair and put her feet on it. " You two dont really like each other now do ya!?!?" Jinny looked into kates office to see if she was listening. "Shes got a bug up her a$$ for me!" Dana laughed. "Who are all these people who are stareing at me?" CD angela and Magda looked away. "They work here" Jinny said "Thats Inspector Angela Reid, Inspector CD CeLorenzo, ANd inspector Magda Ramirez." Dana waved to them "Hey ange, CD, Mag!..." She looed at kates door "And im assuming he rname is kate right?" Jinny smiled "Yes... But she hates it when you call her that... Call her, CAPTAIN!" Dana sat up straight. "OK! Im starving.... I want burito... Can i get one anywhere around here?" she asked. Jinny got up "Sure... Come with me"

I g2g bye more later!

More, this is good!

This is great POST MORE SOON!!!


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OK!

***At lil' restaurant where jinny eats breakfast***

Dana and Jiny were just finishing up. Dana sat her napkin down on the table and watched as a lady with really long hair all twisted up walked by. "Interesting..." she said. Jinny just kinda sat there. She looked at jinny sharply. "When do i get to meet all of the rest of the family?" Jinny started playing with the cuff of her jacket. "Whats today?... Wednesday?" Dana nodded. "Ok tonights family poker night, you can meet them then." Dana sniffled and then sneezed. She wiped her nose and started thinking. "They all live right here?" Jinny took a sip of coffe " Their all cops. Just like me. Well dad was a cop, but, well he aint anymore. Dont you have any luggage?" Dana threw her hands in the air. "Airlines lost it all!!!!!!! Damn spirit airlines!!!" Jinny rolled her eyes "yeah... same thing happened to me... That was my favorite pair of socks... ahvent been on a plane since." Dana started biting her nails. "Do you have a TV... a VCR... DVD player? A sterio... A computer?" Jinny glared at her. "I have a TV with cable and a VCR and a cheapo radio..." Dana sighed. "Oh well... if, and thats a BIG if, i end up staying here ill have my things sent over. Ewven if i did chances are i wouldnt be staying with you." Jinny stared at her car. "I wonder how Dads gonna take this."

***That night***

"I have another what?" Jinnys dad was, one, quite surprised, and two, drunk. "Daddy, you have another daughter!" Dana waved "Her name is dana shes 13 shes from NJ and she has a big mouth and she tries too take beer." Dana did a famose Jo smile "Im jus'a lil angel aint I pops?" Jinnys dad stared at her. "I dont believe this." He siped on his beer. John and casey were sitting down at the table looking dana over, drinking beer, and Jinny was stainding next to dana drinking beer. Dana looked around, there were a few bottles scattered around. "OK!! No offese people... But is there 1 member of this family... Who drinks the beer... Then actually throws out the bottle!?!?" Jinny sat down. "Whatever!" John decided to be himself and make a rude remark. " Si sis... did you know jinnys nickname is the town slut?" Jinny slammed her beer down. "JOHN!" Dana licked her lips. "Looking at you youd never be able to figure it out... Walking aroung the streets of san fran for 6 days lookin for ya... Well thasa different story." Jinny leaned back "Oh you are... so... so his sister." Jinnys dad started to light up a cigarette. Dana bugged her eyes out like jinny." Im allergic to smoke... can you not do that?" Jinnys dad took it out of his mouth and stuck it in the ash tray "Of all the things she could be allergic to... it has to be cigarette smoke! WHAT NEXT!?!?!"

I g2g more later bye!

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

[This message has been edited by NancyJoJinny (edited 05-09-2001).]

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Ehhh hell yes ill post.

Jinnys dad was about to say something but Dana was already over at his sterio playing with it. She pulled out a CD and stuck it in. She went through the songs about 10 times then settled for Nelly's must be the money. She sang along to it and plopped down next to jinny. Jinny stared at her and sipped her beer. Dana stared back. "WHAT!?!?" Dana exclaimed. "You just come in here and blast you music, tell people what to do and give us no time to talk!... Im starting to like you." Jinny smiled. John just couldnt believe how much jinny was like a teenager. Dana started to say somethin... And then stopped. Jinny looked at her. "What?" Dana sneezed "Uh nevermind." she said. "I was going to ask if i could have a sip of your beer. Your not going to let me are you?" Jinny downed the rest in the last sip. "No... Not really, dont count on it, no, not likely, naver, uh uh. NO!" Dana jumped back, "OK, OK! Geez. I was only asking." Jinny broke out the cards. "Shall we?" She motioned to the chairs. Dana sat up. "Can i play!?!?" Casey laughed "Sorry, we play for real money." Dana stood up. "No shh... Uh, No duh! I got 800 bux in my pocket, and im not afraid to use it." Jinny did that thing she does when she buggs her eyes out. "Excuse me?? 800! Are you kidding?" Dana pulled over a chair. "Nope... My foster parents were filthy rich! I got a whole load uh dough in the banks back in jerzey." John grabbed the cards from jinny and started shuffleing the cards. "Lets go easy on the kid... Weel make aces and duces(sp?) wild. Is that ok huney?" He was obviosly makeing fun of Dana. "They all say that the first time." She said with a smirk.

