Ok, let's say that the note meant that she was breaking up with Teddy, ko?

Suprising Hostage

By Danielle Powell
Based on a role play by Jo_Polniczek, BlairW_1, and Teddys_Angel_Jinny

Chapter One

Jinny Extead walked into The Anchorside feeling a little down. It was the third day since she had broken up with Teddy, her boyfriend for two months, and she felt like she could use something to calm her nerves. As she approached the bar, she saw her best friend and partner, Magda Ramirez, slouched over on her arm, apparently bothered by something. And it was true. Her personal life was overly trying right now, as she and her son, Ben, were being stalked by Ben's surrogate father, Gabriel. Beside her was an empty glass. Jinny sat down beside Magda. "Hey, Magda, you feeling all right?" Magda looked up at Jinny with bloodshot eyes. "Does it look like I'm all right? I'm tired of this, Jinny. I'm sick and tired of Gabriel following my every move. Calling me, somehow reaching me, no matter how many times I change my number! He's leaving roses at my doorstep! G--, Jinny, he's even tracking Ben to his soccer games! Don't you think that's a little too far?"
All this time, Jinny was staring at her with a concerned look. But it was hard to look concerned, because she was so tired. She just wanted to have a drink and go home. "Magda, I'm sorry about all this. But maybe it's a sign that he wants to be a part of your family again. Have you thought about that?"
Magda looked at her with disbelief. "You too? Everyone thinks I've been too hard on him, that I should let him back into my life. Well, that will be a little hard, considering he never was in my life in the first place! I don't want him near my son!" She looks at the bartender. "Hey, could I have another beer here? Oh, wait a minute. Jinny, do you want anything?"
"Uh... no, I don't think so."
"Okay, if you say so." She then said to the barkeeper, "Just one beer."
Jinny was suprised at what she was about to say, because she was so tired, but knew it had to be said. "Magda, I just want you to know that I'll always be there anytime you need to talk."
Magda put her face in her hands. "Jinny, thanks, but I'm not really in the talking mood. I just want to finish this and go home."
Jinny let out a mental sigh of relief. "Magda, do you want a ride home or something? I'm gonna leave, I need a good night's sleep for once."
"No, I think I'll just stay here for a while," she said, then drank a gulp of her beer. "I need some time away from home; from life, if you know what I mean." She took another gulp, and tears stung her eyes as the harsh liquid ran down her throat. She normally drank a little, but never so much at a time. That's what was making Jinny worried.
"Magda, I'm taking you home, ok? Ben's probably wondering where you are."
"Jinny, I'm not going home right now," she said, and weakly pushed Jinny away. She downed the rest of her beer, and stood up a little dizzily. "Now I'm going." They paid for their drinks, walked out to Jinny's car, and went to Magda's house.

Chapter Two

As Jinny and Magda walked up to the door, Magda noticed something strange. "Would Mom have left the door open when she was watching Ben?"
"I don't know," Jinny said, "but let me check it out first, okay?"
"No, I'm going in with you, that's my mom and son in there!" Magda said, with urgency in her voice.
"Okay, but I'm still going in first," she said, and pulled out her gun. Magda did the same, and they slowly walked in, back to back.
"Ben?" Magda called out. "Mom? Are you okay?" She looked to the left of the door. "Clear."
"Clear. Ben, are you here?" Jinny asked, and took a few more steps in.
"Papi, please talk to me and tell me if you're okay." Magda heard a shuffling noise in the closet, and ran to check it out. She opened the door and found her mom in there, tied up with a rope, and her nouth taped shut. "Mom!" She untied her and helped her up. "Mom, who did this to you?" she asked.
"I don't know, it was some young man. I've never seen him before!"
Magda hugged her mom, then looked at Jinny suddenly. "Ben! Where is he?" she asked, and ran back to the closet.
"Magda, he's not in there. I don't know where he is! The man had him with a gun held to his head, and then tied me up in the closet. They could be anywhere by now..."
Magda sat down suddenly against the wall. Jinny walked over to her and said, "Well, I'm not giving up. Come on, Magda, we can find him." She looked at Magda's mom. "Call the station and report this. Tell them that Inspectors Ramirez and Extead are here. Magda, let's check the rest of this place out."
Magda stood up and said, "It was Gabriel, I know it was."
"What makes you so sure?" Jinny said.
"I... I just know, okay? Trust me. All well, who cares? I just want to find Ben."
"You've found him," said a voice coming from the bedroom. Magda slowly walks towards the coice with her gun pointed at the door.
"Come out, or I'll shoot!"
"Well, that wouldn't be smart, considering I have Ben right here beside me, now would it?"

