((A freeway))
(Jinny is on a police chase chasing two drunk drivers who are both in the same car.)
J: (Going over the speed limit very fast) You drunks are gonna regreat this entire case after I get ya in the slammer.
((The drunk driver's car))
Drunk1: (Everything is blurry and he can't see very well)
Drunk2: (Not as drunk, but still cant see correcly) Ya think we gunna be caught?
Drunk1: Uh..wha?? Nah....
((Jinny's car))
J: Alright that's it..I just about had it with ya drunks. (Speeds as fast as she could)
(The drunk's car sworves on the rode, going from one side of the lane to another)
(Jinny's car catches up to the drunks car)
(The drunks car, unaware that Jinny's car is right next to them sworves right, smashing into Jinny's car. The windows and front sheilds shatter and Jinny's car flips over onto its back. The drunks car goes in the oppostie direction smashing into a tree)
((The hospital))
K: (Runs into it and sees C.D., Angela and Madga in the waiting room) What happened?
C: (Gets up) She was in a crash. During a chase with two drunks.
A: There still isn't any news about how she is.
K: I sure hope she'll be alright. (Sits down)
(The Docter comes out)
C: (Gets up) Any news??
DR: Yes, there is.
K: What is it??
DR: Well..the crash was really bad. Jinny is suffering from a broken arm, leg, and trauma.
M: (Gulps) And...
DR: Currently she is in a coma.
K: (Looks at Madga)
M: (Looks at C.D.)
C: (Gulps)
DR: That's all the news for now. (Leaves)

Sorry guys -- but I gotta go!

great!!!!!!!!!!!!

keep it going pleeeeease!

keep it going! it's good so far!

Guys I am posting some today..so you will get more soon. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

[This message has been edited by BlairW_4 (edited 02-18-2001).]

M: I hope she'll be okay...
K: We all do...
M: ..What if she doesn't make it?
C: What do you mean?
M: What if she dies??
A: Madga..she isn't gonna die.
M: But what if she DOES die Angela?
A: She is not going to die!!!!
K: Well..I hope not...
A: She isn't gonna die!!!
C: (Yells) ANGELA WILL YOU SHUT UP AND STOP ACTING LIKE YOU KNOW EVERYTHING?!?! YOU DON'T KNOW EVERYTHING! NOBODY KNOWS IF JINNY IS GONNA DIE EXCEPT GOD! SO STOP MAKING CONCLUSIONS ALRIGHT?!
A: OH SHUT UP CD!!!
C: NO!! IF YOUR GOING TO KEEP ACTING LIKE YOU KNOW EVERYTHING THEN LEAVE!
K: (Yells) THIS IS NOT THE TIME TO BE SCREAMING YOUR LUNGS OUT AT EACH OTHER! (Calms down) Yelling is not going to help get us through this tough time!
M: I just wanna kill the drunk drivers who did this to her...
(All of the sudden the doctor comes out again)
C: More news??
DR: (Nods head and sits down on the seats)
K: (Long pause) It isn't good is it??
DR: (Puts head and brings it up, as tears form) No.

Guys I gotta go..sorry!! Do you like it??

keep it going!! it's great sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo far!

Awwwwwwwwwwww. this is so sad(sniff, sniff).It's so great. kepp up the good work http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif

This is great! I can't wait to read more!

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Blair: I can't believe this! My parents are spending a fortune so I can get frostbite!
Nat: It's not that bad.
Blair: Maybe not to you, but a Warner is like a delicate souffle.
Jo: Yeah, light and empty.

Captain: Didn't you ever have a dog, Jinny?
Jinny: I had a plant once. It didn't make it.

Eeeekkk!!!!! I have to have more!!!! Must... go... on... Need more... fanfic!

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"God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference."

~*Danielle*~
Go #33! Lady Bulldogs all da way! Basketball rulz!

Excellent! Write more!

u gotta rite more, thats really good!!!

great!!! cant wait to find out what happens next....so write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Jo: there are two things we dont joke bout, the yankess and wht roy just did to me!
*~Katie~*

hey c'mon, don't leave me hanging
-colleen-

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JO rocks!!!!!!!!
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J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
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AIM ssgoalie8

What happens next post more soon please!!!!!!!!!

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The Facts Of Life Rules!!
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N:I can't belive it!
J:Well you did'nt have to yell!
N:Well I was mad!!!
J:A library Is like a church you are suppose to be nice and Quiet!!!!
B:Can you keep it down over there I'm tring to watch this.
J:Take a hike!!!!

omg thANKA FOR LEAVING US IN SUSPENSE POST MORE SOON PLEASE!! IT IS WICKED GOOD SO FAr!

Ditto

OMG!!!!! I am dying to know the rest!!!! Keep it up!!!! i love it sooo much!!!!

PLEASE finish it!!! is is soooo goood!!!

Post More SOON!!!!!!!!!! I want to know what happens!!!