***1 hour later***

Dana had a pile of money in front of her and Jins Dad Casey John and Jinny only had 5 bux a piece each. Dana eyed her cards and put one in the middle and Jinny handed her another. Jinny was sure she would win, she had a full house... And danas luck must run out eventially. Dana pushed all her money into the middle. Jinny put her 5 doallars in, John and Casey and her dad did the same. John layed his cards down. "Full house" Jinny slammed her cards down. "Damn you! I have one too!" Casey sat his down. "Two of a kind... Well what did you expect... it was 5 bux!" Jinys dad put his down next. "4 of a kind girl... Id like to see you beat that!" Dana smiled a mig lipped deviose looking smile, and in a voice all breathy like Janet Jacksons she read off what she had as she layed the cards down. "I have 3 queens... A 2... and an Ace... I HAVE 5 OF A KIND! HAHAHAH!!! you suck at this game!" She grabbed the money and shoved the bills into her wallet. And left casually and waited in Jinnys car. Jinny got up to leave but turned to her family. "I have just beenm beat by a 13 year old... And im broke she keeps hundreds in her back pocket... Good...BYE!"

I g2g! Moms buggin me... But more later

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

More, it is GREAT!!!!

Thanyou!

Jinny went out and got in her car. She didnt say anything to Dana until they got home.

***Jinnys Apartment***

"You play poker good kid." Jinny smiled at her, pertially embarressed she lost so badly. Dana smiled back. "Well, comes naturally." She kept thinkin, that was dumb... She was driving drunk and i got in the car... Stupid me. "Goodnight Jin." Jinny went into her room. "Goodnight."

***The next morning***

"Dana... Dana get up.... Hey kid its 7... Come on.... Ill let you have a sip of my beer." Dana sat up. "Oooh goody! Wheres the beer!" Jinny glared at her. "I was kidding." Dana sighed and layed back down. " Can i stay here?" Jinny thought for a minute "I dont know... Dont i have too feed you or something?" Dana mada a face. "Im a girl not a dog... Ill eat something!" Jinny was already dressed for work... She had to leave so she had to decide... I mean what can the kid do? She decided just to leave her there... Never phased her about all the beer and junk she had. "Look you can stay.. "She said. "Touch nothing... Take nothing... Drink nothing... And dont eat the turkey." Dana just ahd to ask. "WHy cant i eat the turkey?" Jinny stopped before leaving. "Just trusnt me DONT EAT THE TURKEY."

***At the station***

"Hi Jinny!" Angela said in her usual happyness. "Wheres your sister?" Jinny shrugged "At home... with all my beer.. Oh. ill be back." She ran out. Magd aturned to Captain who watched from the doorway. "Well i guesse we can safely assume Dana + Alcohol dont mix." Kate stared off into space. "Or maybe they do."

**Back at jinnys apartment***

Dana was lying on the couch... She reached over her head and placed the 4th bottle of beer on the side table. her stomach started to hurt, "Im so stupid... I shouldnt have ate the turkey." Jinny burst in and Dana sat up, Jinny noticed the bottles.. Dana searched for an excuse, "I... uhh.. well, i... WELL YOU SAID I COULD HAVE A SIP!" Jinny grabbed the bottles. "A SIP! not 4 bottles! your only 13 you dont need to drink!" Dana puched the pillow. "I drink, in a week, half as much as you do in a day!" Jinny was ready to throw the bottles at her "THATS STILL TOO MUCH!" she went into the kitchen "OOOOH! you ate the turkey." Dana leaned back. "Am i like gonna die now?" Jinny threw the bottles out and pulled dana off the couch. "No... Not unless i kill you... your comeing too work with me... NOW!!!"