Ok, more tomorrow!

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My mind is like lightning: one brilliant flash, then it's gone.

If you have two legs, run; if you have one leg, hop; if you have no legs, fly.

~*Danielle*~

OMG, even though I know what's gonna happen, I think we deserve more! Gosh, that was sooo embarassing.

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Oooh, more please!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

MORE PLEASE!

Sooooo sorry, y'all. Do y'all mind if I post more tommorow, cuz I wanna post two chapters at a time. I have the third written, but the fourth has a really good cliffhanger, the way I'm planning it. ko? kk. <3 ya lotz!

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My mind is like lightning: one brilliant flash, then it's gone.

If you have two legs, run; if you have one leg, hop; if you have no legs, fly.

~*Danielle*~

Can't wait for the thing that you told me about that I'm not posed to tell ne1 about, so post more soon so u can get to the thing sooner!

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Teddy: Jinny, what are you doing?
Jinny: What am I doing? (louder) What am I doing? I'm having a drink! This is a party, is it not?

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Teddy's Dad: So, what about you, Jinny? Please, uh, tell us about some of your cases. The one's you're on. Please.
Jinny: (nods) Well, we just finished one where we nailed this step-father for abusing his step-daughter... yeah. She was three and a half.
Teddy's Dad: Oh, no! That's awful. You know, you can't pick up the--
Jinny: Then there's the one where... wait, we got one pending now, I'm telling you... okay, okay, you with me? So, the guy, he calls 911, okay? He says he's just killed his wife.
Teddy: All right...
Jinny: We can't find the body... Till we look in the refrigerator.
Teddy: Okay... hey, Jinny...
Jinny: Very neatly carved.
Teddy's Dad: Hmm...
Jinny: Mm-hmm.

I've combined the third and fourth chapters because both of them are pretty boring anyway, so don't hate me if this seems rushed and stupid. Oh, and if Gabriel seems mean, sorry about that, it's just the way I wrote him. I, like, really didn't know what to do with this chapter, so plz bear with me, k? kk.

