Ok, this is my second Division Fan-Fic. I'm not sure if NancyJoJinny was planiing to team up with me to write this but if she does then this script belongs to both of us. So here goes.....Oh ya let's say that this story took place befor Jinny met Teddy.

Anchorside Bar one night at about 11 P.M.

(Jinny is quietly sipping like her 100th drink, well not quite but she's had alot)
Jinny: Bartender! How bout another one.
Bartender: I think you've had enough lady. No More!
Jinny: Oh come on. Just one more, please?

(Just then a dark haired man came up from behind Jinny.)

Guy: Hey, I know where you can get more to drink. Come with me.
Jinny: (smiles) OK. (she grabs her jacket and leaves with out paying her bill.)
Bartender: (yells to the guy at the casheir) Hey Dave, add another $40 to Ms. Exstead's tab!

(Later Jinny and the "Guy" get out of his car infront of an apartment building.)

Guy: Well this is my place. Wanna come in for a beer?
Jinny: Ya sure. (This guy is pretty good looking she thinks)

Next Morning:

(Jinny wakes up to see her "mystery man" sleeping next to her and she smiles.)
Jinny: I like this guy. *she says quietly to herself)
Guy: (wakes up and sees Jinny staring at him) Hey.
Jinny: Good morning. What time is it?
Guy: Umm.. it's 8:45 (he looks at his watch)
Jinny: Oh S*** I gotta be at work at 9:15.
Guy: Don't worry I'll drive you.
Jinny: (she jumps out of bed and starts to get dress ed) Thanks.

OK please read+respond

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

oooh... write more! it's good.. i like it http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

~*~jenn~*~

Write more!!! This is good!!!

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Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point.

Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

Jinny: Here comes the other shoe.

Jinny: I can coddle.

Jinny: Three eggs scrambled soft not runny, hashbrowns crispy not hard, rye bread lightly toasted not burned, butter on the side, and don't forget the jalepeno's, extra hot if you have any.

Jinny: Cause you're buck naked my friend! Alright Teddy, just how nervous are you?

Jinny: You're a peach.

Wanna talk about Nancy? E-mail or IM me at NancyMcKeonRox@aol.com.

Visit my website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

Nancy's a very cool lady! She's even cooler than the real Slim Shady. She's a bad ass chick who's tough as can be. That's why she's cool -- It's plain to see.

Personal Quote: All mean people suck except for me, NancyJoJinny, Adele, and Joanna Marie_1.

I read the preview, this look like ti could be a soap! As the Division Churns! Do you like it? http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif Great story, write more before Sunday!

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My mind is like lightning: one brilliant flash, then it's gone.

~*Danielle*~

Ill team up!

***At the division, guy drove her there***

Jinny: Guys, wanna go get some lunch?
CD: Pauls gonna drop by and pick me up for lunch.
Jinny: Alright.
Magda: Yeah, lets go... Im starved...
Angela: Well, i havent eaten breakfast in like 10 years, come on...

***Anchorside***

CD: *Comes in with paul and sits at other side off room and Jinny sees them*
Jinny: I thought she was going with paul.
Magda: That is paul.
Jinny: O..... Wait... thats paul?????
Angela: Yeah why??
Jinny: Oh god... CD's gonna kill me... Shell never find out... What if she does!?
Magda: Find out what?
Jinny: Nothing. Find out what? *nevosely* Nothing wrong, hehe?
Magda: Whats with you? Somethings wrong... TELL ME!

Your turn... and yes i know my part sucked

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

Originally posted by NancyJoJinny:

Magda: Find out what?
Jinny: Nothing. Find out what? *nevosely* Nothing wrong, hehe?



I don't know why, but I cracked up when I read that... lmao



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Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point.

Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

Jinny: Here comes the other shoe.

Jinny: I can coddle.

Jinny: Three eggs scrambled soft not runny, hashbrowns crispy not hard, rye bread lightly toasted not burned, butter on the side, and don't forget the jalepeno's, extra hot if you have any.

Jinny: Cause you're buck naked my friend! Alright Teddy, just how nervous are you?

Jinny: You're a peach.

Wanna talk about Nancy? E-mail or IM me at NancyMcKeonRox@aol.com.

Visit my website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

Nancy's a very cool lady! She's even cooler than the real Slim Shady. She's a bad ass chick who's tough as can be. That's why she's cool -- It's plain to see.

Personal Quote: All mean people suck except for me, NancyJoJinny, Adele, and Joanna Marie_1.

A soap? well maybe. Here's a little bit more!

