(CD is sleeping her bed and Paul comes into the bedroom he was sleeping on the couch and starts to go on the bed)

Paul: Hey Candy

CD: Paul stop it, we are over

(Paul starts to try to kiss her)

CD: Paul do I have to tell you time and time again we are over and you are the one who wreaked the marriage and i am not taking you back this time, you dont love me!

Paul: I do love you

Candy: How come you kept cheating on me then, i am sick of this

(Paul once again trys to kiss her)

CD: Paul get off of me!!

Paul: Candy baby how can I love you if you keep pushing me away

(CD gets up from the bed and gets a bag from the closet and is like crying is throwing close into the bag)

Paul: Candy hun where are you going?

CD: Paul its through I am going...

JO'S Girl u pick up from here

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(CD doesn't know where to go so she goes to the first and last place that u would think CD would go Jinny's place, she's asleep)
**Doorbell**
Jinny-Who could that be? (Answers the door) CD what do u want?
CD-(Trying to hide tears)Paul and I are over can I stay here tonight?
Jinny-Sure come on in oh and go ahead and cry I won't tell anyone I promise.
CD-Thanks and i'm not gonna cry.
Jinny-fine u get the couch.
CD-Thanks Jinny.

ok heres a little more

(CD goes over to the couch but theres all this crap over it and dosent look like a couch)

CD: uhh..Jinny

Jinny: what...??

CD: is there a couch under there somewhere...

(Jinny goes over to the couch and drops everything on to the floor)

CD: uhh thanks Jinny...i think...

(CD wakes up a little later and she and Jinny are already late)

CD: Jinny!! get up we are late...

Jinny: calm down, its alright to be late once in your lifetime

(CD and jinny arrive at the office)

Kate: Exstead your late, need i say again? DeLerenzo your late...

(Goes to her desk and its covered with flowers and candy)

Sry if it wasnt that intresting yet...

Oh trust me it was interesting!

CD-OK if this is from Paul UGH!!!!!!!!! Ok i'm calling him right now no better yet i'm gonna talk to him in person.
Angela-Hold it CD what are u talking about?
CD-tell the Captain i have a family emergency.
Angela-OK (CD leaves everyone looks at Jinny)Ok Jinn spill it.
Jinny-uh what do u mean spill it?
Magda-Jinny she came in w/ u, so u must know what this is about.
Jinny-I promised her i wouldn't tell i'm keeping my promise.
Angela-JINNY!!!! SPILL IT NOW!!!
Jinnt-(yelling)ANGELA SHUT-UP I"M NOT TELLING GET OVER IT!!!
Kate-what is going on out here? Where is DeLorenzo?
Angela-Jinny?
Jinny-She had a family emergency.
Magda-OK Jinny spill it.
Jinny-I don't know anything.

How is it? Ur turn.

AWESOME!!! LOl, i love how Jinnys couch is covered in Carpt...it is sooo true!!!

Magda: Come on Jinny were all friends here you can tell us...

Angela: Jinny i am her partner I have a right to know what is going on

Jinny: just forget it huh?

Magda: Jinny hun...spill it or i will tell about the time in junior high when you...

Angela: ooo I wanna hear that...

Jinny: ok she and paul got in a fight, actully they are over, and she came over to my place in the middle of the night crying..is that wht you wanted to hear?

(CD returns and Angela and Magda just stare in disbelife)

CD: so i take it as jinny told you

Angela: its ok we completely understand and we are here for you

CD: jinny i should have known better to trust you not to tell

Jinny: CD i am sry, they cornered me

(CD starts to cry a little)

CD: yea whatever just tell the captain...

Kate: tell the captain wht...

CD: that I do not feel well and i am going to take the rest of the afternoon off

Kate: CD, I have no clue what is going on in your personal life and thats your business not mine but I just want you to know that if you ever need anything just knock, you may go

(CD leaves but as soon as she leaves that office she gets to her car and slids down the side of her car and starts balling in tears)

please respond and say wht u think so far

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i am!!!! I LOVE IT SOOO MUCH!!!!!!

Jinny-There ya happy I told ya and now CD will never trust me again!
Magda-Jinny we're sorry.
Jinny-Sorry doesn't help Mag CD's having serious problems in her personel life trusts me not to tell and i spill it.
Angela-Hey it's our fault we egged you on.
Jinny-Hey Magda tell the Captain I'm sick also. I've got to go.
(Jinny walks out to the parking lot and sees CD)
Jinny-CD hey it's okay, i'm sorry i told i shouldn't of.
CD-It's okay i just don't know what to do he's a dirty rat and i don't know what to do.
Jinny-dump him. listen why don't we go back to my place.
CD-thanks Jinny.