I g2g bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye bye.

Great! I can't wait 4 u to write more!!!! I really, really, really can't wait 4 this!!! hehee, I just had a Sprite... :P

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In loving memory of Mrs. Delia Gray...

"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13

"For the Lord is good, His mercy is everlasting, and His truth endures to all generations." Psalms 100:5

"For the Lord Himself will descend from heaven with a shout, with the voice of an archangel, and with the trumpet of God. And the dead in Christ will rise first.
Then we who are alive and remain shall be caught up together with them in the clouds to meet the Lord in the air. And thus we shall always be with the Lord." 1 Thessalonians 4:16,17

~*Danielle*~

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THANK YA!!!!


***At the Station***

Jinny came in, practically dragging Dana along with her. Jinny pushed her down into a desk chair, it rolled backwards and hit Jinnys desk. "Sit there... and stay there!" Dana sneezed... Again. "AY! Look im sorry!" Kate watched form the corner. "GUYS!" She screamed. "Whats goin on here?" Jinny ignored her and leaned over the chair and put her hands on the arm rest. "Look Dana! Its one thing to drink! Its another thing to drink when your 13! But its even worse... To drink MY beer when YOUR 13! Of all the beer it had to be mine!" Dana leaped up. "Oh my gawd! So what your sayin' is that i can drink any time i wanna, i jus cant drink your beer. Is that what your trying to tell me!?!?!?!" Jinny got up in her face. "Yeah!!!! And by the way i hate your accent... You dont pronounce anything right!!!" Dana threw her arms up. "And whaddis that supposed to mean?" Jinny stared at her. "It means exactly what i said! I HATE THE WAY YOU NEW JERSIANS TALK!" "We twak just like you." Dana said in her defese... Then she realized that she was talking with a new your accent. Jinny grinnted her teeth. "WHATEVER! Just sit down and stay here... I have to... to.... I dont know your just drivin me crazy!!!!!!" Jinny ran out into the bathroom. Dana noticed how everyone was staring at her. "And whadda you starin at?"

Sorry it was so short... have dance class... bye bye bye bbye bye bye.... Buh bye now.

Post more I cant stand the wait more!!!!!!

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Can't wait for more!

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Ok.

Everybody just turned away and went back to a ormal conversation. Magda got up and went into the bathroom. "Jinny?" She asked. Jinny slammed her locker door... "Im going too kill her if that turkey doesnt first! AHHHH!!!! I am soooo mad!" Magda leaned against the wall. "I can see that. Sibling rivalry?" Jinny glared. "No... Ive been throgh sibling rivalry... I still have that problem... This is sibling likeness." "What?" Magda was a little confused. "She drinks... She does whatever she wants... She never EVER listens and... God knows what else." Magda walked over too her. "It cant be that bad." Jinny walked over too the mirror and stared at herself. "It is.... I CANT TAKE IT!!! I dont know what to do with her!" Magda laughed. "Thats funny. Just... i dont know... Give her a piece of your mind." Jinny started to leave the bathroom "I did.... doesnt work.

***In the division room thang***

Dana was slumped down in her chair with her arms folded. "Are you going to let me out of here now?" Jinny smiled... "Yyyy... no." Dana rolled her eyes. " Why??? Just leave me at a restaraunt or something and get me later... I hate it here!" Jinny sat down. "Well so do i." she said "But i work here and i have no chice and i dont care. Your staying... Sorry, im not takeing any chances." Dana hit Jinnys desk. "You know!!! You have taken the time out of your schedule... Which is 1 work 2 drink and 3 have sex.... To make sure my life sux... So i just have to tell you this since i hang around you 24/7... If you think my accents bad listen to yours its sooooo... Californiish." Jinny shooke her head and looked at her. "Im a californian stupid! Thats why i talk all... WHat did you call it... Californiish?" Dana smiled. "Well did it ever cross your mind i talk like this cause im a... Oh i dont know... NEW JERSIAN!! MEANING FROM NEW JERSEY!!!" Jinny ignored her and looked down and started working.

*** One hour later.***

Dana kept yawning... and yawning... and yawning. Jinny looked up. "Let me guesse... when you drink you get..." Dana cut her off. "Exausted... I usually drink at night... Before i sleep... But you have so kindly deprved me of that privaledge... So i drank in the morning... That was a mistake." Jinny sqeezed her pen. " CAPTAIN!!!!! can i have the rest of the day off???" Kate came out of ehr office. "What????" Jinny sighed. "You heard me.... Ill work a double shift tomorow... Just let me get the kid out of here before she falls asleep." Dana got all sarcastic. " 'before she falls asleep'" mimicing Jinny. "Im not that bad off!" Kate was sick of hearing them fight anyway. "Yeah get out of here before i change my mind."