(The Guy went to get his car keys and as Jinny was getting dressed she bumped into the nightstant and knocked over a picture)
Jinny: Great (she bends down to pick up the picture and sees two people in it.) Hello! Who's this? (One of the people is Jinny's "friend" and the other is a women that looks like...) CD! Oh no don't tell me that I met Paul last night!
Guy: (enters room) You ready to go?
Jinny: Ya, uh who's the lady in the picture with you? (She hands the photo to the guy)
Guy: (looks at picture) Oh, she is my sister, so lets go. (Jinny can tell that he is lying but she doesn't say anything. Jinny and the guy leave his apartment)

At the Station:

Kate: Where is Exstead? I she doesn't get here soon I'm gonna..
Magda: (looks out window and sees Jinny getting out of a car) Oh Cap. she's here.
Kate: Good, as soon as she gets here send her inot my office. OK?
Magda: (still looking out the window) Ya sure.
Kate: Thanks (she walks into her office)
Magda: (she says this quietly to herself) That's Paul, CD's husband. Uh oh Jinny girl you're in big trouble now!

(Jinny gets out of the car and starts walking up the steps to the station)
Guy: (leans out off the window) Hey how bout 8 at Anchorside tonight?
Jinny: (gives him a quick kiss) Ya sure bye.

(Jinny walks into the Station and Magda pulls her aside)
Magda: Answer me this Jinny. What were you doing with CD's husband?

I'll post more later!


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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

OMG! I'm sorry Somehow I didn't see your post so you can forget what I just wrote! Sorry!

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

Again I'm sorry bout hwat I posted before I'll just add on to what you wrote so here it is...

Jinny: Magda, I don't feel to good I'll be right back (Jinny quickly runs towards the bathroom)

In Bathroom:
(Jinny looks ot see if anyone is in there, but no one is so she says outloud...)
Jinny: OMG! OMG! What am I going to do? What am I going to do? Alright, calm down. Just forget bout last night he's taken and, and, and Oh God why do I like him so much? HE'S MARRIED TO CD!! Well (sighs and says calmly) that's out of my system I better go back to Magda now.
(Jinny leaves but on her way out she bumps into Paul)
Paul: Hey!
Jinny: Uh... Hi I got to go bye.
Paul: (grabs Jinny's arm) Where you going? (He pulls her to him and he kisses her)
(Just them CD comes up looking for Paul)
CD: Oh there you are I was...(she stops when she sees Jinny and Paul, Jinny breaks off the kiss and turns her back to CD so she can't see her face) OMG! I should have known better than to get back with you. You always cheat on me! So who's this..this.. slut(she points to Jinny, Jinny turns around, CD gasps) JINNY!

OK your turn!




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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

thisis gettin juicy... hehehe. i neeeeeeed more!!!

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Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point.

Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

Jinny: Here comes the other shoe.

Jinny: I can coddle.

Jinny: Three eggs scrambled soft not runny, hashbrowns crispy not hard, rye bread lightly toasted not burned, butter on the side, and don't forget the jalepeno's, extra hot if you have any.

Jinny: Cause you're buck naked my friend! Alright Teddy, just how nervous are you?

Jinny: You're a peach.

Wanna talk about Nancy? E-mail or IM me at NancyMcKeonRox@aol.com.

Visit my website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

Nancy's a very cool lady! She's even cooler than the real Slim Shady. She's a bad ass chick who's tough as can be. That's why she's cool -- It's plain to see.

Personal Quote: All mean people suck except for me, NancyJoJinny, Adele, and Joanna Marie_1.

Jinny: CD... I swaer... I didnt know he was married too you!
CD: Liar!!!!! I know you saw us like 5 minuites ago!!
Jinny: He kissed me.... I didnt kiss him!!!!!!
CD: It looked like you were kissing him!
Paul: CD, honey, it only happened once... it meant nothing!
CD: You two had sex!?!? How dare you... Jinny, i thought you were my friend.... And paul... I hate both of you!
Jinny: U just had too tell her we slept together!
CD: So you were planning on lying too me!?!?
Jinny: Look... CD... *CD slaps her then stroms off* Wait! CD! Please!!!! Im sorry!
Paul: Now...
Jinny: Just please leave me alone? *goes back too magda*
Magda: Jinny, whats going on???
Jinny: *moans* O god... Im a terrible friend! How could i let this happen? Im such a slut.
Magda: Stop saying that... your not a slut, what happened?
Jinny: I.... Paul and me... We slept together. I really didnt know it was him... Last night... and now CD hates me... AH! I dont know what to do!!!

