all those people were going to do sumthing like this....go right ahead! Any way here's the start of my fanfic

Jinny walked in the door from a hard days work. She sat on the couch and took her jacket off. she leaned back and sighed. Just then there was a knock at the door.
"What" Jinny asked with her stubborn additude. Teddy walked in the door.
"I wanted to see you?" he questioned, making sure it was a good answer. Jinny smiled and motioned him to come on the couch.
"Come here" Jinny continued smiling until Teddy sat on the couch. The minute he did, Jinny jumped on him. The started kissing, and Teddy layed back to get comfortable. Jinny started to unbutton his shirt when the phone rang. "Damit!" She yelled as she rolled of the couch and got the phone. "Ya" She said as she answered it. "What?" She paused and continued to listen "Ya ya I'll be there as soon as I can" She hung up the phone and grabbed her coat.
"What?" Teddy asked very worried. He got up and put his arms around her stomach.
"My...my mothers parents killed themselves." She said a little surprised. "I have to go down there."
"Do you want me to come" Teddy aske worried.
"No..The last time i saw them was 15 years ago. Then a year later my mother died." Jinny answered as she walked to the door the best she could with Teddy around her. "Listen, you can stay here for a while, but i got to fly to New York." She said as she opened the door.
"New York!" Teddy yelled. "I wont see you for a week"
"I love you, but I got to go." she kissed him and left.



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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

Keep going please!!!!!

ok Here's some more

Jinny slowly walked up the stairs to her grandparents house. There were police cars outside, and police men inside. She walked in and looked around
"Can I help you?" A inspector said as he walked up to Jinny.
"I'm inspector Jinny Exstead" She said. Then she looked around. "This is my grandparents house."
"Oh, ok. you can look around." The man said as he walked away. Jinny walked into the very bright livingroom. She went over to the banaster, and looked at the pictures. She saw her mother and father's picture, her grandparents picture, then a picture of a 14 year old girl. Jinny looked at it for a while. She had hair about the length of Jinny's, and the same color. Jinny stared at the picture for a while, then picked it up and walked over to the inspector she had talked too before.
"Who's this?" Jinny asked showing the man the picture.
"Oh, this is their granddaughter" He said pointing to the picture "Jessy. She lives here with them. Her mother is dead and the rest of her family, or your family, lives in San fransico. I think your gandmother said she had 2 brothers and a sister."
"Did she mention any names."

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Blair- When I was little I used to be afraid of the Boogie Man and my daddy would say "don't worry hunny. we own the Boogie Man!

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ok, sorry to cut it short last time, but my cuzin with cancer came over. Anyway here's some more.
"No, but she did mention something about them being cops. And Jessy father was a cop too, but he retired. I think her fathers name is John."
"Oh my god!" Jinny said as she kind of fell back. "Where is Jessy?" She asked as she stood back up straight.
"She doesn't know about your grandparents yet. She's still in school. We are going to send someone to tell....." He was interupted by Jinny
"No! I'll go tell her." Jinny said quickly "Where's the school."
"It's down the block. Are you sure." the inspector said un sure about what she was doing.
"Ya, I wanna meet my little sister." Jinny said quietly as she walked out the door.

At the School
There was the girl in the picture. She sitting talking to her frineds when their was an annoucment throught the school
"Whould Jessy Exstead please come to the office. There is someone here to see you."
Jessy looked confused, but slowly went downstairs. When she got to the office, Jinny was standing there. Jinny looked over, saw Jessy, and almost fell over again.
"Are you lookin' for me?" Jessy asked Jinny, who took a few minutes to answer.
"Ya, I'm inspector..." She paused. She didnt want Jessy to know that they were sisters yet. "Inspector Rameriez" She said after a long pause. "I'm afraid I have some bad news...your grandparents are dead" Jinny walked closer to Jessy, and just wanted to hug her.
"How?" Jessy said, not very sad.
"They killed them selves" Jinny said as she walked next to Jessy. "Do you want to talk this over outside?"
"Ya, lets get the hell out of here!" Jessy said as she ran out the door. Jinny followed her, and they walked down the street. "No they didn't" Jessy told Jinny as they continued walking.
"What?" Jinny asked, very confused.
"My grandparents didn't kill themselves." Jessy said, very sure of herslef.
"What do you mean?" Jinny asked, now even more confused.
"You don't know how my grandparents are! Everyday they go to church. They used to tell me all the time that God would takes us when he wants to take us, not when we want to be takin. They wouldn't kill themselves. They were murdered." Jinny slowed down and looked at Jessy. She almost smiled, but didn't want to look weird smiling, after just hearing what she heard.
"You don't seem to upset over this." Jinny said, as they both walked over to a bench and sat down.
"Ya well...I lost my mother a long time ago. She died in labor, but I was saved. She was to old to have a child, but she didn't want to kill me. I've never seen my father, and he doesn't eve know about me. I have two brothers and a sister that live near him too. I figured it wasnt long until i lost the rest of my family." Jessy said as she put her head down.

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

OMG!! Write more!!! i love it sooo much!

this is awesome so far, cant wait for more!!!


by the way this is LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815, but i changed my online name and email address, just wanted to let u all know!

aaaaaaaaah write more soon! this is grrrrr8! (there go my frosted flakes again-lol)

ok here's some more:
After a while, Jessy picked her head back up, and stood up.
"I'm hungry" She said as she turned around and looked at Jinny. "Lets go grab something a Dino's down the street" She said as she started walking. Jinny stood up and followed her
"Dino's?" Jinny asked
"Ya, it's a pizza place. You do like pizza, don't you?"
"Ya" Jinny said, laughing at Jessy's sarcasim "Lets go"

Later, after they had eatin, Jinny took Jessy back home. All the police men were gone, and her grandparents body's had been takin for an autopsy (sp).
"So, where you going to stay?" Jinny asked as they went over and sat on the couch.
"Here." Jessy said as she put her feet on the coffee table. "I live her, don't I"
"Ya, but you need a guardian" Jinny said.
"So.." Jessy said, not getting the point
"You don't have one" Jinny said sarcasticly
"Who are you, and why do you care so much" Jessy said angrerly, changing the subject. "I don't know you, and believe me, I know every cop in New England"
"I..I..I don't know" Jinny said questioning herself.
"You don't know who you are?" Jessy said sarcasticly.
"No! Never mind" Jinny said as she got up. "I'm coming to get you in the morning, and your coming with me." Jinny walked out to her car, without letting Jessy say anything. Jessy just stood near the door, very surprised. When Jinny drove off, Jessy went and sat on the couch. She felt like she new Jinny, and had seen her before. Then she remembered she had. Her grandparents kept every news paper for the year. Jessy went and looked through out the news papers. It was then she saw a picture of Jinny, next to John and Casey, and a picture of Darrel Sunstrem (the man the tried to kill jinny). Jessy read the article, which said:
Darrel Sunstrem was arrested last night in San Fransico for attempted murder of Inspector Jinny Exstead. Jinny and her brothers (look to picture at left) who are also cops, caught him in the action, before he could do anything....
Jessy was shocked. Jinny was her sister! Jessy stood up, and walked over to the couch with the news paper.
"Thats why she cared so much. But why didn't she tell me?" Jessy said quietly outloud. Jessy just sat there and continued to wonder. Then she picked up a pair of sissors, which were on the table, cut out the picture of Jinny, John, and Casey, and put it in her wallet.