I g2g bye

Waaaaaaaaa! Nobody responded... Oh well.

***Jinnys apartment***

Jinny opened the door and Dana walked by. "You know what?" she said. "Im beginning to hate you. Im going to take a shower." Dana went into Jinnys room and went through her dresser pulling out random pieces of clothes that she though would fit. Jinny watched "Excuse me little girl... WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!?!?!" Dana pulled out a blue, plain shirt and went toward the bathroom. "Calm down, even littler than i 32 year old.... Its not like im takeing your underwear." She went into the bathroom and closed the door buit continued talking. "You HAVE cleaned out your shower recently... Right?" Jinny pretended to laugh. "hhehehe. Not funny. Yes i have now shut up and take the shower before i rid my house of all vermin... That applys to you."

***30 mins later***

Dana came out of the bathroom, wearing Jinnys cloths, with her wet hair dangling down. She went over to Jinnys dresser mirror and looked at herself.. She rumaged through the top drawer and pulled out some leave in conditioner and sprayed it on. Jinny came in and lyed down on her bed. "You take a really... REALLY long time in the shower you know that???" Dana used her fingers to comb through her hair. "I have really thick hair... Takes a long time to wash." Jinny watched her. "Oh damnit!!!!" Dana screamed. "My blowdryer was in my bag that the airline lost! Now how am i supposed to blow my hair straight!?!? Do you have one?" Jinny turned on the TV "Sorry... I dropped it in the bathtub." Dana nodded. "Oh wait... you what???----- You know i just thought of something... Im not supposed to drink when im on allergie medication am i?" Jinny turned off the tv and looked at her. "No your not... Did you?" She didnt wait for a response "You idiot... Even i dont do that... All the time." Dana winced and then turned to leave the room "Thats ok... just promise to call 9-1-1 of i die ok?" she sneezed. Jinny rolled over... she had had a few beers, "yeah whatever.... go sleep or something."

I g2g later!

Great! Oh, I would have posted sooner, but I didn't see it. More soon! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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In loving memory of Mrs. Delia Gray...

"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13

"For the Lord is good, His mercy is everlasting, and His truth endures to all generations." Psalms 100:5

"For the Lord Himself will descend from heaven with a shout, with the voice of an archangel, and with the trumpet of God. And the dead in Christ will rise first.
Then we who are alive and remain shall be caught up together with them in the clouds to meet the Lord in the air. And thus we shall always be with the Lord." 1 Thessalonians 4:16,17

~*Danielle*~

Hehehehehehehehehe!!! We got a live one here!! Somebody responded... I looove it when people respond!