Your turn!



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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

Jinny: CD... I swaer... I didnt know he was married too you!
CD: Liar!!!!! I know you saw us like 5 minuites ago!!
Jinny: He kissed me.... I didnt kiss him!!!!!!
CD: It looked like you were kissing him!
Paul: CD, honey, it only happened once... it meant nothing!
CD: You two had sex!?!? How dare you... Jinny, i thought you were my friend.... And paul... I hate both of you!
Jinny: U just had too tell her we slept together!
CD: So you were planning on lying too me!?!?
Jinny: Look... CD... *CD slaps her then stroms off* Wait! CD! Please!!!! Im sorry!
Paul: Now...
Jinny: Just please leave me alone? *goes back too magda*
Magda: Jinny, whats going on???
Jinny: *moans* O god... Im a terrible friend! How could i let this happen? Im such a slut.
Magda: Stop saying that... your not a slut, what happened?
Jinny: I.... Paul and me... We slept together. I really didnt know it was him... Last night... and now CD hates me... AH! I dont know what to do!!!

Your turn!



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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

MORE!!! MORE!!!
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[This message has been edited by jinny_jo_2001 (edited 06-01-2001).]

Awesome!

Post

More

SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PPPPPPLLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEE!!!!!

Awesome! I am just loving this! Keep it up! It's great!

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Love is patient and kind, it is not jealous or conceited or proud; love is not ill-mannered or selfish or irritable; love does not keep a record of wrongs; love is not happy with evil but with the truth. Love never gives up, and its faith, hope, and patience never fail. Meanwhile these three remain: faith, hope and love, and the greatest of these is love.

Ha! I gotta say that I love this story! lol

Magda: (sitting there staring at Jinny) OMG! Jin, I speechless! No wait, OK I take that Back you are a slut!
Jinny: Believe me I know that. Mag, you gotta help me figure out what to do!
Magda: You mean I gotta suck up to CD saying that you're not all that bad at it really didn't know that he was her husband?
Jinny: Well, since you put it that way...ya.
Magda: No way Jin. Sorry to say this but you're on your own. We better be getting back to the station (Magda gets up and leaves Jinny waits a minuet then she follows her.)

Station:
(CD has been shotting Jinny dirty looks and making mean comments ever since they got back from Anchorside. Kate goes over and quietly says to Magda)
Kate: OK, Magda what's up with CD and Jinny?
Magda: Uh, trust me you don't want ot get in the middle of it.
Kate: Well, they're not working hard enough since you guys got back from lunch so I am gonna find out what's going on. CD, Jinny in my office NOW!
Magda: Good luck.

Kate's Office:
(CD and Jinny are sitting down and Kate is standing by the door.)
Kate: OK you two explain NOW!

Your Turn!

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

Ok, I thought of more to write!

CD: Well Jinny slept with my husband Paul!
Jinny: I didn't know it was him though, I swear!
Kate: (thinks for a minuet) OK I should've listened to Magda.I can't and I won't help you here. Now it's almost time for you to go home so I suggest you leave.
CD: (sarcasticly, sp?)Well Cap. thanx for your help!

Magda: Come on Jinny, it's time to leave I'll drive you home.
Jinny: Ya ok (she grunts and holds on to her stomach)
Magda: Jin, you ok?
Jinny: Ya my stomach just hurts. Well let's go(She grabs her coat and leaves and Magda follows her.)

In Magda's car:
(Magda pulls into the parking lot of a drugstore.)
Jinny: Mag, why are we here?
Magda: I just gotta pick up soemthing I'll be right back.

Later at Jinny's Apartment:

(Magda takes out what she got from the drugstore and hands it to Jinny.)
Jinny: A PREGNANCY TEST! ARE YOU SERIOUS?
Magda: Please Jin, do it for me.
Jiny: Fine. (she takes it and goes into the bathroom.)

About 15 min later:
(Jinny is still in the bathroom so Magda knocks on the door)
Magda: Jinny you ok? (she opens the door and sees Jinny sitting on the loor crying) Jinny what's up?
Jinny http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifJinny, still crying, hads the test to Magda) It's positive Mag. I'm pregnant with Paul's child. WHAT IS CD GOING TO DO TO ME?
(Jinny starts to cry harder and Magda hugs her)

OK so how was that?

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jinny's done it now!!!! MOREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!

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~*~*NMRox*~*~

Ben: Tell me a story.

Magda: Grandma's going to be here, and Jinny has to take me to work.