Hey please respond.

ok sorry i havent post for a while but i have been brain dead(and still am) so sry if this is not intresting

Jinny: Hey come on CD i will drive us back to my apartment

CD: ok and Jinny, thanks a lot for everything, it really means a lot to me because it is a hard time for me

Jinny http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.giftrys to cheer her up a little) Now dont get all mushy on me, come on lets go..

(once inside Jinny's apartment they see the window is open, the same one that had the broken lock)

CD: uhh Jinny i thought you fixed...

Jinny: so did i, i guesse Teddy has to work on it again hehe (nervously laughs)

(they check around sort of to see if anything is missing... but then as they enter Jinny's bedroom they see Paul standing there waiting with a gun pointed at them)

CD: (shocked) Paul wht are you doing here and how did you find out where I was?

Paul: I am here to get back wht I love most and if she dosent love me she most die married to me...

Jinny: Paul just calm down now, you didnt anwser the questions how did you know she was here and how did you get a gun

Paul: Process of elimination and if Candy baby wasnt her when you got back well I just have to find out where she was(evil laugh) and jinny hun you should really keep those hidden guns better hid! Now CD are you coming with me or not...

CD: No Paul sry I dont want to be hurt again..

Paul: (pulls back trigger) I am sorry candy baby you dont know how much this hurts me...

OMG!!! MOERE! this is sooo good!!!!

Ok sry i've been like super busy. heres more.

Jinny-OMG!!! PAUL STOP (CD falls to the ground) Paul ur under arrest for attempted homicide u have the right to remain silent (finishes rights calls 911, then for backup, then the captain and everyone else and gets a ride w/ magda. Hospital)
Jinny-Oh i should have done something...i could've prevented this.
Kate-Oh Jinny it's not ur fault.
Jinny-Yes it is...if i would've hidden my guns better this never would've happened.
Magda-Jinn it's not ur fault it's Paul's.
Angela-Yeah How would u know that Paul would find out CD was staying at ur place.
Jinny-I've g2g someone call me when there's any news.
Magda-okay Jinn...
(later that day at jinny's house she get's a gun out of the closet...)

Ok u go...

(Jinny goes over and sits on her bed and starts to cry and starts talking out loud to herself)
J: why did I stop this, I could of stoped this!! maybe if i had hid my gun better maybe he would not have shot her...why why did it have to be CD, she was a great cop and a great person she had such a good life ahead of her more then I could say...

(goes over to the draw takes out some sleeping pills and liquior and takes a handful of sleeping pills, way to many, and swallows them with the liquior)

(next morning at the office)

Kate: Has anybody seen Jinny today?

Magda: no I havent seen her since yesterday, but it is not like her not to call in if shes not going to be here...I am worried I am going to call her

(Magda calls and no one answers)

Kate: So what happened...

Magda: no one anwsered the phone, i am going to go check it out Captain...

Kate: ok but hurry back

(Magda goes to jinny's room and sees her lying in her bed unconcious.. and calls kate)

Kate: McCafferty speaking, yes Magda shes unconsiouss ok and the paramedics are on the way...ok meet you at the hosptial

Angela: Captaoin whats with Jinny?

Kate: She is uncounious..

MMMMMMOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEE NNNNNNOOOOWWWW!

more you cant do this to mke Im dying here

Ok that was really good.

(Hospital)
Magda-Geez what's taking sooo long?
Angela-Well usually when this happens they run certain tests then do whatever treatment they have to do then tell the patients family, friends or whatever.
Kate-This is the only time i'll say this...THANK GOD FOR DANIEL!!!
Magda-I WANT NEWS NOW!
Kate-Shut-up we just have to wait for news.
Dr-Exstead
Everyone-YES!!!!
Dr-Wow big crowd! ummm well...


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god job jos girl!! ok well i just got back from baby sitting and the lil boy beat me in scrabble and monopoly so i am sorta depressed but i will continue but people please reply!!

Doctor: she over dosed on sleeping pills and had a large amount of alcohal consumed so she is going to under go surgrey and have her stomached pumped...

Kate: is she going to be alright?