***2 hours later***

Jinny sat on her bed sipping on some liquor from the bottle on her nightstand. Dana stood by the bedroom door. Out of sight and listened to her. Well there was really nothing to listen too, just the sound of the liquid hitting the glass. She had stood there for a while. She didnt want too stay there, but she did. She wanted to know everything. it had been two days and so far shed figured out that Jinny was an alcoholic. And that was it. She felt better around somebody who had alot of flaws, like her. Dana pushed herself forward and went in. She felt, in a way, sorry for Jinny. Didnt look like she had anybody there for her. "Jinny?" She tried to sound nice but that was a streatch for her "Ummm... Im really hungry, can i go out and get something too eat? Its about 2pm and theres nothing here." It took Jinny w few seconds too register all of this in her mind. "Sure, whatever." Jinny took another sip. Dana watched her and really wanted to know why she drank. But thats not just something you ask someone. Maybe it was their mom... Or their interesting family. She drifted back into reality. Jinny was pouring some more. She barely even noticed Dana was alive. Dana turned and left. She ran out. She couldnt stay, not right now. She wasnt exactly sure what Jinny was like when she was REALLY drunk. She didnt feel like takeing any chances, especially with a drunk cop with two guns. When she got outside she realized how cold it was, and windy. She was wearing a short sleeved shirt. But she just walked on. She had no idea how to get around the city, at all. As a matter of fact sheed never been out of new Jersey. Its not like her foster parents would let her. Sure they were rich and had a great house. But Dana was more of a maid then a Daughter. She kept walking, barely realizing anything around her, too lost in thought too even remember why she left Jinnys apartment. She looked around. Nobody was out. "What is this?" she thought. She walked for about 30 minutes more. She was sick, starving, and tired, and much to her exitement found a small little fast food restaurant. It didnt look very clean from the other side of the road, it was an old building covered in grafiti. But if she went any farther chances are shed never find her way home. All of the buildings around her were old and grafitti covered every inch of brick. "No wonder nobodys out". The old restarant had big scrpt ply-wood letters up over the front door, That read Jenkinsons. She vaugly remembered her one trip to the beach, the day before her mom had dies... It was the only thing she remembered. On the Jersey shore there was a Jenkinsons. She wondered if they had anything to do with each other. The one in Jersy was new clean and in the best part of town. She finnally realized she had been standing there for 10 minutes just stareing at it. No point in waiting any longer. She crossed the street and went in. It was full of... Smoke. She started coughing and then remembered her allergie. She darted to the counter and started screaming. "GIVE ME A BURGER... SOME FRIES AND A SMALL COKE! AND HURRY IT UP!!! Dana looked around. What is this? she asked herself, again. This is... sooo... well she kind of liked it. It wasnt one of those "put your napkin in your lap and dont drink out of the finger bowl" places she was used too. A sort guy threw her food on the counter "Fast enough for ya?" People there were so sarcastic. Dana threw the money on the counter and left. She guessed it was about 3. There was a bus stop right there. She doubted there was even a bus. she sat down and started.



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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

This is great!!!!!!!!!
More soon? *puppy dog face* o0{-_-}0o

Im just going to post more... im bored.

***a while later***

Dana had been walking for a while. She recognized where she was, she was close to Jinnys apartment. That was one of the best burgers she ever had. Crummy restaant, good burger. Thats the name of a movie, she thought. She walked for about tem minutes. She kept thinking to herself. This is like one of those questions like 'how many licks to the center of a tootsey pop?' But in her case it was 'how far can a girl walk in 3 1/2 inch heels before her feet fall off?!?!' She almost didnt notice she was at Jinnys. SHe went up th front steps, half expecting Jinny to be Throw up drunk, and half expecting her too be passed out. Sure enough Jinny was passed out in her room. "Great" Dana said as she layed down on the couch. Her apartment was so boring. Nothing to eat or drink. Well there was- no she didnt want to think about it. What would Jinny do if she drank. Shes not THAT stupid. Or maybe... she was.

I g2g more later bye!

its 9584 licks to the center of a tootsie roll pop keep going

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Tootie:You look like a princess in a castle surrounded by a mote and Prince Bill cant reach you because there's alligators in the mote and your hairs to short to climb so he has to get a ladder and...
Nat:Tootie wake up,we're back in Kansas.

OMG!!! i have the "Worst" Jerz accent! hehe! it is really bad! Oh, and i live soooo close to "Jenkinsons" u go there? Great story! Keep up the AWESOME Work!

Im really tired so ill post tomorow but yes! I live right by jenkinsons!!! I walk there every day (in the summer) and eat there!!! I love it there! I practically live there!! And the pavilion arcade!!! I love the shore. My accents weird... Sometimes i talk like im from brooklyn, sometimes like jo, sometimes lke im from california LOL, and sometimes i talk like im from the south!!!! I have no real way of talking exept really, REALLY fast and sometimes i talk like a drunk person when im totally sober!!!!!!!! I slur everthing together into one damn long word!!!!!

Alright... im awake now.

Dana paced around the apartment, for like 2 hours. There was no place to go. Nothing to do. She could always go in and jump on Jinnys bed to wake her up... but thats just so, mean. Ehh, what the hell. Dana went into her room and sat on the bed. And bounced up and down a little, then harder, and harder until jinny woke up. Once she did she stopped. "Dana, what the hell are you doing!?!" Dana stood up. "Well, i had to get you up!" she said. "I couldnt think of a better way." Jinny looked a little sick, "Thanks alot." Dana stared, "Are you feeling alright?" Jinny swallowed hard and jumped up, "No..." she ran into the bathroom, Dana stuggled to fight back a laugh, she went into the living room and waited on the couch. About5 mins later jinny practially crawling came out. "Are you feeling better?" Dana said. Jinny straigtened out her shirt. "Uhh, yeah whatever." Dana didnt want too seem to demanding. "Can i watch some TV now?" Jinny rubbed her eyes. "Yeah ok." she said. "Just dont, re wire the cable box to get any unwanted channels ok?" Dana sprinted into the room. "Thank you" she said as she slammed the door. Jinny sat down on the couch. "some sister." she mumbled.