Chapter Three

Chapter Three

"Please, Gabriel, just let him go!"
"Magda, he's my son too! Face it, I'm getting at least one member of my family back, if not both. Magda, it's you or him."
Magda stared at the door with a blank expression on her face. "Gabriel, open the door. Just let me see my son." She looked at the door and waited for it to open.
"Magda, what if he doesn't open the door?" Jinny whispered.
"He will," Magda said. "I know him, he will."
After she said that, the door opened slowly. Gabriel walked out, holding Ben's hand. "Looking for our son?"
"Gabriel, he's mine, not yours. He never was your son! Face it, you're holding on to something you never had. It's useless!" Magda said, in a feeble attempt to convince him to let her have her son back.
"Well," Gabriel said, with a sly smile on his face, "maybe he wasn't mine then, but he's mine now."
Just then, Ben twisted his father's hand and got free of his grasp. "Mom," he yelled, "help me!"
Magda ran towards him, only to have Gabriel grab him back. "Now, you don't want me to hurt him, do you?"
"Gabriel, earlier you said it was me or him." Magda took a step closer. "Take me."
"Magda... are you sure?" Gabriel said in disbelief. "Do you really love him that much?"
"I.. I..." she studdered. "Yes, I do," she said firmly.
Jinny stepped forward. "Gabriel, I think that you should let Magda and Ben go, maybe you can work something out."
Gabriel looked at her in disgust. "Who are you? And why are you butting into mine and Magda's business?"
That pushed Magda over the edge. "Gabriel, it's not your business!" she yelled. "What the h*** do you think your doing, coming here and taking my son?" She walked up to him with anger in her eyes. Gabriel pulled Ben closer to him. "Gabriel," she said, almost calmly, "if you don't let him go..." She took a deep breath. "I just might have to use this," she said, holding up her gun.
"Mag... Magda, don't..." Gabriel said, a little nervous. "I'll let Ben go."
"Let him go now." Gabriel hesitated, not wanting to give up his chance for a family. "Let him go!"
Gabriel quickly released his grip on Ben, pulled out a gun, and shot blindly.
"Hey!" The shot hit Jinny, who was thrown back into Magda's mom, who was standing by the door silently witnessing it all.
"Jinny!" Magda yelled. She grabbed Ben's hand and started to run towards Jinny, but Gabriel grabbed her first. He started to drag Magda into the bedroom. Ben was being dragged along with her, as he wouldn't let go of her hand. "Ben, let go!"
"But mom, he has you!" Ben yelled, torn between safety and his mom.
"Ben," Magda said with tears in her eyes, "let go."
Ben let go, and Gabriel drug her into the bedroom.

Okay, next two chapters will be really good, I promise. I already have the fifth one written, just need to do the fourth.

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My mind is like lightning: one brilliant flash, then it's gone.

If you have two legs, run; if you have one leg, hop; if you have no legs, fly.

~*Danielle*~

(Eeeeevvvviiilll laugh.) Chapter 5... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Can't wait. Is that where the thing that I'm not posed to tell ne1 bout happens?

:::smirks::: yup! But it's not what a lot of y'all are probably thinking.

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My mind is like lightning: one brilliant flash, then it's gone.

If you have two legs, run; if you have one leg, hop; if you have no legs, fly.

~*Danielle*~

Kewl... Can't wait!

u gonna post it tonight? this fanfic is REALLY good!



[This message has been edited by Wisupastar (edited 06-12-2001).]

I'm gonna try! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif Can you tell I'm just posting little things so I can get to 600 posts today? hah! I shall succeed!

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My mind is like lightning: one brilliant flash, then it's gone.

If you have two legs, run; if you have one leg, hop; if you have no legs, fly.

~*Danielle*~

I'm sure you will.

Post it soon PLEASE!

I just got back from bball camp, it's from 8:30 to 1:00 central time, and my mom took over the computer for about thirty minutes. We're kind o late, cuz we went to Sonic. (Yeah!) Gonna check my poetry page, the boards, and start writing! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif Hey, I just checked, and this is 600! YEAH!!! And, at bball camp, we won both of our games, including one that has almost all AAU members. I'm in a good mood!

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My mind is like lightning: one brilliant flash, then it's gone.

If you have two legs, run; if you have one leg, hop; if you have no legs, fly.

http://www.std.com/bfvf/festival/2001/images/big/bdinerchicaonphoneweb.jpg

~*Danielle*~

[This message has been edited by BlairW_1 (edited 06-13-2001).]

girl..u play bball?..i do too. if you wanna talk sometime, my e-mail is megsin_10@hotmail.com
same for msn msger

icq# 114554028

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-Wisupastar a.k.a. $PeeMoney$

Yall know who that guy is?

It's Ben's daddy....

http://bluediner.com/images/tande.jpg

MORE!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

Y'all, I couldn't post yesterday, cuz my computer was messin' up, but I'm posting now, even though it is stupid and short. I'm tryin to practice 5-phase ball handling so I can be first in the contest tomorrow at basketball camp. Wish me luck, 'cuz I'll need it on full figure eights!