The next morning, Jessy was sitting on the front steps when Jinny's rented car drove up. Jessy walked over, and got in the car.
"It's Thursday, you know" Jessy said, knowing she was supposed to be in school.
"Thanks for the 411" Jinny said as she laughed quietly to herself. Jessy had decided that she would not tell Jinny she knew about them being sisters. She would wait for Jinny to tell her, because she knew that Jinny knew about it. (sorry if that didn't make sense)
"So..where are we going?" Jessy asked, looking out the window"
"Home" Jinny answered with a smile.

ok i g2g i have a boaring dance...o well, hope you like it

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

OMG OMG OMG!!!! MOR MOR MORE!

Oh BTW i dont think that NY is in new england....Is it??? I know NJ isnt.

OMG!!!! This is beyond awesome!!!! Please post more ASAP!!!!!

I'm glad you like it. here's some more

"Home?" Jessy questioned as she turned to look at Jinny "What do you mean by home?"
"I mean to our house" Jinny said sarcasticly
"OUR house? Where exactly is OUR house?" Jessy questioned, having a feeling she was going to San Fransico.
"At MY house" Jinny said, mocking Jessy.
"I don't want to move to California!!" She yelled, then realized that she wasn't supposed to say that.
"How did you know I lived in California?" Jinny questioned nervously. Jessy took out her wallet and showed Jinny the picture of Jinny, John, and Casey.
"I dunno...Jinny Exstead" Jessy said madly.
Jinny looked at the picture and realized that Jessy knew.
"I'm sorry, but I didn't know how to tell you." Jinny said sadly.
"You know ..Hey Jessy I'm your sister Jinny...would have been fine." Jessy said, talking with her hands, just like Jinny. Jinny just looked at Jessy, and didn't say anthing. after a while, she finaly spoke up.
"Hey Jessy, I'm your sister Jinny." Jinny said, hoping to get a smile out of Jessy.
"It's a little late!" Jessy said, looking back out the window.
"Why are you so stu..." Jinny paused and realized she was just lik her. "Stuborn"
"Ya, well..." Jessy said, still looking out the window. "I don't want to move to California. All my friends are here. My boyfriend is here..my teachers and neighbors are here! Why are you making me move. I don't want to live with dad! I don't even know him." Jessy argued, while Jinny just listened.
"First of all..." Jinny started "Your moving because I said so. Second of all your not living with dad, your living with me." Jinny looked over at Jessy, waiting for a response.
"What about my stuff?" Jessy asked?
"Is there anything you want back at the house?" Jinny said.
"No" Jessy said "as long as you buy me clothes...I'll survive." Jessy said, not sounding so mad.
"Good, because our plane leaves in two hours" Jinny said as she pulled the car into the rent-a-car place. "You'll like it in Cali" Jinny said, just getting a mad look from Jessy.

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

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Pwease?

Sorry I'm sugar-high, http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif But this is REALLY good.~Jessica

That was me up there.... No clue what happened?

MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!! Please!!!

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!! i am on the edge of my seat!!!

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Jinny: She's got a bug up her a$$ for me!

Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

ok, here's some more!

Jinny and Jessy got out of the car, as the man got in it and drove away. They both walked over to the bus stop and sat down on the bench. But right away Jessy stood back up.
"2 hours you said?" Jessy asked a she smirked a little
"Ya, our plane leaves in 2 hours. Do I need to spell it out for you?" Jinny asked sarcasticly.
"I'll be at the airport in two hours, ok?" Jessy said as she started to walk away.
"What? Where are you going? Come back here" Jinny said as she stood up.
"I'll see you in two hours!" Jessy said as she ran down the street. Jinny didn't know what to do, so she just waited for the bus.

Jessy ran down the street for a few minutes, until she came to a cemitary. It was a big cemitary, with big, locked gates.

i g2g write more later


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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

[This message has been edited by Polniaczek-Bonner (edited 04-07-2001).]

Keep going...I love this fan-fic!!!!!! Please give me MORE!!!!!

Thank you for all your complements (I cant spell) Here's some more:

Jessy ran down the street for a few minutes, until she came to a cemitary. It was a big cemitary, with big, locked gates. She quickly jumped up on the gate, pulled herself over, and jumped on the ground. She ran through the cemitary, jumping over graves, until she came to a heart shaped one.
It said on it : Virginia Jessica Exstead
Loving wife and mother
1940-1986

Jessy kneelt down, and took out her wallet. She placed the picture of Jinny, Casey, and John, on top of the grave stone.
"I found them, mom" She said as a tear fell down her face. "For you mom, I found them." She looked down at the ground for a while, but then looked at her watch. "Well, I hafta go see Zak. Bye mom" She said as she stood up, and ran back to the gates.\

Jinny was at the airport, and the plane left in 20 mins. She had no idea where Jessy was, or even if she was coming. Just then she looked up, and saw Jessy with a tall, blonde haired kid, that looked like he was 16. Jinny got up, walked over to them, and looked at the boy.
"Who in the hell are you?" She asked meanly.
"Jinny, this is my boyfriend Zak. Zak, this is my sister Jinny." Jessy said as the two strangers looked at each other.
"You can't date him! He's to old for you!" Jinny said as she pulled Jessy away.
"He's only 3 months older then me. He's 14" Jessy said, pulling herself back.
"Oh" Jinny said. Then they heard a call for their flight. "Well, thats us, lets go." She said as she started walking. Jessy looked up at zak. She now had a backpack, with zak's name on it.
"Good-bye" Jessy said as she looked into his eyes.
"Bye" He said as he gave her a kiss. "I love you"
"I love you too" Jessy said, as she ran after Jinny.

Jinny and Jessy pulled up to the apartment in Jinny's car.
"Where's our HOUSE" Jessy said, looking at the apartment.
"Well..." Jinny said, looking at the apartment "It's not EXACTLY a house" Jinny said sarcasticly. "It's an apartment!"
"I can see that." Jessy said, as she got out of the car.

When Jinny opened the door, Teddy jumped up, and hugged her. Jessy just walked around them, and put her backpack on the couch. It took a while before Teddy noticed her, but when he, he looked at her, then at Jinny, and then back at her.
"Is there something you want to tell me?" Teddy said, still looking back and forth. "Do you have a daughter that you just forgot to mention?" He said, very worried.
"Yes, I am aware that she is young enough to be my daughter, but she isn't. She's my sister, Jessy." Jinny said, as Teddy to a big sigh of relief. Then she turned to Jessy, who was sitting on the couch. "And Jessy, this is..." She paused, then smiled. "This is my boyfriend, Teddy" She said, as they looked into each other's eyes.
"So i can see" Jessy said angerly. "so, uh..where am I supposed to sleep?" She said, as she got up and looked around.
"You know, I don't know." Jinny said, looking around too.