Doctor: its hard to say at this point in time but when we find out something i will tell you

Kate: thank you doctor

Angela: why would jinny do something like this, she had a sorta seady job, a loving boyfriend, a hell of a partner(magda grins) and a well "intresting family"

Magda: when she left work yesterday she was still rapped up in the CD incident

Kate: has anybody found out anything on CD?

(Stops doctor to ask)

Kate: excuse me but you would happen to know anything about Candence DeLorenzo who was an officer who got shot..

Doctor: I am not sure how she is doing at the moment but she was in a coma a couple of hours ago but I will check if you would like...

(a few hours later every one is asleep and the doctor comes out)

Doctor: Exstead, DeLorenzo...


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OK wow awesome sry ur depressed.

Everybody-YES!!!!
Dr-ok Exstead first and u may want to sit down for this. Well we were unable to pump her stomach because we found a tumor about the size of the softball. I'm sorry.
Magda-OMG!
Dr-And DeLorenzo is stable.
Angela-Well what's going to happen to Exstead?
Dr-Well treatment and we'll do what we can for now. Mainly get her stable and comfortable, then maybe we can perform surgery to remove the tumor.
Kate-(Gulps) Thank-you Dr.
Dr-U may call the rest of their families now.
Magda-(Fighting back tears) Thanks.
(The dr. leaves)
Kate-Well somebody better call Jinny's dad John and Casey.

ur turn

(magda cant control her emotions any more and starts to ball in tears and slids down the wall)

Angela: hey magda hun every thing is going to work out, daniel says people have tumors and they get removed no problem...(says in uneasily)

(Casey, John, and Jinnys father show up)

C: what happened where is jinny is she all right?

Kate: not sure, she was going to have her stomach because she over dosed on sleeping pills and had a large amount of alcohal in her but they couldnt pump her stomach because they found a tumor

John: ahh hell was the slut drinking again...

Jinny's Dad: John thats enough shes ur sister, your family now start acting like it,is she going to be alright? why would she do something like this?

Magda: one of the officers was shot and she felt like she could have done something to prevent it, which she really couldnt have, but she is to stubborn to realize that and blamed it on herself..

Casey: why cant they just remove the tumor and then pump the stomach...

(everyone stares at Angela)

Angela: why are u all looking at me...

Kate: ur husbands a doctor isnt he?

Angela: and how would i know about tumors and that stuff remember i am a police officer...

(doctors come out with news)

Doctor: DeLorenzo is still in stable condition but a few of you can visit her at a time and Exstead i wish i could give you good news but her tumor is growing rapidly and if there we need to have surgrey right away to have any chance of getting it even so it is a very risky surgrey and then there still the matter of her stomach be pumped...we dont think the odds of her living are in her favor right now, i am sry...




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i love this!!! keep up the GRRRREAT work!

Kate-Thanx
(the Dr. leaves the room)
Casey-Okay explain this to me again WHY THE HELL DID JINNY DO THIS?
Angela-Okay well DeLorenzo was shot and Jinny was w/ her at the time. She thought that she should have stopped the guy who shot her. So she tried to kill herself.
Casey-Oh great and now they've found a tumor.
Magda-Yes...god Jinny's gonna die.
Kate-Don't say that Magda.
Magda-Well she probably will.
Angela-SHUT UP SHE WON"T DIE!
Kate-ANGELA U SHUT UP!
John-EVERYBODY SHUT UP!
Casey-Yeah, no body knows if Jinny's gonna die.
Kate-Well somebody should go see CD.

sry i don't have many ideas right now. SO UR TURN!! please reply

thanks for leaving me here, now i gotta get yea back(evil laugh)

Magda: Captain why dont you and Angela go see CD and I will stay here with them and wait to hear from the doctors

Kate: ok, come on Angela...

(they go to CD's room and CD is asleep)

Angela: hey CD I dont know whether you can hear me or not but please hang in there, you are an amazing cop and a hell of a partner

(CD starts to wake up but like heard everything Angela said)

CD: thanks Angela, you are too, hey captain

Captain: hey CD, how are you doing

CD: to be honest for someone who just got shot, horrible, by the way where is jinny?

(captain and angela are uneasy)

Captain: there is no easy way to say this, she attemped suicide and right now is in ER

(CD all of sudden becomes pales and get knocked out again)

Angela: CD, CD, CD!!!!!!!??? OMG Captain CALL FOR A DOCTOR NOW!!!

(scene switches back to magda and jinnys brothers and father and a doctor comes out)

Magda: any news doctor?