Chapter Four

Back at the division, Captain Kate McCafferty was getting ready to assign a new case to Angela and CD. As she was walking out the door, her phone rang. Che answered it. "Captain Kate McCafferty." After a few moments, her face turned pale, and her mouth opened slightly. "Umm... Yes, thank you. I'll send someone out there now... Yes... Okay." She hung up the phone. She slowly walked out to Angela and CD's desk, with a calm-ish look on her face. "Angela, CD, you have a new case." She paused.
"Are you waiting for a drumroll?" CD asked jokingly.
"No, I'm just..." Kate took a deep breath. "The main office just called. They said that they got a call from Magda's mom saying that Ben Ramirez is being held hostage, and Magda and Jinny are trying free him... You guys want to go out there?"
They both stood up. "What's the address? Is it Magda's house?" CD asked.
"Yes," Kate said, "and you'd better hurry there. The call was placed fifteen minutes ago, who knows what could have happened by now."
"Right," Angela said, and they strapped on their guns and left.

Stupid, I know, but I'm just trying to get up to the part I've already written. It's not gonna be chapter 5, which I know I said it would be, but y'all don't have all the information about this case yet, so it can't be. T2YL!

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My mind is like lightning: one brilliant flash, then it's gone.

If you have two legs, run; if you have one leg, hop; if you have no legs, fly.

http://www.std.com/bfvf/festival/2001/images/big/bdinerchicaonphoneweb.jpg

~*Danielle*~

I LOVE THIS!!! And that's okay, it's not stupid.

keep it up girl...this is great

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-Wisupastar a.k.a. $PeeMoney$

Yall know who that guy is?

It's Ben's daddy....

http://bluediner.com/images/tande.jpg

its GRRRRRRRRRRRREAT!!!!!!

Thank you, Mrs. Tony the Tiger! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif I gotta keep this short, the electricity's going out a lot. More ASAP!

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My mind is like lightning: one brilliant flash, then it's gone.

If you have two legs, run; if you have one leg, hop; if you have no legs, fly.

http://www.std.com/bfvf/festival/2001/images/big/bdinerchicaonphoneweb.jpg

~*Danielle*~

Originally posted by BlairW_1:
the electricity's going out a lot. More ASAP!



You too;o)

I love it post more soon.I know Jinny got shot Is she all right Come on post
some more.Please


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Jinny:This Is Who I am.

*YeeHaw!*

The good thing is... I know what's going to happen. The bad thing... I can't tel you and it's driving me insane! But, they're right, D, you gotta post more the second you can, ko?

Okay, this is still Chapter Four.

Jinny tried to get up, but couldn't, as the pain was excrusiating. She rolled over onto her right side and started to feel light-headed. The last thing she saw before she blacked out was Magda being dragged into the bedroom by Gabriel.