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

ok here's more:

They walked around, looking for a while. But then Jinn walked into the living room and looked at the couch.
"There" she said very possative. "You can sleep on the couch."
"Ya!" Jessy said sarcasticly. "I moved from my nice big HOUSE, and my nice big room and BED, to this small APARTMENT, and to this small COUCH!" Jinny just looked at her, and didn't know what to say.
"Just deal with it, ok?" Jinny said, as she sat on the couch, next to Teddy.
"Hey" Jessy said immidetly "Get off my bed!" Jinny and Teddy looked at each other, but silently got up.
"well" Teddy said "It's late, I better be going" He walked over to the door, with Jinny right behind him. "It was nice meeting you, Jessy." He said as he opened the door.
"you too" Jessy said, sounding nice.
"Bye, you." Jinny said as she kissed him "Tomorrow, ok?"
"Ok. Bye" He left after a while of staring. Jinny shut the door, then looked at her clock.
"11:58" She said as she walked over to the couch. "I'm going to bed. Good-night" She started to walk in her room, when Jessy got up.
"Hey, listen, I'm sorry i've been so mean. I really appricate what your doing for me. Thanks." She said as she walked over to Jinny. It was then Jinny realized that she was going to have Jessy forever, and she would never leave. Jinny couldn't take it anymore. she through her arms around Jessy and started cry.
"I'm sorry I was never there before!" Jinny said through her tears. "I'm very very sorry!"

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

WOW!!!! Your fan-fics rule!!! everyones do!! Keep going please.

LOVE IT!

Please write more...i am dying to read more!!!!!

At first, Jessy was surprised, and just stood there as Jinny hugged her. Then she started to get all teary eyed as she herself realized she would always have family.
"It's ok" Jessy said as she sucked her tears up. "It wasn't your fault. It was mom's fault" Jinny stepped back when Jessy said that.
"I forgot about mom" She said "Why is this her fault."
"She knew she was pregnant when she left home and moved to New York. She didn't tell dad, you, John, or Casey. Then she died when I was born. So you didn't even know about me." Jessy said as she went over to sit on the couch. Jinny sat down next to her and hugged her again. After a while Jinny got up, and started to go in her room.
"Co'mon" She said as she told Jessy to come with her.
"What?" Jessy asked as she followed Jinny
"I'm not gonna make you sleep on the couch" Jinny said as they both went in her room.
"I'm not sleeping in the bed with you!" Jessy said as she shook her head. Jinny started to laugh. She walked over and hugged Jessy.
"You can sleep on the bed, I'll sleep on the couch. But just for tonight" She said, continuing to laugh. She walked over and hugged Jessy. "Tomorrow we'll go shopping for clothes after we go to work."
"What do you mean we?" Jessy asked
"You hafta come to work with me. I want you to meet my friends and co-workers." Jinny said as she started to walk into the living room. "good-night"


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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooohhhhh! MORE!!!

This is good!!!!!!!!!!

wow this is exciting!! such a great story!!

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Ms G: Natalie why dont you show Jo a better place to park her bike
Jo: why dont I park it on Blairs face?
Natalie: shes a breath of fresh air isnt she??

Please wirte more this is sooooo good!!!!!

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Jinny: She's got a bug up her a$$ for me!

Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

u gotzda write more soon k?

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Blair- When I was little I used to be afraid of the Boogie Man and my daddy would say "don't worry hunny. we own the Boogie Man!

ok...here's some more

The next morning, Jinny walked into the station, but with no 1 following her.
"hey, Jinny." Magdna said, looking up from her desk.
"Oh, hey Jin" CD said as she walked by.
"Hey guys. Where's Angela?" Jinny said, as she stood in the middle of the room.
"She's in the bathroom" Cd said as she walked back over to her desk.
"Oh" Jinny said as she walked over to her desk. Just then, Jessy came in the Division.
"ok, i found the snack machine." She said as she walked towards the middle of the room. Everyone just kinda looked at her for a while. Then the Captain came in, and looked at everyone looking at Jessy.
"What!?" She said finally.
"Can I help you?" Captain said, as she walked over to Jessy.
"No, thanks, I'm fine" Jessy said, clulessly
"Oh" Jinny said getting up. She laughed a little (like jo did) and walked over to Jessy. "I suppose I should introdce you." She said, as she put her arm around Jessy.
"I suppose you should" The captian said meanly.
"This is my..." She started, but was interupted
"You have a dughter! I knew it. Thats why your scared of relationships. Why didn't you...." Magdna started, as Jinny cut back in.
"My SISTER, Jessy. Jessy this is everone." Jinny said as she backed away, so everyone could say hi.
"Ohh" Magnda said, a little embarressed. "Hi, I'm magdna" She said as she put out her hand.
"Jessy" Jessy said as she shook it. Then magdna backed off, and CD walked over to Jessy.
"Hey, Jessy, I'm CD" CD said as she stuck out her hand
"Hey" Jessy said, as she shook it. Then CD backed off, and the Captian walked over.
"Oh great" She said madly "Just what we need, someone else to cause problems."
"Hey, lady" Jessy said "I aint causin' no problems. Stay outta my way, and I'll stay outta yours." The captian just looked at her for a while
"Yep, Jin" Captian started "She's yours alright." The Captian walked back into her office as Jinny and Jessy just gave her a dirtly look. Just then, a man came in through the door holding a gun to a womans head.
"Hey, back off" He said to cops who were following him. Then he truned and looked at the 3 women and 1 girl who were standing there.
"I'm lookin' for a Kate McArrerty" He said as he walked further into the room, and pretty close to Jessy.
"I'm Kate" Captian said as she walked out of her office, to see the man, holding her daughter with a gun to her head.

i'll leave u in suspence. I'll write more later. Hope you like it so far.

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! You have to write more!!!


PS its McCaferty..and Magda. BUT HIS STORY ROX ANYWAY

even though i already know whatz gonna happen...im still in suspence! please write more asap! well don't rush urself or anything! hehe

This is good...post more ASAP!!!! please!!!

PLEASE!!!! WRIT MORE!!! i am in suspense yes! So write more!!!!!

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Jinny: She's got a bug up her a$$ for me!

Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

uhm, ok, this is kinda hard for me no, but since I'm still drunk, (I'm sorry, I've just never been good at showing feelings and stuff) I enjoed ALL OF YOUR FANFICS ( not just this one, ALL) cya later, cat

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GIRL: "She said he was good in bed. REALLY, REALLY, goood."
C.D.: "That narrows down the field."

C.D.: "What's that?"
Angela: "My checklist."
C.D.: "You forgot the most important thing."
Angela: "What's that?"
C.D.: "Lunch!"