I g2g bye, c ya, later, adios, hasta luego, choa, auvoir, salut, salutations, fairwell, B back soon, ill post more later.

Dana came back out of the room "Nothings on." she said. Jinny looked a tad bit embaresed. Somebody knocked on the door. Jinny started to get up but Dana just walked over and opened it. A Tall fat guy stood there with Danas lost luggauge. "You Dana Exstead?" She smiled. "Yes you have my bag? Let me have my bag..." He pulled it away. "Hold up... Sign here." He held out a pad. Dana scribbled her name, or what appered to be it and grabbed her bag, slamming the door in the guys face. Jinny watched. "Sooo... uh... what do you want to do." Jinny asked. Dana rummaged through the bag. "I got it!" she screamed. "LET ME DO YOUR HAIR!" Jinny backed away. "No! I dont know what youll do!" Dana pulled her toward the couch and waited for her too sit. "DOnt worry jin... Nothings permanent and it wont hurt... Whatever i do to you ill do to myself." Jinny scooched around to get comfortable. "Why doesnt that make me feel better?" she siad. Dana just went along. she pulled out a tube of temporary hair color and streaked it through jinnys hair. Only a few fiery red peices. She put Jinnys hair into 2 braids. Smiled at her work... And without showing Jinny started on her own hair. Jinny was afrad to ask. "Dane... What did you do to my hair?" Dana continued streaking her own hair. "Nothing. Well only a little... Uhh... Il show you later."

***Uhhh... Later***

"OMG!! Its red!!!" Dana glared. "Uh duh! Of course its red!!! I know its red!! I made it red." she said proudly. Jinny touched her hair and pulled back. "This DOES come out right???" Dana giggled. "You have too wash it like 10 times." Jinny put her face in her hands. "How... why?" She said. Dana thought it was the funniest thing she ever saw. "Well... Now, lets go... get something too eat." Jinny looked up and said. "Didnt you just do that?" Dana thought. "Yeah... But i always eat alot." She laughed.

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

~!@#$%^&* DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~!@#$%^&*

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

This is great! More soon, kay?

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Nancy and Jo and Jinny Rules!!

Sometime in June:Nancy McKeon is doing another chat for Lifetime

Please visit my site @
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Big Dream: To meet Nancy McKeon!!!

HA!!!!!!! HALALALALA!!!!!! It will be short... but ill post some.

***restaurant***

Jinny kept covering up her hair with her hands. "I hate this." she said. "People are stareing at me... I hate this." Dana was stuffing her face with some fries. "Yeah... but. " she said while chewing. "Who cares... You only live once!!!" Jinny moaned. "But i want to live a good life." Dana inhaled the fries. "You live in a 4 rom apartment... Trust me... Thats not the good life." Jinny was sooo annoyed. " I live alone! Why would i need more room!!??!!??!!??" Dana shrugged and went back to eating.

***later***

"I think somebody poisoned the fries." Jinny shook her head. "What?" Dana looked seriose "I think somebody poisoned my fries... I dont know why... i just do." Jinny mada a face and said. "That is the stupidest thing iv ever heard!!!" Dana looked at the ground. "Yeah it is... Aint it?"

I g2g.. Choral concert!!! YAY!

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

~!@#$%^&* DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~!@#$%^&*

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

omg....don't stop...were they posioned? tell me!!!

Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe!

*Jinnys apartment*

Dana was lying on the couch, leaving no room for Jinny, who paced around watching her. "And tell me again.." Jinny started "Why do you think the fries are poisoned?" Dana looked at her with contempt. "I told you! People dont like me! Well, alot of them dont like me! And im really sick!" Jinny threw her arms up "So what!?!?" Dana put her hand on her stomach. " Im in severe pain here jinny!" She screamed. "It hurts really... bad." A tear started in her eye, but she wiped in away. Jinny got down on the floor so she was eye level with her. "Do you need a doctor?" she asked. Dana started too sit up. "No im fine." she said, when she got up all the way she shriked quickly with pain. She stopped herself, she didnt want too sound worse off then she was, which was hard too do. Jinny grabbed her phone. "Thats it im calling 911." She said, Dana cut her off. "No... wait, drive me." Jinny put her phone down. "What? Why?" she said. Dana got up, she grimaced. "Im not going too die in the next ten minuites. Please, just drive me. I hate ambulances." Jinny put her phone back in her pocket. "Why?" Dana, still holding her stomach, went over too her. "Too tell you the truth... Im afraid of them, and hospitals too, so many people die there, so many people are sick. I dont like being around dead people. And they de of alcohol poisoning, ive had alcohol poisoning, and im scared." Jinny didnt look her directly in the eye. "Come on, ill drive you." She said as she put her arm around Dana and walked her out of the apartment.

