View Full Version : A Week in Hell (Fan Fic)
NancyMcKeonFan8976 03-28-2001, 01:55 PM (Magda's house)
Magda: Thanx for watching Ben. i really appriciate it!
Jinny: I'm only doing it cause i get to live in your house for a week.
Ben: HEY!
Jinny: (Rolling her eyes) And i get to stay with BEN!
Magda: Bye guys...i have to go catch my flight. Ben be good! Bye Jin
(Magda leaves)
(Jinny and Ben are staring at eachother)
Jinny: So....(mumbles) you pee in ur pants you die!
Ben: Oh, i am a big boy..don't worry!
(That night at 2:09 am)
Ben: Jinny...
Jinny: (sleeply) Ben...what do you want?
Ben: I had a accident!
Jinny: I am so hoping that you're not talking about what i think you're talking about.
Ben: If you mean my bed... yeah.
Jinny:BEN!!!!!!!we'll take care of it in the morning (chasing him out)
NancyMcKeonFan8976 03-28-2001, 03:03 PM Do you guys like it so far? i will put more action in...only if you like it! if you don't i'll try a new idea!!
lil_Miss_actress 03-28-2001, 03:54 PM MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
Can you tell I like it??
~ Jessica
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So things change your born, you move on, you die-thats life!- Jo
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Jinny: And little red blew the big bad wolf's big hairy butt to smitheriens!
Magna: Thanks alot Jinny..
Jinny:And they all lived happliy ever after..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ C.D: Why don't you let me talk to her? Jinny: What's that about!? C.D: Jinny, She just needs a little coddling right now.. (leaves) Jinny: I can "Coddle"
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"Buddy, I got PMS and a Gun, Any questions?"- Jinny Exstead
Exstead 03-28-2001, 07:23 PM Yes post more!!!!
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Jinny:God She's got to bug up her a** for me.
CD: Why?
Jinny: Oh how should I know...maybe I'm not her idea of what a lady cop should look and act like.
~Exstead~
NancyMcKeonFan8976 03-28-2001, 10:09 PM (Morning at 10:23 a.m. Jinny wakes up to the smell of smoke)
Jinny: What the...(she sees the clock). omg i forgot to set the alarm! i am late for work, ben is late for school...and what is that smell?
(All the sudden the fire alarms go off)
Jinny: Shot! (Jinny flys out of bed and runs into the smoky kitchen) BEN?
Ben http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifcoughing)...Jinny...help!
(Jinny sees that the oven had caught fire to the newspaper! She grabbed the fire estingister off the wall near by "magda was always prepared" and put out the fire)
Jinny: (Coughing) Ben?
Ben: (Ben runs up to Jinny and gives her a hug) I'm sorry! i felt bad about peeing in my bed last night so i tried to make you breakfast and...
Jinny: Yeah...you tried!
(Ben looks down in dissapointment) Do you still want the eggs?
Jinny: (Makes a nasty face) Sure,i would love the eggs...but i am alergic! i am sorry! How bout i make us some pancakes and you go to school a lil late?
Ben: YEAH!!!! i will go get dressed while you make them. Then you have to do my hair like mommy always does for me!
Jinny: Hair? What? fine!!
(After pancakes)
Ben: Thanx Jinny! They were great!
Jinny: Yeah, frozen ones taste the same don't themy(she chuckled).
Ben: Okay...now you have to do my hair! You have to slik it back with this gel!
Jionny: Can't you do it?
Ben: No...i don't know how! (he handed Jinny the hair gel)
Jinny: Ok...(she took a glop of gel and stuck it in his hair. took his hair and stuck it up like a spiked hair doo) Yeah, that is cool! Your done!
Ben: Wow, now i am cool. Thanx Jinny!
Jinny sure. Now lets get you to school! (jinny runs intoi her room. throws some clothes on and runs out the door!)
(After dropping off Ben. Jinny rides to work)
Kate: Jinny?
Jinny: Yes?
Kate: Where were you?
Jinny: In the rest room! sorry...you know it was personal.
Kate: You were in the bathroom for 4 hours.
Jinny: I ran to the drug store for some meds to help and came back and tried them...it finally worked! Sorry! i feel better now!
Kate: Exstead, i know youre taking care of ben so i will let you slid today..but tomorrow you better be on time! (kate slams her door)
Angela: Jinny's in troublllle.
Jinny: Shut-up Tootie!
Kate http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifpops head out the door) And if you are late tomorrw you will have desk duty.
Angela: Did i lie?
Jinny: (glares)
(At home after Ben's school and Jinnys work)
Ben: (comes out of his room and walks into Jinnys room) Hey Jinny!
Jinny http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifdrinking) Oh...ben, hi!
Ben: Waht you drinking?
Jinny: Um....aple juice!
Ben: I am thirsty, can i have a sip!