By the time Angela and CD got there, everything was chaos. Ben was in the corner, crying, and Magda's mom was torn between taking care of Jinny or trying to help Magda. "SFPD!" CD yelled. She sees Jinny on the ground and pulls out her radio/walkie talkie. "Officer down, we have an officer down!" All she could hope was that the ambulance wasn't much slower than they were.
Angela ran up to Magda's mom. "Where's Magda?"
Magda's mom looked down. "She's in the bedroom with that man," she said softly.
"It's my father, Gabriel," Ben said, sniffing. "I've met him once, he's really nice... I don't know why he'd do this!" Magda's mom walked over there to comfort him.
CD grabbed Angela's shoulder. "You go in there, I'll take care of Jinny."
"But CD, shouldn't I help you with Jinny?"
"Hey, do what I say! I've done a lot more of these calls than you have, so you'd better listen to me unless you want to get your head blown off like Jinny!" she yelled, and looked at Magda's mom apologetically. "Um, try and stop Jinny's bleeding, could you? Angela, I'm sorry for yelling at you, but I'm... How else are you going to learn if you never go in there? I'll be right here helping Jinny."
"Okay, I guess. You know first aid, right?"
"Yeah, sure, Angela. Go save Magda," she said with a smile on her face.
Angela smiled back and carefully walked up to the side of the door. "SFPD, open up!" The door stayed closed. "One last time, open up!" She kicked the door down and found Gabriel tying Magda up with clothes. His gun was lying and the bed beside them. "Gabriel, please. Let her go, or I'll have to shoot." Angela held up her gun. "Gabriel, this is your last chance. We have backup on the way, you're going to have to give her up sometime."
He looked Angela straight in the eye. "This might be the last time I'm ever going to see her, I just want to spend a little time talking to her. I'm not going to hurt her or do anything like that, I just want a little time to show her I'm not a bad guy." He put his arm around her shoulders, and Magda elbowed him. "See? A bad guy would have done something like..." He picked up his gun and pointed it at Angela. "this." He pulled the trigger, but it didn't go off. "See? No ammunition in there right now. I'm not really a bad guy. If I was, I would load the gun. Well, you can't say I'm perfectly innocent, either. I mean, would your normal, average guy have a-" he pulled out a knife, "knife? Nope, wouldn't see that happening! You wanna know why I might not see Magda for a long time?" Angela's expression remained blank, and her gun stayed trained on Gabriel. "Mental institution. They say that I'm unbalanced, and they're right! I'm not whole without Magda, I never will be." Sirens started going off in the distance.
"See? That's our backup, not to mention an ambulance for Jinny. Just give up, please! This isn't going anywhere!"
Magda spoke up for the first time. "Angela, go out there and help Jinny. I'll be fine in here."
"But-"
"Really, I will. Gabriel will let me go after he's done talking to me, won't you Gabriel?" Magda looked at Angela with a just go along with what I'm saying look.
"Of course I will, don't worry. If you cooperate, I won't hurt you. Now, Angela, will you please remove thineself from this premises?"
"Sure thing. But you hurt Magda, I'll be back here to blow your head off faster than you can say assault of a police officer! We'll all be waiting out there. Magda, are you okay with this? Because we can get you out, if you want."
"I'm sure, Ang. But tell me if you hear anything about Jinny, okay?"
"Sure." Angela walked out the door, confusion in her mind, but with faith in Magda.

Chapter Five

As Angela walked out the door without Magda or Gabriel, CD looked up at her with suprise. "Where's Magda? Don't tell me that you can't get her out! Let me go in there."
"No, CD, it's not like that! Magda wanted to stay with Gabriel, the doctors say he's mentally unbalanced His gun was unloaded, but... CD, did I do the right thing?"
"The h*** you didn't! Now, come on, Jinny's on her way to the hospital, Ben and his grandma are in the ambulance with her, and Magda's in there with some psyco, so let's go get her out, okay? Okay." She grabs Angela's arm and pulls her into the room with her gun drawn. "Okay, Gabriel, we need you to let go of Magda, now!"
"But CD..." Angela said nervously.
"You said his gun wasn't loaded!"
Gabriel pulled out the knife. "But let me guess. You didn't tell her about the gun, did you, Angela? Nope, didn't think so. You see, Magda doesn't care to stay with me, do ya, hun?"
"Uh, no, you guys, let me stay here," she said a little nervously, but firmly. She swallowed, her fearful eyes trained on Gabriel's knife positioned at her throat. "Gabriel and I have a lot of making up to do... If you know what I mean..." She hoped that she said the right thing, because she knew her life depended on it.
CD kept her gun trained on Gabriel. "Gabriel, put down the knife."
"But CD!" Angela said, "She just said to leave her in there, do you want Magda to wind up getting killed?"
Gabriel lowered the knife to Magda's wrists. "One little cut..."