Doctor: she went thru surgrey fine and had her stomached pumped but she currently is in a coma, whether she will stay in it or not we are not certain....

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Oh do i hate u!!!! sry i don't know what to write!

Magda-Thank-u.
(A dr. runs into CD's room while Cap. and Angela get out of there)
Magda-OMG what happened?
Kate-Uh we told her about Jinny.
Magda-Nice, by the way she's in a coma, they don't know if she'll make it. (Magda fights back tears) God I hope she's alright.
Casey-So do I.
(a Dr. comes out)
Dr-DeLorenzo,
Angela, Kate, and Magda-YES@@
Dr-Well she's fine, also awake so people can go see her now.
Kate-Thanx.
Magda-I'm gonna go, I want to say hi.
Kate-Sure.
(CD's room)
Magda-CD
CD-Hey, how r u doing?
Magda-Fine u?
CD-Uh pretty good for just being shot and finding out my friend tried to, to, to,
Magda-Don't say it CD.
CD-Uh good idea.
Magda-I'm gonna go.

UR turn...nottin really happened sry.

haha told you i would get ya back! Sry it took me a while to respond i just have had a lot of lacrosse lately(still undeafeated http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif ) and also i wrote it up but then my computer went all weird and shut down so here i go again...

(this is after magda leaves kate and angela are still with cd)
K: hey cd dont get all depressed over what jinny did, she is going to be fine and we told her it wasnt her fault and not to feel gulty but shes so stubburn that she wouldnt listen, but shes going to be alright..and u just worry bout yourself and come back to work soon, when a cop as good as you is out it really hurts the division so get better soon!
A: hey cd get better soon, i miss you so come back soon, even though u will be on desk duty hurry up hun(trying to get cd to smile a little)your best partner and i couldnt ask for a better one!
(magda gets back to jinnys family and sees all their blank expressions)
M: whats going on she isnt, is she?
John: no
M: then what happ-
Casey: they are putting her onlife support
M: OMG...

Grrrrrrreat job! keep it up!!

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Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

Okay I HATE U AGAIN!!!!!! sry but I don't know what to write!

(Angela and Kate get back from seeing CD, see Magda crying and everybody else with blank looks on their faces.)
kate: she's not (gulps) dead is she?
casey: no they are putting her on life support.
angela: omg, is she gonna be okay?
casey: who knows.
JD: Listen I'm gonna leave I need sleep, somebody call if there's any news.
john: yeah sure.
Dr; exstead
Magda; huh?
dr; well she is going to be kept under close observation somebody can go see her now, I reccomend two at a time at the most.
magda; i'm going.
casey: so am i.
(Jinny's room)(magda looks at her and fights back tears, same with casey.)

okay ur turn.

sry it took so long to respond once again i was delayed because of lacrosse, but we are still undeafeated and just won some tournment http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif but anyways heres more

Casey: come on' jinny, you have always been one of the toughest and stubbornest person i knew, so be stubborn, dont let take away your life, come wake up!(crying hard)

Magda: hey jinny girl, hows it going, well stupid question, are a darn good cop and whats a girl like me to with out such an "intresting", "fun" and amazing partner like you?

(they exit captain comes in)

Kate: well jinny, i know we have our differences and disagree on about everything, but if i knew you werent a great cop, you wouldnt be on my squad, you are an amazing cop, friend, sister, and partner and make everyone happy get well soon, and dont worry about CD, she is fine...

(later that night after everyone has left CD goes into jinnys room)

CD: hey jinny, i know u can hear me so i am going to talk...well ever since i met you, back in the days before you were preventing trouble, when you were causing it, haha come on jin u know wht i mean, i never thought i would be here with you, but i gusse it comes with the territory of being a cop, jinny as you friend, and fellow officer, please get better...



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Jinny: See I know people too, dont screw with me

~*~*~Go Red Soxs~*~*~

OMG!! U responded!!!! okay well i'm in the hospital and I LUV MY LAPTOP!!! okay sry meds makin me this way! but I'm meetin alaina so I'll post more on this latr.

Oh and if there's a part of this by Hug-A-Tree that's me too!! okay well i use both names.

Okay I can't sleep 'cause of the stupid meds sooo here's more!!!!

(Jinny starts to move a little bit)
CD: Jinny?? Jinny?
(Jinny moves around and opens her eyes, CD goes and gets a doctor)

Okay well alaina just got online and she really really needs to talk sooo I'll do this latr.



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