Jinny: No, i am sick and you could get sick from me!!!
Ben: Okay, feel better!
(20 min. later phone rings)
Jinny: Hello?
Magda: Hey Jinny!
Jinny: Magd, how are you?
Magda: Good, and you? i heard you were sick?
Jinny: What?
Magda: Ben told me...he called!
(Jinny was speechless)
Should she lie r not? and can jinny handle another night with ben sleeping in her bed with her becasue he pees in his bed again?
Find out...should i write more or drop it?
ILuvJo&Blair 03-28-2001, 10:27 PM write more!! this is good http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif
TKD_Princess 03-29-2001, 07:44 AM Very cool! More More! LOL!
Exstead 03-29-2001, 03:59 PM Please write more!!!!
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Jinny:God She's got to bug up her a** for me.
CD: Why?
Jinny: Oh how should I know...maybe I'm not her idea of what a lady cop should look and act like.
~Exstead~
NancyJoJinny 03-29-2001, 08:59 PM Have her tell the truth, i want to know what magda would say hehe
NancyMcKeonFan8976 03-29-2001, 10:57 PM (Onthe phone with Magda)
Jinny: Oh...he did! (laughing halfheartedly)You see it was all a misunderstanding...i was dirnking(flat out)
Mgada: What?
J: He came in and asked if he could have a slip! I told him it was apple juice...and then i said i was sick so he wouldn't take a sip! (pressing her lips together in assame)
M: Jin...oh, look even your name is a drink!
J: Now...woo woo woo
M: Never mind..i have told you before...no drinking when Ben is in your care! I thought i could trust you and leave him with you! Come on Jin..uh..Jinny..ur name reminds me of Drinking! Bring him over to Captians now!
J: No, way! Thats torture!
M: Well, it will be better then with you!
J: Think about it...
M: Your right...but you have one more chance and then Captian gets him for torture!
J: Okay, i promise!
Magda: Bye.
Jinny: Bye mom!
(Jinny runs into Bens room)
Ben: Hi Jinny, how r u feeling?
Jinny: So, much better! Thanx! But, it is 8:30 and a school night and i have to work tomorrow and you have school!
Ben: WEll, you never changes my bed! I keep having accidens because i forget to go to the bathroom before bed! Sorry!
Jinny: We'll take care of your bed in the morning!
Ben: But Jin, it is gross!
Jinny: Well...i'm not touching your pee!
Ben: Can i sleep with you tonite?
Jinny: Uhhh...fine! But, if you pee on me...i will blow your hair butt to smilerines...like the big bad wolf in "Little Red Riding Hood".
Ben: Okay! Good night! (Ben ran out)
(4:51 a.m Jinny rolls over and feels somethign warm and wet on her teigh)
Jinny: Ben?
(silence)
Jinny: BEN?
(she opens her eyes to see Ben in the corner of the room hiding)
Jinny: OMG!!! You didn't!
Ben: (cring) i did!
Jinny: Ewww...(she sat up and turned the light on to see the big yellow stain on the bed. Ben cried harder) It's okay! No big deal!
Ben: I thought you were going to blow my butt to smitherens?
Jinny: No way...not to you!
(At the staition)
Captian: Jinny, your on time!
Jinny: Yes...but tired...long night!
Angela: What happened?
Jinny: Ben peed on me!
C.D: (cracks up) Did you shot him?
Jinny: No, i was calm about it!
Captian: Yeah, well i remember your Dad telling me about the time you were little and you...
Jinny: NOOOO! Don't tell them. Please!
Anglea: Tell us!
C.D: YEs, inlighen us!
Captian: Well...
g2g, more if you'd like!
Me,Myself and I 03-30-2001, 07:57 AM more PLEASEEEEEE
80skid 03-30-2001, 08:13 AM I love it... Keep it up!!!
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"Strawberry shortcake banana split, we make your team look like shift to left, shift to right... stand up sit down fight fight fight!"- Badminton A rocks!
Jo: How about you park it on Blair's face?
Natalie: She's a breath of fresh air, isn't she?
Jo: When my dad doesn't like people, Blair, he doesn't show it. Look how he treated you!
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LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 03-30-2001, 03:28 PM ooo this is getting good!! OMG you should have the captain tell the story to embarss jinny..heehe
Exstead 03-30-2001, 06:38 PM GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MOOOOOOOOOORRRREEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pwease!!
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Jinny:God She's got to bug up her a** for me.
CD: Why?
Jinny: Oh how should I know...maybe I'm not her idea of what a lady cop should look and act like.
~Exstead~
LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 03-30-2001, 07:20 PM ggggggggggggrrrrrrrrRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR IVE BEEN WAITING ALL DAY PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON..THIS IS AWESOME!
NancyMcKeonFan8976 03-30-2001, 08:17 PM Okay, sorry for the wait all day!!!