Jinny: Oh come on, there's always time for a quickie! How about Little Red Riding Hood?

Ben: That's for babies.

Jinny: Oh, hush up and listen. Once apon a time, there was a cop name Little Red. Little Red did patrol in the hood, which was a real funky part of town.

Ben: What's funky?

Jinny: Ummm... nasty! Anywayz, Little Red was lookin' for this real ugly dude named Big Bad Wolf, cause he was robbing elderly ladies in the park. He was stealing their social security checks!

Ben: Why?

Jinny: Can I just tell the story, please? Thank you. Okay, so one day, Little Red decides to set a trap. So she disguises herself as an elderly lady. We're talkin' cane, orthopedic shoes, everything!

Magda: Oh, Grandma's here.

Ben: Come on, Mom!

Jinny: Uh, okay. That night Little Red is walking through the park, when who should appear, but the Big Bad Wolf! "My, my" said the wolf, "what a large heavy purse you have, with lots of lovely cash! Hand it over!" "I'm ready to arrest you!" said Little Red, and instead of cash, she pulls out her 9mm service automatic!

Magda: Jinny!!!

Ben: What happens?

Magda: Little Red arrests the Big Bad Wolf and he goes to jail.

Jinny: Right!

Magda: Come on.

Jinny: But not before the Big Bad Wolf goes for his peice, luckely, Little Red was quicker and she blew the Big Bad Wolf's butt to smitherines!

Magda: Thanks a lot, Jin.

Jinny: They all lived happily ever after.

Magda: Jinny calm down...
Jinny: R u kidding? Calm down, Im pregnant with my friends husband!
Magda: What are you going too say to CD?
Jinny: I dont know i dont know!!!! GOD!! Please, why me??? How could i be so stupid?
Magda: Hey we all make mistakes... When are you going too tell her?
Jinny: I dont know... SHes nit even talkin to me now anymore anyway.
Magda: Well your gonna hafta tell her soon.
Jinny: I.... I know... I cant..
Magda: You have too... Hiding it from her will make things worse.
Jinny: Geezus.. Call her get her too the anchorside... Now, before i change my mind.

***Anchorside***

CD: *walks over and sees Jinny* Why did you call me here, too kiss and make up? Im leaveing!
Jinny: *makeing no eye-contact* I think you better hear this.
CD: What is sooooooooo important?
Jinny: CD... Im pre.... pre.... I cant say it... PREGNANT! Im pregnant and pauls the father and Im sorry but i know that doesnt matter now but i am! tHERE DID I SAY IT?
Magda: Yeah.
CD: How could this happen?
Jinny: Take a guesse.
CD: Ok so i know how this could happen... Your not keeping this baby.
Jinny: Well, since when was this your decision.
CD: Youd be a bad mother anyway... and it would ruin my marriage!
Jinny: Your marriage already sucked!!!!!
CD: How dare you...
Magda: People are stareing.
Jinny: Tough crap! Im keeping the baby your husbands the father and i dont care what happens between the 2 of you, and i dont care if you hate me all your life! Goodbye! *runs out, Magda follows her*

Your turn...

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

Great..what to write? What to write?

In Magda's Car:

(Jinny is sitting in the car crying and Magda walks out of Anchorside and joins Jiny in the car)
Jinny: I overreacted didn't I? I knew she's freak out at me and I wanted to be calm when I told her and I wasn't was I?
Magda: OK to answer both of those questions yes you overreacted and no you were not calm.
Jinny: But you know Magda, she's right. I would be a horrible mother.
Magda: Jinny don't say that. No you wouldn't be.
Jinny: Mag cut the crap. You know as well as I do she's right, my child would have a screwed up life. Oh God, I was so mean to her wasn't I? (Jinny starts to cry again) I mean all the things I said about her marriage and how I don't care about what she thinks, I can't believe I said that.
Magda: Well you were pissed off at her that's why you said that.
Jinny: Well she was pissed off at me and that's why she said all the stuff 'bout me. I don't blame her though, I'm a horrible friend.
Magda: Well Jin..(she stops talking and becomes quite)
Jinny: OK, I think I'm going to keep the baby...but,but..if she wants it she can have it.
Magda: JINNY! Wht are you talking about?
Jinny: Think Magda! It's her husband's child so it's as much hers as it is mine.
Magda: No it's not Jinny.
Jinny: YES IT IS! If she is willing to adopt it then....she can.
Magda: So, when are you going to tell her this?
Jinny: Right now. She's still in the bar isn't she? (Magda looks in the window and nods.)Well here I go.(Jinny gets out of the car and enters Anchorside.)

