Well here's the beginning of my fan-fiction! Hope everyone enjoys it......

Series 1 - Story 1
~So Many Reasons~
Faces In the Crowd (Part #2)

**Jinny's House That Night Where they left Off**
Theodore lifts his right hand up skimming over Jinny's cheek and glides it through her hair looking into her eyes the whole time..her looking back. He leans down slightly and kisses her like before. Jinny has her hand resting slightly on Theodore's chest as they stand kissing in her living room. His hand slowly runs down the top of her back and rests in the middle of her lower back. His other hand gradually wraps around her left side and locks with his right hand.Passionatly kissing. Jinny slides her hand up and runs it over Theodore's close shaven cheek. Her other hand wrapped around him resting on his back. She steps back making Theodore take a step forward. Her hand now on his shoulder. Then takes another having Theodore follow. Still kissing as before. Jinny and Theodore takes two steps together leading them into the middle of the hall.Theodore realizes what she is doing. Starts taking slow steps forward...Arrives in the bedroom. They break off their kiss. Jinny walks the rest of the way over to the bed by herself and sits down. Looks up at Theodore and smiles slightly.
"Come on" Jinny says exstending her arm to Theodore.
Theodore walks over to Jinny and takes her hand. Unsure. Jinny smiles at Theodore . She starts to lean back gradually pulling Theodore down on top. Jinny leans up and kisses Theodore,and starts to lay her head back having Theodore follow her lips. Kissing Passionately. He kisses from her lips to her cheek and down her neck. Jinny runs her hands up Theodore's arms to his back. Theodore kisses back up to her lips. Jinny breaks the kiss of lowly and scoots back on the bed. Theodore follows. Jinny kisses Theodore once again. His hands wonder to the top button of her shirt and undoes it. Then the next and the next. All of a sudden Jinny freezes up. Theodore glances up at Jinny's face.
"What's wrong,Jinny" He says worriedly.
"Uhh" Jinny shakes her head. "No,nothing."
Theodore leans down and kisses her once again. Breaks it off.
"You sure? Because...." Theodore says getting cut off by Jinny
Shakes her head.. "Theodore,I'm fine." Kisses him reassuringly. They start to kiss more seriously now. Theodore's hand glide down Jinny's side gently. Then his hand goes up to her shirt button. Slowly Jinny stops kissing.
"You know I'm really...." Jinny's voice drifts off.
Theodore gets up and moves to the side of Jinny. "Look,Jinny,I'm really sorry I" Theodore gets cut off by Jin.
"No,Teddy,It's not you." Jinny says sitting up next to Theodore with her shirt unbuttoned half way.
"Then what?" Theodore questions softly.
"It's just......" Jinny looks down at the floor.
"Whatever it is,Jinny. I'm sure we can work it out." Theodore says reassuringly.
Jinny glances up to Theodore and says,"This is going to sound ridiculous,but...~Jinny pauses~ I'm afraid.." Jinny's voice drifts away as she looks to the ground and shakes her head.
"You're afraid of what?" Theodore says confused.
"Look,Her we were" Jinny says making a hand movement, "About to you know,and I got to thinking for a second." Jinny stops.
Theodore looks at Jinny puzzled.
"What I'm trying to say is,This is my first significant relationship in a long time. Like I said this is going to sound ridiculous to you,but" Jinny pauses for a second. "I'm afraid,if we go through with this,this relationship will end like all the others." Jinny stops and looks at the ground.
Theodore looks at Jinny and says,"So you think if we...make love..I'm not going to be her for you anymore. Or walk out?"
Jinny Glances over to Theodore looks at him for a second thinking about what he said about "Making Love". She then Nods and looks back down. Theodore scoots closer to Jinny and puts his arm around her.
"Jinny,Listen." Theodore looks at her.
Jinny looks over at him.
"If we had made love. Or when ever,if we do. That's only going to show how much you mean to me." Theodore says and smiles at Jinny. "I care about you,Jinny. I'm not going to leave." Theodore says reassuringly to Jinny.
Jinny looks at him and smiles alittle. She looks down and the back at Theodore. "Look, I'm sorry about this. I shouldn't have started something I wasn't going to finish" She shakes her head. "I didn't realize this would happen" Jinny says in a low voice.
"When the time is right. You'll know ,Jinny." Theodore replys and rubs his hand up and down her back.
"Thanks,Theodore. Later? When the time is right." Jinny says in a low voice and leans her head on Theodore's Shoulder.
Theodore nods and smiles at her and says,"Why don't we just lay her on the bed together and have a chat?"
Jinny smiles and says," Great Idea" as she reaches down and button up her top.
Theodore scoots to the side of the bed. Jinny scoots up and lays her head on Theodore's arm. Where they lay together until they fall asleep.

Should I continue?????



[This message has been edited by #1_Nancy_McKeon (edited 04-13-2001).]

YES!!!! Please

Interesting, VERY interesting DO IT!! It seems good so far what will happen next?? i am in suspence!

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Ms G: Natalie why dont you show Jo a better place to park her bike
Jo: why dont I park it on Blairs face?
Natalie: shes a breath of fresh air isnt she??

PLEASE FINISH! I LOVE IT!

I think it is great so far. Please finish. Thanks Jeanie

WOW thats really good!! Write more soon!

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

Continue!!! I love it! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif



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"Every day has a little something. Find it!" - Anonymous

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Great Job, go on! it is awesome!!!

Here is some more. Thanks For Responding!!

**Next Morning At Magda's House**
Magda's alarm clock goes off. She turns over in her bed and looks at the alarm clock that reads 6:45 she pushes the button to shut the alarm off. She rubs her head and gets up. Ben opens the door of her room and says,"Hey Mommy". Magda looks over and says,"Good Morning Baby get ready for school and we can make your favorite."
Ben looks excited and says,"Pancakes?"
"Of course,Sweetheart! Just let Mommy get ready for work and I'll be right out." Magda says Smiling at Ben.
"Okay!" Ben reply's and shuts Magda's Bedroom Door.

**Morning at Captain's (Kate's) House**
Kate gets out of bed and walks to her dresser. The shower is on in the bathroom. She opens a drawer and pulls out some nilons. Goes to the next drawer and pulls out a black skirt. Allen's voice blurts out,"You ran out of shampoo".
"No I didn't" Says Kate walking into the bathroom. She leans down and opens up the little cupboard below the bathroom sink and pulls out a bottle of shampoo. Walks over to the shower and sticks her hand inside holding the shampoo bottle. "There ya go" Kate says. Allen takes the shampoo bottle and hands her the empty one. "Thanks,Kate!" He replied.
Captain walks over to the garbage can and throws the empty bottle in it and says,"Yeah Sure." and walks out of the bathroom.

**Morning at Angela's House**
Angela is up and making breakfast in the kitchen. Daniel walks in and wraps his arms around her. Angela smiles as he kisses her on the neck,"Good Morning!" she says. Daniel slowly stops. "Morning Honey..Breakfast smells great.What did you fix?" Daniel asks. "Some scrambled eggs and sausage,You interested?" Angela says turning around and looking at Daniel.
Daniel looks at the food,"Sure,Angie." Angela smiles at Daniel,turns around,and starts to put the food on two plates. "One Second" Angela says putting down the kitchen utinsils and hurrys to the bathroom. Daniel watches her leave and looks puzzled.

**Morning at C.D's House**
C.D's walks out of the bathroom drying off her hair. Fully dressed for work. Paul had already left 30 minutes earlier. She tosses the towel into the clothes hamper as she walks out of the room. C.D. gets to the kitchen and opens up a cupboard door and continues getting everything she needs to make a bowl of cereal. She finishes and brings the bowl of cereal to the table and sits. Glances down at her watch and notices she has to be at work in a half hour. Starts to eat the cereal. She finishes a short time later. Grabs her Gun and holster. Then walks out the door putting on her coat.