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~Break my face, my back, my arms, my neck, but please don't break my heart!~ K's Choice

~Your silence makes more noise than thunder~ K's Choice

~Oh God, thy sea is so great and my boat is so small.~ 13 Days

~Some dance to remember, some dance to forget~ Hotel California

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I'm sorry about the spelling mistakes. I'm not the best speller, and you could tell. Any way here's some more:

"What are you doing" Captian said calmly as she walked closer to him. "Leave my daughter alone" She said as she stopped next to Jessy.
"Because of your mistake, I'm going to kill her" The man said. He had dark hair, dark eyes, and was tall and skinny.
"What mistake" The captian said, her voice getting all shaky.
"You put me in prison" He said
"Well, thats there job" Jessy said, very calmly. The captian gave her a mad glance, then turned back to the man.
"I wasn't guilty, and I still had to serve 4 years in prison! I didn't do it. I sware I didn't drink then drive."
"Well" Captain said, almost starting to cry. "Your out now, and everythings in the past. Now, give me the gun. come on, give me the gun." Everyone could tell she was scared.
"No" The man yelled as he was about to pull the triger, when Jessy kicked the gun out of his hands. It hit the ground, then fired a bullet. No one thought anything of it, as they all ran over to Amanda. It wasn't until they heard a loud crash, that they turned around. Jessy was lying there, totally unconsious, and bleeding really bad.
"Oh my GOD" Jinny yelled as she ran over to her. "Call 911! What are you waiting for? Call 911." She was hysterical. She didn't know what to do. Tears were flying down her face. Everyone, including Amanda, rushed over to her, as uniforms took the man away.
"She did this to save my life" Amanda said, feeling gulity.
"I guess she really is like you, Jin" The captian said to Jinny, very nicly, with tears from her face. Jinny just looked at her with pain on her face. Then she immeditaly turned back to Jessy.
"Wake up! Please don't let this happen again! Please wake up."

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

wow...this is really gr8! i luv!

huh? why what? I don't know, I'm still drunk, and I just noticed I have opened this reply thing, oh I remember what I wanted to say!


yeah right, don't you think it's funny that the only one here, who's the biggest CD fan turns out to be more like Jinny /being drunk and all?) I LOVE TRACEY ANYWAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! TRACEY I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!

BTW, Jinny is my second fav, and I regret (like I usually do) not to be born in the States (but now not only because of the usual reasons, but because I'd love to have seen FOL as well!) NANCY; YOU'RE GREAT; AND I ALMOST LOVE YOU AS MUCH AS TRACEY AND THAT MEANS A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!

~cat~

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GIRL: "She said he was good in bed. REALLY, REALLY, goood."
C.D.: "That narrows down the field."

C.D.: "What's that?"
Angela: "My checklist."
C.D.: "You forgot the most important thing."
Angela: "What's that?"
C.D.: "Lunch!"

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~Break my face, my back, my arms, my neck, but please don't break my heart!~ K's Choice

~Your silence makes more noise than thunder~ K's Choice

~Oh God, thy sea is so great and my boat is so small.~ 13 Days

~Some dance to remember, some dance to forget~ Hotel California

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I love all fan fics but I want to know what happens post more soon!!!!

At the Hospital

Jinny was pacing back and forth, along with Casey and her father. John, Magdna, CD, Cpatin, Amanda, and Teddy all sat around, waiting.
"I can't believe I have another girl" Jinny's father said, as tears fell down his face.
"We never even got to meet her" Casey said, as he slowly sat down.
"Don't talk like that" Jinny said "you'll get to meet her as soon as she comes out of surgery"
"Ya" John said, very firmly. then he turned to Jinny "It was only her hip, right?"
"Ya, her left hip" Jinny said, as she slowly sat down next to Casey.
"You want to go get something to eat, Jinn?" Teddy asked. "Just down in the cafeteria"
"Ok" Jinny said as she got up and walked towards Teddy "Come get us if anything happens, ok guys?"
"Ya, sure" Mag said as she looked worried "Have fun"
"Ya, fun" Jinny said sarcasticly, while she walked away with Teddy

In the cafeteria, Jinny was silent.
"Please talk" Teddy begged "I've never seen you so quiet. Even when you were almost killed."
"Ya, well" Jinny said, as she poked at her food. "I'm resbonsable for Jessy. She has no one else" A tear fromed in her eye. "I mean, I just met her two days ago, and she's already close to me." Jinny looked up at Teddy, as a tear fell down her face.
"Hey, it's ok" Teddy asured her "She's going to live. Don't worry"
"I know she's going to live, but will she forgive me?" Jinny asked, starting to cry
"Forgive you?" Teddy questoned. "There's nothing to forgive you for. You didn't do anything"
"Yes I did" Jinny snapped "I took her away from her home, from her friends, from her teachers and neighbors, and even from her boyfriend. Then I take her to live in a 3 room apartment, where she has to sleep on the couch." She looked back down.
"Ahh" Teddy didn't know what to say.
"Then.." Jinny started again "I bring her to work, and she gets shot! Wow, am i a good sister or what!" Jinny stoped crying and stood up. "We better go back" She got up and started to walk.
"Ah..ya" Teddy said as he jumped up and followed her


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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

well, i'm board, so i'll write a little more:

When Jinny and Teddy walked into the waiting room, everyone was gone.
"What the hell?" Jinny said as she looked around "Where's they go?"
"We're right here" CD said with a smile on her face.
"Ya, Jessy came out of surgery and we went to go see her" Amanda said, feeling like it was still her fault. Jinny took the biggest sigh of reief.
"Thank you God" She said as she smile.
"WE still haven't gone in" Jinny's dad said as him, John and Casey walked over to Jinny.
"We want you to introduce us" Casey said.
"Ok" Jinny said as she patted her brothers on the back "lets go" all four of them started walking towards the room, when Jinny stoped "Where's Captian?" She asked as she turned around.
"She's still in there, thanking Jessy for what she did. Mag is trying to get her out." CD said as she sat down with Amanda and Teddy.
"oh" Jinny said as she turned back around ans continued walking.
"Wait" Teddy said as he jumped up "I'm coming"
"Ok.." Jinny said as she stoped again and waited for him to catch up "Lets go"