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

***Anchorside***

Jinny: CD?
CD: WHat now?
Jinny: You were right, id probably make a terrible mother, and if you want you can adopt the baby.
CD: I dont want kids.
Jinny: Well im keeping the baby. And if you want it you can have it. And if you dont ill try my best too give it a halfway decent life.
CD: If i dont adopt it, are you going too put it up for adoption.
Jinny: I dont know. I have too think about that. I dont know if i can.
CD: Did you tell paul yet?
Jinny: I thought i should tell you first.
CD: If you dont go tell paul now... I will.
Jinny: CD! I cant, not now! I need to think.
CD: Well think on your way there.
Jinny: Why are you being this way? Geez, im sorry, i didnt know who he was! If i did this never would have happened.
CD: I dont know if i can beleiive that, and he has as much right to know as i do.
Jinny: Fine il tell him now... And im sorry for yelling at you. *leaves*

***In car***

Jinny: Could you drive me to wherever Paul is?
Magda: Yeah. Its 5:30, hed be at home.
Jinny: Were off.
Magda: Wait, what happened in there?
Jinny: She doesnt want the Baby.
Magda: O... Ok. What are you going too do?
Jinny: I have no idea, lets just go.

***Pauls***

Jinny: Hey Paul?
Paul: Jinny! *tries too kiss her*
Jinny: No... I have too talk too you.
Paul: Oh came on.
Jinny: No! Im... Pregnant. I told CD, i offered too let her adopt, she wont. Im keeping the Baby.
Paul: Are you kidding?
Jinny: No.
Paul: Are yu sure its mine?
Jinny: Oh yes, very sure.

Your turn...

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

Paul: Wow this is great!
Jinny: (confused) HUH?
Paul: I needed someone to get me away from CD and that person was you. And know I have something that can make her go aways for ever.
Jinny: OMH! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU! YOU USED ME?
Paul: NO, Can't you see Jinny you and me are perect or eachother and once CD knows that she's gone out of our lives!
Jinny: I DON'T WANT HER OUT OF MY LIFE! She's my friend.
Paul: Oh come on Jinny. She freked otu at you when you told her about us right? (Jinny nods) She won't talk to you and if she does it's something mean right?(Jinny nods) So can't you see she hates you. Why would you want her as a friend?
Jinny: WOW! She(reffering to CD) was so right about you!
Paul: What? That I'm charming? That I'm great looking?
Jinny: No, that you are and A**H***! GOODBYE PAUL! (she starts to open the door to leave but Paul Grabs her)
Paul: What are you doing? I love you and you love me and you're not going anywhere. (he kisses her....)

Well that was ok I guess but it's your turn NOW~!~

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOER MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jinny: Paul! WHat are you doing!?!?
Paul: Comeon Jinny girl... (pulls her toward bedroom)
Jinny: Stop it! Now!
Paul: I know you love me... And i love you. (pulls her into bedroom and closes door)

***Anchorside 30 mins later***

CD: (is still there sipping on her beer, when Kate comes in)
Kate: CD?
CD: Hey cap.
Kate: You look like hell. Are you alright?
CD: No... Jinnys done it again.
Kate: Slept with paul?
CD: No... shes pregnant with pauls baby.
Kate: OMG!
CD: Yup.
Kate: Are you alright?
CD: This is going too ruin everything! My marriage... Our friendship.
Kate: You know, she didnt realize it was paul.
CD: And that makes it ok? Everybody like, wants me too forget about it! Like it never happened and for some strange reason, i cant forgive her for getting my husband too cheat on me! *Kates cell phone rings*
Kate: McCafferty?......... Is she alright? What happened?........ By who?..... OMG.... Ill be right over.
CD: What?
Kate: Your husband... Raped Jinny.
CD: He wouldnt do that!
Kate: Well he did! The babys fine, and Jinnys fine, jus a litle shoke up.
CD: How could he do that!?
Kate: I dont know.

Your turn

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

OMG U Have Got To Post more So Soon.