Kate: Jinny's Dad said that when Jinny was 3 he would try to potty train her..
Jinny: Captian, please, i am begging you not to share this with...(she looks around at the smiling faces of C.D, and Angela) them!
Kate: Anyway...(Jinny sighs and lays her head on her desk) Jinny's Dad made up words to help Jinny tell her DAd when she had to go to the bathroom or fart, burp ect.
Magda: Aww...Jinny that is not bad!
Kate: There is more! Her are her words: Poopy= Ka Ka, Pee= Wee Wee, Burp=Burpy a comin', and the best is...(Kate starts cracking up before she can say the lats term)
C.D: Come on your killing us!!!
Kate: (controls herself)...Fart=(laughs) she would say Saftey and everyone who hide for saftey cause they were so bad!!
(Everyone started laughing..except Jinny)
Jinny: Yeah, hahahahahaha!
Kate: Wait...there's more! Once she was at her first broadway play when she was 4 it was a quite and a black out. All the sudden "SAFTEY" and she ripped a good one! The sceen the were acting was a sad and everyone was laughing!!
(They all started cracking up again, Jinny glared)
Jinny: Thanx Captain!:0)
Angela: Aw, you were so cute!
C.D: What happened? J/k, J/k!
Jinny: You better be!!
(4:13 p.m, Jinny is asleep on her desk)
C.D: Hey Jin um..i just got in form a case and it is 4:15!
Jinny: 4:15! omgm, Ben!!!
(Jinny rides to the school to find an empty school aand an emptey parking lot)
Jinny: Oh, god!!
g2g more later later if you want!!
NancyJoJinny 03-30-2001, 08:23 PM more more more
LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815 03-30-2001, 08:38 PM hehe its great so far keep going!!
Exstead 03-30-2001, 08:45 PM GRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!! More!!!!
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Jinny:God She's got to bug up her a** for me.
CD: Why?
Jinny: Oh how should I know...maybe I'm not her idea of what a lady cop should look and act like.
~Exstead~
NancyMcKeonFan8976 03-30-2001, 11:55 PM (On her cell phone with Casey)
Casey: Jinny, how could you lose him?
Jinny: i was tired, the kid had me up 2 nights in a row cause he was peeeing in the bed...and i was sooo tired i fell asleep and over slept!
Casey: Well, what can i do to help?
Jinny: Go to Magda's and call everyone in her phone book to see if maybe he went over a friends or something! Thanx, Casey...i owe you!
Casey: No problem!
(Jinny had been looking for Ben for 1 hour and then her cell phone rings)
Jinny: Hello?
Casey: Hey, well...Ben's best friends last name is Zialo so he was the last person i called and she said he has homework help after school and the soccer practice which ends at 5:30!
Jinny: OMG..you mean to tell me that i have been(calms down)...thank you casey!
Casey: Sure, and i started making dinner so be home in time!
Jinny: Casey..why?
Casey: Cause i owe it to you!
(Last day of torture) (The home phone rings)
Ben: Hello?
Magda: Hi it is Mommy! How r u?
Ben: Great, Jinny is really great!
Magda: Good, i am coming home soon...is Jinny there?
Ben: Yes, she is doing the laundrey...let me get her!
Jinny: Hello?
Magda: Hey, why you doing laundery?
Jinny: Cause your kid ran out of clean sheets!
Magda: No, Jinny you leave the sheets on for a week and then change them!
Jinny: Not is you pee on them every nite!
Magda: Oh, Jinny i am really sorry!
Jinny: Thats okay! Your coming home today and my live will be heaven once again~
Magda: Actually that is what i am calling about...my flight is canceled til Thursday!
Jinny: But, today is Friday!
Magda: Sorry!
Jinny:NOOOOOO!!!! Not more toture!!!!! Not another Week in Hell!!!
The End~ any comments?
lil_Miss_actress 03-31-2001, 01:53 AM GREAT! Your fan fic's are sooo good!
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So things change your born, you move on, you die-thats life!- Jo
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Jinny: And little red blew the big bad wolf's big hairy butt to smitheriens!
Magna: Thanks alot Jinny..
Jinny:And they all lived happliy ever after..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ C.D: Why don't you let me talk to her? Jinny: What's that about!? C.D: Jinny, She just needs a little coddling right now.. (leaves) Jinny: I can "Coddle"
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"Buddy, I got PMS and a Gun, Any questions?"- Jinny Exstead
Jo's Girl 03-31-2001, 11:43 AM I'm Exstead today!!!! But anyway...That was awesome!!!!
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Jo: Uh...In a minute your gonna have flared teeth.
NancyMcKeonFan8976 03-31-2001, 04:43 PM Oh, abig thanx to "NancyJoJinny for all the help along the way! If you read this respond so i know you go it! Thanx everyone for your support. i really appriciate it!
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