At the hospital, Kate, Teddy, and Casey were waiting for news on Jinny's injury. Attempting to make small talk, just to pass the time, Teddy asked Casey, "Um, where's John Jr. and Sr.?"
"Oh, Dad was too sick to come, and John... he didn't want to come, really. I think he really cares about Jinny, but he thinks he'll look weak if he shows it. And I don't think he wanted to spend time with me, either."
"Don't worry, Casey, he's just hard-headed. Oh, look, there's a doctor, maybe he-"
"Extead?" The doctor asked.
Kate stood up. "Yes, how is she?"
"Well, she's doing really good for someone in her condition. Very good."
"What happened, exactly?"
"She was shot in the left shoulder, a flesh wound, but just barely missing the bone."
Kate sat back down, a wave of relief flooding her. "I knew Jinny would get herself in serious trouble someday," she said, not wanting them to know how much she was really worried about Jinny. "Doctor, can we see her yet, I really have to get back to the station."
"Yes, go right ahead. She's right there," he said, and pointed to the door he had just come out of.
"Yes, thank you." They all walked into the room. They see Jinny lying back in her bed, her arm in a sling.
"Jinny, am I glad to see you're okay!" Teddy said, and walked up and hugged her carefully, not wanting to hurt her arm.
Jinny scoffed. "Don't be so sure I'm okay, this hurts worse than everything that's ever happened to me before!"
"That's probably true," Kate said, "flesh wounds do hurt a lot worse."
"How long are you going to have to wear the sling?" Casey asked.
"Well, for about three days, then I can just get along with it being bandaged; the pain will keep me from moving it too much. Captain, how's the situation at Magda's house?"
"CD and Angela aren't back yet, they haven't even tried to contact me."
Kate's radio clicked, and Angela's panicked voice came over the radio.. "We need backup, officer held hostage! Please, she's being threatened!" The radio fuzzed, and then came back again. "mentally ill-" The radio clicked off, then, "Hey, this is just a prank call. Inspector Ramirez's husband here, everything is just fine. You know, maybe Inspector Reide should have stayed off the streets for a while longer, her mind is still a little frazzled from the cold-hearted murder she commited a few weeks ago. So, you can ignore this message."
Kate looked at Jinny and saw the disgust in her eyes. "Jinny? What do you say?"
"Bye, have a nice time catching a cop assaulter!" Jinny said with mock enthusiasm.
"Bye everyone, sorry to leave so soon, but Magda needs help."
"Fine with us, right Teddy?"
"Right. Jinny?"
Kate had left before Jinny could answer. "Good riddance," she mumbled under her breath.

Okay, lame, but still, I'm writing, I have a sister, who cares?


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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers... Boy, I bet they tasted awful!

I'm a blonde babe that can beat boys at basketball, no prob!

~*Danielle*~
<3 y'all!

I care! We're coming to see her soon! I'll bet she looks just like you! Anyway, hurry up and post that one part that I can't tell NE1 about!

Kenzie, I know you replied, I just can't see it now. I'll read it later, if I can.