In the room, the captian was crying, and Mag was sitting in a chair next to the bed.
"Thank you very much" Captian kept saying.
"I'm very rough on Jinny. I know that. But it's only because she reminds me so much of myself when I was younger. I made a lot of mistakes, and I don't want Jinny to do the same thing" she paused and took a deep breath, and didn't realize Jinny and company were standing in the door way. "You are so much like your sister. Please stay that way. She is one of the best cops I've seen in a long time." Captian wipped the tears from her face.
"Ok" Jessy said "I'll be glad to stay this way" She smiled, and then the captian smiled and turned around. When she saw Jinny, she jumped.
"How much of that did you hear?" Captian asked nervously.
"Enough" Jinny said as she smiled and hugged the Captian.
"C'mon Captain" Mag said as she got up. "Let them have time to theirselves." She smiled at Jinny and Jinny smiled back.
"Your right" Captian said as her and Mag walked out of the room
"Hey Jess" Jinny said as she walked up to her. "How ya feelin'?"
"I've been better" Jessy said as she laughed a little. Then she looked at the four men behind her. "ok, I know that one" She said pointing at Teddy "But who are they?" Pointing to her family.
"Oh my God" Jinny's dad said as he walked over to Jessy "You look just like your mother" a tear fell down his face, as he got to her bed.
"Touching" Jessy said sarcasticly just like her sister. Then she put her head down for a while then looked at the man standing next to her. "dad?"
"Yes, Jessy-girl, I'm your dad" He said as he hugged her very tightly. They both had tears in their eyes. Finally he let go and backed off. Then John looked around and finally walked over
"Hey, kid" he said as nice as he could.
"Hey, John?" Jessy said as she looked at him.
"Ya, kid, thats me" He said as he gave her a hug. When he stood back up straight, he rubbed Jessy's head and messed up her hair. "And if anyone ever makes fun of your sister, you kick the **** outta them, aright?"
"Sure" She said as she laughed, and Jinny hit him lightly on the arm. He backed off, and then Casey walked over.
"Now i'm not the youngest" He said as he stood next to Jessy's bed.
"Casey, right" Jessy asked smiling.
"Yep" He answered as a tear fell from his eye, and he hugged her. When he was done, he looked at Jessy for a second. "Just so you know, I'm Gay" John rolled his eyes, and Jinny hit him.
"So?" Jessy asked "Is that supposed to matter?" She said sarcasticly. They all laughed and looked at her. Then Casey backed off and Jinny went over and hugged her very tightly.
"I love you" She said, still hugging Jessy.
"Me too" Jin's dad said.
"So do I" Casey said
"Do I have a choice?" John asked as he laughed. "Me too"
"I love you guys too" Jessy said as she tried to puch Jinny off her. "I need some air room" She said as she pulled away.
"Ya" Jinny said as she back away "Of corse"
Just then the doctor came in and handed Jinny a pair of cruches.
"She's going to need these for a few weeks." He said, as Jinny took them.
"ok..." Jin said as she walked over and put them on Jessy's bed.
"And she should also stay home from school for a week."
"Yes!!" Jessy yelled as she sat up, but then put her hand on her him "****" She said as she crunched her face up in pain.
"Well, we're gonna go" Jinny said "We'll come get you tomorrow"
"Ok" Jessy said "And Jinny, thanks"
"No problem" Jinny said as she walked out of the room with her 2 brothers, her father, and Teddy in front of her.


ok i g2g but they'll be more soon!

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

This is way cool...we need more!

MORREEEEE!!!!!! please this is great!!!

I'm glad u like it...here's more.

The next morning, after Jinny went to go get Jessy, they went back to the station. Jinny held the door for Jessy, as she wabled in the station, in a lot of pain.
"I didn't know being a hero hurt so bad!" Jessy said as she painfully sat in the chair next to Jinny's desk. Jinny tried hard not to laugh at her little sister, but she couldn't help it.
"Is this funny?" Jessy asked, very annoyed. "How bout I shoot you in the hip, and see how funny it is then!!!"

sorry i got to do my homework, but i'll write more later!

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

GREAT!! finish your homework and write more!!!

ok...I finished my hw too late last night, but I'm sick today so i'll write more:

Everyone laughed at what Jessy said, except Jinny. "Thats what I thought" Jessy said with a big smile on her face.
"ok, here's what we got today" Captian said as she came out of her office. "Angela and CD, there was a break in at a gas station" She said as she handed CD a folder. "And Jin, there was some progress on your grandparents "suicide." I want you and Mag to fly to New York, and work on it. And take Jessy with you. But after I'm done talking with her." Captian handed Jinny a folder, and motioned Jessy to come in her office.
"Ok, ok, hold on" Jessy said as she tried her best to get out of the chair. "Help?" She said sarcasticly while looking at Jinny.
"Oh, sorry." Jinny said as she helped her sister out of the chair. "I wonder what the Captian wants?" She asked Mag as Jessy wabeled away.
"Beats me" Mag said as she sat on Jinnys desk. "Are you going to be ok, I mean doing this case? I know it's gonna bring up bad memory's." Mag looked down at her partner, waiting for a response.
"Not bad memory's, just memory's" Jinny said as she looked up at Mag.

When Jessy walked in the Captains office, the Captian didn't look happy.
"Shut the door" She said angerly.
"ok.." Jessy said, cluless why this woman who couldn't stop thanking her yesterday, was so pissed at her today.
"Sit" Captain said as she leaned on the front of her desk
"Do I have too? I'l hafta...." Jessy started
"Sit!" Captian interupted.
"Ok, ok, I'm sitting" Jessy painfully sat down, and put her cruches next to her.
"I am very greatful for what you did" Captian started nicly. "But I never want to see it again" She finished meanly.
"What?" Jessy asked very confussed. "I saved your daughters life." she said with her sisters additude.
"Yes, but endangered the lives of everyone else. That gun could have hit the floor, and shot someone else." Captain said very angrey.
"Well, it didn't, did it?" Jessy said, still with that additude. "It hit me!"
"Thank God" Captain said immeditly.
"Well, your Welcome for being shot." Jessy said sarcasticly while painfully getting up.
"I'm not done"
"I don't care!" Jessy snapped as she grabbed her cruches. "Next time I'll let your daughters head be blown off!" She said, as she wabeled over to the door, and left.
"What was that all about?" Jinny asked as her sister came out of the office pissed.
"Captian's happy that I saved her daughters life, yet mad at the same time?" Jessy slowly managed to wable over to her sister.
"Excuse me" Jinny said as she got up and walked into the Captian's office. She slamed the door behind her, which got the Captians attention
"What?" Captian asked as she sat down at her desk
"You have no right to speak to my sister like that. She saved your daughters life!" Jinny yelled, as she walked over to the front of Captians desk. "1 more second and we would have had one god damn bloody mess!"
"She endangered the lives of not only herself, but you and everyone else in that room." Captian said as she leaned forward. "If you were sitting down in the chair at your desk, it would have got you right in the heart!"
"Why in the hell would I be sitting down when there's a man holding a gun to someone's head!" Jinny yelled quietly.
"You get my point"
"No! I don't! Next time we'll count how many pieces of your daughters head there are!" Jinny said madly, with her additude, and walked out of the room.
"C'mon, where going to New York" She said as she grabbed her coat. Mag and Jessy got up and followed her. "I'll meet you at the airport in an hour. First I have to go pack." She said to Mag as Mag walked out and nodded her head. Jinny turned and looked at Jessy. "This time your taking your clothes here with you" She smiled and followed Jessy out of the room.

I'll write more later!

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

wow this is really great! ugh..the captain's sooooooo obnoxious! i reallly don't like her! well w/e...i hope you feel better soon and i can't wait till we do our fanfic together! it'll be so much fun! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Luv yaz!
~Kerri~
Pal2125@aol.com

Jinny- Intimate? No. I mean, i sleep with him. But i sleep with all the guys in the divison. It's sorta how i break em' in."
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B- If I don't spend money soon i'm gonna pull my hair out!
J- good we'll finally get to see what color the roots are.

