View Full Version : Preveiw for: One Life to Live


BlairW_1
02-06-2001, 07:23 PM
One Life to Live is partially based on "The Last Day of the Rest of Your Life," the Touched By an Angel ep. Nancy was on. I would tell you more, but it would reveal the suprise, so here's a sample from the beginning...

(Jinny is very drunk at a bar, and Magda is sitting beside her, sipping a Coke.)
J: (Slurringly.) Come on, one more won't hurt me!
M: Jinny, you probably don't need another. That's enough for tonight.
J: One more, pleeeeease?
M: Jinny, you... Okay.
Bt: Coming right up! Same as usual?
J: I want the strongest stuff you got. (He pours her a glass and hands it to her.) I had a tough day today, fellas, and I want to be oblivious to everything! (She holds her glass up to Magda, sloshing a little out the side.) To you. (Drinks the glass in one gulp.) See? I'm just fine! (Stands up and falls over Magda.) Hey, watch where yer goin'!
M: (Holds money out to bartender and grabs Jinny's shoulders to steady her.) We'll be going home now. Jinny, can you drive? That's a rhetorical question, no, you cannot drive!
J: Really, I'm just a li'l drunk, Angela!
M: (Sighs.) I'm not Angela, I'm Magda.
J: Silly, you don't even know your own name!
M: Look, I'm going to drive you home.
J: I'm sorry, I don't date other women.
M: Theodore!
T: (Walks over.) What? Oh, hi, Jinny.
J: Teddy, babe, ya doin' anything tonight? I'm free, and so is my bed! (Mutters under breath.) Not for long, anyways.
T: Jinny, are you okay?
M: Theodore, can you help me take her home? I can't handle her all by myself.
T: Okay. I'll tell you one thing, she's going to have an awful hangover in the morning!
J: No, I won't! I'll feel... (Starts looking a little sick.) perfectly fine.
(Magda starts to help her up, but Jinny pushes away and falls down.)
M: Jinny, are you all right?
J: (Giggles.) Oops?
M: (Looks at Theodore.) Hello? A little help?
T: Right. (He puts his hands under her arms and helps her up. She leans very heavily on him.) You okay?
J: Yeah, I'm perfectly fine! (Pause.) Is it hot in here to you?
T: Yes, it's hot, and... that's why were leaving! I bet your room is nice and cool right now.
J: Let's go.
(They walk out the door, with Jinny only stumbling a few times.)

Well, that's chapter 1! When I get the whole thing written, I'll post the rest.
BTW, I know I got the name from that soap, but who cares? http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif
~*Danielle*~

AlexzBonner
02-06-2001, 07:45 PM
BRAVO! Even though I read it, like, 6 million times in English. I didn't want to write my spelling words.
~`~ Kenzie The SPOILED BRAT http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/tongue.gif ~`~

DivisionFan_Jinny
02-06-2001, 09:16 PM
this is really good so far.

btw, do you know when that ep. of touched by an angel is coming on? i never saw it and one of my goals is to see everything nancy was ever in. (pathetic, huh?)

if you do, please post.


the fanfic is really good though.

Lil_miss_goodwrench_518
02-07-2001, 04:23 PM
this is wicked good so far i cant wait to read the next part!

Love The Facts Of Life
02-07-2001, 04:27 PM
Cool keep the good work http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

BlairW_1
02-07-2001, 05:59 PM
Thanks for the good reviews! I don't know when that ep. will be on, because the only reason I saw it is cuz Kenzie taped it for me. I was at a ballgame that night.
~*Danielle*~

AlexzBonner
02-07-2001, 11:15 PM
It was on Nov. 3 on Pax the night we lost to our arch rival Roland by 3 points! It was sooooooo sad! (Not the game the episode!) I started to cry when she... My grandma said, "Guess who's on Touched By An Angel?"
I said, "Lisa Whelchel? Megan Follows?" Then it showed her and I started jumping up and down. I screamed. "It's Nancy McKeon!" Then I ran outside and screamed "Nancy's on TBAA!" Then I ran in my room and taped it! (embarressed look.) Even BlairW_1 didn't know I did that!

DivisionFan_Jinny
02-08-2001, 08:14 PM
Rick:Now tell me, what time is it?
Me(Sam):Time to put Kenzie in a home.

Heeeheeeheee. Just a bit of FOL humor (from the ep. where Jo gets married)

omg! i have to see that ep. of tbaa!

BlairW_1
02-08-2001, 11:43 PM
To embarrass her even more (which I love doing!), did you know she lives right beside the football field? And it's within hearing distance of people from both the teams!

~*Danielle*~

AlexzBonner
02-09-2001, 07:04 PM
Yes... BUT I have that SS thing. She was a peasant and I was a VASSAL! I LOVE doing that to her. BTW, cool it, Farrah. I'm not actually THAT nuts! I was just REALLY excited cuz there are 4 people in you grade who like FOL. SO, we call BlairW_1 Blair they call me Jo. Our 2 best friends, (Jenn and Heather), haven't seen but about 2 eps. each. Nevertheless, We call Jenn Nat and Heather Tootie. We have a blast!

80skid
02-09-2001, 09:38 PM
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase keep it up!!! It's great so far!!

NancyJoJinny
03-17-2001, 11:43 PM
OK so this is a bit late but please finish it!

Wild Child
03-17-2001, 11:58 PM
Yeah! It's really good so far and I hate when stories don't get finished...so please post some more. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Me,Myself and I
03-18-2001, 08:12 AM
You cant do this to me puhleeeeeeze post the rest real soon.

Love The Facts Of Life
03-18-2001, 05:22 PM
This is really good soon I hope you'll finish it soon http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points.
Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law

Blair:If I don't spend money soon,well I'll just pull all my hair out.
Jo:Good,we'll finally get to see what color the roots are.
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Me,Myself and I
03-31-2001, 08:48 PM
U cant do this to me

AlexzBonner
03-31-2001, 09:05 PM
Ok... This is Danielle's #1 priority right now. She's writing on it and she changed it around A LOT she should have it posted soon!

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Rachel: Like that key chain said, boys are like parking spaces, all the good ones are taken.
Alexz: Yeah... too bad they don't come in silver Mercedes Benz.
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J: Where you can say, "Yes, Martha, we're still in the land of the free!
B: And the home of the tacky!
~~~<@ Kenzie @>~~~
E-Mail-- teddysangeljinny@yahoo.com

NancyMcKeonFan8976
04-01-2001, 12:19 AM
Please post soon as possible! i am dying to hear more!!!!!