Chapter Six

At Magda's house, things weren't progressing very much. Two more cops were there, and they were all posted outside Magda's door, which was temporarily up thanks to Gabriel. They couldn't act, because of the conflict in Magda's wishes, and their instincts. Sometimes they heard a little yelling, sometimes calm talking, and other times, silence. CD didn't want to know what the silence was hiding, and neither did Angela. After one hour of waiting for a sign from Magda that things were getting uncomfortable in there, they heard another car pull up. In walked the Captain, and she took over.
"Okay, CD, give me a briefing. And why are all of you standing outside the door?"
"Um, Captain, Gabriel has her hostage in there. We could get her out if we tried, but not without risking her life. And, she said she wanted to stay in there, but I think that was for Gabriel's sake. He said the doctors call him 'mentally unbalanced,'" she said cautiously.
"Oh, well, you did the right thing, I guess. And-"
"He went at Angela with a knife when she tried to talk to you on the radio."
"That changes it, okay, everyone get ready to go in there," she said quietly. "We're going to bust in there, we want to catch him off guard. DeLorenzo, Reide, you're in charge of getting Magda out of there, Carter and Mendoza, you create a distraction. I'll be with CD and Angela. Is everything clear? Good," she said without waiting for an answer, "let's move."
They knocked down the door with ease, and found Gabriel and Magda kissing. Magda looked up and ran towards CD and Angela as well as she could tied up. Gabriel yelled, "What the-" and was cut off by Carter and Mendoza grabbing his arms.
Suddenly, Magda tripped over the gun that he had thrown down. She scrambled to get back up, but her ankle was twisted. She fought off the pain, and ran to safety. When she got outside, she collapsed into the seat of her car, grimacing. CD walked up and sat down beside her.
"Hey, Mag, ya okay?"
"Yeah, my ankle feels like crap, though. CD?"
"Yeah?"
"How's Jinny? She tried to save me too, you know. As a matter of fact, I owe my life to all of you..."
CD smiled. "We know. And don't think we're gonna let you forget it, either!"
"You know, I'm glad this chapter of my life is over now. I kind of wanted Ben to have a dad, but... not him. He's not really unbalanced, he just said that to make you a little more nervous. He's perfectly all right in the head. Well, as all right as someone who tried to hold a cop hostage." She started to laugh a little.
"What?" CD said, clearly confused, and Magda laughed even more. "Tell me! I really don't know what you're talking about."
"It's just... Think about how impossible it would be to do something like that to a cop! I mean, the odds were against him the whole time."
"But think, he almost succeeded..."
Magda calmed down a little and said, "But he wouldn't, not with friends like you guys. CD, can you drive me to see Jinny?"
"Sure. Oh, here's the Cap, one sec." She rolled down the window. "Yes ma'am, Inspectors CD Delorenzo and Magda Ramirez at your service!"
"We have a little problem. Our two Inspectors over there just happened to let Gabriel get away. CD, drive Magda to the hospital to get that ankle looked at, that was a bad fall you took. Oh, Magda? You're on desk duty until he's captured, you got that?"
"Sure, but couldn't I-"
"No, you cannot help find him, you got that?"
"Yes. Can I stay with Jinny a little while after I go to the doctor?" she asked, doubting she could.
"Take the rest of the day off, you need a little time to calm down. But you're going to be making up for it later, okay?"
"Okay," she said suprisedly.
"CD, will you need a ride back from the hospital?"
"Probably."
"Casey or Theodore might take you, ask them. Okay, any questions?"
"I guess not. Bye, Captain.
"Bye," she said, sighing.

t2yl! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif


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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers... Boy, I bet they tasted awful!

I'm a blonde babe that can beat boys at basketball, no prob!

~*Danielle*~
<3 y'all!

Keep on posting. This story is awesome.

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"If you pinch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

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I have to repost some parts; I didn't mean to put Teddy dearest in there. Do y'all mind? hope not...

At the hospital, Kate, John, and Casey were waiting for news on Jinny's injury. Casey was a little nervous about being there with John, but knew he probably wouldn't try to pull anything in the hospital. "Well, I guess- Oh, look, there's a doctor, maybe he-"
"Extead?" The doctor asked.
Kate stood up. "Yes, how is she?"
"Well, she's doing really good for someone in her condition. Very good."
"What happened, exactly?"
"She was shot in the left shoulder, a flesh wound, but just barely missing the bone."
Kate sat back down, a wave of relief flooding her. "I knew Jinny would get herself in serious trouble someday," she said, not wanting them to know how much she was really worried about Jinny. "Doctor, can we see her yet, I really have to get back to the station."
"Yes, go right ahead. She's right there," he said, and pointed to the door he had just come out of.
"Yes, thank you." They all walked into the room. They see Jinny lying back in her bed, her arm in a sling.
"Jinny, am I glad to see you're okay!" Casey said, and walked up and hugged her carefully, not wanting to hurt her arm.
Jinny scoffed. "Don't be so sure I'm okay, this hurts worse than everything that's ever happened to me before!"
"That's probably true," Kate said, "flesh wounds do hurt a lot worse."
"How long are you going to have to wear the sling?" Casey asked.
"Well, for about three days, then I can just get along with it being bandaged; the pain will keep me from moving it too much. Captain, how's the situation at Magda's house?"
"CD and Angela aren't back yet, they haven't even tried to contact me."
Kate's radio clicked, and Angela's panicked voice came over the radio.. "We need backup, officer held hostage! Please, she's being threatened!" The radio fuzzed, and then came back again. "mentally ill-" The radio clicked off, then, "Hey, this is just a prank call. Inspector Ramirez's husband here, everything is just fine. You know, maybe Inspector Reide should have stayed off the streets for a while longer, her mind is still a little frazzled from the cold-hearted murder she commited a few weeks ago. So, you can ignore this message."
Kate looked at Jinny and saw the disgust in her eyes. "Jinny? What do you say?"
"Bye, have a nice time catching a cop assaulter!" Jinny said with mock enthusiasm.
"Bye everyone, sorry to leave so soon, but Magda needs help."
"Fine with us, right John?"
"Whatever, Jinny's the one laying here. What do you say?"
Kate had left before Jinny could answer. "Good riddance," she mumbled under her breath.

