Hey guys here is hopefully a good fan fic.
Let me know when to stop and if it is good or not.

BY THE WAY TEDDY IS IN IT!!


STATION
Magda-(says as Jinny walks in) Hi.
Jinny- Yea, whatever.
M-Whats wrong?
J-Nothin. Just lave me alone.
M-Somethin is wrong.
(Kate is standing near by)
J-Come in the bathroom and i will tell you.
(They go in the bathroom)
M-Yea so whats wrong?
J-Me and Teddy had a big fight last night. He was going to stay there for the night and my brother called to see what i was doin.
M-Yea.
J-Teddy heard a guys voice and went balistic(sp)! I tied to tell him and when i finally got that in between all his yelling i just was so mad i told hime to leave and well he did.
M-Did he call.
J- Well that is the bad thing. He never said a word as he left and never called. You think i should call him? I am sure not appologizing!
M-you have nothin to say your sorry about.

WHAT SO YOU GUYS THINK? SHOULD I POST MORE??
TELL THE TRUTH CAUSE I DONT WANT TO WRITE MORE IF IT IS NO GOOD. I WOULD WRITE MORE BUT MY HANDS ARE KILLING ME!!!


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nancysbiggestfan

Nancy and Jo and Jinny
Rules!!

For He sent his only begotten Son that whosoever that believeth on Him might have eternal life.
John 3:16

I LUV IT!!!!! i have learned to like Teddy!

Hey I LUV IT! Keep writing! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

Okay here we go.

M-You have nothin to say your sorry about.\
J-Yeah I know but...
M-BUT what?
J-Oh nothin
M-It is somethin!
J-Well... Well what if i never see him again?
M-He will call.
J-Hope so.
(Leave bathroom and go to the office)
CD-What is up with Jinny, Magda?
(Jinny looks at Magda and M knows not to tell CD)
M-Oh its nothin.
Angela-You sure she didnt look good?
M-Yea.

Kate-Okay guys Jinny Magda go to the local high school some guys were spotted using pot.
J-We're on it Cap'n.
M-Com'n Jin.
(In the car on the way to the high school)
M-Jinny...(interrupted by the phone ringing)
(Jinny looks at Magda)
J-You think it is him?
M-could be. But you'll never know if you dont answer it.
(Jinny picks up the phone)

What do you guys think??
Dont you just love it when i leave you hanging like this? LOL

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nancysbiggestfan

Nancy and Jo and Jinny
Rules!!

GRRRRRRR!!! don't stop!!!!

J-hello
Kate-Jin, it is Kate let me speak to Magda.
(Jinny with her hand over the phone)
J-It is Kate she wants to talk to you.
(magda hangs up the phone)
M-She said to cancel that case.
J-What? Why?
M-Oh, cause the lady that reported him told her friend about it who was a cop and he took care of it.
J-Well good i didn't feel like handling the case anyway.
M-She said for us to take the day off. So what do you want to do?
J-What? The captian letting us have the day off, This is a once in a lifetime chance.
Just drop me off at my house.
M-You sure you don't want to do anything?
J-Yea, i just want to take a nap. I didn't get any sleep last night.
M-Jin, forget about him if he doesn't call he doesn't deserve you.
J-Yea yea yea. You're givin me the usual "he doesnt deserve you thing" But i will be okay.
(Jinny walks in her bedroom and plops on the bed and cries)
(she rambles through one dresser drour(sp) and takes a gulp of liquer(sp)


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**Next morning at SFPD Division**
(Cd whispers to Angela)
CD-Whats wrong with her?
Angela-I DON'T know.
(Magda pulls Jinny aside)
M-What is wrong with you?
J-(says slured) Theres nothin wrong with me.
(Magda smells liquer on her breath)
M-Jinny you're DRUNK!! I cant believe it.
J-Hey, hey iam fine.
M-No you're not fine! Stay here.
(She picks up the phone and calls Teddy)
M-Hello, Teddy? this is Magda.
T-Oh Hi.
M-Yea, you have got to come down to the office.
T-Why?
M-Well.... Jinny is drunk. She got really upset abut what happened the other night.
T-I will be right there! Bye.
(Magda hangs up the phone as Jinny runs toward the bathroom. Magda chases after her)
M-Jinny what...
(Jinny throws up)
M-Jinny are you going to be okay?
J-Yea i will...will..
(throws up again)

SORRY TO LEAVE YOU HANGIN BUT I HAVE GOT TO GO. IF YOU LIKE IT SAY SO AND I WILL FINISH UP THE STORY LATER.
BYE.



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Rules!!

DON'T YOU DARE STOP WRITING!!!!!!

Don't stop!!! i love it!

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Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

THIS ROX!!!!!

(after she throws up)
M-Jin you okay?
J-Yea, I feel better now. But who were you talking to on the phone?
M-Well... It was... was Teddy
J-I cant believe it! Why did you call him?
M-Because you two need to talk. This whole misunderstanding can be cleared up.
J-Well, at least you didnt tell him to come down,(Magda gives Jinny a funny look)did you?
M-Weeeell, sorta.
J-When will he be here? I cant believe you!
M-Anytime know. He said he was leaving as soon as we got off of the phone.
J-Magda i am sorry i yelled at you. I just just cant handle it.[starts crying] What if we dont make up?
M-you will. Look...[Jinny interrupts]
J-I hear Teddys voice. I am goin to talk to him.
M-Okay[hugs Jinny]
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[Teddy takes Jinny out to his car to talk in private]
T-I am so sorry about what happened thhe other day. I shouldnt have jumped the gun like that.
J-Yea and i shouldnt have told you to leave.
T-I couldnt stand it when you told me to leave. It... it just about killed me cause i love you so much.
J-Oh Teddy i love you to. Lets just forget about the fight.
T-Okay, that is just fine w/ me.[They kiss]
[Jinny pulls away]
J-I should get back to work.
T-Couldnt you just ask for the day off?
J-I will try, but you know the Captian.
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[At the office]
J-Kate i know i havent been here lately but i have had some problems could i have the day off? I promise I will be here tomorrow.
K-Sure.
J-Really?
K-Yea, just go before i change my mind.
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[at Teddys care]
T-You want to go to the Anchorside bar?
J-No, actually. I have had enough.
T-That is a surprise![he says jokingly]
J-Hey watch it! But what about this new place in town then we can go to my house.
T-That sounds great.
[They drive off]
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What did ya think? i will just leave the story at that and you can dream about the rest!

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nancysbiggestfan

Nancy and Jo and Jinny
Rules!!

AWESOME!!!! ur fan fic rocked!

cute, but short! i liked it alot though!

that was really good! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif I enjoyed it.

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!