Buh bye now... ill write more later, and for all you reading... Your in for a big... BIG surprise... ITS A BIG SURPRSE!!! Dont be mad if its a little... Interestingly different too you, it will all make sense eventially. Im not makeing sense.

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

~!@#$%^&* DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~!@#$%^&*

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

Write More PLEASE! I mean you just leaving me hanging here...

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

Ok, this is the interestingly different part. I dont know. I have been brainstorming for days and days and this is the best i can do.

Jinny sat in the waiting room of a hospital, chewing on what was left of a pen. A doctor, short and blonde, walked out. "Extead?" she said, Jinny was the only person there. "Were you expecting anyone other than me to say yes?" Jinny said sarcastically. The doctor bit her lip. "Whatever, Danas fine, it was food poisoning, the babys fine..." Jinny leaped up and cut her off. "BABY?" she screamed. The doctor who was only about 24 tried to explain. "Its not what your thinking... 5 months ago she was raped. Her pregnancy is a result of the rape." Jinny calmed down a bit. "She never told me that. 5 months huh?" The doctor shook her head. "Yeah, she can go home now. Shes perfectly fine. You might want too talk too her first, she cant decide what too do. Room 24(my lucky #)"

***Room 24(my luckey #)***

"D...Dana?" Jinny asked as she came in. Dana was sitting on the bed, leaning agains the headboard with her arms folded. "Yes? What?" She made no eye contact. Jinny sat down on the end of the bed, "I uhhh, talked too the docter. She told me, everything." Dana looked at her "And now what? What am i supposed too do!?!?" Jinny leaped up "YOUR ASKING ME!?!?!" She tried not too yell. "I.. Have no idea, what do you want too do." Dana got up. "I dont want too get an abortion, thats just mean too kill it. And i dont think i can be a mother. Im not even old enough too get a job!!!" Jinny walked around "You can be a gopher at the station?" Dana smiled a little, but then it faded. "Where will i live, his.. or her father is locked up in Jersey. I have no support from my foster parents, who by the way, want too give custody of me too dad, or you, or whoever. I cant do this!" she yelled as she sat down and began crying. Jinny sat next too her and put her arm around her. "You dont HAVE to decide right now. You can have some time too think. And you could stay with me?" Dana sucked it up "Youd really want a crying baby in your tiny apartment all night, theres barely enough room for us!" "Ill move." She said. Dana didnt want too trouble her. "Why are you doing all of this for me?" Jinny brushed danas hair back. "Hey kid, this isnt your fault. And, your my sister. Its not like you tried to be pregnant... or ne thing like that. and i cant just throw you out." Dana looked at the floor and out the window. "Would you dissaprove if i wanted too keep the baby?" Jinny sat up straight. "No." she whispered. Dana turned too her. "Good, because i want too keep it." she said in the same whispery voice.

~The End~

Im thinking of doing a follow up fan fic.

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

~!@#$%^&* DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~!@#$%^&*

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

Great Job! You should write a sequel!!!

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

thinking...thinking...no do one...really! this was GREAT!

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Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

I'm sorry to bring this up but i just had to ask NancyJoJinny/Dana a question. is the Jenkinsons on the Jersey shore that you mentioned in your story the one on the boardwalk in Point Pleasant? and if it is are you from around that area of New Jersey? Just wondering, cause if it is i think it's really cool cause i was just there like three days ago. (we go to the jersey shore every year for vacation cause my dad grew up in New Jersey.
once again i'm sorry for bringing this up but i wasw dying to know!
By the way your story is awesome!

[This message has been edited by FOL_lover (edited 06-22-2001).]

Yeah! Thats the Jenkinsons I meant, my dad grew up there too. We go every summer 4 vacation. We have a shore house there. Yup.

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh, yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, uh yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight! and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy:Stop! What are you...
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter! *long pause* Yeah... Thats what I thought.

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.