And here's part of Chapter Seven

Chapter Seven

Later in the day, after Casey and John had left, Jinny was sitting in her room thinking about Teddy. She remembered how everything was just fine, until she had to ruin it by becoming drunk at Teddy's birthday party in front of his parents and closest friends. "I used to be one of his closest friends..." she said, and tears slowly started rolling down her cheeks.
A doctor peeked in Jinny's door. "Can I check your blood pressure?"
She quickly rubbed her eyes. "Why do you always come in at the worst times? Do you have the room bugged or something so you know when to come in, or do you just have an amazing ability of annoying people that are unfortunate enough to be stuck in a place full of people who are just as bad as you?" she yelled.
"Sorry..."
"That's okay, I know you can't help it. Hey, when am I gonna get to leave?" she said, while he strapped on her monitor.
"Well, I don't see why you couldn't leave after this, if everything is going okay. Are you ready to leave?" he said
"Yeah, well, one of my friends is being held hostage right now, I think I'd better go out and check on her ASAP."
"Oh, really? Well, we'd better get you out of here, then!" he said, not believing her, but unsuccessfully trying to hide it. "Well, looks like you're normal, you can check out whenever you're ready. Now," he said, handing her some papers, "here's your papers, you need to sign here," he said, "and give this to the desk when you want to sign out. Here's your prescription for pain pills; you can't drink alchohol or use tobacco when you take these, your pharmacist will go over all the side affects. You're going to have to check back with us in about two weeks so we can see how your shoulder is healing; you can make an appointment at the desk. Any questions?"
"No, I guess not. Do you have a pen I can use?"
"Yeah, sure." He handed her a pen.
"Thanks." She took the pen and signed the papers without even reading them. "Here you go, am I ready to check out now?"
He sighed. "I suppose, if you think you are."
"Great, now all I have to do is go and give them these papers." She stood up and almost fell over. "Whoa, I guess my legs are asleep from sitting down for too long. Well, buh-bye!" she said in a valley girl accent , smiled, and walked out the door. When she was out of his sight, she sighed and rolled her eyes. "That guy needs to get off it!" she mumbled, and walked up to the desk to sign out.

Y'all, my mind is like, soooooo tired right now, cuz Miss Alexz here is spitting up like crazy, so don't kill me if my story sucks eggs, k? Thanx y'all!



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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers... Boy, I bet they tasted awful!

I'm a blonde babe that can beat boys at basketball, no prob!

~*Danielle*~
<3 y'all!

Well... I started somethin! Say hi to Alexz for me and tell her that I'm bringing her a present soon! Aw...

This is gr8 so far! I love it. I am really sad though cuz I just found out that the guy who played Archie Bunker on "All In The Family" just died. :-( It may not be a big deal to alot of people out there, but to Nick At Nite fans like myself, it's devastating!

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"If you pinch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

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Awww, how sad! Y'all, listen to this... It might not work, in fact, I bet it won't, but copy and paste the link and listen to it.

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers... Boy, I bet they tasted awful!

I'm a blonde babe that can beat boys at basketball, no prob!

~*Danielle*~
<3 y'all!