I can't wait either....anyway here's more.

Jinny, magdna, and Jessy pulled up to Jessy's old house. There were about 6 teenagers sitting on the porch. They were all boys. When Jessy got out of the car, they all ran over to her.
"looks like Jessy is popular with the boys, too" Mag said.
"Hey" Jinny snapped, and she looked meanly at her partner. One of the boys that was there, was Zak, the boy from the airport. All the boys backed away as he walked slowly over to Jessy. They looked at each other for a while, but then got into a serious kiss. Jinny cleared her throat, to stop the kissing.
"oh, Zak, you remember my sister Jinny. This is her partner Magdna" Jessy said as she pointed to her. Then she turned to Jinny and Magdna, and named each of the boys. "This is Zak, Mark, Carmen, Kevin, Mike, and Matt." She said as she pointed to each one.
"Hey" All the boys said at once.
"Hi" The two women said "Can we go inside now?"
"Ya, lets go" The three women, well almost women, walked up the steps, into the house.

ok, i g2g, but i think that it will be finished sometime this week. But don't worry i'm going to work on it every day. I'll shut up now....

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

It is really good!!!! i love it sooo much! Keep up the good work!!!

As the 3 walked into the house, there were cops everywhere.
"What the..." Jessy said in shock. Jinny and Magdna walked into the room, where Jinny and Jessy's grandparents slept. There were big blood stains on the pillows, from their heads. The inspector Jinny had talked to before walked over to her and Magdna with a note.
"We found this inbetween your grandparents when they were moved. And we also found this" He said as he gave Jinny the note, and held up a chain. "I don't think this belonged to them, and Jessy's chains aren't so thick." He said as Jinny took the chain from him. "I'll leave you too think" He walked away quietly. Jinny sat down, on a chair in the room, and read the note. It was all cut outs, so they couldn't get handwriting. It said: We are very sorry, but we wanted to die together. So we figured, what a better way to make sure then do it ourselves. We're very sorry, Jessy, but we had to. WE love you, good-bye.

Jinny got all teary eyed and threw the note to the floor.
"Are you ok" Magdna asked.
"Ya, where's Jessy?" Jinny stood up and looked around.
"I think she's probably in her room, packing." Mag said as she got up and walked to Jinny.
"Jessy?" Jinny yelled
"What?" Jessy yelled back.
"Where are you?"
"I'm in my room, what to you want?" Jinny walked into her room as soon as she finished yelling.
"Do you reconize this?" She asked as she showed Jessy the chain.
"Ya, it's a gang-chain." Jessy said as she took the chain from Jinny. "Why?"
"A what?" Mag asked
"A gang chain. There are lots of gangs in this neighbor hood, and we tell each other apart by the chains we wear." Jessy explained as she gave the chain back to Jinny.
"What do you mean we?" Jinny asked, as she sat on Jessy's bed. "Your in a gang"
"well...." Jessy started "I used to be, but a few weeks ago, someone was killed by a member of my gang, so I got out. Zak wasn't very happy.."
"Zak?" Jinny questioned.
"Ya, I was in Zak's gang, and he wasn't very happy when I left. He was mad at me for a while, but then...." Jessy paused as she realized something
"What?" Magdna asked "What is it"
"Well..the night that Nana and Papa died, or got killed, what ever...I was with Zak, Mark, Mike, Kevin, Carmen, and Matt. But then Zak said he had to go for a while. He was mad at me when he left, but when he came back, he wasn't. I didn't think anything of it. I came home, went to bed, woke up, went to school, and then you came and told me that they were dead." They all looked at each other in disbelief.
"So..this was the chain of your gang" Jinny said, surely.
"No" Jessy said as she looked at Jinny, then at Magdna, then back at Jinny. "But it was the chain of Zak's brothers gang. But Zak killed his brother, and wore his chain."
"Lets go" Jinny said as she helped Jessy get up. She walked onto the porch, followed by Mag and Jessy. The six boys were sitting there, just like before.
"Hey, Zak, can I ask you a question" Jinny said, as she walked over to him.
"Ya" Zak said, as he stood up.
"Where were you the night that My grandparents were murdered?"
"I was with them" He said as he pointed to his friends "And with Jessy"
"The whole night?" Magdna asked as she walked over too.
"Ya, I think so...." Zak started
"No, you left for about an hour, remember" Matt cut in.
"Where did you go during that hour" jinny asked, even though she knew.
"Why do you care?" Zak asked as he went to sit back down, but Jinny grabed his arm and stood him back up
"Just answer the damn question" She said meanly.
"I don't remember"
"Well, thats all we needed to know" Jinny said as she twisted his arm back and pulled out her handcuffs "Your under arrest for the murder of My Grandparents" She put started to put the handcuffs on, but Zak kicked her and ran. Mag and Jessy went to help Jinny up.
"Go get, what are you waiting for?" Jinny yelled at Magdna
"I was waiting for that" She said as she smilied and ran after him. The rest of the boys ran after him too. Jinny and Jessy just sat on the porch, watching them run. After they were out of sight, Jessy noticed how sad Jinny looked.
"What?" Jessy asked as she rubbed her sisters back.
"I miss mom" She said
"Do you want to see her grave?" Jessy asked, as she smilied a little.
"Really?" Jinny asked as she looked at Jessy
"you know where it is?"
"Ya, I visit it at least once a week." Jessy said as she started to get up
"Ok, lets go, I know Magdna will catch Zak, if she knows whats good for her" Jinny said as she luaghed and got up.
"Ok, we'll meet up with them later" Jessy said as she hopped down the stairs.
"ok"


I'll write more later but now i'm hungery

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

Great!!!! Keep going please!!!

gr8! i luv this! itz totally awsum!

It is awesome!!! Go on!!! Finish eating!!! LOL

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aOL SN: luckyme099
yahoo sn: nancyfan8976
email:nancymckeonfan8976@hotmail.com

Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

here's more:

Jessy wabled up to the big black gate, followed by Jinny.
"How do we get in?" Jinny asked as she skook the gate
"We have to climb over." Jessy said as she put her cruches through the gate. "You go first"
"Ok" Jinny said as she jumped on the gate and climbed over.
"Now, I'm gonna pull myself over, and your gonna hafta catch me" Jessy said as she started to pull her self over. She got to the top, and Jinny helped her down. She grabbed her cruches, and started walking. "It's right over there" She said as she pointed to a heart shapped grave, about 20 feet away. Jinny took a deep breath, and walked a little slower.
"Are you sure" Jinny asked when she was 5 feet away from it
"Read it for yourself" Jessy said, as she followed Jinny.
"Virgina Jessica Exstead" Jinny said out loud. A tear fell down her face, as she knelt down. Then she looked at the picture of her, Casey, and John. Jessy noticed Jinny looking at it, and knelt down the best she could next to her sister.
"When I left you at the rent-a-car place, I came and put that here" She said as she streched her leg out.
"Thanks" Jinny said as she looked at her sister and started to cry a little. "For bringing me here. I'm sorry I'm not a better sister, I'm really really sorry" Jinny started to cry harder, and hugged Jessy tightly.
"Hey, Hey, it's not your fault." Jessy said as she hugged Jinny back. After a few minutes, Jinny calmed down and looked Jessy in the eye's.
"Mom told me she was pregnent before she left. But I didn't believe her. I thought she was trying to trick me into coming here with her." Jinny paused and looked down. "So i knew about you, I just didn't believe it."


i g2g, but i'm gonna finish it soon.

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

aaaaaaaw how sweet itz like a blair/jo moment only..a jessy/jinny moment! lol gr8!

AWWW! i love it!!! Great job!!!

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aOL SN: luckyme099
yahoo sn: nancyfan8976
email:nancymckeonfan8976@hotmail.com

Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

AWESOME!!!! WOW!!! You rule at ff but everyone does!! Keep goin please!!

this is awesome so keep going!! and on a radom note, Polniaczek-Bonner did u have MCAS today also...cuz here in Needham we had an persusive essay

Ya, hockychic, I had MCAS, we had to write an Essy too, about helmets....anyway here is more:

Jessy just looked at Jinny, and didn't know what to say or do. She didn't know if she was supposed to me mad, sad, or pissed. So she just changed the subject.
"WE..ah...we better get back. Magdna probably caught Zak already." she said, a little shocked
"Ya, hopefully" Jinny said as she wipped the tears away from her face and got up. Jessy struggled to get up, so Jinny went to help her.
"I can do it myself!" Jessy said as she painfully got up. "I always have, and always will take care of myself." Jessy started to sound mad. After about 5 minutes of struggling, Jessy finally made it up. They slowly walked over to the gate. Again, Jinny went over first, and helped Jessy down, even Jessy said she didn't need help.
"I can do it myself" Jessy said as Jinny helped her down anyway. "I said I...."
"I don't care what you said! I'm your sister, and I can help you when I want." Jinny interupted. Jessy just looked at her, and was silent. The rest of the walk home was silent. Neither sister said anything. When they got back to the house, Magdna waas sitting on the porch.
"Where have you guys been?" Magdna asked worried.
"We went for a walk. Where's the kid?" Jinny said as she sat next to Magdna.

ig2g

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

gr8

yea we had the helmet one 2..i think our teacher said it was the same one for the whole state...GRR it took me forever!! HEHE WEll cant wait for more of this, it is awesome~

Way awesome!!! Keep up the good work!!!

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yahoo sn: nancyfan8976
email:nancymckeonfan8976@hotmail.com

Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

AWESOME!!!! MORE SOON!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!


~Jo's Girl~

sorry, i meant to write more sooner, but i didn't feel good...i still don't but i'm baord so here's more...

"Well..." Mag started as she looked at Jinny nervously. "He got away"
"He what" Jinny said as she jumped up
"He was really fast and he went down this alley and by the time i got there, he was gone!"
"Oh great" Jessy said as she sat on the steps.
"I don't believe this!" Jinny said as she started pacing back and forth.
"Hey, Jin, calm down. We'll get him." Magdna said as she stood up and looked at Jinny.
"We should already HAVE him" Jinny snapped as she continued pacing.
"Whats bothering you" Magdna asked, knowing something was wrong.
"Nothing!" Jinny yelled. "Now lets go get a hotel. We're gonna be here for a while." She walked down the stairs and to her car.
"Why don't we stay here?" Jessy asked as she slowly and painfully got up.
"I'm not sleeping in a house where my grandparents were just killed. Now go get your stuff, Jessy." Jinny said meanly as she got into the car. Magdna got up, and walked over to the car. When she got in, Jinny looked like she was going to cry.
"Are you ok?" Magdna asked
"I dunno....I'm sorry I was so mean...I just feel bad about what I did to Jessy." Jinny said sadly.
"What did you do, Jin?" Mag asked looking at her partner.
"I didn't do anything" Jinny put her head down.
"But I thought you said.." Magdna started.
"I didn't do anything, thats what I did." Jinny said, looking up at her partner.
"What?" Magdna was really confused
"I knew I had a sister...well, my mother told me before, and I didn't believe her. So I never came looking for her when my mother died." Jinny looked back down. "Thats what I did"
"Oh" Magdna said. Just then Jessy opened the door, threw her stuff in, and got in.
"What took you so long?" Jinny said, getting her additude back.
"Sorry, it isn't exactly easy to walk up and down stairs on cruches" She said sarcasticly.
"Can we go?" Magdna said, interupting their fight.
"Fine" Jinny said as she stepped on the gas, and drove off.

sorry, but i need to rest....i'll write more later

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

great! i hope you get your voice back soon http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

ok here is some more...i got my sleep

The next morning, Jessy, Magdna, and Jinny walked into Jessy's house to find it a mess. The furniture was flipped over, everything glass was broken, and there was graffiti on the walls.
"Oh my God!" Jessy said as she stumbled around. She looked at the graffiti on the wall. It said: I'm gonna kill you all, EXSTEAD! You and your no good cop for a sister!!!
"What the hell" Jinny said as she looked at the graffiti. "I'm a good cop!" Magdna and Jessy looked at Jinny weird.
"My house is a mess and your worried about some kid sayin' your a bad cop!" Jessy said stressed out.

i g2g FOL is on

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

I am really getting into this story!!!! Great job!!! FEEL BETTA SOON!!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif. i am sick too! i went camping and it rained in the tent!!!! lol

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Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

AWESOME!!!! Keep going as soon as possible and get betta!

AWESOME!!!! Keep going as soon as possible and get betta!

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~Jo's Girl~

My advice...Listen in school...Watch "The Division" and FOL.

"Uh in a minute your gonna have flaired teeth"-Jo

Jinny just gave Jessy a dirty looked, and continued to walk around.
"Zak did this" Magdna said as she looked around.
"Nooo" Jinny and Jessy said sarcasticly as they looked at her, then at each other.
"why would he do this" Jessy asked, as she almost tripped.
"Are you ok?" Jinny walked over to her sister.
"Im fine!" Jessy snapped
"ok, ok"
"What is wrong with you guys" Magdna asked as she crossed her arms. "You've been fighting back and forth all day"
"I already told you" Jinny said as she looked down. "Lets go report this. I don't want to be here for ever!" Jinny looked back up, and walked out the door.
"Your just like your sister" Magdna said as she walked over to Jessy
"I hope not" Jessy said meanly, as she walked away from Magdna and out the door. Magdna quietly laughed to herself and then followed them.

In the car, Jessy sat quietly in the back, as Jinny and Magdna reported it. Just then Jinny's cell phone rang.
"Exstead" She said seriously as she answered her phone. "Teddy, this is not the time" Magdna and Jessy laughed to theirselves.
"Ya, I miss you too, but..." She paused as TEddy interupted her. "I'll be back in a few days. I love you. Buh bye now." She hung up the phone and then smiled. She started to put her phone away, when it rang again. "Teddy...." She whined as she answered the phone. "Oh, sorry Chief." She looked embarressed. "Ok thanks" She hung up the phone, and managed to put it away this time.
"Who was that?" Magdna asked
"The chief of the NYPD. They spotted Zak. We're goin to get him" Jinny smiled and stepped on the gas hard.

ok, i'm goin out, but i'll write more later.

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

[This message has been edited by Polniaczek-Bonner (edited 04-13-2001).]

Wow this is awesome!!!

Pleasssse wirte moreit is sooooo good!!! oh and Magda is spelled "Magda" not Magdna, but it isn't a big deal.it isn't a deal at all...just wanted to let you know, but keep going i lovve it!

gr8! post more soon! i can't wait till we do ours! it'll be so much fun-i think u'll be a good person to work with.

Thanx for the spelling, i'm bad at that for some reason! O well hehe, and i can't wait to do ours together either. U'll be a great person to work with too. Anyway...here's some more:

Jinny, Magda, and Jessy get out of the car, which was at the entrance of an alley.
"Are you sure this is where he was?" Jessy asked
"Yes! Now shut up!" Jinny snapped. "He'll hear you"
"Ya..and he doesn't already know we're coming" Jessy answered sarcasticly. Jessy started to walk down the alley.
"Where are you going" Jinny asked Jessy, meanly and quietly.
"South for the winter" Jessy said sarcasticly as she shook her head at the stupid question.
"Would you two stop it." Magda said as she started walking. She walked up to Jessy, then the two walked side by side. Jinny still stood at the entrance, looking up and down at the buildings.
"Hello" Jessy yelled quietly to Jinny.
"shhh" Jinny said still looking around. Just then Jinny jumped on the fire escape and started to run up.
"Jinny?" Magda questioned as her partner kept going up "Uh..Jinny" Jinny just kept going. Finally Magda just gave up questioning and jumped on the fire escape after her. She knew better then to quetion her partners instinct.
"Wha.." Jessy said, not knowing where the women were going "ARe you just gonna leave me here? I can't climb that with cruches. Hello?" Jessy just watched the two women climb onto the roof. "Oh, Hell with these" She said as she threw down her cruches and jumped the best she could onto the fire escape.

Jinny and Magda were walking around on the roof. They both had their guns drawn.
"Jin, what are we doing up here?" Magda asked, even though she knew better. Jinny did not answer, she just walked over to a dark corner.
"Get the hell out here" She said, pointing her gun to the corner. Zak walked out with a gun to his head.
"I'll do it, i sware" He said as he walked out further...just then Jessy climbed on the roof, and saw what was happening
"What in the hell are you doin?" She said to Zak as she limped over to Jinny.
"What are you doing up here? I thought you were a criple" Jinny asked, not taking her eyes off Zak
"Zak, give me the gun" Jessy said, ignoring Jinny. Zak just looked at her and started to sweat and shake


well, i'm so tired i'm gonna fall asleep...so i'll write more later tonite, or tomorrow

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

oo good!

ooooo this is good!!!

Zak just looked at Jessy, who was hanging on to Jinny.
"NO!" Zak said as he got ready to fire it "I dont want to live in jail"
"We'll, then you shouldn't have shot Jinny and Jessy's grandparents" Magda said
"Put your guns down or I sware I'll do it" Zak yelled as he banged the tip of the gun against his head
"Ok, ok, we'll put our guns down." Magda said as she started to put hers down. She noticed Jinny wasn't moving "Wont we Jinny" She said angerly
"Ya, fine" Jinny said as she dropped hers on the ground.
"Now kick them over here" ZAk ordered them
"We can't do that" Jinny said "Now, just put the gun away..and we can all go home"
"You mean you guys can got back to San Fransisco..and I can go to jail" Zak yelled
"Well, ya..." Jessy started, but then Jinny hit her on the arm and she almost fell. Jessy just looked meanly at her sister, then limped closer to Zak. "I love you, you know that. I don't want you to die" She said ver y sweet and calm. Zak looked sad and put his hand down to his side. "Thats it...." Jessy started, but Zak grabbed her and held the gun to her head. "This is not good!"
"Jessy..." Jinny complained "Why are you so stupid"
"Jinny..this is not the time" Magda said worried. Zak slowly started to back away to the edge of the building
"Help me!!" Jessy said, as Jinny and Magda just stood there. Jinny and Magda didn't know what to do, they looked at each other in confusion (sp). Finally Jessy couldn't wait anymore. She elbowed him in the stomach, and back kicked him in his croach (sp). The gun fired...but didn't hit anyone..and Zak slowly fell back..off the building.

i hafta eat dinner...write more after

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Jinny- We're cops. Sworn to protect and serve.

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

***GASP****OH MY GAWD! YOU MUST TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS TO ZAK!

OMG!!! don't just leave it there.

does zak die!?!?!?!? hurry!!!!!! ahhh!!!!

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Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point.

Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

Jessy turned around to see Zak fall. Magda and Jinny ran next to Jessy and looked over the edge. They heard a loud crash and all turned their heads away.
"Oh my God...Zak" Jessy said as she started to limp down the fire escape..which was right next to the spot where Zak fell.
"Jessy.." Jinny said sadly..knowing how Jessy felt. Jinny and Magda looked at each other and then followed Jessy. When Jessy got there, she started to cry and scream.
"Why, Zak? Why did you have to do this." She said as she hugged his still body. Just then...he opened his eyes. Jessy screamed, and backed away.
"I..I'm...Sorry" He wispered while tears ran down his face. He was paralyzed..Jessy could tell by looking at him. He just layed there, like he was dead..but he wasn't. Just then Jinny and Magda jumped off the fire escape..but stayed a few feet away from the two kids.
"How could you?" Jessy said, her sadness turning to anger. Then she looked over, and saw the gun was next to her feet. She picked it up and looked at it. Magda started to go over...but Jinny grabbed her.
"Let her put him out of his misery" Jinny said with a smirk
"Like a dog?" Magda asked confused
"Ya..because that's what he is. So let him die like one" Jinny let go of Magda as Magda backed away. Jessy looked at the gun and smirked.
"Hel..help me" Zak said..as loud as he could. Jessy looked at him, then at the gun, then at him again.
"Ok" She said as she smiled and fired the gun several times. Jinny and Magda walked over to see many bullets in Zak's head.
"Grosse" Magda complained as she walked away.
"C'mon...lets go home" Jinny said as she put her arm around Jessy, hoping she still wasn't mad at her. Jessy looked up at Jinny and smiled.
"Please!" She said, as she put her arm around jinny's waist, and they walked away.

THE END!!!

so..what did you think? Now we can start are joint fanfic Blair n' Jo rock. Can't wait!

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Jinny- We're cops. Sworn to protect and serve.

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

[This message has been edited by Polniaczek-Bonner (edited 04-17-2001).]

aaaaah! that was so so so good! i really really liked it cuz i dunno-i just did!

awesome!!!