**Morning at Jinny's House**
The sun is gleaming into the window. Theodore turns over. Jinny opens her eyes alittle and looks at her watch. "Oh no" Jinny says and turns to Theodore and shakes him alittle. He turns over and rubs his eyes.."Wha,What ,Jinny?" Theodore says with a morning voice.
"We have 25 minutes to be at work!" Jinny says anxiously and sits up on the bed. She starts unbuttoning her shirt before she even stands up
"We over Slept!!" Theodore gets out of bed and grabs his bag out of the closet. "I'll be right back I need to shave!"
Jinny takes off her shirt exposing her bra and says," Of Course" watching him leave the room in a hurry. Theodore is in the bathroom just beginning to shave after he put his shaving cream on. Jinny finishes getting dressed,and walks to the bathroom. The door is open. She walks in. "Hey you mind if I squeeze my way in here and brush my teeth." Jinny says looking at Theodore.
"No not at all." Theodore says still looking in the mirror shaving. Jinny comes in and starts brushing her teeth.
They both finish at the same time. Jinny walks out of the bathroom into her bedroom and grabs her gun and holster . She then puts it on. Theodore walks out of the bathroom in a new suit a few minutes after. Jinny looks up at him ,"Ooh,You look good" Smiles and walks toward him. Moves hair out of her face and leans up and kisses him. Breaks off the kiss and looks at her watch. "We gotta get going." Jinny says heading toward the door . Grabbing her coat on the way.
"Want to get together tonight, Jinny?" Theodore questions as he walks to the door behind her.
Jinny Nods and say," Yeah Sure,Theodore! Tonight!" The door closes as they leave.

(Kenzie stands up on her chair applauding.) Bravissimo! Sorry but I just played Für Elise for an hour non-stop and I'm speaking Italian.
BUT YES!!!! FINISH IT!

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^~^The Division^~^
T: You're in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?
J: No, you're supposed to hide under the covers with me 'cause it's warmer! Come on!
†º† ~~<@ Kenzie @>~~ †º†

Great job so far! I love this fanfic!

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Blair: (sighs)
Jo: "I hate it when you do that!"
Blair: "What?"
Jo: "Sigh!"
Blair: "I don't sigh!"
Jo: "Well if it isn't a sigh you've got a slow leak!"
Blair: (sighs)
Jo: "You did it again!"
Blair: "That's called breathing."
Jo: "You do it just to annoy me!"
Blair: "No,I do it to keep from dieing."
Jo: "Now there's an idea!!"
~Steph:)

OMG!!! This is sooo good. i love how you tell what ech person is doing in the morning!!!!! Go on!!! FAST!

Awesome!!! Finish it soon please.

It's really great so far!

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

PLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep going!!!!!!! This is REALLY awesome! hurry! what happens to jin and teddy?!?!?!!? sorry, im a little bit hyper right now. KEEP going!!!!!!!

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Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point.

Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

Thank You Everyone!!! Here is somemore!

**S.F.P.D. Felony Division**
Captain is in her office eating a power bar. Magda's at her desk. Angela and C.D. is having a conversation. Jinny pushes the Division door open and walks in. "Hey,Sorry I'm late." Jinny says walking toward her desk. Magda walks over to Jinny's desk and sits on the side.
"You okay,Jin?" she asks. "Yeah, I'm fine..Just thinking about what happened last night" Jinny says moving the hair out of her face. "Wanna talk about it?" Magda questions. Jinny leans back in her chair,looks at Captain's office then to Magda,and says ,"Later?" Magda nods. Understanding Completely. "No Prob."
"Thanks,Mag." Jinny says as Captain walks out of her office. "Angela C.D. you know you're going around to all the local Middle and High Schools talking about Drugs ,right?" Captain says looking over Toward Angela and C.D.
"Yes,Captain,We know." says C.D. looking straight back at the Captain.
"We don't have to be there until 9:30" Angela adds.
Captain nods and looks at Magda and Jinny,"What are you two doing? Nothing?"
"No,Captain!" Magda says.
"We're waiting for a warrant." Jinny says sarcastically.
Captain rolls her eyes and looks at Jinny,"Why is it whenever you are conveniently waiting for a warrant you sit around and do nothing?"
Magda gets up and walks back to her desk. Jinny looks straight at the Captain and says,"What do you suggest I do then?"
"For a start maybe you could go over the case while you're waiting?" Captain says.
"Already did that" Jinny snaps.
"Oh well then. Find something else to do while you're waiting. Other then chit-chat." Captain says and walks to her office.
Jinny rolls her eyes and looks at Magda. "You believe her?" Jinny says points towards Cap's office. Magda shakes her head. "Well, You know Captain." Magda says. "Yeah,I sure do" Jinny says."Unfortunetly"she mumbles.
C.D. stand up and goes to file cabinet and grabs a handfull of D.A.R.E. manuals,walks back to her desk and puts them in a big cardboard box. "We need at least one hundred and fifty of these for today. We have two assemblies to do." C.D. says to Angela as she walks back to the file cabinet and grabs more. Angela gets up and begins to help.
Jinny's cellphone begins to ring.
"Exstead." Jinny answers. "Uh-huh..Okay! Thanks. We will be right down." Jinny says hanging up the phone. Magda looks at Jinny. Jinny looks back at Magda and says, "Warrants in." Magda nods,gets up and grabs her coat. Jinny grabs her coat and heads toward the door. Just before they reach the door Captain walks out and says,"Be careful out there." "Sure Captain." Magda says and walks out.
C.D. and Angela finish packing the manuals. "Can you carry them,C.D.? I haven't felt too well today." Angela says. "Yeah,sure" C.D. reply's at she goes over and grabs her coat off the hook and puts it on. Angela does the same. C.D. then goes over and grabs the box of manuals and walks toward the door. Angela gets to the door first and opens it for C.D. "Yeah,Thanks Angela." C.D. says and walks through the doorway. "Anytime" Angela says walking out behind C.D.

**Magda & Jinny in the Car**
Jinny is just driving along thinking. She has barely said a thing sense they left the station. Magda can't stand the silence so she looks from the window to Jinny. "Jin,You okay? You don't seem like yourself today." Magda says. Jinny glances over at Magda then back at the road. "I'm just" Jinny pauses for a sec then continues "So confused,Mag" she shakes her head "I turned down sex last night..Can you believe it?" Magda turns to Jinny. "You did what?" she looks surprised. "I know" Jinny says and is quiet again. "I'm assuming with Theodore,Right?" Magda asks. Jinny looks at Magda,"Of Course. That's the whole reason. I didn't....well you know" Jinny explains. "Yeah,but I don't understand,Jin." Mag says shaking her head. "It was going to be more...More then just "Sex",Magda." Jinny pauses for a moment. "We were going to you know..Make Love. As Theodore put it. I just don't want to do it then" Jinny stops. Magda is nodding. "You don't have to say anymore,Jin. I understand what you are saying!" Jinny is quiet once again. Just driving.

**Angela & C.D. in the Car**
"Hey Angela..Where's this school at again?" C.D. says as she stops at a red light. Angela looks down at their week schedule. "Hmm, 9:30 assembly at Ocean Ridge Junior High School on 574 Green Way Drive." Angela says and glance up at C.D. "Okay,I know where that is." C.D. says as she starts driving again once the light turns green. "How are you and Paul?" Angela asks looking over at C.D.. "I'd rather not talk about it." C.D. reply's. "Oh,Sorry" Angela comments. A short time later they arrive in the parking lot of the Junior High School. "There's one" Angela says pointing to a vacant parking spot. C.D. pulls in and gets out of the car.

MOREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! PLEEEEEEEZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif

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Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point.

Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

More Please!!!

Really good. Please continue.

Jeanie

This is really good. Please continue.

Jeanie

This is really good. Please continue.

Jeanie

Sorry about all the extra posts.

Jeanie

OMG!!! please post morrrre i am dying!!!

PLEASE!!!!! MORE!!! im in suspense!!! ahhhhhh!!!!!!

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Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point.

Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

Please post more soon! I love this story!

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Blair: (sighs)
Jo: "I hate it when you do that!"
Blair: "What?"
Jo: "Sigh!"
Blair: "I don't sigh!"
Jo: "Well if it isn't a sigh you've got a slow leak!"
Blair: (sighs)
Jo: "You did it again!"
Blair: "That's called breathing."
Jo: "You do it just to annoy me!"
Blair: "No,I do it to keep from dieing."
Jo: "Now there's an idea!!"
~Steph:)

please more!! or ill die!!! that's not good... ahhhh...

Okay Guys here is some more!!!


**At the Station**
Allen walks into the Division and directly to the Captain's office. He knocks at the closed door. Kate glances up and motions for him to come in. Allen grabs the knob and opens the door. "You called me?" Captain asks. "Yeah I did." Allen says. Captain motions for Allen to close the door. He turns around and closes the door behind him. He then walks over to the chair located directly in front of Captain's desk,and sits. "So what did you need?" Kate asks. "No,actually,I didn't call you about business. I called you to talk about us." Allen responds. "Oh?" Captain says confused. She shift around in her chair. "Well,Kate,you know I'm sick of hiding our relationship from everyone. I can't even touch your shoulder in public without you worrying someone is going to find out about us." Allen says looking straight at Kate. Captain looks at her desk then back at Allen. "So what are you saying,Councilor?" She asks. "What I'm saying,Kate. Is either we become public with what we have going. Which in my opinion is a good thing. Or either we have to break up. I can't go on with this." Allen explains. "Fine." Kate says calmly. "Fine?" Allen asks confused. "We'll let our relationship go public. My job can go down the drain. We will be stared at. Fine. Let's do it,Allen." Captain says standing up. "Kate,You know that won't happen!" Allen says back to Kate as he stands up aswell. "Can I have time to think at least?" She reply's. Allen nods."I better get going" He looks at his watch. "Theodore is watching the office for me. He has lunch in 15 minutes. Call me?" Allen asks. "Yeah" Cap says nodding. Allen walks to the door,opens is,and walks out closing it behind him. Captain put her hand to her head and moves her hair to the side. "Damn it." she comments to herself.

**Assembly**
C.D. and Angela are on a stage infront of over 150 Junior High School Age kids. "Hello I'm Inspector Candace De Lorenzo with the San Francisco Police Department. You can just call me C.D. and this is my Partner Inspector Angela Reide." C.D. says introducing herself to the Audience. "Can anyone tell us what D.A.R.E. stands for?" C.D. asks the audience. One eighth grade girl raises her hand. "Okay,Come up here and tell us one of the reasons." Angela says motioning for the girl to come onstage and tell the audience one of the reasons through the microphone. The girl stands up and walks onto the stage. "Right here" C.D. says to the girl directing her to the microphone. She adjust the microphone to the girls height. "D.A.R.E. stands for Drug. Abuse. Resistance. Education." The girl says looking right out into the audience. She finishes and look back at Angela and C.D. "Thank You" Angela says to the girl. C.D. takes the microphone off the stand. "What's your name?" C.D. asks the girl. "Rebecca" the girl replies as she is walking off the stage. "Thank You,Rebecca." C.D. says to the girl and tosses her a D.A.R.E. keychain. Rebecca catches the keychain looks at it and continues going down into the crowd of kids sitting. Angela takes the microphone from C.D. "So before we start we're going to pass out some D.A.R.E. manuals to each of you so you can follow along with us as we go through them." Angela explains to the crowd of kids. She then puts the microphone on the stand. Both C.D. and Angela go off stage and start destributing the books out.."Take one and pass the rest down" C.D. says handing a stack of books to a boy at the end of a row.

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Jinny and Magda get out of the car and walk toward the house. Magda looks around. "Isn't it kinda quiet?" Magda asks looking at Jinny. "Yeah,but then again everyone is probably at work besides this guy." Jinny says as she reaches the door. Jinny steps forward and knocks on the door then steps back again. Both Jinny and Magda stand on the sides of the door so they can't be seen through the peep-hole. No Answer. Jinny then steps forward and knocks on the door yet again. Still they get no answer. "Maybe I should check around back." Jinny says. "Yeah,I'll stay here." Magda reply's.
"Okay I'll be right back" Jinny says walking toward the side of the house. She puts her arm over and unlocks the side gate. She opens it and walks through leaving it open behind her. She draws her gun as she walks down the side of the house. Jinny arrives in the backyard. No one is there. She looks through a window still sees no one. Jin then tries the sliding glass door,and finds it is unlocked. Walks in slowly,cautiously. She then walks through and opens the front door for Magda. "Come on" Jinny says motioning for Magda to come in. "You went in there alone" Magda questions as she draws her weapon and walks in. "Yeah,the back door was unlocked." Jin says quietly. "Let's check the bedrooms" Magda says as she walks toward the hall. Jinny is right behind her. Magda pushes open the first rooms door that was cracked already and walks in. She then checks the closet and anywhere the man could be hiding. "Clear" Magda says to Jinny. Jinny nods and walks down the hall aways. Leans against the wall,turns the door handle to the next room and pushes the door open. She then moves fast infront of the door with her gun pointed. Jinny walks into the room cautiously and looks around. She doesn't see anything so she continues back toward the door. Something catches her eye. Jin turns back around and sees some movement in the corner of the room. Magda is now at the door way with her gun drawn aswell. "What is it,Jinny" Magda asks as she watches Jinny walk cautiously to the corner of the room. Jinny then leans down and exstends her arms and picks up a baby no more then 3 months old. "Magda" Jinny says as she stands and turns around with the baby in her arms. "Ooh, Jinny!" Magda says walking over to Jinny and the baby. "The bastard must have left this baby here,and made a break for it." Jinny exclaims as she looks down at the baby and shakes her head.

omg....please write more. it is soooooo good!!!!!! lovvvve it!

This is awsome! Keep going!!!

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

This keeps getting better!!! more, more, more!!!

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Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point.

Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

Kewl! I had DARE last year. (Don't ask!) This is awesome though!

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God bless you one and all.
~~~<@ Kenzie @>~~~

"Greater love hath no man than this, that he lay down his life for his friend."
§ John 15:13 KJV §

Okay Here ya guys go!

**Assembly**
Angela and C.D. are back onstage going through the D.A.R.E. manual with the kids. "Ooh,and the next part is C.D.'s favorite part of the book!" Angela says turning to the next page of the D.A.R.E. manual. All the kids turn the page aswell. "Comics!!!" the kids say at once. Angela laughs. "Yeah Comics! This is where C.D. takes over." Angela says and hands the microphone to C.D. as she stands. "As you know from what my partner just mentioned.We're going to go over the Anti-Drug comics now." C.D. says. "Anyway,here we go." C.D. takes the D.A.R.E. manual from Angela. She looks down at the comics. "Looks like we're going to have to name the characters that are pictured on the side of page 32 since due to a miss print they don't have names." C.D. explains. "So any Ideas for the first character's name? He looks rather scummy doesn't he?" C.D. asks the audience. "Let's see a show of hands and I will pick one person and they can name this basket case" C.D. says looking out to the audience. Around 30 kids raise there hands. C.D. points to a boy in the third row,"Yes? What's the name you picked for him?" C.D. questions. "Well,he looks like his name would be Paul to me." The Boy says. Angela smirks and looks at C.D. for her response. C.D. looks down,laughs. "Is that okay?" The Boy says embarrased. "Yes,Just that's my husban's name." C.D. explains. The boy's friend elbows him in the ribs. "Oh,I didn't know sorry. I will change it." The boy Apoligizes. C.D. looks at the kid and says," No,no that's okay. His name can be Paul." C.D. laughs and continues.

**Station**
Captain is in here office going through some cases. Magda and Jinny walk in. Magda is now holding the baby. She sits down at her desk and rocks the baby in her arms. Jinny walks to the Captain's office leans in and knocks on the door. Captain looks up from what she is doing and says,"You're back. How was it?" "He wasn't there. We did find something else. Come look at this." Jinny responds. Captain nods and gets up. Jinny walks over to her desk and sits ontop of it. As Captain walks out Jinny points at Magda holding the baby. "Let me get this straight. You didn't find the guy you went there for. Instead all you found was this baby." Kate says moving the blanket away from the baby's face. Magda nods and looks down at the baby. "Well, get on the phone with the social services to find this baby a home until we find it's parents." Kate says as she looks from the baby to Jinny. "No prob." Jinny says turning around and picking up the phone. The Division door opens and in comes C.D. with Angela behind her. C.D. walks by Magda not noticing the baby in her arms. Angela walks by Magda and stops. "What a cute baby. Whome's is it?" Angela asks. Jinny is still on the phone talking to the social services. "Well Jin and I went to go pick up a guy today and all that was in his house was this baby." Magda says looking up at Angela. "Aww,Poor thing. All alone." Angela says looking down at the baby. Angela then takes one last look at the baby and walks to her desk. Jinny then hangs up the phone and exhales. "Social Services can't take the baby until Thursday." Jinny explains to the Captain and the others. "That's two days away!" Magda says. Jinny nods. "So it looks like you guys are stuck with him or her." C.D. adds in. "No, I can't take it home. Ben has soccer practice and a soccer game the next few days." Magda explains. Everyone looks at Jinny. "I don't know anything about babies." Jinny says. Captain looks around and says,"Fine I will take the baby home. Since no one else can." "Thanks" Magda says.

**That Night when Captain's At Home**
Captain is in the kitchen making a bottle with the formula she bought on the way home from work. In the distance you can hear the baby crying. Kate finishes with the bottle and moves fastly down the hall and turns the corner into her room where the baby is lying in the bassinet that formally belonged to Ben. That Magda loaned her. "It's okay,Baby" Kate says putting the bottle to the baby's mouth. It won't take it. So she lifts the baby up from the bed. Cap walks around alittle and it dawns on her she didn't even ask the others at the station if the baby was a boy or girl. Sense they changed it right before she left for home. Kate pats the baby's bottom and decides it's wet. So she lays it down gently on her bed with a towel underneith it. Kate then undoes the diaper and pulls it back. "Ooh,You're a boy." She says to it. "This is a bit different. I've only changed my daughter's diapers." Kate says as she puts a new diaper on the baby.

THTAS SO CUTE!!! I like the DARE thing too...i had to take it in 5th grade... and our DARE officer was hilariose! Ahhh...This brigs back fond memories.

Yeah, Same here. I lived in California and we had D.A.R.E. from fourth grade -High School where I lived. Here is a little more.

**That Night at Jinny's House**
Jinny and Theodore are just coming in from a nice Dinner at Anchorside. Theodore stops at the door and is about to say goodnight not wanting to pressure Jinny. "Come in,Theodore" Jinny says motioning for him to come inside. "You sure?" Theodore asks. "Yes I'm sure" Jinny says grabbing his hand and leading him inside. Theodore closes the door behind him. He begins to take off his coat. "No let me." Jinny says coming close to Theodore and slowly slides his coat the rest of the way off of him. She then leans up and kisses Theodore on the lips passionately. "You mean?" Theodore questions surprisingly. Jinny looks into his eyes,smiles,and nods. "Are you" Theodore gets cut off by Jinny kissing him again more passionately then before. They slowly break off the kiss. "What do you think?" Jinny asks Theodore with a smile on her face. "I just don't want" Theodore gets cut off again by Jinny kissing him. She slowly breaks the kiss off. "Well if you're sure." Theodore says putting his arms around her and holding her close to him. They then slowly part and she starts to slide off her scarf from around her neck. Theodore helps her with her coat . He then tosses it to the chair beside the door as they slowly make their way into the hallway. Once they finally make it to Jinny's bedroom. She reaches up and starts to unbutton Theodore's shirt. Button by Button. Once it is all the way unbuttoned Jinny slide her hands over Teddy's shoulders and pushes the shirt down off of them. She gets closer and kisses him. Jinny then takes the shirt the rest of the way off of Theodore and tosses it behind her. The shirt lands on her dresser near the door. They continue.

**Captain's House**
The baby begins to cry. It starts with low whimpers and begins to get louder. Soon the baby is crying at the top of it's lungs. Kate rolls over in bed and glances at the alarm clock before she turns on the light. It reads 2:30 a.m. She rubs her eyes and gets up. Cap walks over to the baby and picks it up. She holds it close to her and walks around her room slowly until he falls back asleep. Then she gently puts him back down in the bassinet,and walks back to her bed shuts off the light and falls asleep instantly.

This is awesome!!! Keep going soon. They stopped DARE in Nebraska...oh well.

oh my goll! this is really good! i like this "thing" (lol) goin on w/ teddy and jin!!!

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Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point.

Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

Here is some more. I'm still in the process of writing it sorry it is taking so long to finish!

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Around 4:50 the baby starts to cry again. Kate repeats the process she did earlier that morning,but the baby just wouldn't go to sleep this time. She walks into the kitchen with the baby in her arms and begins to make a bottle. It's now 5:15. Kate finishes with the bottle and puts it near the baby's mouth. The baby turns away from it and begins to cry louder. After about 20 minutes she gets the baby to calm down and it falls asleep. Captain then realizes it was time time to get ready for work. She she lays the baby down and begins to get ready for work.

**Station**
Magda is sitting on the edge of Jinny's desk looking over her shoulder at their case. The phone at Jinny's desk rings. Jinny aswers,"Exstead...uh-huh...Ocean Pacific Ave...Ok..Thanks!" Jinny hangs up and looks at Magda. "We got a witness that say they saw William return home about 45 minutes ago.Let's get going." "Let's just run it by Cap first." Magda says. "Fine" Jinny responds.
C.D. and Angela are talking at their desk. "I just haven't felt too well,lately." Angela says to C.D. "Hmm,must be some kind of bug goin' around." C.D. reply's. Captain walks in with the baby bag around her. Holding the baby in one arm and her purse in the other. C.D. looks over as Captain walks in. "Hey ,Cap you don't look too well." She says looking at the dark circles under Kate's eyes. "I don't feel too well either." Kate says walking into her office. She then walks back out of her office only carrying the baby. "He kept me up practically all night. Someone else has to take him tonight. I have to get some rest." Cap exclaims. Magda walks back to her desk. As she passes Kate stops and takes the baby from her, wraps her arms around him,and carrys him to her desk. "Fine,Cap'n,I'll take the baby home tonight. I mean how hard can is possibly be!?" Jinny says looking around. "Harder then you imagine ,Jinny,but if you insist. You can take him home tonight. Have your first dose of motherhood."Captain says straightening her shirt out and rubs her eye. "So what did you find out about the guy?" Kate says putting her hand on her hip and looking at Mag and Jin. "Well,We got a witness that say they saw him come back to the house 45 minutes ago." Jinny says looking up from a folder in her hands. "We're hoping to make the arrest today." Magda adds in. "Search Warrant still valid?" Captain asks. Jinny looks over to Magda. "Yes,Captain. Ready ,Jin? " Magda says. "Sure." Jinny says standing up. Magda stands up and hands the baby to Captain. Both Magda and Jinny walk out the door. "C.D. Angela..You have anything to do?" Captain asks. C.D. shakes her head. "Not much,why?" Kate walks over and hands the baby to C.D. "There..just babysit it while I make a few phone calls." Captain says walks toward her office. "No Problem, Captain." Angela says.

This is just getting better!

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God bless you one and all.
~~~<@ Kenzie @>~~~

"Greater love hath no man than this, that he lay down his life for his friend."
§ John 15:13 KJV §

Please continue. This is good.

Jeanie

Thanks!! Here is some more!!

**Magda & Jinny**
Jinny parks down the street alittle way away from the house. Both Magda and Jinny get out of the car and start walking toward the house. They get to the drive way and walk across the grass to the sidewalk leading to the door. Magda gets to the door first and knocks on it. "S.F.P.D. Open Up!!" She yells. They here a lot of moving in the house. Mag gets out her Walky-Talky and calls for Back-up. She then looks back at Jinny. Jinny Nods as Magda moves out of the way of the door and draws her weapon. Jinny takes out her gun then kicks the door in. They both run in looking around. Magda checks the kitchen "Clear" She shouts to Jinny as she meets back up with her in the Living room. They hear something toward the back of the house near the sliding glass door and dining room. Both Magda and Jinny run toward the back Magda in front. The man trying to get out of the door turns around and aims at Magda. "Don't move lady. I'll shoot." The man says turning around once he hears Magda come rushing in. Jinny stops dead in her tracks when she hears the man shout out to Magda. She stopped soon enough for the man not to know she was right there. "Where's your partner?" The guy blurts out to Magda. Mag starts talking to him . Jinny slowly back pedals. Leans against the wall then silently moves closer to where Magda is. She can hear Magda saying,"Come on Hernando. You don't want to hurt anyone. Just put the gun down." in a calm voice. "You don't know what I want lady!! Just stop assuming you do." He shouts back at her. Jinny moves alittle closer to the situation. "Gimme your Gun!!!" Hernando says taking a step forward toward Magda with his gun pointed at her. "Sorry I can't surrender my weapon!" Magda explains. "Give it to me!" Hernando says taking another step toward her. Magda shakes her head. "Fine!!" Hernando says still half way across the room from her. "You leave me no choice." He begins to put pressure on the trigger. Jinny hears him say the last sentence and turns the corner surprising Hernado. She shoots him hitting him in the shoulder. His gun goes off. He then drops the gun to the ground from his shoulder being shot. His bullet missed both woman for when Jinny came around the corner it made his aim off from the sudden shock of someone else being there.
Magda and Jinny are now both aiming their guns at him. Magda jerks her hands to the left holding her gun motioning for the man to move over. "Step away from the weapon." She says. Hernando slowly moves to the left. "Okay,Turn around and put your hands on the wall behind you." Magda explains. "Don't try anything funny,Hernando. I'll have no problem shooting." Jinny adds in. Hernando turns around and puts his hands against the wall as best as he could. Jinny and Magda move closer without lowering their guns. As soon as they get close enough Magda takes out her handcuffs. Jinny still has her gun steadly on Hernando. Mag then grabs one of his hands and pulls it back. She locks the cuff on it and does the same with the other. "Hernando Jordan you are under arrest for Attempted Murder of a police officer and resisting arrest. Anything you say or do will be held against you in the court of law. You have a right to an attorney if you can not afford one. One will be provided for you." Mag explains to Hernando. Jinny puts her gun away.

**C.D. & Angela at the Station**
Angela is holding the baby. "And this little piggy went to the" C.D. walks out of Cap's office "Hey I finally found one!" She interupts walking toward Angela holding up a diaper. "Great..Here you go" Angela starts to lift the baby. "No no you got this all wrong. You're changing it. I found the diaper you do the other motherly duties. I will stick with police duties,Thank You." C.D. says as she sits down at her desk and tosses the diaper to Angela. "C.D." Angela exclaims. "What? I found the diaper you can do the rest. Hey,In fact I'll hold the kid once you are finished. You're good at that kind of thing,and if you aren't think of this as good practice for when you do have a kid. See I don't have to worry about that." C.D. explains as she sits back in her chair and picks up a D.A.R.E. manual that was lying on her desk. "Fine, C.D., I'll change him this time." Angela says as she stands up and lies the baby on her desk and begins to change him. She makes a face. C.D. glances up at Angela and smirks.
Jinny walks into the Division with Magda behind her. "Hey Guys" Angela says looking over at them then back to the baby. "Hey,You get stuck baby sitting or something?" Jinny asks. "Yeah, Actually C.D. and I got stuck with him. It's not too bad really. Besides I get stuck changing his diaper. As you can tell" Angela reply's back as she puts the clean diaper on him and lifts him from the desk. "Well don't feel too bad. I got him all tonight!!" Jinny says as she sits down in her chair.

This is awsome! Keep it goin! Can't wait for more!

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Jinny- We're cops. Sworn to protect and serve.

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

Here is some more for the people who are still reading! lol Sorry it's so long..I start and I just keep writing and writing.


Captain walks out of her office and taps Jinny on the shoulder. " I'd like to see you in my office.." She says to Jinny and motions for Magda to come along. Kate then walks back to her office and sits down. "Fine" Jinny says and she stands and walks to Captain's office with Magda right behind her. Both Inspectors walk into her office. Cap motions for Magda to close the door behind her. Mag closes it. Jinny leans against the wall and folds her arms. "You wanted to see us?" Magda asks. "Yes,In a matter of fact I did. What do you call that little stunt of yours at Hernando's house? Were you trying to get Magda killed!!?!" Captain says looking straight at Jinny. "Listen,Captain it wasn't my fault." Jinny says. "Enlighten Me" Captain reply's. Magda interupts. "Captain, She couldn't have done anything else. The Guy was about to shoot me. She did the right thing under the circumstances." Jinny looks over to Magda then back to Captain for her response. "You really believe that?" Captain asks. "Yes,Captain,I do." Mag says as she nods. "Fine you two may go."Kate responds. "Thanks Captain" Magda says as she turns around and opens the door. "Yeah,Thanks" Jinny adds in about to go out the door. "Exstead, Just keep in mind that little stunt of yours could have cost A life." Captain says as Jinny walks out the door.
As Jinny walks back toward her desk Magda looks at her watch and says, "Want to go grab a bite to eat?" "Sure" Jinny reply's "Hey,You guys want to come along?" Magda looks toward C.D. and Angela and asks. "Yeah,That sounds great." Angela says looking from Magda to C.D. "Sure,I'll come. Let me give the baby back to Captain." C.D. says as she gets up and walks toward Cap's office. The others finish up what they were doing and stands. C.D. comes out of Kate's office, "All ready?" "Yeah." Mag says as she walks toward the door. "How about Anchorside?" Angela questions as she walks out the door. "Sounds good to me." Jinny comments as the door closes behind them.

AWESOME CAN"T WAIT FOR MORE!!

this is awesome! keep it coming!!!

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Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point.

Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

Here's some more...

**Anchorside Bar & Grill**
All four of the Inspectors walks in. "Hey Guys." Sean says when he sees them come in. "Hey Sean" they reply. "Hey there's a table." Angela points out. All four of the woman walk to it and sit down. "So Jinny you lookin' forward to taking the baby home?" C.D. laughs. "Ooh Yeah , I just can't wait!!" Jinny says sarcastically. "Aww,Jin, it's not that bad." Magda adds. "Then you take him home." Jinny comments. "Sorry..Ben has a soccer game." Mag replies. "Yeah well I'll be fine. I'll call dad or something. He knows what to do. After all he raised three of us" Jin says. Angela look over to a couple just talking and smiling back and forth and says, "Don't they look so happy?" The others glance over at them. "Yeah they do." Mag reply's.

*****They Think Back to Some of Their Happiest Times******
C.D. thinks back to her wedding day. The breeze through her hair the clear skys. How happy she was. Not only with her new husban ,but with her job her partner. Most of all with herself. Now all that was gone. She had a sense of guilt. Her partner had comitted Suicide. Her husband was being unfaithful. What should she do? Try and salavage her marriage,and keep the vows. Give Paul yet another chance! Or just give up on him completely and start over?

Jinny thinks about the night before. Never had she felts so cared for by anyone. There is no doubt in her mind that the night before was the most perfect time to take their relationship to the next level. Just now it made her realize how much Theodore really cared for her. Which brought to the surface how much she actually did care about him. Did she actually love Theodore? If so should she let her guards down and tell him? If she really did love him and she didn't tell him was she taking the chance of losing him?

Angela smiles as she thinks back to the cold night in the middle of January many years before. When she first layed eyes on Daniel. They'de been set up on a blind date. Soon as he walked into the restaraunt she knew he was the one. She could tell he was a strong man. Just like her father. Everything she'd been looking for her whole life. A couple years after they were married. Now years after that he wants to start a family. Is she ready? Could she really handle a small baby plus juggle her job? It dawned on her. The sickness in the morning. Could she be....pregnant? If so what should she do? How should she tell Daniel? She has to find out.

Magda thinks back 6 years. Looking down at her brand new baby boy in her arms. His first word, First Step, First day of kindergarden, but she didn't have anyone to share them with. He didn't have anyone to share them with. His father cut out of them before he was born. Who could fill that void in their lives? Could it have been Peter? Did she do the right think letting Peter go like that? How would she ever know?

keep going please!!!!

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Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point.

Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

Please keep going!!!! this is awesome!!!!

Okay! Here is some more! :)

**Captains at the Station**

The baby is beginning to cry. "No no baby. Come on don't cry" Kate says walking the baby around her office rocking him. Amanda was so much easier then this she thought. Just then her office door opened. Amanda walks in,"Hey Mom." "Hey Sweetie,You need something?" Kate asks her daughter. Amanda shakes her head and lifts up a bag. "Thought I would bring you lunch. Who's that?" She asks pointing to the baby. "Ooh this is well we don't know his name. Jinny and Magda got him the other day from a place they had a warrant to check and arrest the guy. He wasn't there only the baby was." Captain explains. "Ooh then why do you have it and not social services?" Amanda asks as she sits down and begins to take out the food. "

**Back at Anchorside*
They're all eating. "So guys how's the D.A.R.E. program going?" Jinny asks. "Ooh the kids are great..They catch on real fast,ya know?" Angela says. Magda nods. "The funniest things happened though." Angela adds. C.D. starts laughing. "What?" Mag asks. "Well you both have taught the program before. Anyway, you know the comics in the manual?" C.D. says. "Yeah?" Jin says. "Well the first character the real scummy one. Well the kids named him Paul" C.D. starts laughing again. "Ooh isn't that your husban's name?" Mag asks. "Yeah" C.D. says. They all laugh.

**Station**
The baby is asleep in the bassinet besides Captain's desk. She and Amanda are eating. "It was real nice of you to come down here,Amanda." Kate says. "Well you know we don't see much of eachother,and Marks been working a lot." Amanda reply's. Kate nods and asks ,"I see. You two okay?" "Uhh,Yeah..We're fine." Amanda says trying to reassure her mother. Even though she wasn't sure of herself. "Sweetie, I know that tone of voice. What's wrong?" Captain asks. "Mom,it's nothing really." Amanda reply's to her mother. "Okay,Sweetie,Just if you need to talk you know where I am." Kate says.

**Anchorside**
C.D.,Angela,Jinny,and Magda all leave enough money to pay for each of their lunchs. Grabs their coats and walks to the door, "Back to the station?" Angela looks back at C.D. as they head towards the door. "Yep" C.D. reply's as they all walk out the door.

OMG, this is sooooo good! I LOVE it!

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From Lisa Whelchel's book, "Creative Corrections"

"The eyes of the Lord are everywhere, keeping watch on the wicked and the good." Proverbs 15:3

"Give thanks in all circumstances, for this is God's will for you in Jesus Christ." 1 Thessalonians 5:18

"A gossip betrays a confidence; so avoid a man who talks too much." Proverbs 20:19

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Here's some more! :)

**Jin & Mag in the Car**
Magda looks over to Jinny and says,"You know Jin..I just wanted to say Thanks for earlier. That took a lot of guts." "Oh that Scene with Hernando?" Jin asks. Magda nods. "Don't mention it. We're partners. We back eachother up. Right?" Jinny comments. "Yeah you're right. Sorry I doubted our partnership before,Jinny." Magda says. Jinny nods and says, "Mag, look. I just want this to work out . You know my history with partners. I can't keep them!" Magda is about to say something but it interupted by Jinny's cell phone ringing. Jinny fumbles around looking for her phone. Finally she finds it and answers it, "Exstead" . "Oh Hi Captain. What's Up?...Uh-huh....*baby crying in the background at the Station* Ok ok, Let me get this straight. You want to give me the rest of the day off so I can take the baby home..because you can't handle all the crying anymore? *Laughs alittle* Sure I'll take the rest of the day off. I mean how hard could it possibly be to take care of a baby until tomorrow morning....Okay Mag and I will be there in a few minutes..Okay..Bye" Jinny says and hangs up the phone. Magda laughs alittle and shakes her head. "What?" Jinny asks glancing over at Magda then back to the road. "You're in for a surprise, Jin." Magda says. "Ooh about the baby? Nah,and if it get's cranky I can always call my dad he'll know what to do!" Jinny says confidently. "Okay..You could always call me if you need any pointers." Magda mentions. "Yeah,Thanks Mag. I'll keep that in mind." Jinny says.

**Station**
C.D. and Angela walk into the Division. Captain walks out of her office holding the baby. "Hey Captain." C.D. says. "Oh I thought you were Jinny." Captain says. "Sense when have you ever wanted to talk to Jinny?" C.D. says with a puzzled look on her face as she sits down. Angela goes to her desk and sits. "Sense she is taking the rest of the day off and taking this baby home with her." Captain says patting the baby's back. The baby burps and spits up on Cap's shoulder alittle. "Uhh,Captain. I hate to say this..but the baby kind of spit up on your shoulder." Angela informs Cap. "What?" Captain says and she picks the baby off of her shoulder and looks. "Ooh no...Why me?" Captain says. "Can you hold her until Jinny gets here,C.D.?" Kate asks holding the baby out to her. "Uh,sure Cap." C.D. takes the baby and sits it in her lap. Angela opens her mouth to say something but just before she does C.D. says,"Don't even." Then they both start laughing.
Captain walks out of the Division into the hallway. Jinny and Magda are walking down the hall. "Hey Cap you got something on your shoulder" Jin points out. Captain keeps walking and says,"Yeah it's from the baby. C.D. has him right now." "Oh okay" Jinny says as she walks into the Division right after Magda. Jinny walks into the Division. "Hey Jinny..Here ya Go" C.D. says as she gets up and hands the baby to Jinny. "Great Thanks. So where's his stuff?" Jinny says taking the baby and looking around. Angela looks at C.D. "Right here." C.D. says as she goes towards Cap's office. "So you lookin' forward to this ,Jin?" Angela asks. "Well you know...It will be alittle different,but Hey I get off early." Jinny laughs. Magda smiles. C.D. comes back out rolling the Bassinet with the diaper back in it. Jinny looks at it and says," You mean I have to bring all that home?" Angela smirks. "Good Luck" C.D. says.

Great, can't wait to find out what happens next!!!!

Here's some more!

**Jinny's Apartment**
Jinny fumbles around for her keys. The baby is crying. "Damn It" Jinny exclaims moving her hand around in her coat pocket. Finally she gets ahold of her keys and unlocks the door. She walks in pulling the bassinet behind her. "Well here we are. Home." Jinny says as she looks down at the baby. She brings the bassinet in the rest of the way and closes the door behind her. The baby is still crying. "You Hungry?" Jinny says looking down at the baby. "Here I'm talking to you like you are going to respond." She says as she shakes her head. Jin grabs the diaper bag out of the bassinet and puts in on her shoulder. She lies the baby down in the bassinet. Then goes looking through the bag for the baby formula and a bottle. Finds the bottle. Looks through the diaper bag and still doesn't see the formula. Jin gives up and take everything out of the bad. "That's great. They must have forgotten to put it back in her." She says to herself. The baby is crying even louder now. So she picks him up and rocks him alittle. "It's okay. We'll get you something to eat. Yes, You'll be fine..Trust me" She says.
Just then there is a knock on the door. Jinny walks over to the door and looks out the peep hole. "Magda,just the one I wanted to see." Jinny says as she opens the door. Magda hands her the can of formula. "Great Thank you so Much!" Jinny thanks Magda. "No Problem,Jin,once you left we found on Captain's desk. I better get back to work. Have Fun." Magda says as she looks from Jinny to the baby. "No no wait. I can't get him to stop bawling." Jin says. "Just give him a warm bottle and he may need to be changed." Magda says as she starts to walk down the hall. Jinny leans out the door and says,"Thanks for all you Help." Then shuts the door. Jin puts the baby back in the bassinet and brings the formula and the bottle into the Kitchen. She reads the directions on the label of the formula and makes a bottle. "That wasn't too hard." she says to herself. Jinny walks back into the living room picks the baby up and sits down on the couch with it. Puts the bottle up to his mouth,but he refuses it and crys harder. "What's wrong doesn't it taste good,baby?" Jinny says in a low voice. She trys to give it to him once again. Again he refuses. Jin thinks back to what Magda said,and realizes he may need to be changed. She grabs the diaper back from the coffee table beside her and lies the baby on the couch. "Okay,just hang on. I've never done this before." She explains to the baby. Jinny undoes the diaper from the baby. Takes a wipe and washes him off and begins to put a new diaper on him. The baby slowly stops crying. She finishes with the diaper and picks him back up. She gives him the bottle again. He begins to cry again. "What's wrong little guy?" She asks.

**Station**
Magda is at her desk going through some papers. "I wonder how Jinny's doing with the baby." Angela says curious. Magda looks up. "When I was there he was screaming,and she looked like she was about to scream!" Mag laughs. "Poor Jinny she doesn't know anything about kids." C.D. says. Captain walks out of the office. "What about Jinny?" Cap asks. "Oh nothing just wondering how she's doing." Magda says. "Ooh,She'll do fine!" Captain says.

great!

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God bless you one and all.
~~~<@ Kenzie @>~~~

"Greater love hath no man than this, that he lay down his life for his friend."
§ John 15:13 KJV §

This is great keep up the work .

Jeanie

Thanks You everyone who is Still Reading! I know it's long!

**Jinny's House**
The baby is screaming at the top of his lungs. Jinny is pacing back and forth with him in her arms. "Okay,that's it." Jinny says as she walks to the phone and picks it up. She dials Magda's Cell phone number. "Ramirez." Magda answers. "Hey Mag. I need your help the kid won't stop crying." Jinny says. "Hey Jin, Well did you feed him?" Magda asks. "No, I tried but he doesn't want it." Jinny reply's "Well what about change him?" Magda questions. "Already did. What else can I do? I'm walking him around my apartment." Jinny says trying to talk over the baby crying. "I don't know, Jin." Mag responds. "Is there anyway you can get here and help me out?" Jinny asks her partner. Magda shakes her head and says, "No Sorry,Jin. I have a witness for our case coming in this afternoon." "Okay. Thanks Anyway." Jinny says as she hangs the phone up. She bounces the baby alittle as she thinks. Jin picks the phone back up and dials her dad's number. "Hello You have reached John Exstead. Sorry I can't Come To the Phone right now but if you leave your name and number I'll get back to you As Soon As Possible." the answering machine says. Then it beeps. "Hey Dad *baby crying in the background* I need some advice about babysitting. Call be back A.S.A.P....Bye" Jinny says and hangs up. She walks to her room and back again. Finally she can't stand it anymore and picks up the phone and dial's Theodore's pager number . She didn't want to dial his cell phone number because she knew he was going to be in court today and wasn't sure if he was out yet. Jin hangs the phone up after she pages him. She walks the baby around again then trys to give him the bottle. Still he refuses and keeps crying. "Come on sweetie..Take the bottle" Jinny says in a sweet voice to the baby. The phone rings. Jin rushes to it and answers. "Hello?" She says anxiously. "Hey Jinny,what's up?" Theodore asks. "Theodore,I'm so glad you called. *baby crying in the back ground*" Jinny says. Theodore interupts,"Is there something I should know about?" he laughs. "Yeah, Captain stuck me with baby sitting. Remember?" Jinny asks. "Oh that's right. So what's wrong,Jinny?" Theodore says. "Well, Everything I seem to do doesn't work. The baby has been crying ever sense I got home. I was hoping you could help me out." Jinny says talking over the crying. "Yeah sure. I don't know too much either,but I will be there in about 5-10 minutes." Thoeodore reply's. "Thank So Much,Teddy." Jinny says with a smile on her face. "See you when you get here." "Okay See You soon..Bye" Theodore says as he hangs up.



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#1_Nancy_Mckeon keep up the good work with the story where they found the baby!!!

Mine are all long too! hehe! Awesome Job...keep it up!

AWESOME X 999,999,999,999,999,999,000!!!!!!!!!!!
You get the point!

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God bless you one and all.
~~~<@ Kenzie @>~~~

"Greater love hath no man than this, that he lay down his life for his friend."
§ John 15:13 KJV §

Standing Ovation! This fic is great. And the longer the better I say! PLEEZE post more soon...I'm on the edge of my seat! literally!


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About 15 minutes after Jinny hangs the phone up there's a knock at the door. She walks to the door with the baby resting on her hip,still crying. Jin opens the door. "Hey Jinny" Theodore says as he leans down and pecks her on the lips. "Hey" she says exaspirated. "Well well look at this." Theodore steps back and looks at Jinny holding the baby. Jinny laughs and says,"Yeah yeah Kodak Moment." Baby is still crying. Teddy walks into the door and closes it behind him. He takes off his coat and hangs it up. "May I?" Theodore motions to hold the baby. "Go right ahead." Jinny says passing the baby to Theodore. Teddy takes the baby. "Aww, He's so sweet" He looks down at the crying baby. "Yeah he is,but he's been crying the whole time." She looks at her watch then back at Theodore. "45 minutes." "Ooh,wow,Where's his bottle?" Theodore asks. "Uhh,right here." Jinny says as she walks over to the coffee table and picks it up. Theodore takes the bottle,walks to the couch and sits. He puts the bottle up to the baby's mouth. It takes the bottle and begins to drink. Jinny watches in amazement. "How'd you do that?" She asks. "Do what?" Theodore asks. "Everytime I offered the bottle he refused!!" She says. Theodore shrugs and says,"Come on Jinny. Sit down and enjoy the silence." Jinny smiles, walks to the couch and sits. Teddy works it out so he can hold the baby and the bottle with one hand and put his arm around Jinny. Jin leans on him. The baby falls asleep and stops sucking the bottle. Theodore realizes this and slowly moves the bottle away from the baby. Jinny takes it and puts it on the coffee table once again.

**Station**
C.D. looks at her watch then asks Angela and Magda "Either of you want to go grab a bite to eat?" Angela looks at her watch and thinks then says," No Sorry C.D. not tonight I have some stuff I have to get done before Daniel gets home." "Oh okay,No Problem. What about you Magda?" C.D. asks. "Yeah why not." Magda says glancing at her watch. "Great, Anchorside?" C.D. questions. "Sounds good!" Magda reply's. C.D. gets up and grabs her coat and begins to put it on. Magda takes a last look through some papers and stands up aswell. Angela stays seated at her desk and thinks. C.D. walks toward the door and says ,"Let's get going." "Right behind you." Magda says then kisses her two fingers,leans over and presses them on a picture of her son on her desk as she goes to leave.

Here's some more-

Angela is then left alone sitting at her desk. She looks around the empty Division then toward Captain's Office where she is still seated looking through some files on her desk. Ang gets up and gets her coat from the coat hanger. She puts it on and walks towards Captain's office. Angela knocks on the open door. Captain looks up from her papers, "Yes?" "Oh I just came to say Good Night,Captain." Angela reply's. Cap smiles and reply's,"Good Night ,Inspector,See you in the morning." Ang smiles and walks back through the Division and out the door.

**Jinny's House**
Jinny and Theodore is standing in the kitchen. Jinny is starting a pot of coffee. "So Jinny what do you think of having a little one around the house?" Theodore laughs. Jin turns around and leans on the counter and sighs. "It's harder then I thought it would be." She reply's. Theodore nods, walks over to her, and wraps his arms around her. Jinny leans on Theodore , lies her head near his shoulder,and closes her eyes.

**Anchorside**
Magda takes a sip of her drink and says, "Ben's the light of my life." "You know it's weird. I always have thought of my career to be my first priority. Now everything is happening in my life...." C.D. says as her voice drifts away and looks down at her drink in front of her. Magda squints her eyes alittle and shakes her head. "What do you mean?" She asks. "Oh nothing forget it." C.D. says as she looks up and forces a smile. "Yeah ,Okay." Mag reply's. "Wait a second. You're not..." "No.." C.D. interupts Magda. "Can't have kids..Remember?" Magda sips her drink and says," Yeah but some people." "Believe me Magda I'm not. I was talking about the situation with my husband." C.D. says and laughs.

I want more-more-more! Like that taste of good reading I been looking for. Give me more-more-more!


ks


p.s. I know...corny. But I'm so bored and hyper! PLEASE MORE

Thank You! Here's Some More-

**Angela's House**
Angela puts her hand in her purse and pulls out her keys. She unlocks the door and walks in. Ang is carrying a plastic sack. Walks straight upstairs into her room. She puts her purse on the nightstand and sits down on the edge of her bed. Puts the bag down. Reaches her hand inside and pulls out a Home Pregnancy Test. She takes a deep breath opens it up and reads the instructions.

**Jinny's House**
Jinny comes down the hallway wearing loose black pants and a t-shirt . Drying her hair. She walks by the bassinet , looks down at the Sleeping baby and walks toward the kitchen. Theodore has his back toward her fixing some coffee. He turns around to get the sugar in the cupboard. "Oh Hi Jin. I'm just uh making some coffee. Would you like some.?" He says kind of startled. Jin smiles and reply's, "That'd be great,Teddy." she smiles. Theodore smiles back and takes the sugar out and reaches up and grabs two Coffee cups out of the cupboard. Jin walks further into the kitchen and stands near Theodore and leans against the counter. "I seen you got the baby to sleep." She says breaking the silence. Teddy glances over and nods. "Yeah. I uh just walked him around alittle and before I knew it he was asleep. So I came in here and decided to make some coffee." He says motioning to the coffee. Jinny smiles alittle and nods.
Theodore finishes with the coffee and hands Jinny a cup. "Thanks" She says as they walk into the living room slowly. Theodore sits on the couch. Jin walks next to the bassinet and looks into it at the baby. She looks at Theodore and says,"He's pretty cute,huh?" she smiles. "Yeah,Jinny. He's cute." Theodore says softly. Jinny walks over to where Theodore is sitting and sits. Just as shes about to lean back the baby begins to cry. She sits back up and looks at Theodore.

**Angela's House**
Angela walks out of the bathroom. She looks nervous. Walks over to her bed sits down,and stands back up. "I'll go get some coffee" she says quietly to herself. To get her mind off the test.

You are a very talented writer. Keep up the good work. Like your story. One of my favorites.

Jeanie

Here's Some More..It will be finished in the next post

**Anchorside**
Magda looks at her watch. "Well speaking of kids. I've got to get home to Ben. He's probably still up. Got to tell him a story." She laughs. "Have Fun" C.D. says as Magda gets up. Mag tosses some money on the table to pay for her drink and walks toward the door. As she about reaches the door Captain walks in. "Hey Cap" Magda says as she walks closer toward Captain. "Hey Magda" Kate reply's holding the door open so Mag can exit. C.D. is sitting alone at a table. Kate catches a glimpse of C.D and walks over. "Mind if I join ya?" Captain asks. C.D. looks up from her drink at Captain and says," Oh no, sit down." in a quiet voice. Cap smiles and takes a seat. The waitress walks over. "May I get you something?" she asks. "Yeah just a beer." Kate reply's. Waitress nods and walks off. Kate looks at C.D. "Hard day today?" she questions. C.D. looks back at Captain. "Uh..Yeah." she reply's. "Anything on your mind, C.D?" C.D. looks up, "Nothing I can't handle." she takes another sip of her beer. Cap comments,"Well you know if you ever need to talk." C.D. interupts," Thanks,Cap I know."
The Waitress comes back and sets the beer down infront of Kate. "Thanks." Cap glances up to the waitress quickly then to her drink. She takes a sip. C.D. puts her hand to her cheek and runs it down the side of her face. She looks as if she is thinking about something . Captain takes a sip of her drink. Both are quiet for several minutes. Kate then takes another sip of her beer and is about to say something. Before she could get a word out C.D. says,"My husband's cheating on me,again!"she rubs her hand over her forehead. Trying to hold back the tears. "Oh, C.D., I'm " Captain begins to say before C.D. interupts shaking her head as she says, "Don't say it. I've heard that so many times from Paul." A tear runs down her face. She rubs it away very quickly and finishes her beer. Kate doesn't know what to say so she puts her hand on C.D. shoulder.

**Angela's House**
Angela walks back into her room with some coffee. She begins to walk toward the bathroom,but stops. "If I am pregnant it will change me for the rest of my life. Am I ready for a baby?" she thinks. Ang begins to walk again. She arrives in the bathroom and puts down her coffee cup on the sink. Takes a deep breath and picks up the test. She looks at it nervously then picks the instructions up. She looks at the directions to the test. Then back to the directions. Ang looks back at the test in disbelief. "I-I'm pregnant" she takes a breath. She puts the test on the counter and walks into the room and sits on the bed.

GREAT, keep it up! awesome!

This is probably the most thorough thick I have ever read. I LOVE it! Pleeze write more soon!

ks

Okay here is the end. Sorry it took me so long to post it I went to Las Vegas for the weekend with my Dad.

**Jinny's House**
Jinny is sitting on the couch with the baby asleep on her chest. "See Jin. You did it." Theodore says gently as he puts his arm around Jinny. She leans over slightly and their lips meet in a soft kiss. It slowly breaks off. "I.." her voice trails off. "What Jinny?" Theodore questions. Jinny gets up and walks over to the bassinet and puts the baby in it. She turns around and looks straight at Theodore and says, "I Love You." Teddy's eyes light up alittle. "You do? You love me?" he smiles. Jinny looks at him and nods unsure of what he is going to say. "I love You too,Jinny." He stands up and slowly walks over to her. Theodore puts his hands on her shoulders and looks down at her. "I have for a long time. I just didn't know...You felt the same. I was afraid I'd push you away." he confesses. Jinny looks up at him and smiles. "You need to learn to take a chance ,Councelor." Jinny reply's as she leans up and kisses him.

The End.
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"MysteryJoFan" , "Jeanie" , "Ashley A.K.A. Captain." for sticking by me and reading it all the time and giving me ideas. Advice on what I could change,etc. Thanks So Much You Three! I apperciate it! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

And Last but certainly not least..Everyone who has been reading and following along with this story!! I hope you all enjoyed it!

P.S.- I'm starting another Fan-Fiction already. I will be posting it soon. Plus I will be posting all my finished fan-fictions on my Division Site. (Address located at the top of the page) THANKS EVERYONE!


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Magda : "What would you do if a guy didnt call? "
Jinny:"Oh, they always call. They want to know me, they want to be a part of my life. They want to share."
Magda: "But if they didn't? "
Jinny: I would breathe a great big sigh of relief unless of course I liked him then i would just hunt him down and slash his tires.

[This message has been edited by #1_Nancy_McKeon (edited 05-01-2001).]

Glad to see you made it back. Hope you had a good time. Like your story. Can't wait for the next one.

Jeanie