Goooo on!!! Pleazzz! i love it sooo much!!! Continue as soon as possible!!

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Jinny: She's got a bug up her a$$ for me!

Jo: Uh..in a minuete your gonna have flared teeth.

(Jo falls down while ballroom dance practice in the living room)
Mrs. Garrett: Jo, do u want soup?

Computer: Good Afternoon
Jo: How would you know...you've been turned off all day.

I neeeed more!!! Pleazzzz! it is awesome and we all can't wait for more!!!

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Jinny: She's got a bug up her a$$ for me!

Jo: Uh..in a minuete your gonna have flared teeth.

(Jo falls down while ballroom dance practice in the living room)
Mrs. Garrett: Jo, do u want soup?

Computer: Good Afternoon
Jo: How would you know...you've been turned off all day.

Originally posted by NancyMcKeonFan8976:
I neeeed more!!! Pleazzzz! it is awesome and we all can't wait for more!!!

Now!!! That speaks for me!!!



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Jo: Uh...In a minute your gonna have flared teeth.

Write more puhleeeeeze (Sad puppy dog eyes) I must know what happens next you cant do this to me!:mad:

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-----Helen-----

I really think one of you guys should finish the story. Blair1_4 or 1 (whoever) started it and doesn't a while back and doesn't seem like she wants to finish it. So...if one of you guys wanna take charge of the story, I think you should go for it. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Hello...I want to have an ending to this story. It is so good. So yes I'll try to finish it. Here it goes...

DR: I'm sorry but well Jinny's brain dead, she has absolutely no chance for survival. Should we remove her from life support now?
K: No I think that we should call her father and brothers. Give them a chance to say good-bye or even have a say in this.
DR: Okay...you can start saying your good-byes now, one at a time please.
K: I'll go first.
(Jinny's Room)
K: Jinny I know you can't hear me but I wanted to tell you how much I well I care about you. I know I never really showed this to you but I did care. I'll miss you JInny...You were a good cop.
(Waiting room, Casey John and Jinny's dad are there.)
K: Okay who's next?
A: I'll go.
(Jinny's room)
A: Jinny I didn't know you that well but you were a good cop and a good friend. I'm sorry that it had to end this way and that we have to say good bye now. So good bye.
(CD Walks in)
C: Angela you okay?
A: Yes
C: Jinny you were a good cop and a great friend. We'll all miss you so much. I wish that I didn't have to say good-bye but I do. Bye Jin.
(CD Leaves, Magda walks in)
M: Jinny oh God Jinny I love you so much. You were my best friend and we stuck together through thick and thin. I'm going to miss you so much. You were a great cop and a wonderful friend. (Starts to cry) Well Everyine wants to talk to you so I better wrap it up. I wish that we didn't have to say good-bye like this but we do. I want to spend more time with you but I can't. So Good-bye Jinn I love you so much. Bye.

g2g more later sorry...for the ending you may want tissues!!!!

Oh god...Dont let her die!

great!! please continue cuz i cant wait to find out what happens next!

im crying right now- (o by the way thatz a good thing) gr8

(JInny's Room, John walks in)
J: Jinny I love you you were a great sister. God Jinny I'm sorry I called you a slut...I guess. I love you Jinny bye.
(He leaves Her dad comes in)
JD: Jinny...Jinny why did this have to happen to you? You were such a great girl. I love you Jinny I love you. (Crying a little) I'll miss you...you being my only daughter you meant a lot to me. Bye Jinny.
(He Leaves Casey enters looks at Jinny and starts to cry.)
Ca: OMG!! Jinny I didn't think you were this bad. I guess this is it I guess it's time for us to say good-bye. I love you Jinny. You were there for me whenever I needed you, that includes when I told John I was gay. I love you. thanks.
(He leaves sobbing, Waiting room)
JD: I geuss it's time to remove the life support.
Dr: Are you ready?
JD: Yes.
Dr: Well sign these forms.
JD: done.
DR: Well I will remove her from life support now. I realize that many of you may want to be with her now but I'm afraid that it's two max.
JD: Casey and Magda can go if they want to.
M: I'll go, I want to be with her now.
Ca: Does anyone else want to go really bad?
K: Casey go you two were really close.
Ca: Thanks.
(Jinny's Room)
DR: Do you want to hold her hand?
M: I will. Oh god bye Jinn.
DR: Well she's dead. I'm so sorry.
M&Ca: Jinny oh god...goodbye
(Waiting room they walk in crying)
CD: Is she?
M: Yes
(Everyone starts to cry)

Sorry she died but as I had mentioned earlier...Jinny was brain dead she had no chance of survival. I started to cry while I was writing it. So did you like the ending? I don't know how BlairW_4 would of finished it.

CRAP!!! I was supposed to be exstead while finishing that story!!! GEEZ!!! I can't do anything right!! Oh well hope you liked it anyways.

Good job and thanx for finishing!!!!

THAT WAS SO SAD!!!!!!!!!!