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*At Hospital, In waiting room*

(Magda, Angela, CD and Kate are all waiting for Jinny to be able to leave with them)
Kate: You know CD, I really hate to say this but if you think about it..Jinny sleeping around and your husband cheating, those two were bound to do something together.
(Angela and Magda are both shocked and speechless)
Magda: Captain, how can you say that?
CD: Well it is true.
Magda: CD I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU! YOU'RE STILL PISSED OFF AT HER AREN'T YOU! She didn't know that it was Paul.
CD: Ya I know but still why did it have to be MY husband?
Magda: Why did it have to be Jinny that sleeps around? Why not someone else? You better be happy that it was Jinny because if it was someone else maybe Paul would have left you and you didn't know why. If it wasn't Jinny you wouln't even know that this happened! Paul woudn't tell you himself. Jinny is so mad that she ruined your friendship. She is trying so hard to make it up to you and I know that it's hard to make up for what she did but she sure as h*** is trying.
(CD is speechless. Just then Jinny walks in the room with the doctor.)
Dr: She's all set, she can go home now.
(everyone starts to walk out the door but CD pulls Jinny aside)
CD: Jinny we need to talk.

Your Turn!


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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

*Everybody but Jin and CD leave*

Jinny: *sits down* I know.
CD: Im sorry. Im sorry for treating you the way i did. And im sorry that paul did this too you.
Jinny: DOnt be sorry for paul, you didnt know he was going too do this, and im fine, really.
CD: And... I think youll make a good mother.
Jinny: Ill try. I should be the one whos sorry. If i hadnt gotten myself drunk this never would have happened. Now that im pregnant, ill stop drinking, and hopefull stop sleeping with other womens husbands.
CD: *gigles* Apology accepted. Are you sure paul didnt hurt you?
Jinny: Oh yes, hes probably the most non-violent rapist this side of california.
CD: He doesnt like too take no for an answer.
Jinny: Yeah i noticed.
CD: Hiw about i give you a life back too your place?
Jinny: That would be nice, considering i dont have a car with me.
CD: Aight. Im going too kill paul.
Jinny: Go right ahead. hehe.

Your turn... My finger hurts

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not!

Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

I love it.More
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I'm gonna sjip into the future.

5 month later.
(Jinny is starting to look like she's pregnant and everything is ok between her and CD. Both CD and Jinny stopped "seeing" Paul but he stilled call Jinny every so often.)

At the station:

Magda: Hey Jin, you're starting to gain weight.
Jinny: Oh I know, not alot of my clothes fit anymore. (Magda laughs)
(Angela and CD walk in)
CD: hey guys.
Angela: What's up?
Jinny: Not much I..(she bends over and grabs her stomach)
Magda: Jin, you ok?
Jinny: Ya, I've just been getting pains in my stomach lately. (she grabs her stomach again.)
Magda: That's it I'm taking you to the hospital. CD, Angela tell the Captain where we're going. (CD and Angela nod)

At The hospital:

(magda is sitting in the waiting room)
DR: Exstead?
Magda: YES! How is she? What's wrong?
DR: OK, well you knew she was pregnant right? (magda nods) well she had a misscarrige.(sp?)
Magda: Does she know?
DR: Yes, if you want to see her, she's in room # 926 just down the hall.
Magda: Thank. (She starts walking down the hall.)

In Jinny's room:

Magda: Hey, How are you?
Jinny: I'm relieved. (sp? again)
Magda: HUH?
Jinny: now hopefully Paul will stop calling me.(magda laughs) And I wasn't ready to be a nother.
Magda: So do you want me to call the girls at the station?
Jinny: Ya but I wanna speak to CD.

At the Station:

(A couple of weeks after Jinny was at the hospital)

Kate: Jinn, will you run this papaer over to the DA's office?
Jinny: Uh, ya sure I guess.

At the DA's office:

(Jinny walked in but bumped into a guy.)
Guy: sorry. (he notices how pretty Jinny is) I'm Teddy.
Jinny: I'm Jinny. (she smiles) Do you know where I can drop this off? (she hold up the paper)
Teddy: I'll take it. Sat Jinny I was gonna go out and grab a bite to eat care to join me?
Jinny: Sure I guess. (God he's cute she thinks to herself)
(Jinny and Teddy walk out of the building)

~*~THE END~*~

This seemed like a good place to end the story. I hope you enjoyed reading it.
And a SPECIAL THANX TO: Dana, aka NancyJoJinny for teaming up and writng this story with me, thanx a bunch! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

AIGHT GIRL! Nice Job... now we got that other one too finish, we were the ones righting that one right? I dunno, whatever, nice job BTW

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not!

Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

So did anybody like reading this story? LOL

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

i did! i loved it soooo much1

Shocking, but good http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

I JUST LUVED IT! GREAT STORY! U GUYS SHOULD WRITE MORE, BUT I WANNA HELP!*WHINES* LOL!

~BRIDGET~


"You can take a girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl."